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LionHeart007

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*Asʟᴀᴍ ᴏ ᴀʟaɪᴋᴜᴍ.*

Oɴ ᴛʜɪs ʙʟᴇssᴇᴅ ᴏᴄᴄᴀsɪᴏɴ ᴏғ Eɪᴅ, ᴡɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴊᴏʏ, ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss, ᴘᴇᴀᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴘʀᴏsᴘᴇʀɪᴛʏ! Eɪᴅ Mᴜʙᴀʀᴀᴋ! Tʜᴇ ᴍᴀɢɪᴄ ᴏғ ᴛʜɪs ᴅᴀʏ ʙʀɪɴɢ ᴀ ʟᴏᴛ ᴏғ ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss ᴀɴᴅ ʙʟᴇssɪɴɢs ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʟɪғᴇ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴡɪʟʟ ғɪʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴊᴏʏ. Wɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴀ Hᴀᴘᴘʏ Eɪᴅ.❤🌙🤲🏻

*𝒲𝒶𝓇𝓂 𝓡𝓮𝓰𝓪𝓻𝓭,*

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LionHeart007

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Update 3


Next day


"Viki beta utha jaa kab se sooo rha hai, subah utha tha Namaz padh k phir soo gaya, chl jaldi uth"

Viki: ami sone doo na yrr thakaa huwa hun me .

Ami: q aisa kya kaam kr liya tune k thakaa huwa hai, konsa kheton m hallll chala kr aaya tha kal ? Gaon jaana hai aaj or tu abhi tk soo hi rha hai.

Viki: Ami aaj gaon jaana hai, ek to aap logon ne mujhe 3 din pehle bataya is baat ka to ohir mujhe apna pending kaam saara 3 din m krna padaa Or wo jo baaki k employees the mere under unko alag se saara kaam samjhaaya hai k kya krna hai kaise krna hai waghaira waghaira. Tab jaa kr jaan chuuti hai to thakna to hai hi naa. Or gaon train 🚆 shaam ki hai naa to abhi q jagaa rhi ho konsa train 🚆 mene chalani hai .

Ami: beta train 🚆 nhi chalani tumne lekin tayyari yo krni hai na samaan kon pack kare ga tumhaara ?

Viki: Ami meri packing ho gyii hai. mera Laptop, laptop charger, mobile charger, power bank, handsfree etc sab to rakh liya hai mene .

Ami: to beta ek kaam krna pehenna bhi laptop hi haan, kapde nhi rakhne tujhe kya ek hi jode m ghooomta rahe poora time ?

Viki: wo to mujhe pta hai aapne packing kr di hogi mere kapdon ki bhi isii liye soo rha tha, afterall app meri pyaari ami jo ho 😁.

Ami: beta ami to me hun tumhaari or ab ye maske lagaane ki zaroorat nhi hai mene packing kr di hai to ab utho nahao tayyar ho jaa kr shaam m nikalna bhi hai or tumhe ptaa hai k shaam ko traffic kiyna jamm hota hai to jaldi nikalna hai.

Viki: acha thk hai jaa rha hun.

" Ye hain hamari story k main character Waqas aka Viki, aisaa hi hai ye apne kaamon m thoda careless atleast baaki logon ko to aisa hi lagta hai ".


Shaam theek 5:30 pr sabhi log Railway 🚂 Station pr pohonch jaate hain or train 🚆 bhi time pr hi thi jo apne m ek miracle se kam nhi hota pr ho gaya tha. Ali bhi aaya huwa tha apne Dost ko see of krne.

Ali: chl yrr ab teri train ka time ho gaya hai to me bhi nikalta hun apna or baaki sabka khayaal rakhna, waise tujhe bolne ka koi faida to hai nhi pr ab formality bhi to poori krni hai na 🤣.

Viki: chl ab zeyaada daant na nikaal rakhun ga sabka khayaal or tu bhi dheyaan rakhna jaldi hi milen ge or haan araam se jaiyoo ghar mujhe pata hai tere Rideron wale keede ka to .


Ali: acha thk hai araam se hi jaoun gaa, Chl ok bye Have a Safe Journey ❤️.


Viki: Thanks bhai, bye and take care. 🙂

Or Ali wapas chl deta hai apne ghr aaj wo.jaldi aagaya tha office se apne dost ko station chorne k liye. (Iske ghr m isko Ami Abu ek bada bhai hai or ek Badi behen hai jinki shaadi ho chuki hai bhai ki bhi jaldi hi ho jaye gii Rishta pakka ho chuka hai unka bhi, Ali bhi Viki k saath ek hi College me padhta tha wahin 2non hi dosti huii or dekhte hi dekhte ye 2non Best Friends ban gye, ye bhi viki ki age ka hi hai bss viki se kuch months badaa hai ).

Wahin Train 🚆 chal padi thi apni manzil ki taraf. Apna Viki bhi masti m safar ko enjoy kr rha tha or Gaon m ghoomne phirne or naa jaane kis kis cheez ka khwaab dekh rha tha pr isko kya pata ka ye safar ka ikhtetaam usse kis naye safar pr le kr jaane wala hai, or uski qismat m kya likha hai ab ye to aaane wala waqt hi bataye gaa.

Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .


AT VILLAGE RAILWAY 🚂 STATION

Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon.

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.

Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .

Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .

Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain.

Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain. (viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).

Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?

Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .

Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.

Inka gaon wala ghr koi pushtaini type nhi tha pr sab as a joint family hi rehte the Viki ki khala, uske mamu, chachu, phupho sabhi .

Inke ghr ek hi gali m ek hi line m the, or sabhi ghr ek 2sre k baraabar m the to inhon ne mil kr sabhi gharon k baher ek boundary wall banwaa rakhi thi like a society or a Haveli type jaise haveli m sabhi log saath rehte hain pr buildings alag alag bani hoti hain lekin outer boundary ek hi hoti hai waisa hi yahaan bhi tha.



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Sweetkaran

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Update 3


Next day


"Viki beta utha jaa kab se sooo rha hai, subah utha tha Namaz padh k phir soo gaya, chl jaldi uth"

Viki: ami sone doo na yrr thakaa huwa hun me .

Ami: q aisa kya kaam kr liya tune k thakaa huwa hai, konsa kheton m hallll chala kr aaya tha kal ? Gaon jaana hai aaj or tu abhi tk soo hi rha hai.

Viki: Ami aaj gaon jaana hai, ek to aap logon ne mujhe 3 din pehle bataya is baat ka to ohir mujhe apna pending kaam saara 3 din m krna padaa Or wo jo baaki k employees the mere under unko alag se saara kaam samjhaaya hai k kya krna hai kaise krna hai waghaira waghaira. Tab jaa kr jaan chuuti hai to thakna to hai hi naa. Or gaon train 🚆 shaam ki hai naa to abhi q jagaa rhi ho konsa train 🚆 mene chalani hai .

Ami: beta train 🚆 nhi chalani tumne lekin tayyari yo krni hai na samaan kon pack kare ga tumhaara ?

Viki: Ami meri packing ho gyii hai. mera Laptop, laptop charger, mobile charger, power bank, handsfree etc sab to rakh liya hai mene .

Ami: to beta ek kaam krna pehenna bhi laptop hi haan, kapde nhi rakhne tujhe kya ek hi jode m ghooomta rahe poora time ?

Viki: wo to mujhe pta hai aapne packing kr di hogi mere kapdon ki bhi isii liye soo rha tha, afterall app meri pyaari ami jo ho 😁.

Ami: beta ami to me hun tumhaari or ab ye maske lagaane ki zaroorat nhi hai mene packing kr di hai to ab utho nahao tayyar ho jaa kr shaam m nikalna bhi hai or tumhe ptaa hai k shaam ko traffic kiyna jamm hota hai to jaldi nikalna hai.

Viki: acha thk hai jaa rha hun.

" Ye hain hamari story k main character Waqas aka Viki, aisaa hi hai ye apne kaamon m thoda careless atleast baaki logon ko to aisa hi lagta hai ".


Shaam theek 5:30 pr sabhi log Railway 🚂 Station pr pohonch jaate hain or train 🚆 bhi time pr hi thi jo apne m ek miracle se kam nhi hota pr ho gaya tha. Ali bhi aaya huwa tha apne Dost ko see of krne.

Ali: chl yrr ab teri train ka time ho gaya hai to me bhi nikalta hun apna or baaki sabka khayaal rakhna, waise tujhe bolne ka koi faida to hai nhi pr ab formality bhi to poori krni hai na 🤣.

Viki: chl ab zeyaada daant na nikaal rakhun ga sabka khayaal or tu bhi dheyaan rakhna jaldi hi milen ge or haan araam se jaiyoo ghar mujhe pata hai tere Rideron wale keede ka to .


Ali: acha thk hai araam se hi jaoun gaa, Chl ok bye Have a Safe Journey ❤️.


Viki: Thanks bhai, bye and take care. 🙂

Or Ali wapas chl deta hai apne ghr aaj wo.jaldi aagaya tha office se apne dost ko station chorne k liye. (Iske ghr m isko Ami Abu ek bada bhai hai or ek Badi behen hai jinki shaadi ho chuki hai bhai ki bhi jaldi hi ho jaye gii Rishta pakka ho chuka hai unka bhi, Ali bhi Viki k saath ek hi College me padhta tha wahin 2non hi dosti huii or dekhte hi dekhte ye 2non Best Friends ban gye, ye bhi viki ki age ka hi hai bss viki se kuch months badaa hai ).

Wahin Train 🚆 chal padi thi apni manzil ki taraf. Apna Viki bhi masti m safar ko enjoy kr rha tha or Gaon m ghoomne phirne or naa jaane kis kis cheez ka khwaab dekh rha tha pr isko kya pata ka ye safar ka ikhtetaam usse kis naye safar pr le kr jaane wala hai, or uski qismat m kya likha hai ab ye to aaane wala waqt hi bataye gaa.

Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .


AT VILLAGE RAILWAY 🚂 STATION

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.

Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .

Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .

Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .

Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).

Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?

Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.


Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .


AT STATION

Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon.

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.

Inka gaon wala ghr koi pushtaini type nhi tha pr sab as a joint family hi rehte the Viki ki khala, uske mamu, chachu, phupho sabhi .

Inke ghr ek hi gali m ek hi line m the, or sabhi ghr ek 2sre k baraabar m the to inhon ne mil kr sabhi gharon k baher ek boundary wall banwaa rakhi thi like a society or a Haveli type jaise haveli m sabhi log saath rehte hain pr buildings alag alag bani hoti hain lekin outer boundary ek hi hoti hai waisa hi yahaan bhi tha.



Aaj k liye itna hi
padh kr apne Likes or reviews zaroor dijiye gaa . 🙂
Nice update bro
 

KEKIUS MAXIMUS

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majedar update .kaun kehta hai vikky careless hai 🤣 usne to laptop ,charger sab pack karke rakhe hai bag me aur yahi sabse jaruri cheeje hoti hai 😁.
ali bhi aaya tha see of karne aur ek dusre ko samajha bhi diya ki apna khayal rakhe 😍.

abbu ne to dharti par hi patak diya vikky ko jo aasman me udd raha tha ye kehke ki wo superstar hai 🤣.
ab aisi kaunsi musibat hai jo vikky ki raah dekh rahi hai gaon me dekhte hai .
 

DEMØN

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Story ka start acha tha ...
3rd episode me ik mistake hy jo story ky start me nhi honi chahye . aap jub type karty ho to us ko update karny se pehly read karo ..or update karny k baad bhi uski read kar lo ho sakta hy koi galti update karty time najar naa ay aap ko ..update k baad usko edit kr do...

Ap ny likha...

Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .

AT VILLAGE RAILWAY 🚂 STATION

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.

Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .

Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .

Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .

Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).

Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?

Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.


Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .۔۔۔

AT STATION

Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon
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[Or aap ny phir se vicky or us k dad ka covesation repeat kar dia.]

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.

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Aap ny dobara se ye pora conversation likh dia is update k words k hisab se to ye galti nhi honi chahye bhai ye jyada bada update nhi hy ..😍😍

Ap edit kar lo is ko 😊😊
 
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DEMØN

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Aap oper wala conversation cut kar do ..


* At railway station
vicki train se trar k idr udhar daikhta hy ..or phir vicki or dad ka convesation...

*At stataion .
Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab
Or us k baad phir se baap bety ki wohi bate.. .

Ap oper wala wo paragraph cut kar do bro keu k wo conversation Train station pe rukny k baad ka hy jo ap ny us se pehly bhi likh dia hy ....or baaad my bhi. to oper wala cut kar do.
 

parkas

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Update 3


Next day


"Viki beta utha jaa kab se sooo rha hai, subah utha tha Namaz padh k phir soo gaya, chl jaldi uth"

Viki: ami sone doo na yrr thakaa huwa hun me .

Ami: q aisa kya kaam kr liya tune k thakaa huwa hai, konsa kheton m hallll chala kr aaya tha kal ? Gaon jaana hai aaj or tu abhi tk soo hi rha hai.

Viki: Ami aaj gaon jaana hai, ek to aap logon ne mujhe 3 din pehle bataya is baat ka to ohir mujhe apna pending kaam saara 3 din m krna padaa Or wo jo baaki k employees the mere under unko alag se saara kaam samjhaaya hai k kya krna hai kaise krna hai waghaira waghaira. Tab jaa kr jaan chuuti hai to thakna to hai hi naa. Or gaon train 🚆 shaam ki hai naa to abhi q jagaa rhi ho konsa train 🚆 mene chalani hai .

Ami: beta train 🚆 nhi chalani tumne lekin tayyari yo krni hai na samaan kon pack kare ga tumhaara ?

Viki: Ami meri packing ho gyii hai. mera Laptop, laptop charger, mobile charger, power bank, handsfree etc sab to rakh liya hai mene .

Ami: to beta ek kaam krna pehenna bhi laptop hi haan, kapde nhi rakhne tujhe kya ek hi jode m ghooomta rahe poora time ?

Viki: wo to mujhe pta hai aapne packing kr di hogi mere kapdon ki bhi isii liye soo rha tha, afterall app meri pyaari ami jo ho 😁.

Ami: beta ami to me hun tumhaari or ab ye maske lagaane ki zaroorat nhi hai mene packing kr di hai to ab utho nahao tayyar ho jaa kr shaam m nikalna bhi hai or tumhe ptaa hai k shaam ko traffic kiyna jamm hota hai to jaldi nikalna hai.

Viki: acha thk hai jaa rha hun.

" Ye hain hamari story k main character Waqas aka Viki, aisaa hi hai ye apne kaamon m thoda careless atleast baaki logon ko to aisa hi lagta hai ".


Shaam theek 5:30 pr sabhi log Railway 🚂 Station pr pohonch jaate hain or train 🚆 bhi time pr hi thi jo apne m ek miracle se kam nhi hota pr ho gaya tha. Ali bhi aaya huwa tha apne Dost ko see of krne.

Ali: chl yrr ab teri train ka time ho gaya hai to me bhi nikalta hun apna or baaki sabka khayaal rakhna, waise tujhe bolne ka koi faida to hai nhi pr ab formality bhi to poori krni hai na 🤣.

Viki: chl ab zeyaada daant na nikaal rakhun ga sabka khayaal or tu bhi dheyaan rakhna jaldi hi milen ge or haan araam se jaiyoo ghar mujhe pata hai tere Rideron wale keede ka to .


Ali: acha thk hai araam se hi jaoun gaa, Chl ok bye Have a Safe Journey ❤️.


Viki: Thanks bhai, bye and take care. 🙂

Or Ali wapas chl deta hai apne ghr aaj wo.jaldi aagaya tha office se apne dost ko station chorne k liye. (Iske ghr m isko Ami Abu ek bada bhai hai or ek Badi behen hai jinki shaadi ho chuki hai bhai ki bhi jaldi hi ho jaye gii Rishta pakka ho chuka hai unka bhi, Ali bhi Viki k saath ek hi College me padhta tha wahin 2non hi dosti huii or dekhte hi dekhte ye 2non Best Friends ban gye, ye bhi viki ki age ka hi hai bss viki se kuch months badaa hai ).

Wahin Train 🚆 chal padi thi apni manzil ki taraf. Apna Viki bhi masti m safar ko enjoy kr rha tha or Gaon m ghoomne phirne or naa jaane kis kis cheez ka khwaab dekh rha tha pr isko kya pata ka ye safar ka ikhtetaam usse kis naye safar pr le kr jaane wala hai, or uski qismat m kya likha hai ab ye to aaane wala waqt hi bataye gaa.

Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .


AT VILLAGE RAILWAY 🚂 STATION

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.

Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .

Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .

Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .

Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).

Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?

Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.


Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .


AT STATION

Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon.

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.

Inka gaon wala ghr koi pushtaini type nhi tha pr sab as a joint family hi rehte the Viki ki khala, uske mamu, chachu, phupho sabhi .

Inke ghr ek hi gali m ek hi line m the, or sabhi ghr ek 2sre k baraabar m the to inhon ne mil kr sabhi gharon k baher ek boundary wall banwaa rakhi thi like a society or a Haveli type jaise haveli m sabhi log saath rehte hain pr buildings alag alag bani hoti hain lekin outer boundary ek hi hoti hai waisa hi yahaan bhi tha.



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Story ka start acha tha ...
3rd episode me ik mistake hy jo story ky start me nhi honi chahye . aap jub type karty ho to us ko update karny se pehly read karo ..or update karny k baad bhi uski read kar lo ho sakta hy koi galti update karty time najar naa ay aap ko ..update k baad usko edit kr do...

Ap ny likha...

Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .

AT VILLAGE RAILWAY 🚂 STATION

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.

Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .

Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .

Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .

Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).

Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?

Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.


Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .۔۔۔

AT STATION

Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon
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[Or aap ny phir se vicky or us k dad ka covesation repeat kar dia.]

Train 🚆 se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain .
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain.(viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.

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Aap ny dobara se ye pora conversation likh dia is update k words k hisab se to ye galti nhi honi chahye bhai ye jyada bada update nhi hy ..😍😍

Ap edit kar lo is ko 😊😊
Thanks dear for your precious comment
and for addressing my mistakes.

Edit kr diya hai abhi.

asal m kal Sunday tha or half update mene pehle hi likh liya tha is conversation wale part tk pr phir ghr m kuch kaam aagaya to usme busy ho gaya tha or jab dubara likha to dheyaan hi nhi gaya .
or koshish karun ga k aage se aisi mistakes naa hon .

or yrr kal 2 updates aye the ek intro wala or ek ye wala, haan chota tha pr mujhe pata nhi k kitne words ka tha bcz mene mobile k notepad m type kiya tha or phir yahan past kr diya tha to agr aap bata sako k words kitne hai iska kaise check krte hain to mere liye asaani hogi .

BAaki aapki raye k liye behad Shukriya. 🙂
 
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