You are absolutely true, but alas,...
when i kept this story at pause, for some time i was fighting an impulse to stop writing, because when you write you want to communicate something and if situation becomes like that, when ever you say something somebody jumps up who is omniscient, knows about the characters more than the writer, and in a story which is actually a novel, in pdf it will run more than 1000 pages and if printed size of book will be about 500 pages, so there are going to be umpteen incidences , many characters, sometimes multi-layered , complexities, but somebody just does cherry picking, pick up a character an incidence and starts looking the entire story, from that angle only, ... and at every turn will stand up and pronounce the judgment no heroine is vamp and vamp is heroine, ... throwing the whole flow of story, entire fabric, carefully woven warp and weft torn,...
I was totally nonplussed.
you craft a scene, describe it with carefully selected words to create a picturesque atmosphere, but somebody, just says something which disrupts readers who are listening in the rapt attention,...
a friend quoted ( comment is no longer here and i am only quoting essence not exact words) that its not kafka or premchand why are you interrupting , ...
but my point of view suppose it is Kaffka and his famous story, metamorphosis,... where a man turns into a worm and it is being serialized , and after every post somebody stands up and says, he how its possible, and after a few pages again, raises hue and cry, hey writer has lost sense, and if somebody tells him, that its allegorical, he in turn is called names and again, ... in the beginning he is a man how it can be,...
or Premchand writing kafan,...and somebody raises a firm and strong voice against characterisation of Ghisu and Madho,
In this forum itself , somebody had called Nirmala a story based on incest.
so i was on cross roads,...
and this is not that i feel those who comment should always adore, i too had raised my voice and it is inbuilt in the genre that readers will raise their views, objections, ... Strand was the magazine where Sherlock Holmes appeared in 1891. But when Sir Arthur Connon Doyle wanted to close this by killing him, there was a hue and cry and ultimately Holmes came back. so readers will have a say, they can criticize the art and craft, any particular scene but if they become persistent, using the language, i dont feel like responding, ...
but comes the adversity,
धीरज धरम मित्र अरु नारी आपत्ति काल परखिये चारी
i kept my patience, decided not to stoop and my friends, ( they are much more than readers ) came up in the support,... and no words of gratitude will be ever enough for them.
we cant revert back to the ambience of past days, past forums, ... and as i have committed to myself to my story, and to my friends story will continue.
