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Abhi k kadmo ki aahat se hi Neeru ko hosh aane laga ....Neeru ne apne sirhane baithe hue ....Abhi ko dekha jo uske paas baithe usse hi pukar raha tha ......apne bete ko saamne paakar ....Neeru ne uthne ka prayatna kiya .....lekin Abhi ne usse uthne nahi diya .....
Abhi - kya maa aapne muzhe vachan diya tha ..na ...k apna dhyan rakogi ...toh phir yeh kya hai .....aapko iss prakar dekhkar kya muzhe aacha lagta hai ....
Neeeru - Kaha chala gaya tha beta ......yadi tuze kuch ho gaya toh socha hai humara kya hoga ..ab tu aagaya hai na ..ab mein bilkul thik hu ......
Abhi - iskeliye maa mein kshama chahta hu k mein aapko zhoot bolkar gaya tha ...parantu iske siwa mere paas aur koi marg nahi tha ....gaon walo ko jo vachan maine diya tha .....woh muzhe chain se nahi rahne de raha tha .....aur yadi aapko batakar jaata toh kya aap jaane deti ....
Neeru ne Abhi k sir par haath pherte hue .....
Neeru - Mera beta ab badi badi baatein karne laga hai ....
( Karma ki taraf dekhte hue ) dekho toh ..
Karma - sirf baatein hi nahi bade kaam bhi karta hai ...tum jaanti ho ..isne apna vachan nibhaya ..hai ...bahar yeh shor sunrahi ho ......yeh unn sabhi logo ko chudakar laaya ha....jo unn krur sainiko dwara lejaaye gaye the .....
Neeru ne uthkar apne bete ka maatha chuma ....thodi der aise hi baatein hoti rahi .....
yaha bahar sabhi aazadi ki saans mein khush the .......Sonu Apne bhai aur pita se milkar bahut khush thi .......Mukhiya ji bhi apne pariwar se milkar bahut khush the ......
Abhi ..Vikas ..Vilas ..Karma ..aur Shundi bahar aag k alaw k paas baithkar baatein kar rahe the ....Aur gaon k sabhi log aa aakar Abhi ko dhnyawad aur aashirwad de rahe the ......Karma aur Neeru ko apne bete par garv ho raha tha ......
tabhi Mukhiya ji bhi apne Bete aur Bahu k saath aaye ...Mukhiya ji ne aage badhjar Abhi k sir par haath rakha .....
Mukhiya ji ko dekhkar Karma ko apne bole kadve vachan yaad aaye jo usne Abhi k na milnepar unko bole the ...apne uss abhadra vyavhar k liye Karma ne unse kshama maangi ......
Vaishali apne pati Bishan aur apne bete Shankar ...aur Sonu k saath ...Abhi ko dhnyawad dene aayi ......Sab ki aankhon mein khushi k aansoo the ....Vaishali ne aage badkar Abhi k sar par haath phera ......
Abhi - ab inn aansuvo ko poch dijiye maa ji .....ab toh aapka parivaar poora ho gaya .....
Vaishali - yeh toh khushi k aansoo hai beta .....aaj tumne hum sab gaon walo ko apno se milakar apne vachan ko poora kiya hai .....tumahare iss ahsan ka badla hum kaise chukaayenge samaz nahi aaraha hai .....
Abhi - ismein ahsan ki kya baat hai maaji yeh toh mera kartvya tha .......
Vaishali - yeh toh tumahara badapan hai beta ....iswar sada tumhe khush rakhe aur tumahare matg mein aanewali saari badhao ko nasht kare.....
Abhi ka dhyan vaishali k bete par gaya .....
Abhi - arre tum toh vahi ho na ...jisne khadan mein ...meri raksha ki thi ....bahut bahadur ho tum ..aise viparit paristhiti mein bhi tum ekdum sajag the ....
Karma ne jab pucha toh Abhi ne bataya k kaise khadan mein ek daiya ne uspar piche se shool ka vaar kiya tha ...tab usne Abhi ko waha se hatakar ...uss shool se Abhi ki raksha ki thi ......
Abhi ki yeh baat sunkar Karma ne Shankar ko gale lagakar uska dhywad kiya ....
Vaishali ne apne pati aur bete ka parichy Abhi se karaya ....
Sona toh bas Abhi ko dekhe jaa rahi thi ...woh kaskar Abhi k gale lagna chahti thi ...usse bahut kuch kahna chahti thi ......sabse baat karte hue Abhi ki bhi nazar uspar hi thi ....woh bhi usse apni baahon mein bharkar batana chahta tha k woh usase kitna prem karta hai ....parantu maryada ki deewar unhe roke hue thi ......
Karma yeh dekh leta hai .....woh samaz jaata hai k dono k bich kuch na kuch toh chal raha hai.....iska matlab ab mera beta poori tarah jawan ho gaya hai ....aur ek muskurahat .....uske chehre par aajaati hai ....
Karma --- ..Yeh baar baar tum udhar kya dekh rahe ho beta ...hum sab tumse baat kar parantu tumahara toh dhyan hi kahi or hai ....kya baat hai ....
karma ki baat sunkar Abhi hadbada gaya ....
Abhi - wooh....mein ...wohh...mein....kkkkuchhh....nahi ....
Karma - ( maze lete hue ) kya woh mein ..woh ..mein..laga rakha hai ...
ab Abhi kya bole itne khunkhar daityo ka saamna karne wala ...apne pita k saamne bolne se bhi dar raha tha ....isse hi kahte hai maryada .....jo aaj k samay mein lupt si ho gayi hai ...
Vashali - mein batati hu bhai sahab ......yeh dono toh batane se rahe ....
baat yeh hai ...k ab humari beti parayi ho gayi hai ....aur woh ab aapke ghar rahna chahti hai ....
Neeru - Hamare ghar rahna chahti hai .....toh ismein kya hua .....rah sakti hai ....waise bhi issne kissi bilkul apne ki tarah meri sewa ki hai ...ek hi din mein isase lagav sa ho gaya hai ....aur ismein iske parayi hone ki baat kaha se aagayi .......
Karma - arri bhaagwan ...abhi bhi nahi samzhi ....inka arth hai ......Sona ab humari bahu bankar humare ghar aayegi ...Apna Abhi ab bada ho gaya hai .....yeh dono ek dusre ko prem karte hai .....kyu beta sahi kaha na ......
Abhi apne pita ki baat sunkar sharma jaata hai ..aur Sona bhi sharmakar apni maa k picche chup jaati hai ....
Neeru aage baadkar .....Abhi k sar par haath pherte hue ...
Neeru - dekho toh kaise sharma raha hai .......Sach mein beta kya yeh satya hai .....
Abhi - Haa maa ....mein Sona se prem karta hu ......
Neeru - Abhi ko gale laga leti hai ......Mein bahut khush hu mere laal ...muzhe toh ladki pasand hai .......
Abhi aur Sonu ka vivah 4 din baad tay hua .....sab ek dusre ko badhai dene lage .......
sab apne apne shivir chale gaye ..the ab ..kewal ...Abhi ...Karma ....Neeru ...Vikas aur Vilas ...Shundi waha ...aag k alaw k k paas baithe the sab k maann mein utsukta thi janane ki k Abhi ne kaise unn sabko chudaya ...kya ...kya ...hua ....
Abhi unhe batana nahi chahta tha k usse pata chal chuka hai woh unka beta nahi hai ......isiliye woh baat ko talna chahta tha .......kyu ki batata ..toh Nebhru aur Kaal ka bhi jikar hota ....aur Arsalan k bhes k baare mein bhi ....aur pihr unse jude sawal bhi ....
Abhi - Bas pitashri yeh sab Babaji k prashikshan aur aapke aur maa k aashirwad k kaaran hi ho paaya hai .....
Neeru - aise nahi chalega ...poori baat batao ....shuru se lekar aakhir tak ....
Vikas - bata na yaar kyu bhav kha raha hai ....jara hume bhi toh pata chale tumhare karname k baare mein .....
Abhi - tu chup rah ....tuzhse toh mein baad mein ...baat karta hu ....lekin maa aap kyu baccho jaisi jidd karte ho .....
Neeru - Jab bete bado jaise kaam karne lag jaaye toh ..hume toh baccha banana hi padega na ....accha yeh sab bahane baaji chod aur sab kuch sach sach bata ....( Abhi ka haath apne sar par rakhte hue ) tuzhe meri shapat hai ..tu kuch bhi nahi chupaayega .....
apna haath khinchte hue .....Maa ...yeh aapne kya kiya .....main abhi aapko nahi batana chahta tha .......parantu aapke shapath dekar muzhe vivash kar diya ....
Karma - aisi kya baat hai beta ....jo tu humse chupana chahta tha .....
Abhi - baat hai pitashri baat hai ...aur bahut badi baat hai ....aapsab janana hi chahte ho na toh suno ......
Abhi ne shuru se lekar jab woh Nebru ko pahli baar mila tha tabse lekar ab tak sab kuch ..batata chala gaya ....Nebhru ka aur uska sambandh uske asli mata pita Arsalan aur dhara k baare mein .
uske baaki k bhaiyo aur Darmen k baare mein sabkuch batata chala gaya .....
Abhi jab apni baat khatam karta hai ....toh Karma aur neeru dono ki aanhon mein aansoo dekhta hai .....
Neeru - toh tuzhe pata chal gaya k tu humara beta nahi hai .....mein jaanti hu k ab tu hume chodkar chala jaayega ....itna kahkar uska gala bhar aata hai woh aage kuch nahi bol paati ....
Karma usse samabhalta hai ...chup ho jaao Neeru ..yeh toh ek na ek din hona hi tha .....
Abhi - aap aisa kyu kah rahe ho pitashri ....aur maa aapne yeh kaise socha k mein aapko chodkar chala jaaunga ( aage badkar neeru k aansoo ponchta hua ) .....chup ho jaao maa ....muzhe aapne bhle hi janm na diya ho parantu meri dhamniyo mein bahnewala rakt aapka dudh hai ....aapne muzhe jivan diya hai woh sneh diya hai ....yadi pitashri muzhe na bachate aur ghar na laate toh na jaane mera kya hota ......
Abhi aage badhkar apni maa k aansoo ponchta hai.....
Bhale hi maine aapki kokh se janam nahi liya ho parantu aap hi meri maa ..rahogi ....aur Neeru ko gale laga liya ........
Thodi der Maa bete ka milan aise hi chalta raha .......Abhi ki baaton aur pyar se Karma aur Neeru k mann ka Abhi se bichadne ka bhay dur hogaya .......
iss sab mein Raat bit gayi thi ......Abhi ....ko bhi thakan k kaaran nind aarahi thi .....toh woh bhi ek shivir mein jaakar sogaya ......subah nayi umango se bhara naya suryoday hua ......
Abhi ko uthne mein der hogayi thi ....usne jaldi jaldi apne nityakarm niptaye aur ....Karma...aur Neeru ...ko gaon k nirikshan ka kahkar apni preyasi Sona se milne chal pada .....
Sona ki raat Apne pita aur bhai ....ki ...khusi aur Abhi ko yaad karte hue bit gayi thi .......Subah .....Abhi k baare mein sochte sochte baithe baithe hi nind aagayi .....
Abhi Sona k shivir pahincha ....Toh ..Sona ki maa jal bharne gayi hui thi aur uske pita aur bhai .....waha Karma k dwara lagaye hue chikitsa shivir ....kaid mein unke shrir par hue ghavo ka ilaj karane gaye hue the ........Abhi jab ander gaya ....toh sona ....akeli thi ....
Sote hue woh badi hi maasum lag rahi thi ......Abhi bas sonu k anupam saundarya mein kho sa jaata hai .....Sona k gaalo par atkheliya karti hui lat Abhi apne ungli se hatakar uske kaan k piche karta hai .....aur uske chehre par zhukta chala jaata hai .......aur uske maathe ko chum leta hai .....
jisase Sona nind mein hi apni baahien Abhi k gale mein dal deti hai ....Abhi ko lagta hai shayad woh uth gayi ho ....toh uske chehre ko dekhne lagta hai ....phir uski aankhon ko chumta hai ....naithkar usse apni baahon mein bhar leta hai .....Achanak uski nind khul jaati hai ....aur apne ko kisdi k baahon mein dekhkar jor ka dhakka marti hai .....
Jisase Abhi piche girte girte bach jaata jata ......Jab Sonu ka dhyan Abhi par jaata hai ....toh uska dar chala jaata hai ....
Abhi - yeh kya hai Sonu .....tune toh muzhe gira diya tha .....
Sonu - muzhe pata nahi tha k aap ho ....nahi toh mein aisa nahi karti ....lekin aap bhi ...ausa..koi karta ..hai ..kya ...mein toh dar hi gayi thi ....
Abhi uske paas jaate hue ...chalo ab toh pata chal gaya k mein hu ...ab batao aisa nahi karti toh kaisa karti .......
Sonu - jaao mein nahi batati .....aur sharam k kaaran ..muh ghuma leti hai ......aur teerchi nazar se Abhi ko dekhti hai
Abhi - uska chehra apni taraf karte hue ....haye tumahari yahi ada ...aur yeh nazro k teer ne ...toh muzhe ghayal kar diya hai .....aur uske hontho par halka sa chumban leta hai .....aur usse baahon mein bhar leta hai .....
Sonu bhi kabse issi pal ka intajar kar rahi thi jab Abhi khul kar apne prem ko pragat kare .....usne bhi Abhi ko apne baahon mein kas liya ......thodi der aise dono ek dusre k hriday mein chupe hue prem ko mehsus karte hai .....
Abhi - Sonu ...tum khush toh ho na ..iss rishte se .....
Sonu - kya abhi bhi poochne ki jarurat hai ...mein toh kabse issi ghadi ki pratiksha mein thi .....Abhi ...Sonu ka chehra ...dono haatho mein pakadta hai ...aur ...uske chehre par zhukta chala jaata hai .....k tabhi piche se kissi k khasne ki aawaj aati hai ......
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