• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy AJNABEE 3-WEAK HERO

DAIVIK-RAJ

ANKIT-RAJ
1,442
3,833
144
CHINA UNKNOWN PLACE
SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

teer thik patton ko cheerti hui bhediye ko chookar nikal gayi

GRRRRRR

bhediye ne idhar udhar dekha, koi nahi tha wahan

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

Do teer aur bhediye ko chookar nikal gayi

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

KHACHHHHH

is baar teer seedha lagi

"yess" ek bachha khushi se uchal pada aur usi Waqt bhediye ne use dekh liya

Grrrrrr

Der na karte hue daud pada bhediya aur bachhe ne bhaagne ki koshish nahi ki balki idhar udhar teer maarne laga, lekin bhediya bachta raha
Achanak bhediya chalang lagakar us bacche ki aur badh gaya ki tabhi ek pathar ka tukda hawa me goli ki raftaar se us bhediye ke sar me laga

KHACHHHHH

bhediya wahi dher ho gaya

"kitni baar kaha hai, ninja banne ki koshish na karo, lekin koi sune tab na" chen us bachhe ko daant kar bola

Bachha nazar jhukakar khada raha, uske bejan aankhon me kuch hulchal hone lagi

"koun kehta hai ki ye ninja nahi hai??" pathhar maarne wala Saamne aaya to chen ke sar jhuk gaye Saath me us bachhe ke bhi

"master yug" chen bola

Yug ne us bachhe ko God me utha liya aur uska matha choom liya

"ye ninja bankar rahega aur dk din apne aap ko saabit bhi karega" yug bola aur us bacche ko utharkar sar me thapki dekar chala gaya

"papa??" bachha dheere se bol utha

Chen ne uski aur dekha

"mai master ka Naam kabhi kharab nahi hone dunga, ek din mai master ko saabit karke dikhaunga aur master ke dikhaye kadam par chalunga, mai master jaisa banunga" bachha bola

"tumhe pata hai na ki tum..." chen ne dheere se bola

"andha hoon, dekh nahi sakta. Lekin fir bhi mai ek Behtareen ninja bankar dikhaunga" ladka bola aur dheere dheere aage badh gaya
Congratulations Swaraj Bhai for AJNABEE 3-WEAK HERO

Ab dekhna yah hai ki main role me kaun hai Chen Ka beta (andha) ya fir yug aur rasmi Ka beta sath hi yah bhi dekhne ko milega ki yug Aakash(AJNABEE 1) Ka beta hai ya Nahi agar Nahi to iss story me Uske bete Ka kya role hai
sath hi Chen Ka beta kiske taraf se rahega
Rasmi ke bete ke taraf se ya Aakash ke bete ke taraf se
khair ye to baad ki bate hai


Abhi ke liye to Swaraj Bhai se ek request hai ki iss story ko continue rakhiyega
Beauty the beast 2 Sam to same 1st part Ka copy hai lagbhag to USS story ke update ko delay Kar dijiyega but AJNABEE 3-WEAK HERO ko continue hi rakhiyega
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

Well-Known Member
6,401
28,412
218
CHINA UNKNOWN PLACE
SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

teer thik patton ko cheerti hui bhediye ko chookar nikal gayi

GRRRRRR

bhediye ne idhar udhar dekha, koi nahi tha wahan

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

Do teer aur bhediye ko chookar nikal gayi

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

KHACHHHHH

is baar teer seedha lagi

"yess" ek bachha khushi se uchal pada aur usi Waqt bhediye ne use dekh liya

Grrrrrr

Der na karte hue daud pada bhediya aur bachhe ne bhaagne ki koshish nahi ki balki idhar udhar teer maarne laga, lekin bhediya bachta raha
Achanak bhediya chalang lagakar us bacche ki aur badh gaya ki tabhi ek pathar ka tukda hawa me goli ki raftaar se us bhediye ke sar me laga

KHACHHHHH

bhediya wahi dher ho gaya

"kitni baar kaha hai, ninja banne ki koshish na karo, lekin koi sune tab na" chen us bachhe ko daant kar bola

Bachha nazar jhukakar khada raha, uske bejan aankhon me kuch hulchal hone lagi

"koun kehta hai ki ye ninja nahi hai??" pathhar maarne wala Saamne aaya to chen ke sar jhuk gaye Saath me us bachhe ke bhi

"master yug" chen bola

Yug ne us bachhe ko God me utha liya aur uska matha choom liya

"ye ninja bankar rahega aur dk din apne aap ko saabit bhi karega" yug bola aur us bacche ko utharkar sar me thapki dekar chala gaya

"papa??" bachha dheere se bol utha

Chen ne uski aur dekha

"mai master ka Naam kabhi kharab nahi hone dunga, ek din mai master ko saabit karke dikhaunga aur master ke dikhaye kadam par chalunga, mai master jaisa banunga" bachha bola

"tumhe pata hai na ki tum..." chen ne dheere se bola

"andha hoon, dekh nahi sakta. Lekin fir bhi mai ek Behtareen ninja bankar dikhaunga" ladka bola aur dheere dheere aage badh gaya
Nice start
 

Ajay

Well-Known Member
6,895
33,141
218
CHINA UNKNOWN PLACE
SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

teer thik patton ko cheerti hui bhediye ko chookar nikal gayi

GRRRRRR

bhediye ne idhar udhar dekha, koi nahi tha wahan

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

Do teer aur bhediye ko chookar nikal gayi

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

KHACHHHHH

is baar teer seedha lagi

"yess" ek bachha khushi se uchal pada aur usi Waqt bhediye ne use dekh liya

Grrrrrr

Der na karte hue daud pada bhediya aur bachhe ne bhaagne ki koshish nahi ki balki idhar udhar teer maarne laga, lekin bhediya bachta raha
Achanak bhediya chalang lagakar us bacche ki aur badh gaya ki tabhi ek pathar ka tukda hawa me goli ki raftaar se us bhediye ke sar me laga

KHACHHHHH

bhediya wahi dher ho gaya

"kitni baar kaha hai, ninja banne ki koshish na karo, lekin koi sune tab na" chen us bachhe ko daant kar bola

Bachha nazar jhukakar khada raha, uske bejan aankhon me kuch hulchal hone lagi

"koun kehta hai ki ye ninja nahi hai??" pathhar maarne wala Saamne aaya to chen ke sar jhuk gaye Saath me us bachhe ke bhi

"master yug" chen bola

Yug ne us bachhe ko God me utha liya aur uska matha choom liya

"ye ninja bankar rahega aur dk din apne aap ko saabit bhi karega" yug bola aur us bacche ko utharkar sar me thapki dekar chala gaya

"papa??" bachha dheere se bol utha

Chen ne uski aur dekha

"mai master ka Naam kabhi kharab nahi hone dunga, ek din mai master ko saabit karke dikhaunga aur master ke dikhaye kadam par chalunga, mai master jaisa banunga" bachha bola

"tumhe pata hai na ki tum..." chen ne dheere se bola

"andha hoon, dekh nahi sakta. Lekin fir bhi mai ek Behtareen ninja bankar dikhaunga" ladka bola aur dheere dheere aage badh gaya
Nice update bhai
 

jitutripathi00

Active Member
818
3,199
138
CHINA UNKNOWN PLACE
SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

teer thik patton ko cheerti hui bhediye ko chookar nikal gayi

GRRRRRR

bhediye ne idhar udhar dekha, koi nahi tha wahan

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

Do teer aur bhediye ko chookar nikal gayi

SWOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHH

KHACHHHHH

is baar teer seedha lagi

"yess" ek bachha khushi se uchal pada aur usi Waqt bhediye ne use dekh liya

Grrrrrr

Der na karte hue daud pada bhediya aur bachhe ne bhaagne ki koshish nahi ki balki idhar udhar teer maarne laga, lekin bhediya bachta raha
Achanak bhediya chalang lagakar us bacche ki aur badh gaya ki tabhi ek pathar ka tukda hawa me goli ki raftaar se us bhediye ke sar me laga

KHACHHHHH

bhediya wahi dher ho gaya

"kitni baar kaha hai, ninja banne ki koshish na karo, lekin koi sune tab na" chen us bachhe ko daant kar bola

Bachha nazar jhukakar khada raha, uske bejan aankhon me kuch hulchal hone lagi

"koun kehta hai ki ye ninja nahi hai??" pathhar maarne wala Saamne aaya to chen ke sar jhuk gaye Saath me us bachhe ke bhi

"master yug" chen bola

Yug ne us bachhe ko God me utha liya aur uska matha choom liya

"ye ninja bankar rahega aur dk din apne aap ko saabit bhi karega" yug bola aur us bacche ko utharkar sar me thapki dekar chala gaya

"papa??" bachha dheere se bol utha

Chen ne uski aur dekha

"mai master ka Naam kabhi kharab nahi hone dunga, ek din mai master ko saabit karke dikhaunga aur master ke dikhaye kadam par chalunga, mai master jaisa banunga" bachha bola

"tumhe pata hai na ki tum..." chen ne dheere se bola

"andha hoon, dekh nahi sakta. Lekin fir bhi mai ek Behtareen ninja bankar dikhaunga" ladka bola aur dheere dheere aage badh gaya
Nice start bro waiting for next
 

kamdev99008

FoX - Federation of Xossipians
8,588
34,739
219
swaraj bhai :congrats: .................... fir ajnabi

beauty & the beast 2 ko to latkaye ho................ use fast forward mode me lao
sath me isko normal chalne do
 
Top