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ननद की सास, और सास का प्लान
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please read, enjoy and comment. your support is requested
ननद की सास, और सास का प्लान
Page 1005,
please read, enjoy and comment. your support is requested
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किस्सा इन्सेस्ट यानी भैया के बहिनिया पर चढ़ने का
उर्फ़ गीता और उसके भैया का
My first attempt of writing incest, please do read, like and share your views
क्या बात है
Arvind bhaiyaaaaa.... kitna sharmate ho ... aap..
Gitaa.. ab.. seee ... koiiiii sharammm nhiiiii.. ummmm
Shukriya.. bhabhi jiक्या बात है
ये मेरी इन्सेस्ट लिखने की पहली कोशिश है लेकिन आपके चित्र ने एकदम सही मन के उहापोह को, देह के सुख को अच्छी तरह उकेरा है , बहुत आभार , कोशिश करुँगी अगली पोस्ट जल्द
गीता के दबे छुपे मनोरथ को उजागर कर दिया....Gajab update..... bhabhi ne khud hi no. Laga diya geeta ka to
सचमुच भाई से अच्छा केयर करने वाला और अच्छा कोई नहीं हो सकता.....Very nice, aur bhai se achha aur kaun
सही कहा... चोदेगा और धकाधक चोदेगा....Sulayega nahi biwi ki tarah Raat bhar chodega
You have eye catching titles "chaska swad badlne ka".... "rishton me hassen badlaav"...Excellent didi, superb, super duper update
Thanks for advertising ur Raji's story.
Lekin mujhe ek baat kehni hai ,ke ek to uske bhai ko koi naam do.
Aur dusra jese last two paragraphs mein dono ne samvad kiya hai aise hi Gita aur Mr.X ki erotic battein karvao please.
Aur last but not the least, mind mat karna apni Raji ke suggestion ko.Suggestions will take out the best out of my
gem(Komal) didi.It's for next updates.
और शायद यही एक नए इंसेस्ट की भूमिका भी हो....arre aap jaldi men lagat hai padhana bhool gayin , ekdm shuru ki do laaine, chaliye aap ke liye repeat kar deti hun,
गीता का स्कूल का नाम संगीता था लेकिन घर में सब लोग उसे गीता, फिर गीता से गितवा,उसके भाई का नाम अरविन्द था , लेकिन वो गीता से दो साल बड़ा तो उसे वो भैया ही कहती थी , और वो भी प्यार से कभी कुछ कभी कुछ , और कभी सब की तरह गीता ही,...
to naam to hai uske bhai ka, aur kahhani ke shuru men hi saaf saaf likha hai lekin story men do reasons se uske naam ka istemaal kam hoga
pahli baat to koyi bhi chhoti behan apne bhai ka naam nahi leti aur man men bhi apne bhai ko bhaiya ke nam se hi sochti hai
dosari baat story ke is hisse men main ek incest likhne ki dhrishtta kar rahi hun jo meri strength nahi hai isliey ye rishta Bhai -behan ka aur vo bhi sage bhai bahan ka hai, use focus karne ke liye mujhe laga vo apne bade bhaai ko Bhaiya hi kh ke sambodhit kare to jayda accha rahegaa
aur lastly main normally story kisi ke persepctive men likhti hun, yahn Gita chhutki ko apne Bhai ke saath ka chakkar suna rahi hai to isliye us ke perspective men,.. jahn vo sunati hai Bhaiya hi
lekin naam hai aur ekdm shuru men hi aa gaya hai
aap ke commnets, suggestion and tarif ki jitti tarif karun kam ,
story is a small effort as a tribute to your magnum opus.
your comparison is elaborate...Thanks so much, and praise coming from somebody whose incest story is galloping, breaking, reaching new heights every day. It's like sky stooping to earth to appreciate, you deigned to shower praise on my maiden efforts to a real incest story ( or part of it), where i have never ventured before, ... i am speechless and can only request you to keep me guiding, holding my hands and helping me in this attempt. Although, it is a part of story but i am inspired by two things, our own Kathasaritsagar (of Somdeva) and Russian dolls, Matryoshka, where a story will lead to another, and it will further bloom into a full story. so this attempt of Incest and tribute to your great work (it's, not an advertisement to your story, does Sun requires a billboard or time before a match, it rise itself is an announcement and so it your story) ,
Just Thanks and many thanks , bas isi tarh meri stories ko visit karti rahiye. paras ke smpark se loha bhi sona ho jaata hai.