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Very nice update bhai
But aapne ek he update ko re post kar diya
But aapne ek he update ko re post kar diya
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Update - 55
ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi Ritu..Addu...Deepu....k saath ghumne jaata hai.....
waha Ritu aur addu ko kisi adhed k saath baat karte hue dekhta hai....
aur ek rahasymai vyakti ka ph
Ritu aur addu ki taraf truck tezi
se aana.....
aur ab aage........
Jaise hi truck ekdum kareeb aaya Ritu aur addu ko rondne hi wala tha
ki.......dhadammm............
ek bhayankar aawaj k saath uss truck k saamne k parkhache ud gaya aur bhayabkar takkar se dhua utha.....
uss bhayankar aawaj se Ritu aur Shalu par jo kisi ne Sammohan kiya tha woh tut gaya......jaise hi dono ko hosh aaya
Dar kaare dono ek dusre ko chipak gaye......sab ka dhyan iss aur gaya..
aur jab dhua hata....toh waha khada tha Sangharak (RVS ne ab apni powers bhi abhi ko dedi thi, aur ab Abhi tha Sangharak)
logo ne Sangharak ka naam bahut suna tha........waha logo ki bhid ikatthi ho gayi thi........
Tabhi saamne aaya.....aur Ritu se aawaj badal kar.....Aap thik toh ho na
kahi kuch chot toh nahi aayi......
Ritu ki ghabrahat k kaaran aawaj hi nahi nikal rahi thi ....fir bhi.....himmat juta kar......k...kkkkan ...h..oo....tum
Abhi - Main hu Apridhiyo k liye maut
jo muzhe Sangharak k naam se jaante hai....
jaise hi kuch logo ne naam suna toh waha logo mein kusur phusar hone lagi ....kuch log naare lagane lage
Sangharak...Sangharak...
aur Abhi teleport hokar normal dress mein bhid k picche aagaya....aur daud kar Ritu aur Addu ko gale laga liya..
Abhi - Dii maine kitni aawaje lagayi lekin aapne toh meri aawaj suni hi nahi....yadi aapko kuch ho jaata toh...
mein....bhi nahi rahta.....
Ritu - Rote hue.....pata nahi bhai bas muzhe itna yaad hai mein kisi se baat kar rahi thi uske baad kya hua....muzhe kuch bhi nahi pata....aut jab hosh aaya....toh mein yaha thi....
Addu - Bhai jaldi se chalo yaha par....
muzhe bahut dar lag raha hai....
Mein - Na ....gudiya darte nahi....mein hu..na.......abhi ne usse gale lagaya aur sir par haath pherne laga.....
usske baad.....Restaurent se Deepu ko liya aur ghar ki aur nikal gaye....
Car mein baithe baithe sochne laga
ki aaj ka din hi kuch ajeeb tha....
pahele woh ladki....phir woh naag...aur ......ab yeh haadsa
Tabhi abhi ko ph bajne laga toh dekha ussi Unknown nu se call aarahi hai...
Abhi iss samay call nahi utha sakta tha......lekin krodh ki wajah se uski aankhien laa ho gayi.....
Addu gadi mein bhi addu ko pakad kar baithi thi......
Ritu di gumsum si baithi thi ....Deepu ko toh kuch pata nahi tha...
aise hi hum ghar pahunche......aur apne Room mein chale gaye.....Addu mere hi saath thi....mom ko humne bata diya tha ko bahar se hi kha kar aaye hai.......
Addu mere paas hi so gayi thi.....
Maine apni team ko mere cell par aaye hue call ko trace kane k liye kaha
Ab mera cell meri team k saath connected tha......tabhi muze call aayi
Udhar se - ha...ha...ha..Bahut khub Rakshak.....aakhir tune bacha hi liya ...lekin kab tak......
mein - haramjade.....tu ek baar saamne aaja.....phir dekh teri aatma bhi punarjanam lene k liye daregi...
Woh - arrre ..arre...arre..itna gussa..
saamne bhi aaunga....abhi toh shuruwat hai....abhi se ghabra gaye..
ha...ha...ha......
aur call cut ho gayi ....
tabhi shalaka ko call aayi....
sir aapke saath baat karte hue usne 4 location badli......hume samaz nahi aaraha hai yeh ussne kaise kiya....
its impossible....
Mein - woh sab chodo usski aakhri location batao.....
aur mein teleport hokar uss jagah pahuncha ....woh ek gufa thi.....
jab mein ander gaya toh waha....koi nahi tha......jab maine charo taraf dekha toh ek kagaj par kuch likhawat dekhi.......likha tha ......
lets begins the race....Rakshak....
Apradhi kitna bhi shatir ho lekin koi clue chod hi deta hai........
niche galti se ussne sign kiye tha...
jaha chote se akshar mein likha tha
SR
Mein wapas aagaya......socha ki kaun ho sakta hai.....aur sign ka photo click karke shalaka ko bhej diya.......
vichar aaya....yeh kya ho raha hai ...uss ladki ko heal karna chahta tha nahi kar paaya.....iss anjane dushman tak pahunchna chahta hu lekin nahi pahunch paa raha hu......
sign dekhkar kuch kuch toh shak hua
lekin......phir socha yeh kaise ho sakta hai.......
aaj ki iss hadse k kaaran Abhi addu ko uss ladki tak nahi le jaa paaya....
socha ki kal dekhte hai.....
muzhe nind nahi aarahi thi socha kya karu......tabhi Rimpy ka khayal aaya toh thodi der ussase baatein ki.....
phir bhi mann ashant tha.....ki locket chamakne laga......
mein - sorry jaan aaj k iss vyastata mein tumse baat karna hi bhul gaya...
aaj mera mann bada ashant hai....
kash tum yaha aasakti.....
tabhi wah ek roshni pragat hui.....
aur ussmein se nikli meri pyari Shivali
woh kuch bolne hi wali thi....k maine addu ki taraf ishara karke chup karaya aur usse lekar teleport hokar chat par chala gaya......
Chat par pahunchte hi ...
Shivali - kya hua jaan ..kyu itne pareshan ho......
mein - kya tumhe nahi pata.....tumahara toh mann is locket se juda hua hai na....
Shivali - muzhe sab pata hai......lekin aap kyu bhool jaate ho ki aap is shrusti k maharakshak ho......
aisi badhaye toh aapke saamne aati hi rahegi.......aur bhavishya mein toh ...
Mein - kya bahvisya mein.....batao
Shivali - abhi nahi jaan.....muzhe kshama karna......
mein - kya tum muzhe prem nahi karti
Shivali - aisi baat mat karo jaan .....tumahare liya toh mera saara jeewan samarpit hai.......paratu Baba ne tumahri kasam dekar batane se mana kiya hai......bas itna hi bata sakti hu k bhavisya mein aane wale sanket se kewal ...tumhe sansar ki nashvarta ka gyan hi bacha sakta hai
mein - thik hai tum ab jaao .....aur mein mud gaya......
ussne piche se muzhe baahi mein bhar liya.....aise toh naraj na ho jasn nahi toh mein jee nahi paaungi...aur usski aankon se aansoo behne lage jinhe maine apni pith par mehsus kiye
mein palta aur usska chehra pakad kar usdke aansoo ka pine laga...
mein - jaan mein tumse kabhi naraj nahi ho sakta......woh toh bas aise hi
aur meine apne honth usske hontho par rakh diye aur chumne laga , iss chumban mein sirf pyar tha vasna ka lesh maatra bhi nahi tha.....
thodi der aise hi hum ek dusre ki baaho mein the......meri saari pareshani usske pyar ne har li thi.....
Shivali - Jaan ab humare milan ka samay aane wala hai ....abhi 15 din baad Aanewali Shivraatri par humara vivah hoga......
phir woh chali gayi....aur mein bhi apne room mein aakar so gaya tha
Dusre din urhkar maine aoni daily routine puri ki......Abhi bf ready nahi hua tha toh socha Dad se mil lu
Dad , mom aur didu hall mein baithkar news dekh rahe the....ussmein viral videos k upar programme aa raha tha....
News reader - ab aap agla video dekhe
ek hi raat mein yeh video poore world mein fail gaya hai.....
deko kaise ek Rahasymayi insan ne teji se aate truck k parkhache uda dite aur do ladkiyo ko bachaya.....
phir kal wale hadse ka video chala...
Dad aur mom meri taraf dekhne lage
tabhi news reader - Kya jiss Sangharak k nasm se poora underworld kaanpte hai....yeh wahi hai yaa koi aur........123 is number par sms karke baataye......har news ki poori khabar dikhayega humara channel.....
Dad - Beta yeh sab kya hai itna kuch ho gaya aur tumne hume bataya nahi
Di - Dad meine hi betu ko mana kiya tha batane k liye.......socha aap pareshan ho jaaoge.......
Dad - beta mere liye meri pareshani se jyada tum sab important ho....
Tab tak bf aagaya tha.....Addu aur Deepu bhi niche aagaye the.....
Dad ne call karke family ki security ko aur bada diya aur di Deepu aur Addu ko kisi anjan se milne k liye mana kiya
maine pahele hi subah uthte hi sabko apne shakti trishul ki shield se surakshit kar diya tha....
Tab tak Rimpy aagayi .....aur hum chal diye college......
Clollege mein aaj bhi daily ki tarah practice hui......aur kuch padai....
Abhi k liye itna hi .....agla update kal
Readers k liye -
kya aap mein se koi bata sakta hai ki woh anjan dushman kaun hai.....
aur ab tak ki kahani mein Abhi k honewali patniyo mein se kitno ka jikar hua hai......
ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi Ritu..Addu...Deepu....k saath ghumne jaata hai.....
waha Ritu aur addu ko kisi adhed k saath baat karte hue dekhta hai....
aur ek rahasymai vyakti ka ph
Ritu aur addu ki taraf truck tezi
se aana.....
aur ab aage........
Jaise hi truck ekdum kareeb aaya Ritu aur addu ko rondne hi wala tha
ki.......dhadammm............
ek bhayankar aawaj k saath uss truck k saamne k parkhache ud gaya aur bhayabkar takkar se dhua utha.....
uss bhayankar aawaj se Ritu aur Shalu par jo kisi ne Sammohan kiya tha woh tut gaya......jaise hi dono ko hosh aaya
Dar kaare dono ek dusre ko chipak gaye......sab ka dhyan iss aur gaya..
aur jab dhua hata....toh waha khada tha Sangharak (RVS ne ab apni powers bhi abhi ko dedi thi, aur ab Abhi tha Sangharak)
logo ne Sangharak ka naam bahut suna tha........waha logo ki bhid ikatthi ho gayi thi........
Tabhi saamne aaya.....aur Ritu se aawaj badal kar.....Aap thik toh ho na
kahi kuch chot toh nahi aayi......
Ritu ki ghabrahat k kaaran aawaj hi nahi nikal rahi thi ....fir bhi.....himmat juta kar......k...kkkkan ...h..oo....tum
Abhi - Main hu Apridhiyo k liye maut
jo muzhe Sangharak k naam se jaante hai....
jaise hi kuch logo ne naam suna toh waha logo mein kusur phusar hone lagi ....kuch log naare lagane lage
Sangharak...Sangharak...
aur Abhi teleport hokar normal dress mein bhid k picche aagaya....aur daud kar Ritu aur Addu ko gale laga liya..
Abhi - Dii maine kitni aawaje lagayi lekin aapne toh meri aawaj suni hi nahi....yadi aapko kuch ho jaata toh...
mein....bhi nahi rahta.....
Ritu - Rote hue.....pata nahi bhai bas muzhe itna yaad hai mein kisi se baat kar rahi thi uske baad kya hua....muzhe kuch bhi nahi pata....aut jab hosh aaya....toh mein yaha thi....
Addu - Bhai jaldi se chalo yaha par....
muzhe bahut dar lag raha hai....
Mein - Na ....gudiya darte nahi....mein hu..na.......abhi ne usse gale lagaya aur sir par haath pherne laga.....
usske baad.....Restaurent se Deepu ko liya aur ghar ki aur nikal gaye....
Car mein baithe baithe sochne laga
ki aaj ka din hi kuch ajeeb tha....
pahele woh ladki....phir woh naag...aur ......ab yeh haadsa
Tabhi abhi ko ph bajne laga toh dekha ussi Unknown nu se call aarahi hai...
Abhi iss samay call nahi utha sakta tha......lekin krodh ki wajah se uski aankhien laa ho gayi.....
Addu gadi mein bhi addu ko pakad kar baithi thi......
Ritu di gumsum si baithi thi ....Deepu ko toh kuch pata nahi tha...
aise hi hum ghar pahunche......aur apne Room mein chale gaye.....Addu mere hi saath thi....mom ko humne bata diya tha ko bahar se hi kha kar aaye hai.......
Addu mere paas hi so gayi thi.....
Maine apni team ko mere cell par aaye hue call ko trace kane k liye kaha
Ab mera cell meri team k saath connected tha......tabhi muze call aayi
Udhar se - ha...ha...ha..Bahut khub Rakshak.....aakhir tune bacha hi liya ...lekin kab tak......
mein - haramjade.....tu ek baar saamne aaja.....phir dekh teri aatma bhi punarjanam lene k liye daregi...
Woh - arrre ..arre...arre..itna gussa..
saamne bhi aaunga....abhi toh shuruwat hai....abhi se ghabra gaye..
ha...ha...ha......
aur call cut ho gayi ....
tabhi shalaka ko call aayi....
sir aapke saath baat karte hue usne 4 location badli......hume samaz nahi aaraha hai yeh ussne kaise kiya....
its impossible....
Mein - woh sab chodo usski aakhri location batao.....
aur mein teleport hokar uss jagah pahuncha ....woh ek gufa thi.....
jab mein ander gaya toh waha....koi nahi tha......jab maine charo taraf dekha toh ek kagaj par kuch likhawat dekhi.......likha tha ......
lets begins the race....Rakshak....
Apradhi kitna bhi shatir ho lekin koi clue chod hi deta hai........
niche galti se ussne sign kiye tha...
jaha chote se akshar mein likha tha
SR
Mein wapas aagaya......socha ki kaun ho sakta hai.....aur sign ka photo click karke shalaka ko bhej diya.......
vichar aaya....yeh kya ho raha hai ...uss ladki ko heal karna chahta tha nahi kar paaya.....iss anjane dushman tak pahunchna chahta hu lekin nahi pahunch paa raha hu......
sign dekhkar kuch kuch toh shak hua
lekin......phir socha yeh kaise ho sakta hai.......
aaj ki iss hadse k kaaran Abhi addu ko uss ladki tak nahi le jaa paaya....
socha ki kal dekhte hai.....
muzhe nind nahi aarahi thi socha kya karu......tabhi Rimpy ka khayal aaya toh thodi der ussase baatein ki.....
phir bhi mann ashant tha.....ki locket chamakne laga......
mein - sorry jaan aaj k iss vyastata mein tumse baat karna hi bhul gaya...
aaj mera mann bada ashant hai....
kash tum yaha aasakti.....
tabhi wah ek roshni pragat hui.....
aur ussmein se nikli meri pyari Shivali
woh kuch bolne hi wali thi....k maine addu ki taraf ishara karke chup karaya aur usse lekar teleport hokar chat par chala gaya......
Chat par pahunchte hi ...
Shivali - kya hua jaan ..kyu itne pareshan ho......
mein - kya tumhe nahi pata.....tumahara toh mann is locket se juda hua hai na....
Shivali - muzhe sab pata hai......lekin aap kyu bhool jaate ho ki aap is shrusti k maharakshak ho......
aisi badhaye toh aapke saamne aati hi rahegi.......aur bhavishya mein toh ...
Mein - kya bahvisya mein.....batao
Shivali - abhi nahi jaan.....muzhe kshama karna......
mein - kya tum muzhe prem nahi karti
Shivali - aisi baat mat karo jaan .....tumahare liya toh mera saara jeewan samarpit hai.......paratu Baba ne tumahri kasam dekar batane se mana kiya hai......bas itna hi bata sakti hu k bhavisya mein aane wale sanket se kewal ...tumhe sansar ki nashvarta ka gyan hi bacha sakta hai
mein - thik hai tum ab jaao .....aur mein mud gaya......
ussne piche se muzhe baahi mein bhar liya.....aise toh naraj na ho jasn nahi toh mein jee nahi paaungi...aur usski aankon se aansoo behne lage jinhe maine apni pith par mehsus kiye
mein palta aur usska chehra pakad kar usdke aansoo ka pine laga...
mein - jaan mein tumse kabhi naraj nahi ho sakta......woh toh bas aise hi
aur meine apne honth usske hontho par rakh diye aur chumne laga , iss chumban mein sirf pyar tha vasna ka lesh maatra bhi nahi tha.....
thodi der aise hi hum ek dusre ki baaho mein the......meri saari pareshani usske pyar ne har li thi.....
Shivali - Jaan ab humare milan ka samay aane wala hai ....abhi 15 din baad Aanewali Shivraatri par humara vivah hoga......
phir woh chali gayi....aur mein bhi apne room mein aakar so gaya tha
Dusre din urhkar maine aoni daily routine puri ki......Abhi bf ready nahi hua tha toh socha Dad se mil lu
Dad , mom aur didu hall mein baithkar news dekh rahe the....ussmein viral videos k upar programme aa raha tha....
News reader - ab aap agla video dekhe
ek hi raat mein yeh video poore world mein fail gaya hai.....
deko kaise ek Rahasymayi insan ne teji se aate truck k parkhache uda dite aur do ladkiyo ko bachaya.....
phir kal wale hadse ka video chala...
Dad aur mom meri taraf dekhne lage
tabhi news reader - Kya jiss Sangharak k nasm se poora underworld kaanpte hai....yeh wahi hai yaa koi aur........123 is number par sms karke baataye......har news ki poori khabar dikhayega humara channel.....
Dad - Beta yeh sab kya hai itna kuch ho gaya aur tumne hume bataya nahi
Di - Dad meine hi betu ko mana kiya tha batane k liye.......socha aap pareshan ho jaaoge.......
Dad - beta mere liye meri pareshani se jyada tum sab important ho....
Tab tak bf aagaya tha.....Addu aur Deepu bhi niche aagaye the.....
Dad ne call karke family ki security ko aur bada diya aur di Deepu aur Addu ko kisi anjan se milne k liye mana kiya
maine pahele hi subah uthte hi sabko apne shakti trishul ki shield se surakshit kar diya tha....
Tab tak Rimpy aagayi .....aur hum chal diye college......
Clollege mein aaj bhi daily ki tarah practice hui......aur kuch padai....
Abhi k liye itna hi .....agla update kal
Readers k liye -
kya aap mein se koi bata sakta hai ki woh anjan dushman kaun hai.....
aur ab tak ki kahani mein Abhi k honewali patniyo mein se kitno ka jikar hua hai......
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- 143
bahut bahut shukriya frnds aapke iss support k liye....
aise hi saath banaye rakhe....
Latest update 55 posted.....
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Thanku soo much frnds for your khubsurat & mind blowing comment
aise hi saath banaye rakhe....
Latest update 55 posted.....
The king
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Nice update bhai or shayad SR ka matlab shayad senapati rasatal (vishakh) ho or abhi ki hone wali 5 bivi he unka name shivali shalu sulekha rimpy or last wali shayad asurraj kalasur ki sabse chhoti beti jiska name me bhul gaya hu waiting for next update
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Killerpanditji(pandit)
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Excellent update
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
Maza aa gya