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Suryaa

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Title- "Kal ho na ho"
Ek ladka au ek ladki bhote acchi doste thi……vo dono roje ghanto ek dusri si phone par baate karte rahte thi…..aur jabe vo ek dusri si baate karti to….unhi esa lagta tha ki…es duniya mai aur koe nahi hai…bs vo dono hi hai…..jabe vo dono ek dusri si bate karte thi…us samye vo belkul bhi dhukhi..ya nirash nahi hote thi….un palo mai jabe vo ek dusri si bate kar rahi…hote thi…tabe vo keval mne si nahi…balki apni har kan si khush hoti thi.

Par ek raate ki bate hai…jabe use ladke nai ladki ko message kiya tabe

Ladka- Hey Baby!...kya kar rahi ho

Ladki- Busy hu…bade mai bate kari…mujhe abhi apne assignment pura karna hai

Ladka-Kya tume y bade mai kar sakti ho…mujhe sache mai tumsi bhote jaruri bate karni hai

Ladki- Mujhe y assignment ..kal hi pura karna hai…

Ladka- Bs ek baar ….kya hm thodi der bate kar sakti hai…paka bade mai mai kabhi bhi phone nahi karuga

Ladki- Tumhi pata hai na y assignment meri leyi kitna jaruri hai….y jante huvi bhi tum mujhe kyu pareshan kar rahi ho…..bs ek baar kal mai y assignment pura kar du…usi bade hm kale je bare kar bate karige…tke hai

Ladka(dhuki mne si)- Tke hai….mi tumsi thodi der bade sms karta hu…jb tke tum apna assignment pura kar lo

[2 ghanto ki bade]

Ladka- Baby…kya tumhara assignment pura ho gaya…..agar ha to mujhe sms kardo…mujhe tum si baate karni hai

[Kor jawab nahi]

Ladka- Raate ki 1 bjne waali hai….koe to jawab do….mujhe tumhari chinta ho rahi hai…kyat um tke ho

Ladki- Maine tumhi ketni baar bataya hai…mai abhi assignment mai busy hu…..jesi he free hougi tb mai call kar dugi….aur ha ab rate bhote ho gae hai…es leyi so jao…Good night

Ladka- Mujhe maaf kardo mari karne tum pareshane ho gae…tum apna kaam karo mai ab tumhi kabhi bhi disturb nahi karuga…God promise….and Good Night

Agle dine ki bate hai jabe , ladki nai ladke ko sms kiya….par ladke nai koe jawab nahi diya…us ladki ko y bhote ajeb laga…kyuki esa kabhi bhi nahi huva tha….usni ek baar aur try ki aur messeage beja…par es baar bhi koe jawab nahi mila….phire usni call kiya par phire si koe jawabe nahi mila

Vo puri dine call aur sms karti rahi par koe jawabe nahi mila……es karn wo ab pareshan ho gae…usi yakine hogaya tha ki kuch to galate huva hai…Vo ladka esa nahi tha ki jo ek choti si bate par us si naraz ho gae ….par vo kar bhi kya sakti thi…intezzar ki alawa

Esi taraf 3-4 dine bête gae….vo roj us ladke ko call aur message karti par …usi koe jawab nahi mila…uski raato ki ninde ude gae thi….na vo kuch khate thi…aur na hi..kesi si bate karti thi….ab usi pata chla tha ki vo ladka uski leyi ketna mayni rakhta tha …

Tabhi

Tring tring

Y awwaz sunte hi vo apni phone ki aur dhodi…aur jesi hi usni notification dekha to use ladke ka sms dekha

Ladka- Hey! Kesi ho……aur tumhara assignment kesa raha

[SMS dekh kar vo kush ho gae…..]

Ladki- Bhade mai gaya assignment…tum y batao kit um mera caal kyu nahi utha rahi thi…agar busy thi to kam si kam es SMS to kar dete…vesi kya bate karni thi tumhi bolo

Tabhi ek aur SMS aaya

Ladka-Mai tumhi y batana chahta tha ki…..Mujhe blood cancer hai…..aur eski ilage ki leyi mai Kale London jar aha hu…..aur vaha jakar mera Operation hoga….…..aur agar tum y SMS pade rahi ho to…

Ladki- Kya?? Tumhi Blood cancer hai…..tum aaram karo abhi tumhi rest karna chahiye….Mai bade mai bate kar lugi…..abhi abhi tumhar aoperation huva hai

Tabhi ek aur SMS aaya

Ladka- Agar tum y SMS pade rahi ho …to eska maltb y ki …Mai ab es duniya mai nahi hu…..meni..London jaani si phele y draft message banae thi…jenmi meni time aur date set kar diya tha…..London jani si pehel mujhe laga tha….ki sayed mai vapas jinda na lote paao……es liye meni y kiya

Y SMS pade kar Ladki fhute fhute kar roni lagte hai aur khude ko kose nai lagti hai ki kyu usni usee raatebate nahi ki….. jabe vo ladka usi enti baar kah raha tha ki mujhe tum si ek baate karni hai …plz bs kuch der …..par usni us si bate ki wajah jaaani ki jagah usi y kah diya ki vo use si bate nahi karna chah ti kyuki vo busy hai…..ab mujhe bhi nahi jena mujhe bhi mar jana chahiye….use ki bina mai ab jinda nahi rah sakti…..”agar zindagi hmi nahi mila sakti to ab moute hi hmi ek karegi”

y sabe soch soch kar vo ro rahi thi aur aatmatya karni ka mne bana lrti hai..… vo phel khud eko jor jor si Thapade maar ni lagte hai…..aur phire jabe uski nazar chate par jate hai tabe

Ladki(mne mai)- Mujhe ab jene ka koe hk nahi…mujhe mar jana chahiye….mai es pankhi si tange kar apni jane de dungi

Y soch kar vo apni dupati ka fanda banate hai…aur phanke si bande deti hai….aur jesi hi vo …y fanda apni gale mai dalte hai…..tabhi usi ek awwaz aate hai

“Y tum kya kar rahi ho”

Y awwaz sune kar vo ladki hiran ho gate hai aur sochte hai

Ladki(mne mai)- Tumhara pyaar sabh mai mahan hai…..ab jabe mai y jante hu…kit um es duniya mai nahi ho…..phire bhi mujhe tumhari awwaz aa rahi hai..

Tabhi usi ek aur awwaze sunae di

“Agar tum mujhe si pyar karte ho…to y fanda likalo apni gale si….aur utro yaha si”

Ladki- Y to tumhari awwaze hai…..tum kaha ho…..mujhe dikhaye kyu nahi de rahi

“ Mai ….mare chukka hu…..aur mare huvi kabhi dhikae nahi dete”

Ladki(rote huvi)- Mai bhi ketni abagine hu….jabe tum meri saath thi….tabe mujhe tumhara mole nahi pata tha……aur jabe tumhara mole pata chla ….tabe tke tum es duniya si chle gae…Mujhe maaf kardo

Tabhi usi ek aur awwaze sunae di

“Chahiye mai es duniya mai nahi hu….par tumhari dil mai…tumhari saaso mai… mai hmesa rahuga”

“Mai to mar chukka hu….par y tumhar apyaar hai jesni marni ki bade bhi ….Mujhe tum si dur nahi honi diya…..aur maafi gero si mangi jaate hai apno si nahi”

Y sune kar Ladki rone lagte hai

Tabhi usi uski saamni ek aakarte bnte dikae deti hai….jesi dekh kar vo Ladki boleti hai

Ladki- Tum aa gae…..mujhe yekine tha …kit um mujhe chode kar nahi ja sakti

Ladka- Mai to chla gaya tha….par tum hari pyaar ni mujhe jaani hi nahi diya

Y sune kar ladki use ladke ki taraf baageti hai…aur use si gale lagni lageti hai

Par jese hi …vo use sig le lagni ki dode ti hai….to vo dekhti hai…ki uska haath use ladke si aar paar ho raha tha….y dekh kar vo hiran ho jate hai….aur kahte hai

Ladki- Aakhire y kesi…tumni kaha tha…ki mera pyaar tumhi wapas li aaya to phire….mai tumhi chu kyu nahi paa rahi

Ladka- Kyuki mai aatma hu…aur aatma prem ki tarah hoti hai

Ladki- Prem ki tarah vo kesi??

Ladka- Prem ho chahiye aatma …dono ko hi keval masus kiya ja sakta hai….chuwa nahi ja sakta

Y sune kar Ladki rone lagte hai…y dekh kar Ladka bolta hai

Ladka- Khabardaar….agar ek bhi aasu bahaya to….mujhe si bura koe nahi hoga samje…..tum nahi janti ki y assu meri leyi keti anmol hai….aur tum bhi ajeb ho

Ladki(sisakte huvi)- Vo kyu??

Ladka- Kush honi ki bate par ro rahi ho

Ladki- Tum mujhe chode kar chle age….esmi kush honi ki kya bate hai batao

Ladka- Kya sach mai …mai tumhi chode kar chode gaya hu

Ladki- Vo…

Ladka- Kya vo…..mai tumhi kkabhi bhi akela nahi chode sakta …..kyuki akela usi choda jata hai..jo hm si alag ho….par tum mujhe si jhude ho…..aur mai tumsi…….jenka aastitvate hi ek dusri si jhuda hai….vo bhala ek dusri ko kesi akela chode sakta hai

Ladki- Tum sahi kah rahi ho…….prem to aatmo ka milane hai……prem sarir ki adine nahi hai…..kyuki prem mne si kiya jata hai tne si nahi…..aur hmni bhi prem mne si kiya hai…tane si nahi aur

[es si phele ki ladki kuch bolti ladka bola]

Ladka- Aur Prem mai Viyog ka koe esthan[jaghah] nahi hai….balki prem to Milan ka naam hai…jot ne si nahi mne si hota hai…..aur hmar amne hmesa si ek dusri si juda rahega

Ladki- Sahi kaha tumni…..vesi vo kya bate thi jes ki karn tum mujhe kah rahi thi…ki mujhe kush hona chahiye

Ladka(mazak ki mode mai)- Vo bate y hai ki…ab hamri pasie bach jaae gina….es liye….warna to hmari puri pocket mani….phone ki bill pay karni mai hi chle jate thi

Y sune kar Ladki Hase deti hai

Y dekh kar Ladka kahta hai

Ladka- Bs esi hi hse ti rahna….

Ladki- Tum to esi kah rahi ho…jesi ki tume kahi ja rahi ho…..ab to hm hmesa sath hai na

Y kah kar Ladki Ladke ki aur dekh ti hai….par usi ladka gayab hot ahuva dekhta hai

Ladki(gabrate huvi)- Y tumhi kya ho raha hai…..tum gayab kyu ho rahi ho

Ladka- Ab meri jaani ka samye ho chukka hai…es liye mujhe jana hoga

Ladki(rote huvi)- Nahi tum nahi ja sakti…kyuki tumni mujhe si kaha tha ki hm hmesa sath rahegi……aur abhi abhi to tumni bataya tha ki prem Sharir ka mohtaj nahi hai

Ladka- Yahi to mai kah raha hu…prem sarir ka mohtaj nahi hai…..tum jabe bhi mujhe bulaogi…mai jarur aao ga…..kabhi awwaz bne kar…..to kabhi kesi ki duwa bne kar…..lekine wada karta hu…ki aao ga jarur….mujhe abhi jana hoga…..kyuki….meri aakhri icchya yahi thi…ki mai tumhi bs aakhri baar hasta huva dekhna chahte tha…….bs tum hmesa yu hi haste rahna….tum hi meri kasam hai….chahiye kuch bhi ho gae…..tumhari hoto si hasi gayab nahi honi chahiye….vada karo……mujhe si….vado karo…

Ladki(rote huvi)- Mai vada karti hu……..

Ladka- Apna yaada mate thodna ….tumhi hmari payaar ki kasam hai

Y kah kar Ladka gayab ho gata hai

Aur ladke ke gane ki bade bhi ladki chah kar bhi …ro nahi pate kyuki…vo yaade si bandhi hue thi

Dine bete ti gae dine mahino mai bdle aur mahine saalo mai….par dono nai apna vaada nahi thoda

Ladki nai kabhi bhi apni hoto si hasi gayab nahi honi de vahi Lake nai bhi apna vada nibhaya aur jabe jabe Laki ni usi bulaya vo ….aaya….kabhi…Ahwwa bne kar to kabhi kesi ki duwa bne kar


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Agar es kahani ni ek ple ki leyi bhi aap ki dil ko chuwa to….to es kahani ki sekh ko hmesa yade rakhna

Jo bhi karo aaj karo…kyuki pata nahi dosto


...........“Kale ho na ho”.........
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Anu ektak baadalon ki taraf dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ki bahti hawaon ke sath badalti akirtiyon me dhalte rui se ye badal ke tukde man ko kitna sukun dete hai...lagta hai jese apna hi wajood wakt ke jhoko ke sath kabhi simat raha hai, to kabhi naye aayamo ko chune ka prayaas kar raha hai...ekk ajeeb sa kotohul tha uske man ke har kono me...log khate hai, prem ki umar to bus jawani me hi hoti hai.. magar anu, uski jawani ko is umar me bhi utni teji se mehsus kar rahi thi....uska man to chah raha tha ki wo bhi hawa ke jhokon ke sath sath udd jaye..vaha jahan kisi ki bhi najar na pade us par...." Bus wo ho aur uske ehsaas "....

Wo bachpan se aaj tak apni jindagi apne hi tariko se jeeti aai hai...kabhi jindagi ki gati ko chand padao me nahi bata balki nadi ke prawah ki tarah bah jane diya...us din amit ne use cheda tha," tum dusro jesi bilkul bhi nahi , kafi alag tarah se sochti ho aur apni jindagi ke prati tumhara raweya bhi bahut alag hai...."

"Haa sach kaha . vese hota to yahi hai ki logo ki jindagi ki shuruwat me tay kar diya jata hai ki is umar me padhai puri karni hai , us umar me shaadi , bacche , aur fir umar bhar ke liye unhi rishto me bhandhe rahna ...bhale hi khushi se jayada gum hi kyu na mile ...mai gise pite fromule se alag jina chahti hu,,,isliye khud ko ek makshad ke hawale kar diya ...makshad ke bina insaan kitna adhura hota hain na."
"par mujhe to lagta hai ki jo insaan adhura hota hai, wahi jine ka makshad talaashta hai."

amit ne uski kahi baat ki mazak udane jesi baat kahi thi par woh amit ke is baat se khud ko vichlit hota dhikhana nahi chahti thi. usne khud ko samjhaya ki bilkul viprit soch hai amit ki, to is mein burai kya hai ? nadi ke 2 kinaron ki tarah hum bhi mil nahi sakte par sath to chal sakte hai. usne amit se bus itna kaha tha , " kya insaan ko pura hone ke liye dusre ki madad leni jaruri hai ? kya prakirti ne insaan ko pura bana kar nahi bheja hai ? log yeh kyu samajte hai ki jeewansathi ke bina insaan adhura hai."

"maine ye to nahi kaha," Amit ne pratirodh kiya.

"magar tumhare kahne ka matlab to yahi tha."

"nahi esha nahi hai .tumne meri baat ko usi roop me dekha jesa tum dusro ko bolte sunti ho "
fir thodi der Anu chup rahi to Amit ne use chhedte huye pucha,'tumhari baatein mujhe samaj me nahi aati .par bahut achhi lagti hai ..lagta hai ki sabdo ke sath khel rahi ho..kaash tumhara ye andaaj mere pass bhi hota."

"waise shabdon se khelte to tum bhi ho .antar sirf itna hai ki dono ka andaaj alag alag hai." ye kahte huye ek rajbhari muskan aai thi Anu ke hontho par...use na jane kyu aajkal Amit se milna , baate karna accha lagta tha..

kisi ko pasand karna esha ehsaas hai. jise lakh chupana chaho dusro se khabar lag hi jati hai..kal ki baat hai..wo aagan me baithi Amit ke bare me soch rahi thi ki uski beti Neha ki aawaj gunji. "mamma akeli baithkar mushkura kyun rahi ho ?" Wo koi jawab nahi de saki. turant khadi ho gai jese uski koi chori pakdi gai ho., fir khud ko sambhal kar pyar se beti ke kandho par hath rakhte huye boli ."soch rahi hu aaj khane me kya banau," fir kitchen ki taraf chal di ..kadi banate samay sahsa hi purane jakham hare ho gaye...uske dimag me Mohit ki kahi gayi baatein gunjne lagi...

"Anu tum khana accha banati ho ..par jo bhi ho tumhare banaye gaye khane me wo swaad nahi jo maa ke khane me aata hai.."
Anu ko apne pati ki ye baatein uske mann ko bhed rahi thi..kyunki saamne bethi saas mand mand uski taraf dekh kar mushkura rahi thi..yeh ek din ki baat nahi roj esha hota tha Mohit apni maa ka gungaan karta , maa muskarti aur Anu ke jale par namak ka kaam karta..Anu baat baat par mohit se jhagda kar apna gussa nikalti..to mohit bhi kabhi kabhi gusse me use suna deta...

Anu ke pita ne kitne armano se Mohit ke sath saadi ki thi....Mohit Anu se payar bhi karta tha..par choti chhoti baaton ne kab rishto me darar daal di use pata hi nahi chala..kabhi saas ke sath batmiji ki baat , kabhi dosto , risthdaro ki sahi aavbhagat n karne ki siykayat inhi sab ka hawala de kar Mohit us par baraste rahta tha....un dono ke bich samay ke sath duriya badhti chali gayi ...darshal uski saas bhi sada Anu ke kilaf Mohit ko bhadkati rahti aur ulti-sidhi baate kahti lagatar apni maa se kahi hui batto ko hi sach maan leta hai..fir ek din me Anu ke muh se saas ke liye kuch esha nikal gaya jo uski saas ne badachada ke Mohit se kar di...bina kuch puche Mohit ne maa ke samne hi Anu ko thappad maar diya ....Mohit ka yah savbhav Anu ke dil me kaate ki tarah chubh gaya usne usi samay apna saman pack karke ghar chodne ka faisala liya...use kisi ne nahi roka vah apni beti Neha ko lekar nikalne wali thi ki Mohit ne apni beti ka hath tham liya...unka hath jatak kar Anu apni beti ko lekar nikal aai...picche se saas ki aawaj kanno me gunji ," is tarah ghar chod kar jaa rahi to yaad rakhna , lut kar aane ki jarurat nahi hai ..."

fir sachmuch paristhitiya esi bani ki me ne unki surat dekhne ka mooka nahi mila...2 saal pahle hi saas ki bimari ki vajah se unki jaan chai gayi...choti nanad ne ab tak sambhal rakha tha magar pichhle saal Mohit ne uski bhi saadi bhi kar di...Anu ko saadi me bulaya bhi tha lekin Anu nahi gayi..bus phone par subhkamana dedi thi..ab Mohit bilkul akela rahte the...Anu ko lagta tha ki ve usse talak lekar dusri saadi karenge, par esha kuch nahi hua..par yeh baat alag hai Mohit ne kabhi usse wapas aane ko bhi nahi kaha...haa wo neha se humesha mil leta tha....

Anu ne khud ko ek company me jod liya tha to use jine ki wajah mil gayi aur wahin par Amit mila jisse milkar Anu ko esha laga usko jingdi me dobara moka mila hai...40 paar kar chuki thi aur Neha 11th me aa gayi thi..woh dhire dhire Amit ke karib hoti jaa rahi thi..shuruwaat me Anu ne chaha khud ko rok le par esha na kar saki wo Amit ke mohpasha me bandhti chali gayi...Amit bhi kabhi kabhi Anu ke ghar aata Neha ke liye koi na koi gift lekar aata ...yaha Anu ko kushi thi ki vah beti ko apnane ko tayar hai....

us din Neha apne school se jaldi ghar aa gayi thi...maa beti idhar-udhar ki baat kar rahi thi...tabhi Neha boli ,"maa, ek baat kahu?"
"haa beta, bolo na"
"maa aapko Amit uncle acche lagte hai na ?" thoda ruk ruk ke bolti woh. fir boli ," haa beta , par vah tumhe bhi acche lagte hai na ?"

"maa pata nahi kyu unka saparsh vesa nahi lagta jesa papa ka hai..papa karib rahte hai to accha lagta hai jese mai surakshit hun..magar uncle bahut ajib tarah se dekhte hai .bilkul bhi accha nahi lagta mujhe " dil ki baat kah di thi Neha ne ....Anu ko jhatka sa laga.....

"aur maa, ek baat batau"

"haa haa Neha bolo."

"pichle monday school me der jayda ho gai thi aapne Amit uncle k beja tha mujhe lane ko."

"haa beta, to kya hua."

"maaa...." achanak Neha ki aakhe bhar aai,"maa, ve mujhe kuch ajib tarike se chune lage the tabhi mujhe rasste me kajal dikh gai maine foran gaadi rukwa ke Kajal ko baitha liya warna jane kya..." sabad uske gale me atak gaye the. ek ajib si becheni Anu ke aander utarti chali gai....

"tune pahle kyu nahi bataya?"

"mai kya khati maa, mujhe laga aap naraj hogi."

"nahi nahi beta, tujhe se jayda mere liye kuch bhi nahi,"
aur apne aagosh me bhar liya tha usne Neha ko.usne man hi man nisichya kar liya ki Amit ko ghar kabhi nahi bulayegi. bahar bhi jayda milne nahi jayegi. bhale hi apni jindgi ka faishla karne ka usse pura hak hai magar apni beti ki bhavanao ko bhi najaranzaad nahi kar sakti,

aagle din office se hi Anu ne Amit ke sath ek duri bana li..office me sabka dhayan is baat par gaya ..uske bagal me baithne wali Mira ne usse sidha sawal hi puch liya,"kya hua anu?"aajkal Amit ko bhav nahi de rahi ho?"

"nahi eshi koi baat nahi. bus mujhe apni mayada ka khyal rakhna hoga na, ek beti ki maa hu mai."

"bahut sahi kiya hai tumne Anu, "Mira ne kaha,"mujhe khushi hai ki tum uska aagla sikar hone se bach gai."

aagla sikar..." vah chaunk gai...

"bholi-bhali , aakeli mahilao se dosti kar un ki bahu betiyo par hath saaf karna khub aata hai use."

"kyaaa....?"

ek baar to jaise wo hil hi gai thi.. yani Neha ka shak sahi tha..wakai Amit ki niyat saaf nahi. ek adhure aur ginone payar ka ahsaas use aander tak vichlit kar raha tha...jin lamho me usee amit ke liye kuch mehsus kiya tha wo lamhe usse kisi shul ki tarah chubhne lage the..accha hua uski aankhe khul gai. dil hi dil me rahat ki saans li thi usne .jiwan ke is mod me use in baate se rahat pane ke liye usne 3 din ki chutti leli aur pura samay apni beti ke sath bitane ka faisla liya..dinbhar shopping, masti aur nayi nayi jagah gumne jana yahi unki dincharya ban gayi thi in 3 dino me....

lekin fir kai dino tak udaas si rahi Anu..jab bhi jindagi me usne payar ki chahat ki.. to use upeksha aur dhoka mila...sayad uski jindagi me payar likha hi nahi hai. usse umra bhar aakle hi rahna hai is vichar ke sath reh reh ke tadap uthi thi wo...ek din uski beti ne matha sahlate huye usse kaha ,"maa, aajkal aap udas kyu rahti ho?"

Anu ne kuch nahi kaha bus muskra ke rah gai...

"maa, aap wapas papa ke paas kyu nahi chalti ,papa acche hai maa." Anu ka chehra pila pad gaya..Mohit se alag hone ke baad pahli dafa Neha ne wapas chalne ki baat kahi thi ..koi to baat hogi jo is massom ko pereshaan kiye huye hai. kaha vah biti jindagi ko yaad bhi nahi karna chahti thi aur kaha uski beti use wapas usi duniya me chalne ko kah rahi hai..

anu ne payar se Neha ka matha sahalaya, "beta, aap wapas papa ke paas jana kyu chahti ho? aapko yaad nahi, papa aapki ,maa ke sath kitna jhagda kiya karte the,"

"par maa, papa aapse payar bhi to karte the," usne kaha aur chupchap Anu ki taraf dekhne lagi...Anu ne uski aakhe band karte huye kaha ," ab so ja Neha . kal school bhi jana hai na tujhe." sach to yah tha Anu uski nazron ka samna hi nahi kar pa rahi thi. uske baato ke jaal me dubne lagi thi. kai sawal uske man me uthne lage the. Wo soch rahi thi ki Mohit mujhse itna pyaar karte to mujhe alag hone se roka kyu nahi? kabhi mujhe kaha kyu nahi mujse pyaar karte hai ..mai to sayad kuch thi bhi nahi jindagi me tabhi mujhe kabhi manne ki kosis bhi nahi ki sorry bhi nahi kaha...ye sochte huye Anu so gai....

ekdin pados ki mahila se Neha ki jhadap ho gayi. vese aunty aunty kah kar Neha uske sath kafi sari baate karti thi aur close bhi thi magar jab usne Anu ke bare me kuch ulti sidhi baate kahi to Neha apna aapa kho baithi aur us aunty ko badchad kar baate sunane lagi...us wakt Anu ne use chup karaya...baad me jab Anu ne is bare me baat karni chahi ki jo bhi hua sahi nahi tha, to Neha ruwasi aawaj me boli, "maa, wo aapko baat suna rahi thi aur yah baat mujhe sahan nahi hui mujhe khud samajh nahi aa raha tha ki mai unke prati itna gussa kesi ho gayi..Anu khamosh ho gai thi..Neha ki baat uske dil ko chu gai thi...

"ek baat kahu maa" achanak Neha ne maa ke galle me payar se apna hath dalte huye kaha ," maa, papa ki aap se ladai sabse jayada kis baat par hoti thi? jaha tak mujhe yaad hai, is wajah se na ki vah dadi ka side lekar aapse ladai karte the."

"haa beta, yahi baat mujhe jayda buri lagti thi ki baat sahi ho ya galat humesha apni maa ki side lete the."

"maa mujhe lagta hai, papa utne bhi galat nahi, jitna aap samajne lagi hai. ve aaj bhi aapse bahut payar karte hai..viswaas karo maa..bus jahir nahi kar paate,'' Neha ne badi masumiyat se kaha tha..uske baato me chipa isara Anu samaj gai thi..usse khushi hui uski beti wakai samajdar ho gai hai....Anu neha ka man taltolte huye pucha,"ek baat bata Neha, kya tu aaj bhi wapas papa ke pass jana chati hai?kya unke hath mujhe pitta hua dekh payegi yaa fir mujhe chod kar papa ke pass chali jayegi tu?"

"nahi mamma, esha bilkul bhi nahi hai . mai apni mamma ko chodkar kahi nahi jaugi," kahte huye Neha Anu se lipat gai...beti ke dil me chippe khwaish se anzaan nahi thi vah.. par apne jakhmo ko yaad kar kabhi bhi himmat nahi hoti thi uske wapas lotne ki ek baar fir kadve atit ne usse apna fasila badlne se rok liya tha....

aaj Neha ka janamdin tha..Anu ne uske liye khas taur par cake manhwaya tha aur khubsurat gulabi ranag ki dress kharidi thi...usko pahan kar Neha bahut khush lag rahi thi,,party ke liye usne paas-padosi ke kuch logo aur neha ki khas friends ko bulaya tha...Neha ne apne papa ko bhi bulaya hoga, is baat ka yakin tha usse... 8 baje party suru honi thi...aaj office se pahle chutti lekar nikal jayegi sochkar wo jaldi jaldi kaam nipatane lagi thi...thik 3 baje wo office se nikal gai..abhi raste me hi thi ki Mohit ka phone aaya...bahut bechain aawaj me Mohit ne kaha," anu ,humri Neha....."

"kya hua Neha ko?" pereshan hokar Anu ne pucha...

"darshal , ghar me achanak hi aag lag gai ..mujhe lagta hai ki yeh sab short circuit ki wajah se hua hoga..mai Neha ko lekar hospital ja raha hu, city hospital. tum bhi jald pahucho."

anu dhodti bhagti hospital pahuchi to dekha besudh sa Mohit kone ne bitha hai..Anu ko dekhte hi Mohit dhud kar aaya aur rote huye anu ko apne bajuwo me bhandh liya...esha laga hi nahi jese kai saal se dono ek dusre se dur rahe ho...ek ajib sa sukhad aehsaas hua tha use ..laga jese bus wakt yahi tham gaya ho ...fir unse alag hoti hui anu boli, "Neha kaha hai?kesi hai?"
"chalo mere sath ,"Mohit bola...fir dono neha ke kamre me pahunche to Neha unhe sath dekh kar eshi halat me hi mushkura padi....

Anu ne uska matha sahlate huye pucha," beta, kesi hai tu?"

Neha muskrati hui boli ,"jab mere mammy papa mere sath hai to bhala mujhe kya ho sakta hai? papa hi the jinone us dhuye, jalan, aur aag ki lapato se nikal kar mujhe hospital tak pahucahya...papa, I really love u."

Anu chup khadi baap beti ka pyar dekhti rahi.. use dil me aander kuch judta hua mehsus hua..apne aander ka dard simatta hua sa laga...use jindagi ne sayad woh wapas de diya tha jise woh kho chuki thi...sayad yah usi purnayata ka ehesaas tha jo pahle kabhi Mohit ke sath mehsus hota tha ...achanak Neha ne Anu ka hath thama aur usse Mohit ke hathon me deti hui boli ,"mujhe aap dono se bus ek hi gift chaiye aur wo yeh hai ki aap ek ho jao...kya mere janamdin par aap dono mujhe itna bhi nahi de sakte?" Anu aur Mohit pahle to sakpaka gaye magar mushkura kar dono ne Neha ko chum liya...Neha ne Anu aur Mohit dono ko naye sire se jindagi ko ek baar fir se jina sikha diya tha........

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प्यार

“रवि तुम्हारे सिर में तो जूं हो रही हैं” निशा ने उसके बालों पर हाथ फिरते हुये कहा

“में तो निकाल नहीं सकता.... और कोई निकालता नहीं” लड़के ने बेबसी से कहा तो निशा ने अपने सीने से लगाते हुये कहा

“दोपहर को मेरे पास आ जाना में देखती हूँ”

लड़का अपनी तख्ती और कलाम-दवात लेकर गाँव के स्कूल मे चला गया

दोपहर को

“मौसी जी लो में आ गया”

“हाँ मुझे पता है...... स्कूल से अनिल भय्या आए थे घर पर शिकायत करने.... उनके सिर मे तख्ती मारकर भाग आया स्कूल से”

लड़का मुस्कुराकर बोला “और क्या करता वो मुझे मारते उससे पहले मेंने ही मार दिया”

“चलो बैठ जाओ यहाँ.... उषा! रवि के सिर से जूँ निकाल देना” निशा ने पड़ोस की अपनी सहेली से कहा

“यार में तो अब कुछ और ही निकालती हूँ.... राधा! चल तू कुछ नहीं कर रही तू निकाल बैठकर”


रात में ...................

"माताजी! यहाँ सब की माँ हैं मेरी क्यों नहीं..... क्या मेरी माँ मर गईं" रवि ने अपनी नानी से पूंछा

"ऐसे नहीं कहते... तुम्हारी माँ दिल्ली रहती हैं तुम्हारे पिताजी के साथ और तुम्हारे छोटे भाई और बहन भी उनके साथ हैं"

"तो मुझे क्यों नहीं वो अपने साथ रखतीं..... मुझे रात को अपनी माँ के पास सोने का मन करता है... जैसे और सब सोते हैं"

"तो मेरे पास सोते तो हो .... में भी तो तुम्हारी माँ की माँ हूँ"

रवि गुमसुम सा अपनी नानी से चिपककर सो जाता है

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"दीदी! रवि कह रहा था की उसकी माँ दिल्ली में रहती हैं..... बहुत बड़ा शहर है न दिल्ली"

"दीदी! रवि बता रहा था उसके एक बहन और एक भाई भी हैं... लेकिन उसने उन्हें देखा नहीं है... कहता है जब माँ लेने आएगी तो दिल्ली जाकर रहूँगा और अपने बहन भाई के साथ खेला करूंगा"

"उषा! कभी कभी तो रवि को देखके बहुत दुख होता है.... सुशीला दीदी जब उन दोनों बच्चों को अपने साथ रखे हैं तो इसे भी तो रख सकती हैं........ हमारे पास कितना भी सुखी रहे लेकिन असली खुसी तो इसे अपने घर, माँ, बाप, बहन, भाई के बीच ही होगी..... पता नहीं मन मे क्या सोचता रहता होगा उनके बारे में"

"क्या सोचेगा निशा...... वो कभी देखने मिलने भी नहीं आतीं... पता नहीं उनकी सूरत भी इसे याद होगी की नहीं"

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"राधा मुझसे शादी करोगी ना.... देखो अब तो उषा मौसी, निशा मौसी ही नहीं नानाजी नानीजी भी कहते हैं की तुमसे शादी होगी मेरी"

"पागल हो तुम.... ऐसे कैसे शादी होगी... वो तो सब मज़ाक करते हैं..... में तो तुम्हारी मौसी हूँ.... मेरे पैर छूया करो और मौसी जी बोला करो"

"मेरी माँ नहीं हैं तो सब मज़ाक उड़ते हैं मेरा...... वो तो सब बड़े हैं... तुम तो मुझसे छोटी हो फिर भी पागल कहती हो..... आने दो मेरी माँ को तब बताऊंगा"

"ऐसे ही इंतज़ार करते रहना.... दीदी ने तुम्हें छोड़ दिया है..... अब कभी नहीं आएंगी.... अब तुम हमेशा यहीं रहोगे.... और मेरी शादी हो जाएगी... में अपने घर चली जाऊँगी"

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कुछ साल बाद...

"तुम फिर आ गए यहीं.... देख लो.... मेंने कहा था.... तुम अब हमेशा यहीं रहोगे"

में पढ़ने आया हूँ.... 2-4 साल रहूँगा फिर तुम्हें लेकर अबकी बार माँ के पास सीधा दिल्ली जाऊंगा... अबकी बार मामाजी के पास नहीं रहूँगा.... मामाजी बता रहे थे अबकी बार माँ मुझे अपने साथ ले जाएंगी.... यहाँ से"

"मुझे ले जाने का तो भूल जाओ.... तुमने जो 4 पन्ने का प्रेम पत्र भेजा था डाक से वो पापा को मिल गया है.... तुम्हें देखते ही देखना क्या हाल करेंगे तुम्हारा"

"जाओ .... तुम्हारे बाप से नहीं डरता..... वो तो रिश्ते मे नाना हैं इसलिए उनकी इज्ज़त करता हु... वरना अब तक तुम्हें भागा ले जाता....."

"किसने कहा में तुम्हारे साथ भाग जाऊँगी......... हिम्मत है तो उठाकर लेकर जाना .... सबके बीच से... लेकिन दीदी से तो पूंछ लेना पहले की मुझे घर मे रखेंगी भी की नहीं"

"अबकी बार गया तो वापस तुम्हें लेने ही आऊँगा"

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"और आज उस बात को 30 साल हो गए... में तुम्हारा इंतज़ार ही करती रही कि आओगे और मुझे मंडप में से उठा के ले जाओगे....सबके सामने" राधा ने एक ठंडी सान भरते हुये कहा " आज तुम मेरी बेटियों के लिए अपने 'मौसा जी' को लड़के दिखा रहे हो..... अपनी 'बहनों' कि शादी करवाने के लिए भागदौड़ कर रहे हो"

"क्या करता........ तुम्हारे लिए माँ को छोड़ देता? बचपन से जिस माँ के साथ रहना चाहता था वो मुझे ले जाने को ही इसीलिए आयीं कि में ननिहाल में रहकर बिगड़ रहा हूँ"

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नफ़रत

"रवि बेटा ये तुम्हारी माँ हैं... इनके पास जाओ" नानी ने कहा

"नहीं मेरी माँ तो तुम हो..... ये तो सुशीला हैं..... तुम्हारी बेटी... तुम ही मिलो इनसे"

"रवि में सच मे तुम्हारी माँ हूँ" सुशीला ने आँखों मे आँसू लाते हुये रवि कि ओर अपना था बढ़ाया "मेरे पास आओ"

रवि रोता हुआ घर से बाहर भाग गया

"माताजी! रवि को में अपने साथ ले जाऊँगी..... यहाँ रहके कैसे कैसे कारनामे करने लगा है.... किशन चाचाजी की राधा को प्रेम पत्र भेजा इसने .... वो तो वीरेंदर भैया ने मुझे बताया नोएडा पहुँचकर.... बताओ उनका लड़का हमारे यहाँ कितनी शराफत से रह रहा है और मेरा लड़का उनकी बेटी के साथ ये सब कर रहा है.... वो तो हमारी वजह से वीरेंदर ने कुछ नहीं कहा.... नहीं तो उसकी बहन का मामला था....... पता नहीं क्या करता"

"वो तो बच्चा है... जैसे सब ने कहा उसने मन मे बसा लिया..... वैसे इसमें बुराई क्या है.... किशन से बात करते हैं और दोनों कि शादी करा देते हैं" नानीजी ने साधारण भाव से कहा " रही बात वीरेंदर कि तो वो आज जो कुछ भी है तुम्हारी वजह से ही है... नहीं तो गाँव में गाँजा, शराब पीता, जुआ खेलता...इसीलिए वो रवि क्या हमसे भी कुछ कहने की हिम्मत नहीं कर सकता"

"नहीं माताजी! में अपने गाँव से बेटे कि शादी नहीं करूंगी...चाहे कहीं से भी करूँ... लेकिन यहाँ से नहीं.... पहले ही देवर कि शादी करके पछता रही हूँ"

"बेटी में तो इसलिए कह रही हूँ.... दोनों बच्चों का मन भी रह जाएगा.... कितने सालों से दोनों यही सुनते आ रहे हैं कि उनकी शादी होगी"

"माताजी वो मज़ाक था बचपन का...... अब वो बड़े हो गए हैं.... सब समझ जाएंगे"

"ठीक है... जैसा तुम समझो... आखिर बेटा तो तुम्हारा ही रहेगा" नानीजी ने दुखी मन से कहा

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"पिताजी में एटा जा रहा हूँ" रवि ने अपने पिताजी से कहा

"जा रहे हो तो चले जाओ... लेकिन मेरे गाँव मत जाना... कल राधा कि शादी है" माँ ने कहा

"तो वहाँ चला जाऊंगा... उनके यहाँ से निमंत्रण भी आया है"

"हरगिज नहीं... निमंत्रण में न पहुँचने का जवाब में दे दूँगी किशन चाचा जी को ...रविंदर को सब समझा दिया है मेंने........ तुम अगर वहाँ गए तो लौटकर कभी हमारे पास मत आना"

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डर

"भैया राधा बुआ .... मिल तो लो" मामाजी कि बेटी ने कहा तो मेंने पलटकर देखा और लगा जैसे वक़्त वहीं ठहर गया। आज 10 साल बाद भी वैसी कि वैसी...... बहुत कुछ कहना था... बहुत कुछ पूंछना था.... लेकिन न तो मौका था न दस्तूर....

सरिता मामीजी (वीरेंदर मामाजी कि पत्नी) कि रोड एक्सिडेंट में मौत हो गयी... कल से में उनही के साथ था... पहले पंचनमा, फिर पोस्टमॉर्टम फिर दाह संस्कार ... कुछ रिश्तेदार रुके हुये थे तो व्यवस्था देखने को में उनही के घर रुका था...

"कैसे हो" अचानक पीछे से राधा कि आवाज आयी...

"मौज में...हमेशा कि तरह" मेंने हँसकर कहा

"अब फुर्सत मिल गयी शादी करने की" उसने तंज़ सा कसा " कहीं अब भी शादी के दिन किसी और कम में बिज़ि मत हो जाना"

में क्या कहता.... " अब तो शादी ही करनी है... और रह ही क्या गया करने को"

"हाँ! जीजाजी खत्म होने पर सब ज़िम्मेदारी तुम पर ही आ गयी... अपनी भी पढ़ाई शादी... और भाई-बहन की भी"

"उनके जिंदा रहते भी कुछ अलग नहीं था... तुम्हारे गाँव से आया हु तब से पिताजी का बिज़नस भी में ही चलाता था.... "

" कब कि शादी है.... ?"

"10 दिन बाद.... आओगी?"

"तुम मेरी शादी में आए?"

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"जीजाजी ये ही ड्राईवर मिला साथ लाने को" राधा ने कहा

"तुमसे मिलाने लाया हूँ... कह रहा था... मौसी कि बहुत याद आ रही है" चाचाजी ने हँसकर कहा

"और... बड़ी दीदी कैसी हैं... उन्हें भी ले आते साथ" राधा ने रवि से कहा

" वो तो तभी रेखा (बहन) कि शादी के 2 महीने बाद ही कौशल (भाई) के साथ रहने गुडगाँव चलीं गईं...."

मेंने कहा तो मेरे दिल के दर्द को महसूस करके राधा ने कहा

"कोई बात नहीं रह आएंगी कौशल के साथ भी कुछ दिन"

"नहीं... अब वो कौशल के साथ ही रहना चाहती हैं.... और कौशल मेरे साथ नहीं रहना चाहते"

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"कौशल की शादी करा दो.... " माँ ने कहा

"एक बार अपनी पसंद से शादी कर तो चुके हैं... अब क्या बार बार शादी करते रहेंगे" मेंने कहा

"वो लड़की सही नहीं थी... अबकी कोई घरेलू लड़की देखकर करा दो.... तुम बड़े हो तो तुम्हारा फर्ज़ है"

"आपको तो 6 महीने अपने साथ रख नहीं सके.... जिससे प्यार का दावा करके शादी कि उसके साथ 2 साल नहीं काट पाये अब क्या गारंटी है" मेंने झल्लाते हुये कहा " पढ़ाई 3 साल तक फ़ेल होके छोड़ दी...15 साल से अकेले अपना खर्चा नहीं चला पते.... आप मेरे साथ रहती हो.... घर में कुछ भी ज़िम्मेदारी नहीं ली... न समय दिया न पैसा .... अब शादी करा दूँ तो उस लड़की कि ज़िम्मेदारी कौन लेगा.... कैसे रखेंगे उसे"

"इस घर मे कौशल का भी उतना ही हक है जितना तुम्हारा" माँ ने कहा तो मेंने झल्लाकर कहा

"हक ही है या ज़िम्मेदारी भी..... इस घर मे ये कभी रहे नहीं... पिताजी ने नहीं मेंने ये घर बनाया है... अकेले.... आपकी ज़िम्मेदारी ज़िंदगी भर मेरी है... लेकिन कौशल को में साथ नहीं रखूँगा...जिस तरह से वो गैरजिम्मेदार हैं घर के लिए"

"में रहूँगी तो कौशल भी रहेंगे...... और कौशल कि बीवी भी......." माँ ने कहा

"ठीक है अब पहले में शादी करा दूँ कौशल कि फिर देखते हैं..... जब इतना सहा है तो ये भी करूंगा"

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मोक्ष

" अब मेंने कौशल कि शादी करा दी....... और माँ कि जिद थी कि कौशल और कौशल कि बीवी उनके साथ ही रहेगी......... इसलिए माँ को भी उनके साथ ही भेज दिया" मेंने राधा से कहा

"अब दीदी तुम्हारे पास नहीं आतीं क्या" राधा ने पूंछा...

"आती तो हैं .... वो अब कौशल कि बीवी से परेशान हैं......... मेरे साथ ही रहना चाहती हैं...लेकिन कौशल कि माँ बनकर"मेंने कहा " सीमा (मेरी यानि रवि की बीवी) भी उनको साथ रखना चाहती है... लेकिन कौशल को सीमा भी नहीं चाहती साथ जोड़ना... माँ कौशल को छोडना नहीं चाहती... चाहे मुझे छोड़ दें..... बस उस घर मे परेशान हैं ...इसलिए मेरे साथ रहना चाहती हैं"


"फिर तुमने क्या सोचा" राधा ने पूंछा


"अब जो है.... उसी में खुश हूँ......... जो छूट गया उसको दोबारा नहीं पकड़ना चाहता..............जैसे तुम भी तो अपने घर अपने बच्चों में रम गईं .... क्या फिर से ये सब बदलना चाहोगी?"

"बिलकुल नहीं.... अब तुम से जुड़ाव सिर्फ रिश्ते तक है.... बाकी कुछ नहीं"

"ऐसे ही मुझे सिर्फ तृप्ति नहीं.... मोक्ष प्राप्त हो गया ज़िंदगी से...बचपन में जब होश संभाला तो बहुत प्यार था माँ से... तरसता था माँ के प्यार के लिए...लेकिन नहीं मिला... जब बड़ा हुआ तो तुमसे प्यार हुआ... पहला प्यार... और माँ से नफरत क्योंकि उनके जिस प्यार के लिए तरसता रहा... वो मुझे मिला नहीं.........

लेकिन फिर से एक उम्मीद जागी... कि तुम्हारा प्यार कुर्बान करके भी माँ का प्यार मिल सके........ और तुम्हें भूलकर उनके साथ हो गया...तुम्हारे दर्द को सीमा ने मिटा दिया.... लेकिन आखिर मे क्या मिला मुझे......... डर और सिर्फ डर ....... कि अगर में उनकी उम्मीदें , उनकी जरूरतें पूरी नहीं करूंगा तो वो मुझे छोड़ देंगी.... फिर से ... मेरे भाई बहन के लिए... उनके साथ हो जाएंगी...उनके दिये दर्द को कोई नहीं मिटा सकता...

मेंने 25 साल इसी डर में काटे....... लेकिन अब मेंने इस डर से बाहर निकालने का फैसला कर लिया........ हमेशा माँ मुझे डराती थीं कि वो मेरे भाई बहन के पास चली जाएंगी मुझे छोडकर....... अबकी बार मेंने उन्हें भेज दिया उनके बेटे बेटी के पास...."

इतना कहकर में राधा कि आँखों में देखने लगा.... उसकी आँखों में शायद अगले जन्म में मुझे पा लेने का सपना हो.......... मेरे भी मन में है............. लेकिन उससे भी ज्यादा मेरे मन मे अगले जन्म में माँ .... अपनी माँ .... में जिसके साथ रह सकूँ... जो मेरी हो........ बस माँ ............ पाने का सपना है........ चाहे इसके लिए फिर एक बार मुझे राधा का प्यार कुर्बान करना पड़े....

जिनकी माँ नहीं होती.... वो उस तड़प को नहीं जान सकते..........जो माँ होते हुये भी बिना माँ के हो जाते हैं......

आज मेरे बच्चे बड़े हो गए हैं.... कुछ समय बाद उनकी शादी भी कर दूंगा........... लेकिन मेरे अंदर छुपा बच्चा आज भी अपनी माँ के लिए तरस रहा है.... वो कभी बड़ा नहीं होगा...

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Adrishya bandhan....
savitri apne do bachcho ke sath up ke ek chote se ganv mei rehti hai..
jiska pati rajeev shadi ke teen saal bad ek truck accident mei mar jata hai...
Savitri ke bachcho mei ek ladka aaryan or ek ladki jiska name anshika bahut hi khubsurat or itni hi chanchal bhi thi..
anshika aaryan se do saal badi thi..
Aaryan anshika ko didi kehkar bulata tha.. anshika ki har baat manne aaryan apna dharam samjhta tha...
Savitri apne bachcho mei itna pyar dekhkar apne sare gum bhool chuki thi..
savitri ganv mei kapde silai karke apna ghar jese tese chalaya karti thi...
savitri apne is chote se pariwar mei
bahut khushi se jiwan Yapan kar rahi thi...
Yu hi waqt gujarta hai or anshika or aaryan bade hone lagte hai..
jese jese anshika badi hone lagti hai uski khubsurati waqt ke sath badhti chali jati hai..
savitri apni beti ko hamesha ghar par hi rakhti kahi dunya walo ki buri nazar anshika par na pad Jay...
magar ek din anshika ki khubsurti par thakur Vikram shing ki nazar pad jati hai...
Anshika ki khubsurti dekhkar thakur Vikram shing
ki aankhe chundhya jati hai..aisi sundarta ki devi
unke ganv mei or unhe pata bhi nahi..

anshika ke baare mei jaankar agle hi din thakur Vikram sing savitri ke ghar pahuch jate hai...
savitri apne ghar thakur ko dekhkar ghabra jati hai..
Thakur.. anshika aapki ladki hai
Savitri.. g thakur shahab
Thakur.. Hume aapki ladki anshika bahut pasand aa gai hai or hum apne bete suraj ka rista anshika se karna chahte hai...
Savitri ke aankho se thakur ki baat sunkar
aansoo chalak jate hai...
Savitri.. my baap hum gareeb ke pass ladki ko dene ke liye kuch nahi hai..
Thakur... kyu chinta karti ho savitri behan hame dahej mei sirf anshika chahiye...
thakur Vikram sing ki baat sunkar savitri
is rishte ke liye ha bol deti hai...
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Agle mahine thakur Vikram sing apne bete suraj ki shadi anshika se kara deta hai...
anshika dulhan bankar apne babul se roti bilakhti
thakur ki haweli ja pahuchti hai..
anshika suhagsej par dulhan bani apne pati suraj
ka intazar kar rahi thi..
anshika ko ghabrahat bhi ho rahi thi..ki uska pati
aakar uske sath Jane kya kya karne wala hai..
kuch der bad jese hi darwaze par aahat hoti hai..
anshika ka dil dhak dhak karne lagta hai..
suraj apni dulhan anshika ke pass aakar jese hi uska
ghunghat uthata hai..
anshika ki khubsurti dekhkar suraj to jese apne
hosh hi kho bethta hai..
Suraj.... kitni khubsurat ho tum bilkul chand ka tukda ye chand meri kismat mei kaha se aa gaya..
anshika suraj ki baate sunkar halka sa muskura deti hai..
anshika.. aapki nazro ne mujhe is kabil samjha
Jo is nacheej ko faras se uthakar aasman par betha diya..
suraj.. tumko to mei hamesha apne dil mei basa kar rakhungi..
suraj anshika se kafi der pyar bhari baate karta rehta hai saat janm jeene marne ki kasam khate hue... suraj anshika ke kapde utarne lagta hai...
kuch hi Palo mei suraj anshika ke jism se sare kapde utarkar anshika ko nanga kar deta hai..
Bina kapdo ke anshika ka roop dekhkar suraj ko lagta hai jese swarg ki apsara utarkar uske pass aa gai ho...
anshika ko apni banho mei bharte hue suraj uske jism se pyar karne lagta hai..
anshika bhi suraj ke pyar mei tadapte hue uski banho mei samane lagti hai..
do jism ek hone ko betaab ho rahe the..
ab anshika ka man bhi suraj ke jism mei samane ki chah karne laga tha..
jese hi suraj apne kapde jism se alag karke nanga hota hai.. anshika ko suraj ka 3 inch lamba land nazar aata hai..anshika ne pehli bar land dekha tha
to use pata nahi tha land ki lambai kya hoti hai..

magar anshika ye janti thi ki land yoni mei dala jata hai..
Suraj aage badhkar apne land ko anshika ki yoni mei ghusane ki koshish karne lagta hai..
magar suraj ke land mei jara bhi takat nazar nahi aa rahi thi..
anshika jism ki aag mei buri tarha sulag chuki thi
suraj ke lakh paryatan karne ke bawajood bhi jab land andar nahi ghusta to suraj anshika ke aage hath jodkar mafi mangne lagta hai..
suraj.. mujhe maaf kar do anshika mei tumhare
kabil nahi tha..
suraj ki baat sunkar jese anshika ke pero se zameen khisak jati hai use kuch samjh nahi aata
suraj kya keh raha hai..
anshika.. aap kya keh rahe hai meri to kuch samjh nahi aa raha..
Suraj.. anshika meine tumhari zindagi barbad kar di hai mei namard hu...
anshika... kyaaa
suraj.. anshika agar tumhare dil mei mere liye thoda bhi pyar hai to please ye raaz kisi ko nahi bataogi...
suraj anshika se apna raaz kisi se na batane ka wada lekar so jata hai...
anshika ki to jese duniya hi ujad chuki thi..
waqt gujarta hai. anshika ki khushiyan lut chuki thi
anshika ka khila chehra har dum udas rehne laga tha.. anshika ki duniya bas uske kamre tak simit reh jati hai.. anshika ka man apne ghar bhi Jane ka nahi karta..suraj ko bhi ab anshika ka samna
karne mei khud se saram aane lagi thi..
aur isi sharmindgi mei ek din suraj nadi mei chalang laga kar apni jaan de deta hai..

anshika par kehar ki ek or bijli girti hai...
jese hi ye khabar savitri or aaryan ko milti hai.
unhe lagta jese unki hasti khelti duniya ujad gai ho..
suraj ke Jane bad anshika to jese patter ban chuki thi..apni mammi or aaryan ko dekhkar anshika ki aankho se aansoo ruk nahi rahe the..
aaryan se bhi apni didi ka dukh dekha nahi ja raha tha.. magar uska bhai anshika ke liye kuch kar nahi sakta tha..ganv ki purani reet thi shadi ke baad patni ki arthi hi ghar se bahar nikalti hai..
anshika ko rota bilakhta chodkar savitri or aaryan haweli se chale jate hai...
Aaryan.. mammi kya didi jiju ke bina bhi sari Umar hawali par rahengi..
savitri.. ha beta anshika ki kismat mei shayad yehi likha tha..
aaryan.. nahi mammi mei didi ko aise ghute hue
nahi dekh sakta..
savitri.. beta hum kar bhi kya sakte hai ye sab uper wale ki marzi hai...
apni mammi ki baat sunkar aaryan ko lagta hai..
didi ke sath ye sab hone mei uper wale ka hath hai..
raat ke 12 baje aaryan apni didi ke liye uper wale se madad mangne chat par ja pahuchta hai..or aasman mei apne hath felakar uper wale se girgirate hue madad mangne lagta hai..
tabhi aasman mei ek bijli si chamkti hai aaryan ko aisa lagta hai jese usko uper wale se koi madad mili ho..
thidi der bad aaryan niche aakar apne bister par let jata hai..
Subah 9 baje ke kareeb aaryan ke Kano mei apni mammi ki awaz aati hai..
savitri .. aaryan aaryan kaha chala gaya beta..

aaryan apni mammi ke samne leta tha phir bhi mammi aise kyu awaz de rahi thi jese unhe mei dikhai nahi de raha...
aaryan bister se uthkar mammi ke kareeb jata hai..
Phir bhi mammi wese hi apne bete ko awaz laga rahi thi..
aaryan... kya such mei mei mammi ko dikhai nahi de raha..
Or aaryan jese hi shishe ke samne jakar khud ko dekhta hai.. use khud bhi sheshe mei kuch dikhai nahi deta...
aaryan sochta hai shayad upar wale ne didi ki madad ke liye mujhe adrishya bana diya hai...

aaryan upar wale ko thanks bolta hai...
or apni mammi ko ek letter likhne Beth jata hai..
ki tera beta kuch din ke liye bahar ja raha hai
tu bilkul chinta mat karna mei jaldi lout kar aaunga..
aaryan letter likhne ke bad ghar se nikal padta hai
or shidha apni anshika didi ki haweli par ja pahuchta hai...
apni didi ka hall dekhkar aaryan ki aankhe bhar aati hai.. aaryan sochta hai apni didi ke chehre par pehle jesi khushi kese dilaye...
aaryan ko sochte sochte raat ho jati hai...
anshika udas chehra liye bister par let jati hai
Or bister ke uper rakkhi suraj ki tasveer hatho mei lekar baate karne lagti hai..
anshika.. aapne aisa kyu kiya nahi chahiye tha mujhe jism ka Milan jabki meine aapse wada bhi kiya tha aapka raaz kisi ko nahi bataongi...
aaryan apni didi ke pass betha sab sun raha tha..
aaryan ko pata chal chuka tha suraj jiju namard the isliye unhone khudkhushi ki thi....
apni didi ko rote bilakhte dekhkar aaryan dabi awaz mei anshika ko pukarta hai..

Aaryan... anshika
anshika apna name sunte hue chonk kar charo taraf dekhti hai..
aaryan.. anshika ghabrao nahi mei tumhara suraj hu uper wale ne mujhe tumhare pass phir se bhej diya hai...
anshika darr ke mare ghabra kar idhar udhar dekhne lagti hai..
aaryan.. tum itna kyu ghabra rahi ho anshika mei tumhare liye hi phir se duniya mei aaya hu..
anshika.. t t t tum mujhe nazar kyu nahi aa rahe ho..
aaryan... uper wale ne mujhe adrishya banakar tumhare pass bheja hai...
anshika... kya tum such keh rahe ho suraj
aaryan.. ha anshika mei such keh raha hu...
or aaryan apni didi ke pass bethte hue unke hatho mei apna hath dal leta hai...
anshika apne barabar mei suraj ko mehsoos karte hue apni banhe gale mei dalkar rone lagti hai...
anshika... tum mujhe is duniya mei akela chodkar kyu chale gay...
kafi der anshika suraj ke gale se lipti roti rehti hai..
kuch der bad anshika ko aisa lagta hai jese uska suraj phir se lout aaya tha..
anshika suraj ke chehre ko chumne lagti hai uske honto ko chumne lagti hai..
is sab se aaryan ke jism mei bhi uttejna aane lagti hai aaryan apne Hosh kho chuka tha use lagta hai jese woh aaryan na hokar ab suraj hai..
or aaryan ke hath bhi apni didi ke jism par chalne
shuru ho chuke the...
anshika ke jism mei ek bar phir aag sulagne lagti hai.. magar is bar aaryan apni didi kI aag aesi bujhata hai ki anshika ke aansoo nikal jate hai...
Anshika ki khushiyan lout aai thi....
 
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Title - एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा
प्रेम केवल एक शब्द मात्र नहीं बल्कि हमारे सकारातमक हृदय की अपूर्ण भावना है। प्रेम के समबंध में हर युग में असीमित गाथाएं लिखी गई हैं। वास्तव में प्रेम किसी को प्राप्त करने का नाम नही,अपितु त्याग का नाम ही सच्चे प्रेम की परिभाषा है।

बात उन दिनों की है जब मेरी उम्र 28 वर्ष की थी। मैं एक प्राइवेट कंपनी में नौकरी करता था। घर से ऑफिस काफी दूर था।
इसलिए मै हफ्ते में एक बार ही घर आता था। मुझे गांव में एक लड़की से प्रेम हो गया जिसका नाम आशा था। आशा बहुत सुंदर थी। उसकी खूब्सुरती ने मेरा मन मोह लिया था। वह भी मुझसे प्रेम करती थी और हम शादी करना चाहते थे। मैंने घर पे आशा के बारे में बताया और हमारी शादी हो गई। आशा बला की खूबसूरत थी इसलिए पूरे पास पड़ोस में उसकी सुन्दरता के चर्चे थी।

मै अपनी पत्नी से बेइंतहा प्यार करता था। हमारा वैवाहिक जीवन हसी खुशी चल रहा था। एक दूसरे के अथाह प्रेम एवं विश्वास के सहारे हम अपनी जिंदगी में बहुत खुश थे। एक बार की बात है आशा के चेहरे पे इन्फेक्शन हो गया और मैं उसे इलाज के लिए डॉक्टर के पास ले गया और उसका इलाज चलने लगा। लेकिन उसका इन्फेक्शन फैलता गया उसे चर्म रोग हो गया था और समय के साथ उसकी खूबसूरती घटती चली जा रही थी।
आशा की यह हालत मुझसे देखी नहीं जा रही थी परन्तु मैंने आशा को इस बात का एहसास नहीं होने दिया और अपने विश्वास को टूटने नहीं दिया और पहले की ही भांति मै अपने काम पर जाता और हफ्ते बाद वापस आता। एक बार जब मैं शहर से वापस आ रहा था तो मेरा रास्ते में एक्सिडेंट हो गया। मेरे सर और चेहरे पर अत्यधिक चोटे आयी थी जिसके कारण मेरी दोनो आंखो की रोशनी जाती रही और मैं अब हर पल आशा के साथ ही गुजारने लगा ।
खैर , हमारा वैवाहिक जीवन यूहीं चलता रहा और मेरी पत्नी की खूबसूरती भी दिन ब दिन घटती जा रही थी,अंधा होने के कारण मैं इस बात से बेखबर सा था। इसलिए मेरी ज जिंदगी पर इस बात का कोई असर नही हुआ।
हम पहले की तरह ही एक दूसरे को चाहते थे और ख्याल भी रखते थे। परन्तु नियति को कुछ और ही मंजूर था। एक दिन मेरी पत्नी की तबीयत बहुत अधिक खराब हो गई और जिसके कारणवश उसकी मृत्यु हो गई। इस घटना के बाद मैं बहुत उदास एवं सदमे में रहने लगा जिसके कारण मैं घर छोड़ कर किसी दूसरे शहर जाने का निश्चय कर लिया और गांवों छोड़ कर जाने लगा।
जाते हुए रास्ते में एक व्यक्ति ने पीछे से आवाज़ दी और कहने लगा, अकेले कैसे जाओगे? अभी तक तो आपकी पत्नी आपका साथ देती रही,आपका ख्याल रखती रही,और आपकी आंखें बन कर आपका मार्गदर्शन करती रही हैं। यह सुनकर मैंने उस व्यक्ति को जवाब दिया ,मैं अंधा नहीं था,लेकिन ऐसे जीवन व्यतीत कर रहा था जैसे मैं अंधा हूं क्युकी अगर उसे यह पता होता कि मैं उसकी बदसूरती देख सकता हूं, तो यह एहसास उसे उसकी बीमारी से अधिक तकलीफ देता। इसलिए मैंने अंधे होने का नाटक किया। "वह बहुत अच्छी पत्नी थी, बस उसे मैं खुश देखना चाहता था"। आंखें होते हुए भी मैंने जीवन के किसी रंग को महसूस नहीं किया और सम्पूर्ण जीवन उसके असीम प्रेम पर समर्पित कर दिया।

समाप्त।
 
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TITLE:- The Read Dress
Language:- English

My mother was making me a dress. All through the month of November I would come from school and find her in the kitchen, surrounded by cut-up red velvet and scraps of tissue-paper pattern. She worked at an old treadle machine pushed up against the window to get the light, and also to let her look out, past the stubble fields and bare vegetable garden, to see who went by on the road. There was seldom anybody to see.
The red velvet material was hard to work with, it pulled, and the style my mother had chosen was not easy either. She was not really a good sewer. She liked to make things; that is different. Whenever she could she tried to skip basting and pressing and she took no pride in the fine points of tailoring, the finishing of buttonholes and the overcasting of seams as, for instance, my aunt and my grandmother did. Unlike them she started off with an inspiration, a brave and dazzling idea; from that moment on, her pleasure ran downhill. In the first place she could never find a pattern to suit her. It was no wonder; there were no patterns made to match the ideas that blossomed in her head. She had made me, at various times when I was younger, a flowered organdie dress with a high Victorian neckline edged in scratchy lace, with a poke bonnet to match; a Scottish plaid outfit with a velvet jacket and tam; an embroidered peasant blouse worn with a full red skirt and black laced bodice. I had worn these clothes with docility, even pleasure, in the days when I was unaware of the world’s opinion. Now, grown wiser, I wished for dresses like those my friend Lonnie had, bought at Beale’s store.
I had to try it on. Sometimes Lonnie came home from school with me and she would sit on the couch watching. I was embarrassed by the way my mother crept around me, her knees creaking, her breath coming heavily. She muttered to herself. Around the house she wore no corset or stockings, she wore wedge-heeled shoes and ankle socks; her legs were marked with lumps of blue-green veins. I thought her squatting position shameless, even obscene; I tried to keep talking to Lonnie so that her attention would be taken away from my mother as much as possible. Lonnie wore the composed, polite, appreciative expression that was her disguise in the presence of grownups. She laughed at them and was a ferocious mimic, and they never knew.
My mother pulled me about, and pricked me with pins. She made me turn around, she made me walk away, she made me stand still. “What do you think of it, Lonnie?” she said around the pins in her mouth.
“It’s beautiful,” said Lonnie, in her mild, sincere way. Lonnie’s own mother was dead. She lived with her father who never noticed her, and this, in my eyes, made her seem both vulnerable and privileged.
“It will be, if I can ever manage the fit,” my mother said. “Ah, well,” she said theatrically, getting to her feet with a woeful creaking and sighing, “I doubt if she appreciates it.” She enraged me, talking like this to Lonnie, as if Lonnie were grown up and I were still a child. “Stand still,” she said, hauling the pinned and basted dress over my head. My head was muffled in velvet, my body exposed, in an old cotton school slip. I felt like a great raw lump, clumsy and goose-pimpled. I wished I was like Lonnie, light-boned, pale and thin; she had been a Blue Baby.
“Well nobody ever made me a dress when I was going to high school,” my mother said, “I made my own, or I did without.” I was afraid she was going to start again on the story of her walking seven miles to town and finding a job waiting on tables in a boarding-house, so that she could go to high school. All the stories of my mother’s life which had once interested me had begun to seem melodramatic, irrelevant, and tiresome.
“One time I had a dress given to me,” she said. “It was a cream-coloured cashmere wool with royal blue piping down the front and lovely mother-of-pearl buttons, I wonder what ever became of it?”
When we got free Lonnie and I went upstairs to my room. It was cold, but we stayed there. We talked about the boys in our class, going up and down the rows and saying, “Do you like him? Well, do you half-like him? Do you hate him? Would you go out with him if he asked you?” Nobody had asked us. We were thirteen, and we had been going to high school for two months. We did questionnaires in magazines, to find out whether we had personality and whether we would be popular. We read articles on how to make up our faces to accentuate our good points and how to carry on a conversation on the first date and what to do when a boy tried to go too far. Also we read articles on frigidity of the menopause, abortion and why husbands seek satisfaction away from home. When we were not doing school work, we were occupied most of the time with the garnering, passing on and discussing of sexual information. We had made a pact to tell each other everything. But one thing I did not tell was about this dance, the high school Christmas Dance for which my mother was making me a dress. It was that I did not want to go.

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TITLE - THE LUNCH BOX STORY



LANGUAGE - HINGLISH


“sir ap jaldi se 8 lakh jama karwa de jis se ap ki Mom ka operation shuro kar de”


Nurse half ghante me teesri bar ye keh ker gayi per wo teeno kuch nahi kar pa rahe the



Apni sab savings aur rishte daro ki madad ke baad bhi sirf 3 lakh he tha in ke paas


Lekin operation shuro karne ke liya abhi bhi 5 lakh ki zarorat thi tabhi 2 ward boy aye aur un ki mama ko le ker Jane lage


“in ko ap kaha le ja rahe ho?”


Teeno bhai behno ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi


Ward boy1: 30 minutes main in KA operation hai in ko operation theater le ja rahe hai


Salman(pehla beta): magar hum ne abhi fees jama nahi karwai operation kesay shuro ho sakta hai?



Wardboy2: in ki fees jama ho gayi hai


3no bhai Behan ek dusre KA muh dekhne lag gye tabhi Behan(Hareem) aage ayi


Hareem: Daikhiye in KA naam Raheela amjad hai in ki fees Abhi jama nahi huwi ap ko koi galti huwi hai



Wardboy1: daikhye in KA naam rahela amjad hai ye kal admit huwi hai...... 30 minute main in KA bypass KA operation hai..... Ab please side per ho jaye doctor sahib gussa kare gye


Phir ward boys in 3no ko side per ker ke Mrs.Raheela ke bed ko operation theater le Jane lage


Mrs.Raheela iss sab se bekhabar bed per behoosh thi





“sister ap ke ward boys ko galti huwi hai hum ab tak apni mother ki fees jama nahi karwa sake hai........ To operation kesay ho sakta hai?”


Sharukh(teesra beta) ne us nurse se kaha jo in ko 3 bar fees KA keh gayi thi



Nurse: paper theek karte huwe) g in ki fees kuch dair pehle jama ho chuki hai....... Ap pareshan na ho


Salman: herani se) per kis ne karwai?


Nurse ne un ko ignore kia aur operation theater ki taraf Jane lagi lekin beech main Hareem aa gayi


Hareem: please bataye kis ne diye paise?



Nurse: daikhye hum sab ko sakhti se mana kia gaya hai....... Ab ap mera raasta chor de



Nurse ne Hareem ko side per kia aur aage barh gayi piche 3no bhai Behan ek dusre ko Daikhne lag gye


Lekin iss waqt ye janne se zada important in ki mother KA operation tha


Fees kis ne di ye to baad main bhi poch sakte the iss LIYE wo operation theater ke bahir khare ho gaye


2 ghante baad ek surgeon muh per mask charha ker bahir aya aur bola


Surgeon: ap ki mother KA operation successful raha aj un ko under observation rakha jaye ga kal un ko private ward main shift kar dia jaye ga


Ye keh ker surgeon aage barh gaya...... Sab ne shukar ada kia kitne din in ki maa ko hospital main rakha gaya inho ne apni puri koshis ker di fees jama karwane wale ka pata lagwane ki


Magar in ko Kuch pata na chala inho ne Mrs.Raheela ko bhi bata diya wo bhi heran thi


Itna bara ehsaan kon ker gaya? Aur saamne bhi nahi aya? Aakhir kon ho sakta hai?


Aj Mrs.Raheela ko discharge ker diya gaya salman hospital ke during jama karwane gaya to pata chala WO bhi pehle de diye gye hai jawab pehle wala


“nahi bata sakte kis ne kiye hai”


Iss ne ja ker Mrs.Raheela ko bataya to sab heran ho gye aakhir kon ker sakta hai



Lekin unho ne apna saman ikhata kia kiu ke unhe pata tha itne dino se pochne per nahi bataya to ab kia bataye gye


Unho ne ja ker saman car main rakha aur Mrs.Raheela ko hospital ke bahir laye Mrs.Raheela ne ek bar hospital ki taraf daikha


Tabhi un ki nazar hospital ke board per gayi jis ko daikh ker wo chonk gayi aur wanhi baith ker Rone lagi Aur apni purani yado main kho gayi




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Mrs.raheela Amjad shuro se ek ache dil ki malik rahi un ka dil seeshe ki tarha saaf tha

In ke husband ki death ho gayi hai in ke 3 bache the 2 bare bete aur 1 choti beti


Miss raheela ki age iss waqt 38 ke kareeb thi wo ek bohat bare private school main job karti thi


In ki salary bhi achi thi aur in ke pas in ke husband ka banaya ghar tha


Mrs.raheela bohat dino se ek baat note ker rahi thi ke in ki class ka ek Larka (Arman zubair) kuch dino se lunch nahi ker raha tha to brake ke time Mrs.Raheela Arman ke paas gayi


Raheela: Arman ap lunch kiu nahi ker rahe?


Arman: madam mujhe bhook nahi hai


Mrs.raheela Arman ki baat per satisfy to nahi thi but unho ne aage kuch poucha nahi Aur aage chal pari


Mrs.Raheela ne 1 month tak Arman ko note kia aur us kai bar pocha bhi lekin har bar us ka ek he jawab hota


“Madam mujhe bhook nahi hai”


Mrs.Raheela ka us bache ko itni importance dene ki ek aur wajha thi ke us bache ne nursery se le ker ab tak top kia tha


Iss liye Mrs.Raheela ne Faisla kia ke aj wo brake ke waqt Arman se poch ker he rahe gi ke wo lunch kiu nahi karta?


Aur us ke parents ko bhi bula ker poche gi ke kia wo apne bache ko lunch de ker nahi bhejte?



Mrs.Raheela ko lag raha tha ke galti Maa baap ki hai wo apne bache ko lunch de ker he nahi bhejte..... Aur na he paise ke bacha canteen se he Kuch kha le



Ye sab baat Karne ke liye Mrs.Raheela ne brake ki bell ke baad Arman ko kaha


“Meri baat sun ker jana”


Puri class ke bahir Jane ke baad Arman Mrs.Raheela ke paas aa gya Mrs.Raheela ne ek bar Arman ko dhayan se daikha aur phir boli


Mrs.Raheela: Arman beta main ap ko 1.5 month se daikh rahi hu ap lunch nahi karte kiu?



Arman ne phir wohi jawab kaha jo wo 1.5 month se keh raha tha


“Wo madam mujhe bhook nahi hoti”


Mrs.Raheela: beta ye kaise ho sakta hai ap subha 7:00 baje nashta ker ke ate ho 12:30 tak yahan school main parhai kar ke bhi bhook nahi lage? Aur phir ap Academy bhi jaate ho jaha se ap 4:30 Ghar jate ho phir bhi ap ko bhook nahi lagti?.....Jao ja ker apna lunch box lao



Mrs.Raheela ne apna shak door Karne ke liye kaha.......unhe yaqeen tha ke Arman ke paas lunch nahi hai



Arman apni jagha se hila bhi nahi Mrs.Raheela ne kuch dair intezaar kia...... Phir ek thandi aah bhari aur Arman ko ek bar phir daikha


Mrs.Raheela: iss ka MATLAB mera shak sahi tha bulati hu tumhare parents ko itne la-parwah ke apne bache ko lunch de ker bhi nahi bhejte



Mrs.Raheela Arman ki parents ki la-parwahi ki wajha se bohat gussa ho gayi thi........Mrs.Raheela ki baat sun ker Arman ke pairo ke niche se zameen nikal gayi thi



Arman: pareshani se) madam mere paas lunch hai kasam se mere paas lunch hai



Arman jaise Rone lag gya tha aur bohat pareshan ho gya tha.....us ko itna pareshan daikh ker Mrs.Raheela bhi pareshan aur heran ho gayi


Mrs.Raheela: pyar se) acha dikhao Zara lunch box



Mrs.Raheela ke kehte he Arman bhag ker gaya aur apne bag main se lunch box nikal ker le aya


Mrs.Raheela ne lunch box khola to andar Paratha aur achar tha.........Mrs.Raheela ko samjh nahi aa rahi thi agar us ke paas lunch tha to wo karta kiu nahi tha



Mrs.Raheela: bohat pyar se) beta agar ap ke paas lunch hai to ap karte kiu nahi ho?........zada nahi to thora sa kha liya karo


Mrs.Raheela ne bohat pyar se Arman ko samjhaya


Arman: g madam main ab ker lia karo ga........bus ap mere Maa baba ko mat batana



Arman ab roansa sa ho gya tha........Mrs.Raheela ko laga koi baat zaroor hai iss liye unho ne dobara pocha,


Mrs.Raheela: acha beta nahi batao gi.......lekin ap Mujhe batao asal baat kia hai?......ap lunch karte kiu nahi ho?



Arman ne apna sir jhuka liya phir kuch dair ki khamoosi ke baad bola


Arman: madam wo sab larke mera mazak urate hai.......main sirf paratha aur Achar lata hu baki sab nuggets sandwich aur burger jaisi cheeze late hai.....iss liye nahi khata



Arman ne ab asal baat batai aur iss ke saath us ne apni aankho main aane wale ansoo saaf kiye



Mrs.Raheela ko Arman per bohat pyar aya un ka dil kia ke Wo Arman ko gale laga le.....phir wo Arman ke sir per haath pher ker pyar se boli



Mrs.Raheela: beta ap apni mama se kaho wo ap ko kuch aur bana ker diya kare


Mrs.Raheela ne bohat pyar se Arman ko suggestion diya


Arman: main ne 2 saal pehle kaha tha......mujhe nahi paratha le ker Jana sab mazak urate hai



Arman ne bohat masoomiyat se kaha


Mrs.Raheela: phir


Mrs.Raheela ko bhi ab interesting lag rahi thi baat iss LIYE wo aage pochna chahti thi



Arman ne ek nazar apni teacher ko daikha....... phir dobara sir jhuka liya



Arman: phir kuch dino baad meri api ne mujh se kaha......wo 11th class me jati hai jab 12th class clear ker le gi to wo colony ke bacho ko tuition parhaya kare gi..... phir jaisa lunch main kaho ga waisa API bana diya kare gi........ Per tab tak main Ami ko keh du bread kabab, nuggets, roll, khane se mera pait kharab hota hai........



Arman abhi baat ker he raha tha ke Mrs.Raheela ne us ki baat beech main kat ker pocha



Mrs.Raheela: per ap ki Behan ne aisa kia kaha.......


Arman: kiu ki jab se mama ne mujhe bread, nuggets wagaira lunch me dene shuro kiye tab se baba 2 ki bajaye raat ko 3 baje ghar aane lag gye...... madam mere baba ek Clark hai.....wo din main office jate hai aur raat ko taxi chalate hai...... Iss LIYE ke mujhe private school main parha sake aur fees ke saath book uniform aur Academy ke kharche utha sake...... Mere ek lunch ki wajha se wo 1 ghanta late aane lag gye........ Jab ke unhe subha 7:00 baje jagna parta tha office Jane ke liye...... Iss LIYE api ne kaha ke iss tarha baba ki tabiyat kharab ho jaye gi.... Iss LIYE main mama se keh du mujhe ye lunch na de..... Aur jab wo 12th clear ker Le gi to mere lunch ke liya paise bana liya kare gi...... To main ne mama se wohi KEH diya ..... Pehle bhi main he sirf private school se parha hu Aur Academy gaya hu meri behne to government school main parhti hai....... Mere lunch ke liya baba ko neend Ki qurbani deni per rahi thi jo Mujhe acha nahi lag raha tha..... To main ne mama se keh diya ke mujhe ye sab nahi khana


Arman ne aj apne andar ki sab baate bahir nikal di


Mrs.Raheela: to kia ab tak ap ki api ki 12th clear nahi huwi?


Mrs.Raheela ko Arman ki baato main interest barhta ja raha tha....wo aur janna chah rahi thi iss LIYE unho ne agla sawal kia


Arman: 12th to unho ne last year clear ker diya tha...... Aur pata hai unho ne pure board main top kia tha....... Iss ne baba se kaha ke iss ko canent college main admission karwa de jo bohat mehnga college hai........ Kuch fees wo scholar ship se de gi kuch wo tuition parha de gi baba per bojh nahi bane gi.....phir aakhir baba us ke bhi to baba hai na......aur iss ne kia bhi top tha to baba ne Api ka admission canent college main karwa diya....... Aur jab un ko pehli tuition fees mili to unho ne mujh se kaha........ Chalo Arman ab jo tum kaho gye wo hum le ker aye gye phir wohi tum lunch main le ker Jana ab mera bhai paratha achar nahi khaye ga api bohat khush lag rahi thi........ Lekin main ne unhe mana ker dia aur kaha api kasam se wo bazar ki cheezo se mera pait dard karta hai...... Waise bhi ab main bari class main aa gya hu ab mera koi mazak nahi urata ab main paratha kha ker ata hu........ Madam ap ko pata hai main ne aisa kiu kaha



Mrs.Raheela: dilchaspi se) kiu kaha



Arman: kiu ke ek din main ne Api ko choti api se kehte suna un ke college main bohat ameer larkiya parhti hai un ke paas bohat mehnagi cheeze hoti hai....... Api bhi tuition ke paiso se kuch le sakti thi waise bhi lunch itna zaroori to nahi tha to main ne Api ko bhi mana ker dia....... Waise bhi last year tak usman mera dost tha wo mere LIYE aksar lunch le ata tha........ Iss ki mama mere LIYE bohat maze ka lunch bana ker deti thi......iss ke baba ki posting dusri city ho gayi hai iss LIYE wo chala gya..... Phir mujhe naya dost mila he nahi...... Waise madam acha huwa wo chala gya......



Arman kuch udasi se bola...... Lekin Mrs.Raheela ko us ki akhri baat ki samjh nahi ayi ke dost ka Jana acha kiu huwa



Mrs.Raheela: acha kiu huwa.....AP ka dost ap ke saath rehta to zada acha nahi tha



Mrs.Raheela ne Detail me pocha......Arman ne ek thandi aah bhari aur bola



Arman: iss tarha se to bohat acha tha wo mera best friend tha...... Lekin jab bhi wo mere LIYE lunch lata tab bhi kuch larke tang karte the....... Ohhh aj phir usman Arman ke liya lunch laya hai....... Khao khao..... Maa baap gareeb hai to kia huwa dost to ameer hai...... Mera dil dukhta tha bohat bar main khana chor deta tha...... Lekin usman ke kehne per phir kha leta........ Madam mere mama baba gareeb nahi hai bus un ke paas paise thore kam hai..... Mere baba kehte hai ek din mere Arman doctor bane ga aur mujhe yaqeen hai main un ka khawaab pura karo ga.... Is LIYE mera dil karta tha usman kahi chala jaye phir koi mere mama baba ko gareeb nahi bole ga.......


Wo Larka apne har rishte ko le ker itna hassas tha itni Ahmiyat thi us ko Rishto ki ye daikh ker Mrs.Raheela ki Ankho main bhi ansoo aa gye



Mrs.Raheela: lekin beta ap lunch to karte nahi ap ki api ya mama ap ka lunch box check nahi karti?...... Aur pochti nahi ke lunch kiu nahi kia?



Arman: muskara ker) madam main apni van main lunch ker leta hu..... Iss van main sab paratha he le ker jate hai iss LIYE koi mera mazak nahi urata iss tarha Ami ko pata bhi nahi chalta ke main ne school main lunch nahi kia.....


Arman ne fakhar se kaha Mrs.Raheela ko Arman ki iss ada per bohat pyar aya...... Saath he break khatam hone ki bell baj gayi



Mrs.Raheela: chalo baki baate phir kabhi ker le gye


Arman bhi wapis ja ker apni chair per baith gaya....... Baki din normal guzra


Mrs.Raheela Arman ki soch se bohat attract huwi wo iss ke liya kuch karna chahti thi


Mrs.Raheela apne ghar aa gyi lekin Arman ki baate in ke dil se nikal he nahi rahi thi wo iss ke liya kuch karna chahti thi


Mrs.Raheela: in her mind) agar main Arman ke liya lunch bana diya karo..... Magar iss se to usman ka lunch nahi nahi ye theek nahi hoga



Wo bohat se kayal apne man main LA rahi thi phir un ke dimagh main ek idea aya


NEXT DAY


Brake se kuch dair pehle gate keeper ne class ke door per knock kia


Gate keeper: Arman zubair ke liya lunch aya hai


Arman herani se apni bench se utha aur ja ker lunch box le liya lunch bohat maze ka tha Arman pura kha gya


Phir ye roz ki baat ho gayi roz brake se pehle gate keeper Arman ko lunch de jata



Arman pura lunch kha leta yahan tak Arman ne 12th ke bhi paper de diye...... Is ne apni Behan Ki tarha board me top kia


12th tak wo lunch box Ata raha wo band nahi huwa Mrs.Raheela retire ho gayi


Mrs.Raheela andar he andar sochti ke kabhi Arman ne gate keeper se pocha kiu nahi wo lunch kis ne diya....... Jab ke Mrs.Raheela ka khayal tha Arman usi din ja ker ghar poche ga lunch kis ne bheja jab us ko pata chale ga ghar se KISI ne lunch nahi bheja to wo agle din Gate keeper se pocha ga nahi to lunch he nahi le ga....... Mrs.Raheela ne socha tha jab aisa hoga tab daikha jaye ga




Lekin Arman ne aisa Kuch nahi kia iss se ulta wo lunch ker ke chuti time lunch box gate keeper ko de jata



Mrs.Raheela sochti thi ke wo kia sochta hoga ke ye lunch kon de ker jata hai?.......



Magar ab WO ye kis se pochti ye sab...... 12th clear Karne ke baad USS ka medical college main Admission ho gya hai ye WO he sab ko bata ker gaya phir wo kabhi school nahi aya Mrs.Raheela Arman ko yad karti aur bus Us ke liya dua kar deti




PRESENT




Aj Mrs.Raheela ki Rone ki wajha ye thi kiu ke board per likha huwa tha (HEART SPECIALIST ARMAN ZUBAIR) Ye parhte he Mrs.Raheela ke saamne itne saalo ki baate aa gayi


Hareem: kia huwa mama?


Mrs.Raheela: mujhe doctor Arman se milna hai


Hareem: kiu?


Mrs.Raheela: gusse se) jo kaha hai wo karo



Phir 3no Mrs.Raheela ko andar le ker gye aur reception per ja ker doctor Arman KA pocha


Receptionist: muskara ker) wait a moment sir


3no ko receptionist ki muskrahat ki wajha samjh nahi ayi


Receptionist ne Doctor Arman se phone per baat ki Doctor Arman ne unhe kamre main baithne ko kaha


Nurse unhe doctor Arman ke cabin main le gayi wo 4ro wahan baith gaye


5 minute baad Doctor Arman kamre main aya ek Handsome sa doctor the doctor Arman


Arman aage aya aur Mrs.Raheela ke pairo main baith gaye ye daikh ker un ke 3no bache heran ho gaye


Mrs.Raheela ne Doctor Arman ke sir per haath rakha


Mrs.Raheela: ye mera student tha....... Lekin beta mujh per itna bar ehsaan kiu?


3no Behan Bhai ab bhi heran thi


Arman: muskara ker) pehle to ap ne mera introduction adhoora karwaya hai....... Main in ki class KA student nahi main in ki class KA wo student hu jin ko ye class 12th tak lunch bana ker deti rahi hai



Mrs.Raheela Arman ki iss baat se chonk gayi iss KA MATLAB wo janta tha


Mrs.Raheela: per tumhe kaise pata?



Arman: madam class two me main ne lunch karna chora tha us ke baad ap ki class tak kisi teacher ne nahi pocha ke AP lunch kiu nahi karte........ Us din ap ne pocha agle din lunch aa gya madam baat ye hai hum kis class Ki family se belong karte hai hamari class ke bacho ko halat bohat jald samjh aa jate hai........ Main bhi samjh gaya tha pehle din lunch aya to bohat bhook lagi thi iss LIYE Aram se kha gaya phir ghar ja ker puri raat socha ap ko kaise roku....... Phir socha bara ho ker sab paise wapis ker du ga jo ap ne lunch per lagaye....... Pata hai madam 1st day se le ker last day tak ke lunch ka hisaab aj bhi mere paas hai...... Aur wo paise the 62 thousand 4 hundred and 75 rupees


Arman paise bata ker ek bar muskaraya aur phir bola


Arman: jab bhi ap lunch deti to us din bakery se ja ker us khane ke paise poch ker ghar jaye ker dairy main date ke saath note ker leta...... Lekin jaise jaise waqt guzra samjh aa gayi puri duniya ki dolat bhi LA ker ap ko de di to lunch ke paise nahi chuka pao ga......... Kiu ki us lunch ki keemat 62 thousand 4 hundred 75 rupees nahi the us ki keemat wo mohabat thi jis se ap khana banati thi jis ki keemat puri duniya ki dolat se zada thi........ Bus iss ke baad main ne us lunch ki keemat dene ka sochna band ker dia...... Bus dua karta tha kabhi mujh ko aisa moka mile ke main ap ki madad ker saku.......... Us din ap ko daikha to foran pehchaan liya nurse ne bataya ke AP ki fees jama nahi huwi to mujhe laga mujhe wo moka mil gaya hai...... Aur jaha tak baat hai saamne na aane ki to ap ne bhi to gatekeeper ko mana kia tha ap ka naam na batane ke liye



Ye keh ker Arman ne ek baar Mrs.Raheela ki taraf daikha aur phir apna sir un ki goad main rakh liya


Mrs.Raheela ki Ankho main ansoo aa gye unho ne Arman ko apne gale se laga liya


Arman bhi ab bohat sakoon mehsoos ker raha tha



Hareem: muskara ker) acha to ap hai wo jin ke liye mama lunch le ker jati thi main bhi Socho mama itna kab se khane lagi


Hareem ki iss baat pee sab hans diye Aur Arman ne ek aisi baat kahi ke sab ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya


Arman: Hareem will you marry me


Arman ki iss baat per sab herani se Arman ko Daikhne lag gye


Arman: Aise kia daikh rahe hai sab kabhi to main ne shadi karni hai aur mujhe Hareem pasand bhi hai aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai Hareem ki shadi bhi nahi huwi aur iss tarha mujhe saas ke roop main ek maa mil jaye gi to kia main apne parents ko bhejo ap ke Ghar


Mrs.Raheela ne kuch pal socha phir Arman ke sir per haath pher kar han main sir hila diya


Hareem sharma ker bahir chali gayi aur mahool bohat acha ho gya


Phir 1 month baad engagement ho gayi aur 2 month baad shadi




♠ THE END ♠



YE EK NON-EROTIC STORY HAI YE STORY KE SAATH SAATH EK LESSON BHI HAI JO HUM SAB KO SHIKATA HAI (KAR BHALA SOO HO BHALA) HUM KISI KE SAATH ACHA KARE TO HAMARE SAATH BHI ACHA HOGA WAQT ZAROOR LAGE GA PER HOGA ACHA HE



Aansu Baha Baha Ke Bhi Hote Nahi kam Sahab,

Kitni Amer Hoti Hai Aankhe Gareeb ki


Hum ko apne bacho ko sikhana chahiye kisi ka bhi mazak na banaye ulta un ki aisi madad kare ke ek haath se kam kia to dusre ko pata bhi na chale


Bacho ko kia sikhana aj kal to bare bhi yehi karte hai to ye ek lesson hai puri duniya ke liye Ap ke pyare Dost Ahmad ki taraf se



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Title -- " Baba ki pahadi "

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Ek tez raftaar car behad kharab mausam me jarjar pahadiyon ke sankare - pathreele raston se hoti huyi apne manjil ki ore betahasha bhagi ja rahi thi . Raste kisi maut ke kuyein se kam nahi the kyu ki sadak ke ek taraf fislan se bhari vishal chattane to doosri taraf meelon gahri khai thi . Pahadon par utare baadlon ke tukde mahaul ko darawna bana rahe the . kuchh hi der me tez hawa ke sath musladhar barish ne car ka rasta rok diya .

Car chalana to door usame baithe rahna bhi mushkil ho raha tha . chalak ne jhunjhla kar car ko ek chhote se makan ke paas rok diya aur bhag kar us makan ke khule ahate me ja khada hua .
Makan kafi purana tha aur har taraf se toota hua bhi tha jiski wajah se wo aadmi khud ko bheegne se bacha nahi pa raha tha .

Tabhi us toote makan ka darwaja kula aur ek behad hi khoobsurat yuwti ne bahar jhaank kar dekha . Yuwti ki badi badi aankhe kisi jheel si gahri neeli thi . uska rang doodh me mishrit kesar ki bhanti damak raha tha . Usne khud ko fate purane garam kapdon se dhaank rakha tha fir bhi uski sundarta har ang se foot rahi thi . Kul mila kar sammohit karne wali sundarta hasil thi use .


" Kya mai aap ki koi sahayata kar sakti hoon . "
Ladki ki awaaj yun lagi maano kisi ne kaano me shahad ghol diya ho .


" Ji mai musafir hoon , khud ko is toofan se bachane ke liye yahan aa gaya ."
Aadmi ne shaleenta se jawaab diya .


" Aap andar aa jaiye warna bheeg jayenge. "
Ladki ne ghar ke darwaje se hat kar kaha .


" sorry aap ko dikkat de raha hoon par majboor hoon . "
Aadmi us ek kamre ke chhote se makan me dakhil ho gaya .


" dikkat ki Koi baat nahi hai , meri maa kahti hain Atithi devo bhawh. "
Ladki ne pani ka glass aadmi ki taraf badate huye kaha .


" pani nahi piya jayega mujhse , kafi thand lag rahi hai . "
Aadmi ne kampte huye kaha to ladki chai banane lagi . Chai pikar uss aadmi ko thodi rahat lagi . Lekin uska shareer thand se kampa ja raha tha . Ladki ne use ek kambal diya odhne ke liye aur boli .


" Thand itni jyada kyu lag rahi hai kuchh ajeeb sa mausam nahi hai . "
Aadmi ne apne haathon ko aapas me ragadte huye kaha .


" aap apna dhyan thand se hata kar kahi aur lagaiye tabhi rahat milegi . "
Ladki ne bade pyaar se kaha .


" sari koshish bekar hai meri . "
Aadmi ne kampte huye kaha .


" aap yahan ke to nahi lagte hain ? Ghoomne aaye hain ? "
Ladki ne baaton ka silsila banaye rakha .



" nahi yahan ka nahi hoon mai . mai mumbai se aaya hoon site dekhne . Mai film maker hoon . Filme banata hoon . Meri agli film ek pahadi prem kahani par based hai . "
Aadmi ne gurur se kaha .


" ohh phir to very sorry kyu ki mai filme nahi dekhti to usse judi baatein bekar hai mere liye ."
Ladki ne bina kisi bhaw ke jawab diya .

" Tumko apni filmo ke drishya dikhata par Mobile ka network bhi nahi hai yahan par ."
Aadmi ne apna mobile lagbhag patakte huye kaha .


"Yahan network nahi ata hai . Koi nahi aap suna hi dijiye apne film ki kahani . "
Ladki ki baaton se pata chal raha tha ki use kahaniyan sunane me khasi ruchi hai .


" are kahani to mujhe yaad nahi hai par mere writer ne kaha tha ki pahadon ki best prem kahani hai ."
Aadami ki baaton se uska gurur tapak raha tha .


" chaliye mai aap ko ek prem kahani sunati hoon , jo best bhale na ho lekin hamare pahadon ki prasiddh prem kahani hai , ho sakta hai aap ka dhyan bhatkane me bhi kamyabi mil jaye ."
Ladki ki muskurahat ne aadmi ko jaise mohit kar liya tha , wo ek agyakari balak ki tarah hami bhar kar kahani sunne laga .

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Himanchal ki khoobsurat lekin durgam pahadiyon ki god me basa ek chhota sa kasba jise dharti ka swarg kaha jaye to bhi kam hi hoga kyu ki kudart ne is kasbe ko naisargik saundarya khule dil se bakhsha tha . Yahan ki prakritik chhanta badi hi manoram thi . Barish ke mausam me yahan ki hariyali dekh kar yun lagta mano aankhon me hara rang hi utar aaya ho to wahi jaadon me jab yahan ki unchi - unchi durgam pahadiyan barf se lad jati to yun lagta ki prkriti ne kasbe ko apni jhakk safed odhani odha di ho .


Jitne sundar yahan ke najare the utne hi sundar aur saral yahan ke bashinde . Milansar aur udaar . Yahan ki ladkiyon ki khoobsurati to door door tak vikhyat thi , aise lagta tha mano swarg ke baad apsaraon ne yahi par dera jama liya ho .


Har jagah ki tarah yahan ki bhi apni manyatayein aur paramprayein thi jiska yahan ke log kattarata se palan karte the bhale kisi ko pasand aaye ya nahi . inhi parampraon me ek thi ki yahan ka koi bashinda kasbe ke bahar vyapar ke liye nahi jayega kyu ki kasba khud me hi sampann tha . Bahar se paryapt paryatak aa jate the jinse achchhi khasi kamai ho jati thi to doosri taraf fal aur mevon (dry fruits) ke bageeche yahan ke logon ki kamai ka mukhya jariya the .


Udayan is kasbe ke mukhiya ka beta tha . Naam ki hi tarah tej aur karmath . Uski aankhon me bahut bade bade sapne palte the jisme se ek sapna kasbe se bahar nikal kar apni padhai poori karna aur kuchh bahut bada mukaam hasil kar ke dikhana tha . Udayan bahut jiddi tha par wo kahte hain na ki aasma kahi na kahi jhukta bhi hai . Udayan ki sirf ek hi kamjori thi " Damini " .


Damini apne naam ki hi tarah tez aur bala ki khoobsurat thi . Us kasbe ki sabse khoobsurat aur honhaar ladki thi wo . Damini ke sir se maa ka saya bachpan me hi uth gaya tha . Pita ne bade dulaar se pala tha use aur har gun sampann banaya tha . Apne pita ka abhiman thi Damini .


Udayan aur damini bachpan ke dost the par bachpan se hi chhip chhip kar milte the kyu ki dono ke pitaon me chhatis ka aankda tha . Udayan aur Damini kabhi pahadi par jhoomte to kabhi dariya me gote lagate dikh hi jaya karte the . Damini ko phool pasand the to Udayan ne apne poore ghar me tarah tarah ke phool laga dale the to wahi Udayan ko kheer pasand thi isliye Damini har roj kheer banaya karti thi . bada hi gajab ka pyaar tha in dono ka .


Jab bhi koi dharmik utsav hota ya wo dono kisi mandir jate to ek hi kasam khate ki jeete jee kabhi alag nahi honge kyu ki dono ko pata tha ki gharwale to milan hone nahi denge . Udayan aur Damini ne jawaan hote hi sabse pahle gandharva vivah kiya taki koi unko kabhi alag nahi kar sake . Vivah kiya to suhag sej bhi saji . Us raat ke baad dono ek doosre ki sharirik jarurat bhi ban gaye .


Wakt ke pankh lage hote hain aur wo kabhi bhi ek saman nahi hota hai . Jab wakt ne karwat li to in dono ki bhi jindgiyon me badlaw aaye . Kasbe me sirf inter school hi the jabki Udayan ko aur padhna tha . Udayan ke aage padhne aur kuchh kar dikhane ki jidd ne pita aur putra ke beech bhayankar vivad khada kar diya . Kayi dinon tak cheekhne , chillane aur jhagdon ka silsila chala aur ant me Udayan ne kasba chhod hi diya wo bhi hamesha ke liye .

Udayan Jate wakt Damini se mila aur wada kiya ki har poonam ki raat wo pahadi par chadhte chand ke sath usase milne aaya karega aur jaise hi kuchh ban jayega use bhi yahan se apne sath le jayega . Uske baad to Damini ko sirf poonam ki raat ka intjaar rahta .


Har poonam ki raat Udayan aur damini pahadi par milte the . Damini uske liye kheer bana kar le jati thi yahi nahi kuchh paise bhi jod kar use deti thi ki uska Udayan bhookha na rahe . Udayan Damini ke liye shahar se kuchh na kuchh jaroor lata jise pahan kar Damini phooli nahi samati thi . uss Raat bhar Damini Udayan ko sare kasbe ka haal sunaya karti jabki Udayan use jee bar kar pyaar karta tha aur savera hote hi dono fir alag ho jate the .


Udayan ke door chale jane ki wajah se Damini gumsum rahne lagi thi . Usne hasna - khelna chhod hi diya tha . Udayan ne Damini ko patra vyohar ke liye ek dharmshala ka pata bhi diya tha jahan uski kisi se pahchan ho gayi thi . Damini din bhar ek kagaj par apni tadap likhti rahti aur use takiye ke neeche chhipa deti . Jab poonam ki raat Udayan aata to use saump deti .


Gujarte wakt ke sath Damini ke roop ke charche faile to uske liye rishton ki baadh si aa gayi thi . uske pita bhi abb vivah ke liye dabaaw dalne lage the . Doosri taraf Udayan bhi 4 poonam ki raat beete Damini se milne nahi aaya tha . Ek subah Damini ko ehsas hua ki uske sharir me aaya badlaaw uske kokh ke moti ko nahi chhipa pa raha hai . Damini ko ek taraf apne bheetar jeewan ankur footne ki khushi thi to doosri taraf bichhoh ka dar . Maa ki kami us din sabse jyada khali thi Damini ko . Haar kar ek subah Damini ne apni vyatha apne pita se kah dali . Ye sab sun kar Damini ke pita hridayaghat se chal base kyu ki unki ijjat hi unki jindgi thi aur Damini unka abhiman jo ki choor ho chuke the .

Kasbe ke logon ne bhi Damini ka bahishkar kar Diya . Damini ko bahut bura bhala bola gaya . Dhakke maar kar kasbe se nikal diya gaya . Wo roti bilkhti pahadi par ja pahunchi . Wahi ek toota foota jhopda bana kar rahne lagi kyu ki use poora bharosa tha ki uska Udayan use lene jaroor aayega . Kabhi kuchh khane ko milta to kabhi bhookhi hi so jati . Aise hi kasht se joojhte huye Damini ne ek putri ko janm diya . Kasbe ki hi uski sakhiyon ne bahut sahayta ki par saja ke dar se wo sab bhi door hoti chali gayi .


Har pooranmasi ki raat Damini kheer banati aur pahadi par Udayan ki pratiksha karti aur subah ek patra likh kar bhej deti .aise hi tadap aur peeda me Damini ke din gujarte rahe .
Putri bhi usi ki tarah samjhdar thi , wo maa ki peeda ko samjhti thi par wo bhi ek baar apne baba ko dekhna chahti thi isi liye abb wo bhi apni maa ke sath har poonam ki raat pahadi par jati thi . Usne to pahadi ka naam bhi rakh diya tha " Baba wali pahadi ".

Damini sirf ek ratt laga kar rakhti thi ki jaroor Udayan ke sath kuchh bura hua hai kyu ki uska Udayan use dhokha nahi de sakta hai . Abhaw aur ruswaiyan bhi Damini ke pyaar ko kam nahi kar saki thi . Lekin kahte hain na ki kismat ke khel hi anokhe hote hain , aisa hi kuchh Damini ke sath hua . Ek poonam ki raat Damini kheer lekar pahadi par gayi to wo hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha .


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Ladki apne shabdon ko viraam dekar aadmi ka muh dekhne lagi .

" tum chup kyu ho gayi , Fir kya hua ? Kahan hai Damini abb ? " aadmi ne bechaini se poonchha ?


" Hua kya , mausam saaf ho gaya , barish ruk gayi aur aap ka rasta khul gaya aur mai aap ka dhyan bhatkane me kamyab ho gayi . Aur mera kaam bhi poora ho gaya . "
Ladki ne apni khoobsurat badi - badi neeli aankhon ko najakat se matkate huye kaha .


" kaun sa kaam poora ho gaya tumhara aur kahani to abhi adhoori hai "
Aadmi vyakul ho chuka tha .


" kuchh kahaniyan adhoori hi rah jati hain kyu ki log kagaj ke tukdon ko sametne me itne mashgool ho jate hain ki jindgi ke panno ko kora hi chhod dete hain . "
Ladki ke har ek shabd dard se sarabor the . Uski chanchal neeli aankhein dabdaba uthi thi .


" mujhe nahi pata kyu par tumhari awaaj mujhe sukoon de rahi hai. Please tum bolti raho . "
Aadmi ki aankhein bhi bhar aayi .


" mujhe bhi aaj bahut sukoon mila hai . Abb aap ke jane ke baad sukoon ki neend soungi . Yun lag raha jaise sadiyon se jaag rahi hoon . "
Ladki ne bojhil aankhon se kaha aur haath jod liya .


" Kya mai tumhara naam jaan sakta hoon beti . "
Aadmi ne itni der ki mulakat me pahli baar apnatwa se ladki ko beti pukara tha .


" Raina "
Ladki ki awaaj hi bahut udas ho gayi thi .


Wo aadmi teji se uss chhote makan se nikla aur apni car me baith kar wapas ulti disha me chal diya . Use kuchh bahut jaroori kaam yaad aa gaya tha . 3 ghante lagatar chalne ke baad wo car ko ek dharmshala ke samne rok deta hai . Tej kadmo se wo andar jata hai aur booking table par baithe bande ke samne jakar khada ho jata hai . Wo dono thodi der tak ek doosre ko pahchanne ki koshish karte hain .


" Kaisa hai Kareem "
Aadmi booking table par baithe bande se kahta hai .


" badhiya hoon , tu to bada aadmi ban gaya hai re Udayan ."
Kareem aage badh kar uss aadmi yani Udayan ke gale lag jata hai .


" kahe ka bada ban gaya hoon bhai . neech hoon mai , chhal kar baitha apni hi jindgi ke sath . Laat maar diya maine apni muhobbat ko . Wo mere liye tadap rahi hai bhai aur mai aishwarya bhogne me magan tha . "
Udayan ki awaaj bharra uthi .



" kya bol rahe ho sab theek to hai na ? Kaha ho aaj kal ? Damini theek hai na ? "


" prasiddhi aur paise kamane ki hawas me khud apni muhobbat ka gala ghont diya maine Kareem bhai . Maine use dhokha de diya . Apni alag duniya basa kar usme ram gaya aur yahan wo meri jogan bani meri khair mangti rahi . Mujhe galiyan do Kareem bhai mai jallad hoon. Meri phool si pyari bitiya hai jiske sir par haath bhi na fer saka mai . Jee chahta hai khud ko maar doon . "
Udayan rote huye bola .


" khud ko samhalo bhai ."
Aansu rokte rokte bhi Kareem ki palkon ke kinare tak aa hi gaye.



" Kareem mera koi patra (letter) hai kya tere paas . "


" mujhe pata tha tu aayega lene . haan baksa bhar ke patra rakhe hai tere liye ."
Kareem ne apne aansuon ko ponchhte huye kaha .


" de de na yaar ."


Udayan ki haalat ko dekh kar
Kareem ko sab kuchh to nahi lekin bahut kuchh samajh me aa gaya tha . bina der kiye Kareem ne store room se lakar ek lohe ki sandook bhar kar patra diye Udayan ko .


Kareem se ek kamra book karwa kar Udayan us lohe ki sandook ke sath kamre me gaya . Darwaja band kar ke Udayan ne uss khali akele kamre me bhi ek kona doondha aur us kone me baith kar rona shuru kar diya . Jane kab se bhoole huye pyaar ki yaadon ka sailaab tha ye jisme bewfai karne ki tees shamil thi . Khud me simat kar wo kafi der tak rota raha .

Udayan ne ek ek kar ke un patron ko padhna shuru kiya . Har patra me Damini ne Udayan ki khair mangi thi . Patra ka ek ek shabd Damini ke aanshuon aur uski tadap me bheega hua tha . Uske dil ki peeda shabdo ke madhyam se seedhe udayan ke dil me utari ja rahi thi . Itna dard padh kar Udayan ka kaleja fatne laga tha .

Antim patra padh kar Udayan ki saanse hi ukhadne lagi . Gale me pyaas ki wajah se kante chubne lage aur yun laga jaise badan par hajjaron cheentiyan reng rahi ho .


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Mere pyaare Udayan ,


Theek ho na ? Jante ho Aaj hamari Raina 18 saal ki poori ho gayi . Aaj tumhare liye kheer usne hi banayi hai .Hamari beti Raina apne baba ko maa se bhi jyada pyaar karti hai . Jante ho uski shakl mujh si hai par akal apne baba par gayi hai . Badi hoshiyar hai padhne me .

Tumhare jaise hi doosre shahar ja kar padhna chahti thi lekin maine saaf inkar kar diya kyu ki mere pyaar ko to nigal chuka hai shahar abb pyaar ki nishani ko bhi mai hawan nahi kar sakti thi . Raina ne apni abhagi maa ki baat turant maan li . kaash tum bhi maan lete to ham teeno sath hote .

Mere sath aaj wo bhi aa rahi thi pahadi par tumse milne lekin maine use mana kar diya kyu ki uski maa abb haar chuki hai . Haan Udayan tumhari Damini haar gayi Abb iss judai ka bojh aur nahi utha sakti hoon mai isliye jaa rahi hoon . Bahut door hamesha ke liye . Hamari beti ka khayal rajhna . Mujhe pata hai tum jaroor aaoge .


Tumhari Damini .

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Patra padh kar Udayan ke halak se jordar cheekh nikal gayi aur wo wapas usi padhadi ki ore bhaga . Uski Tez raftar car teen ghane ki jagah dedh ghante me hi pahadi ki ore jane wale raste tak pahunch gayi . Pahadi ki ore jane wale raste par 5 police wale tainat the jinhone Udayan ki car ko aage jane se rok diya .


" Kya hua mera rasta kyu rok rahe hai aap log ."
Udayan chilla kar bola .

" rasta band hai , aap aage nahi ja sakte hain. "


" are subah to khula tha . "
Udayan car se utar kar police walon ke paas aa gaya tha .


" aap ko koi galatfahmi huyi hai , ye rasta kayi saalon se band hai ."


" subah to nahi band tha na hi aap log yahan the jab kharab mausam ki wajah se mai bhatak kar wahan door us pahadi tak pahunch gaya tha ."
Udayan vyakulta se idhar udhar chalte huye bola . usase abb ek pal bhi ruka nahi ja raha tha .


" mausam to yahan pichhle kayi dino se bilkul saaf hai aur mai khud yahan tainaat hoon . Aap please yahan se hatiye warna majbooran hame aap par karyawahi karni padegi ."
Daroga gusse se Udayan ko dhakelte huye bola .


Ek police wala jo unn sab se boodha tha aur aas paas hi rahta tha usne Udayan ko girne se samhala aur car tak laya .


" Ye log sach bol rahe hain sahab . Ye rasta kayi saalon se band hai . Pahadi jarjar ho chuki hai . Kayi jaan wahan par ja chuki hain . Kuchh paryatak gir gaye aur kuchh log kood gaye isliye kayi saal pahle hi shashan ke aadesh se band kar diya gaya . "
Police wale ne Udayan ko samjhaya .


" par mai subah hi wahan gaya tha . Meri beti rahti hai wahan . Mujhe milna hai usase . "
Udayan haath jod kar gidgidaya .


" beti ?"



" haan Raina , meri aur Damini ki beti . "
Udayan se ruka nahi ja raha tha .



" Damini , wo to hamare hi kasbe ki ladki thi . Use kisi ne pyaar me dhokha de diya tha . Pagal ho gayi thi shayad . Usne 10 saal pahle pahadi se kood kar apni jaan de di thi aur uski ladki ne bhi maa ke peechhe kood kar apni jaan de di .bahut abhagi thi maa beti . Ishwar unki atma ko shanti de . "


Udayan ke seene me hook si uthi aur itna teevra dard hua mano lohe ki garm salakhein uske seene me utar gayi ho . Uske liye ek pal bhi khade rahna mushkil ho chuka tha . Uske pair thar thar kaampne lage aur thand ke mausam me bhi shareer paseene se bheeg gaya tha .
Police wale aapas me khusar fusar kar rahe the tabhi Udayan utha . Apne dukhte seene ko haath se daba kar badhawas sa dheeme kadmo se " Baba ki pahadi " ki ore chal diya . Usne aaj apni Damini aur beti ke paas jane ka dridh nishchay kar liya tha .
 
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TITLE : ISHQ WALA LOVE

LANGUAGE: HINGLISH

Date 25/12/2017

Shaam 5 baje

Neher pe bane hue pul pe woh khadi gehri soch main doobi hui uchalte hue paani ko tiktiki laga dekh rahi thi. Uske daayen aur chota khaali box parha tha. Aisa lagta tha jaise uski aankhen kisi ko dhoondh rahi ho. Shayad kuch bahut keemti kho gaya tha uska. Ankhon main lagataar tapakte aansu is baat ko phukta kar rahe the.

Wo neher aur uske aas paas ka area sheher se thora hat ke hone ke kaaran hamesha sunsaan rehta tha. Koi kabhi kabaar hi udhar se guzarta tha jisne kacche raaste se short cut jana ho. Par pata nahin wo konsa raasta dhoondh rahi thi.

Pehrawa dekh andaza hota tha ki woh kisi acche ghar se thi. Bikhri zulfen, black color ka punjabi suit, black heels, neeli ankhen aur unme main daala hua kajal. Yeh sabh to uski khoobsoorti ki shoti si misaal thi. Us khoobsoorti ko lafzon main kaid karne ka dawa karna bahut badi ghustakhi thi.

Asmaan se utri hoor keh sakte the usko. Par shayad aj us hoor ka noor kahin neher ke kinaare kho gaya tha. Upar-niche ho rahi paani ki lehren ko dekhti hui jane kyun woh school time ki yaadon main kho gayi.....

Kya din the woh. Jab pehli baar meri aur uski nazar takrayi thi. Pyaar shabad ka matlab bhi pehli baar usne samjaya tha. Shayad bhagwaan ne hume ekdoosre ke liye banaya tha. Same age, Same sheher, Same school, Same class aur Same Ishq Wala Love . Hamara pyaar poora filmy tha. Jaise film ke hero-heroine pehli baar ekdoosre ko dekhte aur bas dekhte hi reh jaate. It was like that only. It was " Love at first sight". Dono ne pehli baar ghar ki shat pe ekdoosre ko dekha tha. Main geele kapre sukhane aayi, wo patang urra raha tha. Hamari aankhon ka aisa milaap hua jaise saat janmo ki bichri hui jodi mili ho. Mujhe aisa laga wo patang ki door nahin meri rooh ki door pakre hue hain. Us din ke baad ghar ki shat se hum dono ki dosti ho gayi. Kya din- Kya raat...Bas ekdoosre ki aisi aadat parh gayi jo saari zindagi nahin shootne wali thi.

Mulaqaton ka aisa silsila chala, Woh hawa ban gaya aur main chiriya ban urti gayi..urti gayi. Bahut baar mulaqat hoti jab cricket ball mere ghar girti. Ya aisa kahun ki fenki jaati. Mere se ball ke baare main poochne par bhi uski zubaan kaampne lagti. Par kehte hain naa...Ishq main jo zubaan se nahin keh hota, Wo ankhen keh diti hain. Ekdoosre ki ankhon main hume apni zindagi nazar aane lagi thi.


School main mere liye uska chocolates lekar aana, Badle main mera uska homework aur assignments banana. Boys se mere liye larna, mera uski aur dekh rahi girls se jealousy karna. Assembly main khari hui ko hamesha dekhte rehna. Cycle pe jaate hue mera peesha karna. Aur bhi pata nahin kitna kujh. Ishq bhi kitna haseen baccha hota hain, choti-choti baatein badi-badi khushian deti hain.

First kiss bhi hamari badi anokhi thi. Main principal ke room main books rakhne aayi thi jahan woh hands up karke khada tha. Shararat ki saza jo mili thi usko. Pata nahin pyaar ka asar tha jo himmat karke maine uske honthon pe honth rakh diye. Kiss karni toh aati nahin thi, par uske honthon ke sparsh ne poore shareer main goosebumps bhar diye the.

Kahin bhi mujhe akeli ko dekh woh mere paas baith jaata tha. Hamesha fikar rehti thi usko. Tabh Facebook, Orkut, Whatsapp toh door ki baat hain, mobile phones hona bhi ameer ki nishaani maane jaate they. Aisa kuch bhi nahin tha humare paas. Par in sabke bina bhi hamara pyaar 4G ki speed jaise tezi se badta gaya.

Khair yaadein ton yaadein hi hain.

Ek toofani leher ki zordaar aawaz ne usko sapno se bahar nikala. Aaj bhi woh akeli baithi thi. Par paas usko kahin bhi wo baitha nazar nahin aaya. Pata nahin konsi khata ki saza de raha tha. Shayad koi galti hui thi, agar hui hain to maafi maangne ke liye tayaar hai woh....par......

Badal garajne ki aawaz aayi. Bhagwaan baarish ke saath yaadon ko bhighona chahta hain. December ke mahine main baarish kabhi-kabhi hi hoti hain. Khair bhagwaan ki marzi bhagwaan hi jaane. Usko bahut darr lagta tha bijli se. Par aaj woh tass se mass nahi hui. Badal aur bijli ki karakti aawaz phir usko puraani yaadon main le gayi.

Kya din the woh. Baarish wale mausam main college se bunk maarna, canteen main jaakar samose khaane, Bahar movie dekhne jana. Cinema hall ke andhere main ek doosre ki baahon ki roshni main lipte rehna. Movie ki story yaad nahin rehti thi, par kitni kiss karin hain woh pakka yaad rehta tha.

Haha. Are woh din toh bhool gayi jab pehli baar humne pyaar ka jhoola jhoola tha. Haath-Pair darr ke maare kaamp rahe the dono ke. Pehli baar jabh koi aapko bina kapron ke dekhe toh aisa hi lagega naa. Us din baarish ke paani se bheege hue dono Ishq ki aag main jal gaye the. Us din tan-man se ekdoosre ke ho gaye the. Pyaar ka meetha dard maine himmat karke sehen kar liya. Karti bhi kyun nahin, Jawani ki jism ki aag shaant jo karni thi. Charti jawani ke saroor saamne woh dard feeka bahut feeka lag raha tha.

Par woh behek ke kiya gaya sex nahin tha. Jismon ki bhookh mitane se upar do roohon ka milan tha. Us din ke baad do jism pooran taur se ek ho gaye.

Zindagi ka vo haseen pal

Teri baahon mai tham gya tha

Alfazon mai beyan na ho ske

Aisa ishq junoon bn gya tha


Par kehte hain yeh sabh kitaabi baatein hain. Asal main sacche pyaar ko koi nahin samajta. MBA ki degree bhi poori ho gayi, Abh pyaar poora karne ki tayaari reh gayi thi. Par bhagwaan ko shayad kuch aur manzoor tha.

Main kayi din use nahin mili. Main ghar main kaid kar di gayi thi. Mujhe pata tha ki usko bhi meri fikar jaroor hui hogi . Wo shat par bhi aaya hoga. Aam taur pe main raat main jaagti hoti thi. Mujhe yakeen tha ki woh ekdin kisi tarah mujhe jaroor milne aayega. Phir achanak ek din woh choro ke jaise shupta hua mere ghar daakhil ho gaya. Woh cricket ball lene ke liye bahut baar ghar aaya tha, isliye usko mera room maloom tha. Mere room ke door ka lock aisa tha jo bahar se button dabane par khul jata tha. Yeh usko pata tha. Usne lock khol diya . Mujhe abh woh saamne nazar aa raha tha, woh bhi kitne dino baad. Main hairaan thi ki usme itni himmat kaisi aa gayi thi. Par aisa lag raha tha jaise kitne varsho baad mere sookhe aangan ko barsaat naseeb hui ho.. Main uske paas gayi aur seene se lipat gayi. Rooh ke andar dabe hue jazbaat jawalamukhi ki tarah fatt kar bahar aa gaye.

" Papa ko sabh pata chal geya" Main ek saans main boli. " Bhaiya ne hume park main milte dekh liya tha. Ghar sabko bata diya".

" Tumne samjaya nahin unko" Wo kehne laga. " Bataya nahin kitna pyaar karte hain hum ekdoosre ko"

" Bataya....maine bahut manane ki koshish ki, par unhone kaha ki dobara tumse naa milun. Aur wo meri shaadi jaldi kahin aur karva rahen hain" . Main roti hui uske gale lag sabh bata rahi thi.

" Maine bhi apne gharwalon se baat ki thi, Woh bhi maan nahin rahe hain.." Usne kaha. " Mujhe laga tha shayad tumahre parents agar maan gaye toh woh baat kar lenge. Par idhar toh..."

" Maine bhi jitna ho saka kiya, Bahut manaya yaar bahut, Unki maar bhi khaayi. Lagta hai hamara pyaar adhoora reh jayega". Mera khud pe kaabu na raha. Main uski shaati se lipat kar rone lagi.

" Adhoora nahin rehne deta main. Mere hote hue koi door nahin kar sakta hume" Usne meri aankhon ke aansu poonchte hue kaha. " Mai tera hun aur tera hi rahuga."


"Zindagi swarg hai to apsara hai ishq

Rooh samandar ha to paani hai ishq

Sama berukh ha to dariya-dil hai ishq

Zamana tanashah ha to bagawat hai ishq"



" peeen... Peeeeeeeennnnn" Zordaar horn ki aawaz ne uske sapno ko phir toda.

Side pe khari uski car ka horn baja tha.

" Kya hua rahul?" Usne pyaar se poocha.

" Driver seat pe niche coke ki bottle gir gayi thi. Usko uthate hue horn back se touch ho gaya. " Rahul ne kaha.

" Its ok baby. Carry on..Enjoy the food..." Maine smile ki. " Are neeche chaddar jaroor beesha lena, Keere-makore se bach ke..."

Rahul ko dekh hamesha woh sama yaad aa jata hai jab maine marriage karwa li thi. Gharwalon ki pasand se nahin, balki apni pasand se. Marriage karwane ke baad hum punjab se kahin door uske mama ji ke ghar jaake rehne lage. Socha tha jabh tak job nahin milti , Tabh tak wahan rehke guzara kar lenge.

" Kya humne theek kiya?" Suhagraat pe maine usko poocha tha.

Na koi naach gaana, na baraati, na khushion ki shehnaia, Na card pe golden ink main likha hua " Rahul Weds Ishika", na maa-bap ka hasta chehra, thi to bas sunsaan khamoshi . Mundap ki jagah court kacheri ne li thi aur pandit ka kaam government ke offficer ne kiya tha.

" pata nhi. Par jeete ji main tumhe kisi aur ke saath nahin dekh sakta" Usne meri dono cheeks haath se pakar li. " Tum meri ho, meri hi rhogi".

Haan usne sach hi kaha tha. Main uski hoon , aur uski hi rahungi.

Main aaj bhi uski hoon aur hamesha rahungi. Yeh baat ka mujhe hamesha garv rahega. Par jis baat ka afsoos hai. Woh...toh....!!

" mom..." Aaayo chalen nahin toh raat ho jayegi, Aur baarish shuru hone waali hai. " Rahul ne use soch se nikala. Usne baaju pe bandhi hui watch ko dekha. 6 baj rahe the.

" Har saal aaniversary pe yahan aate ho. Main akela baitha bore hota rehta hun. Udhar aap paani main fishes ko khana khilate rehte ho. Yeh fishes kya kuch special hain? " Rahul ne car ki aur jaate hue saawal kiya. Usne paas parha khaali box uthaya aur uske saath-saath chal parhi."

" Bahut special hain. Khushi milti hain, Jo bahut saal pehle kahin kho gayi thi" Usne kaha. Dono car main baithe. Rahul ko is baat ki gehrayi samaj nahin aayi par ek din aage jaaakar shayad samaj jayega.


Car start hone ki aawaz aayi. Bridge se utarke car sadak pe aa gayi aur dheere dheere ankhon se ohjal ho gayi. Shayad woh apne dil main dafan raaz ko abhi kholna nahin chahti thi.

Date 25/12/1999

Shaam 6 baje

Woh aur rahul vivah ke ek saal baad apni aniversary pe picnic manane ja rahe they. Hansi majaak karte hue dono ki jodi bhavren aur fool jaise lag rahi thi. Jaldi pahunchne ke liye unhone shortcut le liya. Neher ke bridge ke paas pahunche toh sadak ke beecho beech ek car khadi thi jis kaaran raasta block ho gaya tha.

Rahul ne zor se brake pe paanv rakha. Badi mushkil se car ruki. Saamne teen aadmi nazar aaye. Do ke haathon main kisi kisam ka hathyaar tha. Ek khaali haath khara tha.

" Please back kro..jaldi" Woh cheekhi. Woh pehchaan gayi thi apne bhaiya aur papa ko.

" Yeh kaise aaye yahan?" Rahul ko kuch samaj nahi aaya. " Inhe kaise pata chala?"

Rahul ne car back karne ki koshish toh ki par woh kaafi nazdeek pahunch gaye the. Jis karan kacche raaste pe car daalni parhi. Pata ni bhawaan ko kya manzoor tha ki car achanak ruk gai. Shayad jaldi main rahul se clutch shoot gyaa. Aisa laga jaise zindagi bhi shoot gayi.

" bahar nikal saale" haath main talvaar pakde uska bada bhai car ka sheesha torta hua bola. " behenchod bahar aa". Sab kuch itna jaldi hua ki rahul ko kuch bhi samaj nahin aaya.

" Chor do bhaiya, please chor do..." Kaampte shareer main woh bahut girgirayi. Par tabh tak uska bhai khidki se rahul ko bahar nikal uske pet main laate-ghoonse maar raha tha.

" Shorna mat sale ko, bada inquilabi banta hai, hamare dharam ko brasht kiya" kehke uske papa ne rahul ke sar main danda de maara. Chot itni zor ki lagi ki rahul zameen pe mooh ke bal gir para. " Saale poore ek saal se dhoondh rahe they tujhe. Sala delhi main shup kar baitha tha. Tere mama pe talvaar rakhi toh tote ki tarah sabh bak diya kutte ne.."

" Haye mat karo, Please somebody help us...Please......somebody......please...for gods sake....." Woh car ki khidki kholte hue rahul ki taraf bhaagi. Uske shote bhai ne kalayion se pakar usko rok liya. " Bhaiya mat karo...papa ruk jao....please....rahul ko chor do please....main haath jorti hun.....no....please..."

Rahul ko sambhlne ka mauka bhi nahin diya gaya. Uska bhai aur baap andha-dhundh uspe vaar karte gaye. Baap ne danda maar-maar rahul ka sar khol diya. Bhai ne talvaar maar-maar peeth ki haddi chaknachoor kar di. Har taraf khoon hi khoon fail gaya. Uska baap aur bhai jaanwar ban gaye the.

" Ahh....meri amanat ka khayaal rakhna..." Yeh words rahul ke mooh se nikle aakhiri words the. Iske baad woh sada ke liye khamoosh ho gaya. Woh samaj gayi ki uski duniya tabah ho gayi hai. " Kya kar diya tha humne? Kya kasoor tha hamara? Kya Pyaar karna gunah hai? Kya Doosre dharam main shaadi karna gunah hai? Kya iski saza maut hain?" Woh rahul ki laash dekh baukhla uthi.


Uske bhai aur baap ne rahul ko uthaya aur bridge ke neeche neher main fenk diya. Paani main laash girne ki zordaar aawaz aayi. Rahul ka be-jaan jism neher ke paani main kahin kho gaya.

" iska kya karen? " shote bhai ne poocha.

" kaat do isko bhi.. haramzaadi.... hamari izzzat mitti main mila di" baap chillaya.

" Doosre dharam main vivah karwane walon ka yehi haal hona chahiye. " Kehke uska bhai talvaar hawa main lehrata hua uski aur barha " Ghar se jabh bhaagi thi tabhi mar gayi tu her thaamare liye."

Woh maut ko saamne dekh sakti thi. Lakin usko rahul ka khoon se lathpath chehra yaad aa raha tha. Woh apni jagah se hili bhi nahin. Bhai ke paas aate usne ankhen band kar di.

"Thishhhhhhh" Zordaar goli ki aawaz sunai di. Uska bhai wahin ruk gaya.

"Hands up. sabh apni-apni jagah pe khare raho. nahi tan goli maar dunga" Ek police wala revolver pakar bhaag ke aaya. Uske peeche teen policewale aur the. Peeche unki jeep sadak pe khari nazar aa rahi thi. Sabh ke haathon main revolver tha. Shayad unhone sabh kuch dekh liya tha . Uske bhai aur baap ko giraftaar kar liya gaya. Kismat thi ya saccha pyaar, Woh aur uski kookh main pal rahi amanat bach gayi thi.

Baad main pata chala ki police us area main patroling ke liye nikli thi. Yeh kismat ka sanjog hi tha ki unhone shortcut liya aur sadak ke beech car khadi hone ki wajah se jeep rokni parhi aur sabh kuch dekh liya aur usko bacha liya. Agar police ki jagah koi aur hota toh shayad is chakkar main naa parta.

Rahul ki laash kabhi bhi nahin mili. Shayad tez paani ka bhav rahul ko hamesha ke liye door le gaya. Peeche reh gayi toh unki amanat. Usne amanat ka naam " Rahul " hi rakha. Woh sabse door chali gayi. Kabhi bhi apno ya rahul ke gharwalon se nahin mili. Doosra vivah bhi usne nahin karwaya kyunki uska kehna tha woh uski hai aur uski hi rahegi.


"Samajti nahi hai ye bekhabar dunia

Ishq Jaat-paat aur dharam ki deewaren nahi dekhta

Kurbaan ho jayega, Mar mit kaega is jahan se

Ishq kbhi rasmo-rivaazon ke aage maatha nahi tekta."


18 saal beet chuke hain. Har saal is din woh apne 18 saal ke bete rahul ke saath yahan kuch sama guzaarti hai aur mashliyon ko khana khilati hai is umeed main ki....

Kaash koi paani main se aawaz lagaye..." Tum meri ho, aur meri hi rahogi.."


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Falling in love


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Ye kahani h pyaar ki , dil or uski dhadkano ki ajib hota h ye pyaar ajib sa eshas jo dil ko gudguda jata h or hum gumshuda se ho jate h aankhon k raste kab dil me utar jaye pata hi nhi chlta h
falling in love ...


Mai Vickky bsc 3rd year ka student **** collage .Dad ek government employ
& mom housewife & good life h .


Aaj collage ka nya saal tab to kai junior aayege ragging lenge yaar ; ye mai nhi mera sabse achha dost rohan jo 5 saal se hum sath h .


Ha lekin mai ladkiyo ki ragging karungi ; ye h rohan bro ki gf riya 2nd year or beautiful & sexy figure ki ladki h .


Ok done let's go guy's ; Ye mai ho dosto


Mai collage ground me ki bich jaha se class ke liye jana hota h wahi pe ek chair pe beth hota hu baki mere dost mere thoda pichhe right mai rohan or left me riya bethe hote baki sabi hamare pichhe khade the hum koi 10-15 boy&girls ka group h .


yee u come here
Riya ne ek ladki ko aawaj deke bulaya
oye tu b indr aa
lo rohan ne b ek ko bola liya .


ladka - sir mera naam

Rohan - yeee chup sale tere intro ka hum kya karenge sidha ragging karane ka style h apna samjha popat .


ladka pahle hi dara huaa tha upr se rohan k aise bulane pe or dar gaya isliye humare intro dena suru kar diya vo b hamare bina kahe hi .


Chal ek kaam kar ulati kinti bol

100 ,99,98,97
ruk ruk pahle puri baat to sun , apne dono kaan pakad ke up-dwon -2 chal suru kr .


Vo ladka chasmis tha body se b tik tha lekin darpok bahut tha vo rohan ke sirf
reverse counting ka sun khus hote huye count karana suru hi kiya tha ki rohan ne use rok k apni baat puri ki jise sun uski chiti-piti gum ho gyi .


Sabi in scene ka pura maja le rahe the kuch crowd ho gaya tha hasi maje ke sath y sb dekh rhe the yaha tk ki vo ladki b jise riya ne bulaya tha par itne log ke bich koi tha jise koi hosh hi nhi tha use to jese kisi baat se koi lena dena hi nhi tha vo to koi or hi duniya me tha vo itne log k sath hone pr b akela ek alag hi duniya me ghoom rha tha or vo or koi nhi aapka y dost hi tha yani mai Vickky


Jo mai pahle apni chair ko thoda gira ke rohan pe leta huaa beth hasi majak kar rha tha mujhe kisi ki ragging lene or dekhne me koi interest nhi tha lekin jab riya or rohan ne apne apne shikar ko bulaya tb b me vese hi rha fir jab rohan ka uski ragging suru ki to mai uthke jane hi wala tha ki jise hi samne riya ki bulayi ladki pe meri najar unke beautiful face se uski aankho ki gahari pe gayi bus sb ruk gya or kuch n dikh rha tha n sunai de rha tha vo aankho ke nashile jaam the or hum pyaase rahagir kb vo jaam ke pyale aankho se hote huye Dil me utar ke bharne(Basne) lage pta hi nhi chala unki vo gulab ki pankhudiyo me jhilmilati muskan hume khud ko bulane pe majbur karne lagi or hum hote chale gye pta hi nhi chala ...



aisa lag rha tha jese aaj pahli baar dil unki dhadkano se mil unka didar kar rha tha dimag pura khali hokar band ho gya tha ab dil b gawahi dene laga tha it's falling love


fir achanak eka ek us ladki ki najar mere pe padi jo itni derse khud ki ragging ki liye dar rahi thi lekin usse pahle us ladke li ja rahi thi jise enjoy karne lagi or jo rohan rangging le rha tha use dekh rhi thi ab rohan b kam handsome nhi tha or vese b abi tk usne mujhe clearly dekha b to nhi tha .


Fir jese uski najar mere pe gayi or vo b khud ko aise din duniya se bulke khud ko gurte huye to uski heart bit badh gayi sharm se chehra gulabi hone laga fir najar hata apne aaspas najar ghooma ke jab usne meri aankho me dekha to uski halat b kuch meri jesi hone lagi


Vo ladka - sir hundrad itna karna bahut hard hoga .

Rohan - start kar varna 1 ki jagah 2 kar donga .


Vo ladka up-down start karne hi wala tha ki riya ki najar mujhpe gayi jo apne hosh kho kese us ladki ki aankho me dobe ja rha tha usne chupke se rohan ko idhr ghomaya jisse uski najar b hum dono pe gayi unki harkat se us ladki tantra to tut gyi lekin aapka bhai to laga tha abi b us nurani chehre ki khubsoorat masumiyat me na jane kya tha aisa , mai hamesha sochta tha ki movie me ladki ko dekh k ye vo hang hona dikhate h y sb bakwaas hota h aisa b hota h kya kabi lekin aaj khud itna kho gaya mai jiska mujhe kuch b andaaza b nhi tha .


Rohan ke sath baki sb yaha tk vo ladka b ragging chod mujhe or us ladki ko gure ja rhe the vo ladki b rohan in sbi ki ye activity de uncomfortable fill kar rhi thi lekin ye sb activity use jo sirf usk or mere liye thi usse vo sharma or ek pyaari chhoti si muskurat uske hoto pe baar -2 aa or ja rhi thi abi koi kuch kahta ya karta ki ronny apne 4 dosto ke sath aa gya romantic mohal ka kachra karne .


Ronny - abe oye chirkuto aisi maal(jise me gor rha tha) ko rok k roni k mond ki kyo maa bahan ek kar rhe ho , mere pass bhejo ise to kya chij h yr pura white rasgulla h iska ...


Rohan - dekh Ronny tamij se baat kr ek ladki k sath sbi ke samne aisa bolke uski bezzati na kar samjhale varna .


Ronny - varna kya ha hahahahaha
tu mujhe marega kya janta hna mera baap yaha ka SI h .


Mai indono ki baato se apni jami pe fir aa gya tha varna upr aakaash udh tha ab apne aapko sambhal b liya tha or y b jaan gya tha ki mai kese us ladki ko gure ja rha tha or mamla b samjh chuka tha ek baar us ladki ko dekha jiska chehra ab utar chuka tha .


Mai apne style me chair se uthke chalte huye ronny ke aage jakar khada ho gya meri ye puri style suru se sbi dekh rhe the khas kr mere dost or vo ladki .
ab chair ko sidha karke aaya tha to sbi ko to notice karna hi tha .



Dekh Ronny aaj mera marne ka mond nhi h varna ab tk tera mond bna chuka hota abi fighter ka dil lagane ka dil h nikale varna lat guso ki machine me dal donga fir Si sahab apne bete ko nhi dund payenge samjh ~ Mai


Bas mera itna kahna tha ki sb mere panch pe hotting or sitiya bhajane lage ronny jese hi mujhe marne ke liye aage badhne ko huaa mera pura group tej aawaj ke sath aage aaya jisse ronny ko rone ka muh leke jana padh .



Ye hotting isliye nhi thi ki mene ronny ko panch mara ye to mere dil wil pyaar war ki baate mere muh se vo aise sb ke samne or abi kuch der pahle us ladki ko gurne wala scene fir y or mai kbi aisi baate nhi karta tha y sb mujhe bs show lgta jise mai enjoy kr leta tha .



Aaj jab mujhe love hoaa to dekho us ladki ka mayus chehra b mere hosh gwa chuka tha jiske flow me mai kya kah diya tha ye mere dosto k hotting krne pe pta chala , ab meri amberiss hone ki bari thi .


Ye sb or kuch kre use pahle hi mai apni class ki tarf nikal gya vo sb mujhe aawaj dete rh gye mai class me aake beth gya us ladki k bare me sochne lga ye sb mujhse kese or kyo ho gya lekin kuch b ho yr kya aankhe thi uski kya beautiful face h uska , ek baar me dil me aisi shama gyi ki har saas usi k hone ka esahas kra rhi h .



Kuch der me mere dost & group b aa gya
abi vese b koi class nhi thi

Rohan - kitne pyaar gur rha tha or hume bolta h ye sb tum timepass krte ho .

Riya - kbi hume b dekh liya kro aise .

Rohan - meri jaan usk liye to mai hu na .

Dost7 - aaj fighter ki fight nhi dil dhadkane boli vo pyaar se .

huuu huuuuuuuu

Rohan - aaj to sher ko b dil ka rog lg hi gya .

Riya - nhi jaan fighter k b seene me dil hota h y jaana .

Rohan - Ha y to h nhi hamesha fight bas fight .

Dost 1 - fighter bhai ka love yani bole to apni bhabhi oyeee oyeeeee


fir kya tha sbi aise hi krte kre lunch tk bas tk teacher rehte sb chup lekin rohan to tb b nhi chup ho rha tha pass hi betha


fir lunch me sb cantin gye jaha wo ladki thi lekin abi kisi ka dyan uspe nhi gya tha hamare aate hi sb respect se wish krne lge hum ek table pe round me jakar beth gye .


Rohan - aaj sbi ko fighter ki tarf se party h enjoy .


Mai - abe pagal ho gya kya meri tarf se kis liye party be .

Riya - ab tu b hamari tarh pyaar me pad hi gya na to party to banti h .


Rohan - ab baba wale character ko side rakh ab romance wale killer boy ko bahar la my boy .


Dost 5 - vese b fighter ko pyaar hoaa h party kya mehfil sajni chahiye .

Rohan - wah mere yr y ki na tune dil wali baat muhh (flying kiss funny).

Dost 8 - to ho jaye

sb - ho jaye .

Mai - abe lagta tum sb pagal ho gye ho abe kisi ko dekh kya liya tum to pichhe hi pad gye hato salo me chala .


Mai jese utha k jane wala tha ki meri najar fir use dekh atki or meri dosto ki najar meri aankho ka pichha karte huye waha bhatki fir kya mujhe pakad wahi pass wali table pe bith liya .


Vo ladki jab se hum aaye h hume dekh rhi thi or bate b sun rhi thi vo samjh chuki thi ki mere dost usi ki baat karke mujhe pareshan kar rhe h .


Dost 6 - are itna baat ho gyi lekin abi tk bhabhi ka naam b nhi pta hume .


Sbi - ha sahi baat h

Riya - are yr us ronny ki wajah se sb bigad gya tha .

Rohan - to ab puch lete h


Vo hum sbi ki baat sun uncomfortable fill kar rhi thi or krti b kese y uska 1st time b ho sakta h or vese collage k 1st day k sath y sb hona koi kese soch sakta h .


Rohan - hello mai rohan & u .

Vo ladki - hh heello mai Vanya Rajput .

ohhh Vanyaaa huuuu


Rohan - aapko mera friend kesa lga .

Vanya - jjj ji ache h aap aisa kyo puchh rhe h .

Riya or Mai samjhte huye ki ab rohan kya bolne wala h par vo hume chup kra khud bol diya pura cantin or kahi bache hume dekh rhe the , Rohan k isi utavlepan ki wajah se vo b pahle riya se thappad khaya tha .


Mai - rohan chup ho ja yr

Riya - rohan ruko

Rohan - tum dono chup rho dekh nhi rhe mai baat kr rha huna , (Vanya) kya aap mere dost ki gf banana pasand karengi .

Rohan ki baat sunke pura mahol pin drop silent ho gya koi rohan ki baat se sok the to koi usk reaction ko dekhne ke liye to koi usk jawab k liye y sb ek alag tha jese kuch hone wala ho pr kya kuch kaha nhi ja sakta .



Vanya sbi ki mojudgi or sbi ko apni tarf aise gurne ki wajah se achha fill nhi kr rhi thi .


Vanya - jjj jji jjii nhiiiii


Jese hi usne ye bola mai apni respect ho diya or mera pyaar nhi mila soch k uthke nikal gya or mere dost b mujhe rokte aawaj dete huye nikal aa gye .


Mai sidha ghar chala aaya mere mobile unke call aane lage pr mene ise switchof krke rakh diya na kisi se milata sirf ghar hi rehta ghar me b jyada baat nhi krta .


1 week after


Mom - beta kya ho gya tujhe na sahi se khata h n bolta , koi problem h to hume bta .

Dad - dekho beta jab tk mai ho tume tension lene ki jarurat nhi h btao kya baat h .


Mai - kuch nhi mom dad aisi koi baat aapko aise hi lga hoga mai tik hu .

Mom - dekh tujhe meri kasam h sach sach bta kya baat h .

fir mujhe mom dad ko sb btana padta h kyoki mai unse or vo mujhse bahut pyaar krte h .

Mom - dekho beta ek to tumne baat nhi ki upr se vo sb sbi ke samne use ghere huye or sabse important baat uska 1st day tha collage me ab kisi b ladki ke sath aisa hoga to vo kese Ha kr sakti h beti mai b ladki thi mujhe pta h kitna soch samjhna or samjhana padta h ek ladki ko isliye tu b kuch uski jagah reh kr socho .


Dad - dekho beth agar kisi ladki ne mana kr diya to tu use apni insult nhi samjh sakte jese ladko ko hak h ijahar krne ka vese hi ladki ko Ha or Na krne ka h or pyaar me kesa ego ha or sabse important baat hum kisi se pyaar kre y jaruri nhi ki use b tumhe pyaar ho .


Mai - sorry mom sorry dad mene sach me bahut badi galati kr di .

Mom - To kal jakar use sorry jarur bol ok

Mai - Yes Mom , Goodnight

Mom Dad - Goodnight my son


Aaj mai fir vese cool fill kr rha tha jese pahle karta tha bas Vanya ko sorry bolna tha lekin ek sach y b h ki mai usse kitna pyaar krta hu y koi nhi jan payega .


Mai - hi guys

Rohan - are yr tu aa gya

Riya - rohan aa gya
fir dono or baki sbi gale milte h

Mai unse baat hi kr rha tha ki mujhe Vanya sad face ke sath aati huyi dikhi .
Mai to use dekh fir khone laga tha lekin badi muskil se khud ko sambhal use pass chal diya .


Mai - hi vanya .

Vanya (sok & happy look ke sath) - hiii

Mai - I m sorry us din k liye but y sach h tume dekhte hi I m falling love ...
mujhe tumse kese itna pyaar ho gya pta nhi chala chalo chhodo kisi ne kya khoob likha h......


Jinse Milna Takdir Me Nhi Hota
Kasam Se Unse Mohabbat Kamaal Ki Hoti



Mai ghoom ke jane lga mujhe vanya ki aawaj aayi
Rokiye Plz

Vanya -

Koi Sab Kuch Kahakar Pyaar Jatata Hai
Koi Kuch Na Kahakar B Sab Bol Jata Hai


I Love Youu




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