Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Naina]

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[abhi1008]

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[Vickey1211]

Update - 16

ab tak aapne A1 ----- ki shiksha dekhi maha guru k
aashram mein....aur Shalini...
ka saath.......C.T aur rakesh ki dosti......Aur Uday k saath
nok - jhonk ....inn sab paatro ko yaap rakhe yeh kahani mein aham bhumika mein hai.....

ab A1 ko apni traning karne dete hai.... dekhte hai udhar Rana mahal mein jo Abhi hai waha kya chal rah hai..

Janamdin k utsav k baad R.V.S Ritu ko lekar sahar chale gaye the aur yaha Abhi aur naina rah gaye the gaon ke Rana mahal mein.

Abhi ko gaon k shudh vatavaran aur harliyali , waha k logo ka saadgi se bhara jeewan bahut accha lag raha tha .....Lekin apni pyari Ritu di ki kami bahut khali thi....
Gaon mein Abhi k dadaji R.S.S kushti k bade shaukin the Toh abhi ko abhi apne saath kushti k aakhade le jaate the aur kasrat karwate the.....Abhi ko yeh ladna khushti waigere pasand nahi thi ..isiliye woh bahane bannane ki koshish karta tha lekin dadaji k aage uski ek nahi chalti thi ...

R.S.S ko Abhi ko lekar badi chinta hoti thi ki kaise woh virasat mein milne wali shaktiyo ko sambhalega....
R.S.S Abhi k sach se anjan the...
Apne bete R.V.S k gaddi par baithne k baad unhone apni shaktiya sankalp karke tyag di thi aur sadharan jeewan jina swikar kiya tha

aise hi ek din jab woh apne farmhouse gaye the Abhi ko lekar..... aur waha kheti kaam kane wale majduro ki samsya sun rahe the the ...ki tabhi

waha bane Ghode k astabal mein ek bada sa kala Ghoda Bekaabu ho gaya tha... astabal k ki rassiya aur bandhan usko rok nahi paa rahe tha......abhi bhi waha paas mein ghum raha tha....5 -5
log milkar bhi usse nahi sambhal paa rahe the ...kisi ne R.S.S ko khabar kar di ..R.S.S abhi paahunchte isse pahele ghode ne saare bandhan tod diye aur Daud laga di ...wahi Jab Abhi ne dekha k bada sa ghoda uski taraf hi bade veg se aaraha hai toh woh bahut dar gaya aur apna haath aage kar diya

Tab tak Abhi k dada bhi waha pahunch gaye aur unhone Abhi k haath se blue colour ki urja nikal te hue dekhi jo uss Kaale ghode ko chute hi woh shaant ho gaya

yeh Dekhkar R.S.S k mann mein Abhi ko lekar jitni chintaye thi sab samapt ho gayi

(kabhi kabhi bhay ki adhikta k kaaran humare ander chippi hui shakti bahar aati hai)

R.S.S - Beta Abhi aapni aankhein toh kholo bete Dekho kitna sunder ghoda hai

Abhi - nahi Dadu muzhe dar lag raha hai ..yeh toh bahut bada ghoda hai
tabhi Abhi ko apne haatho par kuch gila gila sa mahsus hota hai .....

jab woh aankhien kholkar dekhta hai toh ghoda shant khada tha aur usska haath chat raha tha...

Abhi - chi ...chi dekho na dadaji issne mera haath ganda kar diya

R.S.S - beta yeh tumse dosti karna chahta hai ...isska naam VAAYU hai
kya tum dosti karoge isse...

Abhi - Sach dadu kya yeh muzhse dosti karega....

Dadu - haa beta ..tum ek baar isska naam pukar kar toh dekho

Abhi -- Vyaau kya tum muzhe dosti karoge...
Ghode ne bhi hinhinakar jawab diya

ab abhi ussi Ghode vyaau par baithkar gaon ghumne laga...posts

Naina ka garb ab 9 mahine ka ho gaya tha ..ab kabhi bhi baccha ho sakta hai isiliye R.V.S bhi Ritu k saath gaon aagaya tha .....apni Ritu di se milkar bahut khush ho gaya ...
aise hi Naina ne ek bahut sunder kanya ko janam diya .......
ek baar phir Mahal khushiyon se jagmagane laga......sab bahut khush the......Abhi toh jaise uss nahi pari ko dekhkar sab kuch mil gaya tha......
kyu na ho Abhi k Pran aur pranshakti Mahaguru ne iss kanya mein jo daali thi. jaise kisi jaadugar k pran kissi chidiya mein rakh diye jaate the waise hi...
( pran shakti matlab jab krodh aaye toh kissi k bhi pran sokh le aur jab daya aaye toh kissi bhi rog ko pal bhar mein thik kar de --- healing power)

Ab Abhi wapas city mein aagaya tha

R.V.S ne Abhi ka admission Ritu k hi School mein karvaya...

yeh R.V.S dwara banaya gaya school
hai .....yaha har tarah ki education hoti hai , yeh ek bahut bade area mein faila hua hai, Jaha bahut saare section hai

R.V.S Kidz zhone, RVS Vidya mandir
R.V.S Institute for higher studies
R.V.S - institute of science & technology

aaj Abhi ka school mein pahla din tha
Abhi ka admission first standerd mein hua tha.
School ka pahla din New uniform aur itne saare bacche dekhkar Abhi bahut khush ho gaya tha.......Ritu ne abhi ko usske class tak choda..

Ritu di - Betu yeh rahi tumahari class yaha sb tumahare dost hai , ghabrana nahi ...aur haa lunch time mein main aaungi hum saath mein lunch karenge

itna kahkar mein class k andaar chala gaya toh dekha sabhi jagah full hai

sirf last bench par jagah khali hai jaha ek dubla patla sa ladka baitha tha....mein waha jaakar baith gaya

maine apna haath aage kiya ...
haaye mein Abhi kya tum muzhse dosti karoge ... mere aisa kahne par ussne meri taraf dekha toh usski aankon mein aansun the

mein - arre ...arre...arre aise rote kyu ho agar dosti nahi karni toh koi baat nahi.

ladka - nahi aisi koi baat nahi yaha aaya tab se sab muzhe chida rahe hai
ek tum hi ho jisne muzh se acche se baat ki ....mera naam Bhanu hai....
friends...

tabhi class mein hulchul hui...aur sabhi khade ho gaye ...toh mein bhi
ho gaya
ek madam jo dikhne mein bahut strict lag rahi thi

Madam - Sitdown all of you, My name is Savalani and i am your class teacher...... and now my little students give your introduction one by one

Sabhi apna apna intro de rahe the
Toh maine bhi Apna naam bata diya
ab baari aayi Bhanu ki toh woh bhi khada ho gaya

Madam - hey you... tum bina uniform k kaise aagaye ...pata nahi kaha kaha se aate hai......kal apne parents ko laana uniform k saath nahi toh nahi aana...

madam baato se Bhanu ki aakhon mein aansoo aagaye, aur muzhe bhi bahut bura laga....

aise hi lunch time aagaya aur didu lunch k liye muzhe lene aagayi..

mein - chalo bhanu tum bhi chalo na saath
bhanu - nahi muzhe bhukh nahi hai tum jaao
mein - agar tum nahi jaaoge toh mein bhi nahi jaaunga
bhanu - thik hai phir chalte hai
didu k saath hum canteen pahuch gaye , waha didu ne order diya ..tab tak maine aaj class mein kya hua sab bata diya ...

didi - kyu Bhanu tumne Uniform kyu nahi pehni

Bhanu - di mere papa nahi hai aur maa gharo mein kaam karke apna ghar chalati hai , woh bhi chati hai k mein kaabil bannu ...isiliye unhone mera admission yaha karwaya

Admission toh free mein ho gaya lekin humare paas uniform k paise nahi hai

Di ko uski baatien snkar bahut bura laga toh di ne ussi samay papa ko school bulaya....jab Rana sahab ne pucha toh di ne kaha

di - papa aapne garibo k liye free education toh kar di , lekin unke unifrom ka aur khanne k baare mein nahi socha ....mein chahti hu ki aaj se hi yeh saari facilities provide karni chahiye

R.V.S - muzhe tumpar garv hai beta ki tumhe abhi se apni dusro k dukho ka ahsas ho raha hai .. mein aaj hi Ek meeting fix karke ye saare changes laane ki koshish karunga..

issi tarah pahla din bit gaya .......
aur shuru hua school ka dusra din..

aaj Bhanu muzhe class k bahar hi mil gaya ...naayi Uniform aur naaye bag aur shoes k saath bahut khush lag raha tha, ussne muzhe dekhte ki khushi se gale laga liya..phir hum pahunche class mein aur baith gaye apni jagah ...last bench..

Madam class mein aayi aur sabki attendence lene lagi ki tabhi ek aawaj aayi .....may i come inn madam...toh sabka dhyan uss taraf dekha toh bahut hi cute ladki khadi thi ..

madam - yeh koi time hai aane ka ..kal toh nahi dekha tha tumhe......
new admission lagti ho chalo aajao ..lakin dyan rahe agli baar koi der hua toh mein allow nahi karungi
ander aao aur apna into do ...

Ladki - mam my name iss Rimpy thakur
mam - now go and take your seat

Rimpy ne puri class mein dekha toh siirf mere bagal mein jagah bachhi thi
toh muh fhulakar pair patakte hue aakar baith gayi....gusse se fule hue laal gaal aur badi badi annkien dekhkar muzhe hasee aane lagi....
maine uske taraf dekhkar dheere se kaha ..friends.....toh ussne tirchi aankhon se dekha.... aur ....huhhh ...
kahkar muh ghuma diya....

wahi par kuch students hamari taraf dekhkar kuch khusar fhusar kar rahe the.....unmein ek mota sa ladke tha GOLU jo muzhe baar baar ghur k dekh raha tha....
lunch time mein aaj phir meun aur bhanu di k saath canteen mein the

aur Rimpy .. thodi hi dur par akeli lunch kar rahi thi aur muzhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi ...tabhi golu bhi rimpy k paas aake baith gaya ...
pata nahi unki kya baatein ho rahi thi

aise hi aaj ka din bhi beet gaya....

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi.....

Nice update Bhai
Maza aa gya

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 17

abhi tak aapne Abhi k school ki kuch zhalkiya dekhi...ab aage

Arre abhi tak apne hero ki entry kaise hoti hai school mein woh toh bataya hi nahi...

school k gate k aage teen gadiya aakar rukti hai...jinme se aage aur piche Black Bolero aur centre mein thi Rolls royce phentom

aage aur piche gaadiyo se pahele Gaurds utre aur unme se ek ne
Car ka gate khola aur usme se.....nikli ....Ri.......mpy...arre yeh toh Rimpy k gadyion ka kaafila hai, toh apna hero kaha hai....
in teen gadiyo k piche ek safed Fiet thi jisme hamara hero apni di k saath baitha tha...

Ritu aur Abhi ko jyada dikhawa achha nahi lagta.....nahi toh jinke paas 10 private jet ho unko gaddiyo ki kya kami...
aaj jaldi school pahunch gaye the..
Ritu abhi ko Bhanu k paas chodkar apne class room chali gayi

jaise hi Abhi class room jane laga toh class room k bahar Rimpy ko dekha toh khush ho gaya... aur usse milne k liye aage bada tabhi piche se kisi ne sir par jor se tapli bajaayi.....chatak ...Abhi aage jaise hi girnewala hota hai tabhi ek ladka usse pakad leta hai......
yeh dekhkar Rimpy hasne lagti hai

Rimpy - ae fatichar ...jara dekho toh isse ....jaane kaise kaise yaha muh uthakar chale aate hai......

yeh tapli bajane wala Golu tha waha k under world don ka beta issiliye jyada aakadta tha...

Golu - kyu be kal se dekh raha hu Rimpy se friendship karne k chakkar mein hai.....ab agar aise kiya na toh dekh le...

tabhi jiss ladke ne Abhi ko girne se bachaya (Sameer) yeh waha k
DSP Sudir ka beta hai jo apradhio k liye maut se kam nahi

Sameer - oye mote ...golu sudhar jaa nahi toh tu mera gussa jaanta hai
( isne kai baar golu ki pitayi ki thi)
ab agar dubara tune aise kiya toh dekh le....aao dost tum aaj se mere paas baithna...

Abhi ko dukh Rimpy ki baaton ka tha

Sameer ne apni bench par se do students ko Abhi aur Bhanu ki jagah bitha diya aur sabse aage wali 1st row mein baith gaya.

Rimpy k liye golu ne aage wali seat par jagah 2 row mein jagah banayi ..

aise hi class chalte rahi din bitate daye ab Abhi Bilkul bhi Rimpy ki taraf nahi sekhta tha , Rimpy ko bhi apni galti ka thoda ahsas ho gaya tha...
woh abhi se baat karna chati thi lekin Abhi usse ignore kar deta tha

Yaha R.V.S ne kuch din se apne bete ko khoya khoya dekha toh apni shaktiyo ka istemal karke usske mann mein zhankne ki koshis ki....lekin nahi jaan paaya... Ritu ne bhi bahut baar pucha lekin .....kuch nahi di kahkar
Abhi baat ko taal deta tha......

Lekin jab Abhi apni nanhi Pari Adira k saath hota tha toh sab kuch bhul jaata tha aur bas usske saath khub khelta tha .....Addu bhi aone bhai ko apne paas dekhkar bahut khush hoti thi aur jab tak Abhi usse thapki dekar sula na de tab tak soti nahi thi.....

ek din R.V.S - kya baat hai beta aajkal tum kahs khoye rahte ho

Abhi -- Kuch nahi hua papa.......
(phir kuch sochte hue)..muzhe strong
banna hai ....

Maa - Abhi ko goad mein bithate hue
arre wah mera betu toh ab bada ho gaya hai .....strong banne ga..
phir kya karega betu

Abhi - ( kuch sochte hue).....mein ....mom ...mein na strong bankar bure logo ko punish karunga

maa -- accha betu ....thik hai

Phir R.V.S ne Abhi k liye Ek master appoint kiya jo specially Trained tha Har tarah k fights mein daksh tha
MASTER SANGRAM..
ab shuru hui abhi ki phsyical training aur fight practice.....

ab Abhi ki life bahut busy ho gayi thi.
Subah yoga ,exercise, phir school, phir tution class jo ghar par hi hoti thi aur sham ko martial arts ki traning ...

aise hi Abhi ka yeh saal beet gaya, School mein abhi sirf Sameer aur Raghu se hi baat karta tha......

Rimpy ko Abhi ki yeh ignorance bahut takleef pahuchane lagi ...lekin abhi bhi Raghu ,aur Sameer k alwa aur koi Abhi k baare mein nahi jaanta tha ki yeh school inhi ka hai aur yeh India k top most Business man ka beta hai

aise hi Abhi ka janamdin bhi aaya..
R.V.S ne bahut badi party rakhi..
apne sabhi rishtedaaro ko bulaya ....desh k bade bade logo ko ...netao ko bhi bulaya.....

Pura Abhi Mansion sajaya gaya...
Abhi aaj bahut khush tha gaon se dada dadi jo aaye the .......bua....massi, chaha & family, nana, nani,saare cosins abhi party shuru honewali thi
Maa muzhe party k liye tayar karne k liye aai ... muzhe suit baht pasand aaye tha ...mom ne bataya di ne hi mere liye select kiya hua tha

Black colour ka Jodhpuri suit jisske button k jagah Daimonds lage hue tha aur saath mein rajkumaro wala royal necklace...
jab mein tayar hoke apne aap ko shishe mein dekha toh toh dang rah gaya
Niche guest ka aana shuru ho taya tha
sab ka dhyan tha stage par




jo kuch iss tarah se sajaya tha ...tabhi lights off hui aur stage par bachpan se lekar ab tak ki meri pic ki film chalne lagi ...phir aayi ek awaaj
.....Every one clap your hand .....
here the birthday comes Aur ek focus light muzhe saath lekar stage par aagayi ...Tabhi Gunji meri pyari di ki Aawaj ......Happy birthday to you mere betu .....aur gunja ek gaana
Baar - baar din ye aaye (the famose song for birthday)

Aur saari lights on ho gayi ..tabhi meri nazar saamne gayai jaha do aankhien aisi thi jinn mein aansoo thien...

Cake kata aur shuru hua gifts ka sislia
tabhi papa -- aayiye Home minister sahab yeh mera beya abhi

Hm - Happy birthday beta.....arre beti Rimpy gift do abhi ko....
Arre tumahari aankon mein yeh aansoo kyu hai....

R.V.S - Kya hua beta , kisi ne kuch kaha kya

H.M - Nahi bhai sahab woh baat yeh hai k aaj Rimpy ka bhi birthday hai lekin 3saal pahele ek accident mein issi din iski maa ki death ho gayi thi..
tab se yeh apna birthday nahi manati hai
waise aaj hum kahi jaate bhi nahi lekin aapne bulaya toh nahi taal sake Tabhi mom ne pyar se Rimpy k si r par haath phera

mom- arre beta aise dukhi mat ho dekho aaj se muzhe apni mom hi samzho .....aao mera bachha
Maa k iss tarah pukarne se Rimpy ka rona fut pada aur mom k gale lagkar fut futkar rone lagi...

jaane kyu usska dard dekhkar mera bhi dil ro raha tha ...leikin waha aisa bharri mahol dekhkar muzhe kuch sujzha aur mein bol utha ...

mein - yeh Rondu ladki Rimpu...
rote hi rahegi yaa mera gift bhi dogi

ussne aansoo bhari aankon se meri taraf hairani se dekha... aur gift muzhe diya ....toh maine bhi cake ka ek tukda utha kar usko khliya jisse woh bahut khush ho gayi....lekin cake k saath saath meri ungli bhi kaat li jungli billi kahi ki.....aur phir hasne lagi
aise hui hamari dosti aise hi party celebration chalta raha....aur ab Rimpy bhi hum baccha party mein shamil ho gayi khub dum dhaam k baad party khatam hui toh maine bhi apni ek gold chain Rimpy ko jabardusti birthday gift k roop mein diya.....toh bahut khush hui aur aise hi party khatam hui....

abhi k liye itna hi...
agla update raat ko ....

 

[abhi1008]

Awesome update bhai

Superb update

Lovely update

Nice and interesting update

aap sbhi ka bahut bahut dhnyawad saath bane rahne k liye ....issi tarah saath banaye rakhe...????????

new update 17 posted...

 

[abhi1008]

Awesome update

fantastic update but

Nice update Bhai
Maza aa gya

Bahut bahut shukriya dosto aapke pyar aur saath k liye
?????????

aise hi saath banaye rakhe

new update - 17 posted...

eagerly wating for your most valuable comments & reviews

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice update

 

[Black water]

Super fantastic update bhai