Incest शक का अंजाम

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शक का अंजाम - by pratima kavi

यह कहानी हैं एक लड़के प्रशांत की। आप उसी के नज़रिये से यह कहानी पढिये।
दोस्तो ये कहानी मैंने अन्यत्र पढ़ी अच्छी लगी इसीलिए इस कहानी को मैं यहाँ पोस्ट कर रहा हूँ असली लेखक के बारे में पता नहीं चला .. किसी को पता हो तो जरूर कमेंट कीजियेगा ..

परिचय
प्रशांत २३ साल का नौजवांन माँ बाप का इक्लौता लड़का और गर्ल फ्रेंड बनाने के चक्कर में कभी नहीं पड़ा क्योंकि बहुत शर्मीला है । कॉलेज ख़त्म होते ही पास के बड़े शहर में जॉब लग गयी और माँ बाप का घर छोड़ कर नए शहर में रहने लगा।

नीरू- प्रशांत की पत्नी खूबसूरत फिगर एकदम पेरफ़ेक्ट। चुलबुली, बब्बली सी लड़की अपनी शरारत और नटखटपन नहीं भूली थी

ऋतु नीरू की बड़ी दीदी है। ऋतु दीदी निरु से ७ साल बड़ी हैं और उनकी शादी करीब ६-७ साल पहले नीरज जी से हुयी थी।

नीरज ऋतु दीदी के पति है।

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[Rsingh]

kuchh baat aapne sahi kahee hain raj bhai.... neeru ne prashant ko pati ke jaise tawajjo nahin dee... jab bhi neeraj aur ritu didi aate... wo shab kuchh bhool kar unke aage pechhe ghumne lagti... jaise prashant koi ho hee na.... are bhala jeeja saali ka rishta kya waisa hi rah jata hain shaadi ke baad bhi... pehle wo sirf unki saali thee... lekin ab wo kisi kee bewi hain... pati ke samne kisi paraye mard ko tawajjo dena uske pasand napasad ko ahmiyat dena yeh kahan se sahi hain.... main nahin kehta kee prashant sahi hain... shaq karna pyar kee neev ko kamjor kar deta hain.... lekin neeru ne koi aise mauke na chhore jisse prashant shaq na kare....

halat kuchh harami jeeja ne paida aur kuchh neeru ne prashant ko neglect kar ke kiye.... ab saabse bara sawal saath rahna chahiye ya nahin..... pehli baat prashant chutiya hain.... akhir shaq tha toh patni ko bolta jyada lipta chipti na karne ko usse yeh shab bilkul pasand na hain... ek pati ke adhikar se.... lekin uske liye apni bewi ko kisi paraye mard ke samne nange kar dena yeh kahan kee hoshiyari hain....

ab aise situation mein ek toh uska bachha jo aare aa raha hain... bachhe ke moh mein neeru jaroor wapas unke pass jana chahegi... aur phir ek baar khoon lag jaane par jeeja dobara kosis jaroor karega... jis tarah se iss baar emotional blackmail kiya... wo baad mein bhi kar shakta hain... aur yeh larki bhi chutiya hain.... isko apne jeeja se jyada uchh koti ka insan puri duniya mein koi najar hi na aata haian... are uske didi se jeeja hain na kee jeeja se uski didi... wo khud kee didi pe bharosa na kar ke behen ke pati pe jyada bharosa karti hain....

waise bhi ending kuchh bhi ho shakta hain ... lekin ameer bhai likhe toh bhetar hain... hum toh kuchh bhi tor maroro ke paros denge khud ke deemag ko... dekhte hain wo kya likhte hain.... wasie kahani ke tone ko dhyan mein hi rakha ke aage badhe toh behtar hain...

agar Sahi se dekha jaaye to real life ke according to Prashant ki galti nahin hai

Kyunki Apne wife ko koi direct nahin bol sakta hai ki uske jyada Kareeb mat raho isase family ke relations kharab ho sakte hain pareshan to shuru se hi proof collect karne ki koshish kar raha tha

Is story mein agar koi victim hi to Prashant hai

Sabse badi Jo galti hai jija se sex karwa yah ek galti kahani Ko Jinda Lash banaa Diya

 

[Rsingh]

Yaar kahani ko barbaad mat karo kahani me prashant kam iska writer jada confused lag raha h

 

[Rsingh]

भाई

जहाँ तक पुराना कांसेप्ट की बात है तो साजिश करने वाला वही नीरज ही है
जिसने पहले भी प्रशांत को गुमराह करके निरु को चोदने मे कामयाबी पाई थी।

अभी भी उसका मकसद वही है कि वह फिर से निरु को चोदे ,

पर निरु तो अभी भी प्रशांत से ही प्यार करती है

तो नीरज निरु को तभी फिर से हासिल कर सकता है जब निरु और प्रशांत के दिल मे एक - दूसरे के लिए नफरत हो जाये
तभी दुखी और गुस्से से भरी निरु को नीरज बहकाकर फिर से चोद सकता है

तो इस कहानी को इसी कांसेप्ट के हिसाब से ही आगे बढ़ाया जा सकता है तो कहानी का मजा ले।

To fir kahani mein emotion ke upar jod nahin Dena chahie Bina logic wali kahani likhane se koi fayda nahin hai Harivansh Rai Bachchan nahin hai koi


10 sal ka baccha bhi samajh jaega ki Neeraj usko bevkuf banaa raha hai aur aaj ka Kitna call recording ka hai turant expose ho jaega abhi ke present time ke hisab se kahani likhi hui chahie kahani to likhane wala pagal hai aur kahani post karne wala usse bhi pagal

 

[Rsingh]

bhai galti prashant kee thee... lekin jo chal chali wo toh prashant pichhli baar hi samajh gaya tha kee neeraj ne usse fasaya hain.. usne ek baar wo try kiya tha lekin doosri baar toh neeru khud nangi ho ke uske samne gayee thee.... prashant ko toh shab pata tha... haan iss baar waali chal ka na pata hain abhi tak.... aur neeru kee aawaj waali yaar itna bhi gandu hain kya aawaj mein farq na pata chalega... aur kajal kaun sa neeru se mili hai jo wo janegi kee neeru kaise baate karti hain... aawaj mein antar aasani se samajh aa jayega...

aur ek baat jab neerja prashant ko wo audio bhejega, kyunki video toh wo bhej na shakta hain... toh wo toh as a evidence prashant ke pass jaroor hoga... toh agar prashant iljam lagayega phir se toh uske pass toh ek shuboot bhi hoga phir se dikhane ke liye kee issme kaun hain...

bhai prashant gandu na hain jo neeru ke liye neeraj aur neeru ka sambandh swikar karega... aisa kaun sa pati hoga jo apni patni ko paane ke liye bole kee tu jaa ke duniya se chud le aur phir wapas mere pass aa jaa... wo jab shaq ke bina par hi usse door ho jata hain toh wo jab khule aam karne lage toh kyun prashant wapas jayega...

Are bhai is story Ka original writer hai vah bhi bada pagal hai jo post kar raha hai use bada pagal hai bina hath pair wali kahani dal rha khichri kar diya h yaar kahani ka kabara bana diya h yeh emotions based story ho gayi mai magar iski ending list based leke ja raha

Jo kahani jiska tagdi ki Hoti hai uska ending usi tarike se Dena chahie kahani emotion wali ho gai hai iska proper happy ending ho ho skate to kahani me Neeraj ko ak47 se marwa do story padte Neeraj ka naame aate para garam ho jata h

 

[Kpgg]

Aisi koi kahani hai kya jo shak pe based ho?

 

[Guri006]

 

[Rsingh]

bhai aapne mool bhawna ko na badalne kee baat kahee hain mool bhawna toh hain prashant ka shaq ka keeda toh aise toh prashant aur neeru kabhi ek na ho payenge.... aaj neeraj hain aur kal koi aur hoga.. aap amir bhai se likhwana kya chah rahe ho... kya aapko bas sex dekhna hain ya insani fitrat aur waisa karne kee karan pe bhi jor dena hain... neeraj kar raha hain kyunki wo neeru ko pana chahta hain prashant ko alag kar ke hamesha ke liye.... toh prashant bhi toh haath pair maare neeru ko paane ke liye... agar ek insan jisse kisi ke ghar ka pata maloom hain uske baare mein door baithe bhi shab kuchh pata karwa shakta hain.... neeraj ne kabhi photo na bheji hain lekin prashant ke kya dost na the ya koi aur log uske janne waale... ab aap bologe kahani mein pehle se itne hi charachters the... yaar kahani mein prashant kabhi canada na gaya tha kahani mein neeru ne prashant ko kabhi pitwaya na tha... kahani mein pehlie baar neeru ko apni galti bhi mehsoos hui hain....kahani mein pehli baar neeraj khul ke apni mansha zahir kiya hain prashant ke samne.... toh kya kahani mein prashant apne aap ko na badlega...

lagta hai aap bas sex chahte ho aah jeeja ohhh jeeja bas yahee chahiye toh wo toh bas feel mil hi raha hain aapko karte rahiye enjoy... lekin baat mool bhawna kee dobara na kare.... sadhuwad....

Puri kahani Ko to barbad karke rakh diya hai apne aap ko jo Harivansh Rai bacchan samajh le

 

[Rsingh]

Maine is kahani me shuru se jo dekha hai kaafi sahi hai lekin ek baat notice ki hai ...jaisa is kahani me likha gaya hai vaisa nahi hota hai ...isme ritu ke sath roleplay sex h jabki kisi patni ko pata chal jaaye tab vo raaji nahi hogi ...haa kisi heroin jaisa krne kahoge tab raji ho skti hai lekin sagi behen nahi ..

2 . Prasant seedha aadmi hai ye baat thodi atpati hai ..seedha vyakti yaa to bahut gusse wala hota hai yaa chup rehne wala hota hai . .kisi ki patni kaisi bhi ho shadi k baad pati k samne itna vyabhichar nahi dikhati jis tarah ve log bikni aur ek dusre ki baho me jaate hai ...

3. Dusra usme sirf jija ki ek baat se neeru impress hai ki uska jija ne thappad maara tha usko ..lekin prasant ka ye kehna ki ab vo jawan h jab bachchi thi ...is baat ko proof karne k kaafi tareeke hai ..proof ...ye shabd sabse pehle dimaag me aata hai ...

4.. recording ...usne kamre me itni baar jaake dekhne ki kosis ki lekin kuch na mila ...itna chutiya insaan ...-year 2004 se aise mobile aane shuru ho gaye the jo cemera wale hote hai ...aur memory card bhi 16 GB tak ka aata tha ..to kya vo kamre me apni biwi se chhipake ek phone na rakh saka har baar usko range hath pakadna tha ..

5.jab apni biwi per usko shaq tha tab usko shamil hoke usi ko idea de rha hai aur phir usi ke kehne per jaake kaam kar rha hai ...agar main characterless hua tab meri biwi mujhpe shaq kare ki uski behen mujhe fasana chahti hai to main usko kahunga ki tu aake mujhe pakad lena ..jab vo mere pass aaaye ...aur phir vo tayyari me rahegi jabki main usko leke kahi aur maje maar rha hunga ..aise hi neeru maje karti ...isko kahi bhejkar

6..jija kharab character h matlab villain hai ..to itna chutiya insaan ki dushman se hi har baat kar rha hai ...itni baar bewakoof banne ka baad to seedha aadmi bhi keh deta hai maa chuda tu ..ab tere chakkar me na aaunga ...

7 ..biwi per shaq ho tab bahut saare tareeke the jaannne k ...ab prasant itna b seedha nahi ..varna naukri nahi milti agar bholi gaay hota .. story ko kham kha ek aisa plot banaya gaya hai jisse log ise thoda hawas aur thoda aage kya hoga k roop me le ...

Bhaiyya meri koi dushmani nahi hai jo maine aisa likha ..kahani me hum padhte hai ya movie dekhte hai to apne aapko as a hero sochte hai ...agar kisi ladki ki kahani ho to usko kam padhte hai ..hawas me padh skte hai ..lekin yaha as a hero hamara mind kaam krta hai ..to kahani per gussa aata hai ..bahut saare tareeke hai ..jinse banda kaam nikalwa skta hai ...aisa nahi h shadi k baad duniya me vahi ek aurat h jo bachi hui hai ..maine dekha hai kuch logo ko .. apni biwi se pyar krte hai lekin jab dikkat hoti hai tab usko peetne se darte nahi h


main bas is kahani ko ye kehna chah rha hu ki yaa to isko relationship me rakho yaa phir prasant ko thoda aisa karo jo vo badla le sake ..kyuki baad me har koi khoonkhar ho jaata hai ya jindagi se haar jaata hai ...ab end kardo iska is tarah ...end kerne me bhi kaafi update lagenge ..

..shayad ab 3rd part kisi aur ne shuru kiya hai ..to maharaj call krna alag hota hai ..baat jo kehni hai msg me bhi keh skte hai ..canada jaana tha msg bhej deta ...

Kuch galat likha ho to muaf kr dena ..

Aapane bilkul sahi likha hai kyunki log is kahani mein Prashant ko Hero mang rahe hain aur koi bhi audience Apne Hero ko harta hua nahin dekhna chahti hai inko samajh mein hi nahin a raha hai yah kahani emotionally ho gai hai na ki lust k upar

 

[Rsingh]

toh bhai yeh kahani ka maan kya rah jayega aap keh rahe ho pehle prashant aisa tha toh ab bhi prashant waisa hi rahe yaani phir se purane waale scenes hi repeat karwana chahte ho na...

Writer khud confused h

 

[Rsingh]

Ab kahani mein dhire dhire achcha update aa raha hai ab Prashant ko bhi lagta hai ki thoda iodine Namak ka khane se dimag aya hai Varna to Prashant ko bevkuf ka World Cup mil jata