Incest वो तो है अलबेला (incest + adultery)

[Sanju@]

You just broke my heart

Thank you so much didi, aapke valuable comments aur vichhar iss kahani pe Dene ke liye,


I will try my best ki meri kahani aapke vicharo par khara sabit ho...


Once again thank you so much all fo you wonderfull buddies and didi...es

कोई नही अब भाभी भी बोल दो हिसाब बराबर जो जायेगा

 

[Sanju@]

यह पर हमारे कुछ रीडर्स ऐसे है, जिनके कमेंट्स पढ़ कर मैं लिखते रखते सोचने लगता हूं की इससे अच्छा और क्या हो सकता है,


थैंक यू सो मच stud भाई और वो रीडर्स का को सिर्फ update please ना करके, इस कहानी पर अपने विचार व्यक्त करते है।


मैं मानता हूं की कोई भी लेखक अपने हर रीडर्स के वचारो पर खरा नहीं उतर सकता। मगर मैं हमेशा आप सबके कमेंट्स पढ़ कर खुद में सुधार करने की कोशिश करता हु।

मैं कोई expearinced writer nahi hu, ye meri paheli kahani hai so......

Just keep posting your valuable comments comments on this story

Thank you so much

रीडर के कमेंट पढ़ने से हमे अगर कहानी में कोई गलती होती है तो हम उसको सुधार लेते हैं और कुछ नया लिखने का उत्साह होता है गलतियां सब से होती है और छोटी छोटी गलतियां से ही हमे कुछ सीखने को मिलता है तो आप अपने हिसाब से लिखते रहे अगर कोई गलती हुई भी तो हम रीडर के विचार लिखते रहेंगे लिखना आसान नहीं होता है लिखने के लिए खुद को कहानी ने उतारकर लिखना पड़ता है और वही लेखक होता है

 

[Sanju@]

Vaise update chahiye kya aaj aap sab ko , ya fir kal du to chalega??

जैसा आप चाहे

 

[Sanju@]

इंतजार है अपडेट का

 

[Dark_Knight]

Bhai mujhe lagta hai ki jab abhay ne Sandhya ko kaha ki tujhe kisi aur ke sath Sona tha to Sandhya ko laga ki abhay usko Aman ko lekar tana mar raha hai tbhi usko jhatka nhi laga tha

Jab ki abhay ne Raman ko lekar Sandhya ko tana mara tha Aur Isliye writer mahoday ne sabse pahle flashback abhay ka dikhya

Ab jab abhay college me Aman ki dhulai karega to Sandhya abhay ko kuchh nhi bolegi to fir abhay Sandhya ko tana marte hua kahega ki aaj tum mujhe kuchh nahi bol rahi ya kahega ki kyu Aaj tujhe gussa nhi aa raha mujh par Maine tere aur tere yaar ke Raja beta ki dhulai ki hai tab Sandhya ko jordar jhatka lagega aur sharmindgi hogi ki abhay ko Raman aur uske rishte ke baare me kaise pata

Aur tab Sandhya ko abhay ke gussa hone aur ghar chhodne ka karan maloom hoga

Kyuki abhi Sandhya ko lagta hai ki abhay naraj aur ghar isliye chhoda tha kyunki wah abhay se mar pit aur us par julm ki thi

Fir Sandhya apne aur Raman ke rishte ke baare me sochegi ki Raman ne yesa kya kiya tha ki wo anjane me chud gai yaha sirf karn jana hai chudne ka

Chudai dikhane ki bhi aavshyakta nhi
kyunki dono ki chudai pehle update me hi dikhaya ja chuka hai

Kyunki abhi Puri stories se yesa lag raha hai ki Sandhya aur Raman ka sambandh kafi pehle se hai

Fir Sandhya ye pata lagayegi ki abhay ko Raman aur uske rishte ke baare me kaise pata chala tab fir dhire dhire Raman, Aman munshi ki sajish Sandhya ke samne dhire dhire khulti jayegi ki kaise Raman Aman aur munshi milkar usko abhay ke khilaf bhadkate the

bhale hi abhay ke flashback me bhi Sandhya ko khush hokar door band karte dikhaya gaya ho lekin jab abhay ne dekha to usko sirf nangi pith dikha tha chehara nhi kyunki is stories me sajish aur suspense bhi hai aur aksar sajish wali stories me suspense to hota hi hai jisme shuru me dikhata kucch aur hai aur baad me niklta kuchh aur hai

Is stories me Sandhya ke 3 alag alag bayan aur Raman ka Sandhya ko ye kahana ki tum janti ho ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hu, tum yese sab kuchh inti aasani se khatm nhi kar sakti yahi Sandhya ke character ko badchalan sabit kar raha hai Jaise Sandhya pahle se chud rahi ho isko clear karne ki jarurt hai

aur agar Sandhya Raman se pehle se chudti aa rahi hai to maine hero Raman hoga isliye writer mahoday se sirf ek hi gujarish karunga ki is stories ko incest category se hatakar adultery category me dal de to fir koi problem nahi hai ki Sandhya chahe jitni baar Raman ya kisi aur se chude chahe bar bar apni chudai ko yaad kare

Ye sirf mere vichar hai kyoki mujhe lagta hai ki ma beta ki nafrat wali stories me ma anjane me ya kisi sajish ke karn ya majburi me kisi aur se sirf ek hi baar chudti hai jise beta dekh leta hai aur apni ma se nafrat karne lagta hai aur jab sachchai ka pata chalta hai tab nafart khatam ho jata hai fir shuru hota hai ma beta aur ghar ki sabhi aurto ki chudai lila

Baaki bhai writer mahoday Jane kyoki stories unki hai chahe kuch bhi likhe ya dikhaye hume koi aapti nahi hai

Bro jb abhay ne sandhya se ye bola ki tujhe to kisi aur ke sath sone aur wo naam bhi bolne wala tha jo sunne se phle sandhya ne abhay ko ruk jane ko bol diya isse to yahi lgta hi sandhya smjh gyi ki abhay ko uski badchalan ki sari jankari hai isliye to sandhaya ne aage kuch ni kaha aur muh bhi fer liya uske phle to wo bss abhay ko hi dekhe jaa ri thi...isse ye clear hai ki sandhya ko pta chl chuka hai ki abhay ko uske aur raman ke sambandh ke bare mai pta hai...!!!
Jb sandhya amrud ke bagiche ke bane kamre mai raman ke sth thi to abhay ne saaf dekha to sandhya ko andar jate hue wo bhi muskurate hue aur jb room mai dekha to sandhya ki saree upr se jamin pr thi jisse abhay ache se pehchanta tha ki to yaha dusri aurat ka hone ka sawal hi ni hota aur wo raman ke jangh pr baithi hui thi isme ye crystal clear hai ki wo chud ri thi isme suspence koi baat hi ni akle room bnd krke ludo to ni khelgi
Sandhya ek weak character hai usne munim ko aise hi chhod diya jbki bolne wale ldke ko thappad maar di aur munim ka kuch na bigad payi aise weak character ko thakurain ka role ni dena chahiye izzat le dubi bc randi
Aur ye story ki start hi adultery se hui abhay to phle bhi maar khata tha pr ghar chodne ki wajh sandhya ka raman ke sath sambandh hi hai ab bhale hi sandhya chikh2 kr roye pr raman ne abhay ko ye sabit kr diya ki sandhya usse pyar krti hai aur khusi khusi raman se chudati hai jo ki story mai dekhne ko bhi mila
Aur sb kya sandhya ki chudai abhay se dekhne ko preshn hai bhai sandhya ek randi hai aur abhay randi ko chode to fir baki character ka hona bekar hai
Aur iss story mai mujhe ni lgta ki sandhya ki koi majbori hogi kyuki wo khud thakurain hai aisi kya dikkt aan pdi ki wo manjboor hokr raman ke niche apne pair faila kr let gyi...MAJBOORI GHANTA!!!...sandhya bss apna hawas mita ri thi aur ye koi majboori ni...abhay ne sandhya ko ek gulab ka ful bola tha jiska ras raman phle hi pi chuka to ab kya abhay uska jutta apne muh lagyega??...aur maafi to sandhya ko marne ke baad bhi ni milne chahiye
Albela ji update ka intazaar hai aur ho sake to mere inn sawalo ka jawab dene ka pryas jarur kijiyega...!!!
Thank you

 

[Yughandhar]

Lekhag ji ma ko mafi milene Bali khaniya bhutsi he par asal jindagi me agar koi es kare to kiya beta esi randi ko mafi de sakta he nahi ho sake to sandya ko abhi ke liye tardfta huya hi dikhao jese abhi ko dikhaya koyki koi bhi ma esi ho nahi sakti ak randi bhi apane bete ke liye Jan bi dedegi sandya to randi se bhi Jayda giri hui he Abhi ko sandya ki sakal bhi nahi dekhane de or us ke samne hi or lidies ko malti or bki sabhi se Piya kare or ko hamesha hi najrandaj kare usko Etna tafye ki essi orata ko jite ji nark dikhe tabhi smjha me aye ki ek masum se bache par julma karne par jab Bo bacha bada hota he to kesi sajha deta he khun ke asu rulta he es orat ko



Or bhaki hona to bhi he lekhak mahdaya chahe ge par jo ho sandaya ko abhi ke dura sajha jarur mile

 

[Adultery]

Intejaar rahega agle update ka

 

[parkas]

Hemantstar111 bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Raj 007]

Bhai mujhe lagta hai ki jab abhay ne Sandhya ko kaha ki tujhe kisi aur ke sath Sona tha to Sandhya ko laga ki abhay usko Aman ko lekar tana mar raha hai tbhi usko jhatka nhi laga tha

Jab ki abhay ne Raman ko lekar Sandhya ko tana mara tha Aur Isliye writer mahoday ne sabse pahle flashback abhay ka dikhya

Ab jab abhay college me Aman ki dhulai karega to Sandhya abhay ko kuchh nhi bolegi to fir abhay Sandhya ko tana marte hua kahega ki aaj tum mujhe kuchh nahi bol rahi ya kahega ki kyu Aaj tujhe gussa nhi aa raha mujh par Maine tere aur tere yaar ke Raja beta ki dhulai ki hai tab Sandhya ko jordar jhatka lagega aur sharmindgi hogi ki abhay ko Raman aur uske rishte ke baare me kaise pata

Aur tab Sandhya ko abhay ke gussa hone aur ghar chhodne ka karan maloom hoga

Kyuki abhi Sandhya ko lagta hai ki abhay naraj aur ghar isliye chhoda tha kyunki wah abhay se mar pit aur us par julm ki thi

Fir Sandhya apne aur Raman ke rishte ke baare me sochegi ki Raman ne yesa kya kiya tha ki wo anjane me chud gai yaha sirf karn jana hai chudne ka

Flashback me Chudai dikhane ki bhi aavshyakta nhi
kyunki dono ki chudai pehle update me hi dikhaya ja chuka hai

Kyunki abhi Puri stories se yesa lag raha hai ki Sandhya aur Raman ka sambandh kafi pehle se hai

Fir Sandhya ye pata lagayegi ki abhay ko Raman aur uske rishte ke baare me kaise pata chala tab fir dhire dhire Raman, Aman munshi ki sajish Sandhya ke samne dhire dhire khulti jayegi ki kaise Raman Aman aur munshi milkar jhooth bolkar usko abhay ke khilaf bhadkate the

bhale hi abhay ke flashback me bhi Sandhya ko khush hokar door band karte dikhaya gaya ho lekin jab abhay ne dekha to usko sirf nangi pith dikha tha chehara nhi kyunki is stories me sajish aur suspense bhi hai aur aksar sajish wali stories me suspense to hota hi hai jisme shuru me dikhata kucch aur hai aur baad me niklta kuchh aur hai

Is stories me Sandhya ke 3 alag alag bayan aur Raman ka Sandhya ko ye kahana ki tum janti ho ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hu, tum yese sab kuchh inti aasani se khatm nhi kar sakti yahi Sandhya ke character ko badchalan sabit kar raha hai Jaise Sandhya pahle se chud rahi ho isko clear karne ki jarurt hai

aur agar Sandhya Raman se pehle se chudti aa rahi hai to maine hero Raman hoga isliye writer mahoday se sirf ek hi gujarish karunga ki is stories ko incest category se hatakar adultery category me dal de to fir koi problem nahi hai ki Sandhya chahe jitni baar Raman ya kisi aur se chude chahe bar bar apni chudai ko yaad kare

Ye sirf mere vichar hai kyoki mujhe lagta hai ki ma beta ki nafrat wali stories me ma anjane me ya kisi sajish ke karn ya majburi me kisi aur se sirf ek hi baar chudti hai jise beta dekh leta hai aur apni ma se nafrat karne lagta hai aur jab sachchai ka pata chalta hai tab nafart khatam ho jata hai fir shuru hota hai ma beta aur ghar ki sabhi aurto ki chudai lila

Baaki bhai writer mahoday Jane kyoki stories unki hai chahe kuch bhi likhe ya dikhaye hume koi aapti nahi hai

bhai bhale hi lekhak ne stories ko incest category me rakha ho lekin stories pura adultery hai aur stories me main kirdar jis kisi se bhi baar baar chudwati hai to chodne wala hi stories ka main hero hota hai aur is stories me Sandhya Raman se chudwati aa rahi hai to is stories ka hero bhi Raman hi hai chahe lekhak Raman ko vilen hi kyu na dikhaye

agar koi pathk ma beta ki nafrat wali incest/adultery stories pada ho to usko pata hai ki yesi stories me ma kisi aur se sirf ek baar hi chudti hai

lekin is stories me Sandhya Raman se pahle se chudwa rahi hai abhay sirf gandu bankar apni ma aur chacha ki chudai hi dekhta rahega aur baad me chahe wah bhi apni ma ko chode pr hero to Raman hi hai pura stories hi Raman aur Sandhya ke upar hai. Abhi Sandhya ne Raman se chudwane se mana kya hai pr baad me abhay ke samne bhi chudwayegi aakhir hero hai Raman

 

[Mink]

अगले अंक के इंतज़ार में ।