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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*

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Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga tanishk teharma kingdom ka naya king ban jata hai taajposhi k baad.
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Mahaamantree-main aap sabhi logo ko niyam bata deta hu kaise aur kiss tarah is yuddh kala pradarshan me bhag lena hai.jitne bhi desh is yuddh kala pradarshan me bhag lena chahate hai un sabhi ko apne desh k sabse kabil 10 logo ko chun kar ek group banana hoga.aur un group ko apne desh ki kala ko sab ke saamane dikhana hoga.is kala me yuddh aur magic dono hona cha hiye.aur jitne bhi desh hai jo is yuddh kala me bhag lene vale hai un sabhi ko is niyam ka palan karna hi hoga.aur jab sabhi groups ka pradarshan purn ho jaye ga.tab teharma k mahaaraaj tanishk sabhi groups me se 2 group ko chunenge jinka sabse achchha pradarshan hoga.phir un dono groups ko apna yuddh kala sabke saamane dikhane ka muka aur sabse sarvashrest banane ka muka mile ga.itna bol kar mahaamantree apni jagah pe vapas ja k khada ho jata hai.aur phir usi k sath sabhi log apas me charcha aur bate karne lagte hai ki ab kya aur kaise hoga yuddh kala paradrshan aur kitna maja aane vala hai.dosto sabhi log ko aise hi chhod dete hai aur dekhte hai hamara hero kya kar raha hai.

Main-gudiya tumne ne sab kuchh achchhe se taiyari kar liya hai na.

Yumina- g dady aap bus khel k anand le .ye yuddh kala to hum hi jitne vale hai.

Main-phir bhi gudiya apne dusmano ko kabhi bhi kamjor nahi samjhna cha hiye.aur vaise to mujhe tumpar pura bharosa hai.ab jao aur melboalfan ka naam roshan kar do.

Lelina ;Shina-haa beti jao aur sabko dikha do melboalfan k yoddha kya kar sakte hai aur jeet k hi aana beti.

Yumina-g mom ab aap ne bol diya to bus ab to jeet k aana hi hoga.uske baad vo vaha se chali jati hai apne chune huve team k pass.jisme kafi mahir mage aur yoddha the.

Sainik teharma ka-mahaamantree g is yuddh kala pratiyogita me sirf 7 hi desh bhag lene vale hai.aur sabhi log taiyaar hai.aap khel ka aarambh kar digiye.

Mahaamantree-thik hai tum jao(dosto ye sainik mahaamantree ka khas tha jisko mahaamantree ne hi beja tha).jitne bhi desh is yuddh kala me bhag le rahe hai vo sabhi ek ek kar k pradarshan sure kare.

Group 1-kindom Jordan……sabse pahale kingdom Jordan ne apna magic aur yuddh ka sabhi logo k saamane pradarshan kiya.in sabhi ne aag ki atisbaji aur apni yoddhao ki kuchh teknik sabk saamane pesh kiya.sabhi logo ko bahot maja aaya is pradarshan ko dekh kar.un sabhi k jane k baad group 2 ka pradarshan suru ho gaya.

Group 2-kingdom kandra…..ne bhi kingdom Jordan ki tarh hi apni yuddh aur magic kala ko pesh kiya .in logo ne aag k badle barf ka prayog kar k logo ka dil jeeta.aur rahi baat yudda kala ki to thik thak hi tha.sabhi logo ne inka bhi tali baja kar abhinandan kiya pradarshan samapt hone par.uske baad group 3 ne apna pradarshan suru kar diya.

Group 3-kingdom of magic city….maigical city k group ne apne survaat bahot hi dhamake k sath suru kiya.un sabhi ne apne aapne aap ko aag aur pani k kavach apne ass pass kiya huva tha .jisase vo log bahot hi achchhe lag rahe the .un sabhi ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise aag aur pani ek sath Milan chal raha ho .isi tarah magical city ne kafi sare magic logo ko dekh kar sabhi logo ka dil jeet liya apne magic se .lekin yudda kala me kuchh kash nahi tha .ab bari tha group 4 ka.

Group 4-kingdom brunel……ne apni survat combat skill se suru kiya apne ninza teknik dikha kar.jisko dekh log to khusi se shor machane lage.aur brunel group ne apne compact skill k baad kuchh magic trick dikha kar apne prdarshan ko samapt kiya.unke jane k baar kingdom garga ka group sab k saamane aa gaya.

Group 5-kingdom garga…..ne apni survat magic with combat skill k sath suru kiya .in k group ne apni marshal art aur air magic se sabka dil jitliya tha.q ki un logo ne apne wind magic se apne sabhi group members ko hawa me utha liya tha aur sabhi logo ne apne marshal art pradarshan hawa me sab ko kar k dikhaya tha..is group k liye logo be sabse jada tali bajaya tha.aab bari ka group 6 ka.

Group 6-kingdom melboalfan….jaise hi yumina ne apne group k sath sab k samne aaee usne apne magic se flowers ki barish kar diya.jisko dekh kar logo bahot khush ho gaye.aur tali bajane lage.phir sura huva asli khel.tabhi aasamaan ne kale badal banane lage bijle kadakne lagi aur dekhte hi ek safed rosin se bana dragon hawa me udne laga.jisko dekh kar ek baar sab k sab dar gaye .lekin baad me sako pata chala ki ye to ek braham hai.vo dragon aate hi yumina aur uske group member ko nigal jata hai jisko dekh kar sabki cheekhe nikal jati hai.phir dekhte hi dekhte vo dragon ek safed badal me badal jata hai aur ek ek kar k sabhi us badal me dekhne lagte hai aur vahi par apne combat skill dikhane lgate hai.un sabhi ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise sabhi badal me lad rahe hai.jise hi yudda kala un sabhi ne samapt kiya to vo badal melboalfan k raajya ka rup le leta hai aur phir gayab ho jata hai.aisi kala aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekh tha isliye sabhi log khade hokar sabhi logo ka abhinandan karte hai.aur usi k sath akhri group bhi maidaan me aa jate hai.

Group 7-kingdom teharma…dosto ye akhir group teharma ka tha.jiska command rupvati kar rahi thi.kingdom teharma ka group ne bhi bahot hi dhamake dar entry kiya tha.chalo dosto dekhte hai.in logo ne kaise survat kiya tha.jaise hi group teharma ne apni entry kiya sari jagah andhere se bhar gai.phir dekte hi dekhte 10 aag ki lapte dikhaee dene lagi .darsal ye sabhi 10 logo k aage aag ka kavach tha .jisko dekh k lag raha tha jaise vo aag hi ho.ye sabhi log apni combat skill dikhane lage.ek to bahot andera tha upar se unsabhi k compat skill ne kamal hi kar diya tha.aisa najara sayad hi kise ne dekha ho ga.sabhi k nazre un sabhi 10 logo par thi.phir sabhi ne ek sath apne talvare ek sath takrai jisme se ek bahot bada aag ka gola upar ki taraf jane laga.aur jaise hi vo aag ka gola uppar gaya to andhera ujale me badal gaya aur phoolo ki barish ek baar phir se suru ho gaya.sabhi logo ne tali baja kar rupvati aur unke sathiyo ka abinandan kiya.phir vo sabhi apne jagah par chale gaye.aur kuchh der baad mahaamantree.

Mahaamantree-mahaaraaj k faisale k anusar kindom melboalfan aur kindom teharma ye dono group apan yuddh pradarshan. apass me yuddh kar k dikhaenge .mahaamantree k ghosana k turant baad dono (2no) group aamane saamane aa gati hai.ab aage

Jsise hi 2no (dono) group sab k saamane aati hai sabhi log 2no group k liye taaliya baja kar un sabhi ka abhinandan karte hai.

Rupvati-mere naam rupvati hai.tum sabhi hamare mehmaan ho is liye sabse pahale tumlogo hi survaat karo.

Yumina-mere naam yumina hai.lagta hai tumlogo ko harne ki bahot jaldi hai.itna bolkar uske chehare par smile aa jati hai aur uske sath unske sabhi group member be has dete hai.

Rupvati-itna sun kar gusse se laal ho jati hai.aur gusse me achchha tumko to abhi pata chal jaye kaun harne vala hai.pahale to main tumko sirf harane vali thi lekin ab to main tumhara vo haal karungi ki tum puri jindagi pastaogi.himmat hai to aa ja one to one fight karenge.in chojo ko bhaga de yaha se.aur ye itna bol kar vo jor jor se hasne lagti hai.

Yumina-tujko bhi tere bhai ki tarah teri avkaat dikhana pade ga tabhi tum logo ko pata chale ga.ki teri avkaat kya hai.aaj sabhi desh dekhenge main tera vo hasl karungi ki tu kisi ko apna munh bhi nahi dikha paye gi.chal aaja ho jaye one to one fight.tu bhi apni in namard saniko ko bhej de.inta bol kar yumina apni sanik ko vapas jane ka isara kar deti hai.turant

Rupvati-ne apne sena k sabhi logo ko jane ka hukum de diya.

Jaise hi dono group ki sene jati hai turant yumina aur rupvati apne talvaar nikal kar apas me ladna suru kar diya.

Yumina –bina ruke lagatar puri takat lagakar rupvati pe apne talvaar se prahaar karte hi ja rahi thi.aur vahi rupvati yumina k prahaar ko sirf rok rahi thi.jisko dekh kar teharma k raajya k logo kafi niras dikh rahe the.tabhi

Rupvati-bus itna hi dum hai kya melboalfan k yoddha me.aur tumhare yuddh kala aur tumhari takat ko dekh kar yumina mujhe bada dukh ho raha hai.ab pata nahi tumara kya ho ga meri jaan.ab bach k dikhao.phir rupvati ne apni puri takat laga kar yumina par hamla kar diya .lekin ye kya yumina to bahot hi muskil se rupvati ko prahaar ko apne talvaar se rok paa rahi thi.ye sab dekh kar ab ja k teharma k logo ka chehara khila.aur khilta bhi q nahi ab rupvati ka palra jo bhari dikh raha tha.aur vahee.

Tanishk-apne maan me wah meri bahana tumne to kamal kar diya.aaj usko pata chale ga teharma se dusmani lene valo ko kya hasal hota hai.itna sochne k baad uske chere par ek kamini smile aa jati hai.

Main-apne maan me has le beta tanishk has le abhi tujko pata chal hi jaye ga melboalfan k yoddha kya kar sakte hai.abhi to ye yuddh suru huva hai beta.

Lelina ;shina-kabhi mujhe kabhi aur yumina ki yudda ko dekh rahi thi.jaise kahna chahati ho meri bacchi ko kuchh bhi nahi hona cha hiye.chalo dosto yumina aur rupvati k yuddh k taraf phir se chalet hai.

Yumina-aaj ja k mujhe koee meri takkar ka mila hai.rupvati bus itna hi dum hai tum me .tumne to mujhe apni jagah se hila bhi nahi saki .aur dinge to inti badi badi maar rahi thi ki jiski to baat hi mat karo.ab dikho apna dum main bhi to aaj dekhu ki aaj kitna dum hai tujme.lekin tabhi vo hota hai iska yumina ne socha bhi nahi tha .

Rupvati-jab yumina rupvati ko uksa rahi thi rupvati ka gussa lagataar badhte ja raha tha .tabhi vo apne maan me kuchh bolti hai aur uski talvaar black sword me matlab kali talvaar me badal jati hai.aur vo apni maan me ab tak main tujhse khel rahi thi lekin ab bus bahot hogaya ab to tujko mujhse yamraaj bhi nahi bacha sakta hai.apni kali talvaar se yumina k talvaar pe prahaar kar diya jaise hi yumina ki talvaar rupvatai k talvaar se takrati hai yumina ki talvaar k 2 tukde ho jate hai.jisko dekh kar bahot se log khus ho jate hai .lekin kuchh logo k chehare par chinta k likir dikhne lagti hai.

Khus hone vale me tanishk ;minata ;mahaamantree aur teharama k sabhi log aur kucgh raaja bhi the.

Chinta karne valo me main;lelina ;shina sintel aur khud yumina thi.

Yumina –ko abhi tak viswas hi nahi ho raha tha abhi jo kuchh bhi huva vo to jase abhi hosh me nahi thi .hota bhi q nahi aaj tak uske saamane koee pal bhar bhi nahi tik paya tha.lekin aaj uski talvaar kisi ne tod diya vo bhi kuchh paal me.

Rupvati –ne jab dekha yumina ka dhayan hi nahi hai ab yudda me to usne iska fada uthane ka socha .aur vo bahot hi tej rafter se yumina k pass aagaee aur apne talvaar se uspe hamla karne lagi lekin uska har war vifal ho raha tha uski talvaar yumina ko chu bhi nahi pa rahi thi aur itna hi nahi uski talvaar us tak pahoch bhi nahi paa rahi thi.aur vahee.

Yumina –ne jab dekha rupvati uske inte jadeek aa gai hai aur vo kya kar rahi .jisko dekhne k baad usk chehare par smile aa jati hai aur vo ab apne aap ko sambhal chuki thi.yumina apne maan me aaj maja aaye ja .ab ja k mujhe mere kitna takatvaar log mil rahe hai.

Yumina ---Rupvati se -agar tum apni sari jindigi bhi laga dogi mujh tak pahochne me tab bhi tum mujh tak kabhi pahoch nahi sakti ho.itna bol kar yumina jor jor se hasne lagti hai.jaise hi rupvati ne yumina ki kahi huvi baat suni uska para aur chad gaya .aur usne bahot gusse me ruk abhi main tera ye braham mai tod deti hu.phir kya tha rupvati ne ne kuchh spell padhna suru kiya aur phir kya dekhte hi dekte 7 kale bhediya aa gaye .ye sato(7) bediya dikhne me bahot hi khunkhar dikh rahe the.pur kale rang k the sirf ankhe lal thi.

Rupvati-ne apni sato (7) bhediya ko yumina par hamla karne ka aa desh diya.adesh pate hi sato(7 to) bhediya yumina ki taraf badh jate hai.jaise jaise ye bhediya yumina k taraf badte ja rahe the sabhi ki najre yumina ki taraf hi tha.sabki k maan me yahi chal raha tha aab kya ho ga.aur vahi rupvati ka muskarahat aur jada gahri hote ja rahi thi.

Yumina –ne jaise dekha us taraf 7 bhediya aa raha hai.usne apni liya ek naee talvaar magic se maga li.tabhi yumina rupvati se kahati hai tu khud kuchh nahi kar saki to mujhko marne in pillo ko bhej diya.itna bol kar vo un 7 bhediyo ko kuchh hi palo me sabka khatama kar deti hai.aur ab bol abhi yumina kuchh aur bol pati vo sato bhediya phir se zinda ho gaya .lekin is baar yumina rupvati k chaal me fass gai thi.q ki yumina khud un bhediyo k pass aa gai thi aur ab un bhediyo ne yumina ko gher liya tha charo taraf se .aur ab vo vaha se nikal nahi sakti thi.

Rupvati-ab machhli shikaree se bach k kaha jaye gi.inta bol kar jor jor se hanse lagti hai.ab yumina ko bhi lagta hai kahai na kahi usne bina soche samjhe galat chaal chal diya.

Yumina-ek baar phir se sabhi bhediyao ko marne galti hai lekin jitney baar bhi vo marte hai bhir se jinda ho jate hai.ab kya karu main yumina apne maan me sochne lagti hai.tabhi usko ek baat yaad aati hai.ab lagta hai mujhe apni hi kavach ko todna ho ga.yumina apne maan me kuchh mantr padti .jaise hi usne apna spell pura kiya ek turant joor daar dhamaka hota hai.aur khud yumina kuchh dur ja k girti.aur rupvati bhi q ki uska prabhav bahot powerfull tha.lekin ek baat achchhee ye thi ki vo sare bhediya bhi gayab ho gaye the.

Yumina-turnt apni jagah kadi ho kar.sword ka spell use karti jisase uske charo taraf bahot sare sword aa jate hai.yumina rupvati se ab bach k dikha.uske baad usne 10 sword ek sath rupvati pe chod deti hai.jitne bhi log ye dekh rahe the kisi ki ankhe ek minute k liye japak nahi rahi thi.q ki kab kya hoga kisi ko kuchh pata nahi tha.

Rupvati –ne jaise hi apni taraf 10 sword aate huve dekha usne apni maaya suru kar diya aur apne anek rup baan diya.isi tarah dono lagatar ladti rahi lekin koee bhi kisi ko hara nahi paa raha tha.ant me rupvati ne apni sabse takatvar astra ko yaad kiya aur dekhte hi dekte uske haath me ek black hunter jaisa aa gaya.tabhi

Black shadow-malik rupvati ko hunter use mat karne dena.nahi to aap yumina ko hamesa hamesa k liye khoo denge.ye hunter logo ko atma ko uske sarir se alag karne k liya banaya gaya hai.jis k sarir ko vo hunter chu le samjo uske sarir se uski atma ko nikal k rahe gi.

Main-kya? ye kaise ho sakta hai.lekin is rupvati k pass itna takat aaya kaha se.insab k bare me pata lagana hi padega.lekin sabse pahale yumina ko surakshit karna hoga.black shadow jao yumina ki jaan ki surksha karo.dhayan rahe vo hunter usko chu na paye.itna bote hi black shadow yumina k pichhe ja k khada ho jata thi uski parchhaee ban kar.aur maine yumina par apna sabse pawerfull infiniti loop se surakhchit kar diya phir se.maine apne maan me aab mujhe hi is yuddha ko samapt karna hoga nahi to pata nahi aur kya musibaat aa jaye ga .vaise bhi rupvati jaise dikhti hai vase bilkul nahi hai .yuddh samapt hone k baad mujhe iski janamkundli pata karna ho ga.aur vahee yumina strom aur lightning power use karne to taiyaar thi.

Yumina-ne ek baar meri taraf dekha phir asmaan me dekh kar strom aur lightning ka spell padha .aur maine maine bhi vahi dono power use ki aur shield bana diya taki vo hunter yumina tak pahoch na paye .rupvati ne apna hunter aur apne hath se lightning magic use kiya.aur jaise hi tum teeno(3) ka power ek sath meri shield par takraya jis k vaja se ek bahot hi tej dhamaka huva dono udte huve bahot dur giri.vo hunter aab jayab ho gaya tha.jise hi ye dhamaka huva puri jameen hi hil gai thi. Sabhi k sabhi apni jagah khade ho gaye the.jab saki nazar yumina au rupvati par padi thi dono behos ho gai thi.dono deso ki sena turan dono ko lekar maidaan se chali gai .

Meri-sena ne yumina ko lekar mere pass aa gai maine apni recovery magic se usko thik kar diya tha lekin vo abhi bhi behos hi thi .maine usko uske mom k pass baitha diya.aur rupvati vo log sidha mahal lekar chale gaye.

Mahaamantree-mahaaraaj ab hame is yuddh kala pradarshan ko samapt karna cha hiye.

Tanishk-tum thik kah rahe ho.mere desh k nagri aur mehamano mujhe asha hai aap sabhi ne is yuddh kala pradarshan ka anad liya hoga.aur akhri yuddh kala se ye pata chala gaya hoga ki ye ek tie hai .kisi din hum aise hi ek aur yuddh kal pradarshan karenge.ab aap main chahata hu aap sab bhojan ka anand le.itna bol kar tanishk aur uska parivar vaha se jane lagte hai.

Sabhi log-apne naye maharaj ki jay jay kar aur taaliya baja kar abhinandan kartre hai.aur usi k sath sabhi log apne ghar laut jate hai.aur sabhi mehman bhojan karne late hai.

Main-aur mera privar abhi yumina ka pass baithe the. tabhi king sintel bhi aa jate hai mere pass .main main kuchh bolta tab tak yumina hosh me aa jati hai .hosme aate hi kaha hai vo .main shant ho jao beti tum dono ko yuddh tie ho gaya .tum dono behos ho gai thi.gudiya ab kaisa lag raha hai aap ko.

Yumina-main to bilkul thik hu.jaise hi vo apni mom ko dekti hai dono usko bina kuchh bole apne gale laga leti hai.aur kafi der tak teeno gale gale rahti hai.

Main-ab tum sabhi chalo kuchh kha lete hai king sintel ko kab tak rukha k rakho gi.aise hi hum sabhi bate karte huve khan ka anand lete hai aur king sintel vida lekar main apne gate magic se sabhi ko mahal me le aata hu.aur sabhi kafi tha ke huve the is liye turant sab apne karme me sone chale gaye.
to be continued….
 

Kalyansurya

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Bhut he khubsurat update diya bhai
Yes rupvati to bhut he khatarnak nikli but usko aise danger power melii kha see jab king tehrma our new king tanisk ke pass be aise powor nai hai fir rupvati me aisa kya khash hai
Ab karma ko apna asli khel jo ki old and new king dono ko sakbak skhikana suru kar dena chaiye
Aaghe kya hota dekhna mazedaar hoga
 
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Bahut hi badhiya update hai bhai... Bahut khoib... Maine to socha tha pahle ladai hogi tab taz posi lekin ulta hua.... Or ye sala itna jyada takat kaise rakhti hai... Or iske paas shadow ki tarah kali talwar kahan se aa gai... Itne khatarnak hathiyar hai.. Bhai kahi ye bhi to shadow nhi... Koi pahunchi hui chiz lagti hai ... Khair dekhte hain aage kya hota hai... Intezaar hai aage ka
 
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