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Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

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जोरू का गुलाम भाग २३६ - मंगलवार, दिल्ली

अपडेट पोस्टड, पृष्ठ १४३३ फायनेंसियल थ्रिलर का नया मोड़,

कृपया पढ़ें, आंनद लें और कमेंट जरूर करें
 
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एक दम सही कहा भाई अपने
Thanks
 

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जेठानी जी की चिंता भी सही है
अन्तः आपका मुख्य उद्देश्य तो यही है कि गुड्डी का पेट फूले वो भी बिन ब्याहे एक ही महीने के अंदर और पता भी न चले के किसके पानी के पेट फूला है।
kahani abhi baaki hai , kya uddeshy hai ye to aage hi pata chalega
 

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next part soon
 
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शतरंज के बाद होगा . . . कब्बडी और फिर होगा . . . फुटबाल . . दीदी भाभी हमे भी नसीब होंगी की सिर्फ आप और जीजा ही अकेले अकेले मजा लेंगे ....
अपने छोटे भाई के बारे में भी ध्यान रखिए गा ❤️❤️😉😉😶😶😶
aage aage dekhiye kya aata hai,...
 

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कुछ ऐसे विज्ञ पाठक है , परम पूज्य आदरणीय जो लिखने वाले से भी ज्यादा पात्रों की मनस्थिति से परिचित रहते हैं और लिखने वाले को भी अवगत कराते हैं , नहीं आपकी कहानी का यह पात्र वह नहीं सोच रहा है जो आपने लिखा है , बल्कि उसके मन में वह है जो मुझे पता है,...

पात्रों के साथ यह एकाग्रता, उनके चित्त के साथ यह भाव निश्चित रूप से प्रणम्य है,...

और उसके बाद मन में कभी कभी बस यही भाव उपजता है , उन्हें सादर प्रणाम किया जाय, लेखनी को विश्राम दिया जाय और उनसे अनुरोध किया जाये

बंधू बस अब आगे की कहानी आपके हवाले,...
 

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अभी तो दुर्गति बाकी ही है जेठानी की...ज्यादा टांग अड़ाने के चक्कर में टांग खुल भी जाएंगे।
ऐसे ही बढ़ते रहिये.....
 
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let me recall an old zen story,

two monks were going and on the side of a river of there was a lass, comely, attractive and bereft of garment covering her,


she begged them to make her cross the river,...

one monk lifted her , carried her across the river and left her on the other side of the river and kept on moving on his path.

After a dozen or so miles, the other monk, who was sullen, silent and brooding, asked him,...

" hey you carried that nude girl !

Other monk smiled and spoke nonchalantly,

" i left her on the other side of the river, ... carried her only across the river,... but i wonder,... you are still carrying her."




.....

sometimes i wonder , a story is a story is a story, ... and this one is a long story nay novel, running into almost 2,000 pages, with scores of characters, hundreds of incidents,...

but few of us, are so besotted with a few particular incident, that they are not able to move beyond it and will judge the entire opus based on that,...


but it happens in the world of a fictionalized world.

read somewhere long back, somebody invited Pran, a noted villain of his times of Hindi movies, a great actor and a greater human being,

but sister of host came running and called his brother, and scolded him,...

" what have you done , you have invited somebody who is so cruel, so lecherous and a man of wanton habits, a man is known by the company he keeps and you are befriending such persons,

a confusion happens between reel life and real life

but it also leads to salutation to the acting ability of a an actor when difference between man and character is totally lost.
 

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अभी तो दुर्गति बाकी ही है जेठानी की...ज्यादा टांग अड़ाने के चक्कर में टांग खुल भी जाएंगे।
ऐसे ही बढ़ते रहिये.....
Thanks, sometimes i do feel about this story that its jinxed, ... last time the forum got closed although story was racing against time and here now,... i am at crossroads, .... still,...
 
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Thanks, sometimes i do feel about this story that its jinxed, ... last time the forum got closed although story was racing against time and here now,... i am at crossroads, .... still,...
Only you can find the solution or make the decision to such climacteric situation. We are the readers, only if we can help.....
 
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