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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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UPDATE 27













Mayasur us insan ka roop leke uske ghar ki taraf nikal gya.or karib 30 min. Me vo uske ghar pahuch gaya. Vo car se nikla or usne ghar ko charo taraf se dekha. Or man me socha ki kafi achhi jagah hai rehne ke liye.

Or yahi soch ke sath vo ghar ke door per pahucha or usne doorbell bajai. To thodi hi der me kisi aurat ne darwaja khola. Or jaise hi usne us aadmi ko dekha turant hi uske gale lag gyi




Aurat- oh suresh tum aagye. Pata hai mujhe kitni ghabrahat ho rahi thi.



Vo aurat abhi bhi mayasur jisne kisi suresh ka roop liya hua tha gale lagi hui thi. Or us aurat ko dekhkar to mayasur ke muh me pani sa hi aagya fir bhi usne apne aap per thoda control Kiya or bola




Suresh- are kamla tumse kitni baar kaha hai chinta mat kiya karo. Me koi bacha thodi hu jo kahi kho jaunga ek hatta katta aadmi hu. Mujhe nuksan pahucha sake aisa koi nahi yaha per






Kamla- janti hu lekin ye dil nahi manta na. Baise kaha gye the tum pore 2 din baad aaye ho.





Suresh- kuch kaam se gya tha. Apne business ko failane ke liye.




Kamla- ha janti hu tumhara business. Bahi drugs or human trafficking.




Suresh- jab janti ho to puchhti Kyu ho.




Kamla- tumse koi nahi jeet sakta. Achha aao muh hath dho lo me khana lagati hun.




Suresh- theek hai. Or uske baad suresh apne kamre ki taraf chala gya or kamla kitchen me chali gayi khana garam karne.




To ab me bata du ki akhir ye suresh hai kon. To suniye.


Ye ek ubharta hua business minded criminal hai. Jiske bare me filhal kisi bhi agency ya police ko koi khabar nahi hai. Kyuki ye bahut shatir hai or apne kaam ko bahut hi dhyan se anjaam deta tha. ISKA main business bahi hai drugs or abhi abhi isme human trafficking me bhi hath aajamaya hai. Isne drugs se shuruaat ki or apni ek gang bana li or ab usi gang ke sahare ye lachar ladkiyo ko kharid leta hai or unse dhanda karwane lagata hai jisse ise kafi fayeda hota hai. Or ye filhal apne aise hi ek kaam per gya tha or baha se bapis apne ghar aaraha tha. Ki raste me bechare ka naseeb kharab nikal jo mayasur ke hatthe chad gya. Or rahi baat kamla ki to ye uski biwi hai. Jo har kaam me uska sath deti hai. Inki filhaal koi aulad nahi hai. ISKA ghar bhi filhaal theek thak hi hai. Ye jaanbhuj kar jyada bada ghar nahi banaraha hai taki ye kisi ki nigahen me na aajaye. Ab aise business me hai to uske dushman bhi kafi hai.jinse ye or iske log nipat te rehta hai.



Ab aap log soch rahe honge ki ye jab itna kamina hai to ek insan ki jaan bachane ke liye ye baha per neechi Kyu utra. To me bata du ki MAYASUR bahut hi chalak hai vo insan ki shakl dekhkar unke apne or parayon ke bare me jaan leta hai. Or jis aadmi ko suresh ne road per jakhmi dekha tha vo tha iska right hand abdul. Jise dekhkar ye chouk gya tha ki ye yaha kaise aagya or iska accident kaise ho gya. Or yahi soch vichar kar raha tha ki kahi kisi dushman ne jaal to nahi failaya uske liye. Isiliye usne apni gun sath ki thi. Or tel ko dekhkar iska shak bhi thoda sahi ho gya tha lekin doubt me fir bhi tha. Isiliye ye neech utra or isne socha ki khud Abdul se puchh lete hai ki akhir majra kya hai. Lekin afsos ki vo Abdul nahi keval ek brham tha. Jisme ye fas gya. Halaki mayasur ne ek kharab aadmi ko hi mara tha jisse samaj me thodi gandigi kam hoti. Lekin afsos ki MAYASUR us suresh bhi gaya gujra hai or ab vo suresh ke business ke Sahara bahut kuch kar sakta tha.jisse vo dev ka pata laga sake. Kyuki koi bhi dev ke siva use rok nahi sakta tha.





Vo kamre me gya badiya se fresh hua or aaine me khud ko dekhkar hasne laga.




Mayasur- kya baat suresh tune to mere liye bahut hi achha kaam chhod rakha hai. Ab dekhta hu ki vo shakti kaise mujhse chhipi rehti hai. Use me itna vinash kar dunga ki mere samane use aana hi padega.

Ye kehke vo neeche chala gya jaha kamla uska wait kar rahi thi. Vo apni kursi per baitha or kamla ko apne pass bulaya. Kamla uske pass gyi to usne uska hath pakad kar apni jangh per baitha liya. Or ek hath se khana khane laga or dusre hath se kamla ke ango ko sehlane laga. Vo khana khud bhi khata or kamla ko bhi khilata. Or uske dusre hath ki harkato se kamla bahut garm hone lagi. Na chahte hue bhi uska control chhut raha tha. Mayasur ka sparsh hi aisa tha. Aurato ko vash me karna use aata tha. Or kamla to pehle se hi Suresh ki deewani thi. Isiliye vo mayasur ke liye ek aasan target thi. Khana khane ke baad suresh use kamre mee gya or bistar per patak diya. Or dheere dheere uske sare kapde nikal feke. Or jub usne khud ke bhi sare kapde nikale to kamla hairan thi kyuki use suresh ka saman bada lagne laga tha. Leki. Madhoshi me usne dhyan nahi Diya or dono ek dusre per toot pade. Or inki kaamleela suru ho gyi. Karib 1:30 ghante tak ye chali jisme kamla ka poora sarir toot chuka tha usme ab bilkul bhi himmat nahi the aage kuch bhi karne ki isliye vo baisi hi halat me so gyi. Or suresh bahi baith gya. Usne apna pent pehna or neech gya jaha suresh ki sharab rakhi hui thi. Usne unme se ek do bottle nikali or unhe ek ke baad ek gatak gya. Fir usne suresh ka mobile liya or apne khas aadmi abdul ko phone kiya or use kuch karne ko kaha. Jise sunke Abdul bhi thoda hairan tha. Lekin karna to tha hi. To vo lag gya kaam me. Bahi phone ke baad vo ghar ki chhat per gya.


.or aone dono hatho ko faila kar kuch mantra padne laga. Uske mantra padne se aasman me bahut hi tez bijli kadakne lagi thi. Leki. Vo nahi ruka or padta hi gya. Or jab uska mantra samapt hua or usne aapni aankhe kholi to samne aasman se use bahut sare kale dhue udte hue najar aaye. Jo jaise hi uski chhat per pahuche unhone insano ka rup le liya. Or aise hi karke karib 100 pisach uske pass aagye the Jo narbakhchhi the. Insano ka khoon pene wale or unka maas khane wale. Ye andheri dunia ke pisach the jo chhip kar rehte hai. Or sabse jaruri Baat ki ye sabhi mayasur ke gulaam the. Kyuki in pisacho ka jo raha tha use bahut pehle mayasur ne maar diya tha jis bajah se ye tab se mayasur ke gulaam ban gye the. Or mayasur ko jab bhi unki jarurat padti ye unhe aavahan karke bula leta. Or jitne pisach abhi aaye the ye to keval pore pisacho ke 1% hi the. Baki inki sena bahut badi hai.



Un sabhi ne mayasur ko dekhte hi pehchan liya or use jhuk kar pranam Kiya.





In pisacho ka ek mukhya senapati tha jise hi sirf mayasur se baat karne ki anumati thi. Isliye vo aage aaya




Kumbh- mere malik aapne hame yaad kiya. Kahiye ye sevak aapke liye kya kar sakta hai.




Mayasur- kumbh ham khush hue. Darashal gurudev ne mujhe ek kaam diya hai or me chahta hu ki tum sabhi us kaam ko purna karne me apna apna yogdaan do.




Kumbh- ye to hamara sobhagya hoga mere malik. Kahiye kya kaam karna hai.





Mayasur- tum sabhi insano ke besh me is sehar me mere liye kaam karoge. Or jitne bhi log jiska Maine rup liya hai iske liye kaam karte hai unhe pori tarah se pisach bana doge. Or fir tum sabhi meri sena hoge. Jiske bal per me is pori dunia me tehalka macha dunga. Tum sabhi ko pehle suresh ke sabhi aadmiyo ko pisach banana hai or uske baad ek ek karke pore sehar ko.






Kumbh- ho jayega malik aapke gurudev ne ham pisacho ko dhoop me nikalne ki shakti pradan ki hai. Or ab yahi shakti sabhi naye pisacho ke bhi kaam me aayegi. Or vo din ho ya raat apna kaam har samay kar sakte hai. Or rahi baat un sabhi logo ko pisach banane ki to ye kaam ham aaj ki raat hi kar denge.




Mayasur- bahut badiya kumbh. Jao or sona kaam karo. Or ha ek abdul naam ka aadmi hai.use maine ek kaam sopa hai isliye jab vo apna kaam pora kar le tab use pisach banana usse pehle nahi.




Kumbh- samaj gya malik.




Mayasur- ab jao or apana kaam karo.




Ye sunte hi sare pisach fir se kale dhuen me badal kar ud gye. Or suresh ke sabhi aadmiyo ko dhund dhund kar unko pisach banane lage. Or ye sankhya bahut hi jyada thi. Karib 100-200 tak. Lekin pisacho ko muskil se ek ghanta laga un sabhi ko dhund kar pisach banane me. Lagbhag 2 ghanto me sabhi aadmi pisach ban chuke the sirf abdul ko chhod kar. Use is bare me koi jaankari hi nahi thi. Vo bas apna kaam kar raha. Jisme ab jyada time nahi lagane wala tha.



Bahi sabhi pisach un naye pisacho ko leke delhi me aagye ek khas godown me jaha mayasur orf suresh pehle se un sabhi ka intjaar kara raha tha.



Jaise hi sabhi log baha moujood hue vo sabhi suresh ko baha dekhkar thode hairan the. Ki ye yaha kaise.




Mayasur- mere pisacho swagat hai tum sabka ek nai dunia me. Or isse pehle tum log puchho ki tum sab ab kya or kyu ban gye ho to me tumhe bata deta hu.

Tum log ab ek pisach ban chuke ho or isse tum log ab ek tarah se bahut hi shaktishali. Jis bajah se tum logo ke samne ab koi bhi aam insan nahi tik sakta. Chahe vo kitna hi jor kyu na lagale.



Ye sunte hi sabhi pisach jor jor se chillane lage or halla machane lage.





Mayasur- ha maine tum sabhi ko itna shaktishali banaya hai. Taki ham sab milkar is duniya per hukumat kar sake.




Ye sunte hi sabhi fir se chillane lage or kehne lage ki ham aapke sath hai.




Mayasur- bas mujhe yahi chahiye hai. Aaplogo ko bas bahi karna hai jo kehne ko main kahu. Or ek baat dhyan me rakhlo abhi. Ki agar mera aadesh nahi mana ya fir mere khilaaf Jane ki kosis ki to sirf ek baat yaad rakhna ki tum log keval shaktishali hue ho amar nahi or me chahu to tum sabko yu chutki me masal kar rakh sakta hu. Isliye Mera kaha mano or aish karo.



Kumbh- ham samaj gye malik. Aap jaisa kahoge ham baisa hi karege. Or agar in pisacho me se koi bhi aapka aadesh nahi manega to use me khud maar dunga aap Tak baat ko aane hi nahi dunga.





Suresh- mujhe tumse yahi ummid hai kumbh. Or mujhe pora viswas hai ki tum mujhe nirash nahi karoge. To kumbh aaj se tum in sabke boss ho. Me tumhe aadesh dunga or uske baad tum us aadesh ko apne in pisacho se pora karwaoge.





Kumbh- theek hai malik.



Suresh- or ha kumbh. Tumhe is. Baat ka pora khayal rakhna hai ki ye sabhi pisach filhal insan bankar hi rahe or jaisa kaam pehle karte the vaisa hi karte rahe. Or apni shaktiyo ka istemaal keval gambhir samasya aane per hi kare uske pehle nahi. Or kumbh tum or tumhare sath 3 or khasa pisacho ko mere sath rakho. Or bakio ko unke ghar bhej do. Ab aage kya karna hai ye me baad me bataunga. Sab samaj gye. Filhaal sabhi ko insani rup me hi rehna hai.






Kumbh- malik jaisa aapne kaha hai baisa hi hoga. Ye log pore desh ke alag alag kono se aaye hai or baha per insani rup me hi rahenge. Per ye naye hai or aap to jante hi hai ki naye pisacho ko bahut bhook lagti hai. Khaskar insani khoon or meat ki. To uske liye kya kiya jaye






Suresh- theek hai. Har raat ek pisach keval ek sikaar kar sakta hai apni bhook mitane ke liye. Or kumbh tum is baat ka khas khyal rakhoge ki koi bhi apni bhook ke samne jhuk kar kuch ulta seedha na kar de. Kyuki me nahi chahta ki inlogo ki bebakufo ki bajah se mera kaam kharab ho jaye





Kumbh- me samaj gya maalik.



Suresh- theek hai ab sabhi apne apne thikano per bapis chale jao or agle aadesh ka intjaar karo.




Ye sunte hi sare pisach kale dhuen me badal kar hawa me udd gye apni apni jagah Jane ke liye. Or unke jate hi Suresh or uske sath kumbh or baki ke 3 pisach baha se hawa hogye. Or seedhe pahuche Suresh ke ghar. Baha pahuchkar baki ke charo pisach ghar ke charo taraf fail gye security ke liye.


Or suresh apne kamre me pahuch gya or apne aap se kehne laga.




Suresh- shakti tum jo bhi ho. Ab bacha sakte ho bacha lo apne logo ko. Halaki tum ise rok sakte ho bas ek baar mere samne aajao. Per mujhe pata hai tum nahi aaoge kyuki tumhe to sayad uske ware me kuch pata bhi nahi hoga. Jo tumhare liye bahut buri baat hai.



Ye kehkar vo hasne laga.






Bahi dev badiya apne sapno me khoya hua tha use bilkul bhi andaja nahi tha ki pore desh me kya naya sankat aachuka hai.





Bahi next day subah char baje main utha or badiya nahaya or chhat per chala gya. Subah ki tazi hawa ko apne chehre per mehsus karne laga


Uske baad me neeche baitha or dhyan me baith gya. Or jab thirdeye open Hui to Maine sabse pehle kal jo hua uske bare me pata karne ka aadesh diya.


Or aisa karte hi meri eye mujhe kuch visual dikhane lagi. Ek khatarnak insan ki chhavi Jo kon tha mujhe nahi pata tha. Or us insan ke sath ek or insan ki jhalak dikhai jise dekhkar aisa lag raha tha jaise koi sadhu ho. Unhone kya bate ki ye to pata nahi. Lekin uske baad vo ajeeb insan baha se gayab hua or uske just baad mujhe tez aandhi tufaan dikhai diya. Jise dekhkar me samaj gya ki ye usi ajeeb aadmi ka hi kaam hai. Itna dekhne ke baad kaam khatm nahi hua. To or aage dikhna suru hua. Ek dhundla chehra or uske samne bahut sare ajeeb Janwar jo jor jor se halla macha rahe hai or uske agle baad vo baha se gayab hoke alag alag chale gye.



Ye sab dekhkar meri aankhe turant hi khul gyi or mujhe samaj aagya ki ek bahut bada khatra aagya hai. Sayad pore visv per.


Ye khayal aate hi me or bhi jyada paresan ho gya kyuki ab mujhe ye nahi lata tha ki ye kon hai or inko kaise roka Jaye. Tab mujhe gurudev ka khayal aaya to Maine unse baat karne ka faisla liya.



Maine fir se dhyan me baitha.


Or gurudev ka smaran Kiya. Or aisa karte hi turant hi mujhe unki aawaj sunai dene lagi.



Gurudev- kaho vats aaj kaise yaad kiya tumne




Main- pranam gurudev.



Gurudev- Ayushman bav.




Main- gurudev aapko gyat hi hoga ki kal raat me yaha kya kya hua hai.




Gurudev- ha hame gyat hai. Shukracharya ne unke ek mahashaktishali asur ko tumhara pata lagane ke liye bheja hai. Or jo jo tumne abhi dekha tha apne trinetra se vo sab sach hai. Us asur ne kuch mayavi jeevo ko jaga diya hai or ab vo unke sahare pore visv me tehalka machayega. Sirf is liye taki tum uske samne aajao…






Main- gurudev ye sab sunne me bahut hi bhayanak lag raha. Jisme kai Masum insano bina bajah ke bali Chad jayenge. Kripa kar mujhe rasta dikhaye ki me is sankat ko kaise Roku.





Gurudev- vats tum khud me itne saksham ho ki is aafat ka mukabla kar sako. Mujhe nahi lagta ki isme tumhe meri koi bhi madad lagegi.





Main- guruvar sisya chahe kitna bhi saksham Kyu na ho. Parantu use apne guru ki avashakta hamesha padti hai. Unke margdarshan ki.







Gurudev- ham tumhari bato se prasann hui vats.





Main- to kripa kar ke mujhe is samasya se nipatne ke liye margdarshit kare guruvar
















To be countinue………………….



 

Rahul0087@

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Very nice update
Waiting for next
Waiting for अपडेट।
:applause::claps: रोमांचक कहानी
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Nice update bhai
fantastic update brother
Nice n fantastic update on

Thanks Bhai log......


apna sath u hi banaye rakhe aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko....


aagevjanne ke liye sath bane rahe....





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Rahul0087@

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Shandar update bhai:applause:....Mayasur ne apni Maya bichana start kiya hai dekhte hai Dev kisi Maya me Phasta hai ya nahi....agar phasa to kaise niklega ye bhi interesting hoga......To sammohan shakti bhi hai Mayasur ke pas....ab to bahot hi bada sankat lag raha hai ye to ...aur wo aadmi bhi dekhte hai kon hai.....Dev ko bahno ko bhi sahi raste pr lana hai.....Delhi me rat me talli:daru: hona matlab mushkil hai..

Sahi kaha bro.. khtra bakai me bada aaya hai ab dev ki asli pariksha suru hone wali hai. Dekhte hai dev kaise is pariksha ko paar karta hai.

or rahi baat behani ki to usme me sahi kaha ab dev ek hafte me mayasur or uske baad apni behno ko kaise samjhayega ye dekhne wali baat hogi.....


sath bane rahe aage janne ke liye....





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बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Nice update ab ye mat karna ki mayasur ne dev ke mama ka roop Le liya
Mast update h Bhai
Nice update bro
Nice update bhai
Awesome update
mast hai bhai waiting for next

Thanks Bhai log.......




apna sath banaye rakhne ke liye.....



aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko......


and Bhai log no tension mayasur ne dev ne mama ka rup nahi liya hai.

aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe....





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वाह भाई मजेदार अपडेट। सबका ख्याल रखने वाला देव है। पहले प्राची से बात की। बहनों को घर ले आया। रास्ते में मायासुर की माया को samapta किया

Sahi kaha bhai.

sabka khayal rakhna hi to dev ka kaam hai. Use apni najaro me sabhi ko ek saman hi rakhna hai. Taki balance bana rahe. Apni family ko bhi time Dena hai or asuro ko bhi is beech handle karna hai. Ab dekhte hai aage dev ka ye niyam kaam karta hai ya nahi....





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Nice update bhai to mayasur ne aapna khel suru kar diya he dekhate he ki dev kese mayasur ki maya ka tod nikalta he waiting for next update

Ha Bhai maya ka jaal start ho chuka hai. Or ab dev ki sachme kathin exam start hone wali hai. Kyuki MAYASUR ke irade sach me khatarnaak hai. Ab dekhte hai dev kya karta hai kaise in samasya ka hal nikalge...





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Brilliants update bhai
Mayasur ne apni maya rachni suru kar di
Our dev ko be pta chal gaya ki ye kisi maya dwara utpan aandi tufan tha

Sahi kaha bro. Maya rachni start ho gyi hai. Ab mayasur is Maya ka kaise istemaal karega dev ko pakadne ke liye ye dekhne wali baat hogi. Sath bane rahe aage janne ke liye...






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Awesome fabulous update
Kahi ye Dev ke mama na ho Kyu ki wo bhi samjhdaar h aur wo abhi Tak Ghar nahi pahuche h sayad
Keep posting

nahi bro ye dev ke mama nahi hai. Ye koi or hi hai. Jiska intro is update me milega... Aap sath banaye rakhe aage janne ke liye.......





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Awesome update bhai

thanks Bhai apna sath u hi banaye rakhne ke liye ..


aaj ka UPDATE post kardiya hai or ummid hai pasand aayega aaplogo ko. Aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe....



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Fabulous update bhai
 
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