Fantasy Achanak ka Kanoon

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[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

update 3​

itni jaldi kyu aaya shaadi hone ke baad aata Aadi..... Jee ha is anjaan ladke ka name aadi hain aur isko dekhte hi anvi ke chahre par khushi ko koi dekh skta tha.


Ab aage-


Aadi- are sorry yarr thoda let gaya.

Anvi - thoda let ho gaya hota to abhi ye mujhse shaadi kar chuka hota.

Aadi- me hoo na yarr mere rahte hame koi alag nahi kar sakta.

Aadi anvi ka hath pakdta hain aur use lekar nikalta hain aur anvi ke pita ko bolta hain... Uncle me koi bura insaan nahi hu lakin jis trah aap anvi ke jubarjusti shaadi kara rahe the mujhe bura banana pada..... Aadi itna bolkar hi nikal jaata hain.


Aadi aur anvi is waqt gaadi me baithe huwe the thodi der baad aadi apna phone nikalta hain aur apne kisi dost ke pass phone lagata hain.

Ha bhai aur kaisa hain..

Voh dusra ladka phone par-- bor ho raha hu yarr. Sun tu khaali baitha hain kya

Aadi- tu bol tujhe kya kaam hain

Dusra ladka- agar tu khaali baitha hain to mila hila de..

Aadi- tum jaise logo ki wajah se gaaliya khud bolti hain "prabhu hamara istemaal kijiye" saale jaldi aaja idhar xxxx mandir me.

Dusra ladka- kya ho gaya jo tujhe baghwaan ke pass jane ke jarurat pad gayi.

Aadi- shaadi kar raha hu

Itna sunte hi vaha se phone cute ho jaata hain.
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Chalte hain Neel ke pass


Yaha Neel bistar pe pada huwa tha. Aur apne dost ke aayi call ke baare me soch raha tha.

Saala babhi ko ghar bagha laya aur hame sab hone ke baad bata raha h.

Abhi Neel khada huwa aur shaadi waale kapde pahan ke mandir ke liye nikalne laga.


Bhaiya kaha ja raha hain... Ye puchne waali Nikita thi.

Kahi nahi ja raha bas aise hi kapde pahne hain.... Itna bolke Neel ne joote ke feete (shoeless) bandh liye aur khada ho gaya.

Bata de na kaha ja raha h... Nikita badi badi aankhe karke Neel boli

Nahi bataunga...

Bata do na bhaiya please.... Baat nahi banti to ye Nikita har baar ki trah pyar se baat karne pe aa jaati hain.

Kya bola tune.... Neel ne pucha

Bata do na... Nikita ne kaha

Ha aise hi raha kar hamesha... Aur Neel itna bolke ghar bahar nikla aur jor chillaya... Apne dost ke sath ghoomne ja raha hu..
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Neel yaha mandir pahuch chuka hain abhi Neel mandir pahuchne ke baad mandir ke bahar angdayi le hi raha tha ki achanak Neel ko kuch feel huwa. Jaise koi aas pass ho. Aur vo koi dark energy jaisa kuch ho par Neel ko feel huwa ki ye bahut halka hain aur mandir me ghusna chahta hain.

Neel apna ek hath halka hawa me uthata hain dheere dheere mandir ke andar chalta huwa jaata hain. Neel aisa chal raha tha maano uska hath hawa ko touch ho raha hain. Jaise hi mandir me enter hota hain Neel ke hath halka jhatka khata hain jaise current ko touch kar liya ho.

Neel ab seedha mandir me enter karta hain aur mandir me 6 log hote hain...

Anvi apni dono saheliyo ke sath aayi thi jinka name ginni aur arti tha.

Yaha aadi ke sath ek ladka khada tha jiska name Surendra tha. Ye Neel aur aadi ka common friend hain.

Excellent update bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update 4​

yaha me apko kuch naye characters ke intro de deta hu jo is waqt mandir me hain

Surendra- Age 19 hain, smart hain aur padhai me ye bhi Neel ki hi trah hain.

Aadi- age 20 hain sahar kaafi power wala banda hain, dosto ke liye ye kisi ko maar bhi sakta aur mar bhi sakta hain.

Avni- Aadi ki gf aur kuch hi der baad aadi wife bhi. Iski age 21 hain. Bahut sunder ladki hain. Simple ladki hain.

Aarti- iski age 21 hain aur sunder hone sath sath gussa nak pe rahta hain. Kisi par jaldi believe nahi karti hain.

Ginni- inki age 22 hain aur inke pita ji ek doctor hain. Pita ki ladli bitiya hain.

Let start story- (Neel ko writer mein likhega)

Main mandir ke andar pahuch daakhil (enter) ho gaya aur seedha jaake saamne khade sakhs se jor se ek awaaj lagate huwe gale mila jise sunke sab meri taraf mud ke dekhne lag gaye.

bosdeeeeke....

bosdike...

aur is trah gaaliyo ka len den karte dono ek dusre ke gale iss trah lagte hain jaise maano barso bichde ho.
ye dusra ladka jiske me gale mila tha iska ye Surendra tha.

In dono ke is trah ke milne ki ladkiyo ko bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi sath mandap me baithe Aadi ko ye to pata tha ki aise hi uske dono dost gale milenge par ye nahi pata tha ki iska shor itna uncha hoga.


thoda dheere se nahi bol skta tha.... Aadi ne ye man me socha,, idhar maine Surendra se gale milne ke baad aadi se jaakar uske kaan me bola.

badhai ho bhaiye aaj ke baad tere hatho me dard kabhi nahi hoga....

bc dheere dheere bol deta yu mandir me halla chodne ki kya jarurat hain... Aadi ne yahi kaha tha ki Avni ne turant boli..

ye shaadi hone ke baad sabse pahle tumhe hi dekhungi dever ji ko dantne se pahle khud ko dekho yaha mandap me baithe ho aur gaaliyan de rahe ho..... Avni ke itna kahne par Neel ki andar khushi ki lahar dhaud gayi aur

Bhaabheee... Maine kaha aur Avni ke aage hath badhaya aur Avni ne bhi apna hath aage badha dono ne hand shake kiya.

lagta hain babhi dever ki team ban gayi hain...

babhi hame bhi apni team me saamil karlo akhir me bhi to apka dever hi hu....itni der inki baate sun rahe sunrendra ne bhi bol hi diya.

ha ha ap aur Neel dono hi mere devar ho hamari team to suru se hi hain...Surendra ke javab me Avni ne kaha.

avni kaise dost hain tere aadi ke itni gandi gaaliya dete hain aur tu inse pyar se baat kar rahi hain.... Suruwaat se ab tak saari baate sun rahi Aarti ab jakar kuch boli.

Dono gaaliya jarur dete hain par isse ye sabeet nahi hota ki ye bure hain aur jaise bhi ho lakin teeno ek dusre ke liye bhai se badhkar hain itna... Avni ne kaha jise sunkar Aarti chup ho jaati hain. Avni aur aadi ki shaadi ho gayi aur ye dono mandir ke bahar aa gaye.

bahar ek cham chamati huwi ek gajab ki gaadi khadi huwi thi


Kya car hain yar... Arti ne kaha

Hmmm... Ginni ne kaha


Ye car aadi ki hain... Surendra ne kaha

Yaar tum dono mere bhai ho jo mera voh tumhara bhi hai... Aadi ne kaha.

chal chal baate band kar aur tum dono niklo aaj tum dono ki suhag raat hain... Surendra ne kaha

Surendra ki baat sunke Avni ki dono saheliya hasne lagi. Aise kuch der baate karne ke baat dono car me baith kar nikal gaye.

aur yaha rah gaye me Surendra aur Avni ki dono saheliya ginni aur Aarti.

aacha to fir chalte hain.. maine kaha

ha jarur... Arti ne kaha aur hamne handshake kiya.

Surendra ne fir ginni se hath milaya. Are hath milaya kya voh to hath se chipak gaya


Shaant gadadhari bheem shant hosh me aayiye... Maine Surendra se kaha aur Surendra ne hadbadahat me jaldi se hath chhod diya..

ab maine me bhi ginni se hath milaya. Jaise hi maine ginni se hath milaya mujhe fir se dark energy feel huwi. Hath milaata hi ginni ke aas pass ajeeb sa ghumte huwe mila jo ko chhoona chahta tha par chhoo nahi pa raha tha saamne Jab us ajeeb se aadmi ko laga ki me trah se kyu dekh raha hu aur jab usne Neel ko dekha to uske paseene aane laga aur bahut jyada dar gaya.

Aouch.. ginni ke mu se nikla

kya kar rahe ho itni jore bhi koi hath milata hain... Ginni ne kaha

sorry mera dhyaan kahi aur tha apki ring kaafi sunder hain..

thank u... Ginni ne kaha aur dono saheliya vaha se chali gayi aur Neel aur Surendra bhi apne ghar ke liye nikal gaye.


kon tha ye jo mujhe dekh pa raha tha aur mujhe isse dar kyu laga... Ginni apni activa se nikal gayi thi aur uske peeche vo ajeeb aadmi baitha yahi soch raha tha ginni is baat se anjaan thi ki koi ajeeb admi uske peeche hi gayab hoke baitha huwa tha.

Awesome update

 

[Ragnarok]

Bro update ka intezar rahega...

 

[Naik]

Saare update padhe
Bahot behtareen kahani shuru ki
Aise hi likhte rahiye
Agle update ka intizar h

 

[Mr-Z]

Dost story bht achi hay please update detay raho majority writer's ki trah dhoka mat day dena

 

[Nevil singh]

Waiting dost

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Waiting for update bro

 

[Naik]

Update please brother

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Waiting for next update

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Waiting for update bro