Fantasy AJNABEE (completed)

[Crocodile]

Bro mai story ko zyada nahi kheenchta agar ZAROORI nahi to story shayad ek do page par hi khatam ho jaaye
Agent jaise story bohut lambi hoti hai kyunki usme bohut element hota hai
Is story me aakash ke safar ki kahani thi.kab wo ek bad dimag ladke se ek aam zindagi jeene wala insan ban gaya
Lekin uske dushmano ke uksane par usne apna roop dikha diya.isse pehle ki sab khatam ho jaaye us vriddh ne sab sambhal liya
Lekin agar iska part 2 chahiye to zaroor comment kare

Part 2 ka besabri de intejar rahega sath he saath agent 3 ka b ,

thoda story aur lambi krni cahiye thi bhut jald khtam ho gyi , umeed hai part 2 lamba jarur hoga

 

[Rohan Rathore]

Bro ab chain se pad sakta hu story ko without any disturbance.

 

[Rohan Rathore]

Ab bas caption ke aage complete likh do to completed stories me add ho jaegi

 

[Sona]

Itni achhi story itni jldi khtm krdi

 

[Vinod1368]

Lagta hai story ka end next part start karne ke chakkar me jaldi se kar diya.
Story ko kuch episodes tak aur chalaya ja sakta tha.
Khair waiting 4 next part

 

[Hellohoney]

Nice end bro aapne bhot hi achi likhi

 

[kamdev99008]

bahut khoob swaraj bhai............. bemisal...... lekin last chapter me ghatnakram kuchh jyada teji se chala........ isliye the end padhkar jhatka sa laga

khair.......... story lay me bandhi hui hi poori ho to achchhi lagti hai..... jabardasti lambi kheenchne me boring ho jati hai

ab to fantassy me bhi perfection dikha hi diya apne......

badla ka 3rd sequel .... yash aur kajal ki kahani..... apke chir-parichit andaj me badhiya shuru hui hai.....

best of luck

 

[Mbindas]

Bohot khub bhai ek or story complet ho gai aaki.

 

[Swaraj]

Part 2 ka besabri de intejar rahega sath he saath agent 3 ka b ,

thoda story aur lambi krni cahiye thi bhut jald khtam ho gyi , umeed hai part 2 lamba jarur hoga

Thanks a lot bro
Kaafi logo ki shikayat hai ki story ko jald hi khatam kiya gaya.kuch had tak aap log sahi ho kyunki log kaafi pasand karne lag gaye the
Lekin ye meri pehli fantasy story Thi bro.aur chance nahi le sakta tha
Part 2 jald aayega
Sath agent 3 bhi .saath rahiye aur meri story "beauty and the beast "ko support kijiye

 

[Swaraj]

Bro ab chain se pad sakta hu story ko without any disturbance.

Thanks bro.kaisi lagi zaroor batana