Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग २३८ पृष्ठ १४५०

वार -१ शेयर मार्केट में मारकाट

अपडेट पोस्टेड

कृपया पढ़ें, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर करें।

 

[motaalund]

Vahi to Guddi ne challange accept kar liya, fir Rinu Bhahi rukengi to dono Jiju bhi rukenge

रीनू.. चीनू और कोमल..
ये तीन तिलंगे तो मायके से सब पर भारी पड़ती आई हैं...

 

[motaalund]

Kamal jiju to isi beham me rahenge ki unhone seal kholi, jo khun nikla wo dekhkar kyunki raaj to renu or apko pta hai

राज की बात महफिल में नहीं...
वरना वहम टूट जाएगा...

 

[motaalund]

So should check your thread after couple of months then :p

हर पार्ट सीरियल की तरह...

 

[motaalund]

एकदम वर्क को डिस्टेंस ट्रवेल्ड और रेजिस्टेंस फेस्ड से नापना ज्यादा सही रहेगा।

और रजिस्टेंस फ़ोर्स तो सामान के लंबाई.. मोटाई और चौड़ाई पर भी निर्भर करता है....

 

[motaalund]

मान गए आपकी याददाश्त को. चीनू के हॉस्पिटल जाने वाली बात याद है आपको अभी भी।

भूलने वाली बात भी नहीं...

 

[motaalund]

Par koe deta nahe na dono trah ky , all these pages and whether update is good or bad everybody claps. Yeah encourage the writer but kch standard, don't gobble up garbage, kehty hyn yo r what you eat.

So don't make her an empress without clothes, pun intended.

And atleast if anybody comments on my post, do it in English or hinglish. Ye chanakya script use na karo.

Constructive criticism is better for any story writer.
As more things can be explored.
I did it many times.. you may notice it if you go through my earlier posts.
A dead silence will not be fruitful because if every person thinks like you then writer may think that nobody is interested in the story.

 

[motaalund]

I am not sure if anybody claps for me or not,

but for you, I will clap and keep on clapping, pun or no pun, it is pure fun.




such a single-minded devotion is a rarity. You posted 18 comments from 25th December till 3rd March and across the yawning chasm of months and years getting changed, ALL, ... All 18 comments or on my threads and out of 18 posts of yours, 17 comments are on this thread. Who wants a clap? Such a single-minded devotion is rare.

you have spent 6 hours, 3 minutes and 40 seconds in this forum till yesterday. Going by the pattern of posts, it looks like you used most of it on this thread.

This is another way of appreciation.

I am humbled.

But the only sore point is I am not sure when will you come back.

You come in bursts, and it follows a pattern.

6 Posts in December (25th, 26th and 28th), 6 Post in February ( 15th 16th and 19th), thread missed you in January.

And comes the beginning of March and you have already exhausted your monthly quota of 6. So will we meet in April or maybe the pattern will change?

Though his name is Analyzer but you have analysed him thoroughly with complete statistics.

 

[motaalund]

Had written a detailed reply to this, but was lost before it could be posted, it's not convnt to do that again so, would maybe gv that to you another tym
But, an important complmnt whch shd b reiterated is it's good that you mentnd abt reportng openly, you could have just done it in a hidden way, but you were open about it, shows some integrity which is good.
As for the rest of the comment, another tym maybe

It is good to follow rules instead of regret later.

 

[komaalrani]

ये तीन दिन तो महाविकट होंगे गुड्डी के लिए...

एकदम एक साथ तीन तीन मरद


और उन तीनो पर भारी पड़ने वाली मेरी बड़ी मौसेरी बहन, रीनू ,

लेकिन गुड्डी रानी की इतनी रगड़ाई हो जाएगी की फिर कोचिंग की पार्टी हो या कहीं और की, डीपी हो या गैंग बैंग

हँसते हँसते झेल लेंगी।

 

[motaalund]

You are humbled and I'm flattered at the way you keep track . Knew women who kept track of days , but hours and seconds that's new and kudos for that
Oh and that's how men come , whether in forums or..
yes they do clap for you komal and some of it is warranted, even though you take critique well now and it's good for you.
And yes you do have manners, even if didn't show many to you, you showed some.
Oh this didn't start in December babe, started before you started on this forum actually :p
Komal se ek anjaani thi,
kse purany forum ki Rani thi,
LIkhtee wo kch Kahani thi,
hamy yaad hy wo bat bat tmhay yaad ho ky na yad ho

kabhe ham may tum meñ bhe chaah thee
kabhe ham ko tum se bhi raah thee
kabhe ham bhe tum bhe the ashna
hamy yaad hy wo bat bat tmhay yaad ho ky na yad ho

She is not only humble but modest in her reply.
Otherwise you may visit other threads to see how those writers reacted on their threads.