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[komaalrani]

भाग ७५

पठान टोले वाली
updates posted.

Adultery - छुटकी - होली दीदी की ससुराल में

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[komaalrani]

Adultery - छुटकी - होली दीदी की ससुराल में

भाग ९६ननद की सास, और सास का प्लानPage 1005,please read, enjoy and comment. your support is requested

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भाग ७६
बुरके वाली, पठान टोली की

 

[komaalrani]

भाग २१५ आ गए जीजू

updates posted, please do read, enjoy, like and share your comments.

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[Random2022]

Aaj Nanad ki Training ka Cinema Hall wala part padha, maja aa gya lekin bechare ke sath KLPD ho gya. Sirf uper uper se

 

[Random2022]

Pata nahi kyun mujhe Nanad ki training kafi achhi lag rhi hai, paki baki stories se, please negative mt lena komal ji. But kuchh to fark hai story writing me. Jese shudh hindi ka use hai, gaon ki bhasha ka kam prayog hai, or nanad bhabhi me baaten bhi hot hot hai

 

[komaalrani]

Pata nahi kyun mujhe Nanad ki training kafi achhi lag rhi hai, paki baki stories se, please negative mt lena komal ji. But kuchh to fark hai story writing me. Jese shudh hindi ka use hai, gaon ki bhasha ka kam prayog hai, or nanad bhabhi me baaten bhi hot hot hai

isliye ki VO acchi hai.

karan saaf hai, vo story bahoot tight hai, short story se thodi badi, aur novel se bahoot chhoti. us size ke chakkar men characters limited hain short duration ke hain aur sabka proper development hua hai.

Vo kahani sabase pahli HILMS men post huyi thi aur vahan ka mahaul alag tha, group ke owner, writer aur reader men direct communication rahta tha.

I used to share my email id with readers and got a direct mail from the admin/owner of the group.

Now the problem is, if you want a story to be read it has to keep on going into hundreds of pages must garner comments otherwise vo 10-20 page number par chali jaati hai aur koyi padhta nahi. to Forum ke is format men short stories ke liye jagah nahi bachi.

Another story of mine which is shorter than NKT is Lalla fir aiyo khelan hori and it is posted in Komal ke kisse.

I wanted to revive my short stories with Holi ke rang and in Komal ke kisse but there are hardly any readers.

Even in JKG where now after every post i get around 20 K readers earlier used to get only a few thousand.

But that is my understanding.

Kahani likhne ke baad reader ki ho jaati hai and every reader will have his own likes and dislikes.

NKT was the first story where Guddi came as a character and Bhabhi-Nannad teasings started.

 

[komaalrani]

Aaj Nanad ki Training ka Cinema Hall wala part padha, maja aa gya lekin bechare ke sath KLPD ho gya. Sirf uper uper se

Thanks so much

 

[Random2022]

Thanks so much

abhi agla update padha. Jiske saath KLPD hua tha ab uske sath sab kuchh ho gya, dusra round bhi. Bahut hot likha hai. Guddi bhi mast enjoy kar rahi hai. Or jo achhi baat hai ki sex ke doran dono baaten kr rahe , chup chap nahi h

 

[komaalrani]

abhi agla update padha. Jiske saath KLPD hua tha ab uske sath sab kuchh ho gya, dusra round bhi. Bahut hot likha hai. Guddi bhi mast enjoy kar rahi hai. Or jo achhi baat hai ki sex ke doran dono baaten kr rahe , chup chap nahi h

yes thanks so much

 

[Random2022]

Th

isliye ki VO acchi hai.

karan saaf hai, vo story bahoot tight hai, short story se thodi badi, aur novel se bahoot chhoti. us size ke chakkar men characters limited hain short duration ke hain aur sabka proper development hua hai.

Vo kahani sabase pahli HILMS men post huyi thi aur vahan ka mahaul alag tha, group ke owner, writer aur reader men direct communication rahta tha.

I used to share my email id with readers and got a direct mail from the admin/owner of the group.

Now the problem is, if you want a story to be read it has to keep on going into hundreds of pages must garner comments otherwise vo 10-20 page number par chali jaati hai aur koyi padhta nahi. to Forum ke is format men short stories ke liye jagah nahi bachi.

Another story of mine which is shorter than NKT is Lalla fir aiyo khelan hori and it is posted in Komal ke kisse.

I wanted to revive my short stories with Holi ke rang and in Komal ke kisse but there are hardly any readers.

Even in JKG where now after every post i get around 20 K readers earlier used to get only a few thousand.

But that is my understanding.

Kahani likhne ke baad reader ki ho jaati hai and every reader will have his own likes and dislikes.

NKT was the first story where Guddi came as a character and Bhabhi-Nannad teasings started.

That's why I am commenting on this to bring this in early pages in index.