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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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Mayasur ne accha admi chun liya uska roop lene ke liye.....aise kam karke pure world me hahaka macha dega Mayasur to....Kya Dev aage aayega asuro kam samna karne ya phir phirse koi Dimag lagayega unka ant karne ke liye....Lagta hai Dev ko Insano ko bachane ke liye aage aana hi padega...
shandar update bhai :applause:
 

Azagar Dada

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बड़ा डरावना अपडेट। पिशाचों की टोली निकल पड़ी है। गुरु परशुराम के आशीर्वाद और मार्गदर्शन में देव जरूर उनका सामना कर सकेगा। उसके सामने तीन तरफ से चुनौती है। एक तरफ संसार को बचाना है। दूसरी तरफ अपने परिवार को भी सुरक्षित रखना है। तीसरी तरफ मायासुर से लरना भी है।
 

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बड़ा डरावना अपडेट। पिशाचों की टोली निकल पड़ी है। गुरु परशुराम के आशीर्वाद और मार्गदर्शन में देव जरूर उनका सामना कर सकेगा। उसके सामने तीन तरफ से चुनौती है। एक तरफ संसार को बचाना है। दूसरी तरफ अपने परिवार को भी सुरक्षित रखना है। तीसरी तरफ मायासुर से लरना भी है।
Ek chiz toh aap bhul hi gaye bro ke chauthi taraf use khud ki pehchan ko bhi jab tak mumkin ho tab tak chhipa kar rakhna hai kyonki pehchan samne par parivaar pyaar dost sab khatre mein pad jaayenge
 

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UPDATE 28













Gurudev- theek hai to suno vats. Tumhe ab apni sari raat me un jeevo ko dhundna hoga. Or unka ek ek karke sikaar karna hoga. Or ye baat yaad rakhna ki jis asur ne unhe bulaya hai vo bahut hi shatir hai. Uske har ek jeevo per najar hogi. Or vo bas tumhara hi intjaar kar raha hai. Isliye tumhe apni shaktiyo ka bharpur istemaal karna hoga. Apne punchbhuto ka bharpur istemaal karo. Or jab tak uska akhiri jeev nahi mara jata tab tak use tumhare bare me bilkul bhi bhanak nahi lagni chahiye ki tum akhir ho kon. Or ek khas baat yaad rakhna ki vo asur bahut hi jyada takatvar. Or kafi mayavi bhi. Or tumhe vo apni maya me fasane ka prayas karega. Parantu tumhe kuch bhi karke apna santulan nahi khona hai. Chahe kuch bhi Kyu na ho jaye.






Main- gurudev is asur ka naam kya hai.




Gurudev- us asur ka naam hai mayasur. Or tum uske naam se hi samaj sakte ho uski shaktiyo ko.





Main- me samaj gya gurudev. Aapne jaisa kaha hai vaisa hi hoga.




Gurudev- or ha ek baat yaad rakhna keval raat me hi unka vadh karne jana. Agar din ke samay tumhe kahi kuch galat lage to us samay tum bilkul bhi unke samne nahi aaunge. Chahe kuch bhi kyu na ho jaye.





Main- parantu gurudev agar mere samne koi sankat me hua to kya me uski sahayta nahi karu. Ye kaise sambhav hoga.





Gurudev- me janta hu ye kaam aasan nahi hai. Parantu jitna ho sake utna sayyam rakhna. Baki jaisi prabhu ki ikchha hogi baisa hi hoga.





Main- me samaj gya gurudev. Me aapki sari bato ko smaran rakhunga.




Gurudev- vijay bhav. Vats.



Or ye kehte hi vo bapis chale gye. Or me apne dhyan me baitha raha or apne mantra ka jaap karne laga.





Bahi karib 8 baje me dhyan se bahar aaya. Or apne kamre me gya badiya fresh hua or kapde change karke neeche aagya jaha mami Mera hi wait kar rahi thi.




Mami- kaha tha tu. Me kamre me aai thi lekin tu dikha hi nahi




Main- mami vo me aajkal meditation karta hu. Subah uthkar isliye chhat per tha. Bahi kar raha tha





Mami- kya baat hai meditation. Badiya hai chal aaja nasta kar le.




Main- baki sab kaha gye.




Mami- vo dono clg gyi or tumhare mama ready ho rahe hai office ke liye.





Main- ab me din bhar kya karunga akele bor ho jaunga.





Mami- ha ye baat to hai. Tu aisa kar garage se koi bhi car le or sehar ghumne chala ja. Like movie bagera time kat jayega




Main- kya mami akele baha bhi boor ho jaunga. Or akele Jane ka Mera man hi nahi hota hai kahi bhi.





Mami- to fir me chalu sath me.




Main- lekin chalna kyu hai. Bahar itni dhoop me kya karenge ham Jake.





Mami- to fir tum hi btao kya karna hai.




Main- kuch nahi ghar per hi rahunga or jab vo dono aayengi tab dekhenge.




Mami- theek hai to fir.



Uske baad maine nasta Kiya or mama bhi ready hoke nasta karne agye the to unhone bhi mere sath hi nasta Kiya or vo chale gye office. Or Mami apne kamo me lag gyi. Or me pahucha apne kamre me. Ab maine socha ki filhaal koi kaam to hai nahi. To chalo un jeevo ki jaankari li jaye. Taki raat me jyada time barbaad na ho.


Yahi soch kar main baith gya fir se neech apni aankhe band karke. Or un sare ajeeb jeevo ke bare me pata lagane laga. Vo jis jis disha me gye the third eye ne un sabhi ka peecha Kiya. Or jab vo apne apne jagaho per pahunche to unhone insano ka rup le liya. Or unka chehra mere andar feed ho gya. Sath me vo jagah bhi jaha vo the. Mujhe ye janne me karib 2 ghante to lag hi gye the. Sari jaankari mujhe yaad ho gyi thi kon kaha kis jagah per milega mujhe. Ab inki kamjoriyo or takat ke bare me janna tha or sath me main aisa kya karu jisse vo mayasur mujhe dekh na paye.




To Maine sabse pehle delhi ke bahar ke sikaro chuna. Delhi ke bahar alag alag seharo me karib 150 log the. Or me ye janta tha ki itne logo ko ek raat me nahi haraya ja sakta fir bhi kosis to kar hi sakta hu. Fir maine sabhi ki takat or kamjoriyo ke bare me janna start kiya.


Jaha tak mujhe pata chala sabhi ki shaktiya ek jaisi hi thi. Or sabki kamjoriya bhi. Sirf kuch ko chhod kar.



Ye sab janne ke baad maine socha ki ab aisa kya kiya jaye ki vo MAYASUR mujhe pakad na sake. Or iske liye mujhe meri shaktiyo ka parikshan karna hoga.



Isliye maine apni aankho ko khola. Or time dekha to filhaal 1 baj raha tha. To maine socha abhi bahut time hai. Isliye maine ki agar me gayab reh kar unsabhi ka khatma karu to sayad unme se koi bhi mujhe nahi dekh sakega. To kya aisa sambhav hai.



Maine aisa socha or apni aankhe ko band karke aisa karne ka try karne laga me is waqt apne aaine ke samne khada hua tha. Taki agar me gayab ho jau to mujhe pata chal sake. Or aisa karne ke baad maine apni aankho ko khola or samne aaine me dekha to samne aaine me nahi dikh raha tha. Matlab me gayab ho gya tha. Maine fir se apni aankho ko band Kiya or fir se samne aane ke bare me socha or aapni aankho ko khola to me aaine me dikh raha tha. Matlab ye shakti bhi mere andar thi. Ab maine socha ki ek or baar kiya jaye. Isliye maine fir se gayab hone ke ware me socha or apni aankho ko khola to me fir se gayab ho gya. Uske baad maine samne bed per se ek takiya uthaya matlab me chhezo ko chhu sakta tha. Uske baad maine us takiye ko apne aar paar karne ki kosis ki or me kya dekhta hu vo takiya mere andar se dusri taraf nikal gya. Matlab ki me cheezo ko chhu sakta tha. Lekin cheeze mujhe nahi chhu sakti thi. Me unke liye keval hawa tha. Jiske aarpaar vo ja sakti thi. Ye sab karne ke baad maine fir se apni aankho ko band Kiya samne aane ke bare me socha or me aagya me dikhne laga khud ko. Ab mayasur kuch bhi kar le mujhe nahi dekh payega. Lekin vo mayasur hai or kuch na kuch to jarur sochega is ware me.

To maine socha tab ki tab dekhunga. Filhaal to aaj raat tehalka machana hoga sabhi pisacho ke andar. Tabhi mujhe ek idea aaya. Or Maine socha agar aisa ho jaye to maja hi aajaye. To maine us plan ke liye jo sabse jaruri cheez thi uski ware me socha or mujhe jald hi uske bare me idea lag gya. Ki kya karna hai. Ab mujhe apni kuch shaktiyo ka or parikshan karna tha. Jo yaha ghar per nahi ho sakti thi. Isliye maine apni aankhe band ki or ek jagah ke ware me socha or palak jhapakte hi me baha pahuch gya. Uske baad maine aankho ko band Kiya or ek solid kavach banane ke ware me socha or apne hatho ko samne rakha. Or ye kavach aisa hona chahiye ki koi bhi shakti ise mere siva chhu bhi na paye. Karib thodi hi der me mere hatho se kuch roshni nikalne lagi or samne ek shaktishali parat banane lagi. Like deewar. Thodi hi der me vo deewar ready ho gyi. Or Maine apni aankho ko khol liya. Ab mujhe yakeen tha ki ye idea jarur kaam kar jayega. Agar aisa hua to mayasur ki dunia hi hil jayegi. Itna tay tha. Uske baad me bapis se ghar per apne kamre me aagya. Or aaram karne laga. Ab lagbhag 3 baj gaye the.








Bahi dusri taraf suresh ne abdul ko jo kaam diya tha vo bhi aaj hone wala tha. Abdul filhaal insan hi tha vo pisach me nahi badla tha.


Karib 4 baje delhi me ek anjan jagah ek meeting chal rahi thi. Jisme suresh abdul or suresh ki charo pisach to the hi. Sath me kuch or log bhi the. Jinhe ham criminal hi samaj sakte hai. Ye sabhi insan hi the. Or suresh ne unhe hi bulane ka kaam Abdul ko diya tha. Taki suresh inse mile or sabhi ko apne ishare per kaam karne ko majboor kar sake. Or ye kaam uske liye bahut hi aasan tha. Usne bato ke douran apni mayaus kamre me moujood sabhi logo ke dimaag me faila di. Sivay Abdul ko chhod kar. Jaise hi unke dimaag me mayasur ki MAYASUR pahunchi vo sabhi ek hi jhatke me Suresh ke sath kaamkarne ko razi ho gye. Or ye dekhkar Abdul ki aankhe bilkul fati reh gyi. Use kuch samaj me hi nahi aaya ki akhir ye chamatkaar hua kaise. Uske baad Suresh ke kehne per un sabhi 20 logo ne apne sare aadmiyo ka pata suresh ko de diya or uske liye kaam karne ko bhi razamandi de di. Darashal mayasur ne un sabhi ko sammohit kar liya tha. Or ye itna powerful sammohan tha jise koi bhi nahi tod sakta tha. Bas fir kya kumbh ne apne sathiyo ko in logo ke sabhi logo ki khabar de di or raat hote hote inke sabhi sathi bhi pisach me badal gye. Jo ab seedha suresh ka order manne wale the. Or baki bate unhe kumbh ne samjha di.


Raat hote hote sare pisacho ki ginti hajaro me pahuch gyi thi. Jis bajah se dev ka kaam ab or bad gya tha. Or usme ek baat ye thi ki dev ko in naye pisacho ke ware me koi jaankari nahi thi. Unhe keval vo purane pisacho ki hi jaankari prapt thi. Ab agar vo dobara se dhyan lagaye to sayad use bakio ki khabar mil jaye. Lekin lagta nahi aisa kuch hoga. Kal subah se pehle.



Bahi sham ko main utha or fresh hoke neeche pahucha. Or badiya si coffee pe or bahi baith gya. Bahi mama mami or baki dono bhi baithi hui thi





Main- yaar tum log to clg chali jati ho me bahut bor ho jata hu din bhar.




Renu- to kisne kaha tha hame chhodne aane ke liye. Ab aaye ho to bhukto




Renu ki is baat per mami ne usko ek halka sa fatka laga diya hath per.




Mami- badi aai ye kehne wali. Ye uska bhi ghar hai or vo jab chahe yaha aakar reh sakta hai. Tum aisa Kyu keh rahi ho.





Surbhi- bahi to. Galat baat Renu.



Renu- ok sorry. Lekin ab iske boriyat ko door kaise kiya jaye



Mama- mere sath office chala karo.




Mami- koi jarurat nahi hai.




Mama- to fir koi or Rasta hai hi nahi.





Mami- sochte hai kuch to jarur rasta niklega





Main- koi jarurat nahi hai mami. Akele to me kahi jaunga nahi. Isiliye isi tarah nikaal lunga din. Baki sham ko ghumane to ja hi sakte hai. Ya fir na bhi jaye to aap logo se bato me time kat jaya karega. Ab chhodo ye sab. Or batao clg kaisa raha aajka. Or tumhare vo teeno dost ne kuch kaha kya mere bare me.





Surbhi- tumhe kaise pata chala ki unhone kuch kaha hoga tumhare bare me.




Main- guess



Surbhi- hmmm. Baise clg to badiya hi tha. Aaj bahut dino baad gye the to maja aaya. Bahi rahi baat tumhare bare me ki gyi bato ki to vo teeno samajhte hai ki tum thode akdu type ho. Jo keval apne man ki hi karta hai.





Main- well ye to sahi baat hai me apne man ki hi karta hu. Mujhe koi bhi kisi ke liye bhi force nahi kar sakta. Fir chahe vo koi bhi ho.




Renu- ye to me janti hu. Ek or baat hai. Vo ye ki nancy sayad tumhe like karne lagi hai tumhare attitude ki bajah se. Maine to use bahut samjhaya lekin usne mujhse ye khass kaha ki aaj me tumhe lekar uski batai jagah per jau.




Ye sunte hi mami or mama or sath me main bhi ek dum hairan ho gye. Or hamare muh khule hi reh gye.




Main- ye kya bakwas hai




Surbhi- ye sach hai. Vo aaj tumhare sath date per Jana chahti hai. Or vo chahti hai ki ham uske liye tumhe manaye.





Main- sorry girls ye filhaal nahi hone wala. Kyuki abhi tumne kaha ki me akdu hu or maine bhi kaha tha ki mujhe koi bhi force nahi kar sakta kisi bhi cheez ke liye. Isliye mera man nahi hai. Or me nahi jane wala.






Surbhi- kyu? Kahi koi pehle se hi to pasand nahi kar li. Isibajah se itni sundar ladki ka praposal reject kar rahe ho.pata bhi hai clg me nahane kitne hi usme Majnu bane ghumte hai.




Main- ghumte honge. Me unme se nahi hu.




Mami- sahi kaha mere bache ne. Balki iske peeche ghumti hai kai lattu ki tarah. Isaliye jakar keh dena apni us Nancy se ki in sab ki jagah padai me dhyan do to badiya hai.





Main- thanks mami.




Surbhi- chalo ye mana lekin us sawal ka jawab to do.




Main- kis sawal ka.




Surbhi- are bahi. Ki pehle se koi gf hai ya nahi.





Main- kaisi besharm ho gyi ho dono ki dono. Yaha bade log baithe hue hai or tum dono aisi bate kar rahi ho. Mujhe hi Sharm aane lagi hai. Jabki me ladka hu. Or tum dono…… Hey bhagwan kya hoga Inka.


Ye sunte hi vo dono apne ek ek hatho ko aasirbaad ki mudra me leke baith gyi or bolo.





Dono- vats tum hamari chinta mat karo. Hamara Jo bhi hoga vo theek hi hoga. Tum apne bare me socho. Baise Nancy achhi ladki hai. Or hamari bhi yahi ikchha hai.






Main- bakwas band karo Verna raat bhar ke liye chhat per band kar dunga. Sari hosiyari nikal jayegi. Jab bhut pret aayenge tumhare vichar sunne ke liye.





Mama- bilkul sahi kaha dev. Bahut hua change tha topic.





Main- thanks mamu.



Renu- dekh rahi hai surbhi hamara is Ghar me koi nahi hai apna. Sab ise hi support karte hai.




Surbhi- sahi kaha tumne renu.





Mami- baat support ki nahi balki sahi galat ki hai. Tum achha kaam karo to ham tumhe support karenge. Lekin tum dono ka to bachpan hi abhi khatm nahi hua hai. Jabki dev se badi ho dono. Or dev ko dekho kitna samajdar hai.






Renu- kya mami ham bhi samajdaar hai. Vo to ham bas thoda time pass ke liye natak kar rahe the. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hua hai.




Mami- matlab.




Surbhi- matlab mom na hi Nancy ne ise date per bulaya na hi hame ise manane ke liye bheja hai. Ham to bas uski Tang kheech rahe the. Lekin ye usme fasa hi nahi.





Mami- kaise fasega beta hai mera. Tum jaise hajaro per bhari.





Main- chalo badiya hai.verna me kal clg Jake usko achha hadkane wala tha.




Renu- kya sach me.




Main- bilkul



.uske baad hamari aisi hi bate chalti rahi diner tak. Uske baad hamne dinner kiya or apne apne kamre me chale gye. Karib 10 baj gye the. Or ab mujhe mera kaam karna tha. Lekin usse pehle dekhna tha ki sab soye hai ya nahi. To maine apni aankho ko band Kiya sabhi ka haal dekhne laga. Mama or mami dono so hi gye the. Bahi vo dono kuch pad rahi thi. Sayad clg ka homework.


Ab mere pass badiya time tha. Isliye me seedha pahuch us jagah per jaha Maine vo kavach banaya tha.
















To be countinue…………………..




 

Rahul0087@

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बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Brilliant update writer sahab... Great going :applause: :applause:
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Thanks Bhai log.....



apna sath u hi banaye rakhe .or aaj ka UPDATE post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega .....



aage janne ke liye support karte rahe ...




keep supporting........
 

Rahul0087@

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Mayasur ne accha admi chun liya uska roop lene ke liye.....aise kam karke pure world me hahaka macha dega Mayasur to....Kya Dev aage aayega asuro kam samna karne ya phir phirse koi Dimag lagayega unka ant karne ke liye....Lagta hai Dev ko Insano ko bachane ke liye aage aana hi padega...
shandar update bhai :applause:



Aapne sahi kaha bro.......

Mayasur ne chal to badiya chali hai or vo ye sab sirf dev ko samne lane ke liye hi kar raha. Ab dekhne wali baat ye hai ki dev kya karta hai. Kya vo mayasur ke jaal me fasega ya fir use maat deta hai.......



Sath bane rahe aage janne ke liye ....




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