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Bhaya personal life me uljha hua hu. Mujhe bhi lagta hai ki story jaldi se complete karu lekin kya karu byastata bahut hai. Diwali ke baad start karne ki koshish karuga....

Bhaya diwali ke baad se likhne ka socha hai....

Awesome updates....Situation badi vichitra type ki ho gayi hai do pyar karne walo ki. Kisi ne thik hi kaha hai ki ye ishq nahi asaan bas itna samajh lijiye ki aag ka dariya hai aur tair ke jana hai. Ek jagah thikana mila aur laga ki sab kuch thik ho gaya hai magar news ki khabar ne wo sukh...

Na ji na ye byang nahi hai. Ye to maine dil se tarif ki hai aapki story ki. Sach me kamaal ki story hai....Pyar ke chakkar wali story kafi dilchasp hoti, khaas kar tab jab real wali jo....:hot:

So sad bhaya.... Bhatije ka khayaal rakho. Story to baad me bhi likhi ja sakti hai....

Main kamdev bhaya jaise kaise ho sakta hu yara. Wo mahaan purush hain aur main ek mamuli sa insaan hu....:D

Padh is liye nahi raha bhaya ki baad me fir se update ka wait karna padega aur aap ek update ek mahine me dege. Is liye socha hai ki jab story complete ho jayegi tab padhuga.... :D

Bhaya bahana banane ka kaam kamdev bhaya karte hain. Unki story running hai fir bhi update na dene ka bahana banate hain. Meri story to abhi running hi nahi hai. Jab running par hogi to unke jaise update dene me aanakani nahi karuga....:D

Bahut jald aayega yara. Tareekh mukarrar nahi kar sakta....:D

Awesome story neelam ji.... Starting se le kar abhi tak ke sare update padh liye. Laga hi nahi ki aapne pahli baar writing ki hai....Ek ladki apni maa baap ki ummido aur unke pyar ko thokar maar kar ek aise ladke ke sath ghar se bhaag gayi jise wo pyar karti thi. Sabse pahle to ghar se is...

Are bhaya abhi bhi wahi haal hai kya....:D Mujhe laga kuch update ho gaye hoge to maje se padhuga lekin yaha to raat se subah aur subah se raat ka chakkar chalu hai. Kamdev bhaya kya hai ye....:hinthint2:

:congrats: For the new story.... :applause:

आरज़ू वस्ल की रखती है परेशाँ क्या क्या, क्या बताऊँ कि मेरे दिल में हैं अरमाँ क्या क्या, ग़म अज़ीज़ों का हसीनों की जुदाई देखी, देखें दिखलाए अभी गर्दिश-ए-दौराँ क्या क्या।

Bahut jald continue karuga....

Pata nahi bhaya kyo show nahi ho rahe.... Btw thanks....

तुमने जो दिल के अँधेरे में जलाया था कभी, वो दिया आज भी सीने में जला रखा है, देख आ कर दहकते हुए ज़ख्मों की बहार, मैंने अब तक तेरे गुलशन को सजा रखा है।

Neelam ji thanks for reading my story.... Story zarur continue karuga. Bas ek busy time guzar gaye....

Bhaya isme meri koi galti nahi hai. Kyo ki kamdev bhaya ka asar ho gaya hai mujhe. Wo ek update dene me 32 din lagate hain. Us hisab se mujhe ek saal to lagna hi hai. Aap kamdev bhaya ko daily update dene ke liye mana lo to main bhi sochuga.... :D

Bhaya ab main kya bataau aapko.... Main kisi ko bhi nirash nahi karna chaahta. Bas time ka locha hai. Aapko to pata hai ki ek update ready karne me 3 se 4 ghante lag jate hain. Itna time kaise nikaal luga main jabki is time story padhne tak ke liye time nahi mil pata....

Maq bhaya main aapki baat samajh gaya hu. Isi liye to bola tha ki story zarur complete karuga but uske liye time to mile. Main chaahta hu ki jab start karu to fir ruku na. Bcoz rukne se flow bigad jata hai aur readers bhi naraaz hote hain. Time aisa ho jisse hapte me do ya teen update to zarur...