Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 24

Abhi jamin par pada tha ......Sainik usse mara hua samazkar aage badhne lage .........
woh saare sainik thodi dur par ruk gaye ....unmein se ek aage Abhi ko dekhne k liye aage badha .Tabhi ek prakash Abhi k bhiter se pragat hua aur gunji uss sainik ki dardnak cheekh......

Achanak yeh kya hua ....sainiko ko kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha ...unhone dhyan se dekha toh p
waha tha Abhi ki sangharak shaktiyo ka ansh KAAL ka panja uss sainik k seene mein woh sanik chikh raha tha aur uski ceekhe sukar KAAL ki aankhon mein ajeeb si krurta ......k tabhi Kaal ne ek zhatke se use seeme ka haat nikala .......toh haath men tha uss sainik ka kaleja .....khoona se sane haath mein halka dhadahta hua dil ....jisase bahta taza khun dekhkar kaal ki aankhon mein alag hi krur chamak aagayi thi ....Kaal ne uss dil ko apne jabde mein chabakar nigal lya ....woh sainik niche ..yeh sab itne jaldi hua k baaki sainiko ko pata hi nahi chala k vaha kya ho raha hai
aur jab samaz aaya toh unki ruh kaanp gayi ....Kaal iss samay Sher manav k roop mein tha ......usne khoon se sane jabde par lahe khoon ko saaf karne jeebh nikalikar pheri aag ugalti aankhon se unn sainiko par ek nazar daali aur ek nazar Abhi par .....aur jor se dahada .....
Sainik darte hue aage badhe k tabhi Kaal Lapakkar sainik k paas pahunch apne jabde mein uska sar pakdkar ukhad diya baki bache hue sainiko ki or dekhta aur chaba gaya ....abhi bhi 500 k lag bhag Sainik khadan mein bache hue the ......

Kaal ek baar unn sainiko ki taraf dekhkar aur dahada .......Kaal hu mein ...Mahakaal ka ansh tumahari maut hu main ....
aur ab sabse aage sainik ko pakadkar Kaal ne uske seene mein dono haath dalkar bichse faad deta hai ....dono haath pakde hue uss sanik k fate hue sharir ko ek aur zhtkar dekar bich se chirkar fhenk diya....apne saamne itne bhayankar drishya dekhkar unn sainiko ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi k kaal k paas mein bhi gatke .......Kall aage badh raha tha aur badh rahi thi unn sainiko ki cheekhe ......kissi ka sar alag ..kissi k tukde pade tga ...koi bich se chira hai ..,.

Yaha Abhi kp bhi hosh aagaya ....usse apne bhiter shaktiyo ka bhandar nazar aaya jo usne pahele kabhi nahi Dekha tha ....Abhi bhi apna kjkhanjar lekar ....Darmen k sainiko par tut pada ......

Yaha Abhi Maarak khanjar ko gumate hue aage badh raha tha jo jisase bhi lagta woh rakh mein badal jaata ....Darmen k siniko mein hah hahkar mach gaya .......

Khadan mein ho raha shor jungle mein bhi fail raha tha ..,...Abhi ne toh jungle k ek hisse k daityo ka hi saamna kiya tha .....woh daitya bhi khadan ki aur badhe ......

Baune yaha bandiyo ko mukt karane k liye surang tak le hi jaa rahe the ......K tabhi unke saamne ...ek daitya khada ho gaya ....usne ek haath se aage khade baune ki gardan pakadkar uthadiya....uss bhayankar Daitya ko apne saamne ..dekhkar ..woh baune ekdum dar gaye ....Sardar ka bum ghutne laga .....tabhi ek khanjar aaya aur uss daitya ki garden k paar ho gaya ...

aur woh niche gir pada ....Bauno ne dekha waha Abhi tha ....

Abhi - jaldi se inn sabko yaha se nikalo .....Aur ussi jagah meri pratiksha karo ......

Abhi unn bauno se baat hi kar raha tha ....k tabhi bandiyo mein saamne khade yuvak ne ek or dekhte hue Abhi par chalang lagayi .....aur ek shool badi tezi ...se ..unke saamne jamin mein ghus gaya .......

ek baar toh Abhi samzha nha k iss yuvak ne ekdum se kyu chalang lagayi ......parantu ja b usse samaz aaya .....toh uusne shool ki disha mein dehka toh waha ek aur daitya tha .......Abhi ne uss yuvak ko sahara dekar khada kiya ......aur unko jaldi se nikalne ka ishara kiya ......
aur uss daitya par ....apne khanjer se vaar kiya .....jisase woh vahu dher ho gaya ......

yaha kaal ...sainiko k chithde uda raha tha ...unka khoon pi raha tha ......dil nikalkar chaba raha tha .......jo bhi uske haath mein aajata ...usko buri tarah chirkar ....chote chote chithdo mein badalkar wahi phenkdeta .....jaise koi chota baccha kafaz k tukde kake bikher dete ho ....

itni bhayanak tarike se sainiko ko marte hue dekhkar ...woh sainik idhar udhar chupne lage .......lekin kaal ki nazar se kaun bach sakta tha ...aaj varsho baad jaga tha woh uski rakt ki pipasa abhi shant nahi hui thi ....usse chahiye tha aur rakt ......

aur Abhi yaha Jungle ki taraf se aarahe daiyo ka saamna kar raha tha .....aur unhe apne khanjar se maut k ghat utaar raha tha ........

Yaha Darmen ...ne Egypt k registhan mein apna samrajya failaya hua tha ........usne waha k saare logo ko gulam banaya tha ......waha ki sunder sunder striyo ko ....nagn awastha mein ....apne mahal mein rakhta tha .......aur unse bhog karke apni vansh vridhi karta ....

uske sainik bhi kai stiro se jabarduti sambandh banakar apne nasal aage badhane mein lage hue tha ...

Waha usne apne aapko devta ghoshit kar diya tha .......Issi Mahal mein usne Neil ki madat se ek atyaaadhunik lab aur ek control room banaya tha .....iss lab mein woh Neil ki sahyata se Samya yaatra yanra ...yani Time machine ka nirman karne mein laga tha .....

Darmen ne bhi itne varsho mein apna parivaar banaya tha jiske baare mein baad mein pata chalega ......

Darmen iss samay ..Neil k saath ..uss samay apni lab mein tha ......

Darmen - aur kitna samay lagega isse tayar hone mein ......itne varsho mein bhi tum isse bana nahi paaye ....sach kahu toh Arsalan ka vigyan k gayn k aage tumahara gyan kuch bhi nahi hai .....

Neil - issbaar humara yeh prayog Safal hoga Maha mahim .....bas kuch din aur .....parantu iske banane k baad hime bahut adhik maatra mein urja ki aawashyakta hogi ....

Darmen - uski chinta tum mat karo .....apne prayog par dhyan do ....yadi iss baar bhi asafal rake ..toh apni toh tum jaante ho ....kya hoga .....( Neil ki taraf ghurta hua )

Neil ko saaf saaf Darmen ki aankhon mein apni mrityu dihkayi drne lagi ...aaj kitne dino baad usne apne pita Arsalan ka naam suna tha .......
Neil Arsalan k baare mein sochne laga ...k wakai uske pita k vigyan k aage uska vigyan kuch bhi nahi ....kaash aaj uske pita hote ...itna sochte hi uski aankhien laal ho gayi.....nahii.....Arslan mera shatru hai ....aur Darmen mera maalik......aur usne saamne khade hue Darmen ko pranam kiya ......

yahi tha Darmen ka jaadoo jiske vash mein ..Arsalan k bete the ...yadi kabhi bhule se unke maan mein apne pita k prati koi khayal bhi aata ....toh uska jaadoo phir sakriya ho jaata aur unke mann se woh bhav nikal jaata .....

Neil ko iss taràh pranam karte hue dekhkar Darmen kutilta se muskuraya ....

Lab k bahar khade prahari se kisdi ki bahas ho rahi thi ......woh tha control room ka sainik ....

C - jaldi karo mere sandesha Mahamahim tak pahunchao ....

L - nahi ...woh kissi vishesh karya mein lage hue hai .....unhone ...kissi ko bhi vighna daalne k lite mana kiya hai .........

C - yeh suchna bahut mahatva poorna hai ....yeh suchna ...Maharaj Arsalan k baare mein hai .....unhe shigra hi sanchalan kaksh mein aana cahiye ...

Lab k rakshak Arsalan ka naam sunkar ....chaunk gaya ...usse mamle ki gambhirta nazar aayi .....

L - thik hai jaao .....tum khud Mahamahim ko sandesh do .....

Control room ka sainik ...lab mein pravesh kar jaata hai ......aur Waha Darmen ko dekhkar ....

C- Mahamahim ki jai ho ......

Darmen apne aur bhi project k baare Neil se baatien kar raha tha ...iss tarah kissi ka bich mein aakar tokna uss accha nahi laga ....usne ..turant apni talwar use uss sainik ka sar dhad se utar diya .......aur khoon ka fawara phoota ....

Usse Lab k praharedar par krodh aaya k kaise koi yaha pravesh kar gaya ....Darmen chillakar usse pukarta hai ....

Darmen ki aawaj sunkar woh bhi kannpta hua ....uske saamne pahunchta tha .....jab usse sar kata woh sainik dikhta hai ...toh uska gala sukhne lagta hai ...ab usse apni bhiaut nazar aane lagti hai .....

Darmen - tumhe kissliye lab k pahre par bithaya hai ...yeh kaise andar aagaya .....lagta ab tum bhi isse dand k yogya ho .....

L - kshama kare ....Mahamahim ...kshama kare ....woh muzhse bhul ho gayi ....woh isne Arsalan ka naam liya tha toh maine bhej diya ...ab kabhi aisa nahi hoga ....

Arsalan ka naam sunte hi Darmen chank gaya ....kya kaha Arsalan .....poori baat batao .......kya kah raha tha ...yeh Arsalan k baare mein ....

L - usne bas Arsalan ka naam liya tha aur aapko shighra control room mein aane k liye kah raha tha ....

uski baaton se Darmen ko kuch aashanka hone lagi ......Aur woh ..turant lab ki or chal padta hai ..Aur piche piche Neil bhi ...

Yeh cintrol room Darmen ne apne har mahatvapooran sthan se connect kar rakha tha ....
wha pahunchkar ...

Darmen - kya hua kahi koi gadbadi....aur yeh Arsalan ...kya baat hai ....

Sainik - mahamahin kuch der pahele Nebhru k kshetra mein sthit Swarna khadan se kissi sanik ka sandesh tha ......humne usse record kita hai .......
hum apni screens ko waha se jodna chah rahe hai parntu kar nahi paa rahe .....

Darmen - uss sndesh ko sunta ..hai ...

sandesh - Yaha Maharja Arsalan ne humla kar diya hai ......humahe pran sankat mein hai ....sabkuch nasht ho raha hai ......Tabhi uss sainik ki cheekh sunayi deti hai aur woh sandesh band .....Woh kaal ki bhent chad gaya tha ...

Yaha kaal se darkar chpe hue saoniko ko dhund ..dhundkar maut de raha tha ....aise hi dundta hua ek chote se kaksh k andar se kuch aawaj aayi .....usne darwaja ukhadkar phenk diya ....andar ek sainik waha k chote se control room se sandesh de raha tha .....Tabhi kaal ne piche se uski garden pakadkar utha kiya ....aur usse kissi ganne k i tarah chil diya ......uski saari aantadiya bahar aagyi thi ....kshat vikshat uske shav ko phenkar .....usne uss control room ko tod diya .....

yaha Araslan dwara Swarn khadan par humle ka sunkar ....Darmen .... waha . ....ka drshiya dekhne k liye waha ki screen ko connect karne laga .....

yaha Yaha lagbhag saare sainik jo lagbhag 1000 ki sankya mein the ......aur karib 10 daitya jo jungle se khadan mein hone wale shor ko sunkar aaye the ...maare jaa chuke the ....bas kuch gine chune sainik ..Kaal ke bhay se chupe hue the .....

Bandiyo ko waha se nikala jaa chuka tha ....

Charo taraf sainiko k laash k tukde aur khoon bihkhra pada tha ......

Kaal aur Abhi poori tarah se unn sainiko k rakt se bhig gaye tha ....kaal toh jaise unke rakt se nahaya tha ......

Abhi ko dekhkar kaal Abhi k saamne ghutno k bal baith jaata hai .....Abhi bhi uske sar par haath pherta hua ....

Abhi - toh aakhir tum mukt ho hi gaye .....ab toh ..prasanna ho na ......milgayi tripti..

Kaal - kaal kabhi tript nahi hota mere maalik .....aaj mitne varsho baad mukt hokar bahut accha lag raha hai ......

Abhi - tumhe pahele bhi kaha hai hai hum dono ek hi hai ..muzhe maalik nahi ...mitra kaha karo....( Abhi kaal ko uthakar gale laga leta hai )

Tabhi Abhi k paas hi vifot hota hai ....Abhi ka dhyan uss or jaata hai toh Waha Nebhru Darmen k waha tainat sabse bhyankar aakhri Daitya k saath khada tha .....

Nebru ne waha lage camera ab tak Darmen k conrol room se connected hone se rok raka tha ....
parantu woh ab Arsalan ko Darmen k saamne laana chahta tha issiliye ab usne connect hone diya ....

aur yaha Darmen ki Lab k control room k screen par khadan ka woh drisya chal pada ...jismein ...Nebhru aur ..woh bhayankar daitya ...Abhi k saamne tha ....uss ..... drishya ...par nazar padte hi .....Darmen ko apni aankhon par vishwas nahi ho raha tha ....

saamne screen par usse Arsalan dikh raha tha waise hi vesh bhusha waisa hi haav bhav .....

Usse vishwas nahi ho raha tha k itne bade dhamke k se Arsalan kaise bach gaya ......yadi woh bach gaya tha toh itne varsho se kaha tha .....

parantu saamne jo dikh raha tha usse bhi eoh jhutla nahi sakta tha .......

Saamne Nebhru aur woh daitya ..Abhi k saamne khade the .....Aue Nebhru ne hi Abhi k paas vifot kiya tha jisse Darmen apne control room mein baitha dekh raha tha ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
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Update - 22

Ab Abhi k saamne prashna tha k kaise woh iss pahadi se bina kissi k nazar mein aaye iss pahadi se neeche jungle mein pahunchta hai ........

Abhi uss pahadi k shikhar par kinare chalta hua neeche jaane ka raasta kojne lagta hai .....khojte hue usse .....aage ...ek jagah pahadi do bhago mein banti hui nazar aati hai ....jiski darar pahadi k aadhe bhag tak usse pahuncha sakti hai .....

Abhi uss darar k kinare Chataano ka sahara lete hue utar jaata hai ....choti choti bahar ko nikli nukili chattane aur aur dararo ka sahara lete hue woh niche utarne laga ....aur latakte hue ...kai jagah se phisalte hue ...woh nice ki aur aane lagta hai .....pahadi k madhya bhag mein jaha tak yeh darar jaati thi ...waha ek jal ka srot tha jiska jal waha ek jal kund banata hua ek jharne ke roop mein niche tak jaata tha ....jal k nami ke kaarn waha kai aur fislan bhi bahut adhik thi ....
aur issi fislan k kaaran Abhi uss kund mein gir gaya .... Abhi ne kund k jal k aas paas kuch bele aur zhadiya nazar aayi usne unki ek rassi banayi aur uske sahare se uss zharne k jal mein chupte hue aadhe doori tak pahunch gaya .....jharne k jal unchayi se girne k kaaran waha niche ek bada sa kund ban gaya tha .....jo abhi bhi 100 ft k kareeb niche tha Abhi ne rassi ka antim sira choda aur jharne k jal k saath niche kund mein pahunch gaya ......

Abhi kund k jal se bahar zhankkar dekhne laga ....toh usse kund k paas hi .....ek daiya
( d1 )dikhayi diya ....jo apne shikar kiye hue kissi jeev ka anand utha raha tha ......

Abhi bina aawaj k jal se bahar nikla aur apni talwar lekar chupke se ......aage bada ...woh ..apne khane mein magan tha ....Abhi uss daitya k abhut nazdeek pahunch gaya ...woh cahta toh usko ek hi zhatke mein maar sakta tha .....parantu yodha wahi jo apne shatru ko lalkar kar samapt kare ......

Abhi talwar lekar ek chalang lagakar uss daiya k saamne pahuncha .....achanak apne saamne kisi ko dekhkar woh daitya ek baar toh chaunk gaya ......parantu jab uski nazar Abhi par padi toh

D1 - Kaun ho tum jo iss prakar mere bhojan mein vighna dalne aagaye .....Chalo accha hi hai ....inn pashuo ko khakar ukta gaya tha ...ab tumahara naram naram maass khakar aanand aayega .......aur usne paas hi pada lakdi k ek bade se tukde ka mudgar Abhi ki taraf fhenka .....woh Abhi se takrata isase pahele Abhi ne uss bade se mudgar ko tham liya aur usse ussi daitya par de maara ....

Daitya Abhi par vaar karke khada ho raha tha ..k uska hi mudgar usse jor se laga aur woh piche gir pada .....

D1 - tumahara itna sahas tuch manav ..muzhpar prahar kare ....iska dand milega tumhe ...bhayanak mrityu k roop mein ....

Abhi - muzhe tuch kahe wale murkh daitya ......dand toh aaj milega tum sabko .....tumahare kukrityo ka.... ...

woh daitya tab tak sambhal chuka tha ........usne paas hi pada ek bada sa patter Abhi k taraf phenka ....aur ..tezi se uski or dauda .......Abhi bhi apni jagah se hat gaya ....aur ....aag ka ek gola banakar usski taraf vaar kiya ...woh aag ka gola uss daitya ...se takrakar bikher gaya .....tab tak woh bhi Abhi tak pahunch gaya ...aur apne haath prahar Abhi k sar par kiya ...jisse Abhi ne block kiya ...aur ....uchalkar ek jordar kick se uske seene par prahar kiya ...jisase woh ..wahi paas k ek ped se takraya .......toh ussne uss ped ko ukadka woh Abhi ki taraf poori takat se phenka woh ped poori tezi k saath Abhi ki taraf badh raha tha ....Abhi bhi talwar lekar hawa ..mein kalabaajiya khata hua uchla aur apne taraf aate hue uss ped par ek pair rakhkar ....uss daitya tak pahuncha . aur talwar ka bhapur vaar ..uske garden par kiya ...woh daitya kuch samaz paata usase pahle ..hi uska sar uske dhad se alag ho gaya tha .....

uss daitya k samapt hone par Abhi jungle ki or badh gaya ...woh jungle se khadan ki disha mein aage badh gaya .......jungle ekdum shant lag raha tha .....charo taraf phaili khamoshi aane wale khatre ka sanket de rahi thi .....Abhi bhi poori satarkta k saath aage badh raha tha ......

tabhi Abhi ka pair sukhe paato k niche chipe hue fande ...par padta hai ...pair padte hi woh fanda kas jaata hai ....aur ...badi tezi se uss fande mein faskar ghasitta hua ......apne aapko ek ped se ulta latka hua paata hai ....

Abhi uss fande ko kholne knliye pair ki taraf zhukta hi hai k ek teer sansanta hua ..uske niche se guzar jaata hai ....Abhi yadi pair ki taraf na zhuka hota ...toh teer Abhi k sar mein ghus chuka hota ....Khatra bhanpkar .....Abhi ne apni talwar se tezi se uss fande ko kaat diya ...aur jamin par aagaya .....usne charo taraf dekha toh waha koi nahi tha .....Abhi kuch sochta k zhadiyo ki taraf se kuch teer Abhi ki taraf badte hai jisse Abhi ..apni talwar se tezi se kaat deta hai ......

Jaise hi Abhi unn teero ko kaatta hai ...usspar charo taraf xhadiyo k piche se jaise teero ki baarish hone lagti hai ....Abhibapne talwar ko lekar ek chakra ki bhanti gol ghumkar talwar ghumate hue usnn saare teero ko kaatne lagta hai ....thodi hi der mein ...teer chalne band hojaate hai ...shayad unke teer khatam ho gaye the ......

Abhi - kaun hai jo yaha chupkar vaar kar raha hai ......saamne kyu nahi aata ...sahas hai toh saamne aao .......

Abhi ki aawaj sunkar zhadiyo mein se ek bauna nikalkar Abhi k samne khada ho jaata hai ....

Bauna - ek toh humare kshetra mein bina anumati k pravesh karte ho ..aur hume sahas ka paath padhate ho ....

Abhi - toh thik hai ...shriman ji ab aumati de do ...kya mein aapke kshetra se hokar aage jaa sakta hu .......

Bauna - dhrishtata karke aumati maang rahe ho ab tumhe anumati nahi mrityu milegi mrityu ....waise bhai kai dino se humne manav maas nahi khaya ....

Abhi - yeh bhi kya baat hui pahele woh daitya ab tum ...jo bhi saamne aata hai muzhe khane ki hi baat karta hai .....kya atithiyo ka swagat aise hi karte ho ...

Abhi usase baat kar hi raha tha k do baune pedo par latakti hui bele k sahare zhulte hue tezi se aaye aur Abhi ki pith par jordar prahar kiya ....jisase Abhi aage girte girte bacha ......abhi ne dekha woh do baune kalabaajiya khate hue ..Abhi k samne datkar khade ho gaye ......unmein se ek ...

humare sardar se aise bolne ki himmat karte ho ....ab dekho ....tumahara kya haal hota hai ....usne ajeeb si aawaj nikali ....toh zhadiyo mein se 100 k karib aur baune ....bahar nikalkar aaye ..
aur ek saath Abhi par humla kar diya .....Abhi unn bauno ko koi hanni nahi pahunchana chahta tha ...issliye sirf unke vaar ko rok raha tha ....aur bich bich mein unko uthakar dur phenk raha tha .

unn bauno k humle Abhi par tez ho gaye the ....koi Abhi k kandhe par sawar hogaya koi laat ghuso se prahar karne laga ......Abhi ne socha yeh aise nahi maanenge kyu ki laato k bhut baato se nahi maante ....

Abhi ne tezi se gol ghumte hue vayuchakra ka nirman kiya ......woh saare baune uss vaayu chakra mein gol gol ghumte hue udne lage ......Abhi ne uss chakra ko rok diya ....aur woh baune niche jamin par gir gaye ....

vaayu mein gol gol ghumne k kaaran unke sar chakrane lage ......aur niche girne se chotil bhi ho gaye the ....
abhi woh sambhalkar aur kuch kar paate ....k Abhi ne apne manipurak chakra ki sakaratmak urja ko pragat karke .....ek prakash mein badalkar unn sab bauno par vaar kiya ......jisase unke sharir ko toh haani nahi pahunchi ..parantu unki saari nakaratmak urja samapt ho gayi aur woh sab apne mool swabhav mein aagaye ......

yeh baune yaha k kabile k niwasi the ..jo swabhav se saral aur prakriti se prem karne wale the ...Darmen ne apni kaali shaktiyo k prabhav se ...unmein nakaratmak urja bharkar apna gulam bana diya tha ....jo ab Abhi k kaaran apne mool swabhav mein aagaye the ...

unn sabko aisa laga jaise woh chir nidra se jaage ho ....Ab jab unke sardar ki nazar Abhi par padi toh usne shanti se Abhi ka parichay poocha aur yaha aane ka kaaran poocha ....toh Abhi ne unhe poori baat batayi .....

Sardar - hmm ab hime yaad aaraha hai .....k kuch varsho pahele ....iss jungle k bahar ....se kuch log bhagte hue humare kabile tak pahunche unhe dekhkar aisa lag raha tha jaise woh kissi se apni jaan bachakar bhag rahe hai ...toh humne unhe sharan di ...

unko dhundte hue ajeeb se vastra pahne kuch sainik himare kabile tak pahunche himne unka saamna kiya jismein humare bahut se log maare gaye .....phir hume bhi badi banakar le jaaya gaya ...uske baad kya hua hume nahi pata ....

Hum sab bhi aapke saath iss yudh mein bhag lenge ....

Abhi - yeh aapki acchayi hai ....mein aap logo k pran sankat mein nahi dal sakta .....

Sardar - mrityu toh ek din aani hi hai ...parantu kissi aache kaam ko karte hue mrityu aabhi jaaye toh isase behtar kya ho sakta hai ...kyu saathiyo ....

sab ek swar se - haa ...haa....him sab aapke saath hai ......

Abhi - thik hai yadi aap meri sahyata hi karna chahte ho toh toh yudh mein nahi kissi aur tarah se kar sakte ho ....

Sardar - woh kiss tarah .....

Abhi - unn khadano mein bahut se log bandi bane hue hai unn saare logo ko surakshit nikalne k liye kissi gupt marg ka pata karo ...aur mera sanket paate hi unn sabko waha se nikalne mein meri sahayta karo ....

sardar - jaha tak muzhe khabar hai jungle ki daayi or ki pahadi se hokar koi gupt marg khadan tak jaata tha ......Hosakta hai woh abhi bhi khula ho ....aap bhi humare saath hi chaliye ....yadi woh marg khula hoga toh aap aasani se uss khadan tak pahunch sakte hai ....

Abhi - nahi mera iss prakar waha jaana waha k bandi banaye logo k hit mein nahi hai .....jab mein bahar se humla karunga toh sabka dhyan meri taraf hi rahega ......jisase tum unn bandhako ko bina kissi vighna k uss raaste se bahar laa sakte ho ....

Sardar - thik hai jaisa aao kahe .......hum apna poora praytna karenge waha tak pahunchne ki ...

Abhi unko poori yojna batakar aage badta hai ......woh poori satarkta se aage badhne lagta hai ....Khadan bahut nikat thi ......jungle apne antim chor par tha ....

Abhi ne apna kadam aage hi badhaya tha ...ek bada sa urja ka gola badi tezi se Abhi ki chati mein takraya ....jiske prabhav se ...Abhi piche ki or gir gaya ...abhi woh sambhalta ...k saamne se ek aawaj aayi .....

Awaaj - Sawdhan ...Chale jaao yaha se aage badhne ka prayatna bhi mat karna nahi toh maare jasoge .....wapas laut jaao .....Abhi ne awasj ko disha mein dekha toh waha koi nahi tha ...

Abhi sambhalkar phir khada hua ...aur apna kadam aage badaya ....iss baar woh poori tarah satark tha .....

aawaj - maine kaha na chale jaao parantu tum nahi maane ....ab apni mrityu k liye tayar ho jaao ...phir ek shakti ka gola hawa mein pragat hokar Abhi ki taraf badha ....

Abhi ne apni urja k prahar se uss gole ko wahi rok diya ....

Abhi - tum jo koi bhi ho .....muzhe mriyu dene ki baat karte ho aur bhay k kaaran chupkar vaar karte ho ....
tabhi iss baar do taraf se Abhi par vaar hota ..hai ...Abhi ek vaar ko apni urja se rokta hai ....aur dusre vaar se tezi se apna sthan badalkar bach jaata hai ....

Abhi vaar ki disha mein agni ki urja se prahar karta ..hai ....parantu uska woh vaar bekar kaata hai .......tabhi saamne hawa mein anek astra pragat ho jaate hain aur Abhi ki taraf teevra gati se badhne lagte hai ......Abhi apni talwar ko ghumata hua unnsab astro ko apne tak pahunchne se pahele hi kaat deta hai .....

saamne tha adrishya shatru jo abhi par niranter apni urja se vaar kar raha tha ...aur Abhi bhi poori furti se unn vaaro ka saamna kar raha tha ...parantu kai vaar Abhi ko lage ....jisase Abhi k seene ki jalan aur pida phir suru ho gayi .....

Abji apni uss pida ko niyantrit karne ka prayatna karne laga .....tabhi hawa ka ek tez jhaunka Abhi k taraf badha ...aur Abhi piche ki taraf gir pada ..usse aise laga ki kissi ne uske seene par jordar takkar maari ho ......

ek toh seene ka dard aur yeh vaar ....Abhi badi mushkil se sambhalkar khada hua ....k tabhi Nebhru ki di hui anguthi phir chamak uthi aur Abhi ka saar dard saari pida pal bhar mein samapt ho gayi ....Abhi phir nayi sfurti k saath ....unn adrishya shaktiyo ka saamna karne k liye tayyar ho gaya .....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update kal ....

Update - 23

ek toh seene ka dard aur yeh vaar ....Abhi badi mushkil se sambhalkar khada hua ....k tabhi Nebhru ki di hui anguthi phir chamak uthi aur Abhi ka sar ki saari pida pal bhar mein samapt ho gayi ....Abhi phir nayi sfurti k saath ....unn adrishya shaktiyo ka saamna karne k liye tayyar ho gaya .....

ek baar phir hawa ka ek zhaunka Abhi ki taraf badha ....jisse usne mehsus kar liya .....isske pahle k woh mayavi adrisya asur Abhi par vaar karta ...Abhi ..ne uski hriday ki gati aur swas ko mehsus karke apni talwar ka satik war kiya .....jo uss asur k hriday k paar ho gaya .....ek dardnaak cheekh k saath woh asur dharashayi ho gaya....mrityu k saath uska adrisya roop bhi chala gaya ....

Abhi ne ek nazar usspar dali ....aur apni indriyo ko poori tarah jaagrit karke aage badhne laga ....har choti se aawaj par dhyan deta hua poori satarkta se woh aage badh raha tha ....k tabhi ek khadag ...tezi se uski gardan ki taraf badha ....jisse usne mehsus kiya aur niche zhuk gaya .....jaise hi woh uss vaar se bacha ....tabhi alag alag disha se do shool uski taraf badhe ......Abhi ne tezi se talwar ghumayi ....aur ek shool ...ko kaat diya parantu ...dusra shool.....uske ..baaju par halka sa jakham dete hue nikal gaya ......

Abhi ab tak samaz chuka tha jab tak yeh asur pragat nahi hote ...tab tak unka saamna karna kathin hai ....ab tak k sangharsh poorna safar mein aadhe se jayad din bit gaya tha ......

Abhi ne ab jal tatva ka prayog karke apne charo tarf jal barsaaya .....gile hone k kaaran Abhi ko ab unn asuro ki aakritiya nazar aane lagi ...thi ...usse apni taraf badi tezi se aati hui do aakritiya nazar aai .....toh usne bhi apni ...talwar sambhali aur badi tezi se ghumata hua aage badne laga ...do aur asur Abhi ki talwar k bhent chad gaye..

ab aur asur baaki the unhone Abhi ko charo taraf se gher liya aur ek nischit duri banakar apna shtan badal badlkar ......uspar vaar karne lage .......jisase Abhi ko unki sahi disha ka bhan nahi ho raha tha ......Abhi ne ab ....dhul bhari aandhi chalana shuru kiya ....jisase un adrshya asuro par mitti ek ki ek parat si chad gayi ......aur woh pragat hogaye ......

jab tak woh asur apne upar ki mitti hatate ....tab tak Abhi ne budhe baba dwar doya hua maarak khanjar ....pragat kiya .....woh khanjar bijli ki bhanti chamak raha tha .....Abhi ne unn charo asuro sthiti ka dhyan karta hue uss khajar ko choda ....aur woh khanjar .....bijli ki si gati se unn charo k hriday ko bhedta hua ...wapas Abhi k haath mein aagaya ....unn charo ko cherkhne ka bhi awsar nahi mila ....khanjer k lagte hi ....woh pal bhar mein raakh mein badal ..gaye ......

Abhi ne aaj pahli baar uss khanjar ki maarak urja ka prabhav dekha tha .....Nebhru dwara usse iss khanjer ki kshamta k baare mein pata toh chal gaya tha ...paratu aaj dekha pahli baar tha ....

unn adrishya asuro ki baadha paar karke woh aage bada ......Abhi jungle paar kar chuka tha ......bas kuch chotii zhadiya bachi hui thi .....uske baad ek khula maidan ...aur amidan k ant mein khadan ....

Abhi ne zhadiyo mein chupkar dekha ......k maidan k atim chor jaha se khadan shuru hoti hai ....waha ......Sainiko ki ek tukdi ...tainat thi jo poori satarkta se pahra de rahi thi ......

Shundak se usse pata chala tha k lagbhag 1000 ki saknhya mein Darmen k sainik uss khadan mein tainat hai .......wahi ek aur unki sainik chavni bani hui thi ....jismein shayad uss sena ..k kissi adhikari k rahne ki vyastha thi .....

Suryasta hone hi wala tha ....Abhi zhadiyo k picche se waha tainat sainiko ka nirikshan karne laga .....

Yaha woh baune logo ne khadan tak jaane wale ...gupt marg ko dhund liya tha ....jo ek surang k roop mein tha ....kai varsho se uska prayog na hone k kaaran .....woh aage se band ho gaya tha ...

unn bauno ne uss tezi se waha ki khudayi ka kaam shuru kar diya ......

Yaha Abhi andhera hone ki pratiksha kar raha tha ......

surya paschim disha mein asth hone laga .....Aur poorna chandrama ka uday hua ....aaksh ek dum saaf tha ......Ab chandrama ka dudhiya prakaash charo or phail gaya tha ......

Khadan mei tainat sainiko ko kissi shatru k humle ki lesh maatra bhi aashanka nahi thi .....issiliye sab nischint the ......

Ab samay aagaya tha Abhi ka Arsalan k roop mein waha pravesh karne ka ......Arsalan k roop mein pravesh karne ki Nebhtu ne jo yojna banayi thi ussi k anusar Abhi ne Nebhru ki anghuthi ko aakash ki or uchala ....poorna chandrama k prakaash k saath sanyog hote hi ...uss anguthi mein chupi hui maaya pragat ho gayi ......

achanak aakash mein bhayankar bijliya kadakne lagi .....Aakash mein bhayankar kaale megh garjana karne lage ....achanak hue masum k badlv k kaaran ..jo sainik shivir mein baithe the woh sabhi bahar aaye .....

Aakash mein bhayankar kaale megh aur chamakti hui bijliya ....aur unki hriday ko kampit karne wali aawaje .....waha tainat sainiko k mann mein bhay utpanna kar rahe the ....tabhi unhone dekha ....k aakash se ek jagah bhayankar visfot k saath bijli giri aur waha ek prakash dwar pragat ho gaya .....unhone dekha k koi uss prakash dwar se bahar nikal raha ..hai ....jiske haath mein bijli ko si chamakti hui talwar hai ......

Visfot ki aawaj se sab sainiko ka dhyan uss disha mein gaya .....khadan k bhiter jo sainik the woh bhi uss visfot ki aawaj se aakarsht hokar uss taraf jaane lage ....

unmein se kuch sainik aur waha ki sena ka senapati ....Arsalan ko pehchante the ....

achanak itne varsho k baad Arsalan ko apne saamne dekhkar ..woh Chaunk gaye ....Senapati k muh se nikal hi gaya .....Arsalan .....Jeevit hai .....

Abhi - kyu aascharya hua muzhe jeevit dekhkar ....tumahre maalik Darmen k paas woh shakti nahi hai k jo Arsalan ko haani pahuncha sake .......tum logo ne mera saath chodkar ...mere saath vishwasghat kiya .......iska dand tum sab ko bhugatna hoga ....

ek baar toh woh senapati achanak apne saamne Arsalan ko dekhkar dar gaya tha ....parantu Darmen k 1000 mayavi astro se susajjit sainiko aur gupt roop se chupe hue daityo ka dhyan aate hi uska hosla badh gaya ......

Senapati - Maharaja Arsalan toh aap jeevit ho ....accha laga aapko dekhkar ....ab mein aapko bandi banakar .....Samrat Darmen ko upahar k roop mein bhent karunga .....
( sainiko ki taraf ishara karte hue .) aakramannn

Senapati ka aadesh milte hi sena ko woh tukdi Abhi ki or bade tezi se badi .....Abhi ne apni talwar lahrayi ....aur agni ki urja se ek bade se aag k gole ka nirman kiya aur uss sena par prahar kiya .....

jaha woh aag ka gola gira .....kai sainik uss aag ki chaoet mein aagye aur swaha ho gaye ......Abhi ne lagatar aag k gole barsaye .....aag se bachne k liye ..sena mein bhagdad mach gayi thi....

Apni sena ko aise titar biter hote hue dekhkar Senapati ne Sena ki suraksha ...k liye kaali shaktiyo ki ek diwar si bana di Abhi k agni golo k vaar uss adrishya kaali urja se bani hui deewar se takrakr bikharne lage .....

.Abhi ne ek k baad ek ..jal..vaayu ...aur prithvi tava ka prayog kiya ...parantu koi bhi vaar unn sainiko tak nahi pahunch raha tha ....tab woh sainik bhi ab tak sambhal chuke the ....

yaha ka shor sunkar khadan k baaki sainik bhi ussi disha mein apne shastra sambhalkar jaa rahe the ......

Yaha unn bauno ne bhi surang ka raasta poori tarah khol diya tha ......aur Vifot ka sanket milte hi ..woh uss khadan mein gupt rup se pravesh kar gaye ....Saare sanik ...khadan se bahar jaa chuke the ....kewal kuch hi gulamo k kaidkhane ki paheredari kar rahe the ...

yaha do bandigrih the ek mein bediyo se bandhe hue ....purushvarg ....aur dusre mein ardha nagna awastha mein kanya aur mahilaaye ....

sabke sahrir par jagah jagah choto k nishan the .......kam maatra mein bhojan aur jal ...milne k kaaran ...woh bhaut kamjor ho gaye the ......itni kamjori mein bhi unhe aapne prano ki raksha k liye ...kaam karna padta tha .....aur nahi kar paata tha ....usse sabke saamne .....sab k saane jinda jala diya jaata tha ......

Kanyaye aur mahilaye inn saniko k bhog ka sadhan thi ....unke shari par bhi jagah jagah daanto se bane hue ghav the ....jo ....sambhog k liye mana karti .....sabke saamne uske sharir k tukde kiye jaate the ....

kul milakar yeh jagah unn bandiyo k liye jite jee kissi narak se kam nahi thi .....

woh baune waha faile hue andhre aur apne vhote kad ka sahara lete hue ....bandigrih dund rahe the ....k ...dur se chamti hui mashal k orakash mein unhe aahir bandigrah mil hi gaya .....

kuch gine chune hi sainik waha oahra de rahe the .......unn bano ki sankhya 100 k karib thi ....unhone ne achanak unnsainiko par humla bola ....isase pahele woh sainik kuch samazte ..tab tak unka kaam tamam ho gaya tha ......

Unn bauno ne waha ka taala toda aur ....bandiyo ko mukt kiya .........waha unhe pata chala k aur bhi aise bandigrah hai ....yaha lagbhag 2000 log bandi hai .....

unn bauno k saath ab woh log bhi aage badhe aur ek ek karke sabhi bandigraho se unko mukt kiya .......

Yaha Abhi ka ghamasan Sainiko k saath chal raha tha ....

saare sainiko k ek jagah ekatrit hone se jaise Abhi k uppar mayavi astro ki barsat hone lagi ......Abhi ka ek bhi prahaar uss kaali shkti se bani hui deewar ko bhedkar unn tak nahi pahunch raha tha ........

Abhi ne panchtatva ki urja se ek dhal banayi aur apne upper hone wale vaar ko rokne laga ....aur saath hi saath uss kaali shakti ki deewar ko bhedne ka upay bhi sochne laga ......

tabhi Abhi ne apni or tezi se aarahe mayavi shool par dhal se jordar prahar kiya ...jisase uski disha badli aur woh wapas uss urja ki deewar ko paar karta hua sena ki taraf gir pada ...

Abhi samaz gaya k usse kya karne chahiye .......Abhi ne ek chakravat ka nirman kiya ...jo badi tezi se aarahe Darmen ki sena k astro ko apne bhiter sametne laga ...

ab Abhi ne uss chakravat ki gati viparit kar di .....jiske kaaran woh saare astra ......Kaali urja ki deewar ko bhedkar unn sainiko ka ant karne lage .....

vatavaran un sainiko ki cheeko se gunj utha ....aur ek hi vaar mein 100 k lagbhag sainik maare gaye .....senapati ne apni sena ki yeh dasha dekhkar .....usne apna bhayankar astra jo ek advance atomic laser wepon tha .....jo woh Arin se apne saath laaya tha ...

uski laser bim se Abhi par vaar kiya .....Abhi ne usase bachne k liye apni dhal aage ki parantu woh laser beam uss dhal ko bhedti hui Abhi k seene se takrai .....

uss beam ka prahar serne par hote hi ...Abhi ko phir seene ki jalan aur pida hone lagi ....Abhi ne apne jabde bhinch liye ...Aur apne maarak khanjar ko ......uss senapati ki taraf vaar kiya ...woh khanjar uss senapati ka seena chirkar wapas Abhi k haatho mein aagaya ....

Abhi ne apni pida ko sahte hue ...ek bada sa agni ka gola banaya ......aur unn sainoko par vaar kiya .....

Bahut se sainik ab uss aag mein swaha ho gaye .......

Darmen k sainiko ne ab Arin grah k aadhunik vigyan k dwara nirmit ....lesar gun se Abhi par prahar karne lage Abhi unn lesar ki ultra voilet kirno ko rokne ka prayas karne laga ......parantu woh kirne lagatar Abhi k sharir par padne lagi ......
Abhi ka dard ab apne charam par tha ....

tabhi ....ek aur laser kiran Abhi k seene par padi ......jisase Abhi ki jordar cheekh nikli ....aur saath hi ek laal prakash Abhi k seene se bahar nikala ...aur ek laal mani k roop mein parivartiti hokar ....jamin par girgaya ....woh mano ab khandit ho gaya tha ....

Yeh laal mani wahi suraksha kawach tha jo Nebhru ne diya tha .....

Abhi jamin par pada tha ......Sainik usse mara hua samazkar aage badhne lage ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ...
Agla update kal......

Update - 24

Abhi jamin par pada tha ......Sainik usse mara hua samazkar aage badhne lage .........
woh saare sainik thodi dur par ruk gaye ....unmein se ek aage Abhi ko dekhne k liye aage badha .Tabhi ek prakash Abhi k bhiter se pragat hua aur gunji uss sainik ki dardnak cheekh......

Achanak yeh kya hua ....sainiko ko kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha ...unhone dhyan se dekha toh p
waha tha Abhi ki sangharak shaktiyo ka ansh KAAL ka panja uss sainik k seene mein woh sanik chikh raha tha aur uski ceekhe sukar KAAL ki aankhon mein ajeeb si krurta ......k tabhi Kaal ne ek zhatke se use seeme ka haat nikala .......toh haath men tha uss sainik ka kaleja .....khoona se sane haath mein halka dhadahta hua dil ....jisase bahta taza khun dekhkar kaal ki aankhon mein alag hi krur chamak aagayi thi ....Kaal ne uss dil ko apne jabde mein chabakar nigal lya ....woh sainik niche ..yeh sab itne jaldi hua k baaki sainiko ko pata hi nahi chala k vaha kya ho raha hai
aur jab samaz aaya toh unki ruh kaanp gayi ....Kaal iss samay Sher manav k roop mein tha ......usne khoon se sane jabde par lahe khoon ko saaf karne jeebh nikalikar pheri aag ugalti aankhon se unn sainiko par ek nazar daali aur ek nazar Abhi par .....aur jor se dahada .....
Sainik darte hue aage badhe k tabhi Kaal Lapakkar sainik k paas pahunch apne jabde mein uska sar pakdkar ukhad diya baki bache hue sainiko ki or dekhta aur chaba gaya ....abhi bhi 500 k lag bhag Sainik khadan mein bache hue the ......

Kaal ek baar unn sainiko ki taraf dekhkar aur dahada .......Kaal hu mein ...Mahakaal ka ansh tumahari maut hu main ....
aur ab sabse aage sainik ko pakadkar Kaal ne uske seene mein dono haath dalkar bichse faad deta hai ....dono haath pakde hue uss sanik k fate hue sharir ko ek aur zhtkar dekar bich se chirkar fhenk diya....apne saamne itne bhayankar drishya dekhkar unn sainiko ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi k kaal k paas mein bhi gatke .......Kall aage badh raha tha aur badh rahi thi unn sainiko ki cheekhe ......kissi ka sar alag ..kissi k tukde pade tga ...koi bich se chira hai ..,.

Yaha Abhi kp bhi hosh aagaya ....usse apne bhiter shaktiyo ka bhandar nazar aaya jo usne pahele kabhi nahi Dekha tha ....Abhi bhi apna kjkhanjar lekar ....Darmen k sainiko par tut pada ......

Yaha Abhi Maarak khanjar ko gumate hue aage badh raha tha jo jisase bhi lagta woh rakh mein badal jaata ....Darmen k siniko mein hah hahkar mach gaya .......

Khadan mein ho raha shor jungle mein bhi fail raha tha ..,...Abhi ne toh jungle k ek hisse k daityo ka hi saamna kiya tha .....woh daitya bhi khadan ki aur badhe ......

Baune yaha bandiyo ko mukt karane k liye surang tak le hi jaa rahe the ......K tabhi unke saamne ...ek daitya khada ho gaya ....usne ek haath se aage khade baune ki gardan pakadkar uthadiya....uss bhayankar Daitya ko apne saamne ..dekhkar ..woh baune ekdum dar gaye ....Sardar ka bum ghutne laga .....tabhi ek khanjar aaya aur uss daitya ki garden k paar ho gaya ...

aur woh niche gir pada ....Bauno ne dekha waha Abhi tha ....

Abhi - jaldi se inn sabko yaha se nikalo .....Aur ussi jagah meri pratiksha karo ......

Abhi unn bauno se baat hi kar raha tha ....k tabhi bandiyo mein saamne khade yuvak ne ek or dekhte hue Abhi par chalang lagayi .....aur ek shool badi tezi ...se ..unke saamne jamin mein ghus gaya .......

ek baar toh Abhi samzha nha k iss yuvak ne ekdum se kyu chalang lagayi ......parantu ja b usse samaz aaya .....toh uusne shool ki disha mein dehka toh waha ek aur daitya tha .......Abhi ne uss yuvak ko sahara dekar khada kiya ......aur unko jaldi se nikalne ka ishara kiya ......
aur uss daitya par ....apne khanjer se vaar kiya .....jisase woh vahu dher ho gaya ......

yaha kaal ...sainiko k chithde uda raha tha ...unka khoon pi raha tha ......dil nikalkar chaba raha tha .......jo bhi uske haath mein aajata ...usko buri tarah chirkar ....chote chote chithdo mein badalkar wahi phenkdeta .....jaise koi chota baccha kafaz k tukde kake bikher dete ho ....

itni bhayanak tarike se sainiko ko marte hue dekhkar ...woh sainik idhar udhar chupne lage .......lekin kaal ki nazar se kaun bach sakta tha ...aaj varsho baad jaga tha woh uski rakt ki pipasa abhi shant nahi hui thi ....usse chahiye tha aur rakt ......

aur Abhi yaha Jungle ki taraf se aarahe daiyo ka saamna kar raha tha .....aur unhe apne khanjar se maut k ghat utaar raha tha ........

Yaha Darmen ...ne Egypt k registhan mein apna samrajya failaya hua tha ........usne waha k saare logo ko gulam banaya tha ......waha ki sunder sunder striyo ko ....nagn awastha mein ....apne mahal mein rakhta tha .......aur unse bhog karke apni vansh vridhi karta ....

uske sainik bhi kai stiro se jabarduti sambandh banakar apne nasal aage badhane mein lage hue tha ...

Waha usne apne aapko devta ghoshit kar diya tha .......Issi Mahal mein usne Neil ki madat se ek atyaaadhunik lab aur ek control room banaya tha .....iss lab mein woh Neil ki sahyata se Samya yaatra yanra ...yani Time machine ka nirman karne mein laga tha .....

Darmen ne bhi itne varsho mein apna parivaar banaya tha jiske baare mein baad mein pata chalega ......

Darmen iss samay ..Neil k saath ..uss samay apni lab mein tha ......

Darmen - aur kitna samay lagega isse tayar hone mein ......itne varsho mein bhi tum isse bana nahi paaye ....sach kahu toh Arsalan ka vigyan k gayn k aage tumahara gyan kuch bhi nahi hai .....

Neil - issbaar humara yeh prayog Safal hoga Maha mahim .....bas kuch din aur .....parantu iske banane k baad hime bahut adhik maatra mein urja ki aawashyakta hogi ....

Darmen - uski chinta tum mat karo .....apne prayog par dhyan do ....yadi iss baar bhi asafal rake ..toh apni toh tum jaante ho ....kya hoga .....( Neil ki taraf ghurta hua )

Neil ko saaf saaf Darmen ki aankhon mein apni mrityu dihkayi drne lagi ...aaj kitne dino baad usne apne pita Arsalan ka naam suna tha .......
Neil Arsalan k baare mein sochne laga ...k wakai uske pita k vigyan k aage uska vigyan kuch bhi nahi ....kaash aaj uske pita hote ...itna sochte hi uski aankhien laal ho gayi.....nahii.....Arslan mera shatru hai ....aur Darmen mera maalik......aur usne saamne khade hue Darmen ko pranam kiya ......

yahi tha Darmen ka jaadoo jiske vash mein ..Arsalan k bete the ...yadi kabhi bhule se unke maan mein apne pita k prati koi khayal bhi aata ....toh uska jaadoo phir sakriya ho jaata aur unke mann se woh bhav nikal jaata .....

Neil ko iss taràh pranam karte hue dekhkar Darmen kutilta se muskuraya ....

Lab k bahar khade prahari se kisdi ki bahas ho rahi thi ......woh tha control room ka sainik ....

C - jaldi karo mere sandesha Mahamahim tak pahunchao ....

L - nahi ...woh kissi vishesh karya mein lage hue hai .....unhone ...kissi ko bhi vighna daalne k lite mana kiya hai .........

C - yeh suchna bahut mahatva poorna hai ....yeh suchna ...Maharaj Arsalan k baare mein hai .....unhe shigra hi sanchalan kaksh mein aana cahiye ...

Lab k rakshak Arsalan ka naam sunkar ....chaunk gaya ...usse mamle ki gambhirta nazar aayi .....

L - thik hai jaao .....tum khud Mahamahim ko sandesh do .....

Control room ka sainik ...lab mein pravesh kar jaata hai ......aur Waha Darmen ko dekhkar ....

C- Mahamahim ki jai ho ......

Darmen apne aur bhi project k baare Neil se baatien kar raha tha ...iss tarah kissi ka bich mein aakar tokna uss accha nahi laga ....usne ..turant apni talwar use uss sainik ka sar dhad se utar diya .......aur khoon ka fawara phoota ....

Usse Lab k praharedar par krodh aaya k kaise koi yaha pravesh kar gaya ....Darmen chillakar usse pukarta hai ....

Darmen ki aawaj sunkar woh bhi kannpta hua ....uske saamne pahunchta tha .....jab usse sar kata woh sainik dikhta hai ...toh uska gala sukhne lagta hai ...ab usse apni bhiaut nazar aane lagti hai .....

Darmen - tumhe kissliye lab k pahre par bithaya hai ...yeh kaise andar aagaya .....lagta ab tum bhi isse dand k yogya ho .....

L - kshama kare ....Mahamahim ...kshama kare ....woh muzhse bhul ho gayi ....woh isne Arsalan ka naam liya tha toh maine bhej diya ...ab kabhi aisa nahi hoga ....

Arsalan ka naam sunte hi Darmen chank gaya ....kya kaha Arsalan .....poori baat batao .......kya kah raha tha ...yeh Arsalan k baare mein ....

L - usne bas Arsalan ka naam liya tha aur aapko shighra control room mein aane k liye kah raha tha ....

uski baaton se Darmen ko kuch aashanka hone lagi ......Aur woh ..turant lab ki or chal padta hai ..Aur piche piche Neil bhi ...

Yeh cintrol room Darmen ne apne har mahatvapooran sthan se connect kar rakha tha ....
wha pahunchkar ...

Darmen - kya hua kahi koi gadbadi....aur yeh Arsalan ...kya baat hai ....

Sainik - mahamahin kuch der pahele Nebhru k kshetra mein sthit Swarna khadan se kissi sanik ka sandesh tha ......humne usse record kita hai .......
hum apni screens ko waha se jodna chah rahe hai parntu kar nahi paa rahe .....

Darmen - uss sndesh ko sunta ..hai ...

sandesh - Yaha Maharja Arsalan ne humla kar diya hai ......humahe pran sankat mein hai ....sabkuch nasht ho raha hai ......Tabhi uss sainik ki cheekh sunayi deti hai aur woh sandesh band .....Woh kaal ki bhent chad gaya tha ...

Yaha kaal se darkar chpe hue saoniko ko dhund ..dhundkar maut de raha tha ....aise hi dundta hua ek chote se kaksh k andar se kuch aawaj aayi .....usne darwaja ukhadkar phenk diya ....andar ek sainik waha k chote se control room se sandesh de raha tha .....Tabhi kaal ne piche se uski garden pakadkar utha kiya ....aur usse kissi ganne k i tarah chil diya ......uski saari aantadiya bahar aagyi thi ....kshat vikshat uske shav ko phenkar .....usne uss control room ko tod diya .....

yaha Araslan dwara Swarn khadan par humle ka sunkar ....Darmen .... waha . ....ka drshiya dekhne k liye waha ki screen ko connect karne laga .....

yaha Yaha lagbhag saare sainik jo lagbhag 1000 ki sankya mein the ......aur karib 10 daitya jo jungle se khadan mein hone wale shor ko sunkar aaye the ...maare jaa chuke the ....bas kuch gine chune sainik ..Kaal ke bhay se chupe hue the .....

Bandiyo ko waha se nikala jaa chuka tha ....

Charo taraf sainiko k laash k tukde aur khoon bihkhra pada tha ......

Kaal aur Abhi poori tarah se unn sainiko k rakt se bhig gaye tha ....kaal toh jaise unke rakt se nahaya tha ......

Abhi ko dekhkar kaal Abhi k saamne ghutno k bal baith jaata hai .....Abhi bhi uske sar par haath pherta hua ....

Abhi - toh aakhir tum mukt ho hi gaye .....ab toh ..prasanna ho na ......milgayi tripti..

Kaal - kaal kabhi tript nahi hota mere maalik .....aaj mitne varsho baad mukt hokar bahut accha lag raha hai ......

Abhi - tumhe pahele bhi kaha hai hai hum dono ek hi hai ..muzhe maalik nahi ...mitra kaha karo....( Abhi kaal ko uthakar gale laga leta hai )

Tabhi Abhi k paas hi vifot hota hai ....Abhi ka dhyan uss or jaata hai toh Waha Nebhru Darmen k waha tainat sabse bhyankar aakhri Daitya k saath khada tha .....

Nebru ne waha lage camera ab tak Darmen k conrol room se connected hone se rok raka tha ....
parantu woh ab Arsalan ko Darmen k saamne laana chahta tha issiliye ab usne connect hone diya ....

aur yaha Darmen ki Lab k control room k screen par khadan ka woh drisya chal pada ...jismein ...Nebhru aur ..woh bhayankar daitya ...Abhi k saamne tha ....uss ..... drishya ...par nazar padte hi .....Darmen ko apni aankhon par vishwas nahi ho raha tha ....

saamne screen par usse Arsalan dikh raha tha waise hi vesh bhusha waisa hi haav bhav .....

Usse vishwas nahi ho raha tha k itne bade dhamke k se Arsalan kaise bach gaya ......yadi woh bach gaya tha toh itne varsho se kaha tha .....

parantu saamne jo dikh raha tha usse bhi eoh jhutla nahi sakta tha .......

Saamne Nebhru aur woh daitya ..Abhi k saamne khade the .....Aue Nebhru ne hi Abhi k paas vifot kiya tha jisse Darmen apne control room mein baitha dekh raha tha ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update raat ko ....

Tenno hi Updates jabardast hai....
kafi samajhdari se nebru aur abhi ne apne plan ko anjaam diya hai....
keep writing...
keep posting.....

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 25

Saamne Nebhru aur woh daitya ..Abhi k saamne khade the .....

Nebhru ne hi Abhi k paas vifot kiya tha jisse Darmen apne control room mein baitha dekh raha tha ....yeh Abhi k liye ek sanket tha ....

uss vifot se Abhi Nebhru ka samnket samaz gaya tha ......ab usse Arsalan bankar Nebhru ka saamna karna hoga ........kyuki woh jaanta tha k Ab Darmen yaha ka haal dekh raha hoga .....

Abhi - toh aa gaye tum ......Nebhru.....tumahari hi pratiksha thi .....wahi mein soch raha tha ...k yeh paap ki nagri basane wala kyu nahi aaya ........

Nebhru - parnam pitashri .....aaj itne varsho baad .....accha laga aapko jeevit dekhkar .....hum toh aapko mara hua samaz rahe the ......

Abhi - mat kaho muzhe Pitashri apne iss gande muh se ......tum mere putra kahlane yogya nahi ..ho ....Sharam ...nahi ...aayi aapne pita aur mata k saath vishwasghat karke .....uss Adrmen ka saath dekar ...tum iss rishte ko kho chuke ho ......
ab tayar ho jaao apna dand bhugatne k liye ....

Nebhru - itne varsho k baad aapko dekhkar mein toh bas aadar kar raha tha ...parantu lagta hai aapko ...yeh pasand nahi aaya .....chalo koi baat nahi .......parantu haa ab mein woh Nebhru nahi raha jo aapke ....ek aawaj se dar jaata tha .....

itna kahkar Nebru ek urja ka vaar Abhi par karta hai ....
jisse Abhi apni urja k vaar se rokta hai .......aur tezi se urja ka ek vaar uspar kar deta hai ....jo Nebhru ko lagta hai ....jisase woh piche ki or gir jaata hai ... ......

Abhi -itne aasani se nahi bacche .......tumahari koi shakti aaj Arsalan ka kuch nahi bigad sakti ......

Abhi ki yojna k anusar yaha Nebhru aur Abhi ka sangharsh aur .... Darmen ko dikhana tha .....Thodi der Abhi aur Nebhru ka dikhave ka yudh chalta raha ....

Abhi ki yojna ko poorna roop dene k liye ....Nebhru ne jab .....khadan mein pravesh kiya tab .....usski bhent yaha k aakhri bache hue mahadaitya se hui ...jo gupt roop se khadan k dakshini disha ...k jungal mein tainat tha ...aur yaha se uthrahe shor aur cheekh pukar ....se aakarshit hokar aaya tha ...........

yeh daitya ab unn sab daityo se jiska Abhi se saamna hua unn sabse jyada shaktishali aur mayavi tha ....

Nebhru par vaar hote hue dekhkar woh maha daitya Abhi ki taraf apna vishal khadag lekar ...badha ......

Uss daitya ko aate hue dekhkar ....kaal ..uss taraf badha hi tha k Abhi ne usse rok liya .....Aur apne khajar se uss daitya par vaar kiya .....Abhi ka woh maarak khanjar teevra gati se se uss daitya ki taraf bada ...parantu koi adrishya kawach uski raksha kar raha tha ......woh khanjar uski seene se takrakar ...wapas Abhi k haath mein aagaya ....

uss daitya ne Badi tezi k saath Abhi par apne khadag se vaar kiya ......uska vaar Abhi ne apni talwar se roka aur usse piche dhakela .....jaise hi woh daitya thoda piche hata Abhi ne uchalkar apne dono pairo uske seene par vaar kiya ....jisase woh daitya piche ki or gira .....uske girte hi Abhi ....uske upar aake tabadtod uske jabde par ghuse barsane laga .....

uss daitya ne bhi apna pair modkar Abhi k pet par prahar karke upar ki or uchal diya ...Abhi bhi hawa mein kala baajiya khate hue ......uske saamne khada ho gaya .......tab tak woh bhi badi tezi se sambhal chuka tha .......

ussne Abhi par aagni ki urja se ka ek bada sa gola banakar vaar kiya .......woh aag ka gola itna bada tha k waha ka tapmaan badne laga .......Abhi ne bhi uska uttar dete hue .....Jal aur vayu tatva ka chakra vat pragat kiya jisne uss aag k gole ko sokhkar thanda kar diya .....aur ....apne chakro ki urja se uss daitya par vaar karne laga .....

woh daitya Abhi k har vaar ko rok raha tha .......Abhi ka koi bhi vaar uss daitya ko haani nahi pahuncha paa raha tha ......Eblis ki kaali shaktiyo ka kawach uski raksha kar raha tha ......

Uss daitya ne ab apni kaali shaktiyo ki urja ka ek bada sa gola banakar Abhi par vaar kiya ......Kaali shaktiyo ka woh gola Aakash mein sthit ho gaya aur usmein se rk baigani rang ki kiran niklkar Abhi se jaa takrayi ...woh kiran Abhi ki urja sokhne lagi ......

Tabhi Nebhru bola - muzhe dand dene aaye the na ab ...ant hoga aapka ....aur ..khush hoga mera maalik Darmen .....aap kaali shaktiyo ki nakaratmak urja ko nahi rok sakte ...


Abhi ko apne bhiter ki shaktiya bahar nikalti hui mehsus hone lagi .....lekin woh Nebhru ki baato mein chupe hue ishare ko ..samaz chuka tha .....usne turant apni marak shakti kaal ko apne bhiter samaya .....aur uski tamsik shakti ki....urja ko sakriya kiya .....jiske prabhav se kaali shaktiyo se bana woh gola nasht ho gaya .......

Abhi samaz chuka tha k yeh daitya bhi kaalishaktiyo k kawach se surakhit hai .....isse tamsik urja ki maarak shakti dwara hi bheda jaa sakta hai .....

Abhi tridevo k ansh se pragat hua tha ......issiliye tridevo ki teen guno ki shakti usmein nihit thi ....Kaal abhi ki maarak taamsik shaktiyo ka hi roop tha ....

Abhi ne kaal ko aur khanjar ki maarak urja dono ko apne talwar mein samahit kar diya .....aur uchalkar ek jordar vaar uss daitya k sar par kiya .....uss daitya ko cheekhne ka bhi awsar nahi mila aur ...woh talwar usse bich se chirti hui nikal gayi ...woh daitya dharashayi ho chuka tha ....

Uss daitya k marte hi Abhi ne Darmen ko dikhane k liye ......Nebhru par Apni urja se vaar kiya ....woh vaar ghatak toh nahi tha parantu dikhne mein .....bahut shaktsahli pratit ho raha tha ....

uske baad apne urja k paash mein band diya .....aur waha aur aagni tatva k prahar jordar dhamaka kiya .....jisase uss khandhar ka adhiktar bhag ...nasht ...ho gaya .....aur turant Nebru ko lekar khadan se bahar aagaya ......

Abhi ne Nebhru ko apne paash se mukt kiya ......Aur Nebhru bhi Abhi ko lekar waha se teleport hokar ....uss jagah pahuncha jaha ...2000 bandiyo k saath ...woh baune Abhi ka intejar kar rahe the ........

itne saare logo ko ek saath waha se nikalne k liye Nebhru ko apni poori urja k saath prakash dwar ka nirman karna pada .....Jisase Abhi ne unn saare bauno aur ...logo ko waha se ...nikal diya ......

Abhi - ( Nebhru ko ) aap bhi chaliye ab ....aapka yaha rahna thik nahi hai ......

Nebhru - abhi nahi .....tum shighra yaha se niklo ....Darmen chup nahi baithega woh kissi bhi samay yaha aasakta hai ......

Nebru k bahut samzhane par Abhi uss prakash dwar mein pravesh kar gaya .....Poori urja k kharch hone k kaaran Nebhru waha behosh hogaya .......

yaha Darmen jab khadan ka haal apne screen par dekh raha tha ...toh usse poora vishwas tha k Arsalan uss mayavi daitya aur Nebhru ka ek saath saamna nahi kar sakta .......

parantu jab woh daitya maara gaya ...aur Abhi k dikhave k vaar se Nebhru achet ho gaya ......Tab usne khud Arsalan ka saamna karne ka socha ......aur woh waha se ek portal banakar ....usmein pravesh kargaya aur khadan mein aagaya ....

teleport hokar jaane mein aur portal ka prayog karne mein antar hota hai ......jaha teleport se ek hi pal mein vyakti apne man chahi jagah pahunchta tha ...wahi ...portal ...k prayog ...jagah ki doori k hisab se samay lagata hai ....

Darmen iss samay ....Egypt mein tha ....portal k dwara woh jab tak yaha pahuncha tha tab tak Abhi sabko lekar nikal chuka tha .....

Darmen jab khadan pahuncha ....jo khadan ki aisi haalat dekhkar ek baar toh woh bhi kaanp gaya .....charo taraf uske sainiko aur daityo k tukde aur khoon ....ek ka bhi sharir sahi salamat nahi tha .....sabko bade nirmamta k saath maara gaya ...tha ....

Darmen ne poori khadan mein ghumkar Nebhru ko dhunda ......dhundte hue woh khadan k gupt marg tak pahuncha .....uss surag se woh aage bada aur jab woh surang se bahar aaya ..toh usse waha Nebhru achet awastha mein mila ......jo poorna urja k prayog k kaaran achet hua tha .....aur Darmen ne socha k Arsalan k vaar k kaaran uski aisi haalat hui hai ....woh usse uthakar ......Nebhru k banaye nagar mein uske mahal le gaya .....

yaha ....Abhi ko uss nirmanadin gaon se nikle hue jab ..4 ..hi din hue the ...tab Neeru ne Karma se Abhi ko milne ki zidd ki .....toh Karma ko uski baat manani hi padi ......dusre din Karma Neeru ko lekar waha se nikalne se pahele gaon walo se bhi mila aur unhe .....gaon k nirman ka karya jaldi hi poora hone ki suchna di ...toh sabne bhi apne gaon k naye swarup ko dekhne ki iccha pragat ki .....

Neeru ...Vaishali aur Sona ...aur kuch gaon walo ko lekar Karma waha pahuncha ......gaon k nirman karya ko dekhkar sab bahut khush hue ....

Lekin Neeru aur Sonu ki nazar waha Abhi ko talashne lagi jo woh waha nahi tha ......

Neeru ne Karma se Abhi k baare mein pucha ......toh usne Mukhiya ji se pucha ....Toh Mukhiya ji ne yahi kaha k unhone usse kissi kaam k liye bheja hai ...shighra hi aajayega ....lekin jab dusre din bhi Abhi nahi aaya toh Neeru k dil ghabrane laga ....

yeh wohi samay tha jab Abhi Nebhru se mukable mein jitne k baad seene mein ho raha pida k kaaran behosh ho gaya tha .....

Yaha Neeru ko aisa aabhas hone laga k Abhi pida mein hai .....yahi mamta ki shakti hai ...jo dur se bhi apne bacche ki pida ka anubhav kar leti hai ....

Karma ne jab sakhti se Mukhiya ji aur Vikas ...Vilas se pooch taach ki toh unnhe satya ka gyan hua .......K Abhi khoye hue gaon walo ko khojne gaya hai .....

Jisse sunkar Karma ko Mukhiya ji par krodh aaya ....

Karma - aapne usse kaise jaane diya ......aapke logo ko na jaane woh log kaha le gaye honge .......Abhi kaha se dhund kar laayega unhe .....aur yadi kissi tarah woh waha pahunch bhi gaya .....toh aap jaante hi hai k woh log kitne krur hai .....kaise woh akela unka saamna karega ....

Apne swarth mein aapne mere bete ko mrityu k mukh mein bhej diya ......
aur Vikas aur Vilas tum toh Abhi k mitra ho na toh kaise tumne usse akele jaane diya ......

yeh saari baatein jab Neeru ne suni k uska beta kissi khatre mein hai toh woh bhi murchit ho gayi ......jisse niche girne se pahele hi Sona ne aage badhkar sambhsl liya ....Karma ki baatein sunkar .....usse bhi Abhi ki chinta hone lagi aur Abhi ko yaad karte hue aankhon mein aansoo aagaye ....pita aur bhai ko toh kho hi chuki thi ab Abhi ko khona nahi chahti thi ....

Mukhiya ji toh kuch kahne ki sthiti mein hi nahi the ....

Dusre din subah hi Karma ne apne log Abhi ki khoj mein bhej diye ....Jaana toh woh bhi chahta tha ....parantu ..Neeru ko iss haalat mein chodkar woh nahi jaa sakta tha ....woh ..din bhi bit gaya

raat k karib 3 baje ka samay tha ..........Neeru abhi bhi behosh thi ...aur Sonu uske sirhane baithi hui thi ....Karma ..Mukhiya ji ....Shundi .....Vikas ..Vilas ...sabki aankhon se nind koso dur thi .......
Sabhi bahar baithe hue the ......k tabhi ...unhe ...gaon k dakshin disha se aata hua shor sunayi dene laga ....jaise bahut se log ....ek saath chale aarahe hai .......

Karma...shor ki disha mein chal diya ...baaki sab bhi uske piche chal diye ...tabhi uski nazar saamne se aate hue Abhi aur uske picche aate hue logo par padi .....Abhi iss samay bhi ...Arsalan k shahi vastro mein tha .......

Karma bas Abhi ko dekhta rah gaya ....usse samaz nahi aaraha tha k Abhi hi hai ya aur koi ....

Arsalan ki tarah dikhne k liye Abhi ne Nebhru ki di hui sunahre kandhe tak aate hue nakli baalo ki vig pahni hui thi ......jiske kaaran Karma .....shanshaygrast ho gaya tha .....

Abhi - ( vig nikalte hue ) aise kya dekh rahe ho baba mein aapka beta Abhi hi hu ....

jab Abhi ne apni vig nikal li ....toh Karma ne ...Abhi ko gale laga liye .......Abhi k saath aaye hue logo ......mein uss gaon k sath sath alag alag gaon k bhi log the ....

shor sunkar baaki log bhi wahi aagaye the ......sab apne khoye hue apno ko punah prapt paakar khush hogaye the ....kai maao ko unke laal wapas milgaye the ...toh kai baccho ko unke pita ....kai apni dulariyo ko milkar khush the ...

apne jin senhijano k milne ki aas unhone lagbhag chod di thi ....aaj Abhi k kaaran unhe mil gaye the ....sabki aankhon mein milan ki khushi k aansoo the ....

Karma ne jab yeh drisya dekha ....toh usse Abhi par garv hua usne ek baar aur Abhi ko gale lagaya ......Abhi Karma k saath ...shivir k bhiter gaya ......jaha uski maa murchit awastha mein padi thi .......parantu Abhi k waha pravesh karte hi usse hosh aagaya .......

Neeru ne jab aankh kholkar dekha toh saamne Abhi ko paaya ........

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla Update kal .....

Nice update bro

 

[u.sir.name]

Thanku soo much bhai aapke superb fantastic ..shandar ..mind blowing ..Review k liye .

bhai aap kahani ki baarikiyo ko bakhubi samazte ho ....aapka har review laajawab hota hai ......

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ...??

Update 22 posted....

abhi1008 brother aap likhte hi bahut Bhadiya ho???

 

[Anky@123]

Bahut hi pyara update bhai ,magar ab karma aur neeru ko abhi ka sach pata chal jana chahiye .

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 26

Abhi k kadmo ki aahat se hi Neeru ko hosh aane laga ....Neeru ne apne sirhane baithe hue ....Abhi ko dekha jo uske paas baithe usse hi pukar raha tha ......apne bete ko saamne paakar ....Neeru ne uthne ka prayatna kiya .....lekin Abhi ne usse uthne nahi diya .....

Abhi - kya maa aapne muzhe vachan diya tha ..na ...k apna dhyan rakogi ...toh phir yeh kya hai .....aapko iss prakar dekhkar kya muzhe aacha lagta hai ....

Neeeru - Kaha chala gaya tha beta ......yadi tuze kuch ho gaya toh socha hai humara kya hoga ..ab tu aagaya hai na ..ab mein bilkul thik hu ......

Abhi - iskeliye maa mein kshama chahta hu k mein aapko zhoot bolkar gaya tha ...parantu iske siwa mere paas aur koi marg nahi tha ....gaon walo ko jo vachan maine diya tha .....woh muzhe chain se nahi rahne de raha tha .....aur yadi aapko batakar jaata toh kya aap jaane deti ....

Neeru ne Abhi k sir par haath pherte hue .....

Neeru - Mera beta ab badi badi baatein karne laga hai ....
( Karma ki taraf dekhte hue ) dekho toh ..

Karma - sirf baatein hi nahi bade kaam bhi karta hai ...tum jaanti ho ..isne apna vachan nibhaya ..hai ...bahar yeh shor sunrahi ho ......yeh unn sabhi logo ko chudakar laaya ha....jo unn krur sainiko dwara lejaaye gaye the .....

Neeru ne uthkar apne bete ka maatha chuma ....thodi der aise hi baatein hoti rahi .....

yaha bahar sabhi aazadi ki saans mein khush the .......Sonu Apne bhai aur pita se milkar bahut khush thi .......Mukhiya ji bhi apne pariwar se milkar bahut khush the ......

Abhi ..Vikas ..Vilas ..Karma ..aur Shundi bahar aag k alaw k paas baithkar baatein kar rahe the ....Aur gaon k sabhi log aa aakar Abhi ko dhnyawad aur aashirwad de rahe the ......Karma aur Neeru ko apne bete par garv ho raha tha ......

tabhi Mukhiya ji bhi apne Bete aur Bahu k saath aaye ...Mukhiya ji ne aage badhjar Abhi k sir par haath rakha .....

Mukhiya ji ko dekhkar Karma ko apne bole kadve vachan yaad aaye jo usne Abhi k na milnepar unko bole the ...apne uss abhadra vyavhar k liye Karma ne unse kshama maangi ......

Vaishali apne pati Bishan aur apne bete Shankar ...aur Sonu k saath ...Abhi ko dhnyawad dene aayi ......Sab ki aankhon mein khushi k aansoo the ....Vaishali ne aage badkar Abhi k sar par haath phera ......

Abhi - ab inn aansuvo ko poch dijiye maa ji .....ab toh aapka parivaar poora ho gaya .....

Vaishali - yeh toh khushi k aansoo hai beta .....aaj tumne hum sab gaon walo ko apno se milakar apne vachan ko poora kiya hai .....tumahare iss ahsan ka badla hum kaise chukaayenge samaz nahi aaraha hai .....

Abhi - ismein ahsan ki kya baat hai maaji yeh toh mera kartvya tha .......

Vaishali - yeh toh tumahara badapan hai beta ....iswar sada tumhe khush rakhe aur tumahare matg mein aanewali saari badhao ko nasht kare.....

Abhi ka dhyan vaishali k bete par gaya .....

Abhi - arre tum toh vahi ho na ...jisne khadan mein ...meri raksha ki thi ....bahut bahadur ho tum ..aise viparit paristhiti mein bhi tum ekdum sajag the ....

Karma ne jab pucha toh Abhi ne bataya k kaise khadan mein ek daiya ne uspar piche se shool ka vaar kiya tha ...tab usne Abhi ko waha se hatakar ...uss shool se Abhi ki raksha ki thi ......

Abhi ki yeh baat sunkar Karma ne Shankar ko gale lagakar uska dhywad kiya ....

Vaishali ne apne pati aur bete ka parichy Abhi se karaya ....

Sona toh bas Abhi ko dekhe jaa rahi thi ...woh kaskar Abhi k gale lagna chahti thi ...usse bahut kuch kahna chahti thi ......sabse baat karte hue Abhi ki bhi nazar uspar hi thi ....woh bhi usse apni baahon mein bharkar batana chahta tha k woh usase kitna prem karta hai ....parantu maryada ki deewar unhe roke hue thi ......

Karma yeh dekh leta hai .....woh samaz jaata hai k dono k bich kuch na kuch toh chal raha hai.....iska matlab ab mera beta poori tarah jawan ho gaya hai ....aur ek muskurahat .....uske chehre par aajaati hai ....

Karma --- ..Yeh baar baar tum udhar kya dekh rahe ho beta ...hum sab tumse baat kar parantu tumahara toh dhyan hi kahi or hai ....kya baat hai ....

karma ki baat sunkar Abhi hadbada gaya ....

Abhi - wooh....mein ...wohh...mein....kkkkuchhh....nahi ....

Karma - ( maze lete hue ) kya woh mein ..woh ..mein..laga rakha hai ...

ab Abhi kya bole itne khunkhar daityo ka saamna karne wala ...apne pita k saamne bolne se bhi dar raha tha ....isse hi kahte hai maryada .....jo aaj k samay mein lupt si ho gayi hai ...

Vashali - mein batati hu bhai sahab ......yeh dono toh batane se rahe ....
baat yeh hai ...k ab humari beti parayi ho gayi hai ....aur woh ab aapke ghar rahna chahti hai ....

Neeru - Hamare ghar rahna chahti hai .....toh ismein kya hua .....rah sakti hai ....waise bhi issne kissi bilkul apne ki tarah meri sewa ki hai ...ek hi din mein isase lagav sa ho gaya hai ....aur ismein iske parayi hone ki baat kaha se aagayi .......

Karma - arri bhaagwan ...abhi bhi nahi samzhi ....inka arth hai ......Sona ab humari bahu bankar humare ghar aayegi ...Apna Abhi ab bada ho gaya hai .....yeh dono ek dusre ko prem karte hai .....kyu beta sahi kaha na ......

Abhi apne pita ki baat sunkar sharma jaata hai ..aur Sona bhi sharmakar apni maa k picche chup jaati hai ....

Neeru aage baadkar .....Abhi k sar par haath pherte hue ...

Neeru - dekho toh kaise sharma raha hai .......Sach mein beta kya yeh satya hai .....

Abhi - Haa maa ....mein Sona se prem karta hu ......

Neeru - Abhi ko gale laga leti hai ......Mein bahut khush hu mere laal ...muzhe toh ladki pasand hai .......

Abhi aur Sonu ka vivah 4 din baad tay hua .....sab ek dusre ko badhai dene lage .......

sab apne apne shivir chale gaye ..the ab ..kewal ...Abhi ...Karma ....Neeru ...Vikas aur Vilas ...Shundi waha ...aag k alaw k k paas baithe the sab k maann mein utsukta thi janane ki k Abhi ne kaise unn sabko chudaya ...kya ...kya ...hua ....

Abhi unhe batana nahi chahta tha k usse pata chal chuka hai woh unka beta nahi hai ......isiliye woh baat ko talna chahta tha .......kyu ki batata ..toh Nebhru aur Kaal ka bhi jikar hota ....aur Arsalan k bhes k baare mein bhi ....aur pihr unse jude sawal bhi ....

Abhi - Bas pitashri yeh sab Babaji k prashikshan aur aapke aur maa k aashirwad k kaaran hi ho paaya hai .....

Neeru - aise nahi chalega ...poori baat batao ....shuru se lekar aakhir tak ....

Vikas - bata na yaar kyu bhav kha raha hai ....jara hume bhi toh pata chale tumhare karname k baare mein .....

Abhi - tu chup rah ....tuzhse toh mein baad mein ...baat karta hu ....lekin maa aap kyu baccho jaisi jidd karte ho .....

Neeru - Jab bete bado jaise kaam karne lag jaaye toh ..hume toh baccha banana hi padega na ....accha yeh sab bahane baaji chod aur sab kuch sach sach bata ....( Abhi ka haath apne sar par rakhte hue ) tuzhe meri shapat hai ..tu kuch bhi nahi chupaayega .....

apna haath khinchte hue .....Maa ...yeh aapne kya kiya .....main abhi aapko nahi batana chahta tha .......parantu aapke shapath dekar muzhe vivash kar diya ....

Karma - aisi kya baat hai beta ....jo tu humse chupana chahta tha .....

Abhi - baat hai pitashri baat hai ...aur bahut badi baat hai ....aapsab janana hi chahte ho na toh suno ......

Abhi ne shuru se lekar jab woh Nebru ko pahli baar mila tha tabse lekar ab tak sab kuch ..batata chala gaya ....Nebhru ka aur uska sambandh uske asli mata pita Arsalan aur dhara k baare mein .
uske baaki k bhaiyo aur Darmen k baare mein sabkuch batata chala gaya .....

Abhi jab apni baat khatam karta hai ....toh Karma aur neeru dono ki aanhon mein aansoo dekhta hai .....

Neeru - toh tuzhe pata chal gaya k tu humara beta nahi hai .....mein jaanti hu k ab tu hume chodkar chala jaayega ....itna kahkar uska gala bhar aata hai woh aage kuch nahi bol paati ....

Karma usse samabhalta hai ...chup ho jaao Neeru ..yeh toh ek na ek din hona hi tha .....

Abhi - aap aisa kyu kah rahe ho pitashri ....aur maa aapne yeh kaise socha k mein aapko chodkar chala jaaunga ( aage badkar neeru k aansoo ponchta hua ) .....chup ho jaao maa ....muzhe aapne bhle hi janm na diya ho parantu meri dhamniyo mein bahnewala rakt aapka dudh hai ....aapne muzhe jivan diya hai woh sneh diya hai ....yadi pitashri muzhe na bachate aur ghar na laate toh na jaane mera kya hota ......

Abhi aage badhkar apni maa k aansoo ponchta hai.....
Bhale hi maine aapki kokh se janam nahi liya ho parantu aap hi meri maa ..rahogi ....aur Neeru ko gale laga liya ........

Thodi der Maa bete ka milan aise hi chalta raha .......Abhi ki baaton aur pyar se Karma aur Neeru k mann ka Abhi se bichadne ka bhay dur hogaya .......
iss sab mein Raat bit gayi thi ......Abhi ....ko bhi thakan k kaaran nind aarahi thi .....toh woh bhi ek shivir mein jaakar sogaya ......subah nayi umango se bhara naya suryoday hua ......

Abhi ko uthne mein der hogayi thi ....usne jaldi jaldi apne nityakarm niptaye aur ....Karma...aur Neeru ...ko gaon k nirikshan ka kahkar apni preyasi Sona se milne chal pada .....

Sona ki raat Apne pita aur bhai ....ki ...khusi aur Abhi ko yaad karte hue bit gayi thi .......Subah .....Abhi k baare mein sochte sochte baithe baithe hi nind aagayi .....

Abhi Sona k shivir pahincha ....Toh ..Sona ki maa jal bharne gayi hui thi aur uske pita aur bhai .....waha Karma k dwara lagaye hue chikitsa shivir ....kaid mein unke shrir par hue ghavo ka ilaj karane gaye hue the ........Abhi jab ander gaya ....toh sona ....akeli thi ....

Sote hue woh badi hi maasum lag rahi thi ......Abhi bas sonu k anupam saundarya mein kho sa jaata hai .....Sona k gaalo par atkheliya karti hui lat Abhi apne ungli se hatakar uske kaan k piche karta hai .....aur uske chehre par zhukta chala jaata hai .......aur uske maathe ko chum leta hai .....
jisase Sona nind mein hi apni baahien Abhi k gale mein dal deti hai ....Abhi ko lagta hai shayad woh uth gayi ho ....toh uske chehre ko dekhne lagta hai ....phir uski aankhon ko chumta hai ....naithkar usse apni baahon mein bhar leta hai .....Achanak uski nind khul jaati hai ....aur apne ko kisdi k baahon mein dekhkar jor ka dhakka marti hai .....

Jisase Abhi piche girte girte bach jaata jata ......Jab Sonu ka dhyan Abhi par jaata hai ....toh uska dar chala jaata hai ....

Abhi - yeh kya hai Sonu .....tune toh muzhe gira diya tha .....

Sonu - muzhe pata nahi tha k aap ho ....nahi toh mein aisa nahi karti ....lekin aap bhi ...ausa..koi karta ..hai ..kya ...mein toh dar hi gayi thi ....

Abhi uske paas jaate hue ...chalo ab toh pata chal gaya k mein hu ...ab batao aisa nahi karti toh kaisa karti .......

Sonu - jaao mein nahi batati .....aur sharam k kaaran ..muh ghuma leti hai ......aur teerchi nazar se Abhi ko dekhti hai

Abhi - uska chehra apni taraf karte hue ....haye tumahari yahi ada ...aur yeh nazro k teer ne ...toh muzhe ghayal kar diya hai .....aur uske hontho par halka sa chumban leta hai .....aur usse baahon mein bhar leta hai .....

Sonu bhi kabse issi pal ka intajar kar rahi thi jab Abhi khul kar apne prem ko pragat kare .....usne bhi Abhi ko apne baahon mein kas liya ......thodi der aise dono ek dusre k hriday mein chupe hue prem ko mehsus karte hai .....

Abhi - Sonu ...tum khush toh ho na ..iss rishte se .....

Sonu - kya abhi bhi poochne ki jarurat hai ...mein toh kabse issi ghadi ki pratiksha mein thi .....Abhi ...Sonu ka chehra ...dono haatho mein pakadta hai ...aur ...uske chehre par zhukta chala jaata hai .....k tabhi piche se kissi k khasne ki aawaj aati hai ......



Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update raat ko ......

 

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Shandar jbardust update

Thanku so much bhai for your shandar support

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Update 26 posted...

 

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Superb Update Bro...
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Thanku so much Reza bhai for your shandar support

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Update 26 posted...

 

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Anekaanek aabhar sakha ....apke sneh aur ...sundar chhand yukt aapki samiksha avem tippani k liye ...


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Update 26 posted...

Abhi Arsalan ka vesh lekar Darmen ko dikhane ke liye Nebhru aur ush antim detye se yudh karta hai aur apni marak shakti ke dwara detye ka vadh kar deta hai v Nebhru per thoda halka war karta hai.
Ushke baad ek vishbhot se khdan ko nasht kar deta hai v bandi logo ke pass chala jata hai Nebhru ke sath aur Nebhru apni puri urja se parkashdwar khol kar sabko bhej deta hai Sona ke gavn v bono ko jungle me aur khud achet ho jata hai. Kuch samay ke baad Darmen Arsalen ke dwara hue war se Nebhru ko achet samajhkar ushe utha kar ushke mahal me le chalta hai.
Idhar Abhi ko sonu ke gavn me na pakar Sonu v Karma aur Neeru pareshan ho jate hai v neeru behosh ho jati hai. Teen diwash ke paschat Abhi v laapta gavn wale lout aate he sonu ke gavn aur Neeru ko hosh aa jata hai Abhi ki suchna milte hi.
Bahut hi sunder sheep apne sang motiyo se akshro ko samaye ek sunder si varanmala laayi hai Khadan se.

Sakha ki ek aur adhbhut alankrit rachnakriti ki partiksha me.

 

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Bahut hi shandaar update, wakai mja aa gya

Thanku so much bhai for your shandar support & comment


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Update 26 posted...