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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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UPDATE 2









Ek hafte baad nirmala ko hoshpital se chhutti de di gyi. Dadaji unko Ghar le aaye. Ghar per sare noukar bagera moujood the. Or sath me nirmala ji ke bade bhai bhi



Kamal sinha- ye hero ke ek loute mama hai. Inki age 28 saal hai. Inke pariwar me kaval teen log hai. Ek inki patni. Or dusri inki beti jo renuka ki hi age ki hai. Ye bhi kafi bade businessman hai Delhi me. Ye delhi me hi rehte hai. Jab unhe is khushkhbari ka pata chala to ye next day hi yaha per aagye.




Rashmi sinha- ye hai Kamal ji ki patni. Or inki age hai. 24. Ye ek house wife hi hai. Ye bhi niramala ji ko manti hai unki ijjat karti hai. Or renu ko bhi bahut pyar karti hai.




Shurbhi- ye Kamal ji ki ek louti ladki hai.ye filhaal renu ki age ki hi hai.




Unlogo ne sabhi ka behatreen swagat Kiya. Nirmala ji sabhi se milke bahut khush thi. Unke hatho me unka nanha sa beta tha. Jo sabhi ko dekhkar muskura raha tha. Or use dekhkar sabhi ke chehre khil uthe te.



2 din baad dadaji ne unke khandani pandit Ji ko ghar per bulaya taki vo bache ki kundali bana sake or uska naam karan kar sake. Subah se hi sabhi log Ghar ko sajane me lage hue the. Or dadaji or hero ke dad ke kuch dost or imploy Ghar per aane lage the. Kyuki inhone sabhi ko invite kiya tha.


10 baje pandit ji aaye. Unhone pehle ghar me poja path Kiya. Satyanarayan ki katha kahi. Uske baad unhone hero ki kundali banai. Jise dekhkar hi pandit ji ki aankhe choudi ho gyi.lekin unhone iske bare me kisi ko kuch nahi bataya.



Dada- pandit ji ham kya naam rakhe apne pote ka.



Pandit- jagdish ji aapka pota kafi bhagyashali hai. Iske aapki jindagi me aate hi sare sankaton ne apna rasta mod liya hai. Or iska jeeta jagata saboot ye hai ki. Nirmala beti ki aayu iske janm ke sath hi samapt hone wali thi. Lekin jaise hi aapke pote ka janm hua aapki bahu ki aayu or lumbi ho gyi hai. Or is pariwar se sare sankat door ho gye hai. Ab vastav me aapke achhe din aane wale hai. Or me jitna dekh pa raha hu. Is balak ka janm ek mahan uddeshya ke liye hua hai. Ye sabhi ke dukho ko har lega. Or sansar me Shanti or khusi la kar dega. Isliye iske me do naam rakhna chahunga. Kyuki iske gun kisi ek naam me pore nahi honge. Fir baad me aap chahe to kisi ek naam se ise bula sakte hai.



Ye sab sunke sabhi log bahut khush the unhe jeene ki ek nayi ummid Jo mil gyi thi.



Pandit- ji iska pehla naam hoga.



" ARNAV" (अर्णव)


iska matlab hai punchtatvo ka pratik.



"DEVAJ" (देवज)



Iska matlab hai. Devtao dwara janma.


Ab aap indono namo me se kisi ek se ise bula sakte hai.




Dada- dono hi naam bahut achhe hai. Ham aisa karte hai. Isko DEV kehke bulainge. Or iska pora naam school me Arnav likhba denge. Jisse ye dono namo se jana jayega. Kya kehte ho aap log.




Mom- bapuji bahut hi achha vichar hai. Ham ise Dev kehke hi bulainge.



Mama- ha ye achha naam hai. Isko suit bhi karega or bade hokar isko koi sikayat bhi nahi rahegi ham se. Ki hamne iska achha naam nahi rakha.




Mama ki is baat per dadaji or baki sabhi has pade. Kyuki ye ek aam baat thi. Or bacho ka naam isi liye bahut soch samaj kar hi rakhna chahiye.



Naamkaran ho chuka tha. Kuch din or rukkar mama ka parivar bapis se delhi chala gya. Or renu dadaji or mom teeno hi ghar me jab bhi time milta dev ke sath khelte rehte. Jaisa pandit ji ne bataya. Theek baisa hi hua. Dadaji ka business ab tez raftaar se doudne laga tha. Unko itna munafa hone laga ki unse ye sambhalna hi muskil hone laga tha. Mom or dadaji din raat mehnat karne lage or business ko badane lage. Or isi me kab 20 saal nikal gye pata hi nahi chala.



Dev ki ab school ki padai pori ho chuki thi or use ab collage me admission Lena tha. Bahi renu ab 22 year ki ho gyi thi. Or filhal vo delhi ke ek clg me 2nd year me B.com pad rahi thi. Kyuki uske mama use yaha se le gye ye kehke ki surbhi ke sath ye bhi padlegi or dono ko ek dusre ka sath bhi rahega.


Lekin Dev ko uske dada ya mom usse door nahi Jane de sakte the. Kyuki fir Ghar pura suna suna ho jane wala tha. Isliye unhone dev ka admission yahi Dehradun me hi karwa diya ek clg me. Jo khud dev ka hi tha.

Or is baat se dev ko bhi koi aitraj nahi tha.


Vo bhi dono se door nahi hona chahta tha.


Isliye usne khusi khusi yahi per padne ka faisla kar liya. Halaki mama ne dev ko bhi delhi me padane ki kosis ki thi lekin dadaji ne unko mana kar diya. Or mama ji bhi samaj rahe the ki dev ke jane ke baad ye ghar suna ho jayega. Isiliye ye use nahi Jane dena chahte hai.




Ab yaha se story start hoti hai.




Subah Ghar ki bani gym me ek ladka pasina baha raha tha. Abhi ye 20 saal ka hi hua hai. Lekin iski muscle dekh kar koi nahi keh sakta tha ki ye keval 20 saal ka hi hai. Kya jabardast body banai thi isne. Kisi bhi ladki ko apni taraf kheech le.

Ye or koi nahi main hi hu. Subah 4 baje uthna or sabse pehle gym me pasina bahana. Subah agar exercise karlo to pura din isfurty me nikalta hai. Din bhar thakan ka namo nisan nahi rehta hai. Aaj mere clg ka first day hai or me aaj late to hona hi nahi chahta tha. Isliye maine 6 baje tak khub mehnat Kiya or uske baad me bapis chala apne room me. Thoda rest Kiya. Or uske baad seedha ghus gya bathroom me. Jaha badiya se shower liya. Or jaldi se ready hoke me neeche aagya.


Jaha dadaji pehle se hi moujood the. Vo newspaper pad rahe the



Main- good morning dadu



Dada- are good morning mere sher. Aao baitho.



Main unke pass gya. Unke pair chhu kar unka aashirvad liya. Or unke baju me baith gya



Main- or sunaiye kya haal.




Dada- sab badiya hai aapki daya se.




Main- kya dadu ye dialog mera hai.



Dada- aaj maine bol diya.



Or dadu has pade.



Dada- or sunao aaj first day hai clg ka kaisa lag raha hai.



Main- baisa hi jaisa pehle lagta tha. Normal.




Dada- kya yaar tu to bahut boring hai. Kuch exitment to laya kar apne andar




Main- ab jaisa hu to hu. Ab isme me kya kar sakta hu.




Dada- ha ye bhi hai. Lekin thoda life ko injoy bhi kiya kar. Koi girlfriend bagera bana lena clg me. Time achha katega.






Main- mom dekho dadu mujhe galat salah de rahe hai.




Maine jor se chilla diya. Or ye sunke dadu pure sutt pad gye




Dada- kya yaar har baat apni mom ko batane ki jarurat nahi hai tujhe.




Main- achha or vo bhala kyu.




Dada- ab tu bada ho gya hai. Or adult bhi.




Main- isse kya fark padta hai. Aapke liye to me bacha hi rahunga na.





Dada- tere se koi nahi jeet sakta bato me. Achha chal nasta kar le. Or Maine tere liye ek gift kharida hai aaj usse hi clg Jana.




Main- kya hai gift me.





Dada- aaja tujhe dikhata hu.





Dadu mujhe bahar le gye. Jaha ek brand new BMW khadi thi. Two seater. Open roof wali.




Jise dekhkar me exited tha. Lekin itna nahi.



Main- iski kya jarurat thi. Mujhe jyada show off karna pasand nahi hai. Aapko to pata hai.





Dada- beta pasand ho ya na ho. Lekin tum hamare ek loute chirag ho. Or itna kya isse jyada me kar sakta hu. Lekin tujhe ye sab pasand nahi hai. Isliye sasti car li hai. Verna tere liye is pori dunia ki sabse mehgi car leke aata me. Isliye ab ye key rakh. Or is car ko accept kar. Verna me tujhse baat nahi karne wala samaj Lena.





Main- kya dadu aap mujhe emotional blackmail kar rahe hai.




Dada- ab ise tu jo chahe samaj.




Main- theek hai dadu aapka ye gift mujhe accept hai. And thanks for this loving car.





Dada- injoy or meri baat yaad rakhna.





Main- konsi baat.





Dada- itni jaldi bhool gya. Are gf wali baat.




Main- kya dadu aap bhi. Apni age to dekhiye. Aapko mujhe ved purano ki siksha deni chahiye. Na ki ye sab.





Dada- vo bhi dunga. Jab teri age ho jayegi. Filhal Teri age ye sab karne ki hai. To ye sab Gyan de raha hu. Samjha. Ab chal nasta kar le.




Uske baad maine nasta Kiya. Jo mom ne khud mujhe parosa. Maine nasta finish kiya. Or fir mom ke pair chhukar aasirbaad liya. Or bye bolke clg ke liye nikal gya. Apni nai car me.



Mera ek school ka dost hai. Jiska naam hai.




Chirag dube- ye banda kafi sahi hai. Iska sense of humar bhi kamaal ka hai. Hamesha sabka mood thik ho jata hai iski bate sunkar. Khaskar mera. Agar mera mood off ho to. Jo abhi tak isne hone nahi diya. Iski age bhi mere jitni hi hai. Or body bhi theek thak hai. Lekin mere jitni kya mere aas pass bhi nahi hai ye. Lekin dum bahut hai.




Main seedha iske ghar ke bahar pahucha. Or jor se car ka horn bajaya.




Or thodi hi der me ye bhaisaab bahar aagye




Chirag- Abe gjb. Yaar ye kab li.



Main- aaj hi dadu ne gift ki hai. Aaja.




Chirag- dadu sach me great hai yaar. Maja aagya. Mere ko chalane Dena.




Main- ha aaja chala le.




Ye kehke me side wali seat per aagya. And chirag driving seat per. Or usne car ko douda Diya speed me clg ki taraf. Raste me ham badiya gane sunte hue ja rahe the. Subah ka waqt tha isliye jyada traffic nahi tha road per. Isliye chirag full speed me car bhaga raha tha. Or me bas side me baitha dekh raha tha.


Aise hi ham clg pahuch gye. Hamne car ko park Kiya. And abhi class me time tha to ham dono bahi parking ke darwaje ki aake ek kone me khade ho gye. Or Charo taraf clg ko dekhne lage. Kya khub badiya clg tha. Badiya atmosphere. Or dehradun ke mousam ke bare me main kya batau. Aapko to sab pata hi hai. Charo taraf greenry or pahad. Ye dekhkar kisi ka bhi man khush ho jaye. Or thand ke mousam me to or bhi Maja aajata hai jab yaha snow rain hoti hai.or ek ye bhi bajah thi mere yaha se na jane ki.


Clg me students aarahe the or ham unhe dekh rahe the.kafi groups me aarahe the. Jinme ladke or ladkiya dono hi shamil the. Me inme se kisi ko nahi janta tha. Na hi ye log mujhe jante the. Jo ki achhi baat thi.




Chirag- dekh to yaar kya khubsurat ladkiya hai yaha per. Kash inme se koi set ho jaye.




Main- kyu teri vo nisha ka kya hua…




Chirag- kiska naam le raha hai yaar subah subah.




Main- aisa kya ho gya




Chirag- ek no. Ki chalu ladki thi. Keh rahi thi ki agar mere sath rehna chahte ho to apne mom dad ko chhod do. Maine usi waqt usko ek thappad mara or usse breakup kar liya. Badi aai mujhe alag karne wali mere perents se.




Main- kya usne aisa kaha.




Chirag- bahi to pehle to mujhe bhi yakeen nahi hua. Isliye maine dobara puchha. Lekin jab usne dobara baat ko dohraya to maine diya ek kheech kar.




Main- baise ladkiyo per hath uthana galat baat hai. Lekin tune ek dum right Kiya. Ab sayad use thodi akl aagyi ho.



Chirag- meri chhod or apni Bata. Tu bhi ab kisi ke sath set hoja. Kab tak hath se kaam chalayega




Main- pehli baat to ye ki me apna hath us kaam ke liye use hi nahi karta hu. Apni soch ko thoda sudhar le. Or dusri baat ye ki. Jab mujhe dikhegi koi aisi ladki to me bhi set ho jaunga. Tab tak ham Single hi achhe.




Chirag- lekin thoda maja to lena chahiye na.




Main- mujhe nahi hai shok in sab ka.




Chirag- kya yaar jo bhi teri bate sunega hasega tujhper.
Kitana boaring hai tu. Pata nahi kaise Maine tere sath itna waqt bitaya hai. Kahi tu gay bagera to nahi hai na.





Main- Abe jaban ko sambhal kar use kar. Verna sari jindagi lucky ki tarah e i o karta rahega samjha.





Chirag- lucky ye kon hai




Main- are lucky ka nahi pata tujhe. Are bahi golmaal movie wala lucky. Abe Tushar kapoor role karta hai jiska.





Chirag- ha yaad aaya. Kya tu uski tarah mujhe gonga bana dega.




Main- agar bakwas bate karega to bana dunga. Samjha ab chal jaldi.



Ham andar ki taraf Jane lage tabhi ek car ke horn ki aawaj aane lagi. Jor jor se. Or kuch student ki aawaj bhi aane lagi bachao bachao karke.




To maine peeche mudkar dekha to.


Ek car badi tezi se aa rahi thi or car wala hi horn baja raha tha. Or hath dikha kar sabko side hone ko keh raha tha. Sayad uske breakfail ho gye the. Tabhi usne car ke stairing ko ghumaya or car thodi drift ho gyi. And jis taraf vo car ja rahi thi bahi per ek ladki khadi hui thi. Jiski peth meri taraf thi. Or me samaj gya ki vo ladki hat nahi payegi or car seedhi usse takra jayegi.



Maine jaldi se baha per pahuchne ke liye Doud lagai.or me baha kab pahuch gya pata bhi nahi chala. Lekin car bhi bilkul pass pahuch chuki thi. Vo ladki dar ke mare bahi per baith gyi or apne sir ko apne hatho se pora chhipa liya. Or Maine us ladki ko pora cover kar liya. Jaise hi car hamare pass pahuchi. Maine apna hath us car ke darwaje per laga diya rokne ke liya. Or mere hath baha per lagte hi darwaja aadhe se jyada andar ki taraf dhas gya. And car bhi jaha tak pahuchi bahi ke bahi ruk gyi. Halaki speed me hone ki bajah se jab Maine car me hath lagaya to car dusri side se thoda uper ki taraf uth gyi. Kyuki ek taraf Mera pora force laga hua tha. Or turant hi car khadi ho gyi. Uska dusra sira Jo hawa me utha tha vo bhi ab jameen per gir gya.



Ye seen ke baad jitne bhi student baha per moujood the sabhi jaldi jaldi doud kar hamare pass aagye. Or dekhne lage ki kahi koi chot to nahi lagi. Or vo ladki abhi tak apne sir ko chhipaye hue thi. Apne hatho me. Baha per shor hone laga sabhi us car wale ko bahar nikalne ki kosis karne lage.usko thodi chot aagyi thi sir me. Bahi maine us ladki ke hatho ko thoda touch karke use uthane ki kosis ki.



Main- hello miss aap theek hai.



Maine jab 2-3 baar use bulaya tab Jake usne apni mundi ko oper ki taraf Kiya or vo Charo taraf dekhne lagi



Main- aap theek hai. Kahi chot to nahi aai aapko.



Ladki- me kaha hu.




Main- aap clg me hai or sahi salamat hai.




Jab use sab yaad aaya ki kuch sec pehle kya hua tha to vo ek dum se khadi ho gyi.




Ladki- me Bach gyi. Thanks god. Me Bach gyi. Lekin ye car ruki kaise ye to seedhi mujhse takrane wali thi.




Chirag- hamare hero ne ise rok diya. Vo bhi apne ek hath se. Jara car ke darwaje ko to dekhiye.




Ye baat sunke sabhi ka dhyan car ke darwaje ki taraf gya. Or Maine chirag ko khunnas me ghura.



Ladki- oh my god. Aapko kahi lagi to nahi.



Main- nahi me theek hu.


Ye kehke me khada hua or us ladke ko dekha jo car drive kar raha tha.


Main- Abe jab car chalani nahi aati to chalate kyu ho. Abhi accident ho jata to.





Ladka- sorry bro. Actually car ke breaks me koi problem ho gyi achanak se.jis bajah se car out of control ho gyi thi. Isiliye me horn baja raha tha ki samne se hat jao. Lekin pata nahi ye kaha se aagyi samne.



Ladki- kaha se aagyi matlab. Ek to abhi tumne mujhe almost maar hi Diya hota. Or dusra mujhper hi aarop laga rahe ho. Tumhe aaj hi me suspend karwa dungi or tumhara license bhi cancel karwa dungi. Jante nahi ho tum mujhe. Yaha ke police commissioner ki beti hu me.




Ye sunke baha khade sabhi ke hosh ud gye. Or us ladke ke to pata nahi kya kya ud gya.








To be countinue……………...
 

Rahul0087@

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Nice start
Bahtareen update bhai
Super fantastic update bhai
:congrats: for new story story...
Awesome starting..........
Amazing starting

Thanks everyone for supporting me.


aise hi apna sath banaye rakhe taki me aaplogo ke liye roj update lata rahu..



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Rahul0087@

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Bahut badiya suruwat h bhaii
1st Update m hii past se present m le aana kabiletarif h
Lagta h story bahut majedar hone vali h
:10::10:

thanks bhai.



and me kosis karunga ki aap sab ki ummido per khara utru. Bas apna sath banaye rakhe ...




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:congrats::congrats::applause::applause::cool1:

Congress bro

Nice starting

Mast & Gajab update bro
Awesome updates
Great start bhai
:congrats: for new story :)
नए कथानक प्रारम्भ करने के लिए बधाई।
Congratulations Biradar for New thread....
Nice starting & very good update
Congratulations for new story and nice start bhai

Thanks Bhai log....



aapke sath ke liye......


me kosis karunga ki aap sab ko niras na karu. Or ye story aapka pora manoranjan kare.... Aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe.....




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Opening kaafi achchhi rahi story ki dekhte hain ki ab aage kya kya hona hai

Thanks akil Bhai.......



aage abhi bahut kuch hona hai. Lekin filhal sayad thodi boriyat ho sakti hai. Aap sabhi ko to isko ignore kare.



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Rahul0087@

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Bhai mazza aagya aapki new story ko pdh
Aapke new story ka kbse wait kr rhe the..


Lekin surya ka bhi aage ka part 3 ka intezar rhega.

Thanks bhai.....



and mujhe ummid hai ki ye jo wait aapne Kiya hai vo pora sarthak ho or aapko ek achhi story padne ko mile.....

and rahi baat Surya ki to vo bhi aage jarur countinue hoga. Is story ke baad usko dekhenge.....




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Bhai jaan bohot hi bohot maja aaya update pdhke




Or Bhai aap Sach me great ho kisi or writer ki tareh nahi ho Jo sirf or sirf wait karvaana jaante he Sach me mene ab Tak is forum me jitni bhi story padhi he in writerki list me aap 1 tu 5 aate ho Sach me aap great hojo apna kimti time yaha dete ho or mere baat buri lagi ho to maaf Kar dena

Nahi bhai isme bura manne wali kya baat hai....


and thanks Jo mujhe apne is kabil samjha... Lekin sach to yahi hai ki me koi professional writer nahi hu. Bas thodi bahut kosis karta hu likhne ki. Baki to aaplogo ka pyar milta hai to lagta hai ki sayad maine sahi likha hai....

and me jab story start karta hu to me khud ko as a reader hi dekhta hu. Or us situation me mujhe pata hota hai ki naye update ka intjaar kitna kathin hota hai. Isliye me time per update complete karne ki kosis karta hu or use post kar deta hu.. baki kabhi kabhi thoda late bhi ho jata hai.

and rahi baki writers ki baat to sabki koi na koi majburi hoti hogi. Jiske karan vo time per update nahi de pate honge. Lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki vo jaanbhuj kar aisa karte hai.... Or bahut se aise writer bhi hai jo bahut achha likhte hai or time to time update bhi dete rehte hai......


baki bas itna hi kehna chahunga ki apna sath is story ke sath banaye rakhe .




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