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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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abhi1008

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abhi tak aapne dekha ....
A1 apni yaatra mein Manda gaon pahuncha......Mukhiya ji se anguthi prapt karna......
aur Parvat par pahuchna....
waha kuch adrishya shaktiyo ka saamna ....ab aage.....


niche girte hi mein phir aage jane laga .fir kisine muzhe uthakar fenka aur wahi ...bhari si aawaj...
ab muzhe krodh aanelaga tha

phir bhi apne mann ko shant karte hue

mein - kaun hai yaha jo mera raasta rokne ka prayatna kar raha hai..
dekho meri tum se koi shatruta nahi hai .....muzhe jaane do.....

phir aage bada toh fir se wahi...hua

mein - kaun hai saamne kyu nahi aata
bas ab bahut hua.......kahte hai na laato k bhut baaton se nahi mante....

aawaj - ha..ha...ha...bache tu karega humara mukabla......shatruta toh tune kar li hai ..hamari baat na maakar

ab tum khud apni maut ke jimmedar hoge.....ha...ha...ha.....

phir maine Jal aur prithvi tatva ki urja
milakar ek gola tayar kiya aur apne antahakaran (sub concious mind)
ko aur apni ghyanendriyo
(sharir k woh ang jisse hum mehsus karte hai...aankh, naak ..kaan..juban
aur tvacha ) jagrit kiya aur aage kadam badaya ....jaise hi mein aage bada muzhe apni daayi aur se kuch urja ka aabaas hua aur meine do tatvo se bana urja ka gola uski disha mein choda ...phir gunji ek dard naak cheekh....aur jab meine dekha toh saame ek 20 ft uncha daitya niche gira hau karah raha tha......

bada bhayankar tha dikhne mein poora sharir kaala aur badi badi laal aankhien.....

mein -- dekha muzhse ulazne ka parinam ....kahi cjot toh nahi aayi
bacche ...alle ..alle...le

Aawaj - ha ..ha..ha bache achaa andaj hai ...jo niche gira hai woh mein nahi

wasie dum hai tumme ...hazaaro varsho se koi mukable ka mila nahi
ab aayega maza.....

tabhi woh daytya phir khada hua aur apne bade se mudgar jaise lakdi se uthakar prahaar karne aaya jaise hi woh muzhe maarta , mein apni jagah se hat gaya....aur woh phir mitti mein

tabhi mera mann mein iss khel ko khattam kane ka vichar aaya....
aur maine paanch tatvo ki urja ko milakar ek talwar pragat ki aur uska mukh uss daytya par kiya jisse paanch rang ki kirne nikli aur usska sharir paanch tatvo mein vibhajit ho gaya..aur khel khatam.....tabhi kisi ne mere haath par jor se prahaar kiya jisse muzhe bahut dard hua...aur talwar mere haato se dur gir gayi...

mein talwar ko wapas uthata ki tabi ek aur prahaar mujh par hua...

aawaj -- ha ha ....ha abhi toh ek hi khatam hua hai bacche ..kitno ko maaroge ...ek khatam hua tooh do aayenge ab rok ka dihka ...

mein phir se do tatvo ki urja ka gola banane laga ki phir muzhe kisi ne uthakar pheka...ab mere mann mein aaya ki aise toh kuch nahi hoga

iss aawaj wale ko hi dekhna hoga..
phir maine apne chaaro taraf ek bawander banaya aur apne chakro ko jagrit karne mein lag gaya...

aawaj - accha toh bawander mein chup raha hai ....tabhi awaaj ki disha se kuch neeli kirne nikli aur bawander wahi gayab tab tak mein apne 7 chakrao ko jaagrit ka chuka tha....
kyu ki abhi Tak ki shiksha mein inhi 5 ko jaagrit kar paaya tha jo 5 tatvao ki urja ka kendra hai
1 ...MOOLADHAR ...prithvi tatva

2 ... Swadhisthan...... Jal tatva

3..... Manipurak......Agni tatva

4..... Anahat...... Vayu tatva

5.... Vishuddhi.... Aakash tatva

jab uss neeli kirno se mera banaya hua bawander khatam hua ..tab tak mein inn chakro ko jaagrit ka chuka tha aur in 5 tatvo ki urja ko ek karke ek bandhan banaya aur chod diya uss taraf jaha se kirne aayi thi .....
tabhi gunji ek cheekh ....naahiiiii

aur saamne mere urja k bandhan mein tadpta hua ek mahadaytya jo kareeb 20 ft bada aur swarn k aabhushan pehne hue tha ...

mein... ab kya kahte ho ...bahut chup chupkar apni maya dikha rahe the ab kya hua...

Mahadaitya - muuuuzhhe ...kshaama karrr do ..maine tuumhari shakti ko ..ahhh ..nahi ..pehchana...chod...do...muzhe..ab ..mein...tumahara sewak hu...muzhe
chod do..

Mein - nahi muzhe kisi sewak ki jarurat nahi..... na jaane kitne hi maasum logo ko tumne maara hoga..
ab tumhe milegi ..toh..sirf ...mrityu

jaise hi maine uska khel samapt karne k liye ...aage bada ..tabhi meri anguthi jor se chamakne lagi.... aur aayi Mahaguru ki aawaj

Mahaguru - nahi putra isse chod do ..yeh toh apna dayyitva pura kar raha tha ...aur yeh koi daytya nahi hai putra yeh ek ek Yakshya hai...

tab muzhe Mahaguru ki doordarshta ka anubhav hua...ki unhe inn sab ghatnaao ka purvagyan tha ...aur aise hi kisi paristhiti k liye unhone yeh Anguthi mere liye chodi thi...

Mahaguru ki baat sunkar maine uss yaksha ko mukt kiya...

tab usne apna bhyankar roop ko tyag kar sunder roop dharan kar liya....

Yakshya -- aapka muzhe mukt karne k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad ab mein aapka sewak hu......mere liye liye kya aagya hai.......itna kahkar woh apne ghutne par haath jodkar baith gaya...

meine usse uhtaya ....nahi mitra...
tum mere sevak nahi mere mitr ki tarah hi raho toh accha.. hai

Yaksha - aap bahut aache ho ...maine aapko marne ka praytna kiya aur aapne muzhe mitr banaya....

mein - accha ab toh muzhe baatao yaha asia kya hai ...jo yaha par aata hai woh wapas jaa nahi paata.
aur tumahara naam kya hai...

Yaksha - mera naam GUNAAK hai aur Yaha Neelkanth parvat k upar se Bhuvalok ki shuruvat hoti hai , jo ek Shukshma lok hai.. jaha Sthool sharir k saath nahi jaaya jaasakta....waha Yaksho ka raaj hai.....aur Yahi se Dhan k swami KUBER JI ki nagri, ALKAAPURI ki shuruwat hoti hai....
yaha manavo ka aana mana hai ...mein iss marg ka rakshak hu...

mein - toh tum yaha aanewalo ka kya karte ho

GUNAK(GK) - humara bhojan tamsik hota hai isiliye hum yaha aanewale manavo k sharir se unka Shukshma sharir ko alag karke unke sharir ka bhojan karte hai ...aur unke sukshma sharir ko apne rajya le jaakar daas banate hai...

mein - hmmm .... Shayad niyati ne muzhe isiliye bheja hai....ek baat aur batao.....Mein yaha Bhim ji ki gada ko dhundte hue aaya hu...kya tum bata sakte ho woh kaha hai

GK - jee aap jiss gada ko dhund rahe ho woh ALKAPURI mein hi Kuber ji ke mahal mein hai....lekin aap waha jaa nahi sakte ...aur mein bhi iss vishya mein aapki koi sahayta nahi kar sakta

mein - uss ki tum chinta mat karo bas tum muzhe waha tak le jaao....

(yaha mein aapko bata du jab Mahaguru ne Abhi ke do roop banaye the ..toh A1 ka nirman Abhi k sukshma shari ki urja se hua tha)

mein ab GK ke saath uss parvat shikhar par pahuch gaya...

GK - Yaha se shuru hoti hai BHUVLOK
aur ALKA PURI ki seema....

mein - lekin muzhe toh yaha par kuch nahi dikh raha hai..

GK - maine pahle hi kaha tha ki in stool aankhon se iss lok ko dekha nahi jaa sakta...

mein abhi vichar kar hi raha tha ki phir meri anguthi chamakne lagi.....
aur usse ek prakash nikalne laga..usne muzhe poora gher liya ab muzhe aisa lagne laga ki mere sharir k saare sthool ang usme samate jaa rahe hai ....aur muzhe asahniya pida ka anubhav hone laga...thodi hi der mein mein sthool sharir k saath hi saara dard bhi lagta hai uss anguthi ne sokh liya tha ....ab muzhe bikul halka lag raha tha jaise ki mera koi vajan hi na ho.....

tab maine apne saamne dekha toh ek bahut sunder divya nagar dikhayi diya



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aur phir mein GK k saath uss nagar mein prevesh kar gaya.....jaise jaise mein aage jaane laga uss nagar ki sunderta ko dekhkar chakit ho gaya ..
sara nagar swarn aur herre motiyon se bana hua tha .....kyu na ho kyuki yeh Dhan k Swami KUBER ji ki raajdhani jo tahri.......
GK - mitr mein sadiyon se apne pariwar ko nahi mila hu kya unse mil sakta hu..... aap bhi chalo hamare ghar .....muzhe badi khushi hogi aapki sewa ka mauka paakar.
mein - nahi mitra abhi muzhe bahut kaam karne hai ...abhi tum jaao

GK - Thik hai mitra ...parantu jab tumhe meri aawashyakta ho tab bas ek baar mann mein mera naam lelena
mein ussi samay aajaunga.....aur ek baat...
jis vastu ki aap khoj kar rahe ho woh mahal mein hai.....jo yaha se uttar disha mein sthit hai.....

Aur jaha tak muzhe lagta hai KUBER ji bhi aapse milna chah rahe hai...

mein - tum aise kaise kah sakte ho

GK - kyuki iss nagar mein unki iccha k bina koi pravesh nahi kar sakta aur aap yaha tak pahuch gaye ...issi se aise lagta hai

itna kahkar GK waha se chala gaya
aur mein bhi aage bada thodi hi dur jaakar maine dekha ...ek divya viman
mere saamne utra aur usmein se utre kuch sainik......

aaj k liye itna hi .....
agla update kal......
 
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abhi1008

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waise gaon walo ka bhi koi dosh nahi..... kapde hi aise pehne hai usne...
I think a1 vishu ko dhund lega....
Ab yeh koun aa gaya..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update... Great going :applause: :applause:
Thank you soo much naina ji for your beautiful comment & review???????
aise hi apna saath banaye rakhe :thankyou: :yes1: :thankyou:

new update - 21 posted...
 

abhi1008

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Bahut badiya update
Awesome update
Waiting next
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
Zaberdust update bhai
Awesome update
fantastic update
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
aap sabhi mitro ka bahut bahut dhnyawad?????

aapka saath hi muzhe aur likhne ki prerna deta hai ...

aise hi apna saath banaye rakhe

new update - 21 posted...
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Vickey1211

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abhi tak aapne dekha ....
A1 apni yaatra mein Manda gaon pahuncha......Mukhiya ji se anguthi prapt karna......
aur Parvat par pahuchna....
waha kuch adrishya shaktiyo ka saamna ....ab aage.....


niche girte hi mein phir aage jane laga .fir kisine muzhe uthakar fenka aur wahi ...bhari si aawaj...
ab muzhe krodh aanelaga tha

phir bhi apne mann ko shant karte hue

mein - kaun hai yaha jo mera raasta rokne ka prayatna kar raha hai..
dekho meri tum se koi shatruta nahi hai .....muzhe jaane do.....

phir aage bada toh fir se wahi...hua

mein - kaun hai saamne kyu nahi aata
bas ab bahut hua.......kahte hai na laato k bhut baaton se nahi mante....

aawaj - ha..ha...ha...bache tu karega humara mukabla......shatruta toh tune kar li hai ..hamari baat na maakar

ab tum khud apni maut ke jimmedar hoge.....ha...ha...ha.....

phir maine Jal aur prithvi tatva ki urja
milakar ek gola tayar kiya aur apne antahakaran (sub concious mind)
ko aur apni ghyanendriyo
(sharir k woh ang jisse hum mehsus karte hai...aankh, naak ..kaan..juban
aur tvacha ) jagrit kiya aur aage kadam badaya ....jaise hi mein aage bada muzhe apni daayi aur se kuch urja ka aabaas hua aur meine do tatvo se bana urja ka gola uski disha mein choda ...phir gunji ek dard naak cheekh....aur jab meine dekha toh saame ek 20 ft uncha daitya niche gira hau karah raha tha......

bada bhayankar tha dikhne mein poora sharir kaala aur badi badi laal aankhien.....

mein -- dekha muzhse ulazne ka parinam ....kahi cjot toh nahi aayi
bacche ...alle ..alle...le

Aawaj - ha ..ha..ha bache achaa andaj hai ...jo niche gira hai woh mein nahi

wasie dum hai tumme ...hazaaro varsho se koi mukable ka mila nahi
ab aayega maza.....

tabhi woh daytya phir khada hua aur apne bade se mudgar jaise lakdi se uthakar prahaar karne aaya jaise hi woh muzhe maarta , mein apni jagah se hat gaya....aur woh phir mitti mein

tabhi mera mann mein iss khel ko khattam kane ka vichar aaya....
aur maine paanch tatvo ki urja ko milakar ek talwar pragat ki aur uska mukh uss daytya par kiya jisse paanch rang ki kirne nikli aur usska sharir paanch tatvo mein vibhajit ho gaya..aur khel khatam.....tabhi kisi ne mere haath par jor se prahaar kiya jisse muzhe bahut dard hua...aur talwar mere haato se dur gir gayi...

mein talwar ko wapas uthata ki tabi ek aur prahaar mujh par hua...

aawaj -- ha ha ....ha abhi toh ek hi khatam hua hai bacche ..kitno ko maaroge ...ek khatam hua tooh do aayenge ab rok ka dihka ...

mein phir se do tatvo ki urja ka gola banane laga ki phir muzhe kisi ne uthakar pheka...ab mere mann mein aaya ki aise toh kuch nahi hoga

iss aawaj wale ko hi dekhna hoga..
phir maine apne chaaro taraf ek bawander banaya aur apne chakro ko jagrit karne mein lag gaya...

aawaj - accha toh bawander mein chup raha hai ....tabhi awaaj ki disha se kuch neeli kirne nikli aur bawander wahi gayab tab tak mein apne 7 chakrao ko jaagrit ka chuka tha....
kyu ki abhi Tak ki shiksha mein inhi 5 ko jaagrit kar paaya tha jo 5 tatvao ki urja ka kendra hai
1 ...MOOLADHAR ...prithvi tatva

2 ... Swadhisthan...... Jal tatva

3..... Manipurak......Agni tatva

4..... Anahat...... Vayu tatva

5.... Vishuddhi.... Aakash tatva

jab uss neeli kirno se mera banaya hua bawander khatam hua ..tab tak mein inn chakro ko jaagrit ka chuka tha aur in 5 tatvo ki urja ko ek karke ek bandhan banaya aur chod diya uss taraf jaha se kirne aayi thi .....
tabhi gunji ek cheekh ....naahiiiii

aur saamne mere urja k bandhan mein tadpta hua ek mahadaytya jo kareeb 20 ft bada aur swarn k aabhushan pehne hue tha ...

mein... ab kya kahte ho ...bahut chup chupkar apni maya dikha rahe the ab kya hua...

Mahadaitya - muuuuzhhe ...kshaama karrr do ..maine tuumhari shakti ko ..ahhh ..nahi ..pehchana...chod...do...muzhe..ab ..mein...tumahara sewak hu...muzhe
chod do..

Mein - nahi muzhe kisi sewak ki jarurat nahi..... na jaane kitne hi maasum logo ko tumne maara hoga..
ab tumhe milegi ..toh..sirf ...mrityu

jaise hi maine uska khel samapt karne k liye ...aage bada ..tabhi meri anguthi jor se chamakne lagi.... aur aayi Mahaguru ki aawaj

Mahaguru - nahi putra isse chod do ..yeh toh apna dayyitva pura kar raha tha ...aur yeh koi daytya nahi hai putra yeh ek ek Yakshya hai...

tab muzhe Mahaguru ki doordarshta ka anubhav hua...ki unhe inn sab ghatnaao ka purvagyan tha ...aur aise hi kisi paristhiti k liye unhone yeh Anguthi mere liye chodi thi...

Mahaguru ki baat sunkar maine uss yaksha ko mukt kiya...

tab usne apna bhyankar roop ko tyag kar sunder roop dharan kar liya....

Yakshya -- aapka muzhe mukt karne k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad ab mein aapka sewak hu......mere liye liye kya aagya hai.......itna kahkar woh apne ghutne par haath jodkar baith gaya...

meine usse uhtaya ....nahi mitra...
tum mere sevak nahi mere mitr ki tarah hi raho toh accha.. hai

Yaksha - aap bahut aache ho ...maine aapko marne ka praytna kiya aur aapne muzhe mitr banaya....

mein - accha ab toh muzhe baatao yaha asia kya hai ...jo yaha par aata hai woh wapas jaa nahi paata.
aur tumahara naam kya hai...

Yaksha - mera naam GUNAAK hai aur Yaha Neelkanth parvat k upar se Bhuvalok ki shuruvat hoti hai , jo ek Shukshma lok hai.. jaha Sthool sharir k saath nahi jaaya jaasakta....waha Yaksho ka raaj hai.....aur Yahi se Dhan k swami KUBER JI ki nagri, ALKAAPURI ki shuruwat hoti hai....
yaha manavo ka aana mana hai ...mein iss marg ka rakshak hu...

mein - toh tum yaha aanewalo ka kya karte ho

GUNAK(GK) - humara bhojan tamsik hota hai isiliye hum yaha aanewale manavo k sharir se unka Shukshma sharir ko alag karke unke sharir ka bhojan karte hai ...aur unke sukshma sharir ko apne rajya le jaakar daas banate hai...

mein - hmmm .... Shayad niyati ne muzhe isiliye bheja hai....ek baat aur batao.....Mein yaha Bhim ji ki gada ko dhundte hue aaya hu...kya tum bata sakte ho woh kaha hai

GK - jee aap jiss gada ko dhund rahe ho woh ALKAPURI mein hi Kuber ji ke mahal mein hai....lekin aap waha jaa nahi sakte ...aur mein bhi iss vishya mein aapki koi sahayta nahi kar sakta

mein - uss ki tum chinta mat karo bas tum muzhe waha tak le jaao....

(yaha mein aapko bata du jab Mahaguru ne Abhi ke do roop banaye the ..toh A1 ka nirman Abhi k sukshma shari ki urja se hua tha)

mein ab GK ke saath uss parvat shikhar par pahuch gaya...

GK - Yaha se shuru hoti hai BHUVLOK
aur ALKA PURI ki seema....

mein - lekin muzhe toh yaha par kuch nahi dikh raha hai..

GK - maine pahle hi kaha tha ki in stool aankhon se iss lok ko dekha nahi jaa sakta...

mein abhi vichar kar hi raha tha ki phir meri anguthi chamakne lagi.....
aur usse ek prakash nikalne laga..usne muzhe poora gher liya ab muzhe aisa lagne laga ki mere sharir k saare sthool ang usme samate jaa rahe hai ....aur muzhe asahniya pida ka anubhav hone laga...thodi hi der mein mein sthool sharir k saath hi saara dard bhi lagta hai uss anguthi ne sokh liya tha ....ab muzhe bikul halka lag raha tha jaise ki mera koi vajan hi na ho.....

tab maine apne saamne dekha toh ek bahut sunder divya nagar dikhayi diya



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aur phir mein GK k saath uss nagar mein prevesh kar gaya.....jaise jaise mein aage jaane laga uss nagar ki sunderta ko dekhkar chakit ho gaya ..
sara nagar swarn aur herre motiyon se bana hua tha .....kyu na ho kyuki yeh Dhan k Swami KUBER ji ki raajdhani jo tahri.......
GK - mitr mein sadiyon se apne pariwar ko nahi mila hu kya unse mil sakta hu..... aap bhi chalo hamare ghar .....muzhe badi khushi hogi aapki sewa ka mauka paakar.
mein - nahi mitra abhi muzhe bahut kaam karne hai ...abhi tum jaao

GK - Thik hai mitra ...parantu jab tumhe meri aawashyakta ho tab bas ek baar mann mein mera naam lelena
mein ussi samay aajaunga.....aur ek baat...
jis vastu ki aap khoj kar rahe ho woh mahal mein hai.....jo yaha se uttar disha mein sthit hai.....

Aur jaha tak muzhe lagta hai KUBER ji bhi aapse milna chah rahe hai...

mein - tum aise kaise kah sakte ho

GK - kyuki iss nagar mein unki iccha k bina koi pravesh nahi kar sakta aur aap yaha tak pahuch gaye ...issi se aise lagta hai

itna kahkar GK waha se chala gaya
aur mein bhi aage bada thodi hi dur jaakar maine dekha ...ek divya viman
mere saamne utra aur usmein se utre kuch sainik......

aaj k liye itna hi .....
agla update kal......
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
 

abhi1008

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Super fantastic update brother
Mast story hai bhai maza aa rha hai
Waiting for new update
Thank you soo much Shurya bhai saath bane rahne k liye.

bas aapka yehi saath muzhe aur likhne ki prerna deta rahega....
newupdate - 21 posted..
 

Shurya dev

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Good fantastic adventure update brother
Nice one story in this site well-done brother
Keep writing keep posting
Waiting for your new post brother
 
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