Incest शराफ़त की मां की ... ( Adultery incest )

[piku2134]

Nafrat wala angle sabhi chahte hain. Wo bhi aa sakta hai. Sab writer ki marzi par hai..

 

[devil_eyes]

Ise zabardasti ka suspense banana kehte hain.. komal ke character ke hisab se writer ne sahi likha hai. Ek baar hi kafi hai usko guilt me dalne ke liye.
Aap jaisa scene soch rahe ho uss case me toh sonu murder kar deta javed ka aur komal suicide..
Abhi toh komal ke rony wale matter ka sonu ko pata hi nahi hai. Javed ne toh bas hath lagaya. Rony toh sabkuchh kar chuka hai.. Komal ko abhi aur jhatke lag sakte hain..
Javed wale matter ko ekbaar ki galti samajhh raha hai sonu isliye guilt me hai..

bro baat ye nahi hai ki javed ka murder ho ya komal ka suicide.. baat ye hai ki jo baate phle ki story me hai wo fit nahi baith rahi shadi wale part me. contradiction hai usme jiske bare me sabhi bol rahe hai.
1. sonu ko ache or bure ladke ka pata hai to wo apni bahan ko usi bure ladke (javed) ke sath same room se niklte dekha or uske bare me kuch nahi kiya usko kaise explain karoge.???
2. uski pyaari didi usko jhut bolti rahi ki wo ladko se dur rahi hai ( mall se aane ke baad sonu ke sath baat chit me) fir bhi wo javed ko apni marji se chune diya boli sonu ko, jabki sonu ko mall wale din pata chal gya tha javed acha nahi hai...fir bhi sonu ko guilt kyu?? usko gussa kyu nahi aaya komal par.. isko kaise explain karoge.??
3. maa ko rok liya sabana ne galat karne se par wahi maa apni beti ko javed ka sath dete dekh kuch kyu nahi kaha ?? jabki sonu uski jaan tha or komal usko sabke samne mari... isko bhi ajeeb tarah se bataya gya hai.
4. sonu apni hi baato ko yaad nahi rakh skta kya javed ke bare me jo apni didi ko aise ladke sath dekh kar bhi abhi guilt feel kar raha ??
5. komal or javed ka mall me blowjob dena jabki rony abhi bhi bf hai uska or usse phle hi sab ho chuka tha,,,komal kaha se ekk sareef ladki hui to ye ekk bar ki galti hai kya??

story ka sahi flow hi story ko interesting banata hai. jo pahle ke parts me bahut acha raha hai. bas last ke kuch parts me match nahi ho raha. writer free hai jaisa chahe waisa likhne ko par padhna to reader ko hai or wahi log hi achi ya buri baato ko batayege. kai story aisi bhi hai jo inhi unmatched parts ke karan aage nahi badh payi kyuki unko aage explain hi nahi kiya ja skta tha. or reader kuch time tak hi bina logic wali stories padhte hai (bas hilane ke liye) baki jo bhi achi stories hai usme har ekk baat ka ekk logic hai chahe wo chudai ho ya fir ladaai jhagda ya kuch or. reader ka itna sab kuch bolne ka mtlb ye nahi ki writer acha nahi hai ya story band ho, reader bas ekk aisi story chahte hai jo flow me ho jisme koi baat mis match na ho( jarurt ke hisab se phle kuch or kaha or abhi kuch or ho raha hai aisa kuch)

ye story kafi achi hai islliye sabhi reader jo itne jude hue hai is story se , iski choti si baat me fark pakad le rahe hai or writer ko iss baat ka bura nahi manna chahiye balki khush hona chahiye ki logo ka judaw is had tak hai ki wo halki si mismatch ko bhi pakad le rahe hai. I hope ki writer ise positive way me le kar aage achi si story de hum sabhi ko.

 

[Mahesh007]

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[kamdev99008]

Ise zabardasti ka suspense banana kehte hain.. komal ke character ke hisab se writer ne sahi likha hai. Ek baar hi kafi hai usko guilt me dalne ke liye.
Aap jaisa scene soch rahe ho uss case me toh sonu murder kar deta javed ka aur komal suicide..
Abhi toh komal ke rony wale matter ka sonu ko pata hi nahi hai. Javed ne toh bas hath lagaya. Rony toh sabkuchh kar chuka hai.. Komal ko abhi aur jhatke lag sakte hain..
Javed wale matter ko ekbaar ki galti samajhh raha hai sonu isliye guilt me hai..

bro baat ye nahi hai ki javed ka murder ho ya komal ka suicide.. baat ye hai ki jo baate phle ki story me hai wo fit nahi baith rahi shadi wale part me. contradiction hai usme jiske bare me sabhi bol rahe hai.
1. sonu ko ache or bure ladke ka pata hai to wo apni bahan ko usi bure ladke (javed) ke sath same room se niklte dekha or uske bare me kuch nahi kiya usko kaise explain karoge.???
2. uski pyaari didi usko jhut bolti rahi ki wo ladko se dur rahi hai ( mall se aane ke baad sonu ke sath baat chit me) fir bhi wo javed ko apni marji se chune diya boli sonu ko, jabki sonu ko mall wale din pata chal gya tha javed acha nahi hai...fir bhi sonu ko guilt kyu?? usko gussa kyu nahi aaya komal par.. isko kaise explain karoge.??
3. maa ko rok liya sabana ne galat karne se par wahi maa apni beti ko javed ka sath dete dekh kuch kyu nahi kaha ?? jabki sonu uski jaan tha or komal usko sabke samne mari... isko bhi ajeeb tarah se bataya gya hai.
4. sonu apni hi baato ko yaad nahi rakh skta kya javed ke bare me jo apni didi ko aise ladke sath dekh kar bhi abhi guilt feel kar raha ??
5. komal or javed ka mall me blowjob dena jabki rony abhi bhi bf hai uska or usse phle hi sab ho chuka tha,,,komal kaha se ekk sareef ladki hui to ye ekk bar ki galti hai kya??

story ka sahi flow hi story ko interesting banata hai. jo pahle ke parts me bahut acha raha hai. bas last ke kuch parts me match nahi ho raha. writer free hai jaisa chahe waisa likhne ko par padhna to reader ko hai or wahi log hi achi ya buri baato ko batayege. kai story aisi bhi hai jo inhi unmatched parts ke karan aage nahi badh payi kyuki unko aage explain hi nahi kiya ja skta tha. or reader kuch time tak hi bina logic wali stories padhte hai (bas hilane ke liye) baki jo bhi achi stories hai usme har ekk baat ka ekk logic hai chahe wo chudai ho ya fir ladaai jhagda ya kuch or. reader ka itna sab kuch bolne ka mtlb ye nahi ki writer acha nahi hai ya story band ho, reader bas ekk aisi story chahte hai jo flow me ho jisme koi baat mis match na ho( jarurt ke hisab se phle kuch or kaha or abhi kuch or ho raha hai aisa kuch)

ye story kafi achi hai islliye sabhi reader jo itne jude hue hai is story se , iski choti si baat me fark pakad le rahe hai or writer ko iss baat ka bura nahi manna chahiye balki khush hona chahiye ki logo ka judaw is had tak hai ki wo halki si mismatch ko bhi pakad le rahe hai. I hope ki writer ise positive way me le kar aage achi si story de hum sabhi ko.

Sochne layak tark hain dono ke

 

[kamdev99008]

Ab update dekar kissa aage badhao

 

[rajthakur52]

कहानी की शुरुआत अच्छी थी लेकिन अब इस कहानी मे पहले वाली बात नही रही। कहानी के नाम के हिसाब से तो पहले तीनो की चुदाई बाहर होती फिर सोनु अपनी शराफत छोडता लेकिन यह कहानी अब सोनु के इर्द-गिर्द हो गई। जैसे बाकी कहानियों मे होता हैं। शुरूआत मे कहानी सबसे अलग व अच्छी थी लेकिन अब वो बात नही रही।

 

[Gumnam1221]

कहानी की शुरुआत अच्छी थी लेकिन अब इस कहानी मे पहले वाली बात नही रही। कहानी के नाम के हिसाब से तो पहले तीनो की चुदाई बाहर होती फिर सोनु अपनी शराफत छोडता लेकिन यह कहानी अब सोनु के इर्द-गिर्द हो गई। जैसे बाकी कहानियों मे होता हैं। शुरूआत मे कहानी सबसे अलग व अच्छी थी लेकिन अब वो बात नही रही।

Kahani hamesha se sonu ke ird gird thi Bhai agar aapko full adultery padhni hai to adultery section me Jake padhe jahan jis tarah aap kahani bata rahe hai kaafi sari hain Please is kahani ko bhi us tarah kahniyon me badlne ke liye writer ko majbur na kijiye

 

[Visgu]

Writer bhai aap apne hisab se story likho wahi sabse badhiya hai
Agle update ki pratiksha hai

 

[Gumnam1221]

bro baat ye nahi hai ki javed ka murder ho ya komal ka suicide.. baat ye hai ki jo baate phle ki story me hai wo fit nahi baith rahi shadi wale part me. contradiction hai usme jiske bare me sabhi bol rahe hai.
1. sonu ko ache or bure ladke ka pata hai to wo apni bahan ko usi bure ladke (javed) ke sath same room se niklte dekha or uske bare me kuch nahi kiya usko kaise explain karoge.???
2. uski pyaari didi usko jhut bolti rahi ki wo ladko se dur rahi hai ( mall se aane ke baad sonu ke sath baat chit me) fir bhi wo javed ko apni marji se chune diya boli sonu ko, jabki sonu ko mall wale din pata chal gya tha javed acha nahi hai...fir bhi sonu ko guilt kyu?? usko gussa kyu nahi aaya komal par.. isko kaise explain karoge.??
3. maa ko rok liya sabana ne galat karne se par wahi maa apni beti ko javed ka sath dete dekh kuch kyu nahi kaha ?? jabki sonu uski jaan tha or komal usko sabke samne mari... isko bhi ajeeb tarah se bataya gya hai.
4. sonu apni hi baato ko yaad nahi rakh skta kya javed ke bare me jo apni didi ko aise ladke sath dekh kar bhi abhi guilt feel kar raha ??
5. komal or javed ka mall me blowjob dena jabki rony abhi bhi bf hai uska or usse phle hi sab ho chuka tha,,,komal kaha se ekk sareef ladki hui to ye ekk bar ki galti hai kya??

story ka sahi flow hi story ko interesting banata hai. jo pahle ke parts me bahut acha raha hai. bas last ke kuch parts me match nahi ho raha. writer free hai jaisa chahe waisa likhne ko par padhna to reader ko hai or wahi log hi achi ya buri baato ko batayege. kai story aisi bhi hai jo inhi unmatched parts ke karan aage nahi badh payi kyuki unko aage explain hi nahi kiya ja skta tha. or reader kuch time tak hi bina logic wali stories padhte hai (bas hilane ke liye) baki jo bhi achi stories hai usme har ekk baat ka ekk logic hai chahe wo chudai ho ya fir ladaai jhagda ya kuch or. reader ka itna sab kuch bolne ka mtlb ye nahi ki writer acha nahi hai ya story band ho, reader bas ekk aisi story chahte hai jo flow me ho jisme koi baat mis match na ho( jarurt ke hisab se phle kuch or kaha or abhi kuch or ho raha hai aisa kuch)

ye story kafi achi hai islliye sabhi reader jo itne jude hue hai is story se , iski choti si baat me fark pakad le rahe hai or writer ko iss baat ka bura nahi manna chahiye balki khush hona chahiye ki logo ka judaw is had tak hai ki wo halki si mismatch ko bhi pakad le rahe hai. I hope ki writer ise positive way me le kar aage achi si story de hum sabhi ko.

Bhai aapke sare points valid hai lekin piku2134 ne ricky bhai ke suggestion se disagree kiya hai Ricky bhai chahte hain Komal fir se kand kare javed ke sath vo bhi Sonu ke samne Jitna maine kahani padha hai aur jitna samjha hai Ghar ke sare members ko sonu ki nazar me girne ka darr hai aur usase dur hone darr hai Aur jab sonu ko pata chal gya to ek baat to tay hai Ab komal kisi se sambandh nhi banane wali

Hum ne kuch updates pehle ki dekha ki suman ne bhi dusre se maje karne ka vichar tyag diya tha Kewal is darr se jab Sonu ko pata chala to wo usase dur ho jayega Baki sabhi log sonu ke gussa na hone se naraz hai

Lekin jo ricky bhai suggest kar rahe wo komal ke bare me jitna likha gya hai Wo sab kharab ho jayega

 

[Mskumar]

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