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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

Aapko Kahani kese lag rahi hai...

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abhi1008

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Bahot shaandaar update dost
Tow raat m shalu khaber legi warning deker gayi h
Shiwali mast maza dia ABHI ko bahot mast update dost
Principal pankhe se latka huwa h yahi huwa hoga shayad
Bahot shaandaar update dost
Excellent work brother great update
Keep posting
Waiting your next update
Thank you
Bahot bahot shaandaar update dost
Bahut bahut dhnyawad Naik bhai Aapke iss shandar support aur comment k liye....
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aise hi saath banaye rakhe

Latest update 52 posted....
 

abhi1008

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Nice one bahi maza Aa geya par esi story pori nai likh pata koi bi bech me chur jate ha.
Bahut bahut shukriya bhai aapke shandar comment k liye
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bhai meine apni poori koshish karunga isse poora karne ka....

aise hi saath banaye rakhe..

Latest update 52posted....
 

Vickey1211

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Update - 52

abhi tak aapne dekha Abhi ne MLA k secret adde ko tabah kar diya......aur waha se baccho ko chudaya.....

ab aage......


Abhi ne MLA k dwara bandi banaye baccho ko unke ghar wapas bhejne ka socha......kuch ko toh kidnap karke laaya gaya tha......aur kuch ko unke apno ne garibi se tang aakar bech diya tha.....aage chalkar aise bacche
samaj ki thokro se tang aakar galt raasta apna lete hai.....

Sirf apradhiyo k naash se samaj mein sudhar nahi aayega.......apradh ki pravriti jo paida karne wale kaaran ko jaankar hi samaj mein sudhar ..laaya jaa sakta hai...

Abhi ne Apne dad ko bolkar......
aise bachho k liye ek sanstha kholi...
jaha unke rahene se lekar padhai tak
ki saari suvidhaye thi......

Ab dekhte hai yaha Patal lok mein kya ho raha hai.......

Yaha patal lok mein Kalasur k tap k 18 varsh poore ho gaye the.......

Usske tap sthan par achanak bhayankar aawaaje aane lagi....aur pragat hui.....Asuro ki kul devi.....
Devi Nikumbala.......

Devi - Utho putra ....mein tumahare iss tap se bahut prasanna hu.....
Var maango putra.....

Kalasur (KS) - Maa ....aaj mein bahut khush hu ki muzhe aapke darshan ho gaye........Aapse sirf asuro k uthan k liye .......var prapt karna hai maa..

Shristi k aadikaal se hi hum asuro k saath humesha se bhed bhav hota aaraha hai.........hume dabaya jaa raha hai........Jabki hum Bal...vidya ..aur
tej mein devtao se kuch kam nahi hai

mein yahi chahta hu maa ki ab 14 loko mein hum asuro ka raj ho.....hume hamara adhikar mile......aur isske liye muzhe vo shaki chahiye jo Hamesha hamare kaam mein badha utpanna karnewale Tridev ki Uss putra ...

Jisse Brahamad ka Rakshak kaha jaata hai....Abhi......uska nash kar sake....

Devi - Putra...Jisski tum baat kar rahe ho woh iss bar parashakti ki urja aur shaktiyo k saath utpanna hua hai...

Usse tumhe 14 loko mein jo usski shaktiya hai usse prapt karne se rokna hoga.....aur saath hi saath un loko mein se har mahine ki amvasya ko.....ek kuwari kanya ki bali deni hogi

aur aakhri bali woh hogi jisse tum sansar mein sab se jyada prem karte ho.....

iss trarh jab 14 baliya puri ho jaayegi toh tumhe woh mahashakti prapt hogi
jisse saare 14 lok tumahare adhikar mein aajayege aur Rakshak ki saari shaktiya tumhe prapt ho jaayegi...

aur ho jaayega usska anth....

Aur itna kahkar Devi antardhyan ho gayi......

Ab KS ne Devi ko pranam kiya ....aur chal pada apne mahal......

Apne mahal tak pahuncte pahunchte ussne dekha .....saare asur bas bhog vilas ....aur nashe mein mast ho rahe hai.........asuro ko aise karmhin aur apne udesya se vimuk dekhkar usska Krodh....badne laga.....

jab woh apni sabha mein pahuncha

toh dekha Durmukhasur.....nasshe mein dhut....singhasan par baitha hua hai.....aur asur sundariya.....usski godh mein nagn baithi hui hai....

usse iss baat ka dhyan hi nahi tha k KS waha aagaya hai....

KS - (krodh se) Durmukhasur......

apne pita ki aawaj sunkar woh hadbada kar utha.....lekin nashe ki adhikta k karan niche gir pada....

KS - Kya isiliye mein tumahare bharose tap karne gaya tha.......
meine socha tha tum mere yogya putra ho ...jo .....mere udesya ko pooran karne k liye.....apni poori shakti laga dega.....Lekin tum toh raag rang mein itne magan ho ki Asuro k uttahan k mere maha udesya ko bhi bhul gaya........

aise purta k hone se kya laabh tumahara marna hi uchit hai....

Aur KS ne usse maarne k liye apni talwar pragat hi ki thi ki....

Durmukhasur daud kar usske pairo mein pad gaya....

DSR- kshama kare pitashri.....
kshama kare........maine pura prayatna kiya tha .....aapke udeshya ko pura karne ka......aur Mayasur ko dharti par bhej diya tha......hum bahut had tak safal bhi ho rahe the......

lekin wahi hamara param shatru bich mein aagaya......usske saath yudh mein Mayasur aise ghayal hua ki ab tak achet awastha mein hai.....

Phir DSR ne KS ko saari baatein vistar se batayi.........usske baad humne dharti par bahut baar asuro ko bhejne ka prayatna kiya.......lekin Rakshak k banaye hua kawach k kaaran hum safal nahi hue ......aur iss vajah se humara utsaha bhi jaata raha.....

parantu ab aagye ho.....pitshri ab naye urja k saath hum apne lakshya ki aur agrasar honge......

KS saari baat samaz chuka tha.....
phir woh MS k mahal pahuncha aur apni shaktiyo se usse thik kar diya....

Mayasur ne Asur samrat ko apne saamne dekhkar Pranam kiya.....

KS - Mayasur .....( apne tapobal ki shakti se abhimantrit bhasam usse dete hue) yeh lo aur Aur humare shatru dwara band kiye dwar par dal do.....isse woh kawach hat jaayega aur.....hamare asur phir se dharti aur upar k saato lok jaa sakenge.....

MS bhi chala gaya.....aur Rakshak dwara Tallok se prithvi lok jaane wala marg asuro k liye khol diya tha.....

KS ne iss baat ki bhi hidayat di thi k jab tak woh apne udeshya ko poora na kar le ...tab tak gupt rahe.....jisse Rakshak ko iss baare mein pata na chale.....

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla update jald hi.....
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
 
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