Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[vivekk1984]

Aaj maine aapki ye kahani padhi...
Bhaut badiya story line hai....
Buss aapse ek hi request hai ki iss kahani ko aage Chalke asleel matt banaiyega.

Ek baat aur kehena chahunga ki mein ek aastik insaan hun ved puran, bhagwan sab pe Biswas raktha hun... Meri icha hai ki aap isme tridevo ko v samilit Karen. Aur thoda sa science ka v tadka lagaaye.... Jo ki asuron ko ekdum naya lage....

 

[Scorpionking]

Shandaar update bhai maza aa gaya

 

[Azagar Dada]

मजेदार अपडेट। आखिर अर्णव की भेंट दानवों से हो ही गई। अब एक्शन का टाईम है। अर्णव कैसे उनका सामना करता है यह देखने में मजा आने वाला है।

 

[Naina]

Brilliant update writer sahab.... Great going

 

[Rahul0087@]

UPDATE-11









me aage bhagta ja raha tha or vo log bijli ki tezi se mera peecha Kar rahe the. Charo log Charo dishao me fail kar mujhe gherne ki tayyari kar rahe the. Ab mera bachna muskil lag raha tha. To maine thodi der saas lene ke liye ek ghani jhadiyo me Jake chhip gya. Or andhera tha to sayad unlogo ka is per dhyan nahi gya or vo mujhse thoda aage nikal gye. Lekin me janta tha ki vo mujhe sungh sakte hai. Or jaldi hi yaha per pahuch jayenge



Main- yaar ab kya kiya jaye. Ye sale pishach kaha se aagye. Maine to socha tha koi insan ya janawar hoga to sambhal lunga. Lekin ab in danavo se kaise niptu
Hay bhagwan koi rasta sujhao.



Maine apne dono hatho ko joda or bhagwan ka ismaran karne laga. Kyuki ab bahi mujhe koi rasta dikha sakte the.


Abhi me dhyan me baitha hi tha ki karib 5 min. Baad mujhe mere man me kuch aawaj sunai di.



Man- Arnav tum ghabrao mat. Tum in Charo pishacho ko aaram se Hara sakte ho. Bas apne aatmabal ka smaran karo.


Is aawaj ne mujhe choka diya or Maine apni aankhe turant hi khol li. Or aaju baju dekhne laga ki kaha se aai hai ye aawaj.



Main- (dheere se) kon hai.




Man- putra mujhe yaha baha kyu dhund rahe ho. Me to tumhare andar hu.



Main- mere andar. Kaise. Aap jo bhi hai mere samne aaye.




Man- putra Mera koi aakar nahi hai. Na hi koi rup. Me tumahari antaraatma hu.





Main- to itne din se aap kaha the.




Man- tumhare andar hi tha. Or dekh raha tha ki tum kya karte ho. Or jab aaj tumhe yaha aane ka mouka Mila to tum bhag rahe ho.





Main- me bhag nahi raha hu. Me rasta talash kar raha hu. Kyuki me kisi insan se to lad sakta hu. Lekin in pishacho se kaise ladu.



Man- tum itne nirbal nahi ho jo in pishacho ka samna na kar pao. Tum adbhud or anokhe ho. Tum in pishacho ka samana aasani se kar sakte ho or inhen hara sakte ho

Main- lekin kaise. Me inke bare me kuch nahi janta hu. Inhe kaise harana hai ye bhi nahi janta hu. Na hi inki kamjori ke bare me janta hu. To kaise me Inka samna karu. Ye mujhe pal me masal kar rakh denge.




Man- Arnav kya tumhe bakai lagta hai ki ye tumhe masal denge. Kya tumhe lagta hai ki tum nirbal ho.apne clg ke pehle din ke hadse ko yaad karo. Jab tumne apne ek hi hath se us chalti car ko rok diya tha. Vo jo bhi baha per hua tha. Vo ek Sanyog nahi tha. Balki tumhare bal ki pariksha thi. Or jo bhi baha per hua tha vo to Matra tumhari shaktiyo ke ek mamuli ans ke barabar bhi nahi tha. Tum to ek chalti hui train ya plane ko bhi rok sakte ho. Bas apne man ko akagra karo. Or ye socho ki tumhe aaj in Charo ko maarkar jinda Ghar bapis jana hai. Or apna Dhyan bhatakne mat dena.
Apna Sara dhyan apni thirdeye per kendrit karo. Or fir dekho kya hota hai.



Ye sab sunkar mujhe lag raha tha ki me pagal ho gya hu. Apni mout ko dekhkar.mujhe kuch bhi samaj me nahi aaraha tha ki me kya karu or kya nahi.




Man- tum bichlit kyu ho rahe ho. Jaisa Maine kaha hai baisa karo. Or jaldi karo kyuki vo ab tumhari ore badne lage hai.



Ye sab sunkar mujhe laga agar aaj marna tay hai to koi nahi rok sakta. Or agar mera jeena tay hai to use bhi koi nahi rok sakta. Isliye maine tay kiya ki ab jaisa mere man ki aawaj kahegi me baisa hi karunga...




Main- jaisa aap kahe.



Ye kehke main bahi per paalthi maar kar baith gya. Or apna Sara dhyan apne lalaat ke beecho beech kendrit karne laga. Or man me OM ka ucharan karne laga. Me ab sab kuchh bhool gya tha ki me kaha hu. Or mere aas pass kon hai. Mera sara dhyan bas apni third eye per tha. Halaki ye bahut hi muskil kaam hota hai. Sabka dhyan bhatak hi jata hai. Lekin mere man me drid nischay tha ki aaj me yaha se jinda bapis jakar hi rahunga. Fir chahe kuch bhi ho jaye. Or usi nischay ki bajah se maine apne man ko bilkul bhi bhatakne nahi diya. Or thodi hi der me mujhe aisa aabhas hone laga tha jaise meri third eye open ho rahi hai. Me is eye se dekh bhi raha tha. Lekin jo mujhe dikh raha tha vo mujhe samaj me nahi aaraha tha ki akhir ye hai kya. Tabhi mere visuals aage bade. Or mere samne kuch chehre aaye jinhen me turant hi pehchan gya. Kyu ki ye in charo pishacho ke hi chehre the. Mujhe unki abhi tak ki jeevan leela dikhne lagi thi. Unhone abhi tak kya kiya hai kaise kiya hai. Sab kuch jisme un logo ki moute bhi shamil thi jinko in logo ne kuch din pehle hi mara hai isi jungle me. Or ye sab dekhkar mujhe gussa aaraha tha. Meri thrid eye mujhe in logo ki sari shaktiyo ke bare me bata rahi thi. Or sath me inki kamjoriyo ke bare me bhi.





Bahi ye sab mere man me chal raha tha. Lekin jaha Mera sarir tha. Baha per kuch or hi ho raha tha.



Vo Charo ne mujhe dhund liya tha or Charo hi mere Charo taraf khade hue the. Or kuch bate kar rahe the. Jab kafi der tak mera koi reply un logo ko nahi mila to unlogo ne meri jeevan leele samapt karne ka faisla kiya. Or jo pehle no. Ka pishach tha vo dheere dheere mere karib aane laga. Or jaise hi usne mujhe chune ki kosis ki. Mere sarir se itni bhayanak bijli use lagi ki vo bahi per rakh me badal gya.or ek pishach ka bahi per ant ho gya. Ye dekh kar vo teeno kafi chouk gye or dar bhi gye.




P2- lagta hai ye bhi koi mayabi hai. Jisne ek hi jhatke me hamare sathi ko rakh me badal diya.



P4- mujhe to ye koi devtao ki chal lagti hai. Jara tum hi socho. Vo ladka abhi hamse dar kar bhag raha tha. Or achanak se isme itni shakti kaha se aagyi. Agar isme pehle se shakti hoti to ye hamse bahi ladne lagta. Hamse dar kar bhagta kyu.




P3- aisa sambhav ho sakta hai. Jarur ye koi devta hai. Jo us ladke ka roop leke yaha baith gya hai taki ham yaha uljhe rahe or vo ladka yaha se bhag Jaye. Or ye hamara ant kar de.



P2- to fir ab ham kya kare. Tum dono ne dekha hi ki jaise hi ise chhune ki kosis karenge baise hi ham rakh me badal jayenge. Or ise Bina chhuye ham kaise marenge.





P3- yaad hai detya guru ne hame kuch shaktiya di thi. Jisse ham apne Charo taraf ek suraksha kavach bana sakte hai. Jise koi nahi bhed sakta. Ham usi kavach ka istemaal karenge fir iski shaktiya hamara kuch nahi bigaad payengi. Or ham ise maar denge






P4- bilkul sahi kaha tumne.



Uske baad in teeno ne hi apne hath jode or kuch mantro ka ucharan karne lage. Or thodi hi der me in teeno ke aaspass ek aved suraksha kavach ban gya. Iske baad ye teeno dheere dheere mere karib badne lage. Me abhi bhi dhyan me tha or ye sab ab mujhe live dikhne laga tha. Ki ye log kya kar rahe hai. Lekin me bas dekhta hi raha.



Vo log jaise hi mere karib pahuche. Un teeno ko bahut hi powerful jhatka laga meri aatmshakti ka.jisne mere Charo taraf ek ghera bana liya tha. Us shakti se takrate hi ye teeno udte hue door Jake pedo me lage seedhe. Jisse kuch ped to toot hi. Gye. Or sath me Inka ye aved suraksha kavach bhi.


Or jaise hi ye hua teeno ka gussa bad gya or vo apne asli danavo wale rup me aagye. Or jor jor se dahadne lage. Itna jor se ki pora jungle inki is dahad ko sun kar kamp gya. Vo teeno doudte hue mere pass aaye or apne hatho me unhone kuch astra le rakhe the jaise talwar bhala farsa. Or un teeno ne hi jor se apne hathiyar meri taraf fek diye. Lekin again bahi hua vo teeno hathiyar mujhse takrate usse pehle hi vo jal kar rakh me badal gye. Jis bajah se vo or bhi gusse me aane lage. Or unme se ek ne apni pori takat laga kar ek ped ko ukhad liya or use meri taraf fek diya. Lekin is baar jaise hi ped mere se takraya vo jala nahi balki takra kar bapis ho gya and itni speed me bapis hua ki jisne vo ped feka tha usi ke sir ko faad kar vo ped door ja gira or us pishach ka pora sir kisi fate hue water melon ki tarah jameen per bikhar gya. Or iska bhi kaam tamam ho gya. Or ye dekhkar Baki ke dono bahut hi dar gye. Or unhone ladne ka mood badal diya or baha se bhagne ka plan Kiya.



Un dono ne turant hi apna roop badla or jungle se bahar ki taraf Doud laga di. Or ye sab me dekh raha tha. Jaise hi un logo jungle ke bahar kadam rakha unhe tagda jhatka laga or vo dono udte hue bapis se mere pass aake gir gye. Or ye dekhkar to unki fat kar hath me aagyi ki. Kyuki dono hi ye sochkar jyada dar gye the ki ab is jungle se bahar jana bilkul bhi mumkin nahi hai. Or ye sochkar unlogo ne turant hi apne dono hatho ko jod liya. Or mahadev ka ismaran karne lage. Kyuki bahi ek aise hai jo kisi me bhi bhedbhav nahi karte hai. Fir chahe vo pishach ho ya aam insan. Lekin vo bhi tab hi sunte hai jab heart me koi bhi gandigi na ho. Or in logo ke dilo me to gandigi ka ambaar tha. Inhe kisi ki koi perbah nahi thi sivay khud ke. Or aaj bhi ye keval khud ke pran bachane ke liye hi mahadev ka naam le rahe the. Lekin me inhe maaf nahi karne wala tha. Agle hi pal un dono me se ek ke seene me ek nukila or lumba pathar udta hua aaya or uske dil ko cherta hua aage badh nikal gya. Or isi ke sath iska bhi ant ho gya. Or uske agle hi pal kahi se pani udta hua aaya. Or vo bhi nukile aakar me. Us pani ke aakar ko maine dekha or vo turant hi barf me parivartit ho gya. Or vo aakhiri bacha hua pisach kuch samaj pata uske pehle hi vo pani ne isake dill ko bhi cheer diya or iska bhi ant jo gya. Or ye sab hote hi meri chetna jaag gyi or Mera dhyan toot gya. Or me achanak se uth ke khada ho gya. Or jab maine apni aankho ko theek se masal kar khola to samne ka najara bakai me bahut hi bhayanak tha. Samne un teeno ke sarir pade hue the. Jise dekh kar bas mujhe ulti aane lagi thi. Khas kar us bale ko dekh kar jiska sir pora fata pada tha.



Lekin me abhi kuch karta ya sochta usse pehle hi un teeno ki body hawa me gayab ho gyi. Or ab baha per un teeno ka koi bhi bajood nahi tha.



Ye sab mujhe kisi bure sapne ki tarah lag raha tha. Or mera sir dard se fata ja raha tha. Mujhe kuch bhi samaj me nahi aaraha tha ki ye sab akhir hua kaise. Halaki mujhe sab kuch yaad tha ek ek sec ka yaad tha ki maine abhi kya kiya or kaise kiya. Lekin in sabhi per mujhe yakeen bilkul bhi nahi ho raha tha. Kyuki ye sab kisi bhi tarah se justify nahi tha. Or yahi sab sochte sochte me behosh hokar bahi per gir gya or uske baad ka mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi ki baha kya hua…..






Jab meri aankh khuli….





Main apni aankho ko Malta hua bed per baith gya. Or raat ki pori ghatna meri aankho ke samne ghum rahi thi. Or achanak se mujhe hosh aaya



Main- me to jungle me tha yaha kaise pahucha. Kahi police wale to nahi laye mujhe yaha per. Or jarur unhone dadaji ko sab bata diya hoga. Ya fir me koi sapna dekh raha tha. Jisme Maine un charo ko maar diya. Mere dimaag me kai sawal ghum rahe the. Khaskar ye ki raat ko jo bhi hua vo sapna tha ya sach. Or agar sach tha to me ghar kaise aagya me to baha per behosh ho gya tha. Man me bahut sare sawal ghum rahe the. Or jawab kisi ek ka bhi nahi pata tha mujhe.


To thak haar kar maine side me lagi ghadi ki taraf dekha. To usme 9 baj gye the. Matlab aaj me late ho gya. Tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki aaj to renu or surbhi aane wali hai. Sayad.



Main- unko phone karke confirm kar leta hu



Maine renu ko call kiya



Thodi der ring Jane ke Baad usne call uthaliya.



Renu- lagta hai dadu ne hi aaj call Kiya hai.




Main- nahi aaj maine hi kiya hai call.




Renu- are aaj suraj kis taraf se nikla hai. Kahi me koi sapna to nahi dekh rahi





Main- sayad sapna hi hai. Achha ab me rakhta hu. Bye.





Renu- are ruk ruk. Kaha ja raha hai. Bol bhi ab call kyu kiya.





Main- mujhe ye janna hai ki kya tum log aaj yaha aarahi ho ya nahi. Or agar aa rahi ho to kab tak aaogi. Or kaise aaogi.





Renu- kyu kahi bhagne ka plan hai.




Main- ha aisa hi kuch. Ab bolo jaldi.





Renu- ham log sham tak aayenge flight se. May be. 5 baje tak pahuch jayenge Ghar per





Main- uski jarurat nahi hai. Me aajaounga lene. Bas mujhe plane ki exact timing Bata Dena.





Renu- are badi fikr ho rahi hai.




Main- ha aajkal yaha kuch pagal se log ghum rahe hai. Jo chuhiyo ko pakad kar gayab kar dete hai. Tune news to sayad dekhi hi hogi.






Renu- ohhh to ye baat hai. Koi na. Ye chuhiya kab Sherni ban jati hai ye baat to ise khud bhi nahi pata hai.agar koi beech me aayega bhi to kaam se jayega. Or tujhe jaankar sayad ye hairani hogi ki maine karate me blackbelt hasil kar liya. For khud ki sefty. Or ab me achhe khase pehalwan ko bhi patak sakti hu ek hi dav me.






Main- oohhh to isliye tere hath pair fadfada rahe hai mujhe maarne ke liye. Meri ek muft ki salah lelo kaam aayegi. Ye blackbelt ka jadu mere samne to chalne se raha. Agar maine hath pakad liya to koi bhi daav se use bapis nahi chhuda paogi. Isliye agar kuch nek khayal man me aarahe ho to unhen bahi delhi me hi chhod aana samjhi.





Renu- dekhte hai.




Main- theek hai to fir aaja dekh lenge. Or ha yaad se mujhe detail msg kar dena.




Renu- ha kar dungi.




Main- theek hai to ab rakhta hu. Aaj uthne me bahut late ho gya hai. Clg to miss hi ho gya aaj ka.





Renu- what…..lagta hai bakai me aaj suraj dada kahi or se nikle hai. Tera barso purana rutine toot gya. Ye chamatkar kaise hua.






Main- Ghar aaja fir batata hu. Tab tak sochti reh.




Renu- ha Mera dav mujhi per.




Main- jaisa tu samjhe. Chal ab rakhta hu. Bye….




Renu- bye…..




Ye call cut hone ke baad me nahane chala gya. Or sochta raha ki akhir kal jo hua kya sach tha ya jhoot. Lekin jab Kuch samaj me nahi aaya to mujhe ek idea aaya.




Main- agar ye sab sach hai to me bapis se baisa hi karunga. Apni thirdeye per concentrate. Or ye sab agar sach hai to jarur fir se kuch alag hoga. Or usse sab sabit bhi ho jayega….. ha yahi sahi rahega. Lekin isko me kal subah brahm muhurt me hi karunga. Tab tak ke liye jaisa hai bahi theek hai.




In sab ke baad ek sawal abhi bhi man me tha ki me ghar kaise pahuch gya. Or iska jawab to dada hi de sakte the. Agar unko kuch pata hoga to. I hope ki unko kal ke bare me koi jaankari na ho. Verna tension hona to tay hai…………..










To be countinue…………….

 

[Rahul0087@]

Shandaar update bhai maza aa gaya

Brilliant update writer sahab.... Great going

मजेदार अपडेट। आखिर अर्णव की भेंट दानवों से हो ही गई। अब एक्शन का टाईम है। अर्णव कैसे उनका सामना करता है यह देखने में मजा आने वाला है।

thanks bhai log.......



apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye .......



Next update post kar diya hai ..Bhai log...

ummis hai sabhi ko pasand aayega....



and dev kaise danavo se nipat ta hai ye dekhna bhi dilchasp hoga jarur dekhe......







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[Rahul0087@]

Aaj maine aapki ye kahani padhi...
Bhaut badiya story line hai....
Buss aapse ek hi request hai ki iss kahani ko aage Chalke asleel matt banaiyega.

Ek baat aur kehena chahunga ki mein ek aastik insaan hun ved puran, bhagwan sab pe Biswas raktha hun... Meri icha hai ki aap isme tridevo ko v samilit Karen. Aur thoda sa science ka v tadka lagaaye.... Jo ki asuron ko ekdum naya lage....

Bhai appki bato ka me dhyan rakhunga....

.is story ko asleel to nahi banane wala me. Ye maine pehle hi keh diya tha...


and rahi baat science or tridev ko add karne ki to aapse bas yahi kahunga ki abhi to kahani just start Hui hai. Aage aage dekhiye kya kya hota hai or kaise...



bas apna sath banaye rakhe ..





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[Rahul0087@]

Nice n fantastic

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Extraordinary update

Awesome fabulous update bhai

Nice

Nice update

jiska tum log dinner karne ki soch rahe ho wo tum logo ka kaal ban jayega
Bahot khub...awsome update.....

Very nice update
waiting for next

Are gajb ye SB shukracharya ke shishya honge Jo USS Agni astra pr njr rkhne ke liye Aaye honge

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Thanks Bhai log..apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye .......




aaj ka update post kar diya hai ....


.ummid hai sabhi ko pasnd aayega....



and hunterrr bro aapne sahi andaja lagaya hai. Ye bahi pisach hai jo is ASTRA per najar rakhne aaye hai. Lekin ab inka kya hota hai ye dekhne layak hoga.


and sakal Bro.... Aapki baat bhi bilkul right hai. Shikar to ye log banenge hi. Lekin kaise ye dekhne wali baat hai .....






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[Rahul0087@]

Nice update bhai

thanks bro. Aapane sath banaye rakhe ke liye.....




aaj ka next update post kar diya hai....ummid hai pasand aayega......




keep supporting.......

 

[Rahul0087@]

Lagta hai apne hero ki band bajnewali hai abhi yeh kahin pishach toh nahin na?
Dekhte hain ab aage kya hona hai

sahi kaha bhai aapne band to bajegi hi. Lekin ab hero ki bajti hai ya danavo ki ye dekhne wali baat hai......


and h ye pisach hi hai. Lekin thode alag prakar ke. Ab dekhte hai devkaise inse nipat ta hai. ......






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