Vipul
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Congrats bhai first update....
Aur yeh yug abhi tak mara nahi kamal hain ab kuchh maya hoga waiting for new update
Fantasy AJNABEE 3-WEAK HERO
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Aur yeh yug abhi tak mara nahi kamal hain ab kuchh maya hoga waiting for new update
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Swaraj Bhai agar aapko ishi Tarah update dena tha to story abhi start hi Nahi karte
Sabse pahle Apne problem ko solve Ka Lete sath hi iss story ke Kuch update Apne paas store kar Lete emergency ke liye
Otherwise
Sorry agar aapko Bura laga to
Sabse pahle Apne problem ko solve Ka Lete sath hi iss story ke Kuch update Apne paas store kar Lete emergency ke liye
Otherwise
Sorry agar aapko Bura laga to
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10 years later
Raipur
"baarish gir rahi hai" modak bola
"to??" uske chamche ne poocha
"koi na, socha ek item ko is baarish me smooch karna kaisa rahega??" modak ne poocha
"shirley hai na" chamcha bola
"shirley ki maa ki aan..." bolte bolte ruk gaya modak
Saamne school ki ek teacher ek ladke ko lekar khadi thi class ke darwaze ke saamne
US teacher ne us ladke ko class me lekar entry maari aur Saare students chup ho gaye
"students isse milo, ye hai Shyam. Bohut honhar ladka hai, apne class me top kiya hai usne. Aaj se apne school ke aakhri saal yani 12th std yahan isi school se karega, please welcome him" teacher ke bolte hi na chahte hue students ne patthar rakhkar taaliyan baja di
"Shyam saxena Naam hai iska, shyam sabhi ko hi bolo aur apna introduction do aur class me baith jao" teacher boli
Lekin Shyam chupchap apni jagah par baith gaya
"thoda sharmila kism ka hai shayad" teacher ne bahana banaya aur chali gayi
"dekho boss kaisi akad hai isme" chamcha bola
Modak ne gusse se daant bheench liye
Shirley sab dekh rahi thi
Bechara Shyam ab to iski dhunai pakki hai
Modak iska bhutta bana dega
RAMDHARI GOVT SCHOOL
Yahan padhai kam aur gundagardi zyada hoti hai
Yahan ya to dabe kuchle jao, ya dabao kuchlo
"oye raand aise kya dekh rahi hai" modak ne Shirley ki aur dekhkar kaha to Shirley chup hokar mud gayi
Modak patel
Class ka gunda, ya kaho school ka
Sab pareshan hai isse lekin koi muh nahi kholta iske khilaf
Shyam chupchap apne khayalon me khoya hua tha
Purane ghaav shayad kabhi nahi bharte
Usne aankhen band kar li
FLASHBACK
"w wo mai tumse dosti karna chahta hoon" Shyam darte hue bola to ladki badi mushkil se apni hasi rok kar khadi thi
"pata nahi kyun aajkal tum hi yaad aati rehti ho tum aur aur wo pata nahi kyun matlab" Shyam sar khujata raha aur ladki badi mushkil se apni hasi rok kar khadi rahi lekin ab rokna mushkil tha
"ha ha ha ha" aakhirkar aur bardasht nahi hua ladki se aur wo hasne lagi
"waise kyun ka jawab hai mere Paas" ladki boli
"kya??" hairan Shyam ne poocha
"kyunki tum mujhse pyaar karne lage ho" ladki boli
"Abey oye?? Oye??" awaz ne Shyam ko wapas flashback se present me lakar khada kar diya
"oye chutiye, sunai nahi deta kab se pukar raha hoon" modak ne Shyam ka collar pakadkar bola
DHADDDDDDDD
Shyam ne apne sar se modak ke naak me de maara
Khoon ki dhara beh nikli modak ke naak se
Usne apna naak pakad liya
Shyam ne jhat se khade hokar upair ke calf me ek se maara
KHAAAT
"mummy" wahi baith gaya modak
Apne school bag ke patle se strip jo kandhe par taangte hai usse dono haathon ko baandh diya aur apni belt nikala usne
STACKKKKK
STACKKKKK
STACKKKKK
STACKKKKK
modak rone laga lekin ruka nahi Shyam
KHAT
belt toot chuka tha aur Shyam ruk gaya tha
Baarish ruk gayi thi suraj nikal chuka tha
Shirley aur Baaki students ko statue banakar Shyam wapas apni seat par baith gaya
School ne ek nayi kahani likhi Jaane wali thi
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"Monica meri samajh me nahi a raha hai ki Shyam ko lekar tum itni concerned kyun ho??" mandip ne apni chai khatam karte hue kaha
"bhaiyya Shyam ko lekar nahi balki uski future ke liye hoon" monica boli
"property ka aadha hissa tumhara bhi hai monica" mandip bola
"mujhe nahi chahiye bhaiyya" monica boli
"monica tumhe na sahi Shyam ko to chahiye" mandip ne monica ke kandhe par haath rakha
"nahi bhaiyya mai Shyam ko ek normal Insaan banana chahti hoon, paiso ki aadat pata nahi kya kar degi" monica boli
"pata nahi monica, mere Paas Kehne ke liye kuch nahi hai" mandip bola
"papa mummy aur bhabhi kaisi hai bhaiyya aur sheetal??" monica boli
"sab ache hai monica, sab tumhare baare me poochte hai, please ek baar milne a jao Shyam ko lekar" mandip bola
"sorry bhaiyya" monica boli
"to fir mai chalta hoon monica, lekin yaad rahe mujhse tum link nahi todogi" mandip bola
Monica chup rahi
Ek normal si job karne wali monica Shyam ke saath reh rahi thi is shahar me jahan uske family ke Paas paison ki koi kami nahi hai
Pata nahi Shyam ko lekar kyun itni concerned hai ye ladki
"chalta hoon monica, call karte rehna" bol mandip chal pada aur monica use dekhti rahi jab tak wo aankhon se oojhal na ho gaya ho
Apne purse se ek photo nikala monica ne
"Rashmi aaj tumhara beta apni nayi zindagi shuru karne ja raha hai is shahar me, ho sake to use apna aashirwad do" Kehte Kehte aankhon se kuch aansu tapak pade monica ke
Raipur
"baarish gir rahi hai" modak bola
"to??" uske chamche ne poocha
"koi na, socha ek item ko is baarish me smooch karna kaisa rahega??" modak ne poocha
"shirley hai na" chamcha bola
"shirley ki maa ki aan..." bolte bolte ruk gaya modak
Saamne school ki ek teacher ek ladke ko lekar khadi thi class ke darwaze ke saamne
US teacher ne us ladke ko class me lekar entry maari aur Saare students chup ho gaye
"students isse milo, ye hai Shyam. Bohut honhar ladka hai, apne class me top kiya hai usne. Aaj se apne school ke aakhri saal yani 12th std yahan isi school se karega, please welcome him" teacher ke bolte hi na chahte hue students ne patthar rakhkar taaliyan baja di
"Shyam saxena Naam hai iska, shyam sabhi ko hi bolo aur apna introduction do aur class me baith jao" teacher boli
Lekin Shyam chupchap apni jagah par baith gaya
"thoda sharmila kism ka hai shayad" teacher ne bahana banaya aur chali gayi
"dekho boss kaisi akad hai isme" chamcha bola
Modak ne gusse se daant bheench liye
Shirley sab dekh rahi thi
Bechara Shyam ab to iski dhunai pakki hai
Modak iska bhutta bana dega
RAMDHARI GOVT SCHOOL
Yahan padhai kam aur gundagardi zyada hoti hai
Yahan ya to dabe kuchle jao, ya dabao kuchlo
"oye raand aise kya dekh rahi hai" modak ne Shirley ki aur dekhkar kaha to Shirley chup hokar mud gayi
Modak patel
Class ka gunda, ya kaho school ka
Sab pareshan hai isse lekin koi muh nahi kholta iske khilaf
Shyam chupchap apne khayalon me khoya hua tha
Purane ghaav shayad kabhi nahi bharte
Usne aankhen band kar li
FLASHBACK
"w wo mai tumse dosti karna chahta hoon" Shyam darte hue bola to ladki badi mushkil se apni hasi rok kar khadi thi
"pata nahi kyun aajkal tum hi yaad aati rehti ho tum aur aur wo pata nahi kyun matlab" Shyam sar khujata raha aur ladki badi mushkil se apni hasi rok kar khadi rahi lekin ab rokna mushkil tha
"ha ha ha ha" aakhirkar aur bardasht nahi hua ladki se aur wo hasne lagi
"waise kyun ka jawab hai mere Paas" ladki boli
"kya??" hairan Shyam ne poocha
"kyunki tum mujhse pyaar karne lage ho" ladki boli
"Abey oye?? Oye??" awaz ne Shyam ko wapas flashback se present me lakar khada kar diya
"oye chutiye, sunai nahi deta kab se pukar raha hoon" modak ne Shyam ka collar pakadkar bola
DHADDDDDDDD
Shyam ne apne sar se modak ke naak me de maara
Khoon ki dhara beh nikli modak ke naak se
Usne apna naak pakad liya
Shyam ne jhat se khade hokar upair ke calf me ek se maara
KHAAAT
"mummy" wahi baith gaya modak
Apne school bag ke patle se strip jo kandhe par taangte hai usse dono haathon ko baandh diya aur apni belt nikala usne
STACKKKKK
STACKKKKK
STACKKKKK
STACKKKKK
modak rone laga lekin ruka nahi Shyam
KHAT
belt toot chuka tha aur Shyam ruk gaya tha
Baarish ruk gayi thi suraj nikal chuka tha
Shirley aur Baaki students ko statue banakar Shyam wapas apni seat par baith gaya
School ne ek nayi kahani likhi Jaane wali thi
------------------------------------------------------------------
"Monica meri samajh me nahi a raha hai ki Shyam ko lekar tum itni concerned kyun ho??" mandip ne apni chai khatam karte hue kaha
"bhaiyya Shyam ko lekar nahi balki uski future ke liye hoon" monica boli
"property ka aadha hissa tumhara bhi hai monica" mandip bola
"mujhe nahi chahiye bhaiyya" monica boli
"monica tumhe na sahi Shyam ko to chahiye" mandip ne monica ke kandhe par haath rakha
"nahi bhaiyya mai Shyam ko ek normal Insaan banana chahti hoon, paiso ki aadat pata nahi kya kar degi" monica boli
"pata nahi monica, mere Paas Kehne ke liye kuch nahi hai" mandip bola
"papa mummy aur bhabhi kaisi hai bhaiyya aur sheetal??" monica boli
"sab ache hai monica, sab tumhare baare me poochte hai, please ek baar milne a jao Shyam ko lekar" mandip bola
"sorry bhaiyya" monica boli
"to fir mai chalta hoon monica, lekin yaad rahe mujhse tum link nahi todogi" mandip bola
Monica chup rahi
Ek normal si job karne wali monica Shyam ke saath reh rahi thi is shahar me jahan uske family ke Paas paison ki koi kami nahi hai
Pata nahi Shyam ko lekar kyun itni concerned hai ye ladki
"chalta hoon monica, call karte rehna" bol mandip chal pada aur monica use dekhti rahi jab tak wo aankhon se oojhal na ho gaya ho
Apne purse se ek photo nikala monica ne
"Rashmi aaj tumhara beta apni nayi zindagi shuru karne ja raha hai is shahar me, ho sake to use apna aashirwad do" Kehte Kehte aankhon se kuch aansu tapak pade monica ke
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rashmi ka beta.......... yani rashmi aur yug ka beta.......... monika paal rahi hai.............. shyam
aur sheetal......... mandeep ke pas rahti hai
aur sheetal......... mandeep ke pas rahti hai
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