Romance मोक्ष : तृष्णा से तुष्टि तक .......

[vickyrock]

lamba gap logo to aisa hi hoga , khud ke experiance se bata raha hu , bhabhi maa ka bura hal bhi isi ke karan hua ki gap bahut lambe ho gaye likhne ke liye ..
gap hota hai fir mood alag ho jata hai aur story khud ko hi samjh nahi aati ki kaisi honi chahiye , isliye ek flow me hi likho , har din ya do din me likho bhale hi use post bad me karna ..
aur saptah me kam se kam 2 update chhap do hamare liye taki hamara bhi intrest story ko lekar bana rahe

डॉ साहब नई स्टोरी कब शुरू कर रहे हैं

 

[Chutiyadr]

डॉ साहब नई स्टोरी कब शुरू कर रहे हैं

abhi time hai dost , mujhe bhi likhne ka mood nahi kar raha hai , ideas pade hue hai 1-2 updates bhi sabme likh kar rakha hu lekin shuru kise karu yahi abhi samjh nahi aa raha hai , dekhta hu jaise hi shuru karunga msg karunga sare readers ko

 

[kamdev99008]

ab hui hai fursat..

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bahut badiya lekin gap lamba ho raha hai updates ka , fir mood se utarte jati hai story

lamba gap logo to aisa hi hoga , khud ke experiance se bata raha hu , bhabhi maa ka bura hal bhi isi ke karan hua ki gap bahut lambe ho gaye likhne ke liye ..
gap hota hai fir mood alag ho jata hai aur story khud ko hi samjh nahi aati ki kaisi honi chahiye , isliye ek flow me hi likho , har din ya do din me likho bhale hi use post bad me karna ..
aur saptah me kam se kam 2 update chhap do hamare liye taki hamara bhi intrest story ko lekar bana rahe

देरी के लिए क्षमा चाहूँगा मित्रो............... कोशिश करूंगा की अपडेट की गति बनी रहे..................
कहानी तो मेरी ज़िंदगी के साथ आगे बढ़ती ही रहेगी............क्योंकि इसे खुद जी रहा हूँ
कहीं कोई उलझने या अटकने-लटकने का सवाल ही नहीं...............

बस जिम्मेदारियाँ और मुश्किलें लिखने की गति को कम कर देती हैं..............
इस कहानी को पढ़कर आप खुद समझ रहे होंगे की मेरी अपनी ज़िंदगी कितनी उलझनों में उलझी हुई है.......
इतने शातिर, एक से बढ़कर एक ............इन लोगों के परिवार का मुखिया बन पाना जितना मुश्किल है....
बने रहना उससे भी ज्यादा मुश्किल है...........सत्ता का नशा अफीम जैसा होता है...... आदत पड़ जाए तो छूटना बहुत मुश्किल है

अभी 1-2 दिन में कोशिश है की कॉन्टेस्ट के लिए भी कहानी लिखूँ .......... तो अगला अपडेट रविवार या सोमवार में ही दे सकूँगा

 

[firefox420]

iss kahani ki --- mahan shakshiyat ko namn .. aadarniya Rannvijay rana Ji .. urf Vikramaditya .. urf Shamsher .. urf Raagini didi ke adiyal bhai .. urf VijayRaj jaise harami baap ki honhaar aulaad .. urf Mohini ke bhatije/bhaanje .. urf Nilofer jaha ke shohar .. urf Neelam bhabi ke patidev .. urf Samar ke pita .. urf Prabal ke pita/bhai .. urf Anuradha ke mama/bhai .. urf khud ke he judwa bhai .. behenchod ye aadmi hai ya Vishnu avtaar ...

ye description iss mahan upanyaas ke mukhye paatr Shri Shri Vikram sa ko shat - shat dandwat naman ...

abhi tak to iss ghar / pariwaar ke mard he khurafaati aur jugadi the .. magar ab to inke sampark mein aane wali baaki aurte bhi kheere ki tarah rang badalne ne lagi hai .. ab bechari Shanti devi ki chanchal si putri Anupama ko bhi jhoot ki ghutti piya di .. abhi tak kam bhasad machi hui thi .. itne saalo se .. jo fir se aage ke liye aur nayi tigdam bhidaani shuru kar di ...

itni bakchodi failane ke liye to Vikram ji he bahut the .. magar ab to Sushila bhabi ne bhi Vikram Rana ji wala kaam shuru kar diya .. khair jo hai so hai .. jaisa khaave ann vaisa hove mann ...

ab koi in Sushila bhabi ji se pooche jab aap khud aisi lambi - lambi baate ghumaogi to inke Dharampati ji to Bhaag he khade hoge .. koi bhi samajhdaar aadmi yahi karega .. jo Ravinder prataap Rana ji ne kiya .. kyonki unko pata hai .. in kaandiyo ke chakkar mein fas kar .. ve bhi lapete mein aa jaane hai .. pehle to chaachi - buao ne kam laffdaand paali hui thi .. jo ab inke agli peedhi bhi usi nakshe kadam par chal di hai .. aur apne saath - saath in saare aage wale baccho ko bhi bigaadenge .. abhi tak to kuch umeed najar aa rahi thi .. ki chala ye sab log ek chatt ke neeche Raagini didi ke saath rahenge ko sudhar jaayenge .. ya sahi raah par chalenge .. magar Vikram ji to Vikram ji hai .. aa pahuche yaha bhi .. kaand karne ...

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kahani mein sab kuch bahut aacha hai .. bas iske lekhak he tode khatarnaak se hai .. baaki sab to bhugat lenge .. magar in bhai saab ki padhne ki tharak aur gaanv ki bijli ka kya kare ...

abhi tak to apne pariwaar walo ki le kar rakhi thi .. ab ham logo ko bhi lapete mein le liya hai .. bechara ek (TheBlackBlood) masoom baccha to yaha se bhaag nikla .. aur Doctor saab Chutiyadr ne apni Chutiya wali psychology dikhate hue .. parde ke peeche he reh kar story ko enjoy karne ki sochi hai .. sahi hai samajdaari bhi isi mein he hai .. ya to apni story writing par focus karlo ya fir kamdev99008 bhiya ki lapetu kahani mein fas kar meri tarah khud ka katwate raho ...

 

[kamdev99008]

iss kahani ki --- mahan shakshiyat ko namn .. aadarniya Rannvijay rana Ji .. urf Vikramaditya .. urf Shamsher .. urf Raagini didi ke adiyal bhai .. urf VijayRaj jaise harami baap ki honhaar aulaad .. urf Mohini ke bhatije/bhaanje .. urf Nilofer jaha ke shohar .. urf Neelam bhabi ke patidev .. urf Samar ke pita .. urf Prabal ke pita/bhai .. urf Anuradha ke mama/bhai .. urf khud ke he judwa bhai .. behenchod ye aadmi hai ya Vishnu avtaar ...

ye description iss mahan upanyaas ke mukhye paatr Shri Shri Vikram sa ko shat - shat dandwat naman ...

abhi tak to iss ghar / pariwaar ke mard he khurafaati aur jugadi the .. magar ab to inke sampark mein aane wali baaki aurte bhi kheere ki tarah rang badalne ne lagi hai .. ab bechari Shanti devi ki chanchal si putri Anupama ko bhi jhoot ki ghutti piya di .. abhi tak kam bhasad machi hui thi .. itne saalo se .. jo fir se aage ke liye aur nayi tigdam bhidaani shuru kar di ...

itni bakchodi failane ke liye to Vikram ji he bahut the .. magar ab to Sushila bhabi ne bhi Vikram Rana ji wala kaam shuru kar diya .. khair jo hai so hai .. jaisa khaave ann vaisa hove mann ...

ab koi in Sushila bhabi ji se pooche jab aap khud aisi lambi - lambi baate ghumaogi to inke Dharampati ji to Bhaag he khade hoge .. koi bhi samajhdaar aadmi yahi karega .. jo Ravinder prataap Rana ji ne kiya .. kyonki unko pata hai .. in kaandiyo ke chakkar mein fas kar .. ve bhi lapete mein aa jaane hai .. pehle to chaachi - buao ne kam laffdaand paali hui thi .. jo ab inke agli peedhi bhi usi nakshe kadam par chal di hai .. aur apne saath - saath in saare aage wale baccho ko bhi bigaadenge .. abhi tak to kuch umeed najar aa rahi thi .. ki chala ye sab log ek chatt ke neeche Raagini didi ke saath rahenge ko sudhar jaayenge .. ya sahi raah par chalenge .. magar Vikram ji to Vikram ji hai .. aa pahuche yaha bhi .. kaand karne ...

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kahani mein sab kuch bahut aacha hai .. bas iske lekhak he tode khatarnaak se hai .. baaki sab to bhugat lenge .. magar in bhai saab ki padhne ki tharak aur gaanv ki bijli ka kya kare ...

abhi tak to apne pariwaar walo ki le kar rakhi thi .. ab ham logo ko bhi lapete mein le liya hai .. bechara ek (TheBlackBlood) masoom baccha to yaha se bhaag nikla .. aur Doctor saab Chutiyadr ne apni Chutiya wali psychology dikhate hue .. parde ke peeche he reh kar story ko enjoy karne ki sochi hai .. sahi hai samajdaari bhi isi mein he hai .. ya to apni story writing par focus karlo ya fir kamdev99008 bhiya ki lapetu kahani mein fas kar meri tarah khud ka katwate raho ...

abhi to kahani shuru hi hui hai................. sirf ek bhai ... dusre bhai vijayraj aur uske pariwar ki kahani kishton mein samne aa rahi hai.......unke iklaute judwa bete ke karnamo ke to aap bhi fan ho gaye ho........................ chaute bhai balraj ki kahani bhi lagbhag kafi kuchh samne aa gayi hai
mohini devi ke pati gajraj singh yani teesre bhai ke karname bhi abhi samne aane baaki hain........
panchve bhai devraj .............wo bhi kam kalakaar nahin

bas ..............is pure ghar mein ek hi vyakti odd hai.................. sabse bade bhai jairaj singh........... jinka fayda in charon bhaiyon aur donon bahano ne bhi uthaya...................
abhi kuchh updates mein aap jaan payeinge................ Jairaj Singh ke bete.............. rana Rvindra Pratap Singh....... yani Rana JI.... yani mere bare mein


padhte rahiye..................... aur itna dhairya banaye rakhne ke liye aapka aabhari hoon..................

 

[firefox420]

प्रतीक्षारत ...

 

[kamdev99008]

aaj likh raha hoon ..... koshish hai ki sham ko post kar dunga

 

[Chutiyadr]

aaj likh raha hoon ..... koshish hai ki sham ko post kar dunga

abhi kya likh rahe ho rat ke 1.50 ho gaye hai ,ab so jao kal likh lena

 

[kamdev99008]

abhi kya likh rahe ho rat ke 1.50 ho gaye hai ,ab so jao kal likh lena

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seene par kitab rakhke soye jamana guzar gaya

 

[HalfbludPrince]

HalfbludPrince bhai jab xp par FTK nam se likhte the.............tab unke signature mein 2 line padhi thi meine.....dil ko chhoo gayin

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seene par kitab rakhke soye jamana guzar gaya

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