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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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abhi1008

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ab tak aapne dehka......A1 ka GK k ssath yudh.....aur usse harana....KUBER JI ki nagri Alkapuri.... mein pravesh ..
ab aage ........


Jaise hi mein aage bada toh dekha ek adbhut divya viman aakash se mere saamne utra.....aashram mein maine guru ji se pushpak viman k baare mein suna tha....yeh bhi waisa hi koi tha....
uss viman se kuch sainik utre aur meri taraf anne lage.....
maine socha ki ab yaha bhi yudh karna hoga......
tabhi ek sainik ne kaha .... yuvak Maharaj ne tumhe bulaya hai....
aayiye ..... aur hamare saath chaliye ..

meine socha chalo accha hi hua ab muzhe dhundna nahi padega...

mein unn sainiko k saath baith gaya aur chal pada aakash marg se mahel ki aur......
jab viman utra toh maine dekha ek bahut vishal mahal jo swarn ka bana hua tha..... jab mein waha gaya.....
toh dekha mahal k darwaje par kuch dasiya pushpo ki thaliya lekar khadi thi.....jaise hi mein dwar par pahuncha toh phoolon ki varsha mere upar..

aise swagat jeewan mein pahli baar hua tha......accha toh bahut laga lekin
vichar bhi aaya yeh sab muzhe itne shradhaa bhav se kyu dekh rahe hai...

khair dekte hai aage kya kuch naya hota hai.....

tabhi waha Rajsi bhesh mein ek yaksh aage aaya .....aayie shriman ...Maharaj aapki pratiksha mein hai...

maine socha Swyam Dhan k Swami Kuber ji aur meri pratiksha mein....

mein unke saath chal pada.....aur pahunch gaya ......ek sabha mein ...
jo bahut hi vishal thi.....ek unche se aur Bade Sinhghasan par kisi ko baithe dekha ....unke chere par ek alag hi prakah tha ....sir par heero se jadit swarn mukut...matthe par bana hua tripund......swarn aabhushan....
aur paas mein badi si gada...

mere saath jo yaksha aaya tha usne
Singhasan ki aur shradhha se pranam karte hue..
Pranam maharaj ...aapne jisse kaha tha usse hum le aaye prabhu..

meine bhi pranam kiya.....
Pranam Maharaj.....Aaj mein dhnya ho gaya ....jinn Dhan k Swami Kuber ji k baare mein aashram mein kathao mein suna tha ....aaj shakshat unke darshan paakar mein kritharth ho gaya...
Tabhi Kuber ji ne sabha mein bauthe hue sabko kuch ishara kiya aur pal bhar mein sab gayab......mein thoda chakit hua ....phir socha ki yeh mayavi nagri hai yaha kuch bhi ho sakta hai

tabhi Kuber ji khade hogaye ......
Kuber ji - Dhnya toh hum hue hai , jo aaj aap iss brahmad k rakshak shakshat yaha padhare hai

mein kai hazaar varsho se aapki hi pratiksha mein tha...

Mein apne charo aur dekhne laga ki Swyam Kuber ji kis k swagat k liye khade ho gaye hai ...lekin waha mere siwa aur koi nahi tha

Kuber ji - Aise kya dekh rahe ho...mein aapko hi kah raha hu...

mein - Parantu mein aur brahmand ka
rakshak.....kaise...mein toh ek sadharan balak hu ...jo apne guru ki aagya ka paalan karte hue yaha aaya hu

Kuber ji - muskurate hue...Abhi aap apne vastavik roop se aparichit hai
isiliye aisa kar rahe hai...

mein - muzhe kuch yaad nahi hai...

kya aap mera parichy jaante ho...

Kuber ji - Yadi ab tak aapko aapka parichaya prapt nahi hua toh issmein tridevo ki hi iccha hai.....aur unki iccha k virudh mein aapko aapke baare mein kuch nahi bata sakta...

ab aap iss baat ko chodiye aur aayie aasan grahan kijiye ......

mein bhi waha ek aasan par baith gaya......

Kuber ji -- muzhe pata hai aap yaha kya prapt karne aaye ho.......woh aapki hi amant hai.........pichli baar jab aap yaha aaye the toh aapne hi woh divya gada humare mahal mein sthit sarover mein rakhi thi ...woh waha surakshit hai

mein - thik hai ..kya aap muzhe waha ...pahuncha sakte ho.....

Kuber ji - Aaj aap yahi vishram kijiye
kal pratha hi hum swayam aapko waha le chalenge......

mein - jaisi aapki iccha.....

phir unhone apne sewako ko bulaya
aur mahal k ek vishesh kaksh mein mera ...rahene ka prabadh karawaye

Sewak - Yeh raha aapka kaskh.....yeh ek maya mahal hai .....yaha aapko jis bhi vastu ki aawashyakta hogi bas. uske baare mein soshte hi aapje saamne haazir hogi

mein - toh kya yadi mein gada k baare mein sochu toh woh bhi yaha pragat hi jaayegi

Sewak - muskurate hue.. nahi

ab mein uss kaksh ko dekne laga, phir mein waha k ek aasan par baith gaya .
aur socha ki dekhte hai yaha ki maya kaisi hai

toh maine socha kuch khane k liye mil jaaye ....tabhi waha ek mere hi umar ka yuvak falo ki thaal liye aagaya...

jo dikhne mein meri tarah hi tha bas ...
naak aur kaan ka farak tha....

tabhi muzhe Manda gaon k mukhiya ji ki baat yaad aagayi...

aur maine usski aankon mein ek ajeeb udasi dekhi......woh yaha yaksho se kuch alag lag raha tha .....toh mein saari baat samaz gaya...

mein - kya baat hai tum itne udaas kyu ho....bhai...tum ..toh yaksha nahi lagte..kaun ho tum..

meri - baat sunke usne udaas nazro se ek baar muzhe dekha ..aur jaane laga......ki maine usse phir pukara

mein - Vishu....ruko...
mere usko pukarne par woh phir ek baar muda.....ab uski aankon mein hairani k bhav the ....lekin woh ruka nahi ...

ab muzhe yaha kuch accha nahi lag raha tha ....toh socha apne naye bane mitr ko hi yaad kar lu....aur mann mein pukara.....tabhi mere saamne GK
pragat hua..

GK - aapne muzhe pukaara mitr kaho kya aagya hai

mein - aagya toh kuch nahi bas mera yaha mann nahi lag raha hai , toh socha tumhe yaad kar lu.

GK - mein abhi apne gharwalo ko aapke baare mein hi bata raha tha..
ki aapne yaad kar liya

mein- Chalo tumahare ghar chalte hai

GK - kya sach mein ...aap chalenge

Mein - haa kyu nahi ..yaha akele iss maya mahal mein muzhe accha nahi lag raha
Phir GK ne mera haath pakda aur palak zhapkte pahunch gaya usske ghar

muzhe achanak waha GK k saath dekhkar sabhi hadbada gaye ...
tab Gk ne apne ghar walo se mera parichay karaya.....uski patni, aur do bacche muzhe dekhkar bahut khush hue
Mein - tum toh kah rahe the k tum hazaroo saalo se se pariwar se nahi mile toh ye bacche...itna kah kar mein muskurane laga...

GK - kya mitr aap bhi....yaha yaksho ki aayu bahut hoti hai abhi toh mera yeh chotta beta 5 hazaar sasl ka hai jo prithvi k 5 varsh k baalak k barabar dikhta hai...

phir aise hi kuch baatein aur bhojan k saath woh raat bit gayi ...subah 4 baje mein wapas maya mahal pahunch gaya.....socha abhi apn lakshya ki aur thoda samay hai toh dhyan kiya jaaye aur baith gaya dhyan karne.....

aaj dhyan mein muzhe kuch naye rang ki urja apne bhiter mahsus hui....

uss urja par apna dhyan kendrit karke dekhe laga toh woh aur gahri ho gayi.
phir woh saari urja mere mastak ke piche VISHSHUDDHI chakra se upar ki aur kendrit ho gayi aur dikhne laga .
do dal wal kamal safed urja se paipurna.....aur dikhne lagi kuch aakriti.....tabhi mera dhyan tuta....aur saamne dekha toh KUBER JI khade the...
au jo meri taraf hi dekh rahe the...
usske baad mein Unke saath ek Sarover par pahuncha jaha bader hi sunder kamal khile hue the

Kuber ji - Yahi woh sarover hai jaha aapki amaanat rakhi hai,
isse aapko hi prapt karna hoga...

aur itna kahkar woh waha se chale gaye....
ab mein sarover ki bada aur jaise hi mein jal mein utra ...toh mere pair wahi ruk jagaye , chahkar bhi mein aage nahi bad paa raha tha....

tabhi waha uss jal mein hulchul hui aur jal ne bade se bhawar ka rup le liya.....aur pragat hua ek balshali divya purush, jo dikhne mein bada hi divya aur shaktishali dikh raha tha, aur aai awaaj..

aawaj - kaun ho tum ...jo yaha tak pahunch gaye......

mein - mera naam Abhi hai aur mein yaja ek gada lene aaya hu...

aawaj - hmmm aap yaha kuber ji k saath aaye ho......parantu aap woh gada tabhi prapt kar sakte ho jab aap mere teen prashna ka utter de doge..

yadi aap ek bhi jawab nahi de paaye toh aap issi sarower mein kaid ho jaaoge...
mein - muzhe sweekar hai pucho kya puchna chate ho

1 - Acche karmo k punyo ke nash ka mool kya hai

Mein - कामेन कर्म नाशं स्यात्। hamari bhogo ko bhogne ki vaasnaye hi , hamare karmo ka nash karti hai

2 - Gyan k naash ka mool kya hai

mein - क्रोधेन ज्ञान नाशनम्। jab bhi hume krodh aata hai toh hum sab bhul jaate hai , aur aisa anchit karya kar baithte hai, jisse aage hume hi pareshaniyo ka saamna karna padta hai, isiliye Krodh hi gyan ka naash karta hai

3 - Bhakti k naash ka mool kya hai

mein - लोभेन भक्ति नाशं स्यात्।
lobh hi bhakti k naash ka mool hai, Lobhi vyaki k liye niswarth bhakti ko koi mol nahi

atti uttam aapne sabhi prashno ka sahi utrar diy hai.....mein aapko pahele hi pahchan chuka tha prarntu
yeh mera kartya tha jo muzhe pura karna hi tha......

itna kahkar ussne ek badi chamki hui gada ka roop le liya aur mere haatho mein aagaya, uss gada ko apne haatho mein paakar muzhe apne andar apaar shakti ka anbhav hone laga.......phir woh gada prakash roop mein badal gayi aur mere bhiter sama gayi....

gada prapt karne par mein chal pada apne dusre udeshya ki aur

aur phir Pahunch gaya Kuber ji ki sabha mein...

Muzhe dekhkar Kuberji bade khush ho gaye

Kuber ji - aakir aapne apni gada ko prapt hi kar liya....ab aapka yaha ka karya pura ho gaya

mein - Abhi kuch karya adhura hai ...
muzhe aapse kuch aur bhi chahiye...

Kuber ji - Kaho Rakshak ...mera vachan hai aapko ..aap ko chahoge aapko woh prapt hoga...

mein - toh phir aap unn sab manushya ko mukt kar do ...jinhe aapne daas bana rakha hai...

Mere aisa kahne par sabha mein hulchul hone lagi

mein - Dekhiye aapne muzhe vachan diya hai...

Kuber ji - Parantu aap unka kya karoge ..unnka sharir toh khatam ho gaya hai

mein - woh sab mein dekh lunga..aap apne vachan ka paalan kare

kuber ji - thik hai parantu unhi ko hum mukt kar sakte hai , jinnka jeewan prithvi par abhi baaki hai....

aap jab hamari seema pa pahunchoge tab sab k sukshma sharir waha pahunch jaayenge..

mein - Thik hai aagya dijiye ab mein chalta hu...

Kuber ji - Jaane se pahle ek baar aap Hamare Alkapuri k Shivalaya mein jarur darshan kijiye..

mein - ji ..jarur
itna kahkar mein mahal k bahar aagaya aur Vichar kiya ki ..jab kuber ji
ne kaha hai toh jarur jana chahiye..

phir meine GK ko yaad kiya aur GK haazir....

Mein - mitr muzhe yaha k Shivalaya jaana hai kya tum muzhe le chalo ge

GK - kyu nahi mitr ...aur ussne mera haath pakda aur pahunch gaye sidha Shiv mandir k aage...

Bada hi sunder Shiv mandir tha adbhut kalakrti ....mandir ki sunderta aur shilpkala ko dekhte dekhte Bhagwan bholenath k Vishal shivling k saamne pahuncha ....woh shivling
swayam prakshit tha ussmein se divya prakash mikal raha tha...mein iss adbhut darshan se bhav vibhore ho gaya tha ...ki tabhi ek bahut hi suril aawaj mein RUDRASTAKAM ki stuti mere kaano mein padi ...

toh meine aawaj ki aur dhyan diya
toh dekha ki ek bahut hi sunder kanya
apni asnkhein band karke tanmayta se gaa rahi thi.....jaane kyu mein usski taraf kheecha chala jaa raha tha......

aur usske aage jaakar niharne laga

jab stuti samapt hui aur usne aapni asnkhien kholi toh muzhe apne saamne dekhkar hairan ho gayi

woh kuch bolna chahti thi lekin bol nahi paa rahi thi ...hum dono bas ek dusre ko dekhe jaa rahe the

mein - mann mein ....na jaane kyu iss dekhkar khicha chala jaa raha hu....
lagta hai jaise mein isse jaanta hu ...
aur mere mann mein yeh kaisi hulchul si mach rahi hai

ladki - mann mein ---- kya mein jo dekh rahi hu woh swapna hai ya satya hai....kitna sunder hai.....kya karu mein ...kaise baat karu....hey Mahadev ...jissko roj mein sapno mein dekti hu ..wahi mere saamne

tabhi GK ki aawaj se hum dono ka dhyan tuta

GK - Arre bete SHIVALI yeh mere swami mere mitra .. Abhi hai

aur mitr Yeh SHIVALI hai jissi mein aaj subah apne pariwar k saath yaha aaya tha tab mila tha
mitr inko yaha badi shradha se dekha jaata hai ...
innka yaha k pujari k yaha hua tha...aur innki aayu yaha k samay ansar nahi balki pritvi k samaay k ansar bad rahi hai..

janm se hi inhe mayavi shakti prapt hui hai...

SHIVALI - Kaka shri kya mein innse ekaanth mein mil sakta hu....

GK ne meri aur dekha ...toh meine bhi ishara kiya jisse woh waha se thodi dur chala gaya..

Mein - haa ji kahiye...

SHIVALI - yaha nahi ...kya aap thodha bahar chaliye....hum mandir k bahar aagaye...

SHIVALI - Aap kya sach mein manushyalok se aaye hai ....

mein -haa

SHIVALI - sharmate hue ...phir baba ne satya kaha tha..

mein - kya kaha tha baba ne...

Ussne apni tirchi nazroo se muzhe dekha...na haane kya tha unn aakon mein aisa toh muzhe Sirf Shalu ki aankon mein dekhkar hota tha...

Shivali - baba se hi puch lo....

tabhi waha pujari ji ko aate dekha ...jab unhone muzhe dekha toh bade khush ho gaye

Pujari - aagye aap ....aapki mein kab se pratiksha kar raha tha.......

mein - meri pratiksha ...kyu

pujari - Shivali ki aur dekhte hue....aapki amaant jo mere paas hai

unki baat sunne k baad Shivali sharmane kagi

kuch kuch meri samaz mein aaraha tha.....aur Shivali ki aankhon mein bhi aapne liye prem dekh liya tha ..
lekin abhi muzhe bahut karya karne the

mein - Pujari ji mein aapki baato ko samaz raha hu ...aur Shivali ki aur dekhkar.... muzhe bhi uss pal ki pratiksha rahegi ...parantu abi muzhe bahut karya karne baaki hai......
aur muzhe jaana hoga.....

meri baat sunkar Shivali ki aanko mein aansoo aagaye...

mein - Shivali se - dekho tumhe dekhkar na jaane muzhe bhi kyu aakarshan hua....aur tumhe chodkar jaane ki baat se mere mann mein bhi dukh ka aubhav ho raha hai

parantu abhi mere kartavya muzhe bula raha hai toh muzhe jaana hoga

lekin mera vachan hai ki mein tumhe lene jarur aaunga....

itna kahkar meine waha se vida li aur GK k ssath pahunch gaya Bhuvalok ki seema oar waha maine dekha lagbhag 12 shukshma sharir jinhe Kuber ji ne mukt kiya tha meri hi peatiksha mein the.

seema se bahar jaate hi meri anguthi se panch rang ki urja nikli aur mera sthool sharir muxhe wapas mil gaya

ab prashna tha ki kaise unn 12 logo ko unke sharir diye jaaye

tabhi mahaguru ki aawaj aayi putra dhyan mein baitho aur apni urja ko aagya chara mein ektrit karo jaise aaj subah kiya tha ...mein samaj gaya aur dhyan karne baith gaya
jab meine apne chakro ka dhyan karte hue Aagya chakra mein pahuncha toh waha se paanch tatva aur jeewan shati ki urja nikalkar sidhe un 12 sukshma sharir par padi aur dekhte hi dekhte unka sthool shari unhe wapas mil gaya

sabhi bahut khush the....mera aabhar vyakt kar rahe the....unhe mein muzhe
vishu bhi mila ....usse dekhkar muzhe badi khushi hui....ki ek maa ko diya hua vachan mein pura kar paaya..

sab ko mvida kiya ........
ab apne agle safar ki chalne ki tayarri
......
abhi k liye itna hi...
agla update jald hi....
 

abhi1008

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Awesome fabulous update
Swagat ki tayari bhi hogai h
Keep posting
Thank you soo much for your support bhai...

aise hi apna saath banaye rahke

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abhi1008

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Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
Shaandar update bhai
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
fantastic update brother
Thanks to all my lovely friends for being connected and comments.....
keep reading ,& stay connected
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