Swaraj bhai ye galat h yaar jis story ko hum log padhna chah rhe use aap continue hi nhi KR rhe balki nyi nyi story chalu Kar de rhe ....yaar purani stories adhuri bachi Hui h Jo bahut achchi h please koi nyi story start karne se achcha uspe dhyan do
Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)
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Ronnie aur khushi aur bholu jab raja bana dono copyright stories hai jo maine adapt kiya hai
Promise karta hoon ki dono stories jald.khatam karunga restart karke
Is story ko likhne me bahut mehnat lag rahi hai.ise start karne se pehle Ajnabee part one padh sakte hai
Waise dono related nahi hai
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Wo dono to padh liya hu Bhai aur Mai Ronny aur khusi ko is liye restart karne bol RHA kyoki wo achchi bhi h aur use log jyada pasand Kar rahe the
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Both updates was fabulous and mind blowing , it’s your story and you know the storyline it’s upto u how you write , but I think most of the readers like to watch Akash in this story because it’s the sequel of ajnabee
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Yug palta aur shaks ko dekhte hi kaampne laga
Jishnu PATTNAYAK-CITY FIELD HIGH SCHOOL
"kyun be haggu sunai nahi de raha hai kya??" Jishnu apne chamcho ke Saath khada tha
Yug thar thar kaampne laga. Kya galti ho gayi usse jo ab doosre school ke student use mark kar rahe hai
"acha sun tere class me meri item padhti hai rashmi."jishnu bola
Yug waise ka waisa hi khada raha. Rashmi..... Aaj tak apne class ki ladkiyon ki taraf aankh uthakar bhi nahi dekha usne. Koi na koi kisi na kisi ki gf hai
" Abey wahi jiske bade bade mamme hai. Aur jo class me sabse chota skirt pehenti hai" jishnu bola to uske chamche hasne lage
"mazak jiya maine??" jishnu ne apne chamcho ki aur ghoorkar kaha
Sab chup ho gaye
"sun haggu ye le ye guldasta aur uske Paas jaakar bol( jishnu sir ne ye aapke liye diya hai. Aaj aap log pehli baar mile the na isliye) samajh me aaya" jishnu bola
"j j ji ji lekin school to band ho Chuka hai ab" yug bola
"to??? Daudkar ja. Agar ye guldasta us tak nahi pohuncha to teri khair nahi" yug ki aur ghoorkar bola jishnu
Aur yug ne daud lagai. Zor zor. Se daud Daudkar pohunchna chahta tha rashmi ki aur jald se jald Jaana hoga jald jana hoga
Tabhi thokar khakar Saamne gir padta hai yug
Do komal haathon ne use uthaya aur yug ne jaise hi use dekha to wo boli
"tum thik to ho na??" ek shant komal awaz be yug ko shant kar diya
Usne dekha ki ek ladki jo bilkul Katrina kaif jaisi dikhne wali uske Saath baithi thi
"m mai thik hoon wo bas fisal gaya" yug bola
"chalo mai tumhe chir deti hoon. Kahan Jaana Hai tumko??" ladki ne poocha
"w wo..." yug us ladki ki scooty me baith gaya aur kuch hi pal wo pohunch gaye jahan yug ko Jaana tha
"thanks" yug jo shayad pehli baar muskuraya tha bola
"Naam kya hai tumhara??" ladki ne poocha
"yug"
"nice name" bol ladki scooty lekar chali gayi
Tabhi yug ne dekha ki rashmi gali ke ek kone me smoke kar rahi hai. Usne dheere dheere pair badhaye
"koun?? Oh haggu. Kya kaam hai??" rashmi re cigarette ka ek kash lagakar poocha
"wo jishnu ne ye diya aap logo ki pehli anniversary hai na isliye" yug sar neecha kar yug bola
"hmm chal Bhaag ab" rashmi boli. Aur yug ne guldasta rashmi ke haath tha akar Jaane hi wala tha ki usi gali me kuch kutte mile use
Tug ne apne bad se ek biscuit ka packet nikala aur tod todkar kutto ko khilane laga. Ye masoom hai ye kabhi bhi yug ka Saath nahi chodenge. Kaash duniya me log bhi us ladki ya in kutto jaise hote
Yug ne ek lambi Saans li aur wahan se chala gaya
Lekin ye sab cigarette peeti rashmi ke aankhon se nahi chup saka
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Yug apne kamre me apne parents ke photo dekh kar rota raha
Aaj agar uske parents zinda hote to shayad doosre kisi school me. Padhta shayad waha ye sab nahi hota
"Kya hua beta kuch problem hai??" poly aunty ne sar par haath fera
"nahi aunty kuch nahi. Mai thak gaya. Bas sone ja raha hoon"bol yug ne apna light band kiya aur so gaya
Poly bas but bankar waha se nikal gayi aur apne kamre me aayi
" kya hua poly?? "harish ne poocha
" harish kya mai ek buru Maa hoon?? "aankhon me aansu liye harish ki aur dekhkar kaha poly ne
" nahi poly aisa kyu Keh rahi ho? "harish ne poly ko baahon me lekar kaha
" fir kyun yug hamse kata kata sa rehta hai, kyun ghut raha hai apne a der kyun kyunkyun"foot footkat rone lagi poly
"yeuski ladai hai poly hum kuch nahi kar sakte. Humne dono bachchon ko sabse bade school me admission karwaya. Jitna ho sake de rahe hai bacchon ko.tum to diksha se zyada pyaar karti ho yug ko."harish bola
Poly ke kaano me harish ki koi Baat nahi ghus rahi thi. Use bas yug ki chinta thi
Jishnu PATTNAYAK-CITY FIELD HIGH SCHOOL
"kyun be haggu sunai nahi de raha hai kya??" Jishnu apne chamcho ke Saath khada tha
Yug thar thar kaampne laga. Kya galti ho gayi usse jo ab doosre school ke student use mark kar rahe hai
"acha sun tere class me meri item padhti hai rashmi."jishnu bola
Yug waise ka waisa hi khada raha. Rashmi..... Aaj tak apne class ki ladkiyon ki taraf aankh uthakar bhi nahi dekha usne. Koi na koi kisi na kisi ki gf hai
" Abey wahi jiske bade bade mamme hai. Aur jo class me sabse chota skirt pehenti hai" jishnu bola to uske chamche hasne lage
"mazak jiya maine??" jishnu ne apne chamcho ki aur ghoorkar kaha
Sab chup ho gaye
"sun haggu ye le ye guldasta aur uske Paas jaakar bol( jishnu sir ne ye aapke liye diya hai. Aaj aap log pehli baar mile the na isliye) samajh me aaya" jishnu bola
"j j ji ji lekin school to band ho Chuka hai ab" yug bola
"to??? Daudkar ja. Agar ye guldasta us tak nahi pohuncha to teri khair nahi" yug ki aur ghoorkar bola jishnu
Aur yug ne daud lagai. Zor zor. Se daud Daudkar pohunchna chahta tha rashmi ki aur jald se jald Jaana hoga jald jana hoga
Tabhi thokar khakar Saamne gir padta hai yug
Do komal haathon ne use uthaya aur yug ne jaise hi use dekha to wo boli
"tum thik to ho na??" ek shant komal awaz be yug ko shant kar diya
Usne dekha ki ek ladki jo bilkul Katrina kaif jaisi dikhne wali uske Saath baithi thi
"m mai thik hoon wo bas fisal gaya" yug bola
"chalo mai tumhe chir deti hoon. Kahan Jaana Hai tumko??" ladki ne poocha
"w wo..." yug us ladki ki scooty me baith gaya aur kuch hi pal wo pohunch gaye jahan yug ko Jaana tha
"thanks" yug jo shayad pehli baar muskuraya tha bola
"Naam kya hai tumhara??" ladki ne poocha
"yug"
"nice name" bol ladki scooty lekar chali gayi
Tabhi yug ne dekha ki rashmi gali ke ek kone me smoke kar rahi hai. Usne dheere dheere pair badhaye
"koun?? Oh haggu. Kya kaam hai??" rashmi re cigarette ka ek kash lagakar poocha
"wo jishnu ne ye diya aap logo ki pehli anniversary hai na isliye" yug sar neecha kar yug bola
"hmm chal Bhaag ab" rashmi boli. Aur yug ne guldasta rashmi ke haath tha akar Jaane hi wala tha ki usi gali me kuch kutte mile use
Tug ne apne bad se ek biscuit ka packet nikala aur tod todkar kutto ko khilane laga. Ye masoom hai ye kabhi bhi yug ka Saath nahi chodenge. Kaash duniya me log bhi us ladki ya in kutto jaise hote
Yug ne ek lambi Saans li aur wahan se chala gaya
Lekin ye sab cigarette peeti rashmi ke aankhon se nahi chup saka
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Yug apne kamre me apne parents ke photo dekh kar rota raha
Aaj agar uske parents zinda hote to shayad doosre kisi school me. Padhta shayad waha ye sab nahi hota
"Kya hua beta kuch problem hai??" poly aunty ne sar par haath fera
"nahi aunty kuch nahi. Mai thak gaya. Bas sone ja raha hoon"bol yug ne apna light band kiya aur so gaya
Poly bas but bankar waha se nikal gayi aur apne kamre me aayi
" kya hua poly?? "harish ne poocha
" harish kya mai ek buru Maa hoon?? "aankhon me aansu liye harish ki aur dekhkar kaha poly ne
" nahi poly aisa kyu Keh rahi ho? "harish ne poly ko baahon me lekar kaha
" fir kyun yug hamse kata kata sa rehta hai, kyun ghut raha hai apne a der kyun kyunkyun"foot footkat rone lagi poly
"yeuski ladai hai poly hum kuch nahi kar sakte. Humne dono bachchon ko sabse bade school me admission karwaya. Jitna ho sake de rahe hai bacchon ko.tum to diksha se zyada pyaar karti ho yug ko."harish bola
Poly ke kaano me harish ki koi Baat nahi ghus rahi thi. Use bas yug ki chinta thi
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