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Thriller AB MERI BARI HAI BY VIVJO (RESTARTED)

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(8 din yuhi gujar jate hai isi bich vivek sirf ek phone kar ke bolta hai ki mera aur aryan ka transfer dreamcity me karde aur call dc karta hai aur aaj uska tansfer bhi ho chhuka tha isi se vivek ki power ka bhi andaza lagaya ja sakta hai..aur wese bhi vivek SP ki post me sabse chhoti umer wala hi hai )

ab aage...

8 din ke bad dreamcity me... subha ka samay

nirali ke ghar me aaj nitin aur shan bahot pareshan the to use pareshan dekh kar aunty bhi pareshan ho jati hai wahi nirali ke chehre pe aaj khushi sama nahi rahi thi aaj uska chahita bhai jo aa raha tha... aur reet bhi subha subha nirali ke ghar pahoch jati hai aur uska chehra bhi khushi se bhara tha aaj wo 8 din bad fir se apne pyar ko milne wali thi.... reet, nirali, nitin, shan aur aunty chahro hall me beth kar bate karne lagte hai

(ab thoda nirali ke ghar ke bare me bata du... ye ghar inko nitin aur shan ki nokri ke bad government se mila tha isme 3 room hall aur kitchen hai ek room shan ka ek nitin ka aur ek room me dono maa beti rehti thi ghar ke bahar ek chhota se aangan tha ghar do manzila jesa tha niche hall kitchen aur ek room tha jo nirali aur uski maa ka tha aur uper jo do kamre hai wo shan aur nitin ke the)

ab aage..

nitin : reet kya tumhare papa ko maloom hai ki ye naya SP kon hai?

reet apne man me papa ko to nahi lekin mujhe maloom hai fir bhi bolti hai: nahi papa ko nahi maloom aur papa ko uska nam bhi nahi maloom hai... aur nirali ki taraf dekh ke halka sa muskura deti hai

shan reet ki bat sunke: ye le ye to khud commissioner ko nahi pata ki naya SP kon hai aur uska nam kya hai.... aur nitin ko dekhke... chal hum office nikalte hai pata nahi kab tapak jaye naya SP

aunty: beta tum log chinta kyu karte ho wo koi bhala aadmi hi hoga

nitin: lekin maa uska nam tak kisi ko nahi maloom lekin ha sab kehte hai wo ancounter karne me mahir hai aur kuchh 500 jitne kar chuka hai.... aur thoda ruk kar fir bolta hai... ab hum chalte hai kuchh kam hoto call kar dena aur shan aur nitin ghar se nikal jate hai

aunty bhi apne room me chali jati hai aaram karne aur aunty ke jane ke bad

nirali: bhabhi kya bhaiya ka call aaya tha

reet: nahi tumhara bhai kabhi call nahi karta hai ha agar me call karu to katke wapis mujhe call karta hai aur bolta hai call mene hi kiya hai aane do aaj use thoda sabak sikhati hu use

nirali: achha mere rehte huwe tum mere bhai ko sabak sikhaogi reet: tujhe mera sath dena padega aakhir me teri bhabhi hu nirali: raat ko to tumne bhai se bat ki hogi naa
reet thoda khush hoke: ha kal do ghante tak bat ki humne nirali: to fir ye bhi kaha hoga ki kab tak yaha padharenge reet: ha wo aur aryan dono dopehar tak pahoch jayenge
aur isi tarah ki bate nirali aur reet ke bich hoti rehti hai....

is taraf vivek aur aryan apni x1 me sirf kapde ke do begs leke subha 9 baje hi zee nagar se nikal chuke the car vivek drive kar raha tha jo ki apne sokh se full speed me car drive kar raha hota hai aryan ko kabhi kabhi iski full speed wali driving ki aadat se bahot dar lagta hai lekin vivek ka drive hamesha safe hi rehta hai isi liye wo vivek ko kuchh nahi bol sakta tha

aryan vivek se : ek kam karna yaar aaj sidha ghar hi jate hai office kal join karenge

vivek kuchh soch kar : thik hai ek kam kar commissioner ko call laga aur bolde ki hum kal aarahe hai nam sirf tumhara dena.....
uske bad aryan phone pe kuchh der bat karta hai aur uske bad vivek apne phone se nirali ko call kar deta hai

vivek call pick hote hi: kya reet aagyai waha par?

nirali juthe gusse se: ab biwi aagayi to apni bahen ko bhul gaye

vivek: are esi bat nahi hai me aaj sidha ghar hi aata hu tum un dono kamino ko wapis ghar bula lo ab tak use pata chal bhi gaya hoga ki aaj uska naya SP nahi aane wala hai

nirali khushi se: thik hai me abhi use call karke bula leti hu... lekin aap kab tak aajaoge

vivek: me 2-3 ghante me pahoch jaunga...aur call dc kar deta hai

(is taraf dreamcity me media namki news channel me raat ke ek khas show ki taiyaari chal rahi hoti hai jo ki city ke naye SP ke bare me tha aur is show ko ancker karne wali ek bahot hi khubsoorat si ladki jiska nam hai heenal jo ki abhi show ki speech ready kar rahi hai)

(show ka telecast aage hoga)

nirali nitin aur shan ko wapis ghar bula leti hai reet abhi bhi wahi thi nitin aur shan ghar wapis aate hi

nitin : kya huwa jo hume wapis bulaya hai? nirali: kuchh huwa nahi hai hoga
shan : kya hone wala hai?

nirali : jab hoga tab dekh lena bahot hi bada jatka lagega tum dono ko sath me maa ko bhi

nirali ki bat sunke reet hasti rehti hai jise dekh kar

shan: lagta hai is bar tum bhi iski kisi harkat jo hone wali hai

usme bhagidar ho?

reet: ha wo to hai akhir meri..na...best friend jo hai

reet se bat nikal hi jati ke nirali meri nanad jo hai lekin wo bat palat deti hai

yesi bate thodi der chalti rehti hai tabhi vivek nirali ke bataye pate par pahoch kar apni x1 mese bahr aata hai aur ghar ke aangan me khada ho jata hai uske pichhe aryan aake khada ho jata hai.. aur vivek

vivek jor se chilata hai: niruuuuuuuu.....

jise sun ke andar bethe bate karte sab log chup ho jate hai aur nirali ke chehre pe khushi ki laher dodne lagti hai aur sabhi bahar aajate hai sabse pehle shan aata hai uske bad nitin aur uske bad aunty jo vivek ko bahar khada dekh kar chonk ke putle ki tarah khade hoke vivek ko dekhte rehte hai... last me reet aur nirali bahar aate hai aur sab ko dekhne lagti hai.. vivek chhupi todte huwe

vivek: kyu mujhe dekhke khush nahi huwe kya tum log?

sabse pehle aunty aage aati hai jiski aankho se aasu behne lage hote hai jise vivek pochhne lagta hai aur aunty bolti hai: kaha chala gaya tha tu?

vivek uske gale lag kar : mom me kahi nahi gaya tha bus thoda kam tha to chala gaya

aunty: lekin bina bataye thode koi bhag jata hai?

vivek: wo thodi lambi kahani hai mom jo me aapko bad me sunaunga aur apna hug kahatam karke shan aur nitin ki taraf dekhne lagta hai

shan aur nitin turunt apne shoes leke uspe tut padte hai jise dekh kar baki ke sab hasne lagte hai thodi der vivek ko juto se pitne ke bad tino gale mil jate hai aur..

shan aur nitin ek sath: kaha gaya tha tu? vivek: bola na bad me bataunga
nirali bich me bolti huyi: dekh liya na mera jatka ab tum dono mujhe pareshan karke dikhao... aur apna dhenga dikhate huwe vivek ke gale lag jati hai

sab ghar ke andar chal dete hai uske bad vivek aryan ka intro karwata hai aur fir sab nirali ke hath ki bani garma garam coffee ka maza uthane lagte hai isi bich reet sirf vivek ko ghure ja rahi thi aur vivek bhi bate karte karte usko kabhi dekh leta hai is harqat ko do aur log dekh ke muskura dete hai jo aryan aur nirali the

thodi der bethne ke bad vivek sab ko ye bolkar apni car me bitha ne lagta hai ki me kuchh dikhana chahta hu car me jaga kam padne ke karan reet bolti hai hum ladies meri car me aate hai aur fir vivek car start karke aage chal deta hai aur reet uske pichhe apni car dodane lagti hai

vivek sab ko kaha le ja raha hai ye kisi ko nahi pata tha aur sab ke dil me yahi kashmakash hoti hai ki aakhir konsi chiz dekhne ko milne wali hai

vivek apni car city ke sabse rich area me chalane lagta hai aur sab log area ki ronak ko hi dekhne lagte hai ki agar abhi esa hai to raat me kesa nazara hoga idhar ka... aur fir vivek car sidhi sector number 23 ki aur le leta hai jo ek private sector tha aur uska malik aur koi nahi khatri group hi tha sab log ye dekh ke chonk jate hai ki vivek khatri group ke area me le aaya hai

sector 23 me enter hote hi security checking aata hai lekin vivek ki car ke number dekh kar usko koi rokta nahi hai fir bhi vivek car rokke ek security wale se bolta hai pichhe meri hi car hai use esi hi aane do aur security wala ha me sir hila deta hai dono car aage badhti rehti hai aage hariyali bahot hi dikhay deti hai road ki dono taraf ped ke alawa kuchh nazar nahi aata tha road ekdam clean the

shan aur nitin ye soch me padh jate hai ki jis aadmi ne humko milne se inkar kar diya aaj vivek unhe usi ke pass leke ja raha hai lekin kyu....? esi hi kashmakash ke sath sab car me behe rehte hai

thodi der bad sabko ek aalishan bunglow nazar aata hai aur car thodi hi der me bunglow ke gate ke pass pahoch jati hai

(ab thoda is aalishan bunglow ke bare me bata du sector 23 ke bich me bana ye bunglow kisi mahel se kam nahi dikhta hai bunglow ke gate ke pass hi name plat me likha hota hai "KHATRI'S" jise sirf reet dekhti hai.... ab bunglow ke andar ki bat kare to.. enter hote hi pehle karib 100 meter ka rasta dikhay deta hai jiske aaju baju garden the 100 meter chalne ke bad ek chhota se circle aata hai jisme fountain lage huwe hai uske bad thoda aur aage chalte hi bunglow ka bada sa gate nazar aata hai jo ki abhi khula huwa hai...bungow ke left side pe parking hai jaha abhi kam se kam 20 car khadi thi aur sabke

pichhe likha tha khatri' bunglow ke andar jate hi bada sa hall nazar aata hai jisme itne sofe rakhe huwe the ki 20 -25 log ek sath beth sakte hai ek side ki diwar pe 80 inchs ka bada sa lcd tv laga huwa hai... hall ke bicho bich khade hoke hum bunglow ke sare kamre dekh sakte hai jo ki karib 23 kamre hai......................................... bunglow

me 23 kamre tin manzilo me bate huwe the niche 5 rooms ek bada sa kitche uske bazu me store room aur baki ke 18 room 9 - 9 ke hisab se first aur second floor pe the sabhi kamro me attach bathroom aur toilet hai aur sabhi kamro me har zaruriyat ka samna rakha huwa hai inme se abhi sirf ek kamra band hai jo niche ground floor pe hai jo ki aage pata chalega kiska hai ye huwa bunglow ka nirikshan aage aur bhi bunglow me jo hai wo pata chlta rahega)



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sabhi dreamcity pahoch jate hai.. airpot pe flight se utarte waqt hi vivek ko apni x1 dikhi aur uspe tek lagayi khadi uski jaan i mean reet khadi thi... vivek ke chehre pe reet ko dekhke smile aajati hai.. vivek sabse aage tha uske pichhe mohini thi... vivek ko ek jagah dekhta pakar mohini samaj gayi ki yahi reet hai... fir sab log car ke pass pahoch gaye.. car ke pass pahochte hi vivek reet ke pass jata hai aur dono ki aankhe milti hai to vivek reet ko aankh mar deta hai... fir..vivek harry mohini aur aditya ki taraf dekh kar...

vivek: ye hai REET.... meri malkin... aur reet ye hai harry, mohini aur aditya... urf majnu...

reet sabko hello bolti hai fir mohini ke pass jake...

reet: to ye hai meri devrani....i mean harry bhai ki wife...

mohini: haan... aur aap hai meri jethani... imean ki is sadel ki wife...

harry: ise sadel kyu bol rahi ho...?


mohini: to fir kya bolu... ye dekho.... fir mohini apni kalai dikhati hai jo lal dikh rahi thi.... dekha do din se bandha huwa tha.. agar ye waha jaldi aata to uska kya jata...?

aditya: ye to aaj bhi aagya... agar na aata to tum kya bolti...? mohini: agar nahi aata to ye aaj mere samne nahi khada hota....
reet: wo sab to thik hai..... ab ghar chalna hai ki nahi. ?

mohini: haan reet ghar to chalna hi hai... kafi thakan hai...

aditya: dekh harry teri bhains ko thakan lag rahi hai.....

aditya ki bat sunke sab hasne lagte hai...

vivek: abe bhains mat bol ye to hippo hai..

reet: ab tum bhi kya bate leke bethe chalo bhi...

fir sab car me beth gaye.. car vivek ne drive karna suru kiya....
uske baju me aditya betha to vivek ne uske samne dekha...to..

aditya: kya huwa be.. me to yahi bethunga.... bhabhi aapko koi etraaz to nahi na........... ?

reet: nahi mujhe koi etraz nahi hai....

fir aditya aur vivek aage bethe hote hai piche ki seat me harry uske pass mohini aur uske pass reet bethi hoti hai... yani ki mohini bich me aur uske aass pass harry aur reet bethe hote hai...


vivek: reet tumne ghar pe sabko bata diya hai na ki... reet: haan sab ghar pe hi hai...
vivek: mom dad...bhi aagye...

reet: are haan mom dad bhi aagye aur swati aur uske mom dad bhi aagye hai...

vivek: are wah..

mohini: ye swati kon hai...?

reet: meri friend aur nitin ki wife... hone wali.....

mohini: oh to nitin ne love marriege karne ka faisla kiya hai. ?

reet: sirf nitin hi nahi.... tum bhi to ho....sahi kaha na. ?

mohini..: hmm haan sahi kaha.... aur bhi koi hai kya love marriege wala.. ?

reet: haan hai na.... ye sabhi dost love marriege hi karne wale hai....

aditya: bhabhi me nahi karne wala.... mujhse kon si ladki pyar karegi...

reet:thik hai... tumhari arrenge marrige karwa denge... tum
mujhe bhabhi bolte ho to tumhe.... me jisse kahu usse sadi karni padegi bolo manzur hai....

harry: chal jaldi haan bol....

vivek: beta fas gaya tu....

aditya: haan thik hai... aap jisse kahoge ussi se me sadi karne ko ready hun..

reet: fir thik hai....lekin agar aapne kisi ladki ko pasand kiya ho to mujhe bata do... me usse hi aapki sadi kara dungi...

aditya : bhabhi pehle ghar jake kuchh khaunga.. piyunga.. uske
bad bat karenge.....thik hai...

reet: hoke wese bhi ab ghar aane hi wala hai...

car thodi der me ghar ke andar aajati hai.... sab car se niche utar jate hai...reet sabko bahar khade rehne ka bolke andar chali jati hai aur jab wo wapis aati hai.. to reet ke sath heenal nirali swati sabnoor zarin maa arman nitin aryan aur shan bahar aaye the lekin uske sath koi aur bhi tha..(idhar reet ke mom dad aur swati ke mom dad andar hi the) sabko dekh kar aditya mohini aur harry khush hote hai lekin aditya ki nazar jese hi wo naye aaye huwe kirdar pe padti hai to uske thode hosh ud jate hai....
us naye kirdar ko dekh kar harry aur mohini ek dusre ki taraf dekhne lagte hai wahi.. vivek ke chehre pe smile aati hai........... vivek
ki smile ko dekh kar mohini aur harry bhi smile karte hai.. fir
nirali aage aati hai aur tino yani ki harry mohini aur aditya ki aarti utarti hai.. fir sab log andar jate hai...uske bad..

vivek: suno sab ka intro time....ye hai aditya.. (jo abhi tak us naye kirdar ko dekhe ja rhaa tha...) ye hai harry... aur ye hai... hippo....(ye sunte hi harry bolta hai.......... )

harry: are nahi ye hai mohini....



vivek: to aap sab samaj gaye na in dono ka hi ilu ilu hai....



vivek ki bat sunke sab hasne lagte hai...vivek fir se bolna suru karta hai... jistarah se sofe pe sab bethe the usi tarah sabka intro karwata hai...vivek apne pass bethi nirali se suruaat karta hai...
 
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vivek: ye hai nirali.... our sweet sister...ye hai mom... ye hai nitin ye uski lover swati... ye hai heenal aryan ki lover ye hai shan ... ye uski lover sabnoor... ye hai... zarin.. arman ki rani... i mean lover.. ye hai swati ke mom aur dad... swati ke papa yaha ke hom minister hai.... ye hai mere mom dad i mean father in law and mother in law...aur (us naye kiradar ki taraf hath karke) ye hai miss deepa.... reet ki nirali swati zarin heenal sabki friend...that's it..

harry momke pass jake unke per chhuta hai mohini bhi mom ke pass jake per chhuti hai aditya bhi sabke per chuta hai yani swati ke mom dad aur reet ke mom dad ke bhi...

fir thodi der sabki bate hoti rehti hai tabhi.. reet: vivek chalo mere sath kuch kam hai..
vivek reet ke sath cha deta hai jo reet use vivek ke kamre me leke jati hai... kamre me jane ke bad...

reet: dekho me swati nirali aur heenal charo jeke kal hi deepa ko yaha leke aye hai... mene uski mom se sari bate karli hai........ ab
bus tum kisi bhi tarah karke aditya ko ready karo deepa ko

propose marne ke liye....

vivek: wah tumne to sara intzam kar diya.. hai aditya ka isi liye car me use bol rahi thi...

reet: haan....wese abhi sab shopping ke liye jayenge... tab tum aditya ko kuchh samja dena waran tum sab bhaiyon ki meeting subha gym me ho tab aditya par sab tut padna wo propose kar dega..

vivek: haan wo to tumne sahi kaha.... aur kuchh plan hai kya tumhara....

reet: dekho agar aditya propose karega to bhi sham ke waqt karega.. to aaj ki raat tum aaram karlo al subhe hume sabnoor ke ghar jana hai shan ka rishta leke uske bad zarin ke ghar jana hai arman ka rishta leke... fir parso tak aditya ka bhi propse ho jayega to parso deepa ke ghar jake uska risshta fix kar lenge....
kesa hai mera plan. ?

vivek: ek dam hatke.... chalo sabko ready hone ke liye bol do....

fir sabhi ready hoke shopping ke liye nikal jate haimall me pahochne ke bad....vivek aryan ko side me bulata hai..

vivek: aryan ye deepa ke aur aditya ke bare me reet ne sabko bataya hi hoga....to ab kal subhe gym me jab hum sab mile to sab usko propose karne ke liye dabaw dalna taki sham tak wo propose karne pe majboor ho jaye... subhe hamari meeting ho jaye uske bad tumhara kam har waqt usko uksana hai............................... jo
tumhe achha se aata hai...

aryan: ok bro...kal sham ko ghar pe hi propose karwayenge aditya ko...

vivek: thk hai .... lekin sun agar y e kam nahi huwa to me tujhe heenal se bat tak nahi karne dunga.... jab tak aditya propose na kare.... aur haan mera nam nahi aana chahiye...

aryan: yaar propose mera wo bhai nahi karega to is chhote se bhai ko saza kyu...?

vivek: wo apna bhai hai isi liye...

aryan: thik hai ab to me ye kam kar hi lunga... vivek: ok jaa ab heenal ke pass khada ho ja... aryan: to fir tu bhi jana bhabhi ke pass
vivek: abe chup chap chal....

fir vivek aur aryan sabke sath chal dete hai...

kafi der shopping karne ke bad vivek sabko us restaurant me leke jata hai jaha usne reet ko propose kiya tha aur bad me use purchase kiya tha... waha sabko vivek apni propose ki katha sunata hai tabhi zarvez usko bolta hai....

zarvez: sir yaha ke cctv camaras ke alawa jawed sir ne aapka propose wala programme record kiya huwa hai.... aap kaho to me waha play karwa du....

vivek: thik hai ye to nehle pe dehla hoga....

fir vivek sabko bolta hai...

vivek: kya me sabko kuchh dikha sakta hu... ?

aryan: bhai jo bhi ho jaldi dikaha de...


vivek: to fir pes hai... mere propose ki film....

fir sabhi log dhyan se dekhne lagte hai waha bethe aur bhi log is video ko dekhne lagte hai...

video dekhte dekhte sabke chehre ke expression badlte rehte hai...

fir video play hone ke bad sabhi taliya baja kar vivek ko congrats karte hai....

harry: wah be tumne to mast propose kiya hai bhabhi ko...

vivek: to fir ek hi bar karna tha to achhe se hi karunga na....

vivek ki bat sunke sab hasne lagte hai lekin aditya kuchh soch me duba huwa tha...

vivek aditya ko soch me pada huwa dekh hasta hai aur reet aur aryan ko uski taraf dekhne ka ishara karta hai fir tino smile karte hai....

sabhi ka khana ho jane ke bad sab ghar ki taraf chal dete hai....

ghar aane ke bad jiske yaha already rooms the wo apne room me chale gaye.... shan aur arman apni apni meh booba ko uske ghar chhodne gaye the.... aditya ko shan ke baju wala kamra milta hai to harry ko nirali ke baju wala room milta hai... mohini aur harry ko reet ek hi room deti hai aur bolti hai....

reet: kafi dino bad akele mile honge dono.... esh karo devrani ji.... aur wese bhi ab to aadat dalni hi padegi...

swati ke mom dad aur reet ke mom dad ka bhi ground floor pe ek room tha to ab sab chale sone...



is andari raat ko to kuchh nahi huwa lekin abhi sab hai gym me aur waqt hai subha ke 5:30 jaha par abhi shan arman aryan nitin aur vivek hi the...



ab dekhte hai aage kya hota ahi... to be continues...
 
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sabhi gym me the siwa aditya aur harry ke.. vivek sabko bolta hai

vivek: dekho sab wo jo Deepa hai na wo aditya ki lover hai sabko pata hai.. lekin aditya na kehne se darta hai kafi time se wo use chahte hai lekin har bar bus uske ghar ke samne jake khada
rehta hai lekin kabhi milne nahi gaya aur na hi koi kiya... me itna kehna chahta hun ki use na propose karne ke liye uksaw thoda... taki wo propose karde...

arman: wo sab to thik hai lekin kya deepa ye sab janti hai... vivek: wo agar nahi janti hoti to yaha nahi aati..
arman: ab hume kya pata bhabhi leke aayi thi idhar....

vivek: wo jo bhi ho lekin ab ye try karo ki aditya bolde ki I LOVE YOu... ya fir use jo bhi bolna ho..

aryan: so guys plan ye hai ki jis tarah mene arman ko uksaya tha

usi tarah aditya ke sath karna hai...

arman: matlab kamine tujhe ye sab karne ke liye isne bola tha... aryan: haan yaar sara plan vivek the great ka tha...
arman: tujhe to me chhodunga nahi vivek...

nitin: guys shayad koi aa raha hai...
tabhi gym me harry aata hai... aur aate hi bolta hai.. harry: hi bros good morning
sab ek sath :good moring

vivek: kesi rahi be nind teri... harry: ye kya ulta pulta bol rha hai
vivek: tujhe raat me jo karne ko mila wo mere ko nahi mila isi liye...

harry: kya tak jakh kar raha tha kamine tu...?

vivek: meto andhere me tir chala raha tha lekin nishane pe laga...

shan: yaar wo sab chhodo ye socho ki aditya kaha hai....

tabhi bahar se aawaz aati hai......... present sir..... aur aditya bahar se aata hai hath me ek botle thi chhoti si lekin dekh ke hi
pata chal jaye ki ye daru ki botel hai...jise dekh ke sab ho jate hai aur vivek aditya ke pass jake..


vivek: kyu be bewde subhe subhe me sarab leke kya kar raha hai.....

aditya: pi raha hun aur kya karunga.... isse thodi nahaunga...

vivek: dekh kamine agar mom ne dekh liya na to bura manegi...
isse achha hai ki tu daru chhod de..

aditya: abe ja ja... kamina tu to ese bol raha hai jese tune kabhi daru hi na piya ho.... me ek botel daru piyunga to tu do botel pi jayega... lekin fala mere ko daru chadhti hai thand lagne se aur tujhe to kuchh nahi hota....lekin tu mere ko sikha mat...ek bat bolu...

aditya ko sab dekh rahe the idhar koi kuchh nahiu bolta to.. aditya: abe bolna ek bat bolu kya. ?
vivek: haan bol...

aditya: tujhe pata hai yaar tin char din se daru nahi pina to esa lagta hai ki mere andar dimag me koi locha hogya hai wo munna bhai wala...... fala kal bhabhi ne apni friend se milwaya tab mujhe usme deepa hi dikh rahi thi.... mene kuchh kar diya hota to bhabhi to mereko marti na...

aditya ki bat sunke sab ko hasi aane lagti hai lekin sab us time control kar lete hai aur vivek bolta hai...

vivek: lekin tu kya karta agar wo deepa hoti to....

aditya : agar wo ab samne aagyi na to me use apne dil ki bat bol

dunga... keh

dunga kya mujh bewde se sadi karegi kya..?



vivek: thik hai chal abhi tu ye botel chhod aryan ja ise leke ja aur thoda dahi(curd) khilad... iska nasha kam karo aur isko thoda wo wala nasha chadao



aryan aditya ko leke jata hai sidha kitchen me aur waha use thoda dahi khilata hai jisse aditya ka nasha utarne lagta hai fir aryan aditya ko uske room tak leke jata hai...



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is taraf aryan aur aditya ke jane ke bad harry bolta hai...

harry: tujhko kese maloom padha ki deepa wahi ladki hai aur baki sab...

vivek: beta agar tujhe ye chiz maloom hoti to aaj tu bhi meri jagah hota...

shan: chalo jo bhi ho... lekin ek ba bata kya aditya jo tere bare me bol raha tha kya wo sach tha..?

harry: are 16 aane sach tha ye sarab bhi pani ki tarah pita tha... lekin sarab pine se isko nasha nahi chadta tha lekin ek chiz ye zarur karta tha... bate bahot karta tha wo bhi sidhi tarah koi ye nahi kahega ki isne sarab pi hai... kamina har chiz

hazam kar jata hai...

nitin: chalo bhai log ab ye bate chhodo sabhi log abhi uth jayenge... abhi sirf itna socho ki kese aditya ko propose karwaye... ?

vivek: sochna kya hai use ek ghante me hosh aajayega uske bad use sirf deepa ke bare me bat karna aur bolna aj me tumko milwa dunga lekin tumhe propose karna padega to hi ese hi bolke pakao usko.. aur abhi chalo ghar me sab... :

sabhi gahr me aajate hai koi abhi tak hall me nahi tha sab ghar me aake apne apne room me chale gaye the...

aadhe ghante bad...

reet apne room se bahar nikal ti hai aur vivek ke room me chali jati hai vivek ready ho chuka tha aur door ki taraf hi aa raha tha lekin wo jese hio door ke pass pahochta hai use reet andar aaati dikhay deti hai.. vivek reet ko bus dekhta hi rehta hai..reet vivek ke pass aake..

reet: kya dekh rahe ho. ?

vivek: kuchh nahi aaj thoda time mila tumhe achhe se dekhne ka..fir vivek dhire se reet ko apni aur khichta hai aur fir dono ek dusre ki aankho me dekhte hai aur fir ho jati hai ek kiss...

thodi der bad dono room se bahar nikalte hai tabhi use nirali bhi apne room se bahar aati dikhay di to reet usko bolti hai...

reet: nirali Deepa ko leke niche aana use bulake aao

nirali: ok bhabhi...

aur nirali waha se deepa ke room me chali jati hai... jab reet aur vivek niche jate hai tab waha pe koi nahi tha thodi der bad sab lo aane lagte hai... thodi der me sab aajate hai siway aditya ke aryan ne bataya ki wo abhi so chuka hai...sabhi dining table pe beth chuke the tabhi vivek bolta hai..

vivek: aaj mujhe kuchh kam hai isi liye me abhi Reet ke sath bahar jaunga... hmmm wese mom dad(reet's mom dad) uncle aunty(swati ke mom dad), aur mom aap sab mere sath chalenge...

mom: lekin beta jana kaha hai...

reet : mom mere do dever ki sadi ka rishta pakka karne jana hai...

mom : ok ...

vivek aur reet ke sath reet ke mom dad aur swati ke mom dad ke sath mom ko leke vivek sabnoor aur zarin ke ghar jake shan aur sabnoor ke sath arman aur zarin ke rishte ki bat pakki kar leta hai yaha sabnoor ke ghar jate waqt shan waha sath me hazir tha to zarin ke ghar jate waqt arman sath me tha ye sari planning vivek ne ki thi...

shan aur arman ki sadi pakki hone se dono bahot khush the wahi aditya apne room me bore ho raha tha.. lekin waha aryan aur harry aake use pakana suru karte the thodi thodi der ke timing pe... yaha pe aryan aur harry ki mehnat rang la rahi thi... aditya sochne par ajboor ho gaya ki kal jo ladki dekhi kahi wo sach me Deepa to nahi thi..


tabhi aryan aur harry dono ek sath aditya ke room e aate hai aur kuchh bada wala dhamaka karte hai..

aryan: abe yaar kal tune jo ladki dekhi badi mast hai... use propose mar de...aur

haan wo deepa hi thi...

aditya: wo deepa kese ho sakti hai...?

harry: tujhe manna hai to man warna hum ja rahe hai wese bhi bhabhi se pata chala hai ki uska koi aashiq hai aur shayad wo deepa ke ghar wale usi se uska rishta pakka kar sakte hai...

harry ki bat sunke hi aditya bed pe se jor se chhalang laga ke chilata huwa utha...: nahi deeepa sirf meri hai uski sadi me kisis se nahi hone dunga...

isi bich harry ek aur bat keh deta hai..

harry: ab bhi der nahi huyi hai aaj hi deepa ko propose marde agar tune propose bhi mar diya to fir teri sadi hum sab milke karwa denge.. lekin jab tak tu propose nahi marega hum kuchh nahi kar sakte...

aryan: aaj tere pass aakhri moka hai agar aaj tumne deepa ko propose mar diya to kal teri sadi ki bat hum pakki karwa denge... ab tu der mat kar mere bhai aaj apne dil ka parda khol de...

aditya kuchh sochne ke bad: aaj to me use apne dil ki bat batake rahunga.. lekin yaar me propose kese maru...


harry: kyu be jab kabhi bhi tu fasta hai to apni bak bak suru karta hai tab to teri bolti rukni nahi aur aaj propose karna hai to tujhe kuchh samaj nahi aa raha...

aditya: yaar tab sirf jaan ka khatra hota hai yaha pe jaan aur zindgi dono ka khatra hai...

harry: to ab tak kaha gaya tha... pehle propose karna nahi suja kya..?

aditya: mujhe kya pata tha ki bat yaha tak aa jayegi... ab jaldi se rasta dhundho... koi...?

aryan: rasta mil gaya mere bhai bus tu himmat karke propose marde jab me kahu tab..

aditya: jaldi batana bhai kab bolna hai mujhe...?

aryan: ab itni jaldi kya hai...?thodi der ruko ek ghante me sabhi log bahar ghumne jane wale hai usme deepa bhi hogi tab me kahunga ki ab bol to tujhe bnolna hai...

aditya: agar usne mana kiya to..

aryan: agar usne mana kiya to uski pados wali ladki ko leke aayenge kyu ki uski koi bahen to hai nahi...

aditya: kya bak raha hai yaar?

harry: aryan mujhe to lagta hai ki deepa mana kar degi..? aditya: kyu be kyu mana kar degi..? mujhme kya kami hai..?


harry: kami kuchh nahi hai to khubiya bhi konsi hai...?

aditya: chup beth warna mohini ko jake bol dunga ki tu chhup chhupke se sharab pita hai..

harry: yaar meto mazak kar raha tha..itna serious mat ho... chal me chalta hun aadhe ghante me sab jane wale hai ready rehna...

aur harry room se bahar nikal jata hai... uske jane ke bad aryan..

aryan: chal me bhi chalta hun heenal dhundh rahi hogi... tu ready reh aadhe ghante me yaha se nikalne wale hai...

aditya: tujhse kuchh saal karne hai jaldi ready hoke aa tab tak me ready ho jata hun...

aryan: ok chal abhi thodi der me aata hun...

fir aryan bhi aditya ke room se nikal jata hai uske jane ke ba aditya kuchh soch me dub jata hai achanak wo dod kar sidha bathroom ki taraf bhagta hai... shayad use kuchh aaya tha...YAAD..

aadhe ghante bad tin car ghar se nikalti hai... ek me aryan aditya harry nitin aur arman the to dusri car me heenal sabnoor nirali mohini aur zarin the to tisiri car me vivek reet swati aur deepa the... tino car thodi driving ke bad city se bahar aajati hai aur thodi der guzarne ke bad ye cars city se bahar bane ek resort me jati hai yaha ka diner bahot famous tha to aaj sab log yahi aagye the ...
 
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sab log gate ke tak pahoch jate hai.... gate ke bahar tin srcurity wale khade the jinme se ek ne vivek ko dekhke turunt hi uske pass aata hai aur bolta hai : sir aap ... badle me vivek bhi usko smile karke kehta hai ha me ab thodi bhukh lagi hai jaldi gate kholo arman hai na,,, security : ha wo andar hi hai.. aur wo security wala dusre dono ko gate kholne ka ishara karta hai

sab gate khulte hi andar ki ronak ko dekhne lagte hai aur dono car bunglow tak pahoch bhi jati hai... sab car me se uter jate hai tab tak bunglow me se koi bahar nahi nikalta vivek jor se chillata hai: armaaaaaaaaaan

turunt hi andar se 5 -6 log aate hai jinme arman bhi samil tha tabhi last me ek aurat bhi aati hai jo puja ki thali hath me liye aati hai aur turunt hi bolti hai: vivek baba jaldi se aajao me

aapki aarti utarti hu bad me hi andar aana

(ye aurat uska pati aur inke bachhe vivek ke bunglow ke pichhe bane servent house me rehte the ye sab is ghar ke bahot purane nokar the aur vivek aur arman ko bilkul ek maa ki tarah hi treat karti hai aur ye dono bhi uski khushi ke liye sab kuchh karte the vivek aur arman ne kafi bar ise bunglow me rehne o bola hota hai lekin in sab ne kabhi haa nahi kaha...... in sab ke alag alag kam hai jo aage pata chalenge)

vivek turunt aage aata hai sab gate ke pass line me hi khade hote hai vivek ke ek baju me reet khadi thi dusre baju me nirali uske pass nitin shan aur aunty reet ke pass aryan khada tha

wo aurat jo thali leke aayi thi jiska nam usha tai hai (sabhi inhe tai hi bulate hai vivek aur arman ki bajah se siway inke pati) wo aage aati hai aur vivek ki aarti utar ti hai aur sab ke mathe pe tilak karke sab ko andar le jati hai

sab ke andar pahochte hi vivek hall ke sofe pe beth jata hai... aur sab ka intro arman ke sath kuchh is tarah kar wata hai

vivek: arman sab ka intro karwa deta hu tumse aur sabse tumhara.... fir sab ke samne khade hoke bolta hai.... (tab tak sabhi sofe pe idhar udhar beth gaye the)...... ye hai Arman khatri mera bhai aap sabhi....

arman bich me bolta hai....: me iska saga bhai nahi hu lekin mom dad ne mujhe apne sage bete jesa hi pyar diya hai............ khatri
group ka lota malik to ye ek hi hai....vivek khatri....

vivek arman ki bat ko bich me kat te huwe arman ki taraf dekh kar: dekh arman bahot sunli teri bakwas ab aage kuchh bola na to me yaha se chala jaunga..... mera aap sab logo ke alawa is dunia me koi nahi hai aap sab hi meri family ho......


aur sab thoda emotional ho jate hai... isi bich sabke liye chai coffee aur thanda aajata hai.. vivek bolta hai... jaldi se khana lagao bukh lagi hai....aur thodi der me khana lag jata hai

sabhi log dining table pe beth jate hai jo 12 logo ki sits wala tha.. vivek side wali sit me pehle betha usne aunty ko jo main chair bolte hai singal wali usme betha ya aur baki sab log idhar ek ek chair pakad kar beth gaye vivek ke baju me reet thi uske baju me nirali uske pass nitin aur uske samne aryan tha uske baju me arman aur uske baju me shan jo aunty ke baju me tha

khana lagne ke bad vivek tai ko bola: tai ye hai meri mom aaj se ye is ghar ki malkin hai fir nirali ki aur ishara karke ye hai meri chhoti bahen nirali ye is ghar ki ladli aap hamesha kehti thi na ki meri bahen hoti to me aur luck hota aaj me bahot lucky hu na...

tai : ha vivek baba aaj sach me aapke sath sath hum bhi naseeb wale ho gaye

aur fir vivek ne sabko bola aaj se sab ko yahi rehna hai.....

aunty turunt boli: par beta hum yaha kese reh sakte hai vivek:L kya yaha kisi chiz ki kami hai?
aunty: nahi beta yaha to kisi bhi chiz ki kami nahi hai lekin beta....

vivek unki bat ko bich me kat kar:me aapko maa bulata hu aur aap mujhe beta bhi kehti hai aur bete jesa pyar bhi karti hai.. to aaj aap meri ye chhoti si gift le lijiye aap yaha ki malkin ban jaye...

arman bich me bolta huwa: pls. maa man jaye humare khatir


aunty : thik hai beta aakhir tum sab ke siwa mera kon hai duniya me

baki sab jo tab tak chhup the sab ke chehre pe khushi aa jati hai....

uske bad vivek sab ko bolta hai sham ko hum shopping pe ja rahe hai... me aur niru to ja rahe hai... baki jinko chalna hai chale...

reet dhire se vivek ko : me yaha kya karungi

vivek usko chhedte huwe: are tumko tome bhul hi gaya.... agar
tumhe shopping pe aana hai to mera ek kam karna padega reet: kya?
vivek : tumhe bhi yaha abhi ek room choose karna padega wo bhi mere room ke baju me hai wahi... shart manzoor to chalogi shopping warna ghar jana...

reet pehle use ghurti hai fir ek smile ke sath kehti hai: thik hai me to room select kar lungi lekin sab puchhoge to kya kahoge ki ye yaha kya kar rahi hai..?

vivek: are yaar isme darne wali bat nahi hai puchhe to bol dena ki me malkin hu is ghar ke malik ki... mera matlab hai tum meri malkin ho.... aur vivek hasne lagta hai... aur reet uske per pe halki si japat lagati hai.... tab tak sab ka khana bhi khatam ho jata hai aur vivek fir se bolna suru kar deta hai...

vivek: sab apne apne room select karlo jisko jaha rehna hai raho siway is room ke.....aur jo room first floor pe tha jo sabse alag dikhta tha uski taraf ishara karta hai...

arman ke siwa sab ek sath : wo kiska room hai?

vivek: vivek khatri ka..... aur sab ke samne dekhta huwa aur serious chehra bana kar: aur ek bat ye jo room dikh raha hai (jo ground floor pe tha uski taraf ishara karke) ye koi use nahi karega ye mere mom dad ka room hai jo sada ke liye uska hi rahega....

sab hami me sir hilate hai fir reet vivek ki taraf ishara karti hai ki kon sa wala room lu left ya right?... tabhi nirali uske pass aati hai aur kehti hai..

nirali: ji bhabhi uper chalke dekh lena jo bhi aapko pasand aaye left ya right lekin ek select karke dusra mujhe de dena...

reet uske samne sirf putla banke dekhti rehti hai to nirali fir se: chonkiye mat aap dono bate thodi unchi aawaz me kar rahe the to mene sab sun liya.... reet fir nirali ki taraf dekh ke has deti hai...

thodi der me sab apne apne select kiye huwe room me chal dete hai....

(sab ke room kuchh is tarah... aunty ka ground floor pe vivek ke mom dad ke baju wala room... nitin ka room first floor pe left side pe.. pehla room uske bad aryan ka aur uske bad shan ka room uske samne ki taraf vivek ka room pehle se hi tha uski left side wala room Reet le leti hai aur right wala room nirali ka ho jata hai arman ka room bhi first floor pe hi tha jo ab nirali ke room ke baju me padta tha)

sham ko 6 baje vivek ready hoke nichhe aata hai uske kuchh minute bad hi reet aa jati hai

vivek : hi beautiful


reet usko guar se dekhke smile ke sath: hi vivek: kya shopping karni hai?
reet: jo bhi tum pyar se dilwa sako... aur thodi sarma jati hai

tab tak aryan aur nirali bhi ready hoke aajate hai... uske bad thodi der me sub aajate hai.. aunty shopping pe nahi ja rahi thi... shan aur nitin kehte hai hum station jana hoga kyuki kal naya SP aane wala hai... arman kehta hai ki mujhe office jana hai.... baki bache charo shopping ke liye bahar niklte hai....

parking me khadi kafi sari car dekh kar : itni sari car ? vivek: ha ye sab mujhe bahot achhi lagti hai
nirali : mujhe bhi sab cars bahot pasand hai

vivek: tujhe jo bhi pasand ho keh dena kal se wo teri car thik hai...

nirali: par...

vivek uski bat ko katte huwe : par war kuchh nahi kal se tumhe jaha bhi jana ho tum driver ke sath ja sakti ho..

fir sab log ek benz car me beth ke shopping ke liye nikal jate hai tabhi nirali ka mobile bajta hai jo ki pichhe reet ke satrh bethi thi aryan vivek ke sath aage betha huwa tha.. nirali call pick karti hai

nirali: ha Zarin bolo..... (zarin ka intro aage aayega jab uski bahot jarurat hogi tab)

zarin: mene is liye call kiya hai ki kya tum mere sath shopping ke liye cahl sakti ho...?

nirali: yaar me bhi abhi shopping ke liye hi ja rahi hu tu bhi star mall pe aaja sath me shopping karenge...

zarin: thik hai lekin tum kiske sath aa rahi ho Reet ke sath? nirali: ha reet bhi hai aur mera bhai bhi...
zarin: tera bhai sath hai to me nahi aaungi.. nirali : kyu kya huwa?
zarin: are tumhare dono bhai sawal puchh puchh ke dimag kharab kar dete hai..

nirali : tu chinta mat kar shan aur nitin nahi hai ye mere dusre bhai hai...

zarin: are ye konsa bhai hai ? jaha tak mujhe pata hai tere to sirf do bhai hi hai...

nirali: dekh tu pehle mall pe aaja uske bad me tujhe sab bataungi..

zarin: thik hai abhi aati hu.... (zarin ke gahr se mall sirf 10 minute ki duri pe hai aur vivek ka sector private tha to wo to mall se kamse kam 30 minute ki duri pe hai)

zarin se bat khatam huyi thi ki wo sab log mall pahooch ne hi wale the.. reet nirali ko puchhti hai ki kon tha nirali bata deti hai ki zarin thi... aur sabhi log thodi der me mall pahoch jate hai... vivek car park karne chala jata hai aryan reet aur nirali tino bahar uska intzar kar rahe the. tabhi nirali ko zarin aati

huyi dikhay deti hai jo uski taraf aati huyi smile karti hai ... zarin aate hi...

zarin nirali se: kesi hai tu nirali.. aaj pura din kaha thi?

nirali : aaj mene ghar shift kiya hai isi liye naye ghar pe thi abhi wahi se aarahi hu..

zarin reet ko bhi hi bolti hai aur fir nirali se bolti hai..

zarin: are nirali tera bhai yahi hai kya?... (zarin aryan ki taraf ishara karti hai jo mobile me kuchh kar raha tha)

nirali: ha ye mera bhai hi hai lekin iske alawa do aur hai jisme se ek abhi aate honge

zarin: kya bak rahi hai nirali tere sirf do bhai the ab 5 kese ho gaye?

nirali : ye nitin ke friend hi hai lekin me in sabko mere bros hi manti hu aurme sabse zyada pyar jisko karti hu wo waha dekh aa rahe hai...

zarin nirali ke ishare ki taraf dekhti hai jaha ek banda jo ekdam handsom lag raha tha wo usi ki taraf aata hai... zarin usko dekhti rehti hai... zarin ko is tarah ghurta dekh vivek uske pass aake bolta hai..

vivek: medam aap jo bhi ho lekin is tarah se ghuro mat me already kisi aur ka hu... aur reet ki taraf dekhta hai... sab vivek ki bate sunke hasne lagte hai... zarin thoda sad muh banati hai...

nirali zarin ko dekh ke: zarin naraz mat ho yahi hai mere fav. bhiya iska nam hai vivek khatri aur jo waha khada hai uska nam

aryan hai...



fir zarin vivek aur aryan ko hi bolti hai... aur sabhi mall ke andar shopping karne chale jate hai..



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