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Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

Nevil singh

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Abhi jamin par pada tha ......Sainik usse mara hua samazkar aage badhne lage .........
woh saare sainik thodi dur par ruk gaye ....unmein se ek aage Abhi ko dekhne k liye aage badha .Tabhi ek prakash Abhi k bhiter se pragat hua aur gunji uss sainik ki dardnak cheekh......

Achanak yeh kya hua ....sainiko ko kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha ...unhone dhyan se dekha toh p
waha tha Abhi ki sangharak shaktiyo ka ansh KAAL ka panja uss sainik k seene mein woh sanik chikh raha tha aur uski ceekhe sukar KAAL ki aankhon mein ajeeb si krurta ......k tabhi Kaal ne ek zhatke se use seeme ka haat nikala .......toh haath men tha uss sainik ka kaleja .....khoona se sane haath mein halka dhadahta hua dil ....jisase bahta taza khun dekhkar kaal ki aankhon mein alag hi krur chamak aagayi thi ....Kaal ne uss dil ko apne jabde mein chabakar nigal lya ....woh sainik niche ..yeh sab itne jaldi hua k baaki sainiko ko pata hi nahi chala k vaha kya ho raha hai
aur jab samaz aaya toh unki ruh kaanp gayi ....Kaal iss samay Sher manav k roop mein tha ......usne khoon se sane jabde par lahe khoon ko saaf karne jeebh nikalikar pheri aag ugalti aankhon se unn sainiko par ek nazar daali aur ek nazar Abhi par .....aur jor se dahada .....
Sainik darte hue aage badhe k tabhi Kaal Lapakkar sainik k paas pahunch apne jabde mein uska sar pakdkar ukhad diya baki bache hue sainiko ki or dekhta aur chaba gaya ....abhi bhi 500 k lag bhag Sainik khadan mein bache hue the ......

Kaal ek baar unn sainiko ki taraf dekhkar aur dahada .......Kaal hu mein ...Mahakaal ka ansh tumahari maut hu main ....
aur ab sabse aage sainik ko pakadkar Kaal ne uske seene mein dono haath dalkar bichse faad deta hai ....dono haath pakde hue uss sanik k fate hue sharir ko ek aur zhtkar dekar bich se chirkar fhenk diya....apne saamne itne bhayankar drishya dekhkar unn sainiko ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi k kaal k paas mein bhi gatke .......Kall aage badh raha tha aur badh rahi thi unn sainiko ki cheekhe ......kissi ka sar alag ..kissi k tukde pade tga ...koi bich se chira hai ..,.

Yaha Abhi kp bhi hosh aagaya ....usse apne bhiter shaktiyo ka bhandar nazar aaya jo usne pahele kabhi nahi Dekha tha ....Abhi bhi apna kjkhanjar lekar ....Darmen k sainiko par tut pada ......

Yaha Abhi Maarak khanjar ko gumate hue aage badh raha tha jo jisase bhi lagta woh rakh mein badal jaata ....Darmen k siniko mein hah hahkar mach gaya .......

Khadan mein ho raha shor jungle mein bhi fail raha tha ..,...Abhi ne toh jungle k ek hisse k daityo ka hi saamna kiya tha .....woh daitya bhi khadan ki aur badhe ......

Baune yaha bandiyo ko mukt karane k liye surang tak le hi jaa rahe the ......K tabhi unke saamne ...ek daitya khada ho gaya ....usne ek haath se aage khade baune ki gardan pakadkar uthadiya....uss bhayankar Daitya ko apne saamne ..dekhkar ..woh baune ekdum dar gaye ....Sardar ka bum ghutne laga .....tabhi ek khanjar aaya aur uss daitya ki garden k paar ho gaya ...

aur woh niche gir pada ....Bauno ne dekha waha Abhi tha ....

Abhi - jaldi se inn sabko yaha se nikalo .....Aur ussi jagah meri pratiksha karo ......

Abhi unn bauno se baat hi kar raha tha ....k tabhi bandiyo mein saamne khade yuvak ne ek or dekhte hue Abhi par chalang lagayi .....aur ek shool badi tezi ...se ..unke saamne jamin mein ghus gaya .......

ek baar toh Abhi samzha nha k iss yuvak ne ekdum se kyu chalang lagayi ......parantu ja b usse samaz aaya .....toh uusne shool ki disha mein dehka toh waha ek aur daitya tha .......Abhi ne uss yuvak ko sahara dekar khada kiya ......aur unko jaldi se nikalne ka ishara kiya ......
aur uss daitya par ....apne khanjer se vaar kiya .....jisase woh vahu dher ho gaya ......

yaha kaal ...sainiko k chithde uda raha tha ...unka khoon pi raha tha ......dil nikalkar chaba raha tha .......jo bhi uske haath mein aajata ...usko buri tarah chirkar ....chote chote chithdo mein badalkar wahi phenkdeta .....jaise koi chota baccha kafaz k tukde kake bikher dete ho ....

itni bhayanak tarike se sainiko ko marte hue dekhkar ...woh sainik idhar udhar chupne lage .......lekin kaal ki nazar se kaun bach sakta tha ...aaj varsho baad jaga tha woh uski rakt ki pipasa abhi shant nahi hui thi ....usse chahiye tha aur rakt ......

aur Abhi yaha Jungle ki taraf se aarahe daiyo ka saamna kar raha tha .....aur unhe apne khanjar se maut k ghat utaar raha tha ........

Yaha Darmen ...ne Egypt k registhan mein apna samrajya failaya hua tha ........usne waha k saare logo ko gulam banaya tha ......waha ki sunder sunder striyo ko ....nagn awastha mein ....apne mahal mein rakhta tha .......aur unse bhog karke apni vansh vridhi karta ....

uske sainik bhi kai stiro se jabarduti sambandh banakar apne nasal aage badhane mein lage hue tha ...

Waha usne apne aapko devta ghoshit kar diya tha .......Issi Mahal mein usne Neil ki madat se ek atyaaadhunik lab aur ek control room banaya tha .....iss lab mein woh Neil ki sahyata se Samya yaatra yanra ...yani Time machine ka nirman karne mein laga tha .....

Darmen ne bhi itne varsho mein apna parivaar banaya tha jiske baare mein baad mein pata chalega ......

Darmen iss samay ..Neil k saath ..uss samay apni lab mein tha ......

Darmen - aur kitna samay lagega isse tayar hone mein ......itne varsho mein bhi tum isse bana nahi paaye ....sach kahu toh Arsalan ka vigyan k gayn k aage tumahara gyan kuch bhi nahi hai .....

Neil - issbaar humara yeh prayog Safal hoga Maha mahim .....bas kuch din aur .....parantu iske banane k baad hime bahut adhik maatra mein urja ki aawashyakta hogi ....

Darmen - uski chinta tum mat karo .....apne prayog par dhyan do ....yadi iss baar bhi asafal rake ..toh apni toh tum jaante ho ....kya hoga .....( Neil ki taraf ghurta hua )

Neil ko saaf saaf Darmen ki aankhon mein apni mrityu dihkayi drne lagi ...aaj kitne dino baad usne apne pita Arsalan ka naam suna tha .......
Neil Arsalan k baare mein sochne laga ...k wakai uske pita k vigyan k aage uska vigyan kuch bhi nahi ....kaash aaj uske pita hote ...itna sochte hi uski aankhien laal ho gayi.....nahii.....Arslan mera shatru hai ....aur Darmen mera maalik......aur usne saamne khade hue Darmen ko pranam kiya ......

yahi tha Darmen ka jaadoo jiske vash mein ..Arsalan k bete the ...yadi kabhi bhule se unke maan mein apne pita k prati koi khayal bhi aata ....toh uska jaadoo phir sakriya ho jaata aur unke mann se woh bhav nikal jaata .....

Neil ko iss taràh pranam karte hue dekhkar Darmen kutilta se muskuraya ....

Lab k bahar khade prahari se kisdi ki bahas ho rahi thi ......woh tha control room ka sainik ....

C - jaldi karo mere sandesha Mahamahim tak pahunchao ....

L - nahi ...woh kissi vishesh karya mein lage hue hai .....unhone ...kissi ko bhi vighna daalne k lite mana kiya hai .........

C - yeh suchna bahut mahatva poorna hai ....yeh suchna ...Maharaj Arsalan k baare mein hai .....unhe shigra hi sanchalan kaksh mein aana cahiye ...

Lab k rakshak Arsalan ka naam sunkar ....chaunk gaya ...usse mamle ki gambhirta nazar aayi .....

L - thik hai jaao .....tum khud Mahamahim ko sandesh do .....

Control room ka sainik ...lab mein pravesh kar jaata hai ......aur Waha Darmen ko dekhkar ....

C- Mahamahim ki jai ho ......

Darmen apne aur bhi project k baare Neil se baatien kar raha tha ...iss tarah kissi ka bich mein aakar tokna uss accha nahi laga ....usne ..turant apni talwar use uss sainik ka sar dhad se utar diya .......aur khoon ka fawara phoota ....

Usse Lab k praharedar par krodh aaya k kaise koi yaha pravesh kar gaya ....Darmen chillakar usse pukarta hai ....

Darmen ki aawaj sunkar woh bhi kannpta hua ....uske saamne pahunchta tha .....jab usse sar kata woh sainik dikhta hai ...toh uska gala sukhne lagta hai ...ab usse apni bhiaut nazar aane lagti hai .....

Darmen - tumhe kissliye lab k pahre par bithaya hai ...yeh kaise andar aagaya .....lagta ab tum bhi isse dand k yogya ho .....

L - kshama kare ....Mahamahim ...kshama kare ....woh muzhse bhul ho gayi ....woh isne Arsalan ka naam liya tha toh maine bhej diya ...ab kabhi aisa nahi hoga ....

Arsalan ka naam sunte hi Darmen chank gaya ....kya kaha Arsalan .....poori baat batao .......kya kah raha tha ...yeh Arsalan k baare mein ....

L - usne bas Arsalan ka naam liya tha aur aapko shighra control room mein aane k liye kah raha tha ....

uski baaton se Darmen ko kuch aashanka hone lagi ......Aur woh ..turant lab ki or chal padta hai ..Aur piche piche Neil bhi ...

Yeh cintrol room Darmen ne apne har mahatvapooran sthan se connect kar rakha tha ....
wha pahunchkar ...

Darmen - kya hua kahi koi gadbadi....aur yeh Arsalan ...kya baat hai ....

Sainik - mahamahin kuch der pahele Nebhru k kshetra mein sthit Swarna khadan se kissi sanik ka sandesh tha ......humne usse record kita hai .......
hum apni screens ko waha se jodna chah rahe hai parntu kar nahi paa rahe .....

Darmen - uss sndesh ko sunta ..hai ...

sandesh - Yaha Maharja Arsalan ne humla kar diya hai ......humahe pran sankat mein hai ....sabkuch nasht ho raha hai ......Tabhi uss sainik ki cheekh sunayi deti hai aur woh sandesh band .....Woh kaal ki bhent chad gaya tha ...

Yaha kaal se darkar chpe hue saoniko ko dhund ..dhundkar maut de raha tha ....aise hi dundta hua ek chote se kaksh k andar se kuch aawaj aayi .....usne darwaja ukhadkar phenk diya ....andar ek sainik waha k chote se control room se sandesh de raha tha .....Tabhi kaal ne piche se uski garden pakadkar utha kiya ....aur usse kissi ganne k i tarah chil diya ......uski saari aantadiya bahar aagyi thi ....kshat vikshat uske shav ko phenkar .....usne uss control room ko tod diya .....

yaha Araslan dwara Swarn khadan par humle ka sunkar ....Darmen .... waha . ....ka drshiya dekhne k liye waha ki screen ko connect karne laga .....

yaha Yaha lagbhag saare sainik jo lagbhag 1000 ki sankya mein the ......aur karib 10 daitya jo jungle se khadan mein hone wale shor ko sunkar aaye the ...maare jaa chuke the ....bas kuch gine chune sainik ..Kaal ke bhay se chupe hue the .....

Bandiyo ko waha se nikala jaa chuka tha ....

Charo taraf sainiko k laash k tukde aur khoon bihkhra pada tha ......

Kaal aur Abhi poori tarah se unn sainiko k rakt se bhig gaye tha ....kaal toh jaise unke rakt se nahaya tha ......

Abhi ko dekhkar kaal Abhi k saamne ghutno k bal baith jaata hai .....Abhi bhi uske sar par haath pherta hua ....

Abhi - toh aakhir tum mukt ho hi gaye .....ab toh ..prasanna ho na ......milgayi tripti..

Kaal - kaal kabhi tript nahi hota mere maalik .....aaj mitne varsho baad mukt hokar bahut accha lag raha hai ......

Abhi - tumhe pahele bhi kaha hai hai hum dono ek hi hai ..muzhe maalik nahi ...mitra kaha karo....( Abhi kaal ko uthakar gale laga leta hai )

Tabhi Abhi k paas hi vifot hota hai ....Abhi ka dhyan uss or jaata hai toh Waha Nebhru Darmen k waha tainat sabse bhyankar aakhri Daitya k saath khada tha .....

Nebru ne waha lage camera ab tak Darmen k conrol room se connected hone se rok raka tha ....
parantu woh ab Arsalan ko Darmen k saamne laana chahta tha issiliye ab usne connect hone diya ....

aur yaha Darmen ki Lab k control room k screen par khadan ka woh drisya chal pada ...jismein ...Nebhru aur ..woh bhayankar daitya ...Abhi k saamne tha ....uss ..... drishya ...par nazar padte hi .....Darmen ko apni aankhon par vishwas nahi ho raha tha ....

saamne screen par usse Arsalan dikh raha tha waise hi vesh bhusha waisa hi haav bhav .....

Usse vishwas nahi ho raha tha k itne bade dhamke k se Arsalan kaise bach gaya ......yadi woh bach gaya tha toh itne varsho se kaha tha .....

parantu saamne jo dikh raha tha usse bhi eoh jhutla nahi sakta tha .......

Saamne Nebhru aur woh daitya ..Abhi k saamne khade the .....Aue Nebhru ne hi Abhi k paas vifot kiya tha jisse Darmen apne control room mein baitha dekh raha tha ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update raat ko ....
Kaal Abhi ke achet sharir se bahar aakar apne aadhe manav aadhe sher rupe me sainiko ko vibhatash tarike se marta hai v Abhi bhi apne khnjar se marta hai kai detyon ko hosh me aane per.
Idhar Dormen Neil ke sath samay yantar ke nirman ke baare me baatcheet kar raha hai v abki baar ashfal hone per mout ki chetawanti deta hai. Aur apne control rume Mishre me baithe hue ushe Arsalan ki jaankari milti hia khadan wale ilake se.
Idhar Abhi Kaal ko ajad hone ki badhai deta hai.
Bahut hi sunder shabdo ke yugamo se suniyojit ek aur anmol shrinkhla ish rachna ki laaye hai Kaal bhai.
 

Anky@123

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Super duper hit update bahi bahut gajab ,matlab abhi ko apni vastvikta ka gyan ho hi gaya ..ab kya dermin aur kya uska Malik ...magar lagta h abhi apne bache 9 bhaiyo ko marega nahi balki unki negative energy ko apni positive energy se heal karega. Mager abhi ki 3 shakitiyo ka kulasa abhi nahi kiya bhai ...kab tak aayengi baki ki 2 heroine samne ???
 
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