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Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...



Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....


Aap sab ka :welcome1: hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...


 
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Are aap hi bolte rehte hai ki "hathi chale bajar , kutte bhoke hazar..." :D
to kahe noobs ki baatein suning ju :D
char botal vodka pike mast rahneka.. :booze:
Hoo ooo ju ne hathi bola kya Nainu bhaya ko vo hathi na hai Sher (Lion) hai Sher or Sher ke pichhe Mrs. Sher rahve hai :D The king ragish7357 Chinturocky Bhaiyo Naina ji kya Bol rhi hai :D

Yes Naina ji nothing personal...
 
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कहां रक्तबीज की तरह न खतम वाली सेना और कहां निश्छल और शेरिन जैसे योद्धा ! अस्तक की सेना खतम होने का नाम ही नहीं ले रही है । पर फिर भी बहुत ही जबरदस्त तरीके से दोनों भाई बहन युद्ध कर रहे हैं । एक क्षण में जमीं पर तो दुसरे क्षण आसमां पर । इनकी छद्म युद्ध रणनिती की जितनी भी तारीफ की जाए कम है ।
कभी कभी तो ऐसा लगता है जैसे चक्रव्यूह रचा हुआ हो और दोनों भाई बहन प्रत्येक दरवाजे को अपने कौशल और रणनिती से तोड़े जा रहे हों । अस्तक की सेनाओं का चार , चार या आठ , आठ सर्किल में अपने को संगठित करके युद्ध करना तो यही दिखा रहा है ।

बेहतरीन रणक्षेत्र सजा के रखा है आपने नैन भाई । गाजर मूली की तरह काटी जा रही है अस्तक की अभेद्य सेना । बहुत ही धुआंधार अपडेट । आउटस्टैंडिंग ।
 

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Sab gati aur santulan Khel tha jo in copy karne walon ke bus ki baat nahi tha aur naa hi hawa me rah'kar itna achook war karte huye land karne ki kashmta Brahmand ke kisi bhi sainya tukdi me thi.


Ek baar Serin to ek baar Nischal hawa me hota. Adbhut gati ke sath, ek dusre ko save kar'ke maarne ki policy ka koi tod nahi tha inke pass. Aur aisa nahi tha ki wo sirf ek code ko follow kar rahe the… Kabhi Serin, Nischal ke pass wale sainik ko maarti to kabhi unhe chaunkate huye, humle me tabdili kar'ke, apne apne pass wale sainikon ko maar rahe the…


Aisa lag raha tha jamin se maar karna ab achha nahi lag raha… Bus jaim ko chhu maatr le, utne hi waqt ke liye niche aate aur fir dono bari-bari hawa me. Nischal aur Serin dono hi hawa me hote. Ek ke pichhe thik dusre uchhal rahe the aur natije wahi ho rahe the... Humla karne ki itni rendom taknik, kisi ko kuchh samjh me nahi aa raha tha aur inke log humla karne se pahle hi mare ja rahe the… wo bhi kafi teji me...


Tabhi bich se ek awaj hui aur sabhi sainikon ne dhal chhod'kar, naye formation me aa gaye... Wo log bhi ek dusre ko apni talvar se protect karte humla karte. Vijayi muskan ke sath Nischal aur Serin jamin par khade huye. Sabhi sainik dono ke gher chuke the. Sab ek sath teji se humla karne ko taiyar khade... Nischal aur Serin bhi taiyar. Hathon me hathiyar aur sath khade the, lekin ulti disha me... Dono ke pith ek sath aur face opposite...


Dono ke bayen hath ki khanjar sine tak uncha, wahin dayen hath ki talwar niche ke jamin ko face kar rahi thi... Charo ore se utne hi tej sainik unko ghere.. kaun pahle humla kare... Dono ko ek dusre ki kashmta ka pata tha aur dono hi ore se utna hi sachet...


Ek chhan ko sab ruke the... "Come on boys chalo ab ruke kyon ho... Koi nahi I am on"…


Kahte huye Nischal teji se sainkon ke circle ke itna karib tha, ki dayen ya bayen se teesra ya uske baad ka hi sainik talwar se humla kar sakta tha... Nischal ne apne samne wale ke gale me khanjar utarne ke sath hi.… dayen hath ki talvar se, dayen ore ka humla rokne ke baad talvar se uss hamle ka javab diya.


Dayen ore ke action ke sath me hi, apne bayen kinare wale sanik ke khanjar ke humle ko, vayumandaliya aavran ke chhote se dhanche rok'kar, uske gale me khanjar utara diya. Aage ke teen sainik jate hi, wahan ke sainikon ne bhi dono ko chunautiyan dena shuru kar chuke the...


Takraye jab apne hi barabar kshmtaon wale dushman se... Fir to dono bhai bahan ki talvaren lahra rahi thi... Dono bhai bahan utne hi anushashit aur poorn dhyan ke sath utre the... Inki lagatar practice ka natija yahan ke sainik dekh rahe the.…


Ye fauj bhi utne hi anusasan me the... Kataar koi tod nahi rahe the... Humla bhi ussi raftar se kar rahe the, kewal prashikshan ki kami rah gayi, jo Nischal aur Serin ke mukable kuchh bhi nahi tha...


Na to inme humla karne ka sahi aaklan tha aur naa hi ye logon me in dono jaisi ekagrta, prashikshan aur na hi ek hi waqt me 360⁰ me hathiyar chalane ka anubhav tha... Astak ki sena ke alawa koi dusri sena hoti to apne dushman ko dekh'kar ek baar "Wahhhh !!!" jaroor kar deti...


Dono ek dusre ke viparit khade... Dayen hath ki talvar lahrati, tannn ki awaj aati jo ek he waqt me apne 4-5 dushmano ke talvar ko humle ko jhel gaye... Thik ussi waqt jab talvar lahrati, dono ke chain me lage khanjar 360⁰ ghum jati… Dono kaam ek sath poori safai se sath me karte, lahrate talvar ke sath hi khanjar ko hawa me gol ghuma dena...


Tej raftaar ki ladai me, bus jo najar aati wo... Tannnn... Tannnn... Tannnn… aur issi awaj ke bich me Nischal apne sar ko bayen ore poora jhuka leta... Jiss se usse dayen ore ke sainik dikhe aur Serin dayen ore apna gardan poora jhukati, aur tannn ke awaj ke bich jab inki gardan poora jhookti, aur khud ke gardan ko jhukane ke sath hi inke khanjar ek baar lahra chuke hote, jo circle ke 2 kataar ko kaat chuke hote...


Nischal sur Serin ko ek hi waqt me apne sabhi angon ke prayog karne ke liye prashikshit kiya gaya tha. Wahin dushman inke chain ke char guna gati ko, ghumne se rok to sakte the. Lekin chain thik ussi waqt chalti, jab Astak vansaj humla kar rahe hote... Aur ye log humle par dhyan dete waqt, unke chain par repulsive force daal hi nahi pa rahe the. Dono bhai bahan ke berahm khel poore josh se shuru ho chuka tha…


Lahrate talvar ke sath unka lachila badan lagatar lahrate huye ghatak humla kar rahe the. Dushman bhi utne hi sangathit aur tej. Unke humle se dono bhai bahan kabhi bachte to kabhi kharoch bhi lagti, to kabhi unki talvar scratch bhi dete huye nikal jate... Khas'kar Nischal aur Serin ke sharir ke bayen hisse ko hamla jhelne par raha tha.... Kyonknki uss hath me chain thi, jiske upar ya niche se badan ko hathiyar chhu hi jati…


Kitna bhi Lahuluhan sharir kyon na hua, lekin na to dhyan bhatka aur na hi inke maarne ki gati me koi kami aayi... "Tannnn-tannnn-tannnnn" talwar se bhale aur talvar ke takrane ki awaj aa rahi thi aur agle hi pal, lash girne ki awaj...


Serin aur Nischal poora anushasan dikhate... Humla kiye chhanik ruke, aas pass se hote huye humle ko baanp'kar unhe roke aur rokne ke sath hi jawabi humla ho jata... Bachna aur humla karne ki yah taknik, itni adbhut thi ki pata hi nahi chalta ki ye dono ruke bhi the...


Dushman bhi apni kshmta dikha rahe the... Bayan hissa kamjor tha, yah jaan'kar ab tukdiyan charo ore se gherne ke badle 8 kataar me khadi ho gayi thi... 4 kataar dayen aur 4 kataar bayen ore se humla karne.… lagataar badalte formation se bhi Nischal aur Serin ko koi fark nahi para tha, kyonki inka dimag pahle se sangathit humla karne ki yojna bana chuka hota...


Naye formation se dono ko raahat hui thi.. Kyonki ab sidha maarne me pareshani nahi hogi... Chain se khanjar ko lahrana nahi parega... Lekin issi ke sath pareshani bhi badhegi, kyonki circle me dushman ke humle utne asardar na hote, jo samne se hone wale the...


In logon ne bhi socha dono sath ladenge isliye 4-4 ki 2 kataar bana lee, lekin ab dono hi samne se apne-apne kataar ko face karne wale the... Khanjar ab dono ke haath me aa gayi aur talvaar khun ke pyase...


Ab to bus khel shuru karna tha. Nischal aur Serin dono apne khanjar ko kamar me daal chuke the… Bayen hath chhote-chhote vayumandaliya aavran bana kar bayen ore ke humle ko rokne ko taiyar... Aur fir lahrana shuru hua dono ke talvar... Raftaar se bus kalai hi to palat rahe the, wo bhi bilkul lachile pakad ke sath...


Kalai ke ishare the aur apne sharir ko dono bus thoda left aur right ke ore ghuma rahe the... Talvar bijli se tej aage ke ore lahra rahi thi... Wah itni tej lahra'kar bayen se dayen aati, mano talvar khud pukaar kar kah rahi ho... "Dum hai to iss tej se lahrate talvar ke bich se apne hathiyar ghusa'kar dikhao. Yadi mujhe paar kar liye to mere malik ka badan tumhara"


Lahrata talvar jaise cutting machine bana tha aur ab dono bhai bahan poore raftaar ke sath inki tukdi ko naapna shuru kar chuke the... Lachila badan, kalai ki poori raftaar... Utne hi tej badhte unke kadam aur lahrate talvar ke bich me sainik ke humle bekar se huye ja rahe the. Jab nichal ki talvar kalaeyon ke sahare lahrati, 4 kate gale aur 4 laash ko paar kar'ke, aur 4 lash girane badh jaate...


"Na raham karenge"… Nischal ki talvar lahrayi aur gala se lalkaar.… "Na rukenge".. Serin ka bhi talvar chala... aur dono ek dusre ka josh badhaate aage badhte rahe...


Dayen ore se dono majboot the, lekin bayen ore ka vayumandaliya aavran kuch kamjor sa tha. Dono ke badan ke bayen hisse me talvar aur bhalon ke nok ki scrach se, badam lahuluhan se tha. Lekin rukne ka waqt kahan tha... Ek rukte to dushman ko pichhe se humla karne ka poora mauka mil jata...


"Main hata to wo mar jayegi"… Bus yahi chal raha tha dono ke dimag aur aur dono ka sharir kuchh pal ka aaram maang raha tha... Sharir ke ek hisse se khun nikal raha tha... Fir bhi dono apne dum par apne barabar ki kashmta ke dushmano ko, kaat'te huye aage badh rahe the... raftaar to kabhi ruki hi nahi.. haan par ek sangathit army ko katne ki raftaar bahut hi dhimi thi... Warna jis hisab se dono ki talvar chal rahi thi... 2000 carore vansaj ko to ab tak kaat chuke hote...


Ek sangathit army, jaisa ki Nischal aur Serin ko sahuru se pata tha... Iss baar formation nahi badla kyonki unhe bhi mehsus ho raha tha ab ye bhi ghayal hain... Bus ab dono ko aur ghyal karna tha. Dono ko aur bhi jyada dard dena tha... Aur issi mansa ke sath shuru hua dushmano ke bomb ka kahar... Jo mar gaye saink unke laashon par tange the bomb...


Jo khade the unke badan par tange the bomb aur oprate kahin aur se hona shuru hua... Bomb footna shuru huye aur uske ander se 1/2 inch ke kayi hazar shakt kaaten utne hi teji se hawa me bikhar gaye.. Kisi ped se laye gaye natural kaanten. Aam kaaten to honge nahi, upar se 1 bomb me 1000 kaanten... Aisa lag raha tha maarne se pahle poore tadpane ki taiyari chal rahi ho...


Bomb footne ke sath hi hawa me kaanten bikhre the… Ek sath hazar ki sankhya me bomb foot rahe the. Dushmano ke surksha taknik. Bomb ke humla hone ki shoorat me automatically bachne ke sare intzam ho gaye. Poora body cover aur aankhon me chasma laga. Haan ye poshak un kaaton se bachne ke liye hi the.. lekin ye kaaten to kuchh jyada hi jalim nikle, apne sainikon ke poshak ko bhi bhed gaye... Haan unpar asar kam tha lekin kaaten ghusne ka dard se wo sab bhi bilbila gaye...


Wahin in dono ke poore badan me to wo chhote-chhote kaanten ghuse hi. Khuli aankh se dono humla kar rahe the, aur dono shayad palak jhapkana bhi bhul chuke ho. Dono ke palke bhi jhapki aur kuch kaanten aankhon me bhi ghuse...


Ho rahe humle se dhyan hata nahi sakte the aur dono ke sar se le'kar paun tak kaanten hi kanten ghusna shuru... Ek sath kayi hazar kaaten ghusti dard deti aur wo kaanten sharir ke ander hi gayab ho jati. Sharir me sama'kar wo kaaten itna pira de rahe the ki ander ka khun tak jal raha tha... Lekin aaj fikr kahan kisi bhi baat ki.. sar par kafan bandhe nikle deewane 2... Nikle the manjil tak pahunchane kisi ko...



Na hi ruke aur naa hi khud par bhi raham kiya. Na dhyan toota na ekagrata. Aankhon me ghuste kaanton ki bhi parwaah na kiye. Khanjar berahmi se gale me ghuste rahe... Dayen ore se talvar humle ko ro'kar lahrate rahe aur sath hi sath bayen ore se dushman ke talvar, bhale aur khanjar ki tip lagatar ghus jati, usse bhi sahte rahe... Aage badhte rahe aur lashen girate rahe...


Kataar tha ki khatm hone ka naam na le... Lashon ke dher bante ja rahe the aur dono hi thik ek dusre ke piche kadam se kadam badhate huye lashen gira rahe the... Bomb girte, vishaile kaanten chubhte unke iss humle ko bhi jhelte rahe... Halakh se Nischal aur Serin ki chinghar nikalti.… Khuffjada tha wahan ka najar. Dono ki awaj jaise dahsat thi. Aankhen poore khun me doobi laag... Jitne jyada unhe kaanten chubhte kaatne ki raftaar bhi utni hi badh rahi thi...


Mahakaal ka sawaroop the aaj dono... Bahte khun ki garmi dur tak mehsus ki ja skati thi. Inke badhte kadam khauff ke parichayak the... Na khud par raham kiye na dhusmano par...
Yaar jaldi vimano se maar do kyo bahubali banane par tule ho ...aur agar wo isi raftar se mare to wo Marne Tak phir se 2000 crore bachche paida Kar lenge isiliye ye karnama chhodo aur koi jugad laga ke ek sath sabhi ko pel do ....
Ham man liye ju log kabhi nhi harne wale hero ho....
 

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Waah kya gazab ki ranniti taiyaar ki hella v messa ne
Kamaal kar diya chhori hella tabhi toh teri demand badh rahi hai lockdown me
Story character Hella hamesha se best thi, hai aur rahegi :smarty:
 
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Abhi mujhe ye tukdon tukdon me scene dene me maza na aa raha hai. 2 baat..



1) Screen dekhne me aaj pata na irritate ho raha hun, isliye aaj mobile chhune ka man nahi. Might be halka fever hai ise vajah se ho raha...



2) Mood nahi ab part part me ladai dikhane ka... So kal 4 update aayenge. 4 alag alag page par... Din me hi aa jayega around 12 se 1 pm tak... Taki aap ke pass poora waqt ho itminan se padhne ka.



Uske baad main 1 ya 2 Din ka mobile se break le raha hun. Break to aaj bhi tha. Aur kal bhi rahega. Except kal ke comment reply aur Update posting ke.



So aaj bhar intzar kar len... waise mobile se break unconditional hai. Information accordingly kar dunga, isse jyada serious na le. In case agar availability na hui to advance samjh lene ka..



Thankoooo
 

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Abhi mujhe ye tukdon tukdon me scene dene me maza na aa raha hai. 2 baat..



1) Screen dekhne me aaj pata na irritate ho raha hun, isliye aaj mobile chhune ka man nahi. Might be halka fever hai ise vajah se ho raha...



2) Mood nahi ab part part me ladai dikhane ka... So kal 4 update aayenge. 4 alag alag page par... Din me hi aa jayega around 12 se 1 pm tak... Taki aap ke pass poora waqt ho itminan se padhne ka.



Uske baad main 1 ya 2 Din ka mobile se break le raha hun. Break to aaj bhi tha. Aur kal bhi rahega. Except kal ke comment reply aur Update posting ke.



So aaj bhar intzar kar len... waise mobile se break unconditional hai. Information accordingly kar dunga, isse jyada serious na le. In case agar availability na hui to advance samjh lene ka..




Thankoooo
OK bhai apani sehat ka dhyan rakhna
 
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