Thriller AB MERI BARI HAI BY VIVJO (RESTARTED)

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for starting new story
iss baar kahani ko pura nahi kiya tha

itna pyar dene k liye

next week se ju k review chahiye idhar bade wale

 

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for new story

Bahut hi accha likha aapne pahle hi updaate mein bichde hue log mil rahe hai...

Waise ye Zee city kyun naam rakha aapne

aahaa ahobhagya jo aap padhare deviji

for your review

haa starting me sabko mila raha hu aage padho shayad aur achhi lage

zee city is liye nam rakha ki me local use karta to kuchh log sawal karte ki yaha esaa bhi hota hai kya to mene socha ki me khud ka hi kuchh bana leta hu pura fictional

isi liye nam rakha yaha characters k nam k alawa sab fictional hai

updates post kar diye hai as promised

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vivek bhai story wapis suru karne ke liye

bhai

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review

 

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UPDATE 2

car me bethne ke bad nirali reet se: nirali aaj me bahot khush hu aaj mujhe mera bhai wapis mil gaya hai....

uska chehra khushi se nahi sama raha tha aur reet bhi use dekhti rehti hai... nirali thoda udas hote huwe fir se bolti hai: shit mene to bhai ka number bhi nahi liya

tabhi reet turunt bol padti hai: mene le liya hai na...

nirali thoda chonkte huwe: tumne number liya ?

reet ko apni galti ka ehsas ho jata hai aur apne men me kehti hai ise sab kuchh bata dena hi chahiye aakhir ise bad me to pata chalna hi hai aur reet nirali ki taraf dekh kar...

reet: nirali tum janti ho na ki me kisi se pyar karti hu nirali: haa lekin iska bhai se kya sambandh hai
reet: me jisse pyar karti hu wo aur koi nahi tumhara bhai hi hai nirali pehle to chonk jati hai fir khushi se: kya sach.... yani tum

meri bhabhi banogi?

reet: ha aaj tumhare bhai ne mujhse sadi karne ki bat bhi karli is liye me aaj bahot khush hu..

isi tarah ki bate chalti rehti hai aur uska 7 ghante ka safar pura ho jata hai aur wo log 'Dreamcity" apni manzil tak pahoch jate hai

(ab thoda nirali ke bare me bata du nirali ek khubsurat si ladki umer 22-23 sal iske ghar me uski maa aur uska bhai hai aur ek banda jo uske bhai ka dost hai jise nirali bhai hi manti hai aur ye dono vivek ke dost hai jo aage aayenge.. lekin nirali in tino bhai me se sabse zyada pyar vivek ko karti hai nirali vivek ko bhai kehke bulati hai aur dusre dono ko uske nam se hi jiski bajah se inme takrar bhi hoti hai jo ki aage dekhne ko milegi)

(ab thoda Dreamcity ke bare me 'Dreamcity' sach me dream ki city hai jaha wo sab kuchh hai jo ek dream ki city me hona chahiye lekin jaha achhai ho waha pe burai jara bhi na ho esa kabhi nahi ho sakta.... jo bhi hai dreamcity me wo aage jarur dekhne ko milega)

ab story aage badhate hai

dusre din subha nirali ke ghar me

nirali aaj bahot khush dikh rahi hai uski chehre ki khushi ko dekhte sab puchhte hai ki kya bat hai lekin wo batati nahi hai

(nitin nirali ka saga bhai aur vivek ka dost umer 24-25 sal aaj dreamcity me inspector ki post pe hai)

(shan nitin ka bachpan ka dost lekin yahi kehna chahiye ki nitin ka bhai dono hamesha sath hi rehte hai ye bhi 24-25 sal ka

ladka hai...shan ke mummy papa jab wo bahot chhota tha tab se guzar chhuke te aur tab se hi ye nitin ke ghar rehta hai ye bhi inspector hai dreamcity me)

(dipika aunty ek 50 sal ki aurat vidhwa hai inke pati jab nitin 10 sal ka hota hai tab hi guzar chuke hote hai tab se ye apne bachho me hi apni duniya rakhi huyi hai aaj aunty bhagwan ki yatra pe hai jo kuchh din bad aayegi... ye shan aur nitin me kuchh fark nahi rakhti hai aur sath me vivek me bhi)

nirali apne dono bhai jo hall me bethe the uske pass coffee leke jati hai

nitin nirali ko dekhke: kya bat hai nirali aaj to badi khush lag rahi hai

nirali apni mushkan ke sath : ha kal me kitne dino bad out of city ghumne gayi thi na isi liye

shan iski bate sunkar bolta hai: chalo aaj kafi din bad teri ye khubsoorat mushkan to dekhne ko mili... aur nitin ki taraf dekh kar chal jaldi abhi headoffice bhi jana hai.... aur dono chal dete hai.. dono jab ja rahe hote hai tab hi nirali ka cell bajne lagta hai aur dono uski taraf dekhte dekhte nikal jate hai

nirali jake mobile uthake dekhti hai to reet ka call tha nirali ne pick karke

nirali: hello bhabhi good morning

reet: good morning nanad ji kya abhi se aap mujhe bhabhi kehna suru kardogi

nirali : ha ab aadat to dalni hi padegi

reet: thik hai ek bat sun mene tumhe is liye call kiya tha ki hamari jo appointment thi khatri group ke chairman Mr. Arman ke sath wo cancel ho gayi hai

nirali ye sunke turunt bolti hai: kya esa kese ho sakta hai?

reet: abhi thodi der pehle uski secratry ka call aaya tha usi ne bataya

nirali: ab kya kare

reet: me abhi thodi der me tere ghar aati hu

nirali : thik hai... aur call dc karke rakh deti hai aur kuchh udas si ho ke kuchh sochne lagti hai... tabhi uska mobile fir se baj uthta hai aur wo dekhti hai ki call vivek ki hai.... jo number usne reet ke pass se leke save kiya tha... nirali call pick karti hai aur

vivek : hello chhoti

nirali thoda udas man se hi: good morning bhaiya vivek: kya huwa niru.. kya bat hai...?
niru: kuchh nahi bhaiya humari appointment thi khatri group ke chairman Mr. Arman ke sath lekin wo cancel ho gayi

vivek: tumhe uska kya kam hai?

niru: bhaiya me aur meri friend ek project pe kam kar rahe the jisme reet bhi meri madad kar rahi hai hume usme khatri group ke uper research karna hai lekin ab lagta hai ki hume dusra project choose karna padega

vivek: niru ek kam karo me kal subhe 9 baje tum logo ko us

khatri ke office ke niche milunga tu aur reet waha pahoch jana time se aur yaad rakhna kisiko mere bare me pata na chale

niru: par bhaiya wo khadus type ka aadmi hai free hoga fir bhi kisi se nahi milega

vivek: tu chinta mat kar me sab thik kardunga bus kal tum dono waha time se pahoch jana... aur call dc ho jati hai

nirali abhi apna mobile rakhti hai ki reet ghar ke andar dakhil hoti hai nirali usko bithake coffee banane chali jati hai aur fir coffee hath me thama kar dono bate karne lagti hai tabhi nirali ko vivek ki bat yaad aati hai aur wo nirali ko kehti hai

nirali: bhabhi kal subha 9 baje khatri ke office pahoch jana reet: kya appointment mil gayi?
nirali: nahi kal bhaiya yaha aayenge aur wo kuchh karenge jisse hum mil sakte hai us arman ko

reet: par yaar mere papa commissioner hote huwe bhi usne milne se mana kiya tha tere in dono bhai ne bhi try ki thi fir bhi kuchh nahi huwa fir ab kese hoga

nirali: dekho bhaiya ki bat hi kuchh aur hai wo jarur hamara kam kar denge

reet: thik hai kal pahoch jaungi.... aur dono aapas me bat karne lagti hai

is taraf zee nagar me vivek aryan ko kehta hai: aryan me dreamcity ja raha hu

aryan: me bhi chalta hu


vivek: nahi me sirf niru ke kam se ja raha hu kal wapis aajaunga.... aur dono thodi der bate karte rehte hai aur uske bad vivek waha se nikal jata hai dreamcity ke liye

dusre din subha 9 baje khatri group ki office ke niche nirali: bhaiya kaha reh gaye?
reet: wo dekh aagya tumhara bhai.... vivek apni x1 unke pass lata hai aur dono ko usme bethne ko bolta hai... dono car me beth jati hai aur car khatri group ke 10 manzila office ke nichhe parking me pahoch jati hai

(khatri group desh ka bada business group hai aur iski headoffice dreamcity me hai jaha vivek reet aur nirali abhi hai aage khatri group ke bare me bhi bahot kchh aayega)

vivek reet aur nirali andar chale jate hai aur vivek andar bethi ladki ko puchhta hai: Mr. Arman kaha pe hai?

ladki bina dekhe: wo 7th floor pe apni cabin me hai lekin aap unse nahi mil sakte...

vivek uski puri bat sune bina hi lift ki aur chal deta hai aur reet aur nirali uske pichhe chal deti hai

vivek 7th floor pe pahochta hai to dekhta hai waha ek ladki bethi hai jo in sabko lift se bahar aata huwa hi dekh rahi thi vivek uske pass pahoch ke Mr. Arman ki office kis taraf hai?

wo ladki kuchh kahe bina ek switch press karti hai aur turunt hi do bodygaurd type bande hazir hoke bolte hai: yes mam

ladki: in sab ko bahar nikal do


ladki ki bat sunke dono bodygaurd vivek ki taraf chal dete hai to vivek fir se bolta hai

vivek: dekhiye madam aap unse kahiye ki vivek aaya hai wo jarur mujhse milna chahenge

ladki dono body gaurd ko dekhke : dekh kya rahe ho bahar khich ke le jao in sabko

dono bodygaurd jese hi vivek ka hath pakadte hai tabhi vivek dono ko jor se sir pe apne hath ka punch marta hai aur dono behosh ho jate hai aur vivek ladki ki taraf gusse se dekh ke Arman ko bulao yaha pe

ladki dari huyi si phone uthati hai aur jo yaha pe huwa sab batane lagti hai lekin isne abhi tak vivek ka nam nahi bataya tha

Arman: kahiye kya kam hai mujhse

vivek uski bat sunke pichhe mudta hai aur kehta hai: kamine tujhse milne ke liye mujhe kuchh kam hona jaruri hai kya?

uske do minute bad hi ek handsom sa ladka(Arman) do bodygaurd ke sath waha pahochta hai lekin vivek uski taraf pith kiye huwe khada tha

jab Arman vivek ko dekhta hai to uski khushi ka thikana nahi rehta aur wo turunt vivek ke gale lag jata hai ye dekh ke sab thoda chonk jate hai

vivek: chal andar cabin me aur reet aur nirali ki taraf dekhke unko sath chalne ka ishara karta hai aur chaaro office ki taraf chal dete hai office ke andar pahochke Arman coffee ka bolta hai aur fir


Arman: aaj me bahot khush hu ki tu wapis aagya

vivek nirali ki taraf ishara karke: ye hai nirali chhoti bahen armanl: to yahi hai chhoti niru humari bahen aur ye kon hai vivek: ye teri bhabhi hai
arman aur khush ho jata hai nirali aur reet jo abhi tak sab kuchh ulta phulta hota dekh rahi thi ab thodi normal ho jati hai aur charo bate karne lagte hai

vivek: reet niru ye hai mera bhai Arman khatri mujhse 10 second bad is duniya me aaya hai

Arman: me iska saga bhai nahi ye to dad ka ek lota beta tha lekin mere mom dad me jab 1 sal ka tha tab hi chal base the tab se mujhe vivek ke papa ne hi apne ghar me rakha tha....

vivek uski bat ko bich me katta huwa: tu fir bakwas suru karne laga

Arman: bakwas nahi hai jo sach hai wahi bata raha hu

reet sab bate sunke: to tum rich person ho ye mujhe pata tha lekin itne rich ye mujhe nahi pata tha.... aur nirali bhi is bat ko agree karti hai

vivek sirf muskurata hai aur Arman bolta hai: iske kafi raaz hai jo koi nahi janta hai

uske bad yuhi bate chalti rehti hai aur vivek Arman ko niru ke project ke bare me bata kar uski help karne ko bolta hai aur bad me kehta hai ghar saf karwale thik se me 8 din bad aaunga sab

ke sath aur arman khushi se sir hami me bhar deta hai... aur

vivek waha se zeenagar ke liye nikal padta hai (aage jaariiii........... )


will post soon Update 3

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haa vivek ki life me bahot se raaz hai

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