Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 52

abhi tak aapne dekha Abhi ne MLA k secret adde ko tabah kar diya......aur waha se baccho ko chudaya.....

ab aage......

Abhi ne MLA k dwara bandi banaye baccho ko unke ghar wapas bhejne ka socha......kuch ko toh kidnap karke laaya gaya tha......aur kuch ko unke apno ne garibi se tang aakar bech diya tha.....aage chalkar aise bacche
samaj ki thokro se tang aakar galt raasta apna lete hai.....

Sirf apradhiyo k naash se samaj mein sudhar nahi aayega.......apradh ki pravriti jo paida karne wale kaaran ko jaankar hi samaj mein sudhar ..laaya jaa sakta hai...

Abhi ne Apne dad ko bolkar......
aise bachho k liye ek sanstha kholi...
jaha unke rahene se lekar padhai tak
ki saari suvidhaye thi......

Ab dekhte hai yaha Patal lok mein kya ho raha hai.......

Yaha patal lok mein Kalasur k tap k 18 varsh poore ho gaye the.......

Usske tap sthan par achanak bhayankar aawaaje aane lagi....aur pragat hui.....Asuro ki kul devi.....
Devi Nikumbala.......

Devi - Utho putra ....mein tumahare iss tap se bahut prasanna hu.....
Var maango putra.....

Kalasur (KS) - Maa ....aaj mein bahut khush hu ki muzhe aapke darshan ho gaye........Aapse sirf asuro k uthan k liye .......var prapt karna hai maa..

Shristi k aadikaal se hi hum asuro k saath humesha se bhed bhav hota aaraha hai.........hume dabaya jaa raha hai........Jabki hum Bal...vidya ..aur
tej mein devtao se kuch kam nahi hai

mein yahi chahta hu maa ki ab 14 loko mein hum asuro ka raj ho.....hume hamara adhikar mile......aur isske liye muzhe vo shaki chahiye jo Hamesha hamare kaam mein badha utpanna karnewale Tridev ki Uss putra ...

Jisse Brahamad ka Rakshak kaha jaata hai....Abhi......uska nash kar sake....

Devi - Putra...Jisski tum baat kar rahe ho woh iss bar parashakti ki urja aur shaktiyo k saath utpanna hua hai...

Usse tumhe 14 loko mein jo usski shaktiya hai usse prapt karne se rokna hoga.....aur saath hi saath un loko mein se har mahine ki amvasya ko.....ek kuwari kanya ki bali deni hogi

aur aakhri bali woh hogi jisse tum sansar mein sab se jyada prem karte ho.....

iss trarh jab 14 baliya puri ho jaayegi toh tumhe woh mahashakti prapt hogi
jisse saare 14 lok tumahare adhikar mein aajayege aur Rakshak ki saari shaktiya tumhe prapt ho jaayegi...

aur ho jaayega usska anth....

Aur itna kahkar Devi antardhyan ho gayi......

Ab KS ne Devi ko pranam kiya ....aur chal pada apne mahal......

Apne mahal tak pahuncte pahunchte ussne dekha .....saare asur bas bhog vilas ....aur nashe mein mast ho rahe hai.........asuro ko aise karmhin aur apne udesya se vimuk dekhkar usska Krodh....badne laga.....

jab woh apni sabha mein pahuncha

toh dekha Durmukhasur.....nasshe mein dhut....singhasan par baitha hua hai.....aur asur sundariya.....usski godh mein nagn baithi hui hai....

usse iss baat ka dhyan hi nahi tha k KS waha aagaya hai....

KS - (krodh se) Durmukhasur......

apne pita ki aawaj sunkar woh hadbada kar utha.....lekin nashe ki adhikta k karan niche gir pada....

KS - Kya isiliye mein tumahare bharose tap karne gaya tha.......
meine socha tha tum mere yogya putra ho ...jo .....mere udesya ko pooran karne k liye.....apni poori shakti laga dega.....Lekin tum toh raag rang mein itne magan ho ki Asuro k uttahan k mere maha udesya ko bhi bhul gaya........

aise purta k hone se kya laabh tumahara marna hi uchit hai....

Aur KS ne usse maarne k liye apni talwar pragat hi ki thi ki....

Durmukhasur daud kar usske pairo mein pad gaya....

DSR- kshama kare pitashri.....
kshama kare........maine pura prayatna kiya tha .....aapke udeshya ko pura karne ka......aur Mayasur ko dharti par bhej diya tha......hum bahut had tak safal bhi ho rahe the......

lekin wahi hamara param shatru bich mein aagaya......usske saath yudh mein Mayasur aise ghayal hua ki ab tak achet awastha mein hai.....

Phir DSR ne KS ko saari baatein vistar se batayi.........usske baad humne dharti par bahut baar asuro ko bhejne ka prayatna kiya.......lekin Rakshak k banaye hua kawach k kaaran hum safal nahi hue ......aur iss vajah se humara utsaha bhi jaata raha.....

parantu ab aagye ho.....pitshri ab naye urja k saath hum apne lakshya ki aur agrasar honge......

KS saari baat samaz chuka tha.....
phir woh MS k mahal pahuncha aur apni shaktiyo se usse thik kar diya....

Mayasur ne Asur samrat ko apne saamne dekhkar Pranam kiya.....

KS - Mayasur .....( apne tapobal ki shakti se abhimantrit bhasam usse dete hue) yeh lo aur Aur humare shatru dwara band kiye dwar par dal do.....isse woh kawach hat jaayega aur.....hamare asur phir se dharti aur upar k saato lok jaa sakenge.....

MS bhi chala gaya.....aur Rakshak dwara Tallok se prithvi lok jaane wala marg asuro k liye khol diya tha.....

KS ne iss baat ki bhi hidayat di thi k jab tak woh apne udeshya ko poora na kar le ...tab tak gupt rahe.....jisse Rakshak ko iss baare mein pata na chale.....

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 53

ab tak aapne dekha.....
Kalasur ki tapasaya poori hui
aur assuri mata ne Rakshak ko samapt karne ka tarika bataya

ab agee.....

Mayasur ne Abhi k dwara band kiya hua assuro ka raasta KS ki di hui babhuti se khol diya tha......

Aur woh wapas pritvi lok aagaya....

ab chalte hai patal lok se upar RASATAL LOK.....Yaha naaglok hai
rasatal mein iss samay ...........
Nagraj Prasana ka raaj tha....
jinki Patni Naagmata ULUPI thi....jo Maa parvati ki param bhakt thi..
aur inki ek sunder kanya thi
naag rajkumari SULEKHA

Sulekha apne kaksh mein koi chitra bana rahi thi......aur jab chitra ban gaya...toh...

Sulekha - uff aaj phir wahi chitra ban gaya .....kuan ho tum ....mein chitra kuch aur banana chahti hu...aur jab ban jaata hai....toh tum saamne aajaate ho.......

Tabhi Uski sakhi...Vinaya.....
kya baat hai sakhi aise...akele kisse baat kar rahi thi......

tabhi Sulekha apne banaye chitra k aage khadi ho gayi.....

Vinaya - arre kya hua...dekhne toh do
....phir chitra dekhkar....ohho toh apne priyatam se baate ho rahi hai....
hi....hi..hi...

Sulekha - kya sakhi tum bhi...mein toh isse jaanti bhi nahi hu.....na jaane kyu bar bar inka chitra hi ban jaata hai

Vinaya - chinta kyu karti ho sakhi ek din jarur aisa aayega....jis din woh swayam tera varan karega ....

tabhi Usski mata ki awaaj aayi.....
aur ussne woh chitra chupa diya...

Ulupi - Sulekha beta.....mein aur tumahare pita tum se kisi baat par charcha karna chate hai...

Sulekha - ne apne maa k charan sparsh kiye...toh maa ne gale laga liya .....Kya mata shri aisi kya mahatv purna baat humse karni hai jiski purva suchna..aapko hume dena pad raha hai.....

Ulupi - baitho putri abhi tumahare pita aate hi honge.....

Tabhi Naagraj Prassana ( NP ) ander aate hue....beta yeh baat tumahare jeewan k saath saath sampoorna naglok se judi hai.....

Naagraj ko dekh kar sakhi chali gayi..

Sulekaha ne apne pita k charan chuye
aur NP ne sur par haath pherte hue ...

aao beta baithkar baat karte hai....

NP - Dekho putri Tum ab badi ho gayi ho.....tum hamari ek hi santan ho...
hamare baad iss lok ki saari jimmedari tumpar hi...hai....

isiliye bahut vichar karne k baad humne tumahara vivah larne ka socha

humare rajya k param pratapi shurveer Senapati Vishank - ne aapse vivah karne ka prastav rakha hai ..

unse accha hume iss poore Naaglok mein aur koi nahi dikha toh humne unke haa kar diya hai....

anpe pita ki baat sunkar Sulekga k upar toh jaise vajrapaat ho gaya....

aur toh haise jad si ho gayi.....

Mata - kya hua putri ...kuch toh bolo..
aur kandho par haath rakha toh ....
apni mata ko apne samip dekhkar gale lag kar rone lagi.....

achanak apni haste hur beti ko yu rote hue dekhkar dono bahut pareshan ho gaye....

Ulupi - kya hua putri kuch toh bolo..
hum tumahare liye khushi ka sandesh laaye aur tum aise ro rahi ho...

Sulekha - maa nein yeh vivah nahi kar sakti hu....

NP - Aakhir kyu putri ....senapati poore naaglok mein sabse sunder hai balwan hai....kya kami hai unnmein

Sulekha - Mein kisi aur se prem karti hu....unhe hi maine mann hi mann pati maan liya hai......ab mein usske siwa kisi aur se vivah nahi kar sakti.....

Ulupi - kaun hai woh beta...tum toh kabhi iss mahal se bahar bhi nahi gayi ho ....kaha mili ussase ......aur tumne pahle kyu yeh baat nahi batayi....

Sulekha - muzhe nahi pata , ki woh kaun hai......mein kabhi unnse mili bhi nahi hu...

NP - yeh kya vyang kar rahi ho......jissase kabhi mili nahi ...dekha nahi ...usse apna pati maan liya...

Tab Sulekha ne apne banaye hue saare chitra dikhaye.....aur saari baat batayi......

Jaise hi NP ne chitra dekha.....

NP - MahaRakshak Abhi......Nahi yeh nshi ho sakta....yeh toh maharakshak ka chitra hai parantu hazaro varsh se inhe kisi ne nahi dekha hai ....aur inse tumahara vivah......

Tabhi senapati Vishank waha aate hue

Pranam maharaj........

NP - Aao putra Vishank.....Tum senapati se purva hamare putra k samaan ho.....tumahare pita mere param mitra the.....

Vishank - Maharaj yadi aap muzhe apne outra k samasn maante ho toh
mera ek agrah hai .....aap Rajkumari ko humse vivah karne k liye .....badhya nahi karoge.....

maharaj Rajkumari Sulekha meri mitra hai.....aur unki prasanata hi meri prasannta hai......

Sulekha - dhnyawad mitra....

NP - Thik hai putri mein tumhe ek varsh ka samay deta hu .....

itna kahkar waha se sabhi chale gaye

Vishank waha se chalkar ek gufa mein gaya......jaha ek bade se kaale patther k aage ek agni kund prajwalit tha....

woh waha aasan par baith gaya....
usne apne dahine haath ke angute ko waha pade katar se chira lagaya aur khoon ki kuch bunde uss agni mein daal di ....agni aur bhadak gayi....

aur uss kund mein mass ki aahuti dene laga.......uss samay usski aankhien poori tarah laal thi.....

ab dekhte hai Abhi kya kar raha hai

Iss samay college mein sports festival k liye sports ki practice joro se shuru thi......

Abhi - all rounder.....
Rimpy - Tennis aur chess team lead kar rahi thi......
Lima - Runing and Swiming
Sankush aur Rinkush - atheletics...

Usske liye college k pt sir Shursingh
sab students se kadi mehnat kara rahe the...

Rimpy - hafte hue ...haaaa basss ab aur nahi daud sakti abhi ....pls ab kal

Abhi - Aise kaise chalega Rimpy tennis k liye tumhe apna stamina aur badana hai.....

tabhi Sanku aur Rinku ....dono ground
ka chakkar laga kar haafte hue ....

ba.....s bhai ab kya bacche ki jaan lega......sir ..toh chale gaye ab hume bhi jaane de......

Abhi ne sabko thaka hua jaankar ....
chutti de di.....

Ab college k baad Rimpy ko saath leke nikal gaya.......

Rimpy - Shona , abhi mera ghar jaane ko mood nahi hai ,

Abhi - toh , chalo phir se practice shuru karte hai....

Rimpy - haaye re mera anadi sayyinya
na jaane dil ki baat ..

Abhi - accha ji......aaj sweetu badi romantic ho rahi hai.......
ab toh tumhe dikhana hi hoga ki hum anadi nahi khiladi hai......

aur dono cahl pade ussi jagah jaha school time mein Abho outing mein aaya tha.....aur bhediyo se saamna hua tha......

waha pahunchte hi......dono waha k sunder nazare mein kho gaye.....water fall ko dekhte dekhte dono wahi kinare paani mein apne paaon dale baith gaye....

Abhi - sweetu.....

Rimpy - hmmmm

Abhi - jara idhar dekhona...

aur Rimpy ka chehra apni aur ghumate hue......usski aankon mein dekhne lagta hai

Rimpy - Aise mat dekho na jaan.....
tumahari yeh aankhein ....mein kahi doob na jaau......

Abhi - Dub toh mein gaya hu ...tumahare pyar ki gahrayi mein , jitna utarta jaata hu utna hi aur gahra paata hu .....

Rimpy ko Abhi ki baato mein chupe pyar ko dekhkar ussase lipat gayi

( ab abhi ki jubani)

meinne kaskar Rimpy ko gale laga liya

zharne ki aawaj aur Rimpy k saanso ki aawaj mere ander ek sangeet sa paida kar rahi thi....

usske woh gulabi amrit ras se bhare thartharate hoth jaise muzhe nimatran de rahe the......usske gaalo ko chuti lat ko apni ungli se usske kasn k picche lagakar.....meine usse ....naram naram kaalin k jaise ghass par lita diya....aur uske upar aakar ..apne honth ussko honto se mila diye

jaise hi humare honth mile Rimpy ki baahein mere pith par kas gayi ....aur hum ek dusre k hontho ko bas chusne lage........hamare badan ek dusre se aise chipke the k bich se hawa bhi na jaaye.....

ab mere haath usske stano tak pahunch gaye.....aur maine tham liya
Hum dono ki dhadkan ek dum tez ho gayi......aur maine dhire se usske ek stan ko daba diya......

Rimpy - ssssshhh ...ahhhh jaan..
yeh kaisa ahsas hai .....mat karo na
nahi toh mein pagal na ho jaau...

ab mein ussko chumte hue garden tak aagaya ....aut betahasha chumne laga

Rimpy - ahhhh ...kya...k.....kkkkar .
rrrrahe...uffff.....ab mein dusra stan bhi dabane laga......Rimpy kisi jal bin machli ki tarah tadapne lagi

mein - uff sweetu tumahari yeh siskiyan muzhe aur pagal bana rahi hai ......ab mein kapdo k upar se hi usske stano ko chumne laga.....

Rimpy - ahhhh ...uffff ab..bas..karo.
na...babu....

Ab mera chottu akad kar bada ho gaya tha.....aur muzhe bada hi takleef de raha tha.......mein ohir se usske upar aagaya.....aur Rimpy k hoto ko apne hontho mein lekar chusne laga

mera ling kapdo k upar se Rimpy k prem dwar par ragad raha tha.....hamare sharir se peele rang ki urja nikal rahi thi......

Hum dono hi prem aur vasna k milan mein dub rahe the....k tabhi....
mere locket se aawaj aayi jo sirf main hi sun sakta tha......

ruk jaao janu .....yadi tum nahi ruke toh ab tak ks tumahara saara sangharsh vyarth ho jaayega......bina vivah k yadi tumahara milan hua toh
tumahari shaktiya chali jaayegi.....
aur burai ki jeet ho jaayegi.....

Muzhe spna udeshya yaad asgaya aur mein sambhal gaya ...aur Rimpy k upar se haat gaya...

Rimpy - kya hua jaan

mein - nahi Rimpy ...Vivah k bina issase aage hum nahi badh sakte ...yeh galat hoga.....

Rimpy - shona.....tum thik kaj rahe ho
aaj muzhe apne babu par garv hai k
tum chahte toh asj kuch bhi kar sakte the...lekin tumne hume bahne se roka

Love you my shona....

Mein - Love you too my sweetu....

phir humne apne kapde sahi kiya aur nikalne hi wale tha.....k....talab k ek kinare hume kuch alag sa dikha ....

jab hum dono waha gaye toh ek bahut hi sunder ...jaise doodh mein mile hue kesar k jaisi rangat.....gulabi honth
jakhmi haalat mein waha padi thi jisdka aadha sharir paani mein aur aadha bahar.....

abhi k liye itna hi......
agla update kal......

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 54

ab tak aapne dekha .........
Rasatal mein sthit naaglok..
ki Rajkumari kisi ko apna pati maan chuki hai.....

Aur yaha Rimpy k saath pyar k kuch pal.....bitane Jaha Abhi gaya tha......waha talab k kinare ek ladki ghyal aur behosh awastha mein mili..,..

ab aage.......

Abhi ne uss ladki ko paani se bahar nikal diya......dono ussko uthane ki koshish karne lage.....

Rimpy ...ne ussko pulse check karte hue-- .....abhi hume jaldi se isse hospital le jaana hoga......iiski pulse bahut dheere dheere chal rahi hai.....

Abhi ne apni usse heal karne ki koshish ki lekin sab bekar........

sochne laga ki isske upar meri healing power kyu istemal nahi kar rahi......
aakhir yeh hai kaun.......iss jakhmi aur behoshi ki haalat mein bhi isske chehre ka tez aam insano se alag hai..

Abhi ne usse goadi mein uthakar hospital le gaya......aur admitt kara diya......doctors k bahut koshish k baad bhi uss ladki k haalat mein koi sudhar nahi aaraha tha......

uss ladki ko dekhkar jaane kyu ...Abhi k dil mein ek dard sa ho raha tha.....

Abhi ne usske mann mein bhi zhankne ki koshish ki lekin koi aawaran usse aisa karne se rok rahi thi.........

iss sab mein bahut der ho gayi thi....

Rimpy ko ghar chodkar.....Abhi apne ghar aagaya......

Aur apne hi khayalo mein khoye hue
apne room ki aur jaaraha tha

Tabhi mom ki aawaj aayi.....

Mom - betu....aaj bahut der kar di...
aur kya hua ...kuch pareshan sa lag raha hai......

mein - Kuch nahi mom bas ...thoda thak gaya hu.....woh sports festival ki tayyari chal tahi hai......

Mom - dekh betu .....tu...muzhe .zhoot bhi nahi bol sakta......teri aankhien kuch aur kah rahi hai.....

aur mom ne mere sir par haath phere
mamta ka woh sparsh mere sir par hote hi meri aankhon se aansoo beh nikale......aur maa ne muzhe gale laga liya......

mien - pata nahi maa...aaj muzhe aise lag raha hai.....koi mera apna dard mein muzhe pukar raha hai....muzhse dur jaa raha hai......lekin itni powers hote hue bhi.....na toh mein uss aawaj tak pahunch paa raha hu ......aur....jaan paa raha hu ki woh kaun hai.........

mom - Betu ek baat dhyan rakhna ...ki tera janm ek bahut bade udeshya k liye hua hai.....tu aisa kamjor nahi pad sakta........Tridev tere saath kuch anarth nahi hone denge......

maa ki baate sunkar mere dil ko kuch aaram mila......

aur mein Addu k room ki aur chal pada .......jab mein andar gaya toh Addu aur Deepu dono ek saath padh rahe the.......

Mein - aare wah ...lagta hai khub jamkar padai ho rahi hai.......

Meri aawaj sunkar dono daud kar aaye aur muzhe gale laga liya....

Addu - Bhai aaj aap kaha the......mein pata hai aapka kitna wait kar rahi thi...

Mein - wait .....aur woh kyu betu.....

Addu - Kitne din se aap hume bahar nahi le gaye......chalo na bhai bahar...chalte hai ........phir hum ice cream bhi khaayenge......

mein - gudiya hum icecream toh yaha ghar mein bhi kha sakte hai.......

Addu - nahi ...muzhe ...jaana hai matlab jaane........aur muh fulaye khadi ho gayi.....

Mein - arre gudiya....thik ..hai ..ok done.....lekin ....Ritu di ko aane do ..
unhe bhi saath le jaayenge...........

Addu khusi se uchal kar gale lagi aur mere gaal par ek kiss kar di......

Deepu - bahi muzhe bhi le jaaoge.....

Mein - kyu nahi chottu.....tu bhi toh mera bhai hai.....aise kyu bol raha hai

phir mein apne room mein aagaya aur fresh hokar ...bed par baithe baithe aaj hui baaton k baare mein sochne laga......

Addu se milkar ab muzhe halka mehsus ho raha tha......aisa humesha hota tha......k jab bhi main pareshan hota......toh usse baat karke meri saari pareshani aur dard dur ho jaati

Tabhi mahaguru ne jo baat Addu k baare mein batayi....ki woh pranshakti ki dharak hai......toh muzhe ek aasha ki kiran nazar aayi........

lekin isske liye muzhe addu ko waha lejana hoga......

yeh sab sochte sochte meri aankh lag gayi......aur door par ho rahe Knock....knock...ki aawaj k saath khul gayi.....

meine door khola toh dekha Ritu di thi

Di - yeh kya hai betu ....Addu toh bol rahi thi...ki.....aaj ...tumne bahar ghumne ka plan banaya hai...tum ho ki sorahe ho........Addu...Deepu..toh kab se tayyar hokar baithe hai......

mein bhi tayar hogayi.......ti bhi jaldi ready hokar niche hasl mein aaja .....

Aur di chali gayi.......mein bhi tayar hokar niche chala...gaya......humne...pahle park jaane ka socha.........aur hum nikal gaye...

abhi thodi hi dur ghar se humari gaadi ..nikali hi thi.....ek buddha se bhikari gaadi k aage aagaye......Car ko break lagate lagate gaadi thodi usse touch ho hi gsyi....aur woh saamne sadak par gir gaya.........mein turant.....car se nikal ....aur usse sambhale laga...

Mein - arre baba....kahi chot toh nahi aayi......yeh driver bhi na .....dekh kar nahi chala sakte....


Budda - Beta usse mat daanto......meri hi galti hai.....ek toh buddhape k kaaran muzhe dikhayi nahi deta.....aur mein bina idhar udhar dekha sidha sadak paar kar raha tha

Mein - kaha jaana hai baba chalo hum tumhe chod dete hai.....

budda - beta tum kyu takleef lete ho....mein jaha rahta hu...waha tumahari gaadi nahi kaa sakti.....
tum bas muzhe sadak ..paar karwa do

phir maine usse sadak paar karai

aur wapas gadi mein aagaya.....

(Woh buddha jaane kyu gaadi ki taraf dekhkar muskura raha tha....usske aankhon mein alag hi chamak thi)

mein bhi yaha soch raha tha ki kahi toh iss baba ko maine dekha tha ...lekin ..kuch...yaad nahi...aaraha....

Phir hum park pahunche......uss park k ek kone mein baccho k khelne k liye bahut kuch tha.......waha aur bhi bacche ......Addu aur Deepu waha khelne mein magan hi gaye......

Mein aur Ritu di waha baithe kuch college ki toh kuch business ki ..toh kuch maatru sadan (anath aashram )
ki baatein kar rahe the..........

Tabhi mera dhyan Addu ki taraf gaya
jo zhadiyo mein na jaane kya dekh

rahi thi.....bina hile dule.....Deepu usse aawaj de raha tha lekin woh sun hi nahi rahi thi.......tabhi mein waha gaya toh dekha......ek kaala bada sa
Lagbhag 20 ft lamba naag tha......

Aadu uski aankhon mein dekhkar bilkul stabdh si khadi thi......

muzhe dekh kar woh naag waha se chala gaya ....aur addu ko hosh aaya

Addu muzhe dekhkar ....gale lag gayi
bhaaaai woooh saaap...bahut bada

mein - kaha hai saanp aadu yaha toh kuch nahi hai.......chalo ab bahut khelna hogaya.......

Phir mein waha se ek Acche se Restaurant pahuncha......

jaane kyu aisa lag raha tha k koi humara piccha kar raha hai......

maine jaanne ki koshish ki lekin nahi jaan paaya......
socha mera waham....hoga.......

Hum wahi ek table par baith gaye
aur humne khane ka order diya....

khana bahut tasty tha......khane k baad dessert ka order kiy aur Addu aur Deepu k liye unki fav ice cream

mein - Di jab tak Ice cream aati hai...
tab tak mein wash room se hokar aata hu.......

jab mein wash room se bahar aaya ..
toh dekha koi adhed umar ka aadmi
di aur addu se kuch baat kar raha hai

Jabtak mein table pahuncha woh aadmi chala gaya tha......

abhi table tak pahunchta tabhi kisi ka call aagaya .....mein - hello

udher se - Kaise ho mere pyare dushman.......

Mein - kuan ho tum ....aur tumhe yeh nu kaha se mila......

woh - mein kaun hu woh chodo......
bade rakshak bante ho ......pahele apne bahen ki raksha toh kar lo.....

jab mein table ki taraf dekha toh ..Di aur Addu waha nahi thi.......idhar udhar dekha toh.....woh restaurent k bahar nikal rahi thi.......mein tezi se un tak pahuncha......tab tak woh sadak par pahunch chuki tih tabhi ek truck full speed mein uss aur aata dikhayi di

Mein - diiiiii...Addu....lekin woh kuch sun hi nahi rahi thi.......Truck unhe kuchalne hi wala tha k......

aaj k liye itna hi.......
agla update jald hi......

Nice post

 

[Aryanv]

Update - 54

ab tak aapne dekha .........
Rasatal mein sthit naaglok..
ki Rajkumari kisi ko apna pati maan chuki hai.....

Aur yaha Rimpy k saath pyar k kuch pal.....bitane Jaha Abhi gaya tha......waha talab k kinare ek ladki ghyal aur behosh awastha mein mili..,..

ab aage.......

Abhi ne uss ladki ko paani se bahar nikal diya......dono ussko uthane ki koshish karne lage.....

Rimpy ...ne ussko pulse check karte hue-- .....abhi hume jaldi se isse hospital le jaana hoga......iiski pulse bahut dheere dheere chal rahi hai.....

Abhi ne apni usse heal karne ki koshish ki lekin sab bekar........

sochne laga ki isske upar meri healing power kyu istemal nahi kar rahi......
aakhir yeh hai kaun.......iss jakhmi aur behoshi ki haalat mein bhi isske chehre ka tez aam insano se alag hai..

Abhi ne usse goadi mein uthakar hospital le gaya......aur admitt kara diya......doctors k bahut koshish k baad bhi uss ladki k haalat mein koi sudhar nahi aaraha tha......

uss ladki ko dekhkar jaane kyu ...Abhi k dil mein ek dard sa ho raha tha.....

Abhi ne usske mann mein bhi zhankne ki koshish ki lekin koi aawaran usse aisa karne se rok rahi thi.........

iss sab mein bahut der ho gayi thi....

Rimpy ko ghar chodkar.....Abhi apne ghar aagaya......

Aur apne hi khayalo mein khoye hue
apne room ki aur jaaraha tha

Tabhi mom ki aawaj aayi.....

Mom - betu....aaj bahut der kar di...
aur kya hua ...kuch pareshan sa lag raha hai......

mein - Kuch nahi mom bas ...thoda thak gaya hu.....woh sports festival ki tayyari chal tahi hai......

Mom - dekh betu .....tu...muzhe .zhoot bhi nahi bol sakta......teri aankhien kuch aur kah rahi hai.....

aur mom ne mere sir par haath phere
mamta ka woh sparsh mere sir par hote hi meri aankhon se aansoo beh nikale......aur maa ne muzhe gale laga liya......

mien - pata nahi maa...aaj muzhe aise lag raha hai.....koi mera apna dard mein muzhe pukar raha hai....muzhse dur jaa raha hai......lekin itni powers hote hue bhi.....na toh mein uss aawaj tak pahunch paa raha hu ......aur....jaan paa raha hu ki woh kaun hai.........

mom - Betu ek baat dhyan rakhna ...ki tera janm ek bahut bade udeshya k liye hua hai.....tu aisa kamjor nahi pad sakta........Tridev tere saath kuch anarth nahi hone denge......

maa ki baate sunkar mere dil ko kuch aaram mila......

aur mein Addu k room ki aur chal pada .......jab mein andar gaya toh Addu aur Deepu dono ek saath padh rahe the.......

Mein - aare wah ...lagta hai khub jamkar padai ho rahi hai.......

Meri aawaj sunkar dono daud kar aaye aur muzhe gale laga liya....

Addu - Bhai aaj aap kaha the......mein pata hai aapka kitna wait kar rahi thi...

Mein - wait .....aur woh kyu betu.....

Addu - Kitne din se aap hume bahar nahi le gaye......chalo na bhai bahar...chalte hai ........phir hum ice cream bhi khaayenge......

mein - gudiya hum icecream toh yaha ghar mein bhi kha sakte hai.......

Addu - nahi ...muzhe ...jaana hai matlab jaane........aur muh fulaye khadi ho gayi.....

Mein - arre gudiya....thik ..hai ..ok done.....lekin ....Ritu di ko aane do ..
unhe bhi saath le jaayenge...........

Addu khusi se uchal kar gale lagi aur mere gaal par ek kiss kar di......

Deepu - bahi muzhe bhi le jaaoge.....

Mein - kyu nahi chottu.....tu bhi toh mera bhai hai.....aise kyu bol raha hai

phir mein apne room mein aagaya aur fresh hokar ...bed par baithe baithe aaj hui baaton k baare mein sochne laga......

Addu se milkar ab muzhe halka mehsus ho raha tha......aisa humesha hota tha......k jab bhi main pareshan hota......toh usse baat karke meri saari pareshani aur dard dur ho jaati

Tabhi mahaguru ne jo baat Addu k baare mein batayi....ki woh pranshakti ki dharak hai......toh muzhe ek aasha ki kiran nazar aayi........

lekin isske liye muzhe addu ko waha lejana hoga......

yeh sab sochte sochte meri aankh lag gayi......aur door par ho rahe Knock....knock...ki aawaj k saath khul gayi.....

meine door khola toh dekha Ritu di thi

Di - yeh kya hai betu ....Addu toh bol rahi thi...ki.....aaj ...tumne bahar ghumne ka plan banaya hai...tum ho ki sorahe ho........Addu...Deepu..toh kab se tayyar hokar baithe hai......

mein bhi tayar hogayi.......ti bhi jaldi ready hokar niche hasl mein aaja .....

Aur di chali gayi.......mein bhi tayar hokar niche chala...gaya......humne...pahle park jaane ka socha.........aur hum nikal gaye...

abhi thodi hi dur ghar se humari gaadi ..nikali hi thi.....ek buddha se bhikari gaadi k aage aagaye......Car ko break lagate lagate gaadi thodi usse touch ho hi gsyi....aur woh saamne sadak par gir gaya.........mein turant.....car se nikal ....aur usse sambhale laga...

Mein - arre baba....kahi chot toh nahi aayi......yeh driver bhi na .....dekh kar nahi chala sakte....


Budda - Beta usse mat daanto......meri hi galti hai.....ek toh buddhape k kaaran muzhe dikhayi nahi deta.....aur mein bina idhar udhar dekha sidha sadak paar kar raha tha

Mein - kaha jaana hai baba chalo hum tumhe chod dete hai.....

budda - beta tum kyu takleef lete ho....mein jaha rahta hu...waha tumahari gaadi nahi kaa sakti.....
tum bas muzhe sadak ..paar karwa do

phir maine usse sadak paar karai

aur wapas gadi mein aagaya.....

(Woh buddha jaane kyu gaadi ki taraf dekhkar muskura raha tha....usske aankhon mein alag hi chamak thi)

mein bhi yaha soch raha tha ki kahi toh iss baba ko maine dekha tha ...lekin ..kuch...yaad nahi...aaraha....

Phir hum park pahunche......uss park k ek kone mein baccho k khelne k liye bahut kuch tha.......waha aur bhi bacche ......Addu aur Deepu waha khelne mein magan hi gaye......

Mein aur Ritu di waha baithe kuch college ki toh kuch business ki ..toh kuch maatru sadan (anath aashram )
ki baatein kar rahe the..........

Tabhi mera dhyan Addu ki taraf gaya
jo zhadiyo mein na jaane kya dekh

rahi thi.....bina hile dule.....Deepu usse aawaj de raha tha lekin woh sun hi nahi rahi thi.......tabhi mein waha gaya toh dekha......ek kaala bada sa
Lagbhag 20 ft lamba naag tha......

Aadu uski aankhon mein dekhkar bilkul stabdh si khadi thi......

muzhe dekh kar woh naag waha se chala gaya ....aur addu ko hosh aaya

Addu muzhe dekhkar ....gale lag gayi
bhaaaai woooh saaap...bahut bada

mein - kaha hai saanp aadu yaha toh kuch nahi hai.......chalo ab bahut khelna hogaya.......

Phir mein waha se ek Acche se Restaurant pahuncha......

jaane kyu aisa lag raha tha k koi humara piccha kar raha hai......

maine jaanne ki koshish ki lekin nahi jaan paaya......
socha mera waham....hoga.......

Hum wahi ek table par baith gaye
aur humne khane ka order diya....

khana bahut tasty tha......khane k baad dessert ka order kiy aur Addu aur Deepu k liye unki fav ice cream

mein - Di jab tak Ice cream aati hai...
tab tak mein wash room se hokar aata hu.......

jab mein wash room se bahar aaya ..
toh dekha koi adhed umar ka aadmi
di aur addu se kuch baat kar raha hai

Jabtak mein table pahuncha woh aadmi chala gaya tha......

abhi table tak pahunchta tabhi kisi ka call aagaya .....mein - hello

udher se - Kaise ho mere pyare dushman.......

Mein - kuan ho tum ....aur tumhe yeh nu kaha se mila......

woh - mein kaun hu woh chodo......
bade rakshak bante ho ......pahele apne bahen ki raksha toh kar lo.....

jab mein table ki taraf dekha toh ..Di aur Addu waha nahi thi.......idhar udhar dekha toh.....woh restaurent k bahar nikal rahi thi.......mein tezi se un tak pahuncha......tab tak woh sadak par pahunch chuki tih tabhi ek truck full speed mein uss aur aata dikhayi di

Mein - diiiiii...Addu....lekin woh kuch sun hi nahi rahi thi.......Truck unhe kuchalne hi wala tha k......

aaj k liye itna hi.......
agla update jald hi......

Fantastic update

 

[Radhe]

Mast update bro maza aa gaya