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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Akil

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ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi Ritu..Addu...Deepu....k saath ghumne jaata hai.....
waha Ritu aur addu ko kisi adhed k saath baat karte hue dekhta hai....
aur ek rahasymai vyakti ka ph
Ritu aur addu ki taraf truck tezi
se aana.....

aur ab aage........


Jaise hi truck ekdum kareeb aaya Ritu aur addu ko rondne hi wala tha
ki.......dhadammm............

ek bhayankar aawaj k saath uss truck k saamne k parkhache ud gaya aur bhayabkar takkar se dhua utha.....

uss bhayankar aawaj se Ritu aur Shalu par jo kisi ne Sammohan kiya tha woh tut gaya......jaise hi dono ko hosh aaya
Dar kaare dono ek dusre ko chipak gaye......sab ka dhyan iss aur gaya..
aur jab dhua hata....toh waha khada tha Sangharak (RVS ne ab apni powers bhi abhi ko dedi thi, aur ab Abhi tha Sangharak)

logo ne Sangharak ka naam bahut suna tha........waha logo ki bhid ikatthi ho gayi thi........

Tabhi saamne aaya.....aur Ritu se aawaj badal kar.....Aap thik toh ho na
kahi kuch chot toh nahi aayi......

Ritu ki ghabrahat k kaaran aawaj hi nahi nikal rahi thi ....fir bhi.....himmat juta kar......k...kkkkan ...h..oo....tum

Abhi - Main hu Apridhiyo k liye maut
jo muzhe Sangharak k naam se jaante hai....

jaise hi kuch logo ne naam suna toh waha logo mein kusur phusar hone lagi ....kuch log naare lagane lage
Sangharak...Sangharak...

aur Abhi teleport hokar normal dress mein bhid k picche aagaya....aur daud kar Ritu aur Addu ko gale laga liya..

Abhi - Dii maine kitni aawaje lagayi lekin aapne toh meri aawaj suni hi nahi....yadi aapko kuch ho jaata toh...
mein....bhi nahi rahta.....

Ritu - Rote hue.....pata nahi bhai bas muzhe itna yaad hai mein kisi se baat kar rahi thi uske baad kya hua....muzhe kuch bhi nahi pata....aut jab hosh aaya....toh mein yaha thi....

Addu - Bhai jaldi se chalo yaha par....
muzhe bahut dar lag raha hai....

Mein - Na ....gudiya darte nahi....mein hu..na.......abhi ne usse gale lagaya aur sir par haath pherne laga.....
usske baad.....Restaurent se Deepu ko liya aur ghar ki aur nikal gaye....

Car mein baithe baithe sochne laga
ki aaj ka din hi kuch ajeeb tha....

pahele woh ladki....phir woh naag...aur ......ab yeh haadsa

Tabhi abhi ko ph bajne laga toh dekha ussi Unknown nu se call aarahi hai...

Abhi iss samay call nahi utha sakta tha......lekin krodh ki wajah se uski aankhien laa ho gayi.....

Addu gadi mein bhi addu ko pakad kar baithi thi......

Ritu di gumsum si baithi thi ....Deepu ko toh kuch pata nahi tha...

aise hi hum ghar pahunche......aur apne Room mein chale gaye.....Addu mere hi saath thi....mom ko humne bata diya tha ko bahar se hi kha kar aaye hai.......

Addu mere paas hi so gayi thi.....
Maine apni team ko mere cell par aaye hue call ko trace kane k liye kaha

Ab mera cell meri team k saath connected tha......tabhi muze call aayi

Udhar se - ha...ha...ha..Bahut khub Rakshak.....aakhir tune bacha hi liya ...lekin kab tak......

mein - haramjade.....tu ek baar saamne aaja.....phir dekh teri aatma bhi punarjanam lene k liye daregi...

Woh - arrre ..arre...arre..itna gussa..
saamne bhi aaunga....abhi toh shuruwat hai....abhi se ghabra gaye..
ha...ha...ha......

aur call cut ho gayi ....
tabhi shalaka ko call aayi....

sir aapke saath baat karte hue usne 4 location badli......hume samaz nahi aaraha hai yeh ussne kaise kiya....
its impossible....

Mein - woh sab chodo usski aakhri location batao.....

aur mein teleport hokar uss jagah pahuncha ....woh ek gufa thi.....
jab mein ander gaya toh waha....koi nahi tha......jab maine charo taraf dekha toh ek kagaj par kuch likhawat dekhi.......likha tha ......
lets begins the race....Rakshak....

Apradhi kitna bhi shatir ho lekin koi clue chod hi deta hai........

niche galti se ussne sign kiye tha...
jaha chote se akshar mein likha tha
SR

Mein wapas aagaya......socha ki kaun ho sakta hai.....aur sign ka photo click karke shalaka ko bhej diya.......

vichar aaya....yeh kya ho raha hai ...uss ladki ko heal karna chahta tha nahi kar paaya.....iss anjane dushman tak pahunchna chahta hu lekin nahi pahunch paa raha hu......
sign dekhkar kuch kuch toh shak hua
lekin......phir socha yeh kaise ho sakta hai.......

aaj ki iss hadse k kaaran Abhi addu ko uss ladki tak nahi le jaa paaya....

socha ki kal dekhte hai.....

muzhe nind nahi aarahi thi socha kya karu......tabhi Rimpy ka khayal aaya toh thodi der ussase baatein ki.....

phir bhi mann ashant tha.....ki locket chamakne laga......

mein - sorry jaan aaj k iss vyastata mein tumse baat karna hi bhul gaya...
aaj mera mann bada ashant hai....
kash tum yaha aasakti.....

tabhi wah ek roshni pragat hui.....
aur ussmein se nikli meri pyari Shivali

woh kuch bolne hi wali thi....k maine addu ki taraf ishara karke chup karaya aur usse lekar teleport hokar chat par chala gaya......

Chat par pahunchte hi ...

Shivali - kya hua jaan ..kyu itne pareshan ho......

mein - kya tumhe nahi pata.....tumahara toh mann is locket se juda hua hai na....

Shivali - muzhe sab pata hai......lekin aap kyu bhool jaate ho ki aap is shrusti k maharakshak ho......
aisi badhaye toh aapke saamne aati hi rahegi.......aur bhavishya mein toh ...

Mein - kya bahvisya mein.....batao

Shivali - abhi nahi jaan.....muzhe kshama karna......

mein - kya tum muzhe prem nahi karti

Shivali - aisi baat mat karo jaan .....tumahare liya toh mera saara jeewan samarpit hai.......paratu Baba ne tumahri kasam dekar batane se mana kiya hai......bas itna hi bata sakti hu k bhavisya mein aane wale sanket se kewal ...tumhe sansar ki nashvarta ka gyan hi bacha sakta hai

mein - thik hai tum ab jaao .....aur mein mud gaya......

ussne piche se muzhe baahi mein bhar liya.....aise toh naraj na ho jasn nahi toh mein jee nahi paaungi...aur usski aankon se aansoo behne lage jinhe maine apni pith par mehsus kiye

mein palta aur usska chehra pakad kar usdke aansoo ka pine laga...

mein - jaan mein tumse kabhi naraj nahi ho sakta......woh toh bas aise hi

aur meine apne honth usske hontho par rakh diye aur chumne laga , iss chumban mein sirf pyar tha vasna ka lesh maatra bhi nahi tha.....

thodi der aise hi hum ek dusre ki baaho mein the......meri saari pareshani usske pyar ne har li thi.....

Shivali - Jaan ab humare milan ka samay aane wala hai ....abhi 15 din baad Aanewali Shivraatri par humara vivah hoga......

phir woh chali gayi....aur mein bhi apne room mein aakar so gaya tha

Dusre din urhkar maine aoni daily routine puri ki......Abhi bf ready nahi hua tha toh socha Dad se mil lu

Dad , mom aur didu hall mein baithkar news dekh rahe the....ussmein viral videos k upar programme aa raha tha....

News reader - ab aap agla video dekhe
ek hi raat mein yeh video poore world mein fail gaya hai.....

deko kaise ek Rahasymayi insan ne teji se aate truck k parkhache uda dite aur do ladkiyo ko bachaya.....

phir kal wale hadse ka video chala...


Dad aur mom meri taraf dekhne lage

tabhi news reader - Kya jiss Sangharak k nasm se poora underworld kaanpte hai....yeh wahi hai yaa koi aur........123 is number par sms karke baataye......har news ki poori khabar dikhayega humara channel.....

Dad - Beta yeh sab kya hai itna kuch ho gaya aur tumne hume bataya nahi

Di - Dad meine hi betu ko mana kiya tha batane k liye.......socha aap pareshan ho jaaoge.......

Dad - beta mere liye meri pareshani se jyada tum sab important ho....

Tab tak bf aagaya tha.....Addu aur Deepu bhi niche aagaye the.....

Dad ne call karke family ki security ko aur bada diya aur di Deepu aur Addu ko kisi anjan se milne k liye mana kiya

maine pahele hi subah uthte hi sabko apne shakti trishul ki shield se surakshit kar diya tha....

Tab tak Rimpy aagayi .....aur hum chal diye college......

Clollege mein aaj bhi daily ki tarah practice hui......aur kuch padai....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....agla update kal

Readers k liye -
kya aap mein se koi bata sakta hai ki woh anjan dushman kaun hai.....


aur ab tak ki kahani mein Abhi k honewali patniyo mein se kitno ka jikar hua hai......
Kahin woh anjaan dushman MLA hi toh nahin na jise mara hua samajhkar phenk diya gaya?
 

Radhe

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Update - 55

ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi Ritu..Addu...Deepu....k saath ghumne jaata hai.....
waha Ritu aur addu ko kisi adhed k saath baat karte hue dekhta hai....
aur ek rahasymai vyakti ka ph
Ritu aur addu ki taraf truck tezi
se aana.....

aur ab aage........



Jaise hi truck ekdum kareeb aaya Ritu aur addu ko rondne hi wala tha
ki.......dhadammm............

ek bhayankar aawaj k saath uss truck k saamne k parkhache ud gaya aur bhayabkar takkar se dhua utha.....

uss bhayankar aawaj se Ritu aur Shalu par jo kisi ne Sammohan kiya tha woh tut gaya......jaise hi dono ko hosh aaya
Dar kaare dono ek dusre ko chipak gaye......sab ka dhyan iss aur gaya..
aur jab dhua hata....toh waha khada tha Sangharak (RVS ne ab apni powers bhi abhi ko dedi thi, aur ab Abhi tha Sangharak)

logo ne Sangharak ka naam bahut suna tha........waha logo ki bhid ikatthi ho gayi thi........

Tabhi saamne aaya.....aur Ritu se aawaj badal kar.....Aap thik toh ho na
kahi kuch chot toh nahi aayi......

Ritu ki ghabrahat k kaaran aawaj hi nahi nikal rahi thi ....fir bhi.....himmat juta kar......k...kkkkan ...h..oo....tum

Abhi - Main hu Apridhiyo k liye maut
jo muzhe Sangharak k naam se jaante hai....

jaise hi kuch logo ne naam suna toh waha logo mein kusur phusar hone lagi ....kuch log naare lagane lage
Sangharak...Sangharak...

aur Abhi teleport hokar normal dress mein bhid k picche aagaya....aur daud kar Ritu aur Addu ko gale laga liya..

Abhi - Dii maine kitni aawaje lagayi lekin aapne toh meri aawaj suni hi nahi....yadi aapko kuch ho jaata toh...
mein....bhi nahi rahta.....

Ritu - Rote hue.....pata nahi bhai bas muzhe itna yaad hai mein kisi se baat kar rahi thi uske baad kya hua....muzhe kuch bhi nahi pata....aut jab hosh aaya....toh mein yaha thi....

Addu - Bhai jaldi se chalo yaha par....
muzhe bahut dar lag raha hai....

Mein - Na ....gudiya darte nahi....mein hu..na.......abhi ne usse gale lagaya aur sir par haath pherne laga.....
usske baad.....Restaurent se Deepu ko liya aur ghar ki aur nikal gaye....

Car mein baithe baithe sochne laga
ki aaj ka din hi kuch ajeeb tha....

pahele woh ladki....phir woh naag...aur ......ab yeh haadsa

Tabhi abhi ko ph bajne laga toh dekha ussi Unknown nu se call aarahi hai...

Abhi iss samay call nahi utha sakta tha......lekin krodh ki wajah se uski aankhien laa ho gayi.....

Addu gadi mein bhi addu ko pakad kar baithi thi......

Ritu di gumsum si baithi thi ....Deepu ko toh kuch pata nahi tha...

aise hi hum ghar pahunche......aur apne Room mein chale gaye.....Addu mere hi saath thi....mom ko humne bata diya tha ko bahar se hi kha kar aaye hai.......

Addu mere paas hi so gayi thi.....
Maine apni team ko mere cell par aaye hue call ko trace kane k liye kaha

Ab mera cell meri team k saath connected tha......tabhi muze call aayi

Udhar se - ha...ha...ha..Bahut khub Rakshak.....aakhir tune bacha hi liya ...lekin kab tak......

mein - haramjade.....tu ek baar saamne aaja.....phir dekh teri aatma bhi punarjanam lene k liye daregi...

Woh - arrre ..arre...arre..itna gussa..
saamne bhi aaunga....abhi toh shuruwat hai....abhi se ghabra gaye..
ha...ha...ha......

aur call cut ho gayi ....
tabhi shalaka ko call aayi....

sir aapke saath baat karte hue usne 4 location badli......hume samaz nahi aaraha hai yeh ussne kaise kiya....
its impossible....

Mein - woh sab chodo usski aakhri location batao.....

aur mein teleport hokar uss jagah pahuncha ....woh ek gufa thi.....
jab mein ander gaya toh waha....koi nahi tha......jab maine charo taraf dekha toh ek kagaj par kuch likhawat dekhi.......likha tha ......
lets begins the race....Rakshak....

Apradhi kitna bhi shatir ho lekin koi clue chod hi deta hai........

niche galti se ussne sign kiye tha...
jaha chote se akshar mein likha tha
SR

Mein wapas aagaya......socha ki kaun ho sakta hai.....aur sign ka photo click karke shalaka ko bhej diya.......

vichar aaya....yeh kya ho raha hai ...uss ladki ko heal karna chahta tha nahi kar paaya.....iss anjane dushman tak pahunchna chahta hu lekin nahi pahunch paa raha hu......
sign dekhkar kuch kuch toh shak hua
lekin......phir socha yeh kaise ho sakta hai.......

aaj ki iss hadse k kaaran Abhi addu ko uss ladki tak nahi le jaa paaya....

socha ki kal dekhte hai.....

muzhe nind nahi aarahi thi socha kya karu......tabhi Rimpy ka khayal aaya toh thodi der ussase baatein ki.....

phir bhi mann ashant tha.....ki locket chamakne laga......

mein - sorry jaan aaj k iss vyastata mein tumse baat karna hi bhul gaya...
aaj mera mann bada ashant hai....
kash tum yaha aasakti.....

tabhi wah ek roshni pragat hui.....
aur ussmein se nikli meri pyari Shivali

woh kuch bolne hi wali thi....k maine addu ki taraf ishara karke chup karaya aur usse lekar teleport hokar chat par chala gaya......

Chat par pahunchte hi ...

Shivali - kya hua jaan ..kyu itne pareshan ho......

mein - kya tumhe nahi pata.....tumahara toh mann is locket se juda hua hai na....

Shivali - muzhe sab pata hai......lekin aap kyu bhool jaate ho ki aap is shrusti k maharakshak ho......
aisi badhaye toh aapke saamne aati hi rahegi.......aur bhavishya mein toh ...

Mein - kya bahvisya mein.....batao

Shivali - abhi nahi jaan.....muzhe kshama karna......

mein - kya tum muzhe prem nahi karti

Shivali - aisi baat mat karo jaan .....tumahare liya toh mera saara jeewan samarpit hai.......paratu Baba ne tumahri kasam dekar batane se mana kiya hai......bas itna hi bata sakti hu k bhavisya mein aane wale sanket se kewal ...tumhe sansar ki nashvarta ka gyan hi bacha sakta hai

mein - thik hai tum ab jaao .....aur mein mud gaya......

ussne piche se muzhe baahi mein bhar liya.....aise toh naraj na ho jasn nahi toh mein jee nahi paaungi...aur usski aankon se aansoo behne lage jinhe maine apni pith par mehsus kiye

mein palta aur usska chehra pakad kar usdke aansoo ka pine laga...

mein - jaan mein tumse kabhi naraj nahi ho sakta......woh toh bas aise hi

aur meine apne honth usske hontho par rakh diye aur chumne laga , iss chumban mein sirf pyar tha vasna ka lesh maatra bhi nahi tha.....

thodi der aise hi hum ek dusre ki baaho mein the......meri saari pareshani usske pyar ne har li thi.....

Shivali - Jaan ab humare milan ka samay aane wala hai ....abhi 15 din baad Aanewali Shivraatri par humara vivah hoga......

phir woh chali gayi....aur mein bhi apne room mein aakar so gaya tha

Dusre din urhkar maine aoni daily routine puri ki......Abhi bf ready nahi hua tha toh socha Dad se mil lu

Dad , mom aur didu hall mein baithkar news dekh rahe the....ussmein viral videos k upar programme aa raha tha....

News reader - ab aap agla video dekhe
ek hi raat mein yeh video poore world mein fail gaya hai.....

deko kaise ek Rahasymayi insan ne teji se aate truck k parkhache uda dite aur do ladkiyo ko bachaya.....

phir kal wale hadse ka video chala...


Dad aur mom meri taraf dekhne lage

tabhi news reader - Kya jiss Sangharak k nasm se poora underworld kaanpte hai....yeh wahi hai yaa koi aur........123 is number par sms karke baataye......har news ki poori khabar dikhayega humara channel.....

Dad - Beta yeh sab kya hai itna kuch ho gaya aur tumne hume bataya nahi

Di - Dad meine hi betu ko mana kiya tha batane k liye.......socha aap pareshan ho jaaoge.......

Dad - beta mere liye meri pareshani se jyada tum sab important ho....

Tab tak bf aagaya tha.....Addu aur Deepu bhi niche aagaye the.....

Dad ne call karke family ki security ko aur bada diya aur di Deepu aur Addu ko kisi anjan se milne k liye mana kiya

maine pahele hi subah uthte hi sabko apne shakti trishul ki shield se surakshit kar diya tha....


Tab tak Rimpy aagayi .....aur hum chal diye college......

Clollege mein aaj bhi daily ki tarah practice hui......aur kuch padai....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....agla update kal

Readers k liye -
kya aap mein se koi bata sakta hai ki woh anjan dushman kaun hai.....


aur ab tak ki kahani mein Abhi k honewali patniyo mein se kitno ka jikar hua hai......

Ha bata sakta hu abhi ka dushman hai MLA jisko jinda Chod diya tha
Aur abhi ki kul patni ke no hai 8 jinka jikr ho chuka hai
Bhai story man laga ke padh rha hu
Abhi 4 prithvi par hai ek saitan ki beti ke nag lok ki rajkumari ek uske sath sikcha li thi ek kuber lok me hai
 

Black water

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Awesome update bhai kihin ye naaglok ke senapati to nahin.lekin ye ladki koun hai sayad ye naaglok ke rajkumari hai
 

abhi1008

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ab tak aapne dekha.....Abhi ko rahsyamay dushman ka ek clue mila..........Abhi ke udvighna Mann ko shivali ne shaant kar diya tha..........

ab aage..........

Abhi ne Shakti trishool se banayi shield dwara apne pariwar aur apne ghar ko surakshit kar diya tha......isisliye ek Gufa mein baithe.....Vichtra se dikhne wale aadhe manav aur aadhe k saath
woh anjana dushman......jisne kaala chonga pehna hua tha......jissase unska muh nahi dikh raha tha ....Apne saamne rakhe Crystal k gole ko ghur kar dekh raha tha......kaha gaya tu Rakshak......

yeh kaise possible hai.......nahiiii mere malik ki shaktiya apaar hai........tuzhe nahi chodunga Rakshak........
jaise tune muzhe mere apne ki maut k aag mein jalaya hai.....waise hi ab main bhi tuzhe woh dard dunga .....jissase ....tu tadapta rahega...........ha....ha...ha......


sammne jal rahi aag mein ussne .....ek katore mein bhare kisi insaan k taaze khoon ki aahuti di..........
Aur agni aur bhadak uthi......aur uss prakash mein chamak utha MLA Sudhakar ka chehra.......

ab sawal yeh aata hai ki issne itni shakti kaha se haasil ki ........
toh dekhte hai chota sa flashback.......
Darasal jab MLA ko mara samazhkar ...Abhi ki team ne usse jungal mein uss chod aaye jaha pahle bhi kai apradhiyo ki laasho ko thikane lagane k liye laaya jaata tha.........waha.....

Mayasur k drug se ....jo ...insaan ajeeb se jeevo mein badal gaye the woh issi jungal mein ek gufa mein rahte the iss jagah ko , Mayasur ne aise band diya tha ki koi jeev bina kisi shaitan k Pujari ki aagya k bina bahar na jaa sake.......MS k jaane k baad woh jeev yahi bandhkar yeh gaye....yaha fenki hui laasho ko aur jungli janwaro ko khakar ....apni bhuk mitane lage.....

Jab MLA apni maut k bahut kareeb tha...toh raat ko wahi jeev yaha aaye.....aur jaise hi woh usse khane k liye aage bade......toh unke leader ko MLA ki body mein kuch hulchal , aur usske shari mein bahut maatra mein negative energy mehsus ki........

jisse dekhkar un jeevo ka leader bahut khush hua .....usse MLA mein yaha k bandhan se aazadi nazar aane lagi.....
phir ussne MLA ki body ko le jaakar...gufa k ander MS k dwara sthapit ek Kaale patther par chod diya.......uss samay MLA khoon se sana hua tha......
MLA ke khoon se woh patthar san gaya aur ussmein se ek kaale rang ki urja nikli ....aur MLA k body mein sama gayi.......kuch hi der mein woh ekdum thik hua .........
aur aawaj aayi .......Eblis ki.......

aur issi gufa mein apna badla lene k liye Eblis ki sadhna karte hue powers haasil ki........


Yaha Abhi apni team k saath baitha tha ......
Shalaka - sir Aapne jo sign ki ..pic bheji thi woh pata chal gaya hai kiski hai .......humne ajj tak jiss bhi gang ka safaya kiya.....usske saare leaders ki writing humne kahi na kahi se nikali aur uss Sign se match kiya........and the resiut is shocking.....

Abhi - muzhe pata hai....k...Woh MLA SUDHAKAR ka sign hai,

Arnold - Lekin sir ...how is this possible...........woh toh mar gaya tha......aur jaise ki aapne bataya....ki usske paas kuch special powers hai...
agar woh MLA hi hai toh usske paas powers aayi kaha se......

Abhi - woh toh mein pata kar hi lunga.......lekin iss baar usse aisi maut milegi k dekhne walo ki ruh kaanp jaayegi.........

Phir abhi ne Control room mein baithkar saare shahr ki gatividhio ko dekhne laga.......Jab se RVS ne apni shaktiyan aur Sangharak k saare adhikar Abhi ko diye tab se Ghar k nicche basement mein bane control Room ab Abhi aur usski team hi dekhti thi.......

Shalaka - Sir Shahar mein ek koi E company naam se koi Company aayi hai........aur aate hi ussne.......yaha ki bahut saari choti ...moti companies kharidi......

Aur saath hi xyz college bhi kharid liya hai....

Abhi - kya kuch illigel activities ka pata chala

Shalaka - nahi sir.....sab kuch normal hai.....aur toh ussne aspke dwara chalaye jaa rahe anath aashram ......aur Nari niketan mein sab mein koi total 100cr diye hai.....
humne pata karne ki koshish ki ....Lekin ab tak hume iss E company k Owner k baare mein pata nahi chala........

usski baatien Sunkar ....jaane kyu Abhi k chehre par muskurahat aagayi.......

Abhi basement se nikalkar ...ghar aagaya...aur Addu k room mein chala gaya....


Addu abhi k diya teddy ko pakad kar baithi thi.......

Abhi - kya kar rahi ho gudiya......

Addu - arre bhai aap......maine toh dekga hi nahi.....

Abhi - usske sir par pyar se haath pherte hue......aise kya soch raha hai mera baccha....jo mere ander aane ki bhi khabar nahi hui........

Addu - bhai agar mein maar jaati toh.....

Abhi -- Adduuuu....chup kar beta aisa nahi bolte.....

Addu - Nahi bhai ....muzhe bahut dar lag raha hai.......

Mein - Addu .....accha tuzhe woh yaad hai.......
jisne ussdin tumhe bachaya tha ....kya naam tha usska...
sssss...saang...kya

Addu - haste hue......bhai.......Sangharak.....
aur bhai woh kitna power ful hai......kaise ek punch mein ...truck ko tod diya tha.....aur usske paas magic bhi hai....kaise gayab ho gaya tha......
bhai.....lagta hai woh koi ....Super Hero....hai...

mein - accha gudiya milegi Ussi Super Hero se.......

Addu - haa ..lekin yaha kaha hai bhai Super Hero....

mein - pahle tu apni aankhien band kar....
phir Addu ne apni aankhien band kar di
aur Abhi apne sangharak roop mein aagaya.....

mein - Gudiya ab aankhien kholo
Jab ussne aankien kholi toh hairan hui

Addu - bhai aap kaha ho.....

Mein - Gudiya mein hi Sangharak hu....

Addu - Arre bhai wah.....aap toh Super hero ho......ab mein nahi darungi bhai...
mein dono baahe failakar.....aaja meri gudiya...
aur Addu ko maine gale laga liya......
mere iss roop ko dekhkar ab usske andar ka saara dar dur hogaya .....

mein - Gudiya mere saath
chalogi......tumhe ek didi se milana...hai.......

Addu - kaun hai bhai woh.....
mein - Gudiya woh bahut bimar hai ...hume usse milne jaana hai

Phir mein Addu ko lekar hospital ki chat par teleport ho gaya...

Addu - arre wah bhai aapke pass toh sachmuch ka magic hai....hum ghar se sidha yaha aagaye ...

mein - gudiya lekin yeh baat top secret hai ...promise karo tum kisi ko nahi bataogi....

Addu - promise bhai.....

phir hum chal diye ussi room k oor jaha woh ladki admit thi ...jo muzhe jakhmi haalat mein talab par mili thi......
iss samay doctor usska check up kar rahe the...

mein - Sir...kya..kuch....sudhar..
aaya.....

doc - hum apni poori koshish kar rahe hai.....

abhi mein inki blood report hi dekh raha tha....hairan karne wali baat hai , ki inka blood aam insano jaisa nahi hai.......aur kaun se group ka hai yeh bhi pata nahi chal raha hai.......

maine socha ab yeh doc bawal machayega....

toh usski memory mein se saari baatien maine hata di....
phir dr chala gaya......

ab addu aur mein usske bed k paas gaye..

Addu - Bhai innko kya hua hai......

mein - betu tum hi inka haath pakad kar puch lo

toh addu ne jaise hi usska haath pakda...ek urja si maine addu k sharir se nikalkar uss ladki k ander jaate hue maine mehsus ki.....

usski body mein hulchal shuru ho gayi
aur usski aankhien khul gayi.....
aankhien khulte hi woh idhar udhar dekhne lagi.....

usski neeli aankhon mein jaane kaisi kashish thi....

ki na jaane kyu mein ussmein khota chala gaya....
jab usski nazar Addu padi......

Addu - arre dekho na bhai innko hosh aagaya......
didi aap kaun hai aur aapko kya hua....

ladki - mein....meinn...kaun hu......aur yaha

Addu - bhai inhe toh kuvh bhi yaad nahi hai...
jab uss ladki ne meri taraf dekha toh usski aankhon mein aansoo aagaye...aur zhatke se uthkar mere gale lag kar roti rahi ......aur rote rote behosh ho gayi...

phir mein addu aur uss ladki ko lekar ghar k ek room mein teleport ho gaya......

ussko waha bed par litaya.....woh Addu ki pranshakti se bilkul thi thi bas kuch maansik pida k kaaran behosh ho gayi thi.......

Addu thodi der muzhse baatein karke apne room mein chali gayi

aur meine niche aakar Mom Dad ko saari baatein batayi....
dono jaakar uss ladki ko dekh aaye.....

Ritu di ghar par nahi thi.....woh nariniketan k kuch kaamo mein busy thi........

Phir aaya ek naya savera.......phir subah routine k baad mein dhyan mein baitha

jaise jaise dhyan gahra hota gaya......7 chakro ki urja muzhe dikhne lagi.......aur dikhi kundalini shakti jo do muh wale sarp ki tarah....

Mooladhar chakra k niche hamari 3 mukhya nadi
IDAA.....PINGALA....AUR SHUSHMANA

kundali shakti Shushmana naadi k dwar par saade teen phere lekar baithi hoti hai.....
isske jagrit hone par vyakti anant shaktiyon ka swami ho jaata hai.....

Aaj achank Sarp shakti kundli ka darshan kar k , mein apne ander aur jyada shakti aur urja ko mehsus karne laga.....

Dhyan mein muzhe mahaguru ki aawaj aayi...

Putra ab samay aagaya hai , tumahare 14 loko ki shaktiyo ko prapt karne ka...

isski shuruwat .....Bhuvalok k yakshya lok se hogi...

dhyan k baad mein ek baar phir uss ladki k room mein gaya

woh abhi so rahi thi .....uska maasum chera dekhkar jaane kyu aisa lag raha tha ki mera issase koi gahara sambandh hai......


usske baad Rimpy k saath masti karte hue College gaya.......

abhi k liye itna hi ---
agla update jald hi.......
 

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Nice update bhai or shayad SR ka matlab shayad senapati rasatal (vishakh) ho or abhi ki hone wali 5 bivi he unka name shivali shalu sulekha rimpy or last wali shayad asurraj kalasur ki sabse chhoti beti jiska name me bhul gaya hu waiting for next update
Suberb , shaaandar awesome Review bhai :applause: :applause::applause:
aapke support k liye bahut bahut thanks bhai :thanks::thanks:

bilkul sahi bhai....paancho wahi hai...
KS ki ladki ka naam Madalsa....
aur anjan dushman k baare mein ..
latest update mein pata chalega....

bas aise hi saath banaye rakhe.....
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