Fantasy Alone beast

[Luffy]

Ranjeet... Dekh kabir dekh kaise tera ant aa raha hai tum apne app ko bhut takatwar samjh te hoo na aaj dekh kaise teri priya ko nanga krke nacha taa hooon...

Jeet .... Bskd ke jaan se maar doonga tujhe ek baar hath khol tujhe batata hoon kon asli mard hai.

Ranjeet... Hahahaha sale tujhe to maaronga abhi maronga osne ek goli mari jeet.. or jeet mar geya

Ranjeet ne apne admi ko bola esko jao kutton ko fek ayo khane ke liye..

Ab mujhe gussa ana laga tha maine apni poori takat ke sath rassiyon ko todne ki kosish ki .
Ant mein mere hath khul gaye

Ranjeet ke admi ne mujhe dekh liya woh meri tarf bhagga apni gun liye or sidhi goli chla di

: Goli aker sidhe mere bajjo mein lgi

Main gusse mein tha mujhe bas ranjeet se bdla lena tha mujhe kuch nhi feel ho raha tha

Jab tak ranjeet ka admi mere goli mari tab tak main oske pass jaa phoucha or uski gardan tod di

Uske hath se gun pakad kar uske dusre admi ko maar diyan

Wohan karib 8 admi de meine sab ko goli maaar di ek bhi jinda nhi chora

Bas ek admi bacha tha jo jeet ki lash ko leker geya tha

Mere etna sab krne ke bad ranjeet shock.tha usko kuch samjh nhi aa rhaa tha kyuki eh sab kuch hi pal mein huya

Main ab ranjeet ki traff bda

Ranjeet ki akhoon mein dar saaf dikh raha thaa woh khaanp rahaa tha

Main usko marne se phle sab kuch janna chahata tha isiliye meine usko samjh kuch sach batone ko bola
Jo uske dar ke mare bol bhi diya.


Maim.... Kyu kiya yeh sab akhir kyu.

Ranjeet.. mujhe krde bhai age se esa kuch nhi kronga .

Main....maffi tujhe nhi.mile gi tune mera jaan se pyara dost maar diya jisko main apne bhai jaisa maanta tha

Ranjeet.. mujhe maaf krde pls bhai main sab kuch chorr donga ols mujhe maaf krde.

Main... Tune manisha ko kyu kaid kiya

Ranjeet... Bhai woh tumse pyar krne lagi hai hamare khilaff ho chli thi usko sab plan ke bare.mein pta chl geya tha isliye.liya isko marna jaorri tha.

Main.. tune bhot badi glti krdi ranjeet.
Akhir meine.kya.bigada tha tera

: Ranjeet..... hahahaahha abhi tujhe eh nhi batonga chahe mujhe maar hi kyu na do

Maine talwar uthai or ranjeet ka hath kaat diya


Main... Btaa akhir kyu tum hum sab ko marna chahate the.kyu
..

Ranjeet... Dard se rote huye achank hassne lga .
Jab mujhe uski hasi ka karn samjh aya to tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki..

Ek talwaar mere peat ke aar paar ho chuki thi .

Or mere muh se khoon nikl raha tha.

Jab meine pishe mud kar dekha to

Woh koi or nhi jeet tha...
Mera yaar jise.main apna bhai maanta tha usne mere peeth pishe talwaar khoob di thi.


Priya manisha palvi teeno meri tarf bhagi lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki main jameen par gir geya tha..
Tabhi jeet..bola..

Awesome update

 

[mashish]

Ranjeet... Dekh kabir dekh kaise tera ant aa raha hai tum apne app ko bhut takatwar samjh te hoo na aaj dekh kaise teri priya ko nanga krke nacha taa hooon...

Jeet .... Bskd ke jaan se maar doonga tujhe ek baar hath khol tujhe batata hoon kon asli mard hai.

Ranjeet... Hahahaha sale tujhe to maaronga abhi maronga osne ek goli mari jeet.. or jeet mar geya

Ranjeet ne apne admi ko bola esko jao kutton ko fek ayo khane ke liye..

Ab mujhe gussa ana laga tha maine apni poori takat ke sath rassiyon ko todne ki kosish ki .
Ant mein mere hath khul gaye

Ranjeet ke admi ne mujhe dekh liya woh meri tarf bhagga apni gun liye or sidhi goli chla di

: Goli aker sidhe mere bajjo mein lgi

Main gusse mein tha mujhe bas ranjeet se bdla lena tha mujhe kuch nhi feel ho raha tha

Jab tak ranjeet ka admi mere goli mari tab tak main oske pass jaa phoucha or uski gardan tod di

Uske hath se gun pakad kar uske dusre admi ko maar diyan

Wohan karib 8 admi de meine sab ko goli maaar di ek bhi jinda nhi chora

Bas ek admi bacha tha jo jeet ki lash ko leker geya tha

Mere etna sab krne ke bad ranjeet shock.tha usko kuch samjh nhi aa rhaa tha kyuki eh sab kuch hi pal mein huya

Main ab ranjeet ki traff bda

Ranjeet ki akhoon mein dar saaf dikh raha thaa woh khaanp rahaa tha

Main usko marne se phle sab kuch janna chahata tha isiliye meine usko samjh kuch sach batone ko bola
Jo uske dar ke mare bol bhi diya.


Maim.... Kyu kiya yeh sab akhir kyu.

Ranjeet.. mujhe krde bhai age se esa kuch nhi kronga .

Main....maffi tujhe nhi.mile gi tune mera jaan se pyara dost maar diya jisko main apne bhai jaisa maanta tha

Ranjeet.. mujhe maaf krde pls bhai main sab kuch chorr donga ols mujhe maaf krde.

Main... Tune manisha ko kyu kaid kiya

Ranjeet... Bhai woh tumse pyar krne lagi hai hamare khilaff ho chli thi usko sab plan ke bare.mein pta chl geya tha isliye.liya isko marna jaorri tha.

Main.. tune bhot badi glti krdi ranjeet.
Akhir meine.kya.bigada tha tera

: Ranjeet..... hahahaahha abhi tujhe eh nhi batonga chahe mujhe maar hi kyu na do

Maine talwar uthai or ranjeet ka hath kaat diya


Main... Btaa akhir kyu tum hum sab ko marna chahate the.kyu
..

Ranjeet... Dard se rote huye achank hassne lga .
Jab mujhe uski hasi ka karn samjh aya to tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki..

Ek talwaar mere peat ke aar paar ho chuki thi .

Or mere muh se khoon nikl raha tha.

Jab meine pishe mud kar dekha to

Woh koi or nhi jeet tha...
Mera yaar jise.main apna bhai maanta tha usne mere peeth pishe talwaar khoob di thi.


Priya manisha palvi teeno meri tarf bhagi lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki main jameen par gir geya tha..
Tabhi jeet..bola..

writer ji ye kya itna chota update isse achha to do din ke update milakar ham read kare aniway nice update

 

[Shanu]

For new thread

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome Update Bhai Keep Posting

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Really mine page he meet or doubt that aur is update mai clear bi ho gaya ha ha ha ha ha ha

 

[Naik]

Ranjeet... Dekh kabir dekh kaise tera ant aa raha hai tum apne app ko bhut takatwar samjh te hoo na aaj dekh kaise teri priya ko nanga krke nacha taa hooon...

Jeet .... Bskd ke jaan se maar doonga tujhe ek baar hath khol tujhe batata hoon kon asli mard hai.

Ranjeet... Hahahaha sale tujhe to maaronga abhi maronga osne ek goli mari jeet.. or jeet mar geya

Ranjeet ne apne admi ko bola esko jao kutton ko fek ayo khane ke liye..

Ab mujhe gussa ana laga tha maine apni poori takat ke sath rassiyon ko todne ki kosish ki .
Ant mein mere hath khul gaye

Ranjeet ke admi ne mujhe dekh liya woh meri tarf bhagga apni gun liye or sidhi goli chla di

: Goli aker sidhe mere bajjo mein lgi

Main gusse mein tha mujhe bas ranjeet se bdla lena tha mujhe kuch nhi feel ho raha tha

Jab tak ranjeet ka admi mere goli mari tab tak main oske pass jaa phoucha or uski gardan tod di

Uske hath se gun pakad kar uske dusre admi ko maar diyan

Wohan karib 8 admi de meine sab ko goli maaar di ek bhi jinda nhi chora

Bas ek admi bacha tha jo jeet ki lash ko leker geya tha

Mere etna sab krne ke bad ranjeet shock.tha usko kuch samjh nhi aa rhaa tha kyuki eh sab kuch hi pal mein huya

Main ab ranjeet ki traff bda

Ranjeet ki akhoon mein dar saaf dikh raha thaa woh khaanp rahaa tha

Main usko marne se phle sab kuch janna chahata tha isiliye meine usko samjh kuch sach batone ko bola
Jo uske dar ke mare bol bhi diya.


Maim.... Kyu kiya yeh sab akhir kyu.

Ranjeet.. mujhe krde bhai age se esa kuch nhi kronga .

Main....maffi tujhe nhi.mile gi tune mera jaan se pyara dost maar diya jisko main apne bhai jaisa maanta tha

Ranjeet.. mujhe maaf krde pls bhai main sab kuch chorr donga ols mujhe maaf krde.

Main... Tune manisha ko kyu kaid kiya

Ranjeet... Bhai woh tumse pyar krne lagi hai hamare khilaff ho chli thi usko sab plan ke bare.mein pta chl geya tha isliye.liya isko marna jaorri tha.

Main.. tune bhot badi glti krdi ranjeet.
Akhir meine.kya.bigada tha tera

: Ranjeet..... hahahaahha abhi tujhe eh nhi batonga chahe mujhe maar hi kyu na do

Maine talwar uthai or ranjeet ka hath kaat diya


Main... Btaa akhir kyu tum hum sab ko marna chahate the.kyu
..

Ranjeet... Dard se rote huye achank hassne lga .
Jab mujhe uski hasi ka karn samjh aya to tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki..

Ek talwaar mere peat ke aar paar ho chuki thi .

Or mere muh se khoon nikl raha tha.

Jab meine pishe mud kar dekha to

Woh koi or nhi jeet tha...
Mera yaar jise.main apna bhai maanta tha usne mere peeth pishe talwaar khoob di thi.


Priya manisha palvi teeno meri tarf bhagi lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki main jameen par gir geya tha..
Tabhi jeet..bola..

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai

 

[Naina]

Ranjeet... Dekh kabir dekh kaise tera ant aa raha hai tum apne app ko bhut takatwar samjh te hoo na aaj dekh kaise teri priya ko nanga krke nacha taa hooon...

Jeet .... Bskd ke jaan se maar doonga tujhe ek baar hath khol tujhe batata hoon kon asli mard hai.

Ranjeet... Hahahaha sale tujhe to maaronga abhi maronga osne ek goli mari jeet.. or jeet mar geya

Ranjeet ne apne admi ko bola esko jao kutton ko fek ayo khane ke liye..

Ab mujhe gussa ana laga tha maine apni poori takat ke sath rassiyon ko todne ki kosish ki .
Ant mein mere hath khul gaye

Ranjeet ke admi ne mujhe dekh liya woh meri tarf bhagga apni gun liye or sidhi goli chla di

: Goli aker sidhe mere bajjo mein lgi

Main gusse mein tha mujhe bas ranjeet se bdla lena tha mujhe kuch nhi feel ho raha tha

Jab tak ranjeet ka admi mere goli mari tab tak main oske pass jaa phoucha or uski gardan tod di

Uske hath se gun pakad kar uske dusre admi ko maar diyan

Wohan karib 8 admi de meine sab ko goli maaar di ek bhi jinda nhi chora

Bas ek admi bacha tha jo jeet ki lash ko leker geya tha

Mere etna sab krne ke bad ranjeet shock.tha usko kuch samjh nhi aa rhaa tha kyuki eh sab kuch hi pal mein huya

Main ab ranjeet ki traff bda

Ranjeet ki akhoon mein dar saaf dikh raha thaa woh khaanp rahaa tha

Main usko marne se phle sab kuch janna chahata tha isiliye meine usko samjh kuch sach batone ko bola
Jo uske dar ke mare bol bhi diya.


Maim.... Kyu kiya yeh sab akhir kyu.

Ranjeet.. mujhe krde bhai age se esa kuch nhi kronga .

Main....maffi tujhe nhi.mile gi tune mera jaan se pyara dost maar diya jisko main apne bhai jaisa maanta tha

Ranjeet.. mujhe maaf krde pls bhai main sab kuch chorr donga ols mujhe maaf krde.

Main... Tune manisha ko kyu kaid kiya

Ranjeet... Bhai woh tumse pyar krne lagi hai hamare khilaff ho chli thi usko sab plan ke bare.mein pta chl geya tha isliye.liya isko marna jaorri tha.

Main.. tune bhot badi glti krdi ranjeet.
Akhir meine.kya.bigada tha tera

: Ranjeet..... hahahaahha abhi tujhe eh nhi batonga chahe mujhe maar hi kyu na do

Maine talwar uthai or ranjeet ka hath kaat diya


Main... Btaa akhir kyu tum hum sab ko marna chahate the.kyu
..

Ranjeet... Dard se rote huye achank hassne lga .
Jab mujhe uski hasi ka karn samjh aya to tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki..

Ek talwaar mere peat ke aar paar ho chuki thi .

Or mere muh se khoon nikl raha tha.

Jab meine pishe mud kar dekha to

Woh koi or nhi jeet tha...
Mera yaar jise.main apna bhai maanta tha usne mere peeth pishe talwaar khoob di thi.


Priya manisha palvi teeno meri tarf bhagi lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki main jameen par gir geya tha..
Tabhi jeet..bola..

Oh to mandy sahab online hai...
Kya Mandy sahab jalan hai apni hi kahani ke hero se? isliye uski band bajaye jaa rahe hai..
kyunki Kabir zyada popular ho raha hai isliye? isliye haal hi ke update mein aisi ki taisi kiye jaa rahe hai..
lo ji ab to jeet ne bhi pith piche talwar se waar kar diya...
akhir baat kya hai... kyun writer sahab Kabir ke sath aisa kar raha hai

Khair.... Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update nahi..
Aaj bas nice update... kahani ke Nayak ke sath jyati ho rahi hai had se zyada..

 

[Rocky Dsouza]

Badiya jaa rahi hai kahani. But har koi iss Kabir naam ke praani ke pichhe hi kaahe pada hua hai. Abhi to mujhe iske bhai par bhi shakh hai. Aane waale updates mein kahin ye Kabir khud hi khud ko naa maarle in dhokhon se tang aakar.
Anyways, exciting storyline and nice update.

 

[Nevil singh]

Ranjeet... Dekh kabir dekh kaise tera ant aa raha hai tum apne app ko bhut takatwar samjh te hoo na aaj dekh kaise teri priya ko nanga krke nacha taa hooon...

Jeet .... Bskd ke jaan se maar doonga tujhe ek baar hath khol tujhe batata hoon kon asli mard hai.

Ranjeet... Hahahaha sale tujhe to maaronga abhi maronga osne ek goli mari jeet.. or jeet mar geya

Ranjeet ne apne admi ko bola esko jao kutton ko fek ayo khane ke liye..

Ab mujhe gussa ana laga tha maine apni poori takat ke sath rassiyon ko todne ki kosish ki .
Ant mein mere hath khul gaye

Ranjeet ke admi ne mujhe dekh liya woh meri tarf bhagga apni gun liye or sidhi goli chla di

: Goli aker sidhe mere bajjo mein lgi

Main gusse mein tha mujhe bas ranjeet se bdla lena tha mujhe kuch nhi feel ho raha tha

Jab tak ranjeet ka admi mere goli mari tab tak main oske pass jaa phoucha or uski gardan tod di

Uske hath se gun pakad kar uske dusre admi ko maar diyan

Wohan karib 8 admi de meine sab ko goli maaar di ek bhi jinda nhi chora

Bas ek admi bacha tha jo jeet ki lash ko leker geya tha

Mere etna sab krne ke bad ranjeet shock.tha usko kuch samjh nhi aa rhaa tha kyuki eh sab kuch hi pal mein huya

Main ab ranjeet ki traff bda

Ranjeet ki akhoon mein dar saaf dikh raha thaa woh khaanp rahaa tha

Main usko marne se phle sab kuch janna chahata tha isiliye meine usko samjh kuch sach batone ko bola
Jo uske dar ke mare bol bhi diya.


Maim.... Kyu kiya yeh sab akhir kyu.

Ranjeet.. mujhe krde bhai age se esa kuch nhi kronga .

Main....maffi tujhe nhi.mile gi tune mera jaan se pyara dost maar diya jisko main apne bhai jaisa maanta tha

Ranjeet.. mujhe maaf krde pls bhai main sab kuch chorr donga ols mujhe maaf krde.

Main... Tune manisha ko kyu kaid kiya

Ranjeet... Bhai woh tumse pyar krne lagi hai hamare khilaff ho chli thi usko sab plan ke bare.mein pta chl geya tha isliye.liya isko marna jaorri tha.

Main.. tune bhot badi glti krdi ranjeet.
Akhir meine.kya.bigada tha tera

: Ranjeet..... hahahaahha abhi tujhe eh nhi batonga chahe mujhe maar hi kyu na do

Maine talwar uthai or ranjeet ka hath kaat diya


Main... Btaa akhir kyu tum hum sab ko marna chahate the.kyu
..

Ranjeet... Dard se rote huye achank hassne lga .
Jab mujhe uski hasi ka karn samjh aya to tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki..

Ek talwaar mere peat ke aar paar ho chuki thi .

Or mere muh se khoon nikl raha tha.

Jab meine pishe mud kar dekha to

Woh koi or nhi jeet tha...
Mera yaar jise.main apna bhai maanta tha usne mere peeth pishe talwaar khoob di thi.


Priya manisha palvi teeno meri tarf bhagi lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi kyuki main jameen par gir geya tha..
Tabhi jeet..bola..

Gajab ka update dost

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Nice Update Bhai