Bahot khub writer sahab.. flow achhi jaa rahi kahani ki..
Brilliant update nayan ji.... Great going
Sorry vipul bhai,Achchha update tha bhai magar kafi suspens chhode hain ek fight to complete karni chahiye thi aapako it's not fair
Thanku avir bhai,Nice one
bhai Maine aaj se ye ye kahani start ki hai
bahut axi jaa rahi
aise hi apne update samay samay par dete rahiyega
Koi bat nahi bhai magar jab fight adhuri chhodi to thoda bura to laga magar khair chhodiye koi bat nahi kafi exited ho chuka tha fight scenes ko lekarSorry vipul bhai,
aage se dhyaan rakhunga.....
aise hi apna sujhav dete rahiyega......!
Waiting for next update
Waiting for next update,