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Google Translate jindabad dhalchandarun bhaiBhai itni English yahan ek do ko hi aati hai isliye is comment ko Hindi mein likh do.
Oh mujhe pata nahi hai in sab chijo ke bare mein.
ये सब चलते रहता है हर कहानी मे, वैसे कहानी रोमांचक हैJi bhai kahi per kuch galti hue hai mere se update me jis wajh se aapne jo bat boli wo bilkul sahi hai
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Kuch meri bhi galti hai isme bhai kahe per jaldi baji me kam leya maine tabhi
Bilkul bhai, per sab lekhak ki nazar se thodi dekh paate hai?कहानिया और कुछ नहीं ब्लकि वो आईना होती है जो हम देख नहीं पाते. मैंने हमेशा कहा है कि कहानिया कभी आसमान से नहीं आती वो हर समय हमारे आसपास गली मोहल्ले मे बनतीं बिगड़ती रहती है
Brother I think you have read only update 46 or you have left the story in between and read it.So this guy doesn’t feel anything for Manan Thakur also, because Sandhya comes along with Manan Thakur and after knowing Shanaya is sister of sandhya Thakur he is saying he doesn’t have any feelings about her…if so he doesn’t have any feelings for his father also and about himself also he got birth from Sandhya’s womb, she nurtured him with love and care…and had trust and faith in him so made locket of key to get the treasure hidden by his grandfather…if she was like him or like in his thought she would have put it on the aman…this character named Abhaya will never understand what his mother is and how she has been up to here…when they were unknown about eachother’s relationship having sex was natural but even after knowing she is his mother’s sister is worst that too pretending he has no relation with his mom is worst…give some light in his life…story is now in single track no progress in thought of this guy is worst…
Thank you sooo much HalfbludPrince bhaiये सब चलते रहता है हर कहानी मे, वैसे कहानी रोमांचक है
Yaar bhai mast likh rahe ho majaa aaraha hai
Hero ka itna mast scene tha paayal ke saath ek puchhi hi dila dete yaar kam se kam
Keep posting
Are mera comment ache pad le . Maine writer ko kuch nahi bola .Dekho mitra, mwra maanna hai ki story likhne per kewal writer ka adhikaar hota hai, khali prefix incest hone se kya hi fark padta hai? Agar tujhe us se dikkat hai to alag baat hai?Baaki sex to isme waise bhi hai, doosri baat only sex se story hit nahi hoti
Btw. Meri pichli story super hit thi, likin usme sex ka namonisaan bhi nahi tha
Aur meri current story me bhi nahi hai, lekin wo bhi ek badhiya story hai, wo baat alag hai, ki yaha kai chumatiye aise bhi aate hai jinhe khaali maa bahan ki chudai padhna pasand hai bc,
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abe yaar mera comment tho ache se pad le… tu chutiyo ki tarah kyu bak raha hia… maine kab bola sex chahiye … or teri story ki kyu promote kar raha hai … or yeh comment tere liye nahi tha ….Dekho mitra, mwra maanna hai ki story likhne per kewal writer ka adhikaar hota hai, khali prefix incest hone se kya hi fark padta hai? Agar tujhe us se dikkat hai to alag baat hai?Baaki sex to isme waise bhi hai, doosri baat only sex se story hit nahi hoti
Btw. Meri pichli story super hit thi, likin usme sex ka namonisaan bhi nahi tha
Aur meri current story me bhi nahi hai, lekin wo bhi ek badhiya story hai, wo baat alag hai, ki yaha kai chumatiye aise bhi aate hai jinhe khaali maa bahan ki chudai padhna pasand hai bc,
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