Thanks so much , the story was looking and waiting for a discerning reader like you. i made an attempt to portray a first night full of slow , lingering sensuousness, a story of husband and wife ... a subject not very common , i feel sex can be simmering and can also wild and passionate but on the first night it must grow slowly and along with the physical aspects , what is transpiring in the mind of a new bride is also very important. I am sure the story will grow upon you , thanks once again for gracing my threads and showering praise , ...