Adultery बीवी के कारनामे (Completed)

[firefox420]

Mujhe laga tha ki dr ka reply aayga , khai koi nhi aap hi sahi, 1-1 karke jawaab deta hu ok

Sabse pahle to mujh par taras khana band kare, iski jaroorat nhi,

To pahli baat ye hai ki story padhte huye wo mind me jagah kar hi leti hai, fir mind sahi galat bhi sochta hai, koi bhi ho, main ya tum

dusri baat ye ki mujhe drug ki jankari bahut jyada hai, main ek chemist hu last 7 yr se, aur main janta hu drugs kya hote hai aur unka effet bhi, sirf isiliye drug wali baat buri lagi lagi mujhe

yaha drugs ke base par ek randi ko accha dikhane ki kosis ki gai, to ye galat laga, aur ye bolna mujhe bilkul galat nhi laga, ok

aur rahi story ki baat to chutiyadr ki "biwi ke aashiq" bhi padhi hai, usme bhi wife galat thi but usme hubby bhi galat tha, masoom nhi, isliye kuch nhi bola

but yaha huuby sahi tha, use mil kar chutiya banaya gaya, chahe kajal ho ya mishra ya drchutiya,

sabne uska istemaal kiya, bas yahi cheej sabse jyada buri thi

aur haa, sabse gandi baat, pyaar ka naam daal kar pyaar sabd ki band baja di,

yr kaisa pyaar ki apne matlab kr liye ek masoom ko fasao aur use lagataar dard do, aur sorry bol do,




Really, kya mujhe batayge ki wo so called synthetic compounds koun sa hai, atleat ek hi bata do

Aur dugs ke baare me plz na bataye mujhe,
as i said, i m a chemist, so dugs ki knowlege mujhe bahut jyada hai, aisa koi drug aaj tak nhi bana jo 2-4 dose dete hi kisi ko life time sex addict bana de, pata kar le,

and wht do u mean by aap jaise mahanubhaav, dont b personal
if want to say somthing then talk abt story not abt me, ok




Wahi to maine pucha tha ki chutiya kyo involv hai, kya maqsad ths uska, aur kajal ne us par bharosha kyo kiya
kya koi sirf milne se kisi par itna trust karega

aur rahi baat kajal ki, to usne apni yaadon me khud kaha ki usne kai ladko ke sath sex kiya, to agar ye randipan nhi to randi kise kahoge
Fir sadi ke baad bhi usne apni hawas mitaai, rocky to yaad hai na,

aur main yaha bacchi ki baat mhi kar raha, badi ho kar aur sabse khas ki saadi ke baad bhi wo dusron se thukwai, to randi hi hai





Hahaha. ..cheat nhi kiya...to pahle ye bata do ki aapki najar me cheating ka matlab kya hota hai

pati se jhooth bol kar gair ko nanga jishm dikhana cheat nhi ?

rocky ke sath jo hua wo cheat nhi ?

club me ho hua wo kya tha ?

Agar use apna maqsad pura karna tha to karti par ek masoom ko kyo fasaya, kyo use wo sab dard diya, uski to koi bhi galti nhi thi na, ye masnte ho ki nhi

aur jo ladki apne pati ko di, uski jaroorat kyo padi, uska pati to is sab se door tha, fir bhi use shamil kiya aur ladki de di, sirf apni guilt ki wajah se

usko choot dila kar khud ki kartoote kam nhi ho sakti , samjhe


aur badla uska tha, use koi haq nhi tha ki kisi sareef insaan ki aisi haalat kare



Ab rahi baat mere antarman ki

To aapko bata du ki main 2014 se XP aur others story padh raha hu, bas ye id new hai, origional bata di to samjh jaoge, but abhi wo rahne hi do


xforum par jitni aapne batai unme se

main chutiya ki 2 story padh puri chuka, aur ab
bhabhi maa padh raha hu

kamdev ki stoy ke 20 updates ho gaye hai
saand ke 113 updates ho chuke
pyaar-100 baar , title hi pasand nhi aaya, to no intrest

khair, inki story last update tak padh lu fir waha bhi comment aayga

meri najar me ek story tabhi best banti hai , jab uske har character ka justification ho

Aur aapne kaha ki sex se bharpoor story hai to maza lo,

par aisa tha to writter sirf sex hi daalte na, logic kyo dala...

jab logic aata hai tabhi logical comment aate hai, samjhe

warna kai story hai jinme sirf sex hota hai, unhe padh kar bhool jata hu, koi logic nhi dekhta,




Aapne itni story bataai, ek hum bhi batate hai, jo aaj-kal read kar rahe hai...

agar aap accha kuch padhna chahte ho to, nhi to inhi me fase rahna ok



Ankitshrivastava ki Pyaar ki bhookh padho, tab pata chal jayga ki characters ka perfact justification kaise hota hai

aur haa....ise padh kar pata chal jayga ki tote kaise udhte hai ok


At last, mera kaam sirf story aur uske character par comment karna hai
main is vertual world me kisi ko koi personal baat nhi bolta, aur na hi sunta hu

agar aapko story ki baat karni ho to theek, ur welcome

Baat karte hai..

But koi bhi personal comment, plz na kare, kyoki main personal argu nhi chahta ok

arre bhai abhi upar itna lamba - choda to likha tha .. ab phir se likhna padega .. par chalo is-se nayi story ka pata to chala .. aisa bhi ho sakta hai ye main pehle padh li ho aur yaad na ho .. aur kamdev99008 bhiya ki supportive baat se jyaada excited mat ho jaana .. wo budhape mein sathya gaye hai .. .. unhone apni jawani mein itne kaand kiya hai .. ki unko khud nahi pata ki wo kab kya bolne lag jaaye .. ve hamare aadarniya magar thode se khadoos varishth naagrik hai ...

aur mere laadle bhai .. main yaha jyaada personal nahi hua .. aur hou bhi to kis se .. main to yaha kisi ko bhi nahi jaanta .. even yaha sabki ID's bhi fake hai .. to personally kya lena .. ye kaunsa tweeter hai ki yaha ki comments par aap kisi ke character par negetive judgement pass kar de .. aur us-se uski image kharab ho jaaye ...

aur nahi to muzhe aapke baare mein ye pata ki aap ladke ho ya ladki .. let's assume ki ladke ho .. to ye bhi nahi pata ki 10 saal ke bacche ya 60 ke vridh .. to yaha personal hone ka to saval he nahi uththa .. aur ye jitne bhi log hai yaha jo iss story mein 70 kamiya nikalte hai .. ve he Dr. saab (Chutiyadr) ki story ko sabse jyaada chaat-te hai ...

aur ye doodh ke dhule kamdev99008 bhiya jo itne lambe chodi haakte hai .. inki story mein khud saare aib hai .. cuckoldry, nymphomanic wali saari qualities inki story ke characters mein mil jaayegi .. inka to wala kaam hai ki "70 chuhe kha kar billi hajj ko chali" ...

 

[Studxyz]

aapka emotion hi bata raha hai ki dil laga kar story ko padha hai ...
aisa hi kuchh kamdev99008 brego4 Studxyz Naina in logo ke sath bhi hua tha jab kai salo pahle in logo ne pahli bar is story ko padha tha ..
so dont worry aap pahle aadami nahi hai jisne mujhe kajal ko sahi thahrane ke liye galiya di ho

भाइयों इस कहानी में काजल पक्की छिनाल थी साली ने सब से मज़ा लिया पर प्यार वो विकास से ही करती थी अप्रत्यक्ष रूप से चाहे कईओं से चुद गयी पर कुछ भी था कहानी थी बहुत मज़ेदार काजल हरामन से ज़्यादा नपुंसक तो साला विकास था जो अपना हिलाता रहा और मज़े लेता रहा

 

[Chutiyadr]

firefox bhai aisa kuchh galat nahin kaha in bhai ne................actual mein dr sahab ek galat dhaarna nimphomenia aur cuckoldry ke fusion ko promote kar rahe hain.............. aur kuchh logon ke dimag mein ise bithane mein bhi safal rahe hain...............
ab mere jaise critics ko wo drug ka logic dene ki koshish karte hain..............jisse mein santusht nahin ho sakta......... wo beshak doctor ho sakte hain............. lekin mein apni umr ke 45 mein se lagbhag 35 sal nashe se juda raha hoon aur lagbhag 31 saal sex se.......

ye drug addiction nahin................sex addiction hai............
aur vikas ke sath jo hua wo........... sirf kajal, mishra ya dr ki galti nahin........................ sabse badi galti vikas ki hai
usne kabhi common sense tak ka istemaal nahin kiya........................bas pyar ke nashe mein paagal raha.........ek drug addict ki tarah

"jo apke liye samarpit hi nahin..........use haasil karna ya apnana.............sabse badi bewkoofi hai........... kyonki wo kabhi aapka nahin ho sakta"
pyar samarpan, vishwas aur sachchai par tika hota hai.............. ansoo, dard aur badle par nahin.............. jaisa ki kajal ne kiya........
khud ke randipan ko wo vikas ke chodne ke liye ladkiyon ka intzam karke justify kaise kar sakti hai

apne jeevan ka anubhav agar apko ek pankti mein bataoon............. jise ooparwala bhi nahin samajh sakta......... aurat........... use samajhne ka dawa hai mera............... maa ki mamta, bahan ka pyar, patni ka vishwas aur randi ka maja.............. apni jindgi ke 40 saal... jabse hosh samhala............... tab se in sabka jiya hai............ 100+ .....sau se jyada ladkiyon-aurton ke sath........... meri apni sagi maa, bahan aur patni ke alawa.............

meri kahani mein apko kuchh bhi aisa nahin milega jo kaalpnik hi ho.... sabkuchh wohi hai... jo kisi na kisi ki jindgi mein wastvikta mein hua jarur hai.................aur har ghatna ki ek wajah jarur hai.......... vastvik na sahi.... lekin vastvikta ka roop jarur hai

in bhai ne apne vichar agar rakhe hain to dr sahab ko bhi kuchh logical reply dene ka mauka dijiye................

ham yahan fantassy aur entertainment ke liye aate hain................. lekin kisi galat dhaarna ko promote karna mein sahi nahin maanta...................... aapko agar dhyan hoga to ..................inki jadui lakdi par mera final review........ jiska koi logical reply nahin tha dr sahab ke pas to unhone personal abuse dwara frustration nikala................halanki baad mein uske liye unhein pachhtawa bhi hua.... aur wo aaj bhi mera samman bade bhai ke roop mein karte hain.................

sansaar mein sabhi se galtiyan hoti hain.............. meine to apne jiwan mein itni badi-badi galtiyan us jamane mein kar dee.... jinhein aaj in forums par log fantassy mein hi karke khush ho jate hain.................. lekin apni galtiyon ko accept karna hi hamari kabiliyat hai

so just chill................. and let others criticise



dear ........... don't take anything so deep or so personal........... we can't change the world
but we can and we must change ourselves............ according to our logic and never get influenced..... with any attractive thought

just chill and enjoy................... i am regular reader of chutiyadr...since his 1st/debu story ...didi aur dost.......... although i don't like his theories but i like his creativity
he is a wonderful writer as well as a great narrator ................ magician of words.............. so appreciate his positive side.... also

i am also regular reader of ankit srivastava............. pyar ki bhookh.......since 1st update posted on xossip
koi to rok lo os pritam dada, adbhu jaal of bhaiya ji ...............and ajaykumar, FTK, Pinuram, Rajesh sarhadi, tushar, harshit, the vampire, pinkbaby............
even english .......aurellious, maverick, trambak, breville, ramesh, divya baby, krish, ayesha (thedarkgirl)..........

a n on ending list of legendry writers with their unique writings...........

ager kajal sex addict thi ya fir drug addict thi dono hi halat me wo nirdosh hi hui na tab to bat aur bhi simple ho gayi ..
aur jo aap bol rahe ho kisi chij ko promot karne ki bat to ye galt iljaam hai mujhpar judge sahab ..
kyoki main bas likhta hu , log apni personal fantacy ko bhi likhte hai lekin main likhne ke prati itana desparete hu ki main kuchh bhi likh deta hu , ab aaj ke update ko dekhoge to wo tairn wala scene maine ek purani web series hai shemless uske 6th season me koi 10 sex ka ek scene hai , maine wo dekha aur mere dimag me wo aisa click kiya , wo intencity click ki main use likhne ko betab hone laga , likhna mere liye fellings ko jeena hai na ki kisi story ko ........
aur aapke aur mere soch me yahi bada fark aa jata hai , main har ek scene ki feelings ko jeene ki koshis kar raha hota hu , aap story ke plot ko judge kar rahe hote hai , isliye ham dono ke soch kabhi nahi mil sakte , aur isme koi burai bhi nahi hai ....
main jab cuckolding , polymorphic relationship ,open marriage relationship, stag and vixen relationship, nyphomanic , drug addicts , sex workers , voyeurism ya aur bahut kuchh ke bare me sunta dekhta hu to mujhe ye janne ki ikchha hoti hai ki akhir us samy samne wale ke dimag me kya chal raha hoga.. aur main bahut hi sensetive adami hu is chijo ke mamale me , jo mujhe samjh aata hai wo main likhne ki koshis karta hu .....
aur abhi tak maine inme se koi bhi chij ko dhang se explor nahi kiya hai ,main sach me ek aisi story likhna chahta hu jiske liye main badnaam hu , sach me aisa ki reders ki bhi jal bhun ke khak ho jaaye , lekin likh nahi pa raha ..
hope ki aisi story bhi likh paunga .. kyoki uske liye bahut intencity chahiye aur abhi time ne bhi maar kar rakha hai

 

[kamdev99008]

ager kajal sex addict thi ya fir drug addict thi dono hi halat me wo nirdosh hi hui na tab to bat aur bhi simple ho gayi ..
aur jo aap bol rahe ho kisi chij ko promot karne ki bat to ye galt iljaam hai mujhpar judge sahab ..
kyoki main bas likhta hu , log apni personal fantacy ko bhi likhte hai lekin main likhne ke prati itana desparete hu ki main kuchh bhi likh deta hu , ab aaj ke update ko dekhoge to wo tairn wala scene maine ek purani web series hai shemless uske 6th season me koi 10 sex ka ek scene hai , maine wo dekha aur mere dimag me wo aisa click kiya , wo intencity click ki main use likhne ko betab hone laga , likhna mere liye fellings ko jeena hai na ki kisi story ko ........
aur aapke aur mere soch me yahi bada fark aa jata hai , main har ek scene ki feelings ko jeene ki koshis kar raha hota hu , aap story ke plot ko judge kar rahe hote hai , isliye ham dono ke soch kabhi nahi mil sakte , aur isme koi burai bhi nahi hai ....
main jab cuckolding , polymorphic relationship ,open marriage relationship, stag and vixen relationship, nyphomanic , drug addicts , sex workers , voyeurism ya aur bahut kuchh ke bare me sunta dekhta hu to mujhe ye janne ki ikchha hoti hai ki akhir us samy samne wale ke dimag me kya chal raha hoga.. aur main bahut hi sensetive adami hu is chijo ke mamale me , jo mujhe samjh aata hai wo main likhne ki koshis karta hu .....
aur abhi tak maine inme se koi bhi chij ko dhang se explor nahi kiya hai ,main sach me ek aisi story likhna chahta hu jiske liye main badnaam hu , sach me aisa ki reders ki bhi jal bhun ke khak ho jaaye , lekin likh nahi pa raha ..
hope ki aisi story bhi likh paunga .. kyoki uske liye bahut intencity chahiye aur abhi time ne bhi maar kar rakha hai

dr sahab mein bhi toisi intzar mein hoon...........................
aap baar-baar ubkai lekar thookne lagte ho....................... gandgi bhi failti hai aur pet bhi saaaf nahin hota

ek baar gale mein ungli daal kar ulti kar do.................... sabkuchh bahar................... aap bhi halka mahsoos karoge.... aur hamein bhi marj ki thaah mil jayegi

 

[TheBlackBlood]

is story ke bare me to mujhse jyda apako pata hai FF bhai ..
aur har comment ke sath sab ko lapet lete ho ..
"masoom kameena " urf hamare TheBlackBlood bhai

 

[Chutiyadr]

dr sahab mein bhi toisi intzar mein hoon...........................
aap baar-baar ubkai lekar thookne lagte ho....................... gandgi bhi failti hai aur pet bhi saaaf nahin hota

ek baar gale mein ungli daal kar ulti kar do.................... sabkuchh bahar................... aap bhi halka mahsoos karoge.... aur hamein bhi marj ki thaah mil jayegi

kaam jitana asan lagta hai utana hai nahi bro , dark likhna asal me bahut ti kathin chij hai , kyoki usko likhne ke liye pahla samna aapko khud ke ego aur mortality se karna padta hai .. jaise navaj bhai ka behtreen work rahu raghav 2.0 tha , dark tha lekin karne me samne wale ki bhi fat gai thi ..
to ye asan nahi hota , khaskar main jis intensity me ghusana chahta hu ..
aayega dekhte hai , ager koi chij abhi hit kar jaaye us mental condition me to shayd likh paunga ,,,, abhi to muskil hi hai

 

[Shikari_golu]

Hahaha.....ek ne sach kya bola..yaha to line hi lag gai...


Well dr....story acchi thi....manta hu....

Jo bhi dikhaya....sab jayaj....

biwi sahi nhi to pati bhi nhi....

biwi ne fasaya...dr dost ne ya mishra ne....lekin pata chala to biwi ko chhoda kyo nhi....to uski ye galti hui


But 2 baaten to sahi ki thi bhai ne.....
drug addict nhi dikhaya kajal ko...bas 2-3 dose huye the..sex addict thi...to drug ka funda sahi nhi raha


2- chutiya ki kahani....uska sir-pair hi nhi....usne kyo sath fiya, kajal uski baat kyo maani

ye sawaal to rahega hi....ab kisi ke paas ye ans ho to bolo.....

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Dosto.....mujhe kyo mark kar rahe in sab me......??

Maine to kuch bola bhi nhi tha....even jab story padhi thi tab bhi....total ??

 

[Jason carter]

Ye story mast hai padne Mai bhai log but admi khud Ko dhire dhire Akash ke side se padhne lagta hai isliye sabko kajal ek laparwah cheater lagti hai jo Apne pati Ko Dhokha deti hai isliye khud ka sar patak kar phod dalne ka man hota hai,mera toh sar ghoom rha tha,rat Ko nind nhi aa rhi thi jab Mai isko padh rha tha,lekin Maja bhi aya bahut....! thriller he story
Lekin ye dr sahab ki jabardast kahani hai

 

[Naina]

https://xforum.live/threads/बीवी-के-कारनामे-completed.5398/post-1398709

Kajal bahot hi achhi ladki thi..... bahot bahot bahot achhi... uski itni achhai mujhe hazam na huyi...
ek innocent kamini thi joh kare pyaar hazar baar koyi logo ke sath baar baar lagatar...

pati ki pyari patni thi kyunki.... kyunki apne hotel se free mein chaar bottle vodka roz pilati thi... sath mein mallu & nehu bilkul muft as a chakna ....
Actually mein kali Duniya wali khatarnak khalnayika toh Kajal 2.0 thi joh Mujhko kamdev99008 ji ko brego4 sir ko & Studxyz sandy ji ko dil se pasand thi...