Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[Vk248517]

Thanks Bhai log.....






aap sabhi ka sath milta raha or ye story bhi complete ho hi gyi. Ab next story ke liye ready rahiye jald hi start karne ki kosis karunga. Tab tak aap sabhi ke liye ek kaam hai.

aap sabhi log mujhe suggest kare ki surya ki story me aap is baar kya dekhna chahte hai. Story ka plot kaisa hona chahiye.

aap sabhi ke suggestions se mujhe kafi madad milegi. Or aap sabhi ka bhi intrest bhi bana rahega. Kuch mere ideas or kuch aap sabhi ke Mila kar ek behatreen story pesh karne ki kosis karunga...

Is liye apne suggestions jarur bheje isi thread per....

thank you...






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Rahul bhai iss bar suryaa ki story me surya ko time traveling, teleporting, dusre time line me jane ka power ko bhi test krna hai,genius mind, baki k power to kaal ke blood se mila hi hai jakham bhrne k sath body k koi bhi part kat k alg hone pr apne aap joint ho jata hai body se .

sath me

Villen bhi takkar ka hona chahiye.

Suryaa k 2nd part jaisa jo pdh kr aisa lge ki stoey nhi real life me aisa hua ho.

 

[John Cena]

Bro likha to hai. Surya ki story ka next part.

Surya the protector.

Yar ma to kehta hon aik new story start karo ma ajkal aik new anime series daikh raha hon (soul land) is ko ap ko daikho is ki story line boht hi Zabardast ha is sa idea la lo

 

[Vickey1211]

Bhai 2nd part ka besabri se intajar

 

[Anky@123]

Thanks Bhai log.....






aap sabhi ka sath milta raha or ye story bhi complete ho hi gyi. Ab next story ke liye ready rahiye jald hi start karne ki kosis karunga. Tab tak aap sabhi ke liye ek kaam hai.

aap sabhi log mujhe suggest kare ki surya ki story me aap is baar kya dekhna chahte hai. Story ka plot kaisa hona chahiye.

aap sabhi ke suggestions se mujhe kafi madad milegi. Or aap sabhi ka bhi intrest bhi bana rahega. Kuch mere ideas or kuch aap sabhi ke Mila kar ek behatreen story pesh karne ki kosis karunga...

Is liye apne suggestions jarur bheje isi thread per....

thank you...






keep supporting.............

Bhai jese apni bat hui thi ab kahani surya ka ladka aur uske bhaiyo ko aage badani chahiye kahani 15 saal aage bada do surya k bhaiyo ko ab business me laga hua hi batao surya ke papa bahut jaruri h is kahani m bhi to unhey aap rakh sakte ho and kafi sare villian rakho aur unme se kuch bahut powerfull ho with all types of ability. Surya ko govt ka adviser bhi bata sakte ho chaho to raw ya cbi ka had bhi dikha do main story uske baccho ki honi chahiye

 

[Rudrathakur]

Bakai lazabab story thi ye tumhari pichhli story ki trha....bss jaldi se surya and arnav ke next part pr kaam shuru kr do.... Ab wait krna mushkil ho rha h. Aisi kahani ko pdhkr....thnks for these lajabab stories....waitng bro

 

[John Cena]

Next kab shoro kar rahe ho story???

 

[Abhi123]

Bhai next part kabase start kar rahe ho.

 

[Rahul0087@]

Next kab shoro kar rahe ho story???

Bhai next part kabase start kar rahe ho.

Bhai log thoda intjaar kariye. Jald hi start karne ki kosis karunga. Filhaal story ko jamane me laga hua hu. Ek baar sab fit ho jaye fir start kar dunga. Or chinta mat kariye me apne threads per link bhi daal dunga taki sabko pata chal jaye. Bas thoda intjaar...





keep supporting........

 

[Rahul0087@]

Bakai lazabab story thi ye tumhari pichhli story ki trha....bss jaldi se surya and arnav ke next part pr kaam shuru kr do.... Ab wait krna mushkil ho rha h. Aisi kahani ko pdhkr....thnks for these lajabab stories....waitng bro

Thanks bro. Aapko stories pasand aai. Meri mehnat safal rahi. Aap sabhi ka pyar hi milta raha jis bajah se ye stories complete ho pai or ab sabko pasand bhi aarahi hai. Maine aapka surya ki story per Kiya gya comments bhi pada tha. Bakai agar is per movie banegi to jabardast banegi. Baki ye sapna kabhi sach hoga ya nahi bhagwan Jane. Baki aap sabhi sath bane rahe. Jald hi next story ke sath hazir ho jaunga. Or is baar sabhi se gujarish rahegi ki story ke sath rahe. Or regular review dete rahe...





.keep supporting.......

 

[Rudrathakur]

Thanks bro. Aapko stories pasand aai. Meri mehnat safal rahi. Aap sabhi ka pyar hi milta raha jis bajah se ye stories complete ho pai or ab sabko pasand bhi aarahi hai. Maine aapka surya ki story per Kiya gya comments bhi pada tha. Bakai agar is per movie banegi to jabardast banegi. Baki ye sapna kabhi sach hoga ya nahi bhagwan Jane. Baki aap sabhi sath bane rahe. Jald hi next story ke sath hazir ho jaunga. Or is baar sabhi se gujarish rahegi ki story ke sath rahe. Or regular review dete rahe...





.keep supporting.......

Bilkul bro hum sath h tumhare bss jaldi se new story start kr do...ar ho sake to series hi bna do surya ar arnav ki story ki.... We all eagerly waiting for you next story and update....