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Swaraj

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"a gaye beta?? Kaisa raha school??" monica boli
Lekin shyam kuch nahi bola
Zyada baatein na karna, kam bolna aur mazaak masti use pasand nahi hai monica ko pata tha

"aaj maine gajar ka halwa banaya hai, tumhe pasand hai na??" monica haar Maan kar chup Rehne wali nahi thi

Aur Shyam bhi apni hi dhun ka maalik tha
Chupchap change karke apne kamre me chala gaya aur chupchap baith gaya bed par

Use pata tha monica jo kar rahi hai uske liye kar rahi hai
Lekin...

KNOCK KNOCK

darwaze par knock hote hi Shyam ne darwaza khola
Saamne monica thi aur uske haath me gajar ka halwa tha

"aja baith" bol monica ne shyam ko baitha diya bed par aur spoon se khilane lagi shyam ko

Wahi aankhen jo yug ki hai, wahi pyara sa cute sa face, lekin pata nahi kyun darr sa lagta hai Shyam se


"beta kya tujhe kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai?? Matlab haath se aag nikalna?? Ya ice nikalna??? Ya ya fir mitti, ret ya patthar" monica bolti chali gayi aur shy. Chupchap sunta raha

"nahi matlab hota hai na aajkal je bachhe superman ta spiderman banna chahte hai isliye poocha" monica bol padi aur use usi Waqt andaza ho gaya ki bakwas kiye ja rahi thi wo
Lekin ye pata karna zaroori hai ki ladke me yug ya monica ke gun hai ya nahi

"mai thoda rest karna chahta hoon" aakhirkar Shyam ne apna muh khola

"Haan beta zaroor tum rest karo mai tumhare liye chicken banati hoon" bol monica pyaar se Shyam ke gaalon me thapki dekar chali jaati hai

Na uske haathon se ice nikalti hai na aag
Pata nahi kya ho Jaata Hai mummy ko beech me
Shyam ne apne books nikal liye aur padhne laga

LEKIN...

achanak uske Saare nas kaale hone lage aur aankhen kaali ho gayi

F fir fir wahi fir wahi

Shyam dhadam se bed par gir gaya
Lekin uska poora sharir kaampne laga nas kaali hokar dhuen me badalne lagi

"AAAAHHGGGG" bardaasht ke bahar tha Shyam ke liye
Pasine se nahata gaya uska sharir lekin majboor tha wo
Bachpan se aaj tak har din ye hota hai ye

Monica kitchen me rone lagi, laachar thi, majboor thi wo
Apne bete ko bacha nahi pa rahi thi
Na Jaane kitne doctors dikhaye videos bhi banakar dikhai lekin koi kuch na kar saka

"he bhagwan mere bete ko bacha lo, koi to mere bete ko bacha lo" bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi monica

Shyam haamfne laga
Jaise ki kaala sa saaya us par kabza karna chahta ho

Shyam ne poori ichashakti laga di dheere dheere uski Saari nas wapas thik hone lagi aankhen bhi normal hone lagi

DHAPPP

Shyam ka sharir bed par gir gaya aur kamre ke darwaze ke Paas khadi hokar monica sab dekhti rahi rote rote
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BENTLEY COLLEGE
"kya??" aaqib hairan tha

"Haan bhai us ladke ne aisa kiya" modak bola

"bc Saari body par to pattiyan laga rakhi hai tune, usse hi pata chalta hai chokre ne acha bajaya hai tujhe" aaqib bola

"waise kaafi dino tak kisi ka band nahi bajaya hai aaqib" ye meethi si awaz sakshi ki thi jo us gang ja hissa thi

"hmm kahan milega wo chokra" aaquib ne poocha

"hamare class ka hi hai naya bachha hai" modak bola

"bachha hi hoga saale teri tarah teen baar fail to nahi hoga wo" gang ke ek ladke ne bola to sab hasne lage

"lekin tujh par haath kaise uthaya usne??" aaquib bola

"wahi to mai soch rahi hoon" sakshi boli

Modak ne sar jhuka liya, college ke ye ladke uske mai Baap hai
Is gang ke drugs bechta hai modak school me, bachchon me aur bhi kai logo me


"chal dekh lenge us bachhe ko, tere Saamne marenge use" aaqib ke bolte hi khush ho gaya modak jo akele ek tinka nahi ukhad sakta

Poora discussion chalta raha aur Shyam ko sabak sikhane ki baat chalti rahi
Lekin sakshi ko pata nahi kyun modak ke pattiyon se aabhas ho raha tha ki ye ladka Shyam ya jo bhi hai koi mamooli nahi hai kamzor nahi hai

Aur ye Shyam kitna mamooli ya kamzor nahi hai wo jald sakshi ko pata chalne wala tha
 
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Kratos

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:congrats: for your new story...to shyam yug aur rashmi ka beta hai..aur yug wahi hai jisko chen ke ladke ne master yug bola tha. Aur chen ye ajnabee - 2 wala hai...agar isme akash aur disha ke bete se koi takrayega to wo shyam hoga..fir i think akash ki bhi entry hogi shayad aur wo blind kid kaun tha..is hisab se dekhe to ek shyam ek wo blind kid aur ek akash aur disha ka beta..and is part me part 2 ke character bhi involve honge jaise yug ki family, mickey and all.
 

DAIVIK-RAJ

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"a gaye beta?? Kaisa raha school??" monica boli
Lekin shyam kuch nahi bola
Zyada baatein na karna, kam bolna aur mazaak masti use pasand nahi hai monica ko pata tha

"aaj maine gajar ka halwa banaya hai, tumhe pasand hai na??" monica haar Maan kar chup Rehne wali nahi thi

Aur Shyam bhi apni hi dhun ka maalik tha
Chupchap change karke apne kamre me chala gaya aur chupchap baith gaya bed par

Use pata tha monica jo kar rahi hai uske liye kar rahi hai
Lekin...

KNOCK KNOCK

darwaze par knock hote hi Shyam ne darwaza khola
Saamne monica thi aur uske haath me gajar ka halwa tha

"aja baith" bol monica ne shyam ko baitha diya bed par aur spoon se khilane lagi shyam ko

Wahi aankhen jo yug ki hai, wahi pyara sa cute sa face, lekin pata nahi kyun darr sa lagta hai Shyam se


"beta kya tujhe kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai?? Matlab haath se aag nikalna?? Ya ice nikalna??? Ya ya fir mitti, ret ya patthar" monica bolti chali gayi aur shy. Chupchap sunta raha

"nahi matlab hota hai na aajkal je bachhe superman ta spiderman banna chahte hai isliye poocha" monica bol padi aur use usi Waqt andaza ho gaya ki bakwas kiye ja rahi thi wo
Lekin ye pata karna zaroori hai ki ladke me yug ya monica ke gun hai ya nahi

"mai thoda rest karna chahta hoon" aakhirkar Shyam ne apna muh khola

"Haan beta zaroor tum rest karo mai tumhare liye chicken banati hoon" bol monica pyaar se Shyam ke gaalon me thapki dekar chali jaati hai

Na uske haathon se ice nikalti hai na aag
Pata nahi kya ho Jaata Hai mummy ko beech me
Shyam ne apne books nikal liye aur padhne laga

LEKIN...

achanak uske Saare nas kaale hone lage aur aankhen kaali ho gayi

F fir fir wahi fir wahi

Shyam dhadam se bed par gir gaya
Lekin uska poora sharir kaampne laga nas kaali hokar dhuen me badalne lagi

"AAAAHHGGGG" bardaasht ke bahar tha Shyam ke liye
Pasine se nahata gaya uska sharir lekin majboor tha wo
Bachpan se aaj tak har din ye hota hai ye

Monica kitchen me rone lagi, laachar thi, majboor thi wo
Apne bete ko bacha nahi pa rahi thi
Na Jaane kitne doctors dikhaye videos bhi banakar dikhai lekin koi kuch na kar saka

"he bhagwan mere bete ko bacha lo, koi to mere bete ko bacha lo" bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi monica

Shyam haamfne laga
Jaise ki kaala sa saaya us par kabza karna chahta ho

Shyam ne poori ichashakti laga di dheere dheere uski Saari nas wapas thik hone lagi aankhen bhi normal hone lagi

DHAPPP

Shyam ka sharir bed par gir gaya aur kamre ke darwaze ke Paas khadi hokar monica sab dekhti rahi rote rote
------------------------------------------------------------------
BENTLEY COLLEGE
"kya??" aaqib hairan tha

"Haan bhai us ladke ne aisa kiya" modak bola

"bc Saari body par to pattiyan laga rakhi hai tune, usse hi pata chalta hai chokre ne acha bajaya hai tujhe" aaqib bola

"waise kaafi dino tak kisi ka band nahi bajaya hai aaqib" ye meethi si awaz sakshi ki thi jo us gang ja hissa thi

"hmm kahan milega wo chokra" aaquib ne poocha

"hamare class ka hi hai naya bachha hai" modak bola

"bachha hi hoga saale teri tarah teen baar fail to nahi hoga wo" gang ke ek ladke ne bola to sab hasne lage

"lekin tujh par haath kaise uthaya usne??" aaquib bola

"wahi to mai soch rahi hoon" sakshi boli

Modak ne sar jhuka liya, college ke ye ladke uske mai Baap hai
Is gang ke drugs bechta hai modak school me, bachchon me aur bhi kai logo me


"chal dekh lenge us bachhe ko, tere Saamne marenge use" aaqib ke bolte hi khush ho gaya modak jo akele ek tinka nahi ukhad sakta

Poora discussion chalta raha aur Shyam ko sabak sikhane ki baat chalti rahi
Lekin sakshi ko pata nahi kyun modak ke pattiyon se aabhas ho raha tha ki ye ladka Shyam ya jo bhi hai koi mamooli nahi hai kamzor nahi hai

Aur ye Shyam kitna mamooli ya kamzor nahi hai wo jald sakshi ko pata chalne wala tha
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Kingsingh

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"a gaye beta?? Kaisa raha school??" monica boli
Lekin shyam kuch nahi bola
Zyada baatein na karna, kam bolna aur mazaak masti use pasand nahi hai monica ko pata tha

"aaj maine gajar ka halwa banaya hai, tumhe pasand hai na??" monica haar Maan kar chup Rehne wali nahi thi

Aur Shyam bhi apni hi dhun ka maalik tha
Chupchap change karke apne kamre me chala gaya aur chupchap baith gaya bed par

Use pata tha monica jo kar rahi hai uske liye kar rahi hai
Lekin...

KNOCK KNOCK

darwaze par knock hote hi Shyam ne darwaza khola
Saamne monica thi aur uske haath me gajar ka halwa tha

"aja baith" bol monica ne shyam ko baitha diya bed par aur spoon se khilane lagi shyam ko

Wahi aankhen jo yug ki hai, wahi pyara sa cute sa face, lekin pata nahi kyun darr sa lagta hai Shyam se


"beta kya tujhe kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai?? Matlab haath se aag nikalna?? Ya ice nikalna??? Ya ya fir mitti, ret ya patthar" monica bolti chali gayi aur shy. Chupchap sunta raha

"nahi matlab hota hai na aajkal je bachhe superman ta spiderman banna chahte hai isliye poocha" monica bol padi aur use usi Waqt andaza ho gaya ki bakwas kiye ja rahi thi wo
Lekin ye pata karna zaroori hai ki ladke me yug ya monica ke gun hai ya nahi

"mai thoda rest karna chahta hoon" aakhirkar Shyam ne apna muh khola

"Haan beta zaroor tum rest karo mai tumhare liye chicken banati hoon" bol monica pyaar se Shyam ke gaalon me thapki dekar chali jaati hai

Na uske haathon se ice nikalti hai na aag
Pata nahi kya ho Jaata Hai mummy ko beech me
Shyam ne apne books nikal liye aur padhne laga

LEKIN...

achanak uske Saare nas kaale hone lage aur aankhen kaali ho gayi

F fir fir wahi fir wahi

Shyam dhadam se bed par gir gaya
Lekin uska poora sharir kaampne laga nas kaali hokar dhuen me badalne lagi

"AAAAHHGGGG" bardaasht ke bahar tha Shyam ke liye
Pasine se nahata gaya uska sharir lekin majboor tha wo
Bachpan se aaj tak har din ye hota hai ye

Monica kitchen me rone lagi, laachar thi, majboor thi wo
Apne bete ko bacha nahi pa rahi thi
Na Jaane kitne doctors dikhaye videos bhi banakar dikhai lekin koi kuch na kar saka

"he bhagwan mere bete ko bacha lo, koi to mere bete ko bacha lo" bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi monica

Shyam haamfne laga
Jaise ki kaala sa saaya us par kabza karna chahta ho

Shyam ne poori ichashakti laga di dheere dheere uski Saari nas wapas thik hone lagi aankhen bhi normal hone lagi

DHAPPP

Shyam ka sharir bed par gir gaya aur kamre ke darwaze ke Paas khadi hokar monica sab dekhti rahi rote rote
------------------------------------------------------------------
BENTLEY COLLEGE
"kya??" aaqib hairan tha

"Haan bhai us ladke ne aisa kiya" modak bola

"bc Saari body par to pattiyan laga rakhi hai tune, usse hi pata chalta hai chokre ne acha bajaya hai tujhe" aaqib bola

"waise kaafi dino tak kisi ka band nahi bajaya hai aaqib" ye meethi si awaz sakshi ki thi jo us gang ja hissa thi

"hmm kahan milega wo chokra" aaquib ne poocha

"hamare class ka hi hai naya bachha hai" modak bola

"bachha hi hoga saale teri tarah teen baar fail to nahi hoga wo" gang ke ek ladke ne bola to sab hasne lage

"lekin tujh par haath kaise uthaya usne??" aaquib bola

"wahi to mai soch rahi hoon" sakshi boli

Modak ne sar jhuka liya, college ke ye ladke uske mai Baap hai
Is gang ke drugs bechta hai modak school me, bachchon me aur bhi kai logo me


"chal dekh lenge us bachhe ko, tere Saamne marenge use" aaqib ke bolte hi khush ho gaya modak jo akele ek tinka nahi ukhad sakta

Poora discussion chalta raha aur Shyam ko sabak sikhane ki baat chalti rahi
Lekin sakshi ko pata nahi kyun modak ke pattiyon se aabhas ho raha tha ki ye ladka Shyam ya jo bhi hai koi mamooli nahi hai kamzor nahi hai

Aur ye Shyam kitna mamooli ya kamzor nahi hai wo jald sakshi ko pata chalne wala tha
Super update
 

Vipul

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10 years later
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"baarish gir rahi hai" modak bola

"to??" uske chamche ne poocha

"koi na, socha ek item ko is baarish me smooch karna kaisa rahega??" modak ne poocha

"shirley hai na" chamcha bola

"shirley ki maa ki aan..." bolte bolte ruk gaya modak

Saamne school ki ek teacher ek ladke ko lekar khadi thi class ke darwaze ke saamne

US teacher ne us ladke ko class me lekar entry maari aur Saare students chup ho gaye

"students isse milo, ye hai Shyam. Bohut honhar ladka hai, apne class me top kiya hai usne. Aaj se apne school ke aakhri saal yani 12th std yahan isi school se karega, please welcome him" teacher ke bolte hi na chahte hue students ne patthar rakhkar taaliyan baja di

"Shyam saxena Naam hai iska, shyam sabhi ko hi bolo aur apna introduction do aur class me baith jao" teacher boli

Lekin Shyam chupchap apni jagah par baith gaya

"thoda sharmila kism ka hai shayad" teacher ne bahana banaya aur chali gayi

"dekho boss kaisi akad hai isme" chamcha bola
Modak ne gusse se daant bheench liye

Shirley sab dekh rahi thi
Bechara Shyam ab to iski dhunai pakki hai
Modak iska bhutta bana dega

RAMDHARI GOVT SCHOOL

Yahan padhai kam aur gundagardi zyada hoti hai
Yahan ya to dabe kuchle jao, ya dabao kuchlo

"oye raand aise kya dekh rahi hai" modak ne Shirley ki aur dekhkar kaha to Shirley chup hokar mud gayi

Modak patel
Class ka gunda, ya kaho school ka
Sab pareshan hai isse lekin koi muh nahi kholta iske khilaf

Shyam chupchap apne khayalon me khoya hua tha
Purane ghaav shayad kabhi nahi bharte
Usne aankhen band kar li

FLASHBACK
"w wo mai tumse dosti karna chahta hoon" Shyam darte hue bola to ladki badi mushkil se apni hasi rok kar khadi thi

"pata nahi kyun aajkal tum hi yaad aati rehti ho tum aur aur wo pata nahi kyun matlab" Shyam sar khujata raha aur ladki badi mushkil se apni hasi rok kar khadi rahi lekin ab rokna mushkil tha

"ha ha ha ha" aakhirkar aur bardasht nahi hua ladki se aur wo hasne lagi

"waise kyun ka jawab hai mere Paas" ladki boli

"kya??" hairan Shyam ne poocha

"kyunki tum mujhse pyaar karne lage ho" ladki boli

"Abey oye?? Oye??" awaz ne Shyam ko wapas flashback se present me lakar khada kar diya

"oye chutiye, sunai nahi deta kab se pukar raha hoon" modak ne Shyam ka collar pakadkar bola

DHADDDDDDDD

Shyam ne apne sar se modak ke naak me de maara
Khoon ki dhara beh nikli modak ke naak se
Usne apna naak pakad liya

Shyam ne jhat se khade hokar upair ke calf me ek se maara

KHAAAT

"mummy" wahi baith gaya modak

Apne school bag ke patle se strip jo kandhe par taangte hai usse dono haathon ko baandh diya aur apni belt nikala usne

STACKKKKK

STACKKKKK

STACKKKKK

STACKKKKK

modak rone laga lekin ruka nahi Shyam

KHAT

belt toot chuka tha aur Shyam ruk gaya tha
Baarish ruk gayi thi suraj nikal chuka tha

Shirley aur Baaki students ko statue banakar Shyam wapas apni seat par baith gaya

School ne ek nayi kahani likhi Jaane wali thi
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"Monica meri samajh me nahi a raha hai ki Shyam ko lekar tum itni concerned kyun ho??" mandip ne apni chai khatam karte hue kaha

"bhaiyya Shyam ko lekar nahi balki uski future ke liye hoon" monica boli

"property ka aadha hissa tumhara bhi hai monica" mandip bola

"mujhe nahi chahiye bhaiyya" monica boli

"monica tumhe na sahi Shyam ko to chahiye" mandip ne monica ke kandhe par haath rakha

"nahi bhaiyya mai Shyam ko ek normal Insaan banana chahti hoon, paiso ki aadat pata nahi kya kar degi" monica boli

"pata nahi monica, mere Paas Kehne ke liye kuch nahi hai" mandip bola

"papa mummy aur bhabhi kaisi hai bhaiyya aur sheetal??" monica boli

"sab ache hai monica, sab tumhare baare me poochte hai, please ek baar milne a jao Shyam ko lekar" mandip bola

"sorry bhaiyya" monica boli

"to fir mai chalta hoon monica, lekin yaad rahe mujhse tum link nahi todogi" mandip bola

Monica chup rahi

Ek normal si job karne wali monica Shyam ke saath reh rahi thi is shahar me jahan uske family ke Paas paison ki koi kami nahi hai
Pata nahi Shyam ko lekar kyun itni concerned hai ye ladki

"chalta hoon monica, call karte rehna" bol mandip chal pada aur monica use dekhti rahi jab tak wo aankhon se oojhal na ho gaya ho

Apne purse se ek photo nikala monica ne

"Rashmi aaj tumhara beta apni nayi zindagi shuru karne ja raha hai is shahar me, ho sake to use apna aashirwad do" Kehte Kehte aankhon se kuch aansu tapak pade monica ke
Bhai jis tarah se shyam ka intro hua hain us tarah se story ka name Ajanabee3- Strong hero hona chahiye tha starting se hi maza aagaya hain bhai


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Vipul

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"a gaye beta?? Kaisa raha school??" monica boli
Lekin shyam kuch nahi bola
Zyada baatein na karna, kam bolna aur mazaak masti use pasand nahi hai monica ko pata tha

"aaj maine gajar ka halwa banaya hai, tumhe pasand hai na??" monica haar Maan kar chup Rehne wali nahi thi

Aur Shyam bhi apni hi dhun ka maalik tha
Chupchap change karke apne kamre me chala gaya aur chupchap baith gaya bed par

Use pata tha monica jo kar rahi hai uske liye kar rahi hai
Lekin...

KNOCK KNOCK

darwaze par knock hote hi Shyam ne darwaza khola
Saamne monica thi aur uske haath me gajar ka halwa tha

"aja baith" bol monica ne shyam ko baitha diya bed par aur spoon se khilane lagi shyam ko

Wahi aankhen jo yug ki hai, wahi pyara sa cute sa face, lekin pata nahi kyun darr sa lagta hai Shyam se


"beta kya tujhe kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai?? Matlab haath se aag nikalna?? Ya ice nikalna??? Ya ya fir mitti, ret ya patthar" monica bolti chali gayi aur shy. Chupchap sunta raha

"nahi matlab hota hai na aajkal je bachhe superman ta spiderman banna chahte hai isliye poocha" monica bol padi aur use usi Waqt andaza ho gaya ki bakwas kiye ja rahi thi wo
Lekin ye pata karna zaroori hai ki ladke me yug ya monica ke gun hai ya nahi

"mai thoda rest karna chahta hoon" aakhirkar Shyam ne apna muh khola

"Haan beta zaroor tum rest karo mai tumhare liye chicken banati hoon" bol monica pyaar se Shyam ke gaalon me thapki dekar chali jaati hai

Na uske haathon se ice nikalti hai na aag
Pata nahi kya ho Jaata Hai mummy ko beech me
Shyam ne apne books nikal liye aur padhne laga

LEKIN...

achanak uske Saare nas kaale hone lage aur aankhen kaali ho gayi

F fir fir wahi fir wahi

Shyam dhadam se bed par gir gaya
Lekin uska poora sharir kaampne laga nas kaali hokar dhuen me badalne lagi

"AAAAHHGGGG" bardaasht ke bahar tha Shyam ke liye
Pasine se nahata gaya uska sharir lekin majboor tha wo
Bachpan se aaj tak har din ye hota hai ye

Monica kitchen me rone lagi, laachar thi, majboor thi wo
Apne bete ko bacha nahi pa rahi thi
Na Jaane kitne doctors dikhaye videos bhi banakar dikhai lekin koi kuch na kar saka

"he bhagwan mere bete ko bacha lo, koi to mere bete ko bacha lo" bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi monica

Shyam haamfne laga
Jaise ki kaala sa saaya us par kabza karna chahta ho

Shyam ne poori ichashakti laga di dheere dheere uski Saari nas wapas thik hone lagi aankhen bhi normal hone lagi

DHAPPP

Shyam ka sharir bed par gir gaya aur kamre ke darwaze ke Paas khadi hokar monica sab dekhti rahi rote rote
------------------------------------------------------------------
BENTLEY COLLEGE
"kya??" aaqib hairan tha

"Haan bhai us ladke ne aisa kiya" modak bola

"bc Saari body par to pattiyan laga rakhi hai tune, usse hi pata chalta hai chokre ne acha bajaya hai tujhe" aaqib bola

"waise kaafi dino tak kisi ka band nahi bajaya hai aaqib" ye meethi si awaz sakshi ki thi jo us gang ja hissa thi

"hmm kahan milega wo chokra" aaquib ne poocha

"hamare class ka hi hai naya bachha hai" modak bola

"bachha hi hoga saale teri tarah teen baar fail to nahi hoga wo" gang ke ek ladke ne bola to sab hasne lage

"lekin tujh par haath kaise uthaya usne??" aaquib bola

"wahi to mai soch rahi hoon" sakshi boli

Modak ne sar jhuka liya, college ke ye ladke uske mai Baap hai
Is gang ke drugs bechta hai modak school me, bachchon me aur bhi kai logo me


"chal dekh lenge us bachhe ko, tere Saamne marenge use" aaqib ke bolte hi khush ho gaya modak jo akele ek tinka nahi ukhad sakta

Poora discussion chalta raha aur Shyam ko sabak sikhane ki baat chalti rahi
Lekin sakshi ko pata nahi kyun modak ke pattiyon se aabhas ho raha tha ki ye ladka Shyam ya jo bhi hai koi mamooli nahi hai kamzor nahi hai

Aur ye Shyam kitna mamooli ya kamzor nahi hai wo jald sakshi ko pata chalne wala tha
Wow bhai

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New story k liye congratulates... starting mast h... story rochak lag rhi... part 1 ka koi character aye to clear kar dena... bahut time ho gaya h... aur ek hi naam ke 2 character mat lana... confused honge sab... baki sab badhiya h....

Beauty n beast 2 pe update nhi aa rhe the... to laga ki... koi naya story ka kaam chalu h... khair puraani story ko bhi uske aant tak pahucha do to sahi rhega... kuch nhi to mood fresh karne k liye hi purane me kuch dalte chalo...

Next update k intezaar me....
 
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