Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

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Update - 107
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Kahani Ab Tak -
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Kuchh hi der me mujhe mera sar mil gaya,
jo maine vapas apne kate hue dhad par laga liya.
Ab mujhe bilkul bhi thakaan mehsus nahin ho rahi thi.
Balki apne anadar nayi shaktiyon ka sanchar hota hua mehsoos ho raha tha.


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Or dhire - dhire meri body me badlav aane lage ....
Charon taraf havaen tez - tez chalne lagin
or samuche parilok ki zameen or tite hue mahal se roshni nikaln kar
mere andar jaane lagi.
Mere pankh nikalne lage ...
Or aakhon ka colour badal kar neela ho gaya jo bahut tez chamak rahi thin....
Or mere hathon se thunder power nikal rahi thi.

Jab wo prakash dhire - dhire kam hua to main kuchh aisa lag raha tha.

Jo bhi vahan par moujood the vo sab mujhe muh khol kar dekhne lage .....
Kyonki aisa pehli baar hua tha ki kisi ne samuche parilok ki
Shaktiyan apne andar sammahit kar lin thin.
Varna itni zyada urja se shareer ke chhitde ud jayen...
Ye shayad un shaktiyon ka kamaal tha jo sagar ko
bhagwan se uphar me mili thin.

Keela ne ek baar phir Senapati ko ishara kiya
Or uske ishara karte hi K senapati tezi se talvar lekar meri or doudne laga....

Jab wo mujh se 100 meter ki duri par reh gaya to mujhe pata chal gaya ki ye mere dayre me aa chuka hai.

Maine ek hath hava me upar uthaya ....
Mere aisa karte hi Aasman me bijliya kadakne lagin
or mere hath ke zariye mere shareer me jane lagin.
Bahut sari matra me thunder power ko ikattha karke
Maine paas aa chuke K Senapati par puri takat se
sabhi jama ki hui bijli ka upyog
Ek sath kar diya.....
Mere hathon se kadakti hui bijliyan bhayanak roop me uske upar girne lagin.
Or tabh tak karta raha jab tak uska shareer koyla na ban gaya...
Phir maine usme ek laat mari or uske shareer ke chhote chhote tukde pure vatavan me raakh bankar ud gaye....

Keela ne aage aane me koi jaldbazi nahin ki vo keval muskura diya.
Main uske expression dekhkar thoda confuse ho gaya.
Kyonki wo ab akela bacha tha. ..
wo apni sabhi sena or senapti ko kho chuka tha...
Phir bhi wo ek dam sehej dikh raha tha... Kaise? Maine apne man me socha.

Keela - Ham gulamo ko isi liye palte hain taki vo hamare
liye jaan de den ..... Or dushman ki shaktiyon ki sahi pehchan apne malikon ko de den....

Mujhe mere senapati ko khone ka afsos nahin hai...
Balki khushi hai ki usne mujhe tumhari shaktiyon se
parichit kar diya hai.
Or main tumhen markar unhen hasil karunga.
Hahahahhahahaa

Ye bolkar us shaitaan ke bete ne haste hue
ek angdai li Or ghode se utar gaya ....
Wo kuchh mantar budbudane laga ...
Or dekhte hi dekhte uske samuche shareer se
aag nikalne lagi. Or uske dono hathon me aag ke
gole the jis ke andar se bade bade shole nikal rahe the.
Wo kuchh mahakal ki tarhan lag raha tha

Keela (zor zor se haste hue) - jaanta hai ye "Hell Fire" hai.
Iske aage teri thunder power bekaar hai ....
Agar yakin na ho to azma le ....

Uski baat sunkar maine apne dono hath upar kiye,
Or jitne thunder power main aasman se kheech sakta tha maine apne andar kheech li... Or ek hi jhatke se puri takar ke sath thunder power ka war keela par kiya.

Itni thunder power ek dath use karne se vahan par toofan sa aa gaya tha... Maine turant Anju par ek suraksha kavach bana diya
taki uske upar is tufan ya power ka kuchh asar na ho sake ....

Mere itni takat ke war se Keela sirf kuchh hi kadam pichhe ko khiska tha... Wo abhi bhi hase ja raha tha ...
Uspar ek kharoch bhi nahin aayi thi....

Wo haste hue ruk gaya or bola - ab meri baari ....

Usne apne dono hath meri taraf aage kar diye ....
Or usme se aag ka ek sailaab sa meri taraf aane laga..
Main turant ek lambi chhalang lekar side me kood gaya..
Mere itna tezi ke baad bhi wo aag mere shareer ke kuchh hisso ko jhulsa gayi... Jisse mujhe bahut peeda hui...
Tabhi guruji ki awaaz mere man me gunjhi..

Guruji (TP) - beta iski nabhi me hi iski samuchi shakti ka srot hai.. yadi tum uski nabhi par war karte ho to wo
Shaktiheen ho jayega .. or phir tum use asani se maar sakte ho....

Udhar keela mujhpar ek ke baad ek lagataar aag se hamle kiye ja raha tha...
Or main apna bachav karte hue guruji se bhi baaten bhi kar raha tha.

Main (TP) - parantu, guruji iski takat mujhse kahin
zyada hai, main ise rok nahin pa raha hun....

Guruji - (haste hue) hahahaha beta tumhare paas power isse kahin zyada hai bas tumhen sahi samay par uska upyog karna aana chahiye ...

Ab apni adhyatmik (man ki shakti) shaktiyon ko ikattha karo
Or usse ek lambi talvar ka nirman karo..

Maine turant aakhen band karke dhiyan lagate hue samuchi adhyatmik shaktiyon ko ikattha kiya or agke hi pal
Mere hath me ek kaantedar talwar aa gayi...
Jo lagbab 4 meter lambi thi.

Guruji - ab iske andar parilok ki shaktiyan inject karo...

Maine guruji ki baaton ko turant palan kiya...
Or us talwar se ab bijliyan kadkadate hue bahar nikal rahi thin...

Guruji - ab apni jinnlok ki shaktiyon ko bhi apne anadar jagrit karo or puri takat se iski nabhi ko nishana banate hue
War karo.

Maine mere upar aate hue aag ke golon ko apni talvar se katte hue phir se kuchh palo ke liye apni aakhen band kar lin.
Oe jinnlok ki shaktiyan bhi jagrit kar lin...

Phir se mere shareer ka akaar (shape) badalne laga..
Meri aakhon ka colour red ho gaya .... Or sar par do seeng ug aaye. ... . Meri body ka colour badalkar neele rang ka ho gaya...
Or meri takvar thodi choudi bhi ho gayi....
Ab usme se thunder power ke sath sath aag bhi nikal rahi thi....

Mujhe dekhkar keela ek pal ke liye ruka par phir se mere upar hamla shuru kar diya .....

Main tezi se uski or bhagne laga usne or zyada force ke sath mere upar aag chhodni shuru kar di ...
Mera samucha shareer jhulasne laga...
Mujhese dard sehen nahin ho raha tha ..
Maine apni talvar uske aage kar di...
Jisse uski aag ke beech se ek rasta sa banta hua chala ja raha tha...
Maiene talvar ko dono hathon me puri takat se thaam rakha tha ...
Or bina koi pal gavae maine apni talvar uski nabhi me utaar di .... Jisse uski zordaar cheekh nikli..
Jo itni bhayava thi ji mere kano se bhi khoon ki kuchh bunden nikal kar niche girne lagin....

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To kya hoga ab aage - kya is war se Keela ki mout ho jayegi
Ya wo phir se ladne ke liye tayyar ho jayega ..

Akhir kya hua tha anjalika ke sath ... Jo vo sirf akeli hi reh gayi hai... Kahan gaya uska pariwar.

Kya sagar sab kuchh theek jar payega ...
Kya wo keela ko jaan se maar oane me kamyab ho payega
Jaane ke liye intzar kijiye agle update ka.​

To Be Continue ........
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Maine jakar guruji ke pair chhukar pranam kiya,
or unke sameep khada ho gaya.

Thodi der me guruji ne aakhen kholi, or mujhe dekhkar
muskura diye.

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Guruji (hath uthakar ashirvad dee hue) - sukhi bhava:

Main (hath jodkar) - gurudev, mujhe kshama kijiyega ki main is samaye kisi ki madad nahin kar pa raha hun,
Kyonki main apni behen ko diye hue vachan ke karan bandhit hun.
Ab aap hi mera marg darshan kar sakte hain.

Meri baat sunkar gurudev sehejta se bole - balak yahan mere paas baitho, aaj main tumhen tumhare bare me bataunga, jo tum nahin jante ho, aaj tumhare har savaal ka javaab mil jayega, kyonki ab tumhare paas vakht bahut kam bacha hai.


Unki ye baat sunkar main serious ho gaya, or unke paas paalti maar kar baith gaya.

Gurudev - bahut samaye pehle ki baat hai,
jab devtaon or rakkshaon ( राक्षस ) ka yudh hua tha,
vo bhi amrit ke liye.
To akhir me adhikansh rakkshas (राक्षस) mare gaye,
or amrit par devtaon ne apna adhikar kar liya.
Parantu is beech ek baat thi, ki ek rakkshas (राक्षस) bach gaya tha,
jisko bhagwan ka vardan prapt tha. Uska naam tha varkasur.
Usne ye vardan maanga tha ki anant kaal tak usko koi devta ya unka koi avtar use maar na sake. Kyonki vo janta tha ki devtaon ke alava kisi ke paas itni shaktiyan nahin hain ki vo use maar paye.

Main (beech me) - parantu gurudev bhagwan ne ek rakkshas ko aisa var kyon diya ?

Gurudev - kyonki jo sachche man se bhagwan shambhu ki aradhna karta hai vo sabko bina bhed-bhav ke vardan de dete hain, jaise unhone ravan ko diya tha.

Main - gurudev phir aage kya hua?

Gurudev - kyonki rakkshas lok ka vinash ho chuka tha
to vo prithvi lok par aakar chhip gaya,
par usko khane ke liye bahar aana padta tha,
kyonki vo insan ka maas khata tha,
Jisse usko nayi urja milti thi.
Par jab zyada log marne lage tabh bhagwan dwara usko naraklok me kaid kar diya gaya.
Parantu uski shaktiyon ke aage sab vifal rahe or vo ek din vahan se bhaag nikla or dobara rakkshas lok pahuch gaya.
Jahan vo sabhi rakkshason ka bhagwan ban baitha.

Jab usne kai lokon par tabahi machai to bhagwan ne ek baar phir usko gehri nennd me sula diya,
par bhagwan jante the ki vo zyada samaye tak usko neend me nahin rakh payenge....
Uski or uski sena ki tabahiyon se sabhi devi devta
tang aa chuke the,
isliye vo bhagwan shambhu ko iska karan batane lage,
Kyonki unhone hi usko aisa vardan diya tha
Jab sabhi ikattha hokar kailash parvat pahuche tabh bhagwan ne iska upay nikala or vo upay tha ki kisi manushye ko devtaon ki shaktiyan di jayen
or uske hathon hi varkasur mara ja sakta hai.
Par manushye bahut lobhi hote hain.
Vo shaktiyan pakar uska galat upyog na karen isliye vo shaktiyan kisi ko nahin di gayin,
Lekin jab tum apni maa ke pet me pal rahe the tabh bhagwan ne bhavishyevani ki thi ki wo tum hi hoge
jo sirf prem ki bhasha jante ho or kisi shakti ka
galat prayog nahin kar sakte.
Isi liye vo shaktiyan tumhen mili hain.
Parantu tum apne lakshye se bhatak gaye ho.
Or ab sabhi lokon ke baad dhartilok ka
sarvanash bhi nishchit hai.

Main to ye sab sunkar awaak sa reh gaya.

Main (nam aakhon se) - gurudev mujhe kshama (क्षमा) kijiye, maine sirf apne parivar ke hit ke me socha,
jabki mere karan samucha brammand musibat me hai.
Par main aisa nahin hone dunga.
Aap mujhe raah dikhiyye gurudev ab mujhe kya karna chahiye.

Guruji - vats shigra, atishigra parilok chale jao,
Kyonki bahut dino se parilok khatre me hai,
uspar sabse zyada hamle ho rahe hain,
Tumhari hone vali patni yani ki anjalika bhi khatre me hai,
Vo isi liye tumhen yahan chhod kar gayi thi,
vo tumhare parivar par aanch nahin aane dena chahti thi.
Ye us balika ka bahut bada balidan tha.
Isse pehle ki der ho jaye tumhen vahan jakar un sabhi ki raksha karni hogi, kyonki unka raksha kavach
kabka toot chuka hai.

Ye sab sunkar meri aakhon se aansu behne lage,
Or mujhe sab kuchh samajh aa gaya ki us vakht anju
mujhe chhod kar kyon gayi thi.

Guruji - ye samaye shok manane ka nahin hai balak
apni kundli jagrit karo, jisse tumhari sabhi shaktiyan
jagrit ho jayengi.

Main - parantu gurudev, main us vachan ka kya karun.

Guruji - uska upay ye hai ki apna ek ansh apne ghar par chhod do, jisse kisi ko shak nahin hoga ki vo tum hi ho ya koi or.

Phir guruji ne mujhe ansh bahar nikalna or apni shaktiyon ka or bhi zyada prayog sikhaya jo main abhi tak nahin janta tha.

Maine apne ansh ko sab kuchh samjha kar
ghar par bhej diya.

Or khud guruji ka ashirvad lekar parilok ki yatra par nikal gaya.

Jab main vahan pahucha to vahan ka haal dekhkar mere pair thithak gaye,
or mujhe anju or uske pariwar ki chinta satane lagi.
Ki vo kahan par hogi or kaisi hogi.
Vahan par charon taraf trahi - trahi machi hui thi....
Or jahan par sundar upvan hote the aaj vahan sirf jalti hui raakh thi...

Charon taraf sirf aag or dhua uth raha tha.

Parilok ka mahal bhi nasht ho chuka tha...

Jo ab bas ek khandar ki tarhan lag raha tha.

Ye sab dekhkar mera bura haal ho raha tha.

Udhar -
Ek secret gufa me -

Anjalika senapati or apni sena se
kuchh baten kar rahi thi.

Senapati - Rajkumari, ye hamare liye bahut hi dukhad samachar hai, raksha kavach tootne ke baad se
bhari sankhya me aam log mare ja chuke hain.
Wo shaitaan din pratidin takatwar hote ja rahe hain.
Aise to vo hame bhi jald hi dhundh lenge.

Anjalika - Main un shaitano ko nahin chhodungi,
main unhen maarkar pitaji ki mout ka badla lungi.

Aaj uski aankho me aansu nahin the,
balki ek dradh nishchay ke bhaw the. Or ek tej tha.

Wo abhi baat kar hi rahe the ki achanak
unhen aisa laga jaise koi bomb phata ho,
or jis gufa me wo the wo gufa tootne lagi.

Senapati - Rajkumari, jaldi chaliye yahan se hamare upar
halma hua hai,
Wo sabhi bahar ki taraf bhage,

Badi mushkilon se vo bahar nikal paye the ki bahar dekhkar
Sab chonk gaye,
kyonki vahan par shaitano ki ek badi sena
unka bahar intzaar kar rahi thi.
Us sena ka senanayak khud Keela tha jo shaitan ka beta tha.

Vo sabhi ko bahar aata dekhkar zor se hansa ....
Hahahahhahahaa chuho ko bahar nikalne ka
isse achchha rasta nahin tha....
Kyon be chuhon kahan chhipe baithe the ....
Ohho! Ye to rajkumari hai, isse milaap karke main
Shaktishali bachchon ko janam dunga....
Hahahahahahhahaha
Sab ko bandh do or kaid kar lo .....

Anjalika - main tujhe chetavni de rahi hun....
Agar tune aisa socha bhi to tu bahut buri mout marega.

Keela - Hahahahhahahha janeman main sochta nahin
karta hun....

Or usne apni sena ko kuchh ishara kiya...

Uska ishara milte hi uski sena ne Rajkumari samhit
Uski sabhi sena ko charon or se gher liya.

Idhar Anjalika ke ishare par uski sena ne bhi hamla shuru kar diya....
Wo apni shaktiyon se bahut samaye tak bahaduri se ladte rahe.
par sankhya me kam hone ke karan vo marne lage ...

Or jald hi keela ki sena ne unpar vajay prapt kar li....

Sath hi Rajkumari or Parilok ke senapati ko bandi bana liya gaya...
Jo abhi bahut zyada zakhmi the.

Keela - le chalo in dono ko .... Isko to main apni randi banaunga ...... Hahahahahhahahaha

Rajkumari Anjalika ki aakhon me aansu the ...
Anjalika (man me) - agar iska ganda jism mere jism se chhua bhi to main atmahatya kar lungi.....

Keela ke kehne par uski sena unko bandi bana kar apne sath ke jane lage ...

Keela - Aaj pitaji mujhpar prasann honge.... (Tez awaaz me) senapati parilok par shaitanon ka jhanda lehra do...
Ab ye hamara hai.... Or agli baari hai Jinnlok ki

Hahahahahahahahhaha

To....Be......Continue...​

Baba bhai.
Tumhe dekhkar khushi hui....

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update ke sath wapsi.
Bahut achhe yaara.

Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

 

[FallenAngel]

Bhai next update ka kya scene hai