Adultery गुजारिश

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai

 

[SKYESH]

HalfbludPrince

both update ..............................ati sunder.............

 

[MR SINGH]

Ab lagta hai wo paheli khulegi jo meera ne batayi thi. Amawas bhi a gayi khoon ka rishta bhi mil geya aur nani ne bola ke chokhat pe milenge. Lets see what is next .....

 

[Chutiyadr]

waiting muafir bhai

 

[Ajju Landwalia]

Shandar, Gazab, Lajawab, lekin har mod par naya character aur naya suspense, Fauji Bhai gazab

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro

 

[HalfbludPrince]

बेहतरीन कहानी जितने भी अपडेट पड़ लो कम ही लगते हैं

भाई मेरी कोशिश है कुछ बेहतरीन लिख सकू

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Dev ko apne pita Yudhveer singh ki tashveer milti hai unke kamre me aur kuch saman bhi tab Dev gamgeen sa apni jhopdi me lout aata hai aur mulakat hoti hai rupa se jo dekh leti hai ushke jhkhmo ko aur ushe bata deta hai Dev sari sachchai. Idher raat ke veerane me koi saaya jata hai Shambhu ke Shivale aur mangti hai teen din ka woqt nahi toh hoga sarvnash. Bahtreen update hai mitr.

thanks for review bhai

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Pura bister khun se sana tha jo me bahar fenk kar nikal pada majar ki aur raste me saroj le gai gher jane na diya mujhe fir raat me aaya majar toh mil gai mona aur chal pade shivale dono. Agle din shivale ka rahshye janne ke liye mandir ke pujari aur apni naani se milne Dev chal pada.
Khubsurat update hai mitr.

ummid hai kahani ka romanch bana rahega

 

[HalfbludPrince]

Agli update ki partiksha rahegi mitr.

kosish karunga