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3rd episode me ik mistake hy jo story ky start me nhi honi chahye . aap jub type karty ho to us ko update karny se pehly read karo ..or update karny k baad bhi uski read kar lo ho sakta hy koi galti update karty time najar naa ay aap ko ..update k baad usko edit kr do...
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Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .
AT VILLAGE RAILWAY

STATION
Train

se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.
Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .۔۔۔
AT STATION
Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon
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[Or aap ny phir se vicky or us k dad ka covesation repeat kar dia.]
Train

se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.
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Aap ny dobara se ye pora conversation likh dia is update k words k hisab se to ye galti nhi honi chahye bhai ye jyada bada update nhi hy ..

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