Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[anvesharonny]

Aakhir kar guddi Rani ne sunehari sharbat pi hi Li wah wah,ab to roz morning tea piyegi.

 

[anvesharonny]

Wo mud wala fighting sex scene jitani prashansa Karu utani Kam hain.

 

[anvesharonny]

Sorry natural calamities ki wajah se reply nahi kar saka isliye short replies de raha hoon.

 

[komaalrani]

Hello Komaal Madam, read the story "Its a Hard Rain"...wow...that was awesome...felt almost as if it was almost a "personal" account of yourself albeit in the form of a story.
Very accurately described the cut throat world of Corporate where nothing is a given. One has to live by the sword and die by it (as the saying goes)..
When it comes to Laying off...nothing matters...you realize..the "hard yards" that you do for the company is for them just to earn the profits...and nothing in it for you at the end...
komaalrani

Thanks so much for taking out time and reading it.

you are absolutely right that i have tried to capture a person who is in late middle age, these lines from story perfectly describe the narrator of the story,

" I am on the wrong side of 40; suffering from diabetes and hypertension, living alone, on the top of middle management or bottom of top management in a big conglomerate.

I have clawed my way on corporate totem pole, but I know how greasy, how fragile it is. Almost burnt out many times, tired, drained and as we all know, every day is a new battle. Yes, these young boys, like piranhas, they keep on grinding their teeth, gnawing at toes and many times I felt the heat but I was just inches away and moved. You either go up or you go down."

Not because it's a story penned by me, but i cajoled you to read it as i feel a story should be like, multilayered.

You must have noticed, i have used four poets in the story just to match the persona of the progenitor, ' But then I enjoy poetry, crosswords, thrillers and movies too (mostly noir) and my wine also, just to give me company on those long lonesome evenings.'
story begins with the famous lines of T.S. Elliot, and again paraphrased in prose, '
When the evening is spread out against the sky
Like a patient etherized upon a table…'
Dusk was dawning on glass panes of his window, smoke rubbing its muzzle, peeping from outside , streets following like tedious argument, …every evening, it reminded him of Prufrock’s love poem, '
and there is Emily Dickinson, Caurapâñcâśikâ, of Bilhana and story ends with a famous song of Bob Dylan.

Thirdly, many readers presume that my story will be based on Holi related themes, with village background, some bawdy lingo, and that is another aspect for which i requested you to have a look at this story, just to highlight that there are many stories where narrative is entirely different. Even in this long story, out of almost 200 parts hardly 2-3 parts revolve around holi revelries.


Mohe Rang de also has entirely different background.

I can only suggest that whenever you have time, please do try to get some time to read either this story or Mohe Rang de,... your comments will certainly encourage me.

 

[komaalrani]

लाज़वाब कोमल भाभी जी।।

Thanks so much for enjoying and commenting on the story, comments of friends like you are a pillar of support.

 

[Mass]

Thanks so much for taking out time and reading it.

you are absolutely right that i have tried to capture a person who is in late middle age, these lines from story perfectly describe the narrator of the story,

" I am on the wrong side of 40; suffering from diabetes and hypertension, living alone, on the top of middle management or bottom of top management in a big conglomerate.

I have clawed my way on corporate totem pole, but I know how greasy, how fragile it is. Almost burnt out many times, tired, drained and as we all know, every day is a new battle. Yes, these young boys, like piranhas, they keep on grinding their teeth, gnawing at toes and many times I felt the heat but I was just inches away and moved. You either go up or you go down."

Not because it's a story penned by me, but i cajoled you to read it as i feel a story should be like, multilayered.

You must have noticed, i have used four poets in the story just to match the persona of the progenitor, ' But then I enjoy poetry, crosswords, thrillers and movies too (mostly noir) and my wine also, just to give me company on those long lonesome evenings.'
story begins with the famous lines of T.S. Elliot, and again paraphrased in prose, '
When the evening is spread out against the sky
Like a patient etherized upon a table…'
Dusk was dawning on glass panes of his window, smoke rubbing its muzzle, peeping from outside , streets following like tedious argument, …every evening, it reminded him of Prufrock’s love poem, '
and there is Emily Dickinson, Caurapâñcâśikâ, of Bilhana and story ends with a famous song of Bob Dylan.

Thirdly, many readers presume that my story will be based on Holi related themes, with village background, some bawdy lingo, and that is another aspect for which i requested you to have a look at this story, just to highlight that there are many stories where narrative is entirely different. Even in this long story, out of almost 200 parts hardly 2-3 parts revolve around holi revelries.


Mohe Rang de also has entirely different background.

I can only suggest that whenever you have time, please do try to get some time to read either this story or Mohe Rang de,... your comments will certainly encourage me.

Agree Madam with your thoughts. This was a story which was "Zara hatke" (if I may use these words).
After all, your tremendous reputation (as a terrific erotic story writer) definitely precedes you
Your story brings out a lot more nuances about mid age persons and their mid life crisis (which I can personally relate to very much).
Reg your other stories, I'll definitely try to read them as and when I can find some time and definitely comment upon them. Thank you once again for entertaining us for a very long time. As your (our) friend Raji says, you are one of the veterans of this forum.
Keep going and God Bless you!!
komaalrani
Rajizexy

 

[komaalrani]

सारे k सारे अपडेट बहुत ही शानदार है।।।

K ने लिखा है न।

 

[komaalrani]

Kya behatarin update tha night ka maja aa gaya.

many many thanks,... ekdm raat men nanad ne apane Bhaiya ke saath Bhabhi ke saath aur Guruvaain Geeta ke saath sb maje liye

 

[komaalrani]

Aakhir kar guddi Rani ne sunehari sharbat pi hi Li wah wah,ab to roz morning tea piyegi.

Ekdam Geeta ne saaf saaf bol diya hai , subah ka pahla kaam yahi vo aayegi aur Guddi ke saath chaalu,....sab aadte badl rhi hain meri naand ki

 

[Rajizexy]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग १९९

update posted, please read, like, enjoy and do comment. Your likes and comments enthuse me, spur me to post more, ...

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