Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[Ameer Khan Khan]

UPDATE 3









Main- rehne do lagta hai isme is bichare ki koi galti nahi thi. Or na hi tumhari. Vo to ye achha hua ki kisi ko kuch hua nahi. Isliye maaf kardo bechare ko.




Meri baate sunkar us ladki ne meri taraf dekha or boli.




Ladki- tumne meri jaan bachai hai. Isliye aaj me tumhari baat ko na nahi kahungi. Me maaf kardeti hu ise. Lekin ye aainda dhyan rakhna tum samaj gye.




Ladka- samaj gya meri maa. Thanks mujhe maaf karne ke liye.



Main- or ek thanks meri taraf se bhi ki meri baat maan li tumne.




Ladki- isme itna uchhalne ki koi baat nahi hai. Vo to aaj mera mood thoda sahi hai isliye maan li tumhari baat Verna me to apne dad ki bhi nahi sunti. Tumhari baat sunna to bahut door ki baat hai.




Main- uske liye bhi thanks. Chal Bhai tujhe hospital le chalta hu.



Ye kehke Maine use sahara diya clg me hi dusre block me medical clg bhi tha. To me baha use le gya. Jaha use first aid dilwaya or use ghar jane ko keh diya.



Ladka- thanks yaar tumne aaj bacha liya. Verna me to gya tha aaj.



Main- koi baat nahi hota hai kabhi kabhi. Apni car ko repair karwa Lena. Or use chala kar nahi le jana toing van bula lena.





Ladka- ha bo me kar lunga. Baise tumne apna naam nahi bataya.




Main- ohh sorry Mera naam Dev hai.



Ladka- or mera naam hai Lucky



Chirag- or mera naam hai chirag. Ham dono bachpan ke bestie hai





Lucky- ohh isi liye tumdono ki bonding itni jamti hai. Vaise mujhse dosti karoge kya tum dono.




Main- ha Kyu nahi.



Chirag- baise dev tune aaj kisi lucky ka example diya tha or vo samne aagya




Main- Abe Maine vo Tushar kapoor wala lucky ka example diya tha.




Lucky- ye konsa lucky hai.



Chirag- are bahi golmaal movie wala. A i o Wala.




Lucky- achha vo. Lekin uska example Kyu diya tha.




Chirag- vo kya hai meri gyan ki bate ise bakwas lag rahi thi to mujhe chup karane ke liye inhone kaha ki chup hoja verna tujhe lucky ki tarah bana dunga.



Ye sab usne bilkul meri mimicry karke bola. Or itni funny way me bola ki ham teeno ko hi hasi aagyi.



Lucky- bakai me.
Chalo me nikalta hun. Aaj pehle di hi ye sab ho gya. Sara din kharab jayega aaj to.




Main- koi nahi. Jakar aaram karo or kal se aajana clg.



Uske baad lucky parking ki taraf chala gya or ham dono use bye bolke class ki taraf chale gaye.



Main- bahut bakwas karne laga hai tu.




Chirag- yahi to mera kaam hai. Lekin. Tu ye bata ki tu itni jaldi us ladki tak pahuncha kaise. Or itni speed me aati car ko tune ek hi hath se rok kaise diya.




Main- yaar mujhe bhi nahi pata. Maine bas socha ki mujhe baha per jaldi pahuchna hai. Or me Doud pada. Bas fir kya kab baha pahucha mujhe bhi pata nahi chala. Or Maine to khud ko or us ladki ko bachane ke liye car ko hath lagaya tha. Mujhe kya pata tha ki vo ruk hi jayegi. Sayad uski speed itni nahi thi. Jitni dikh rahi thi. Drift hone ki bajah se bo slow ho gyi hogi. Or baki ka kaam mere hath ne kar diya.




Chirag- fir bhi bahut takat se lagaya tune hath. Dekha nahi uska darwaja kaisa chapta ho gya tha.




Main- pata nahi ab jo hua ho so hua ho. Lekin mujhe ye Bata ki sale baha per sabke samne ye sab bolne ki kya jarurat thi. Sab kaise ghurne lage the mujhe.




Chirag- abe me to tera impression bana raha tha us ladki per. Taki teri bhi jindagi set ho jaye.





Main- ha lekin pata hai na kon hai vo. Or kitni jiddi or gusse wali lag rahi thi vo. Me isse jitna door rahu utna hi achha hai.



Chirag- abe to isme kya hai. Sab Teri tarah thodi na hote hai. Sabhi ko apni power or paisa dikhane ka surur rehta hai.or usi me vo kab jidddi or gusse wala ban jata hai pata bhi nahi chalta hai. Ab tu khud ko dekh. Ye clg Tera hai. Tu dehradun ka sabse raees aadmi hai. Agar ye baat yaha sabko pata chal gyi to tera bhi rutba ban jayega.




Main- mujhe nahi banana hai apna rutba. Samjha na. Or khabardaar jo ye baat kisi ko pata chali hai to. Tujhe kisi aisi film ka hero bana dunga jisme hero tunda rehta hai. Samaj gya na.





Chirag- ye galat baat hai yaar. Tu hamesha mujhe tunda gunga behra hi kyu banata rehta hai.teri body ka tu galat fayeda utha ta hai. Ye baat jaan le.




Main- abhi tune hi kaha na ki logo ko unki power dikhane ka surur rehta hai. To meri power yahi hai meri body jiska me namuna dikhane ko betab hu. Bas tu ek baar ha keh de. Fir tujhe hero banne se koi nahi rok sakta.




Chirag- bhad me jao tum. Mujhe nahi banna koi hero bero. Or mujhse tum 4 ft. Ki duri bana kar chala karo. Kya pata kab takat ufaan mar de or tu mera keema bana de. Samjha na.




Main- ha samaj gya mere baap. Chal ab class ke liye late ho raha hai.


.uske baad ham pahuch gye class me. Jaha sabhi log aachuke the. Bas teachers ko chhod kar. Pori class almost full ho chuki thi. Bas last me ek bench khali thi. To ham dono jaldi se Jake us per baith gye.



Hamare baithne ke baad teacher bhi aagye and aaj pehle din tha to sabhi ke intro se hi shuruwat Hui. Ham dono hi sabhi ko dekh rahe the. Tabhi Mera dhyan gya ek ladki per Jo bahi thi jise maine bachaya tha. Uska no. Bhi aagya.



Prachi- hello everyone Mera naam hai Prachi Sharma. Or mere pita ka naam hai. Mr. Shankar Narayan Sharma. S.N. SHARMA. he is tha commissioner of dehradun police.



Ye sunkar mujhe hasi aagyi kyuki ye apna rubab banaye Bina nahi rehne wali thi. Har jagah ye aone dad ke bare me hi bata rahi thi ki iske dad police commissioner hai. Taki sabhi isse dare.



Chirag- dekh raha hai bhai. Kitni chalaki se sabhi ko apna rutba bata diya isne.




Main- sahi kaha. Bahut hi chunt hai ye ladki.


.aise hi ek ek karke sabhi ka intro hota gya. Jab meri bari aayi to maine bas naam hi bataye.




Main- hello everyone my name is Arnav sinha. Vaise sabhi mujhe dev kehkar bulate hai. Lekin school or clg me mera naam Arnav hi likha hua hai. So aaplog decide kar lijiyega ki mujhe kis naam se pukarna hai. Agar bulana hai to. Verna iski bhi koi jarurat nahi hai. Thanks.



Ye kehke me bapis se baith gya.


Teacher- arnav tumne apni family ke bare me nahi bataya.




Isi bech kisi ki aawaj aai class mese.



U1- sayad iski family hi nahi hogi sir. Isiliye unka intro nahi diya hai isne. Agar hoti to de deta.




Teacher- ye jisne bhi kaha hai chup chap class se bahar chale jao. Verna agar maine use bahar nikala to bahut insult ho jayegi uski.



Ye sunkar ek ladka khada hua or apni mundi neechi karke bahar jane laga.


Tabhi maine use roka.



Main- ek min. Jara ruko tum.

Maine uski taraf dekha or bola.


My friend yaha mujhe padna hai na ki meri family ko. Isliye keval khudka hi intro diya hai. Or rahi baat meri family ki to chinta mat keejiye vo ek dum sahi salamat hai. Or me aapse nivedan karunga ki aage se kisi ki bhi family ka majak mat udana. Family na hona ye bahut hi dukh ki baat hoti hai. Or us dukh ko aap ya ham nahi samaj sakte. Isliye agar unke dukh ko ham kam nahi kar sakte to hame badane ka bhi koi haq nahi hai. Samjhe.

Ye kehke me shan't hua or apni seat per baith gya. Or vo ladka apna sir jhukaye hi bahar chala gya.



Teacher- nice thought Arnav



Main- thanks sir.



Uske naad vo teacher ne thoda bahut padaya or jab tak unki class bhi over ho gyi. Or vo bahar chale gye.or vo ladka andar aagya. Or seedha apni seat per jakar baith gya. Aaj ka din pora isi me nikla. Itni baar hamara intro puchha gya ki hame pori class ke naam rat gye the.







Bahi earth se koso mile dur…………





Indradev fir se brahma dev ke pass gye.




Indradev- pranam brahmadev.



Brahma- kaho indra



Indradev- prabhu aaj pore 20 barsh ho gaye hai. Or aaj ki ghatna dekhkar lag raha hai. ARNAV ki shaktiya jald hi jagrit hone wali hai.




Brahma- tumhara kehna uchit hai indradev. Or ye jitna jaldi ho utna achha hai uske liye.lekin isme samasya kya hai.




Indradev- prabhu vo samay ab najdeek aaraha hai. Jab vo astra apna astitva pragat karega sabke samne. Jab tak Arnav ki sampurna shaktiya agar jagrit nahi hui to. Or mera dusra dar ye hai ki kisi asur ki najar agar Arnav per pad gyi to vo use hani pahuchane ki kosis kar sakta hai. Khaskar tab jab use ye bhanak lage ki arnav ka janm Kyu hua hai.




Brahma- aapka dar uchit hai indradev. Lekin isme aapko hi arnav ki madad karni hogi. Uski sampurn shaktiya jagrit ho jayegi jab samay aayega. Lekin tab tak Aapko uski raksha karni hogi. Use uchit marg dikhana hoga. Use us raah per chalne ke liye prerit karna hoga. Jiske liya uska janm hua hai. Or ek. Baat ka dhyan bhi rakhna hai Aapko uske sameep rehna hai lekin usme samne nahi aana hai. Kyuki agar asuro ne aapko dekh liya to fir unka shak yakeen me badal jayega. Aap samaj rahe hai na.




Indradev- ha prabhu me samaj gya hu. Aapne jaisa kaha hai baisa hi hoga. Lekin prabhu ek prasn hai man me.



Brahma- ha puchho indra



Indradev- prabhu ye astra apna astitv kaise prastut karega. Aisa kya hoga jisse sabhi ko iske jagrit hone ka praman milega.




Brahma- indra aisa kya hoga ye me aapko abhi nahi bata sakta hu. Or jo bhi hoga use pehle samajna padega. Tabhi aapko pata chalega ki vo astra jagrit hua hai. Or agar koi nahi samaj paya uske ishare ko to vo astra 2 purnimao baad fir se bilupt ho jayega. To us ishare ko samajne or us astra ko pane ke liye sabhi ko keval 2 purnimao ka hi samay milega. Agar is samay seema me astra prapt kar liya to theek verna ye astra fir se anant samay ke liye kho jayega. Or jo bhi is astra ko ab prapt karega. Uska ye astra kabhi sath nahi chhodega. Fir chahe vo parajay ho kisi yudh me ya fir is ASTRA ko kho de. Ye khud hi apne swami ko khoj kar bapis aajayega. Isliye is baar hame purna satarkta bartani hogi. Kyuki detya guru shukracharya bhi ye baat jante hai. Or unke asur is samay puri prithvi per moujood hai. Alag alag besh me. Jo keval is ishare ka hi intjaar kar rahe hai. Isliye aapko jald hi Arnav ko uske satya se avgat karana hoga.




Indradev- me samaj gya brahmadev. Aap ki aagya ka palan hoga.



Ye kehke indradev bapis swarg chale gye. Or Brahma Ji dhyan me leen ho gye.










To be countinue……………..

Zabardast update bro.

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

UPDATE 4








Bahi teesri taraf shukracharya dhyan me baithe hue the ki unhe kuch aabhas hua or vo dhyan se bahar aagye. Unhone turant hi apne detya samrat ko iski suchna dene ka faisla kiya or vo chale gye seedhe Raj bhavan Jo ki shukra grah per hi bana hua tha. Sabhi danav isi grah per hi rehte hai. Or yahi se sabhi jagah Jake tehalka machate hai. Jab bhi unhen aadesh milta hai.

Shukracharya seedhe Raj bhavan me gye jaha per ek Vishal singhasan per detya raj baitha hua tha. Jiska naam tha.

AADHIRASUR.


jaise hi shukracharya mahel me pahuche sabhi detyo ne unhe pranam kiya.



Adhira- gurudev aaiye aapka swagat hai. Kahiye kya seva kare aapki..



Shukracharya- adhira mujhe seva nahi chahiye mujhse bas vo दिव्यास्त्र chahiye hai.




Adhira- vo to ham aapko de hi denge bas ek baar vo pragat ho jaye



Shukracharya- ab ye kaam itna assan nahi raha hai. Mujhe aabhas hua hai ki devo ne koi naya prapanch kiya hai. Is दिव्यास्त्र ko hamse chhenne ke liye. Lekin mujhe iski sampurna jaankari nahi hai. Lekin itna pata hai ki ab hamare or us ASTRA ke bech koi or bhi aagya hai. Jise hame rokna hoga. Verna ye shakti hamare hatho se nikal jayegi.




Adhira- gurudev AAP nischint rahe. Chahe vo koi bhi ho. Mujhe rok sake aisa is pore sansar me kisi ke pass bhi sahas nahi hai. Me use vo jo bhi hai. Use cheeti ki tarah masal kar rakh dunga. Mujhe swayam shiv ka vardaan prapt hai.




Shukracharya- ha mujhe tumhari shaktiyo ke vare me gyat hai. Adhira parantu in devtao ka kuch bharosa nahi hai. Isliye pehle hame unki yojna ka pata lagana hoga. Or jald hi us divyastra ke pragat hone ka samay bhi najdeek aa raha hai. Hame usse pehle ye sab karna hoga.




Adhira- to theek hai gurudev. AAP bataiye ki hame kya karna chahiye.


Shukracharya- apne kuch duto ko prithvi per bhej do or kuch ko swarg per. Vo hame sari suchna lakar de denge. Lekin prithvi per un duto ko manav rup me rehna hoga. Taki vo sabhi me ghulmil sake. Or devtao ke shadyantra ka pata laga sake.




Adhira- jaise aap kahe gurudev. Lekin or duto ko bhejne ki kya jarurat hai. Hamare dut to pehle se hi pori prithvi per faile hue hai.




Shukracharya- vo dut keval us divyastra ko dhundne ke liye hi bheje gye the. Or unhe bahi karne do. Unke aalwa kuch or duto ko prithvi per bhejdo taki vo keval us shadyantra ka pata lagaye Jo devtao ne racha hai. Samjhe.





Adhira- samaj gya guru dev. Aapki aagya ka palan hoga.





Iske baad adhira ne turant hi apne 5 duto ko prithvi per jane ka aadesh de diya. Or 1 khas dut ko swarg lok jane ka. Ye sabhi dut apne apni manjil per nikal gye.ye sabhi mayabi the. Ye jo chahe vo rup le sakte the. Or unhe koi pehchan bhi nahi sakta tha.


Ye sab karke shukracharya bapis se apne aasram me chale gye. Or dhyan me baith gye. Bahi ye dut prithvi per pahuche or manav rup le liya. Ab inhe dekhkar koi nahi keh sakta tha ki ye asur hai ya insan. Inke pass shaktiya thi jinki madad se kuch bhi kar sakte the. Un pancho detyo ne alag alag disha me jane ka faisla kiya. Or sabhi chale gye.






Bahi clg me dev ka din aaj aisa hi nikla. Kyuki aaj kuch padai to hui nahi bas intro session hi chalta raha. Clg ke baad dev or chirag dono hi Ghar ki taraf nikal gye. Dev ne pehle chirag ko uske ghar per drop Kiya. Or fir apne ghar chala gya. Jaha dada or uski mom dono ne aajke din ke bare me pucha. To usne bahi normal sa jawab de diya.





Next day.



Dev apni gym me hi kasrat kar raha tha. Pori kasrat hone ke baad vo badiya se naha dho kar ready ho gya. Or neeche chala gya. Jaha per bahi uski dadu ke sath thodi baatchit hui.



Dada- dev yaar jara renu ko to phone lagao. Kitana time ho gya usse baat kiye hue. Vo to hame kabhi phone karti hi nahi hai. Kam se kam han to karle.




Main- dadu jab unhen hi hamari fikr nahi to ham kyu kare. Vo badiya baha per aish kar rahi hogi. Shurbhi ke sath. Or yaha ham uski fikr kar rahe hai. Kabhi ek msg bhi nahi karti vo Call to door ki baat hai.



Dada- aisa nahi kehte vo teri badi bahen hai.chal call laga me baat karunga usse.



Ab dadu manne bale to the nahi isliye maine Call laga diya. Kuch bell gyi or call recieve kar liya usne. Maine loudspeaker per phone ko rakha or dadu ko de diya.



Renu- hello dev Babu aaj hamari yaad kaise aagyi aapko.




Dada- beta me dadu bol raha hu.



Renu- are to aapne kaha isliye is chhachundar ne mujhe call Kiya. Verna to ye ek miscall bhi nahi deta hai mujhe.




Main- tum bhi to nahi karti ho mujhe call. Ya msg ya misscall.




Renu- achha to isliye tu bhi nahi karta hai.




Main- ha.




Renu- jab tujhe meri yaad hi nahi aati hai to me kyu karu tujhe call.




Main- same here.



Renu- matlab tujhe sach me nahi aati hai meri yaad.




Main- are abhi kuch min. Pehle Tak to me bhool bhi gaya tha ki koi renu naam ki ladki hai jo meri bahen bhi hai. Vo to dadu ne yaad dilaya tab Jake mujhe yaad aaya.





Renu- ohh to ye baat hai. Theek hai ab me bhi tujhe kabhi yaad nahi karungi. Na hi tujhe call karungi na hi msg. Aaj se tu meri yado se bhi gol ho jayega. Me ab kabhi tujhse baat nahi karne wali.




Main- baise bhi kaha karti ho baat. Isliye ab is sab ka koi fayeda nahi hai.




Dada- bas karo tum dono kaise bacho ki tarah ladte rehte ho.




Renu- to dadu aap dekhiye na ye kaise baat kar raha hai.




Main- to beta use call karna start karo to bo nahi bolega aisa kuch bhi. Tum to hame bhool hi gyi ho. Delhi jakar. Aisa thodi na hota hai.




Renu- dadu aap bhi iska sath dene lage. Me kisi Karan se call agar nahi kar pai to kya aap nahi kar sakte mujhe call.




Dada- beta Maine hi to call Kiya hai.




Renu- to aise hi jab chahe tab kar sakte hai aap. Isme tana Marne wali kya baat hai. Padai or clg me reh jata hai call karna.





Renu ki aawaj ruasi ho gyi thi. Or hame pata tha ki ab vo kisi bhi waqt ro degi. Isliye ham dono hi jor se hasne lage. Or uska hamne bakra bana diya.





Renu- aaplog has rahe hai. Jao me aaplogo se kabhi baat nahi karungi.



.tabhi mom bahar aagyi or unhone phone mujhse le liya.



Mom- are beta ye dono to keval teri khichai kar rahe the. Isme bura manne wali kya baat hai. Or tu ruk me abhi is dev ki pitai lagati hu. Meri bachi ko paresan karta hai.



Ye kehke mom takiye per Marne lagi or me jhut ka chillane laga ki mom mujhe mat maro. Bagera bagera.



Ye sunke Renu bhi has padi.




Renu- bas karo mom ye natak mere samne nahi chalne wala. Bichare takiye per reham khao.




Ye sunke mom bhi hasne lagi.




Mom- baise kaisi hai tu. Or baki sab kaise hai baha per. Or tera clg kaisa chal raha hai. Koi dikkat to nahi hai na.




Renu- are mom saas to le lijiye. Ek sath kitne sawal daag diye aapne.




Mom- or tune ek ka bhi jawab nahi diya.



. renu- ha deti hu. Me theek hu. Yaha mama,Mami,or shurbhi teeno hi mera bahut khyal rakhte hai. Or me in sabka. Sabhi yaha per theek hai. Or mera clg bhi bilkul first-class chal raha hai. Or achhi baat ye hai ki me next week Ghar aarahi hu. Kuch dino ke liye. Aap sab ke sath hi rahungi. Or shurbhi bhi mere sath hi aayegi.




Mom- ye to bahut hi achhi news hai. Jaldi se aajao tum dono. Kitne din ho gye tumhe dekhe hue.




Ye sunke me bhi bol pada.



Main- aisa kya kar diya delhi me jo baha se tum dono ko tadipaar kar diya gya hai.




Renu- Kiya hai kuch. Jab milega tab batadungi. Tab tak sochte raho. Or hamara wait karo. Or apni khair manate raho. Kyuki jis din me baha aagyi. Tumhari khoob pitai hone wali hai vo bhi asli ki. Na ki takiye ki. Samjhe.





Main- fir to mujhe bhagna padega yaha se. Achha mujhe bata dena jis din tum log aane wali ho. Me ek din pehle hi kahi nikal lunga. Theek hai.




Renu- aisa mouka me tumhe nahi dene wali.




Main- theek hai fir aajao. Lekin meri body dekhkar bhag mat jana tum dono.



Renu- teri ye jo body hai vo hame nahi dara sakti.




Main- dekhte hai.



Renu- achha mom dadu me ab rakhti hu. Mujhe clg Jana hai




Dada- theek hai beti. Jao clg jao. Bye.



Mom- bye beta.




Renu- baye sabhi ko. Chhachundar tujhe bhi.




Main- or chuhiya tujhe bhi bye.




Ye kehke Maine call cut kar diya.




Mom- aaj kitne dino baad renu se baat hui. Lekin isne baki sabhi se baat to karai hi nahi.




Main- baad me kar lena. Abhi me chalta hu. Bye. Everyone.



Maine dono ke pair chhukar aasirbaad liya or ghar se nikal gya clg ke liye. Raste me chirag ko pik kiya or ham pahuch gye clg.










To be countinue………………

Shandaar update bro

 

[Hshaan17]

Bhai bahut khoob

 

[mashish]

i request to you rahul aap romance per ek story likiye.

 

[Vk248517]

Kahan hai rahul bhai .

Suryaa ka story k wait nhi ho rha hai bhai.

 

[Vickey1211]

Bhai nava kahani k intzaar m

 

[Anky@123]

Kaha ho janab , reply kerke jarur batana kya status hai agli kahani ka

 

[Rahul0087@]

Bhai log yahi hu aapke sath hi hu. Kahi nahi gya hu.


and rahi baat story ki to yaar bahut confusion ho raha hai. Jis bajah se time lag raha hai. Story me aisa kya likhu Jo pehle nahi dikhaya hai. Isi cheez me uljha hua hu. Verna kab ki story start kar deta. Jo bhi ideas aate hai. Vo me kisi na kisi tarah aapko first or second part me dikha chuka hu. Isliye kuch alag likhne ki kosis kar raha hu. Taki kuch maja aayem Verna kuch updates ke baad boriyat chha jayegi. Isliye thoda samay de jald hi hazir hounga story ke sath....








keep supporting.............

 

[Anky@123]

Bhai surya me surya ke bete ko dhyan me rakh ker hi likho , romance aur thriller ka mixture dalo ...vilan koi ek na ho kai sare ho aur sare damdaar dalo , ab isme galti aapki bhi hai thodi surya ke bete ki hype aapne itni gajab de di thi bachpan me hi , matlab kese kese invention ker diye the usne choti si umar me hi to ab expectations to high rakhna hi padega ?

 

[Akil]

Bhai log yahi hu aapke sath hi hu. Kahi nahi gya hu.


and rahi baat story ki to yaar bahut confusion ho raha hai. Jis bajah se time lag raha hai. Story me aisa kya likhu Jo pehle nahi dikhaya hai. Isi cheez me uljha hua hu. Verna kab ki story start kar deta. Jo bhi ideas aate hai. Vo me kisi na kisi tarah aapko first or second part me dikha chuka hu. Isliye kuch alag likhne ki kosis kar raha hu. Taki kuch maja aayem Verna kuch updates ke baad boriyat chha jayegi. Isliye thoda samay de jald hi hazir hounga story ke sath....








keep supporting.............

I think next story aap Avi and party ko dhyan mein rakhkar likhen bro