Fantasy Abhishaap(love+fantasy)

[Nayan]

Nice update bhai

Thanku black water bhai,
keep supporting....?

 

[Nayan]

Nice update ??

Bahot khub writer sahab.. flow achhi jaa rahi kahani ki..
Brilliant update nayan ji.... Great going

Nice one

bhai Maine aaj se ye ye kahani start ki hai
bahut axi jaa rahi
aise hi apne update samay samay par dete rahiyega

Waiting for next update

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

All updates very awesome fantastic soooper lajawab

Waiting for next

New update posted
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Your Nayan
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[Vipul]

Update 18​

pichle update me,

Nisachar or vikram ke bich ladai....Nisachar ne Vikram,Rajkumari or maharaaj, tino ko behosh kar diya,....uske baad usne apne sathiyo ko un tino ko pakar kar le chalne ko kaha....

ab aage,

abhi wo sab thora aage badhe hi the ki devguru ki aawaj un sabhi ke kaano me gunj gayi,

"apne dusman ko itna kamjor nahi samajhna chahiye Nisachar"

ab un sabhi ka dhyaan devguru ki or gaya,janha devguru samanya roop se hi khare the,lakin ab unke sarir se tez sakratmak urza ki tarange nikal rahi thi,ye sab dekh nisachar ne kaha,

Nisachar,

"per mai aisa nahi sonchta devguru,mai usi samay apne satru par aakraman karta hu jab wo ekdam kamzor ho,or mujhe pata hai ki ab aapme wo pahle wali baat nahi rahi"

devguru(muskura kar),

"talwaar kitni bhi purani ho jaye wo rahti to talwaar hi hai"

Nisachar

"haa par agar us talwaar me zankh(rust) na lagi ho,kyoki zankh lagi talwaar kisi kaam ki nahi hoti"

devguru,

"haa par wo zankh lagi talwaar se bhi kisi ke sir par war kar ghayal kiya hi ja sakta hai"

Nisachar,

"haa par marne wale ko dekh lena chahiye ki samne nisachar na ho"
ye kahte hue nisachar aage badhne laga,abtak baki Nisachar ke 8 sathiyo ne bhi devguru ko gherna suru kar diya,phir charo taraf se apni or aate un sabhi ko dekhte hue devguru kahe,

devguru,

"tumhe lagta hai nisachar ki tum mera kuch bigar paaoge"

nisachar apne kadam dhire dhire devguru ki or badhate hue kaha,

Nisachar,

"Mujhe to aapae kuch kaam bhi nahi hai,mujhe to bas rajkumari chahiye,or mai janta hu ki aapke or aapke chalaak dimag ke rahte aaisa mumkin nahi to kyo na aapko bhi kaid kar lu"

Devguru(ascharya se),

"Andhak.....Andhak yanha kya kar raha hai"
unhone nisachar ke piche ki or ishara karte hue kaha...

Andhak la naam sunte hi Nisachar or uske sabhi atho(8) sathi us or ghum kar dekhne lage or satark ho gaye,lakin us or koi nahi tha,Nisachar turant hi sara khel samajh gaya,lakin tabtak der ho chuki thi...devguru ke sath sath Rajkumari ritika,vikram or maharaaj bhi gayab ho chuke the.......

Nisachar ne jaise hi palat kar ye sab dekha,jisse wo gusse me aakar itne jor se chikha ki us awaaj se aisi tarange nikli jo agal bagal ke pero ko jar(root) se ukhar kar gira diya,usne chillate hue hi kaha,

Nisachar,

"Aaaa....h. kabtak...akhir kabtak aap is chalaak dimag se sabko bachate rahiyega,devguru?"

"ekdin sabhi ke kaatunga sir,haa mai hi hu Nisachar"

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idhar maine kuch chan sonchne ke baad faisala liya or chal para us or jidhar wo larki gayi thi,

kuch dur mai idhar udhar dekhte hue chalta raha,raste par koi najar bhi nahi aaraha tha,street lights jal rahi thi,lakin ekdam kup sannata pasra hua tha,road ke kinare me koi ghar bhi nahi dikh raha tha,kuch dukane dikh rahi thi jo ki band thi..

Aage mujhe ek morr dikha,mai wanha se murta usse pahle hi kisi aadmi ke hasne ki awaaj aayi,....mai turant road ke kinare lage chote chote pero ke piche chup gaya,wanha se maine jaise hi jhank kar dekha, samne ka drisya dekhte hi mera pair hath gusse ke wajah se dhire dhire thar-tharane laga,ye darr ke wajah se nahi ho raha tha,asal me ye meri bahut bare problem thi,waise to mujhe gussa aata hi nahi tha,or pata nahi aakhiri baar kab aaya tha,lakin bachpan me bhi mujhe jab bhi kabhi kabar gussa aata to aisa lagta jaise mere sarir se kuch nikalna chah raha hu,ekdam se mera sarir garam hone lag jata tha,or wahi chij mere sath abhi ho raha tha....

samne ka najara hi kuch aisa tha,wo larki dhire dhire piche ke taraf dari sahmi khisakte chali jaa rahi thi,or wo do kaale gende jaise aadmi,vahsi darinde jaise dhire dhire haste hue aage uski taraf badh rahe the,wo larki wanha se bhagne ke liye jaise hi piche muri ki road pe pare pathhar par uska pair par gaya,jiswajah se wo ghumti hui muh ke bal sidha jamin par jaa giri,uske sir se thora khun bhi nikalne laga....

ab mujhse bardast karna muskil ho gaya,or idhar udhar mai kuch dhundhne laga,or wo kahawat sabitho gayi ki aap agar acche kaam karne ja rahe hai to aapki madad bhagwaan bhi karta hai,

wanhi pas me hi mukhe dedh do metre lamba ek danda jhariyo me para mil gaya,mai use uthaya or dhire se undono ke piche khara ho gaya,....itne der me hi maine sonch liya tha ki mujhe pahle kanha marna hai,mere pas do options the,ek to mai sidha dono ke sir par danda bajar du,lakin pata nahi mera man nahi mana...isiliye maine kuch soncha or bina ruke dono ke ghutne me lagataar piche se de dana dan marne laga.....

wanhi ye log dhire dhire aage badh rahe the,lakin jaise hi unke pairo par dande ka komal sparsh hua,wo ekdam se uchalne lage,unme se ek ne dard me hi chikhte hue kaha,

"saale kyo maar raha hai.....aah....koun hai tu?"

mai bina bole lagataar unke pairo ka puja apne agarbaatti rupi dande se kiye jaa raha tha...lakin sabkuch agar aapke sonch ke jaise hi hoga to ye kamini jindgi badnaam nahi ho jayegi,

unme se ek ne himmat karke sidha mere upar challang laga diya...use uske gende jaise bhari bharkam wajan ka fayda mila,mai larkharata hua jamin par jaa gira.....lakin bhagwaan ne use towfe me use hathi jaisa srir diya tha,to wanhi mere andar bhi us kaale gende se juada furti thi....


mai girte hi turant uth gaya,intense mouhol or gusse ke wajah se mujhe girne se jo dard hua use mere sarir ne kanhi daba kar rakh diya.....

lakin ab game badal gaya,janha mai 0 by 100 se jitne me laga tha,wanhi ab match 50-50 ka hogaya....

ham tino amne samne the,janha ektaraf mai dono hatho se danda majbiti se pakre hue attacking position me khara tha,wanhi we log dhire dhire mujhe dono taraf se gherne lage,

lakin is kamini jindgi ne mere muh par thuk phek diya,or iska pata mujhe tab chala jab unme se ek ne apne kamar par se lagbhag 12 inch lambi ke chaaku nikala....

in sabhi ghatnao ke wajah se hamme se koi bhi ye nahi dekh paya ki hamse thori duri par ek jeep aakar khari ho gayi hai,jisme se driving seat par baitha ek saksh lagataar ye sari ghatnaye apni gun reload karte hue dekhe ja raha hai.........


To be continued..........

Bhai update kafi achchha tha maja aa gaya badhake...

 

[Asif khan]

Excellent brilliant fantastic good update

Hamesha ki trha behad shandar soooper lajawab

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

 

[Naina]

Bahot khub nayan ji....
Brilliant update..... extraordinary

 

[Nayan]

Nice update bhai

Thanku black water bhai,
aise hi sath banaye rakhiyega.....?

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[Nayan]

Kya bhai kaha tha na fight puri karna aur kitana suspense rakhoge ab aur ha maya update dene ki jaldi se jaldi kosis karna ab story main aage jane ka time aa chuka hain

Bhai update kafi achchha tha maja aa gaya badhake...

Thanku Vipul bhai,
aapki suspense wali baat par mai ye kahna chahunga ki thori mori to suspense chalti hai na story me warna aaplog agle update ke liye exited nahi rahoge......or rahi jaldi update dene ki baat,to hukm kj tamil hogi

 

[Nayan]

nice update bhai.....wo aadmi koun hai,devguru to ladai chor ke bhag gaye......ye jeep me aadmi koun hai...dekhte hai aage kya hota hai....

Thanku karan bhai,
agle update me us aadmi ke visay me malum chal jayega....
Or rahi baat devguru ke ladai chor kar bhagne ki to ye baat to wo hi jane ki aakhir kyo chor ke bhage ladai.....?
Thanku keep supporting

 

[ashish_1982_in]

nice update bhai