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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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Kehte hai. Is brahmmand me bahut se raj chhipe hue hai. Jo insan kafi nahi jaan sakta. Chahe vo kitani hi kosis Kyu na karle. Jab tak us perbrahm ki ikchha nahi hoti tab tak ek tinka bhi nahi hilta hai.

Aisa hi kuchh is kahani me bhi hua hai.


Croro saal pehle. Jab danav or devtao me yudh hota tha. To anek दिव्यास्त्रों ka istemaal Kiya jata tha. Jinme is pore brahamand ko khatm karne ki shaktiya hoti thi. Or aaj bhi hai. Lekin ye दिव्यास्त्र samay ke sath vilupt ho gye. Or ye tabhi samne aayenge jab swayam bhagwan ki ikchha hogi. Aise hi ek दिव्यास्त्र ki ye kahani hai.


Darashal shukracharya ne kai varsho tak tap karke Brahm Dev ko prasann Kiya.



Brahma- aankhe kholo vats. Mango kya vardaan chahte ho tum.



Shukracharya- he bhagwan. Me to bas mere asuro ka kalyan chahta hu. Me chahta hu ki unhe bhi devtao ke saman hi samman or shaktiya mile. Lekin vishnu bhagwan ne hamesha hi hamare sath chhal Kiya hai. Or asuro ko jo bhi vardan milte the. Un vardano ko unhi ke khilaaf istemaal kar dete hai. Isliye Me nyay chahta hu aapse.



Brahma- shukracharya ham aapki vani ko samaj rahe hai. Iska aap hi koi upay bataiye ki hame kya karna chahiye.




Shukracharya- prabhu me chahta hu aap mujhe koi aisa दिव्यास्त्र ya shakti pradan kare jisse me पंचतत्व ko apne adheen kar saku. Or danavo ko uski shaktiyo se amar bana saku.




Brahma- shukracharya. Is sansar me koi bhi amar nahi ho sakta. Lekin aisa ek दिव्यास्त्र me tumhe pradan kar sakta hu. Isse danav amar nahi honge lekin vo पंचतत्व ko apne adheen jarur kar payenge. Lekin aap is दिव्यास्त्र ko apne kisi ek danav ko hi de sakte hai. Agar usne ye दिव्यास्त्र kho diya ya vo kisi tarah parajit ho gya to ye दिव्यास्त्र is sansar me vibhajit ho jayega. Or jab is दिव्यास्त्र ki ikchha hogi tabhi ye samane aayega.




Shukracharya ne is per vichar kiya or bahut sochne ke baad Brahma ji se ye दिव्यास्त्र lene ka faisala kiya.




Shukracharya- prabhu mujhe swikaar hai. Aap kripa kar ye दिव्यास्त्र mujhe pradan kare.




Ye sunkar Brahma Ji ne TATHASTU bol diya. Or isi ke sath ek naye दिव्यास्त्र ki rachna hone lagi. Or thodi hi der me ye pori tarah se bankar ready hogya.



Isme पंचभूतों ke pratik ke rup me 5 alag alag stone lage hue the. Har ek stone ka matlab ek shakti se tha.



AAKASH (SPACE)

VAYU (AIR)

JAL (WATER)

AGNI (FIRE)

PRITHVI (EARTH)



Ye दिव्यास्त्र brahma ji shukracharya ko deke antardhyan ho gye.


Or ye astra pake shukracharya bahut khush hue. Kyuki ab punchbhut unke kabu me jo aagye the. Isse pehle keval mahadev hi in punchbhuto ke swami rahe hai. Isiliye unhe Bhutnath bhi kehte hai.


Ab shukracharya ke samne sabse badi problem ye thi ki is astra ko diya kise Jaye. To unhone ye astra Tarkasur ko de diya. Kyuki Tarkasur ka ant keval Shiv ke putra ke hatho hi ho sakta tha. Or filhal shiv ji aisa kuch bhi karne ka mood nahi tha. Unki to abhi tak shadi bhi nahi hui thi. Yani ki vo amar tha. Or is astra ke mil jane se vo or bhi shaktishali ho gya tha. Usne pore brahmand me hahakar macha diya tha. Devtao se yudh hota to usme bhi vo aasani se sabhi ko parajit kar deta. Kyuki sabhi devta kisi na kisi tatva ke pratik the. Jaise Surya Dev agni ke pratik. Varun dev jal ke pratik. To is astra ki madad se Tarkasur ne sabhi devtao ko apne kabu me kar liya. Unki shaktiya bilkul samapt ho gyi thi. Bas vo jinda the kisi tarah. Vo Brahma Ji ke pass gye unse madad ki guhar lagai. Lekin vo bhi kuch nahi kar sakte the. Unka kehna tha ki keval Shiv ka ans hi Tarkasur ka ant kar sakta hai.

Lekin devtao ke aagrah per Brahma or visnu ji ne aadi shakti se prarthna ki. Ki ab aapke or shiv ke milan ka samay aagya hai.

To is per vichar karke aadi shakti ne SATI roop me Prajapati daks ke yaha per avtar liya.


Or aage chal kar unka vivah bhi shiv ke sath ho gya. Lekin kismat ko kuch or hi manjoor tha. Prajapati ke dwara ek yagya me apne pati ka apman devi Sati seh Na Saki or unhone bahi per aatmadah kar liya. Jisse Tarkasur or bhi khush ho gya. Or usne or tabahi machana prarambh kar diya. Kyuki shiv bhi ab Sati ke gum me doob chuke the. Or apna deviye roop tyag chuke the. Jis bajah se tridev bhi khandit ho gye the. Or sabhi ki shaktiya dheere dheere kam hone lagi thi. Tab sare devta ek baar fir se aadi shakti ke pass gye or unse punah avtar lene ki ikchha pragat ki. Tab unhone Parvati ke roop me janm liya. Or unhone kai varsho tak ghor tapasya ki tab Jake vo shiv ko pa saki. Unka vivah hua. Or unki pehli santan hui KARTIKEY. jinhone Tarkasur ka vadh kiya. Or is srishti ko maha vinash se bacha liya.


Tarkasur ke ant ke sath hi vo ASTRA bhi prithvi ke punchmahabhuto me vileen ho gya. Or uska kabhi kuch bhi pata nahi chal paya kisi ko bhi. Danavo ne use khojne ki bahut kosis ki lekin use nahi khoj paye ye log. Lekin shukracharya ko ye pata tha ki kabhi na kabhi ye ASTRA apne aap ko samne jarur pragat karega. Bas use ishare ko samajne ki jarurat hai. Jis din is ASTRA ne apne hone ka praman is sansar ko diya. Tabhi samaj lena ki danav ise fir se prapt karne ke liye koi bhi had paar kar jayenge.




Bahi dusri taraf ye dar sabhi devtao or tridev ko bhi tha.
Isi dar ko apne sath leke Indradev brahma ji ke pass gye.





Brahma- kaho indra kaise aana hua yaha per.




Indradev- prabhu aap to sab jante hai. Mere yaha aane ka kaaran bhi aap jante hi hai.



Brahma- ha me janta hu Indradev. Aap us ASTRA ko leke chinta me hai.



Indradev- ha brahm dev. Agar vo ASTRA fir se pragat ho gya or kisi danav ke hath lag gya to anarth ho jayega. Sabhi devta fir se danavo ke adheen ho jayenge. Aapko iska koi hal sochna hoga.




Brahma- hame iska upay gyat hai indradev. Lekin is upay ke liye ye samay upyukt nahi hai. Usme abhi samay hai.




Indradev- brahmadev. Iska upay kya hai aap hame Bata sakte hai.




Brahma- jab samay aayega tab me swayam Aapko iska upay bata dunga. Or is upay ko karne me aapka bhi ek bahut bada yog daan hoga.



Indradev- jaisi aapki aagya brahma dev.



Uske baad indradev bapis swarg chale gye.



Or iske baad kai Arab saal nikal gye lekin vo astra abhi tak samne nahi aaya kisi ke bhi.danav abhi bhi iski talash jari rakhe hue the.unhe ummid thi ki jald hi ye astra samne aayega.



Is ke crore saal baad.





Uttrakhand ki rajdhani dehradun ki khubsurat badiyo ke bech bane ek hospital me ek aurat bahut jor jor se dard me chilla rahi. Ye dard jo use ek naya sukh dene wala tha. Darashal vo kisi bache ko janm dene wali thi. Docters pori kosis kar rahe the ki normal delivery ho jaye. Or vo aurat vo apna pora jor laga rahi thi. Or raat ke karib 11:29 min. Per us aurat ne ek bahut hi khoobsurat ladke ko janm diya. Jaise hi us ladke ne janm liya or rona start Kiya. Achanak se sare badal me jordar bijli kadakne lagi. Or musladhar baris bhi hone lagi. Sabhi isse thoda dar bhi gye the ki achanak se ye sab kya hone laga. Bahi us ladke ki maa us ladke ko dekha or Behosh ho gyi. Docters ne unhe check Kiya to paya ki unki dhadkane dheemi padti ja rahi hai. To docters ne apni kosis ki or us aurat ko oxygen lagaya. Or electric shok diya. Tab Jake uski condition me sudhar aaya. Uske baad docters ne us aurat ko ek injection diya jisse vo so gyi. Bahi vo ladka bhi ab aaram kar raha tha. Or mousam bhi saaf ho chuka tha.


Ward ke bahar ladke ke dada or usse 2 saal badi bahen uska intjaar kar rahe the.


Docters ward se bahar gye to dono ne unhe gher liya.


Dada- docter bahu kaisi hai.



Doc- ghabrane ki jarurat nahi hai. Ab vo theek hai. Or khusi ki baat ye hai aap ko pota hua hai. Or aapki bahu bhi sahi salamat hai. Kuch ghanto baad unko hosh aajayega tab aap unse mil sakte hai. Or ha filhaal aap apne pote ko dekh sakte hai. Halaki vo abhi so raha hai



Ye sunke dada to khusi se nachne lage. Kyuki unki beintaha doulat ka baris jo aagya tha.unhone khusi se ladke ki badi bahen ko God me utha liya or usse bolne lage ki tumhara Bhai aaya hai.


Vo ladki bhi bahut khush thi. Use khelne ke liye ek khilona Jo mil gya tha.




Maine abhi tak aapko in sabka intro nahi diya. Chalo de deta hu.




Jagdish sinha- ye hero ke dada hai. Inki age karib 50 hai. Inke pariwar me ab yahi ek mard bache hai. Inki kafi pustaini jaydad hai. Jinhe abhi tak inke bete ne sambhala hua tha. Lekin 3 mahine pehle ek accident me unki mout ho gyi. Jisse ek baar fir se sari jimmedari jagdish ji per aagyi thi. Or unhe is baat ki bhi kafi chinta thi ki unke Jane ke baad is sab ka kya hoga. Lekin ab unki chinta dur ho gyi thi. Inki shadi 18 saal ki age me hi ho gyi thi. Or 2 saal baad inke ladke ka janm hua. Jiska naam inhine viswas sinha rakha tha. Or iske baad inko koi or santan Hui hi nahi.


Or hero ki dadi bhi bahut pehle mar chuki hai. Inka jyada bada pariwar nahi hai.



Nirmala devi- ye apne hero ki mummy hai. Inki age filhaal 25 hai. Kafi fit dikhti hai. Or Sadi me to qehar girati thi hero ke dad per. Lekin jab se unki death hui hai. Ye keval apni beti ke liye hi jinda hai. Or ab inke ladke ke liye bhi.
Ye bhi kafi padi likhi hai. Or dadaji ke sath business sambhalti hai.



Renuka- ye apne hero ki badi bahen hai. Inka janm hero se 2 saal pehle hua hai. Kafi cute hai. Jo bhi ise dekhta hai sabse pehle uske gaalo ko khechne ki ikchha hoti hai.

To dosto ye tha ek chhota sa intro. Aage or bhi character aayenge jinka time per intro karwata rahunga….












To be countinue……………...
Jabardust shaandar, aur adbhut kahani ki kya bhumika banayi hai bhai pranshsha k liye shabhd hi nahi mil rahe

mein iss site par naya hu aur
aaj hi aapki kahani padna shuru kiya hai

pauranik tathyo k saath imaginatio ka milap bahut hi badiya :applause: :applause:
 

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Nice update bhai or ho sake to kal 2 update dena bhai or suresh urf mayasur ye soch ke pagal ho jayega ki ye sab hua to to hua kese or kis ne kiya mujhe lagta he ki uska sak shayad hero pe hi hoga waiting for next update
 
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UPDATE-9






Peeche se kisi ne mere kandhe per hath rakha or ye aabash hoti hi ki me ab pakda gya hu. Meri halat kharab hone lagi.


Ab aage


Arnav ne peeche mudkar dekha to samne uske dada ji khade the.



Dada- kaha ja rahe ho beta ji




Main- vo dadu me to bas pani peene neeche aaya tha. Vo kamre me khatm ho gya hai.




Dada- achha aao mujhe bhi pyas lagi hai. Sath me hi pi lete hai pani.



Dadu mujhe apne sath kitchen me le gaye. Jaha unhone mujhe pani diya. Or khud bhi piya. Or ek bottle mujhe de di.



Dada- ise sath le jao agar raat me or pyas lage to pee lena



Main- theek hai dadu. Aap bhi ab so jaiye.



Dada- vo beta aaj neend nahi aarahi hai. Thoda yahi per tehal lunga to sayad aajayegi neend. Ya aisa karta hu tumhare sath tumhare kamre me chalta hu. Jab tak tum so nahi jate ham bate karenge.



Ab me kuch keh bhi nahi sakta tha.



Main- dadu mujhe to bahut tez neend aarahi hai. Me bate nahi kar paunga. Or aapko to pata hi hai me subah jaldi uthjata hu.isliye mujhe jaldi hi sona padega.



Dada- theek hai beta ji aap so jao.



Uske baad dadu ne mere sir per hath phera or vo bahi khade rahe or me apne kamre me aagya. Jaha pahuchte hi mujhe jor ki neend aane lagi. Or me kab so gya mujhe bhi pata nahi chala.


Subah me apne time per utha or apna rutine follow karne laga. Or sach kahu to mujhe kal raat ki koi bhi baat ab yaad hi nahi aarahi thi. Mere dimaag me itni baat fit thi ki maine kal khana khaya or Jake so gya. Apne room me. Ab me ye soch soch kar paresan tha ki mujhe to kal raat me jungle me jana tha to me gya kyu nahi. Or me soya kab. Mujhe kuch bhi samaj me nahi aaraha tha.


Kafi der tak jab kuch yaad nahi aaya to Maine is baat ko chhod diya. Or socha sayad kal lete lete hi neend aagyi hogi. Isme Jane ka reh gya hoga.

Yahi sab sochte sochte kab meri exercise pori ho gyi pata hi nahi chala. Uske baad me ready hoke neeche gya dadu or mom ka asirbaad liya. Nasta Kiya or apni bike leke clg nikal gya. Ratse me chirag ko pick Kiya. Or ham nikal gye.



Chirag- Abe kal ki news dekhi kya tune.



Main- ha dekhi thi. Infact me hi vo sakhs tha jisne police ko us accident ki khabar di thi.



Chirag- what. Fir kya hua tha baha per.



Main- baha per do police wale aaye the or unhone mujhe ghar bhej diya tha. Uske baad subah ki news dekhi to mere to pasine nikal gye. Ki 5 police wale gayab hue hai. Or us aadmi ka bhi koi pata nahi chala jiska accident hua tha.




Chirag- achha hua tu unke sath nahi gya. Or ghar aagya. Verna tu bhi aaj gayab ho gya hota




Main- Abe mujhe gayab kar sake aisa koi nahi hai is prithvi per. Or Maine to bahut kaha bhi tha unlogo ko ki mujhe sath le chalo. Sayad agar me unke sath jata to unlogo ko gayab nahi hone deta.




Chirag- jaise tu koi superman hai or tu unhe bacha leta. Beta mat bhool tu sirf ek insan hai. Or agar us jungle me koi bhyanak jaanwar hua hoga to tera vo badiya se dinner karte. Or Teri sari hosiyari bahi per dhari reh jati.




Main- Abe baha per koi jaanwar nahi hai. News me hi dikhaya hai ki is ilake me kisi bhi jaanwar ke hone ki koi aashanka nahi hai.isi liye mujhe lag raha hai. Baha per jarur koi insan hi hai. Sayad koi seriel killer. Jisne sabhi ko maar diya hoga. Or lash na mile isliye sayad jameen me gaad diya hoga.




Chirag- kaisi baat kar raha hai tu. Abe vo 5 police wale the. Agar koi ek seriel killer hota to vo log use maar dete.




Main- ye bhi baat hai. To fir koi gang hogi seriel killers ki.lekin koi Jaanwar nahi hoga ye baat to pakki hai.



Chirag- jo bhi hoga jald hi pata chal jayega. Tu koi bhi hosiyari na hi karna to behtar hai



Main- kosis karunga



Chirag- yahi bahut hai. Achha ye bata us prachi ka kya kiya tune koi sabak bagera sikhaya ya nahi



Main- ha sikhaya na. Or aisa sikhaya hai ki ab vo bhool kar bhi aisi harkat dobara nahi karegi



Chirag- aisa kya kiya tune.



Fir maine usko kal ki sari kahani sunai. Jise sunne ke baad chirag bhi kush ho gya.




Chirag- badiya kiya tune. Badi akad bhari thi usme.ab sab nikal gyi hogi.



Hamari inhi bato me clg bhi aagya. Hamne bike park ki or bahar nikal aaye. To lucky hamara wait kar raha tha baha per.



Lucky- or mere shero kaise ho




Chirag- badiya hai tu suna.



Lucky- me bhi. Achha kal fir kya kiya tha tune.




Main- bahi Jo Tay kiya tha.


Fir maine ise bhi sari kahani bata di. Or ye bhi kush ho gya


Lucky- badiya Kiya. Chalo kuch khate hai.



Chirag- Abe kitna khata hai. Kisi din fat jayega …





Lucky- Abe najar mat laga. Baise bhi aajkal kam hi kha raha hu. Uper se tu tok raha hai.



Chirag- achha ye kam khana hai. To jyada kise kehte hai.




To iske jawab me lucky ne hame apni purani photo dikha di. Jisme vo kisi hathi ke bache ki tarah dikh raha tha.



Chirag- Abe ye kon hai.




Main- lagta hai kisi hathi ka bacha kho gya hai. Tune forest walo ko khabar di ya nahi.




Lucky- salo udalo mera majak. Lekin ye photo ek saal pehle ki hai. School me main aisa dikhta tha. Lekin jab 12th me pahucha to socha clg me sab majak udayenge. Isliye wait loss karna start kar diya. Or aaj result tumhare samne hai




Main- bakai me yaar tune to kamaal hi kar diya. Baise kitna wait loss Kiya hai.




Lucky- pore 40 kilo.
Pehle pore 100 kilo ka tha or ab keval 60 kilo ka.




Chirag- kamaal kar diya tune to. Bakai me.



Main- bahi to ab to abs bagera bhi bana liye honge kyu.




Lucky- ha thode bahut.kam se kam ab shirt nikalne me Sharm to nahi aayegi mujhe




Main- ye bhi theek hai. Lekin ek baat kehna chahunga tumhe aaj. Ki khud ko dusro ki najar se nahi balki khud ki najar se dekhna chahiye. Dusre chahe ham per hase ya kuch bhi kare. Hame un per dhyan nahi dena chahiye. Bas khud ko agar tum achhe lagte ho to fir dunia Jaye bhad me. Samjhe.




Lucky- kass tu pehle Mila hota. To itni mehnat nahi karta me.khair ab ho gyi to ho gyi. Lekin aage se is baat ka dhyan rakhunga me.




Main- ha rakhna lekin ab dobara se bajan mat badane lag Jana.




Lucky- sale double dholki. Abhi itna lumba chouda bhashan de raha tha ki khud ko khud ki najar se dekhna chahiye or abhi khud keh raha hai ki bajan mat bada Lena.




Chirag- iska aisa hi hai. Pal me toula to pal me masa. Kabhi kuch kehta hai to agle hi pal khud ki baat ko galat bhi sabit khud hi kar deta hai. Bada hi confusing Banda hai ye.




. main- ab me jaisa hu to hu. Maine aisa hi bhasan Prachi ko bhi diya tha. Jisme ek time per me khud confuse ho gya tha ki main akhir kehna kya chahta hu. Lekin akhir kaar baat sambhal gyi or sab sortout ho gya




Chirag- mujhe laga hi tha



Ham log canteen me pahuche baha per badiya coffee pe. Tabhi baha per Prachi aagyi.




Prachi- hi dev. Can I sit here.




Main- ha kyu nahi. Baith jao. Baise kuch logi chai coffe ya samosa.



. prachi- no thanks me nasta karke aayi hu.



Chirag- achha hua. Verna bechare lucky ka bill bad jata or use pehle se hi kam pocket money milti hai



Ye sunkar lucky ne chirag ke pairo per apna pair patak diya. Jisse chirag sahab chilla uthe



Prachi- kya hua


Chirag- kuch nahi.



Lucky- isko chhodiye. Aap bataiye ki kal aisi kya khurafaat sujhi ki aapne iski car ko fod dala.




Prachi- i m sorry yaar vo bas thoda ego or gusse ki bajah se kar diya maine.




Main- koi baat nahi. Lekin ab to sab theek hai na.




Chirag- ha kahi tumne iski bike ko bhi to nahi tod diya. Kal ki dusri khunnas nikalne ke liye




Prachi- very funny.



Chirag- hai na.




Main- Abe shan't raha kar thoda. Kal ki baat bhul gya kya.




Lucky- ha be kal to tune kasam khai thi ki abse bak bak band. Fir kya hua aaj.




Prachi- achha aisa kya ho gya tha. Jara batana to.




Chirag- vo to bas aise hi. Kuch khas nahi tha.




Main- kya sach me.




Lucky- ha be. Lekin dev isne kuch or nahi bataya tha hame. Or keh raha tha ki bahut khas hai.




Chirag- (dheere se) Abe salo marunga bahut. Agar muh khola to.



Main- ha yaar kaho to Bata du Prachi ko.




Prachi- ha batao na pls.




Chirag- nahi bilkul nahi. Or Prachi ye matter yahi khatm hota hai. Chalo hamari class suru hone wali hai



Ye kehke vo utha or lucky ko apne sath kheech le gya. Jo apne muh me aadha samosa dabaye hue tha. Or keh raha tha ki kam se kam khane to de sale. Lekin chirag kisi ki sune tab na.




Prachi- tumhare friend kafi funny hai.




Main- ha bo to hai. Tabhi to Mera time pass ho jata hai aaram se.



Prachi- mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai. Baise me kehna chah rahi thi ki kya tum mujhe apna friend banana chahoge.




Main- kya ab mere naam ki dhus jamani hai clg me.




Prachi- comon yaar ab band bhi karo ye sab kehna. Mujhe ab achha nahi lag raha hai ye sab.




Main- ok ok ab nahi kahunga. Or rahi baat friend ki to. Vo to tum kal hi ban gyi thi. Tab hi to tum mere baju me baithi ho.



Prachi- sachi



Main- ha



Prachi- ohh dev thank you very much.




Main- ab chhodo ye kehna. Tumne dekha na mere dost mujhe thanks or sorry nahi kehte. Balki keh kar meri le lete hai. Isliye ab ye sab band karo or class me chalo.




Prachi- ha lekin kya le lete hai



Main- bahi Jo abhi tum le rahi ho. Firki.



Prachi- sahi kaha chalo.



Uske baad ham class me gye or clg end hone tak padte rahe or thodi bahut Masti bhi chalti rahi.



Clg ke baad ham sabhi bye bolke Ghar nikal gye. Raste me Maine chirag ko uske ghar chhoda or nikal gya. Or jate waqt bahi jagah dekh kar kal ka pora waqya yaad aagya. Or Maine apni bike ko apne aap hi rok diya baha per. Or bahi khada ho gya or jungle ke andar dekhe laga. Or sochne laga ki akhir aisa kya aagya is jungle me jo kal itne log gayab ho gye yaha se. Or mere andar ab ye vichar chal raha tha ki kya me jungle me jau ya nahi.

Kafi soch vichar karke Maine Jane ka faisla kiya or jaise hi bike se neeche utra mera mobile baj utha. Or Maine screen per dekha to vo mom ka call tha.



Main- ha mom.



Mom- kaha hai tu abhi tak ghar nahi aaya.




Main-mom raste me hi hu. Bas 5 min. Me pahuch raha hu.



Mom- theek hai jaldi aaja. Or sun us jungle ke yaha per rukna mat. Tune dekha tha na kal news me.



Main- mom mujhe pata hai. Me aata hu. Theek hai chinta mat karo. Me aata hu



Ye kehke Maine call kaat diya. Or socha baad me dekhte hai is jungle ko. Or bapis se ghar chala gya









To be countinue……………...
superb fantastic mind blwing update bhai with fantastic writing skills......
bhai ab tak k update pade sbhi ek se badkar ek hai....
ab dekhte hai jungle mein kya hota hai..... :applause: :applause: :applause:
 

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