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Nevil singh

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Update 4

yaha me apko kuch naye characters ke intro de deta hu jo is waqt mandir me hain

Surendra- Age 19 hain, smart hain aur padhai me ye bhi Neel ki hi trah hain.

Aadi- age 20 hain sahar kaafi power wala banda hain, dosto ke liye ye kisi ko maar bhi sakta aur mar bhi sakta hain.

Avni- Aadi ki gf aur kuch hi der baad aadi wife bhi. Iski age 21 hain. Bahut sunder ladki hain. Simple ladki hain.

Aarti- iski age 21 hain aur sunder hone sath sath gussa nak pe rahta hain. Kisi par jaldi believe nahi karti hain.

Ginni- inki age 22 hain aur inke pita ji ek doctor hain. Pita ki ladli bitiya hain.

Let start story- (Neel ko writer mein likhega)

Main mandir ke andar pahuch daakhil (enter) ho gaya aur seedha jaake saamne khade sakhs se jor se ek awaaj lagate huwe gale mila jise sunke sab meri taraf mud ke dekhne lag gaye.

bosdeeeeke....

bosdike...

aur is trah gaaliyo ka len den karte dono ek dusre ke gale iss trah lagte hain jaise maano barso bichde ho.
ye dusra ladka jiske me gale mila tha iska ye Surendra tha.

In dono ke is trah ke milne ki ladkiyo ko bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi sath mandap me baithe Aadi ko ye to pata tha ki aise hi uske dono dost gale milenge par ye nahi pata tha ki iska shor itna uncha hoga.


thoda dheere se nahi bol skta tha.... Aadi ne ye man me socha,, idhar maine Surendra se gale milne ke baad aadi se jaakar uske kaan me bola.

badhai ho bhaiye aaj ke baad tere hatho me dard kabhi nahi hoga....

bc dheere dheere bol deta yu mandir me halla chodne ki kya jarurat hain... Aadi ne yahi kaha tha ki Avni ne turant boli..

ye shaadi hone ke baad sabse pahle tumhe hi dekhungi dever ji ko dantne se pahle khud ko dekho yaha mandap me baithe ho aur gaaliyan de rahe ho😡..... Avni ke itna kahne par Neel ki andar khushi ki lahar dhaud gayi aur

Bhaabheee... Maine kaha aur Avni ke aage hath badhaya aur Avni ne bhi apna hath aage badha dono ne hand shake kiya.

lagta hain babhi dever ki team ban gayi hain...

babhi hame bhi apni team me saamil karlo akhir me bhi to apka dever hi hu....itni der inki baate sun rahe sunrendra ne bhi bol hi diya.

ha ha ap aur Neel dono hi mere devar ho hamari team to suru se hi hain...Surendra ke javab me Avni ne kaha.

avni kaise dost hain tere aadi ke itni gandi gaaliya dete hain aur tu inse pyar se baat kar rahi hain.... Suruwaat se ab tak saari baate sun rahi Aarti ab jakar kuch boli.

Dono gaaliya jarur dete hain par isse ye sabeet nahi hota ki ye bure hain aur jaise bhi ho lakin teeno ek dusre ke liye bhai se badhkar hain itna... Avni ne kaha jise sunkar Aarti chup ho jaati hain. Avni aur aadi ki shaadi ho gayi aur ye dono mandir ke bahar aa gaye.

bahar ek cham chamati huwi ek gajab ki gaadi khadi huwi thi



Kya car hain yar... Arti ne kaha

Hmmm... Ginni ne kaha


Ye car aadi ki hain... Surendra ne kaha

Yaar tum dono mere bhai ho jo mera voh tumhara bhi hai... Aadi ne kaha.

chal chal baate band kar aur tum dono niklo aaj tum dono ki suhag raat hain... Surendra ne kaha

Surendra ki baat sunke Avni ki dono saheliya hasne lagi. Aise kuch der baate karne ke baat dono car me baith kar nikal gaye.

aur yaha rah gaye me Surendra aur Avni ki dono saheliya ginni aur Aarti.

aacha to fir chalte hain.. maine kaha

ha jarur... Arti ne kaha aur hamne handshake kiya.

Surendra ne fir ginni se hath milaya. Are hath milaya kya voh to hath se chipak gaya


Shaant gadadhari bheem shant hosh me aayiye... Maine Surendra se kaha aur Surendra ne hadbadahat me jaldi se hath chhod diya..

ab maine me bhi ginni se hath milaya. Jaise hi maine ginni se hath milaya mujhe fir se dark energy feel huwi. Hath milaata hi ginni ke aas pass ajeeb sa ghumte huwe mila jo ko chhoona chahta tha par chhoo nahi pa raha tha saamne Jab us ajeeb se aadmi ko laga ki me trah se kyu dekh raha hu aur jab usne Neel ko dekha to uske paseene aane laga aur bahut jyada dar gaya.

Aouch.. ginni ke mu se nikla

kya kar rahe ho itni jore bhi koi hath milata hain... Ginni ne kaha

sorry mera dhyaan kahi aur tha apki ring kaafi sunder hain..

thank u... Ginni ne kaha aur dono saheliya vaha se chali gayi aur Neel aur Surendra bhi apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye.



kon tha ye jo mujhe dekh pa raha tha aur mujhe isse dar kyu laga... Ginni apni activa se nikal gayi thi aur uske peeche vo ajeeb aadmi baitha yahi soch raha tha ginni is baat se anjaan thi ki koi ajeeb admi uske peeche hi gayab hoke baitha huwa tha.
Laajwaab update dost
 

andyking302

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Update 4

yaha me apko kuch naye characters ke intro de deta hu jo is waqt mandir me hain

Surendra- Age 19 hain, smart hain aur padhai me ye bhi Neel ki hi trah hain.

Aadi- age 20 hain sahar kaafi power wala banda hain, dosto ke liye ye kisi ko maar bhi sakta aur mar bhi sakta hain.

Avni- Aadi ki gf aur kuch hi der baad aadi wife bhi. Iski age 21 hain. Bahut sunder ladki hain. Simple ladki hain.

Aarti- iski age 21 hain aur sunder hone sath sath gussa nak pe rahta hain. Kisi par jaldi believe nahi karti hain.

Ginni- inki age 22 hain aur inke pita ji ek doctor hain. Pita ki ladli bitiya hain.

Let start story- (Neel ko writer mein likhega)

Main mandir ke andar pahuch daakhil (enter) ho gaya aur seedha jaake saamne khade sakhs se jor se ek awaaj lagate huwe gale mila jise sunke sab meri taraf mud ke dekhne lag gaye.

bosdeeeeke....

bosdike...

aur is trah gaaliyo ka len den karte dono ek dusre ke gale iss trah lagte hain jaise maano barso bichde ho.
ye dusra ladka jiske me gale mila tha iska ye Surendra tha.

In dono ke is trah ke milne ki ladkiyo ko bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi sath mandap me baithe Aadi ko ye to pata tha ki aise hi uske dono dost gale milenge par ye nahi pata tha ki iska shor itna uncha hoga.


thoda dheere se nahi bol skta tha.... Aadi ne ye man me socha,, idhar maine Surendra se gale milne ke baad aadi se jaakar uske kaan me bola.

badhai ho bhaiye aaj ke baad tere hatho me dard kabhi nahi hoga....

bc dheere dheere bol deta yu mandir me halla chodne ki kya jarurat hain... Aadi ne yahi kaha tha ki Avni ne turant boli..

ye shaadi hone ke baad sabse pahle tumhe hi dekhungi dever ji ko dantne se pahle khud ko dekho yaha mandap me baithe ho aur gaaliyan de rahe ho😡..... Avni ke itna kahne par Neel ki andar khushi ki lahar dhaud gayi aur

Bhaabheee... Maine kaha aur Avni ke aage hath badhaya aur Avni ne bhi apna hath aage badha dono ne hand shake kiya.

lagta hain babhi dever ki team ban gayi hain...

babhi hame bhi apni team me saamil karlo akhir me bhi to apka dever hi hu....itni der inki baate sun rahe sunrendra ne bhi bol hi diya.

ha ha ap aur Neel dono hi mere devar ho hamari team to suru se hi hain...Surendra ke javab me Avni ne kaha.

avni kaise dost hain tere aadi ke itni gandi gaaliya dete hain aur tu inse pyar se baat kar rahi hain.... Suruwaat se ab tak saari baate sun rahi Aarti ab jakar kuch boli.

Dono gaaliya jarur dete hain par isse ye sabeet nahi hota ki ye bure hain aur jaise bhi ho lakin teeno ek dusre ke liye bhai se badhkar hain itna... Avni ne kaha jise sunkar Aarti chup ho jaati hain. Avni aur aadi ki shaadi ho gayi aur ye dono mandir ke bahar aa gaye.

bahar ek cham chamati huwi ek gajab ki gaadi khadi huwi thi



Kya car hain yar... Arti ne kaha

Hmmm... Ginni ne kaha


Ye car aadi ki hain... Surendra ne kaha

Yaar tum dono mere bhai ho jo mera voh tumhara bhi hai... Aadi ne kaha.

chal chal baate band kar aur tum dono niklo aaj tum dono ki suhag raat hain... Surendra ne kaha

Surendra ki baat sunke Avni ki dono saheliya hasne lagi. Aise kuch der baate karne ke baat dono car me baith kar nikal gaye.

aur yaha rah gaye me Surendra aur Avni ki dono saheliya ginni aur Aarti.

aacha to fir chalte hain.. maine kaha

ha jarur... Arti ne kaha aur hamne handshake kiya.

Surendra ne fir ginni se hath milaya. Are hath milaya kya voh to hath se chipak gaya


Shaant gadadhari bheem shant hosh me aayiye... Maine Surendra se kaha aur Surendra ne hadbadahat me jaldi se hath chhod diya..

ab maine me bhi ginni se hath milaya. Jaise hi maine ginni se hath milaya mujhe fir se dark energy feel huwi. Hath milaata hi ginni ke aas pass ajeeb sa ghumte huwe mila jo ko chhoona chahta tha par chhoo nahi pa raha tha saamne Jab us ajeeb se aadmi ko laga ki me trah se kyu dekh raha hu aur jab usne Neel ko dekha to uske paseene aane laga aur bahut jyada dar gaya.

Aouch.. ginni ke mu se nikla

kya kar rahe ho itni jore bhi koi hath milata hain... Ginni ne kaha

sorry mera dhyaan kahi aur tha apki ring kaafi sunder hain..

thank u... Ginni ne kaha aur dono saheliya vaha se chali gayi aur Neel aur Surendra bhi apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye.



kon tha ye jo mujhe dekh pa raha tha aur mujhe isse dar kyu laga... Ginni apni activa se nikal gayi thi aur uske peeche vo ajeeb aadmi baitha yahi soch raha tha ginni is baat se anjaan thi ki koi ajeeb admi uske peeche hi gayab hoke baitha huwa tha.
शानदार bhai
 

SameerK

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Update 4

yaha me apko kuch naye characters ke intro de deta hu jo is waqt mandir me hain

Surendra- Age 19 hain, smart hain aur padhai me ye bhi Neel ki hi trah hain.

Aadi- age 20 hain sahar kaafi power wala banda hain, dosto ke liye ye kisi ko maar bhi sakta aur mar bhi sakta hain.

Avni- Aadi ki gf aur kuch hi der baad aadi wife bhi. Iski age 21 hain. Bahut sunder ladki hain. Simple ladki hain.

Aarti- iski age 21 hain aur sunder hone sath sath gussa nak pe rahta hain. Kisi par jaldi believe nahi karti hain.

Ginni- inki age 22 hain aur inke pita ji ek doctor hain. Pita ki ladli bitiya hain.

Let start story- (Neel ko writer mein likhega)

Main mandir ke andar pahuch daakhil (enter) ho gaya aur seedha jaake saamne khade sakhs se jor se ek awaaj lagate huwe gale mila jise sunke sab meri taraf mud ke dekhne lag gaye.

bosdeeeeke....

bosdike...

aur is trah gaaliyo ka len den karte dono ek dusre ke gale iss trah lagte hain jaise maano barso bichde ho.
ye dusra ladka jiske me gale mila tha iska ye Surendra tha.

In dono ke is trah ke milne ki ladkiyo ko bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi sath mandap me baithe Aadi ko ye to pata tha ki aise hi uske dono dost gale milenge par ye nahi pata tha ki iska shor itna uncha hoga.


thoda dheere se nahi bol skta tha.... Aadi ne ye man me socha,, idhar maine Surendra se gale milne ke baad aadi se jaakar uske kaan me bola.

badhai ho bhaiye aaj ke baad tere hatho me dard kabhi nahi hoga....

bc dheere dheere bol deta yu mandir me halla chodne ki kya jarurat hain... Aadi ne yahi kaha tha ki Avni ne turant boli..

ye shaadi hone ke baad sabse pahle tumhe hi dekhungi dever ji ko dantne se pahle khud ko dekho yaha mandap me baithe ho aur gaaliyan de rahe ho😡..... Avni ke itna kahne par Neel ki andar khushi ki lahar dhaud gayi aur

Bhaabheee... Maine kaha aur Avni ke aage hath badhaya aur Avni ne bhi apna hath aage badha dono ne hand shake kiya.

lagta hain babhi dever ki team ban gayi hain...

babhi hame bhi apni team me saamil karlo akhir me bhi to apka dever hi hu....itni der inki baate sun rahe sunrendra ne bhi bol hi diya.

ha ha ap aur Neel dono hi mere devar ho hamari team to suru se hi hain...Surendra ke javab me Avni ne kaha.

avni kaise dost hain tere aadi ke itni gandi gaaliya dete hain aur tu inse pyar se baat kar rahi hain.... Suruwaat se ab tak saari baate sun rahi Aarti ab jakar kuch boli.

Dono gaaliya jarur dete hain par isse ye sabeet nahi hota ki ye bure hain aur jaise bhi ho lakin teeno ek dusre ke liye bhai se badhkar hain itna... Avni ne kaha jise sunkar Aarti chup ho jaati hain. Avni aur aadi ki shaadi ho gayi aur ye dono mandir ke bahar aa gaye.

bahar ek cham chamati huwi ek gajab ki gaadi khadi huwi thi



Kya car hain yar... Arti ne kaha

Hmmm... Ginni ne kaha


Ye car aadi ki hain... Surendra ne kaha

Yaar tum dono mere bhai ho jo mera voh tumhara bhi hai... Aadi ne kaha.

chal chal baate band kar aur tum dono niklo aaj tum dono ki suhag raat hain... Surendra ne kaha

Surendra ki baat sunke Avni ki dono saheliya hasne lagi. Aise kuch der baate karne ke baat dono car me baith kar nikal gaye.

aur yaha rah gaye me Surendra aur Avni ki dono saheliya ginni aur Aarti.

aacha to fir chalte hain.. maine kaha

ha jarur... Arti ne kaha aur hamne handshake kiya.

Surendra ne fir ginni se hath milaya. Are hath milaya kya voh to hath se chipak gaya


Shaant gadadhari bheem shant hosh me aayiye... Maine Surendra se kaha aur Surendra ne hadbadahat me jaldi se hath chhod diya..

ab maine me bhi ginni se hath milaya. Jaise hi maine ginni se hath milaya mujhe fir se dark energy feel huwi. Hath milaata hi ginni ke aas pass ajeeb sa ghumte huwe mila jo ko chhoona chahta tha par chhoo nahi pa raha tha saamne Jab us ajeeb se aadmi ko laga ki me trah se kyu dekh raha hu aur jab usne Neel ko dekha to uske paseene aane laga aur bahut jyada dar gaya.

Aouch.. ginni ke mu se nikla

kya kar rahe ho itni jore bhi koi hath milata hain... Ginni ne kaha

sorry mera dhyaan kahi aur tha apki ring kaafi sunder hain..

thank u... Ginni ne kaha aur dono saheliya vaha se chali gayi aur Neel aur Surendra bhi apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye.



kon tha ye jo mujhe dekh pa raha tha aur mujhe isse dar kyu laga... Ginni apni activa se nikal gayi thi aur uske peeche vo ajeeb aadmi baitha yahi soch raha tha ginni is baat se anjaan thi ki koi ajeeb admi uske peeche hi gayab hoke baitha huwa tha.
Jabardast update bhai
 

ragish7357

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Update 4

yaha me apko kuch naye characters ke intro de deta hu jo is waqt mandir me hain

Surendra- Age 19 hain, smart hain aur padhai me ye bhi Neel ki hi trah hain.

Aadi- age 20 hain sahar kaafi power wala banda hain, dosto ke liye ye kisi ko maar bhi sakta aur mar bhi sakta hain.

Avni- Aadi ki gf aur kuch hi der baad aadi wife bhi. Iski age 21 hain. Bahut sunder ladki hain. Simple ladki hain.

Aarti- iski age 21 hain aur sunder hone sath sath gussa nak pe rahta hain. Kisi par jaldi believe nahi karti hain.

Ginni- inki age 22 hain aur inke pita ji ek doctor hain. Pita ki ladli bitiya hain.

Let start story- (Neel ko writer mein likhega)

Main mandir ke andar pahuch daakhil (enter) ho gaya aur seedha jaake saamne khade sakhs se jor se ek awaaj lagate huwe gale mila jise sunke sab meri taraf mud ke dekhne lag gaye.

bosdeeeeke....

bosdike...

aur is trah gaaliyo ka len den karte dono ek dusre ke gale iss trah lagte hain jaise maano barso bichde ho.
ye dusra ladka jiske me gale mila tha iska ye Surendra tha.

In dono ke is trah ke milne ki ladkiyo ko bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi sath mandap me baithe Aadi ko ye to pata tha ki aise hi uske dono dost gale milenge par ye nahi pata tha ki iska shor itna uncha hoga.


thoda dheere se nahi bol skta tha.... Aadi ne ye man me socha,, idhar maine Surendra se gale milne ke baad aadi se jaakar uske kaan me bola.

badhai ho bhaiye aaj ke baad tere hatho me dard kabhi nahi hoga....

bc dheere dheere bol deta yu mandir me halla chodne ki kya jarurat hain... Aadi ne yahi kaha tha ki Avni ne turant boli..

ye shaadi hone ke baad sabse pahle tumhe hi dekhungi dever ji ko dantne se pahle khud ko dekho yaha mandap me baithe ho aur gaaliyan de rahe ho😡..... Avni ke itna kahne par Neel ki andar khushi ki lahar dhaud gayi aur

Bhaabheee... Maine kaha aur Avni ke aage hath badhaya aur Avni ne bhi apna hath aage badha dono ne hand shake kiya.

lagta hain babhi dever ki team ban gayi hain...

babhi hame bhi apni team me saamil karlo akhir me bhi to apka dever hi hu....itni der inki baate sun rahe sunrendra ne bhi bol hi diya.

ha ha ap aur Neel dono hi mere devar ho hamari team to suru se hi hain...Surendra ke javab me Avni ne kaha.

avni kaise dost hain tere aadi ke itni gandi gaaliya dete hain aur tu inse pyar se baat kar rahi hain.... Suruwaat se ab tak saari baate sun rahi Aarti ab jakar kuch boli.

Dono gaaliya jarur dete hain par isse ye sabeet nahi hota ki ye bure hain aur jaise bhi ho lakin teeno ek dusre ke liye bhai se badhkar hain itna... Avni ne kaha jise sunkar Aarti chup ho jaati hain. Avni aur aadi ki shaadi ho gayi aur ye dono mandir ke bahar aa gaye.

bahar ek cham chamati huwi ek gajab ki gaadi khadi huwi thi



Kya car hain yar... Arti ne kaha

Hmmm... Ginni ne kaha


Ye car aadi ki hain... Surendra ne kaha

Yaar tum dono mere bhai ho jo mera voh tumhara bhi hai... Aadi ne kaha.

chal chal baate band kar aur tum dono niklo aaj tum dono ki suhag raat hain... Surendra ne kaha

Surendra ki baat sunke Avni ki dono saheliya hasne lagi. Aise kuch der baate karne ke baat dono car me baith kar nikal gaye.

aur yaha rah gaye me Surendra aur Avni ki dono saheliya ginni aur Aarti.

aacha to fir chalte hain.. maine kaha

ha jarur... Arti ne kaha aur hamne handshake kiya.

Surendra ne fir ginni se hath milaya. Are hath milaya kya voh to hath se chipak gaya


Shaant gadadhari bheem shant hosh me aayiye... Maine Surendra se kaha aur Surendra ne hadbadahat me jaldi se hath chhod diya..

ab maine me bhi ginni se hath milaya. Jaise hi maine ginni se hath milaya mujhe fir se dark energy feel huwi. Hath milaata hi ginni ke aas pass ajeeb sa ghumte huwe mila jo ko chhoona chahta tha par chhoo nahi pa raha tha saamne Jab us ajeeb se aadmi ko laga ki me trah se kyu dekh raha hu aur jab usne Neel ko dekha to uske paseene aane laga aur bahut jyada dar gaya.

Aouch.. ginni ke mu se nikla

kya kar rahe ho itni jore bhi koi hath milata hain... Ginni ne kaha

sorry mera dhyaan kahi aur tha apki ring kaafi sunder hain..

thank u... Ginni ne kaha aur dono saheliya vaha se chali gayi aur Neel aur Surendra bhi apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye.



kon tha ye jo mujhe dekh pa raha tha aur mujhe isse dar kyu laga... Ginni apni activa se nikal gayi thi aur uske peeche vo ajeeb aadmi baitha yahi soch raha tha ginni is baat se anjaan thi ki koi ajeeb admi uske peeche hi gayab hoke baitha huwa tha.
nice update bro
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Introduction
Ye ek gareeb parivaar hain.

Rajendra (Father)- Age 48 hain aur ek majdur. Aur monthly 10 hajar rupees kama lete hain

Kusum- Rajendra ki wife hain aur age 38 hain. Ye ek housewife hain.

Dono hi pade likhe nahi hain par ache log hain.

Neel- ye hamara hero hain. Neel ki age 19 hain aur ye abhi study kar raha hain. Mind me thoda sharp hain aur jyada baat nahi karta lakin dimag bhale hi tej ho. study me iska dimag nahi lagta. Ye sabki kahani hain ap me se kon kon hain jo exam se ek din pahle hi kitaabe khol ke baithta hain ye bhi aisa hi hain.

Nikita- ye Neel ki chhoti bahan hain. Lakin sirf age me ye chhoti hain. Ye Neel ko jyadatar aise treat karti jaise Nikita badi ho. Lakin pyari bhi bahot hain. Bhai bahan wala jhagda aaye din hota hi rahta hain.

ye family ek Normal family ki trah hi hain. Yaha sirf ek baat strange hain vo hain Neel.

Vaise me bata du me pahli baar likh raha hu kuch. To koi galati ho jarur bataye.

Iska pahla update Aaj raat ko 10 baje aa jayega.
Nice introduction
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Update 1


Neel subah ke 5 baje uthkar meditation kar raha hain. Kareen 6 baje meditation se free hokar Neel bad par letkar mobile chalane lag jaata hain. Chalate chalate subah 8 baj gaye. Neel ke papa Rajendra subah 5 baje hi apne kaam par chale gaye the.

bahar Neel ki mummy Kusum awaaj lagati hain.... Lala utha kab tak mobile chalata rahega utha ja ab.

neel bolta hain... Ha mummy bas uth raha hu 5 minute aur.

iske thodi der baad hi Neel uth jaata hain aur naha dhokar Neel apne exam ke liye ready ho jaata hain. Aaj Neel bsc ka last year ka first exam hain to Neel aaj college jaldi ja raha hain.

mummy me ja rahu... Itna bolkar Neel apni mummy ke pair chhuta hain aur nikalne ke liye apni 7 saal purani atlas ki cycle nikalta hain. Itne me hi Nikita aa jaati hain.

bhaiya mere bhi pair chhiyo tumko punya milega... Nikita itna bolkar apni ankhe badi aur chahre pe smile le aati hain.

hatt me aur tere pair chhiyu shakal dekhi hain....


ha tumse to achi hi hain..


peper hain uska aaj ladayi mat kar Nikita...... Mummy bich me aati hain aur Nikita ko dantne lagti hain.


neel bhi cycle lekar nikal jaata hain apne college jaha use exam dena hain. Aaj ka exam dene ke baad Neel ka agla exam 4 din baad hain.


Subah 10 baje college


neel yaha college ke bahar khada hain. College ke andar entry 11:30 pe milni thi to kuch college ke bahar khade the to kuch yaha vaha ghoom rahe the. 8 ladkiyo ka group bhi ek jagah khada tha. Jo apas me gappe mar rahi thi. In ladkiyo me ek ladki thi. Ladkiyo ka ye group kaaafi khubsurat ladkiyo se bhara huwa tha. Par inme se aisi koi ladki nahi thi jo neel ko pasand aa jaye.

Kuch der baad college ke andar entry hona suru ho jaati hain. Uske baad exam bhi start ho jaata hain. Sab log exam kar rahe hote hain.


exam Neel ke liye bahut hi easy tha. Kyuki lockdown hatne ke baad ye exam suru huwe the aur jo log is waqt exam de rahe hain unko pata hi hoga exam kyu easy hain. Akhir ek subject ke 3 part ko mix karke ek hi paper bana diya voh Multiple choice questions.

exam Neel ne half hour me complete kar diya. Ab Neel ne socha ye log time up hone ke baad hi answer sheet lenge to kyu na kuch der so liya jaaye.

kuch der hi huwi thi ke ek jor ka thappad Neel ke gal pe padta. Neel hadbada ke uthta hain aur zor se bolta hain ... Teri ma ki chuuuuu

Itna bolte hi Neel ruk jaata hain aur use hosh aata hain ki voh exam hall me hain aur thappad marne waala Shaqs uska examinar hain.

Examinar- tujhe sone ke liye kisne kaha tha. Pad kar to aate nahi hain tum jaise log aur yaha aake sone lag jaate ho. Answer sheet pe ek 500 ka note chipkake tum jaiso ko lagta hain pass ho jaoge.

Neel (gusse me) - aisa hain sir ye exam gayi baad me pahle ye batao aapne mujhe thappad kyu maara. Me abhi police apke khilaf complent karne ja raha hu. Voh laga hain camra jisme recording hain ki apne mujhe maara aur dusri baat maine mera paper complete kar liya hain.


examinar ki to dar ki wajah se hawa tight ho gayi. Examinar aaj ghar me Biwi se ladkar aaya tha aur yaha akaar apni frustration nikalna chahta tha. Jab usne Neel ko dekha to use aur gussa aa gaya aur Neel ko ye sab bolne laga tha. Examinar ne Neel se maafi mangi.


lakin Neel ki himmat dekhkar exam hall me baithi ladkiyo Neel se kuch kuch impress to ho gyi thi.


Neel ghaar gaya is shaam ke 4 baj rahe the. Aaj ke din isse jyada kuch khaash huwa nahi isi trah raat bhi ho aur sab sone chale gaye. Neel ne bhi kuch der mobile chalaya aur so gaya.


is raat me kahi aur prathvi se koso dur ek planet pe is waqt kuch log baate kar rahe the.

anajan 1- kya voh din aa gaya hain.

anjan 2- ji, asur mantri ji voh ghadi najdeek aa rahi hain bahut kam samay bacha hain jab hame hamare maharaj mil jayenge.

Asur mantri- jald hi hame hamare maharaj mil jayenge aur ham log ek fir se un insaano pe raaj kar payenge asur guru.

Asur guru- lakin mantri ji me us ghatna ko yaad karta hu to chinta ho jaati hain. Ki kahi koi gadbad na ho jaaye. Maharaaj milne ke baad me ham fir se shaktishaali ho jayenge. Aur ho sakta hain ek fir se ham hamare asur zinda ho jaaye.

Asur mantri- sab theek hoga hamare maharaaj burai aur kaali takato ke Badshah honge. Koi achhai unka kuch nahi bigaad sakti.
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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Neel roj ki trah subah 5 baje utha aur meditation karne baith karne baith gaya. 1 ghante meditation karne ke baad Neel soch raha tha ke aaj ke kya kiya jaaye. Neel ka next exam 5 din baad tha isiliye uske paas bahut time tha.

kuch der baad Neel Mobile lekar bad par let gaya aur mobile chalane lag gaya. Abhi muskil 5 minute hi nikle honge ki zor se chillane ki awaaj aati hain.

uth ja yaha se me ghar ki saaf safai kar rahi hu aur tu yaha susta raha hain ye nahi chalega...... Ye aawaaz Neel ki bahan Nikita ki thi. Voh aaj saaf safai karne ke mood me thi aur hamesha ki trah aisa show kar rahi thi jaise Neel uska bada bhai nahi chhota bhai ho.


Ye baat aaram se bhi bol liya kar, tere gale me dj laga huwa hain kya..... Neel ne itna kaha aur bahar chala gaya.


Neel apne ghar ki chhat par baitha huwa tha, thodi der baad voh chhat par tahalne lag gaya. Neel ke ghar bagal me ek aur ghar tha jaha ek lady aur unki daughter rahti hain. Us lady ka pati bahut saal daaru pine ki wajah se mar gaya tha. To ghar me ye dono hi thi. Unka 100 gaj ka t plot hain jisme 30 gaj ka ek kamra hain aur baaki ka area khula tha. Kamre thoda aage bathroom hain hain.

us bathroom se me voh lady nahi rahi thi. Neel unke ghar taraf hi dekh raha tha ki tabhi bathroom se voh aunty full nude bahar aa gayi. Gaana haste huwe geele kapde taar par daal rahi thi.

YE nahi sudharne waali inka ye hamesha ka hain.....Neel ye sab soch raha tha. Darshal Neel ko voh lady mahine ek baar to is trah se dikh hi jaati thi par kabhi toka nahi tha lakin abhi baar voh zor se chillata hain..


aunty kapde pahan lo thand lag jayegi baarish ka mausham hain..... Jaise hi us lady ne suna voh jhatt se bathroom me ghus gayi. Sharam se puri laal ho gayi thi.

Us lady ka name maavi hain aur kabhi voh aise nude bahar aa jaati thi kyuki kisi ka koi chance hi nahi tha ki koi dekh le Neel ghar pe bhi chhat bahut kam hi log jaate the aur jaate bhi thi voh Neel ki ma ya bahan hi thi.


Neel haste huwe vaha chala gaya voh to bas maavi aunty ke saath masti kar raha tha. Isse jyada uska plan nahi tha.


Subah ke 10 baje

Yaha sahar me kahi ek jagah pe koi program ho raha hain. Kareeb 100 log vaha kursiyo par baithe huwe hain. ek jawan ladka aur ladki hawan ke pass baithe huwe hain. Aur pandit mantra pad raha hain.

jee ha yaha shaadi ka program chal raha hain. Dulhan dikhne heroine jaisi lag rahi thi. Dulha to usse dekhkar lattoo ho gaya aur suhagraat ke sapne sajane me lag raha tha.

par dulhan bilkul shant thi, uske chahre par zara bhi haav bhaav change nahi ho rahe the. Jaise maano Chahre pe ghar chhodne bilkul bhi gam nahi ho.

dulhan pita apni beti ko shanth dekh andar bahut khush the.

haashh ye Aanvi ko dekhkar lag raha hain ye koi drama nahi karne waali.... Dulhan ke pita yahi soch kar khush ho raha tha. Inka name shyam tha.

tabhi vaha us marriage hall me ek ek black color ki audi aa jaati hain. Sabke liye ye koi shock se kam nahi tha. Log gaadiya marriage hall ke bahar park karte hain aur ye ladka andar hi le aays jaha shaadi ho rahi thi.

jab us anjaan ladke ko shyaam mandap ki traf aata dekhta hain to andar se bahut dar jaata hain.

voh kuch logo ko ishara karta hai yaha ane se rokne ke liye.



4 log chalkar use vahi rok dete hain lakin agle hi un chaaro ke paseene chhutne lagta hai.

VO anjaan ladka jeb me revolver lekar aaya tha.

Pandit ji ya to mantra rok dijiye ya fir apni saanse.... hath me revolver dekhkar to jaise pandit ji ki saanse hi ruk gayi. Lakin turant hi unhone mantr rok diye.

itni jaldi kyu aaya shaadi hone ke baad aata Aadi..... Jee ha is anjaan ladke ka name aadi hain aur isko dekhte hi anvi ke chahre par khushi ko koi dekh skta tha.
Mast update bro 🤠🤠🤠
 
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