Adultery छुटकी - होली दीदी की ससुराल में

[komaalrani]

भाग ९८

अगली परेशानी - ननदोई जी, पृष्ठ १०१६

अपडेट पोस्टेड, कृपया पढ़ें, मजे ले, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[motaalund]

Chaska swad badalne ka maine padha tha didi starting ka I will Surely continue in April Didi Happy holi

मैंने भी शुरू किया है...

 

[motaalund]

Komal didi, As we have seen You Have Given Some Real masterpiece From Village and Working life Style,

It's my humble request that you Please give some stories middle class metropolitan city And Specially dealing with slave & dom type or with political mistry happy holi

उस्तादों के उस्ताद

 

[motaalund]

Thanks dear, aur adult site par didi word mene bahut less suna hai.Jyada tar log to kuchh aur hi kehte hai , bhabhi bagaira.
Koi baat nahi lekin jo link diya hai agar ek page padh lete to achha tha.dear

ऐसा मेरा मानना है कि जिस खुलेपन से भाभी से बातें की जा सकती है... वैसी बातें...

 

[motaalund]

I am a well known writer ( journalist ) and Belong to A Royal family of Mirzapur (jiske upar web series bana Hai ) So I have Special Respect for Women & writers and even I pay respect to sex workers & Kothe wali ladies Becuase thats what I have achieved from My Ancestors . . . . .

कामना, वासना और हवस में अंतर होता है, long term relationship me Hawas ya washna nahi dikhani chahiye apne preyashi se sirf kaamna karni chahiye : Meri पहली शयन संगिनी, मेरी प्रोफेसर साहिबा के वचन थे, That has also created a huge impact in my behaviour That's why I have told you didi, I am much younger than you & and may Learn you in writing skills

हैप्पी होली दीदी

 

[motaalund]

I will suggest you may read my magnum opus, Phagun ke din chaar. It is a thriller woven around three cities of India with ramifications across the globe.

For a story in metro nothing better can be than my story, ' Its a Hard RAIN'.

story is based in Mumbai and deals with the corporate word, a short story. I am sharing the link and also first few lines of story, do read and share your comments.

Non-Erotic - It’s a hard rain

It’s a hard rainWhen the evening is spread out against the sky Like a patient etherized upon a table…Dusk was dawning on glass panes of his window, smoke rubbing its muzzle, peeping from outside , streets following like tedious argument, …every evening, it reminded him of Prufrock’s love...

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and let me share the first few lines of the story,

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It’s a hard rain



When the evening is spread out against the sky
Like a patient etherized upon a table…

Dusk was dawning on glass panes of his window, smoke rubbing its muzzle, peeping from outside , streets following like tedious argument, …every evening, it reminded him of Prufrock’s love poem, more than 12 years has gone, him occupying this cabin, but today was to be last day ,last evening,

Clock on wall reminded him, 10 minutes more, 10 minutes to move out, move out for ever.

When day started, it was like any other.

Same pressure, targets to be achieved, calls to be answered, calls to be avoided, meetings galore, but first hints came when somebody from finance texted about irrational behavior of company’s stock. Before he could make head of tell, HR had called everybody to be out in hall,

And there was blood bath.
Pink slips were handed, 242 persons, almost half of strength gone.
And then news, it was still a rumor, Acquisition and merger by some outside shark.

He only had a feeling of relief having been spared. And his feeling in his importance in him has been restored back, but after lunch heads and deputy heads of vertical were called to the board room.

His mouth was agape. She was there, he had first seen her emerging from a swimming pool of his condominium, a water nymph …but what she is doing here…

and after some time she came to him. May be a just touch of recognition, she stretched her hand for hand shake,

“Nothing personal, but in our organization, your team is redundant as we outsource it and already have a contract in place. “

And she moved to next VP.

The story depicts the current context in which India was passing through in detailed and subtle manner.
The treatment is so touchy that at many times you may feel that you are a part of it and feel the feel of protagonist (especially Ritu).

 

[motaalund]

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Thanks Friends

सात अक्षौहिणी के लक्ष्य पर बहुत बहुत शुभकामनाएं...

 

[motaalund]

Didi aap ki saari kahaniya पढ़ chuka hu is forum ka aur nanad ki Tranning bhee, even hard rain bhee

सच... सब एक से बढ़ कर एक...

 

[motaalund]

दीदी आप ने

‘एही ठैयाँ झुलनी हेरानी हो रामा!’ (Ehi Thaiyan Jhulni Ho Rama) तो पढ़ी ही होगी तो उस टाइप का कुछ लिखो

नामक इस पाठ में समाज से बहिष्कृत दुलारी के स्वभाव का चित्रण है। जहाँ वह अपने कठोर व्यवहार के लिए प्रसिद्ध है, वही कठोर हृदया दुलारी के मन के किसी कोने में करुणा भी है। वह उदार है। टुन्नू के प्रथम परिचय में टुन्नू के भाव का उसके हृदय पर प्रभाव पड़ता है। टुन्नू की अपने प्रति भावना को एक लहर मात्र मानने वाली दुलारी को यह समझने में देर नहीं लगी कि जिस वस्तु पर वह आसक्त है उसका सम्बन्ध शरीर से नहीं; आत्मा से है। वह टुन्नू की मौत से आहत हो उठी और उसकी दी हुई गांधीवादी धोती को पहन उसके प्रति आत्मीय श्रद्धा प्रकट की


जिसमे दुलारी और टुन्नु आज के। समय में होते या उसी समय में तो फिजिकल रिलेशन कैसा रहता some thing that .......

नारी तेरे रूप अनेक...

 

[motaalund]

Happy holi to you komal ji. Holi ki bahut yaden hain life me. Specially apni Choti Mausi ( meri real mausi ki Devrani) aur unke mayke me unki parivar ki aurton aur ladkiyon ki ab main unke Maike unki chhoti sister ki shadi me gaye the. Holi ka satay tha aur shadi ke liye sare rishtedar aye the. That was a life time experience for me playing with all age females from 19 to 40 years of age.

ये अनमोल यादें जीवन पर्यंत रहेंगी...

 

[motaalund]

Bahut mast hain. Aise joban ko feel karne aur chakhne ka maja hi kuch uur hai.......!

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